Can I make Hard? ofc
Anyway, I still always support you. Good luck, Call me when you need mod. ^^ haha youmi-Umi- wrote:
Gomen yatsu but this mapset will be my first without GD, only by me >.< but thx for your proposal !
I'll call u when i'll need a GD ;3
Bon pas de réponse = fixed = 99% = thx for mod and star (Again ?xD)rezoons wrote:
Hi ,
M4M:
[Général][Easy]
- 1min 20 et 4 diffs? J'hésite entre "feignasse" et "c'est sympa pour les moddeurs" XD What ? xD 4 diff c'est trés bien >3<
Mais tu ne battras jamais le record de fainéantise de stefan. ^^ (1 min et 2 diffs si je me souvient bien)[Normal]
- 00:54:430 (3) - Pour que le slider soit mieux fait construit-le comme ça:
Et bouge les deux points rouge de sorte à avoir la meilleure courbe possible.- 01:00:794 (3) - Bouge le 4eme point de deux crans vers la droite pour une meilleure symétrie et une meilleure blanket.
- 01:21:249 (2) - Je sais que tu veux éviter d'utiliser des sliders de longueur 1/2 mais celui-là sonne vraiment bizarre. Surtout à cause du fait qu'il s'arête sur rien donc on entend le son de "fin de slider" mais rien qui va avec. Donc soit tu le raccourci soit tu fais un truc un peu dans le même genre que 01:17:158 (1).
[Hard]
- 00:17:840 (4,1) - J'espère que t'as pas essayé de faire une blanket ici XD
- 00:30:340 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Peut-être que tu pourrais essayer de faire une sorte de symétrie ici.
- 00:54:203 (3,4) - 00:51:703 (1) a déjà disparu depuis un moment lorsque ce slider apparaît donc tu peux le position à la même hauteur que 00:53:067 (2) sans problème.
- 01:09:885 (1,2) - Je trouve que ce rythme correspond mieux:
- 01:21:249 (2) - Hum.... Retire la flèche. Elle ne colle pas trop à la chanson....
[Insane]
- 00:04:430 (1,2,3) - Généralement dans ce genre de pattern soit tous est dans le même sens soit les sens s'alterne. Dans ce cas-là je conseillerais CTRL+G sur 3.
- 00:10:567 (6,7) - Généralement on évite ça... En plus je suis même pas sûr que ce soit rankable. A la limite tu peux le laisser en Insane mais je pense pas que ce soit une bonne idée en Hard. j'aime bien je garde s'il s'avère que c'est unrankable je changerai :3
- 00:15:340 (5,1,2) - Comme pour 00:04:430 (1,2,3).
- 00:17:158 (3,4,5) - A vouloir trop embêter les joueurs HD on se retrouve avec des triangles pas beau.....
- 00:18:521 (7,8,9) - Je trouve que ceci donne un meilleur flow:
- 00:42:612 (1,2,3,4) - N'aie pas peur de les écarter un peu plus pour éviter l'overlap.
- 01:11:021 (3,1) - Bad blanket.
- 01:22:158 (3,5) - Ils devraient être alignés.
Ben dis donc, tu t'améliores de jour en jour ^^ A genoux devant moi !
- 00:00:340 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Décale tout d'un cran sur la droite pour avoir la symétrie centrale.
- 00:12:158 (2,3,4,5) - Pas symétrique.
- 00:14:430 (1,2) - ^
- 00:14:885 (3,4,5) - ^
- 00:22:385 - Euh... J'entend une note ici. Pas moi ! donc non :3
- 00:30:794 (6) - Décale le d'un cran vers le bas pour une meilleur blanket.
- 00:31:703 (8,3) - Essaye de les mettre à la même hauteur.
- 00:38:749 (4,5) - Essaye de faire un truc dans le genre:
L'overlap est plus joli.- 00:56:703 (5,6) - Mais les à la même hauteur pour avoir une sorte de symétrie avec 00:56:703 (5) par rapport à 00:56:476 (4).
- 00:57:158 (1,2,3,4) - Presque symétrique.
- 01:22:158 (3) - Décale-le d'un cran sur la droite pour la symétrie.
- 01:23:067 (4,4) - Stack-les et pour compléter la symétrie met 01:23:294 (5) au centre.
- 01:23:521 (1,2,3,4,5) - ..........
~Star~ et continu comme ça .
344,292,60794,2,0,B|407:292|382:216|407:140|338:140,2,200,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
thx for mod :3RandomEffect wrote:
Hi!
From my queue~
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:13:294 (1) - finish Fixed
- 01:00:794 (3) - a little awkward. How about the following? no :/
344,292,60794,2,0,B|407:292|382:216|407:140|338:140,2,200,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:[Hard]
- 00:11:703- finish
- 00:13:067- ^
- 00:52:612- remove finish
00:57:385 (1) - start at 00:57:158
All fixed[Insane]
- 00:10:567 (6,7) - it is better to stack the note on the slider-start
- 00:12:385 (3) - finish
- 00:13:067- ^
All fixedThe skinning is co cute! very nice héhé
- 00:11:703 (1) - finish
- 01:12:612 (2) - delete and add a note at 01:12:840
All fixed
~Good luck~
Momochikun wrote:
Hi..
[General]
Reduce the volume of hitsound at 00:02:612 and 00:06:249 why ?
[Insane]
I think it's not hard enough to be an Insane,, try increase the SV or added more jumps i don't think so, it's a low bpm, but i'll maybe add some jump later ^^
00:00:340 (1,3) - Whistle no i did like that in all my diffs
01:17:158 - Something like this ? Other way
[Hard]
00:15:340 (5,1) - Swap NC Fixed
00:29:885 (1) - Finish at the head of slider Fixed
00:42:612 (1,2,3,4) - This jump seems too extreme for a hard diff change the order of number
00:29:430 (2) - Remove clap why ? '-' it fit
01:23:521 - Change it like this no :/ will make more sense
[Normal]
00:06:249 (6) This sliders seems placed randomly he is not, same as easy diff
01:11:476 (3) - If u want to follow the vocal this should be a single note Kiiiiiiiii , so the slider follow the voice
01:21:249 (2) - Finish at the tail Fixed
01:24:430 (3) - Finish Fixed
[Easy]
00:12:158 - Sounds better.. it's that i did on normal diff so no :/
00:21:930 - Clap slidertick here it doesn't fit
Move green line to here 00:57:158 Fixed
01:11:703 - ^ Fixed
01:20:794 (2) - Finish at the start Fixed
01:22:158 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:24:430 (3) - ^ Fixed
GL~
thx for a lot for mod :3 !DEAncientNaga wrote:
DEAncientNaga's Mod Queue
[General]
>.o)b
Mapping is attracting
Beautiful skin
Resize the background to 1024x768 1366x768 are the recomended size :3
[Easy]
00:34:885 - Add a circle too same with 00:33:067 (5) - doesn't fit
00:57:612 - Don't suggest any rest time cuz it's TV Size, put something or spinner will be good spinner doesn't fit here
01:12:158 - ^ same as before
01:00:794 (3) - Don't suggest this kind of shape tho why ? it's not hard to read
01:24:430 (3) - Finish Fixed
[Normal]
00:38:976 (3) - Make tail more bend down, looks better when sticking with (4) other way
01:04:203 (5,6) - Don't stack no
01:18:294 (3,4) - Don't stack no
01:22:840 (5,6) - Don't stack no
[Hard]
00:13:180 (1) - Whistle / Finish or other hitsound Doesn't fit
00:40:567 (1) - ^ Fixed clap
[Insane]
00:00:340 (1,2,3,4) - Suggest reverse slider instead of stream at the start already like that in hard diff so no
00:21:703 (7,8,9) - Don't stack looks better Fixed
01:16:476 (1,2) - Too far distance cuz previous slider is slowed The NC are here to show the change of SV
01:16:703 (2,3,4,5) - Stream? : ) Fixed
Good luck on ranking
thx a lot for mod and star ;3 !Tur00 wrote:
A mod From my queue :3
OMG! He's so cute! :3 she is so cute* ahah
00:33:294 - I love this song part *.* , That Vocal *.*
[Easy]
00:07:612 (1) - add Clap . Fixed
00:08:521 - why you didn't put here the S:C2 to the beat? just forgot, fixed
00:13:294 (1,1) - to the newbies is hard to catch the circle after the spinner . delete the spin and re-map it. no i think there are enough time for newbie
00:32:612 (4,1) - Don't put 1/2 Streams in easy diff , that's a bit hard to the newbies , and this is an "easy" diff. you're right but only 1 or 2 will not kill them xD
00:40:567 (1,1) - same of 00:13:294 . same as before
00:42:612 (1,2) - same of 00:32:612 . ^
00:44:885 - Try this.. Better flow with the vocal and instrumental . Fixed
01:00:794 (3) - This slider is so ugly.. what about this one. why everyone hate my slider ?! well, ok Fixed !
01:17:158 (1,2) - Try This .. Better flow with the instrumental Fixed
01:20:794 (2,3) - Try the same of 01:17:158 ↑↑↑ . Fixed
[Normal]
00:03:976 (3,4,5) - Don't do stream with an overlap like this one , try to do a curve like you did in (1,2) i don't want >.<
00:26:703 (1,2) - this overlap is a bit weird to a "normal" diff. easy to read
00:34:885 (2) - delete this circle . why ?
00:48:749 (2) - Try this.. looks better other way :3
[Hard]
00:17:158 (4) - NC Fixed
00:17:385 (2,3) - Ctrl+G , This jump is so ... unnexpected :c well Fixed
01:07:612 (4) - Finish this slider in 01:07:840 . Fixed
01:16:930 (6) - Delete reverse arrow no >.<
01:17:271 (7) - if you did ↑ , start this slider in 01:17:158 I didn't xD
01:16:930 (1) - NC Fixed
[Insane]
00:17:840 (7) - Be more creative with this slider... that form looks a bit weird . Fixed
00:29:885 (4) - Try this ... Fixed >.<
00:40:567 (3) - Why you did spinner here in all diffs , but this ?.. , If you mapped in the others diff because it's funny there
like i said you , keep this .
Good Luck!
Nice Mapset :3
Star~
ありがとうございます hopper-さん ! and also thx for what u said me in-gamehopperhtkn wrote:
hi! thanks your request
[General][Easy]
- Artist:原田ひとみ should not open space Fixed '-'
[Normal]
- 00:44:885 (1) - add clap? Fixed
- 00:45:340 (2) - add clap end slider? Fixed
- 00:57:612 (3) - add 1/2 slider? early slider clap,end slider finish It's an easy diff 1/2 slider not really recomended :/
- 00:58:521 (4) - add circle with clap if you add 1/2 slider 00:57:612 (3) here i didn't >.<
- 00:31:930 (4) - delete it? i prefer keep this note >.<
[Hard]
- 01:16:703 (5) - revers slider here and 01:17:612 (5) - add cicle here other way :3
[Insane]that's all!
- Nice diff! thx >3<
gl
thx a lot for mod it was helfull :3 and also thx for star lanturn no baka :3Lanturn wrote:
-海-さん!!!!
[General]
Tags: yozuca* for doing the song lyrics | Optional I guess, but yozuca* is pretty popular now Fixed
AIBat loves you:
Missing skin element:
approachcircle.png - needed for any skin that uses custom circles or sliders. even the default one works. Fixed
Hard Difficulty:
00:14:430 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. Fixed
00:42:612 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. Fixed
Audio Lead-In: (Normal, Hard, Insane)
There is only 1851 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
Add 149 lead-in time to your 1511 (1660) on all diffs. (including your easy, which has a normal lead in time I guess) Fixed
Starting position:
Add a timing point (red line)on 00:00:794 - This is why your claps, kiai time, and everything else aren't in their correct spot. Nightcore mod will haunt you for life if you don't fix this. Keep the old one as well though because you need it for the proper BPM other way : Change the first timing point
[Easy]
Small suggestion to spice up the map a bit, though you probably wouldn't like it based on your style: This follows the main sound much better and it'll be really nice for an easy difficulty if there is more variety in it.[Normal]
- 00:02:612 (2,3,4) - Delete the the (2) slider. Convert (3) and (4) into a slider
- 00:06:249 (4,1) - Same idea, Delete the (4) slider, and convert the tail end and the (1) into a slider.
- 01:18:976 (2) - same suggestion | Delete this
- 01:22:612 (3) - ^
--------- 00:11:249 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/3w7hA.jpg | I highly suggest matching the finishes here because the reverse on the (3) slider is an empty note.
all fixed >3<
Seems a bit hard for a Normal. I'll probably be suggesting lots of notes that you really don't need to worry about having in there. It should make the song a bit more fun to play and seem like less of a struggle for some half notes. Your mapping style is pretty different from mine so I don't really expect you to make many changes
Also, why not raise the AR by 1? just so it matches with your other difficulties. (232 / 444 / 676 / 787 is the current. 4 to 7 is a pretty big jump in AR) prefer keep the AR to 4[Hard]
- 00:06:249 (6) - reduce the length of this by 1/2
- 00:08:749 (4) - Delete this, This circle feels more forced than anything, and it makes the next little bit flow much better.
- 00:36:476 (4) - Delete this and place a circle where its tail end is on 00:36:703 -
- 00:42:612 (1,2,3) - Try these placings or something similar. having notes right in the middle after a spinner can be hard to see for people that use big hit bursts like the classic 300 one. This also makes the slider feel more symmetrical if its in the middle: http://puu.sh/3w8mP.jpg | Don't forget to readjust the next (1) circle that you can see its outline for on the pic. fixed the rest
[Insane]
- 00:12:840 (4,1) - Instead of using a spinner, how about a long slow slider? http://puu.sh/3w8zw.jpg nice idea fixed
- 00:48:067 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you try using a bit of symmetry here? I think it would look much cleaner like this: http://puu.sh/3w8MV.jpg (forgot to NC in this pic) and http://puu.sh/3w8NF.jpg for the (4) Fixed
- 00:56:476 (1,2,3) - This isn't very clean.. try copy+paste/horizontal flipping from the previous (4,5) and then placing the (3) at 56/104 I understood nothing xD so no change
- 00:58:976 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move the (1) to 220/156 Copy paste and rotate it for 2,3,4 to keep it symmetrical and in the center | Move the (5) to 112/336 | and try moving the (6) to 32/146 | Leave (7) alone. same here
- 01:19:885 (4,5) - make this a horizontal flip of either one so it matches your symmetry that you use up ahead. more or less fixed
- 01:23:521 (1) - I would horizontal flip this because to me, it doesn't play like a jump and it'll probably catch people off guard. i don't think so
- 00:07:840 (4) - I think this would play better on the (1) instead of the (2) as it creates more of a circular motion yeah fixed
- 00:16:476 - for the amount you love vocals. I think it would be great if you could squeeze a note in this spot instead of making this a 1/1 slider. no, prefer my way
- 00:51:249 (8) - two suggestions: Turn this into a single circle, or extend this slider by 1/2 It plays funny and hits nothing on its tail end when its a 1/2 slider same here
- 00:51:703 (1,2) - would play better as a 1/1 slider due to both vocals and the music even as following the bass isn't that important same
- 00:56:021 (3,4) - The (3) slider plays strange as well. It would be better to turn this into a reverse slider, or convert it into pure circles. Fixed
- 01:22:158 (3) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a note in the missing spot. you are missing a key drum hit. Fixed
- 01:24:090 - and 01:24:317 - Add notes. this means you'll be making this a stream. the drums in the background really call for a stream here, so I would highly suggest it. I'm not following the drum here ^^
Nice mapset, take a
Thats really about it though. Couldn't find much else to suggest.
thx a lot for mod :3 !CDFA wrote:
She's so kawaii ne !
So I try so hard to make her squee
Insane:
00:00:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - It'd be cool if there were hitsounds on this or something to make it more interesting Fixed
00:23:298 (2) - This feels really awkward. I know you're worked up to a wall here, but my arm is forced to shoot in the opposite direction it wants to go, and then I have to do a slider that is the complete opposite direction. Patterns are nice, but playability :3 Hum more or less fixed >.<
01:03:298 (2) - CTRL + H or something? No i prefer like it's now
01:13:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could probably be more effective making some nice long sliders rather than having this slowdown yeah fixed
01:17:161 (6,7) - Add claps to the end of these sliders Fixed
01:20:798 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
Hard:
00:00:343 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - Same as Insane Fixed
00:28:070 (3) - I know why you did this and in a musical phrase sense it works, but consider maybe having a 1/2 slider with only one repeat, and then a 1/1 slider. Sliders with lots of repeats that aren't for effects or anything tend to not be liked and hard to read fixed better now :3
00:33:752 (3) - Remake this with just 1 midpoint No arrow's shape
00:35:570 (2) - ^ ^
01:06:707 (2) - Add clap Fixed
01:17:843 (3) - Add clap on end of slider Fixed
01:20:798 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
Normal:
00:00:343 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as Hard Fixed
00:36:707 (4) - Add clap Fixed
00:57:161 (1) - Add clap Fixed
Easy:
00:00:798 (1,1,2,1) - Same as Normal: Fixed
mya.
thx for mod :3neonat wrote:
Just some suggestions..
Normal
01:11:480 (3) - repeat and put a finish at the end? i follow the voice here :3
Insane
00:31:707 (8) - instead of repeating the slider, don't repeat and put notes at 00:32:389 and 00:32:616 fixed for this one
00:46:252 (5) - ^ not here
00:48:525 (1) - shorten so it repeats at 00:48:752 end at 00:48:980 and put notes at 00:49:207 and 00:49:434 i prefer like it's now
01:24:093 - add a note? i'm not following the drum here
Good luck
Merci pour le mod :3Cherry Blossom wrote:
Mod de l'espace !
comme promis...
My modding is NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOB.
[General]
Je ne sais pas si t'auras des problèmes avec ça, AImod dit que ton BG est supérieur à 1024*768. Pas un probleme c'est soit 1064x768 soit 1366x768 ^^
[Easy]
00:16:707 (4) - si tu regarde bien, tu peux faire un meilleur blanket pour (3) il faut que tu arrange le slider pour que la queue soit stacked sur le début de : 00:19:434 (1) Fixed
00:33:298 (1,2) - quand c'est pas centré c'est moche pour ce genre de pattern, arrange toi pour centrer ça, si tu l'as fait, replaces les notes qui vont après. ça me dérange pas personellement
00:42:616 (1) - Je sais pas si t'as fait exprès ou pas, mais il vaut mieux le mettre au centre pour un joueur qui termine de spin. Fixed
00:59:889 (2) - better blanket pour (3) Rien changé trés bien comment c'est
01:17:161 (1) - ça le fait mieu de mettre un finish sur le reverse. Fixed
01:20:798 (2) - ^ Fixed
[Normal]
00:02:161 (4) - awh, make this slider better, il est tout tordu c'est MOCHE. fais comme ça : Fixed
00:27:843 (2) - l'overlap est bizarre, j'aime pas trop, quand un overlap est moche ou bizarre, ça peut facilement devenir an unrankable issue. Je garde ça en tete je changerai plus tard peut etre
00:37:161 (1) - Add finish au début du slider Fixed
00:43:752 (3) - You can make this slider better : Plus ou moins fixed
01:03:980 (4,5,6) - pour un joueur débutant c'est très dure à play ce genre de choses, (5) ne devrait pas être stacked sur (6) Pas pour moi >.<
[Hard]
00:00:343 (1,1,2,3) - Please, centre. Fixed
00:10:570 (6,7) - ton pattern est beau sauf à la fin, 4 grid down. Fixed
00:13:070 (5) - Finish au début du slider Fixed
00:33:752 (3) - awh god, this slider, change it please : No forme en flèche je garde
00:35:570 (2) - pareil... same
00:54:434 (3) - better blanket for (1), change juste la position de la queue du slider Fixed
00:56:480 (1,2,3) - fait plutôt un triangle équilatéral. nop je prefere comme c'est
01:12:389 (4) - add finish, it's better Fixed
[Insane]
00:23:298 (2) - 1 grid down Fixed
00:40:570 (3) - grid right, comme ça il sera bien au centre Fixed
00:40:116 (2) - ^ Fixed
00:47:843 (9,10) - pour le rythme, je préfère ça : pas moi >.<
00:54:207 (8) - 2 grid right Fixed
00:57:616 (3) - 1 grid left Fixed
00:57:389 (2,3) - pour un meilleur mouvement, je te suggère de décaler ces 2 notes plus haut (déplace manuellement, awhchinese mapping) : Fixed
00:57:843 (4) - add finish Fixed
01:11:934 (1) - ^ (end) Fixed
01:20:798 (1,2) - wut ? ce sont pas les mêmes sliders ? tu sais ce que tu dois faire... Fixed
01:23:525 (1,2,3,4) - Square classique, perso, le squares, it's just boring... => 01:23:752 (2,3) - Ctrl+G ouep sympa fixed
Pal mal la map, dans toutes les diffs tu as la possibilité de faire de meilleurs patterns en utilisant le centre par exemple mais tu gâches ça , ce qui est dommage... Question de préférence
Good Luck ~
Wow it was a great mod 98% fixed (no reply = fixed), thx a lot for mod and star chippy >3< !!xChippy wrote:
Yah! Umi >w<
Mod request from in-game PM =w=[Easy]
00:07:161 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
00:37:161 (1) - Finish on head
00:40:570 (1) - Add clap?
00:16:707 (4,1) - Stack them
00:48:525 (2,5) - Stack them~
00:26:252 (5) - nazi =w= spacing is 1.06 it may not affect playing but no harm fixing it =w=
01:09:889 (2) - same nazi as above =w=
00:55:343 (4,1) - Swap NC's :3
[Normal]
00:22:161 (4,1) - The distance here ><, imo just unstack 4 and place it with DS =w=
00:44:889 (1) - 55|203 flows better imo and for the sake of DS too :3
00:50:798 (4) - Don't really like how this one looks like ><. but it's just personal preference =w= But i prefer mine >3<
01:03:298 (3,5) - Align these :3?
00:07:161 (1) - Clap slider end
00:15:116 (4) - Add finish to slider end
00:29:434 (4) - ^
00:49:434 Add a clap with slider tick =w=
01:11:025 (2) - Clap at slider end?
00:32:843 (6) - a 1/2 slider instead =w=?
00:40:343 (5) - add note?
[Hard]
00:07:616 (3) - Add clap~
00:37:161 (1) - Add finish to head
00:04:434 (1) - move the last anchor point a little so it evenly spreads around (2)
00:07:616 (3) - 1 grid down to stack
00:33:752 (3,2) - make these the same if you stack them you'll see they're different
[Insane]
01:24:093 I clearly hear a drum soo maybe add a note here and stack it on 01:23:980 (3) - ? if you do stack 01:24:207 (4) - with 01:23:980 (3) - too seems the best option here and also looks not bad :3.
00:07:616 (3) - add clap
00:29:889 (1) - NC =w=?
01:03:298 (2) - remove clap from tail
That's all I could find =w=
Gogo Umi >w<
(╯°□°)╯︵
09:12 -Umi-: well yatsu we can IRC now i'll go to bed after >.<
09:13 Oyatsu: ok
09:13 Oyatsu: ^^
09:13 *Oyatsu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/268952 Harada Hitomi - Hare Tokidoki Egao (TV Size) [Easy]]
09:13 Oyatsu: easy,open
09:13 -Umi-: yu have the good version ? '-'
09:14 -Umi-: ops bug wait deco reco
09:14 Oyatsu: I updated!
09:14 -Umi-: good for me :3
09:15 Oyatsu: 00:00:798 (1) - Can you try finish instead of whistle at begin?
09:15 -Umi-: no i did this in all my diff prefer wisthle /3
09:15 -Umi-: :3*
09:16 -Umi-: finish doesn't fit
09:16 Oyatsu: 00:07:161 (1) - Remove NC, NC is at 00:08:070 (2) -
09:16 Oyatsu: Can you hear strong beat at (2)?
09:16 -Umi-: nop prefer my combo of 3 because the next is 3 too
09:17 Oyatsu: 00:13:298 (1,1) -
09:17 Oyatsu: Too difficult for an easy
09:17 Oyatsu: first, next note after spin is far 2 beats
09:17 Oyatsu: note must be near with center spin
09:17 -Umi-: i don't think someone already told me but i don't want change this :/
09:18 Oyatsu: or less
09:18 Oyatsu: plz move 00:15:343 (1) - nearer with center spin
09:18 Oyatsu: It will kill newbie ><
09:19 -Umi-: poor newbie they will die so :/
09:19 -Umi-: because i don't want change x)
09:19 Oyatsu: 00:20:798 (2,3) -
09:19 Oyatsu: you need make 2 slider the same
09:20 -Umi-: the 3 follow the 2 curse
09:20 -Umi-: curve*
09:20 -Umi-: if i do the same shape it will not follow anymore
09:21 Oyatsu: 00:42:616 (1) - Repeat at 00:42:957. Rhythm next will fine and more sensible with vocal
09:21 -Umi-: 1/4 on easy ?
09:21 Oyatsu: 00:56:707 (3) - Add finish at end
09:22 -Umi-: nothing happen here :o
09:22 Oyatsu: 00:59:889 (2) - more curved to round 01:00:798 (3) -
09:22 Oyatsu: 01:09:434 (1,2) - NC at (2), not (1)
09:22 -Umi-: ok
09:23 Oyatsu: rhythm previous isn't end at (1)
09:23 -Umi-: but
09:23 -Umi-: 6 combo is oo much :/
09:23 Oyatsu: no, don't worry
09:23 Oyatsu: not >10 is fine
09:24 Oyatsu: 01:13:525 (1) - finish instead of whistle. you don't hear finish of imstrument
09:24 -Umi-: keep in mind maybe change later :3
09:24 Oyatsu: 01:19:889 (1,2) - NC at (2)
09:24 -Umi-: i just add finish and keep wisthle
09:24 -Umi-: no
09:25 Oyatsu: you are baka
09:25 -Umi-: yeah <3<
09:25 Oyatsu: 01:17:161 (1,2) -
09:25 Oyatsu: these are the same
09:25 Oyatsu: Why previous is NC,
09:25 Oyatsu: after is not?
09:25 -Umi-: it's better for me :/
09:25 Oyatsu: @@
09:25 -Umi-: it's about preference here ^^
09:26 Oyatsu: 01:23:525 (1,2,3) - I suggest you add hitsound
09:26 Oyatsu: maybe clap or whistle if you want
09:26 -Umi-: just finish on 3 it's enough @.@
09:26 -Umi-: well
09:26 -Umi-: add clap on 1 2
09:27 Oyatsu: ok
09:27 Oyatsu: I think you are stubborn ><
09:27 -Umi-: stubborn ? '-'
09:27 Oyatsu: open normal
09:27 -Umi-: okay
09:28 Oyatsu: 00:03:525 (1,2,3,4) - maybe is too difficult for a this follow
09:28 Oyatsu: try change some note into slider is better
09:28 -Umi-: like i said to the other player i keep like this '-'
09:29 Oyatsu: 00:25:798 (6) - move to other place, too difficult for normal
09:29 Oyatsu: to find note
09:29 -Umi-: it's same at here 00:10:343 (1) -
09:29 -Umi-: easy '-'
09:30 Oyatsu: I suggest you change ><
09:30 Oyatsu: it is unrankble
09:30 -Umi-: but i don't want xD yeah i'm stuborn
09:30 -Umi-: and no it's not unrakable x)
09:30 Oyatsu: stubborn @@
09:30 -Umi-: yeah @@
09:31 -Umi-: just look at my previous refused a lot a suggestion !<.<
09:31 -Umi-: previous mod*
09:31 Oyatsu: 00:26:707 (1,2) - Try make as: http://puu.sh/3ykOK.jpg
09:32 Oyatsu: Nice pattern
09:32 Oyatsu: 00:47:161 (5) - Too curved I look at it isn't quite nice ><
09:32 -Umi-: not enough DS to make this pattern :/
09:33 -Umi-: not nice for u :'(
09:33 Oyatsu: 00:50:798 (4) - a weird paatern slider >< over earth
09:33 -Umi-: ahah yeah previous said this xD
09:33 -Umi-: mod*
09:33 -Umi-: but i like this shape
09:34 Oyatsu: stubborn again ><
09:34 -Umi-: sorry >3<
09:34 Oyatsu: 01:23:525 (1,2) -As I said in easy
09:34 Oyatsu: add clap
09:35 -Umi-: ok
09:35 Oyatsu: 00:07:161 (1,3) - NC at (3) instead (1)
09:35 Oyatsu: at (3) is a big beats
09:35 -Umi-: hum
09:36 -Umi-: fit better on 1
09:36 Oyatsu: @@
09:36 -Umi-: and i don't want combo of only 2 >;<
09:37 Oyatsu: 00:55:798 (2,3) - MOve in slider. Let see: 00:55:798 (2,3,4,5,6) -
09:37 Oyatsu: What is this? It seems a stream
09:37 -Umi-: stream ? oO
09:37 Oyatsu: "stream in normal"
09:38 Oyatsu: 01:05:798 (1,2) - NC at (2), not (1)
09:38 -Umi-: my diff it's a normal + so ok for me xD
09:38 Oyatsu: let hear careful
09:38 -Umi-: ok
09:39 Oyatsu: 01:12:389 - add note to have a clap
09:39 -Umi-: i follow the voice here :/
09:39 -Umi-: i did same in easy diff
09:40 Oyatsu: 01:16:480 (4,5,1) - Weird rhythm, remove (5), slider (1) start at (5)
09:40 Oyatsu: end at 01:17:161 -
09:40 -Umi-: follow the voice :o
09:40 Oyatsu: as voice
09:41 Oyatsu: it isn't as voice
09:41 Oyatsu: if you want make voice, must use 1/4 rhythm
09:41 Oyatsu: it isn't as voice
09:41 -Umi-: because i switch at this moment
09:41 -Umi-: voice > intrument
09:42 Oyatsu: HP+3, OD+3 plz
09:42 -Umi-: what Oo
09:42 Oyatsu: ah
09:42 -Umi-: it's a normal
09:42 Oyatsu: HP+4 can unchange
09:42 Oyatsu: but OD always <AR
09:43 Oyatsu: can you see hard? OD +6 but AR+7
09:43 -Umi-: not required >.<
09:43 *Oyatsu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/269164 Harada Hitomi - Hare Tokidoki Egao (TV Size) [Hard]]
09:44 Oyatsu: My mod is too bad to you can fix =50% ><
09:44 -Umi-: ready
09:44 -Umi-: not it's not
09:44 -Umi-: just i ant keep my style >3<
09:44 Oyatsu: 01:17:161 - NC
09:44 -Umi-: majority of your suggestion are right xD
09:44 Oyatsu: ah sory
09:44 Oyatsu: link false
09:44 -Umi-: x)
09:44 Oyatsu: 00:13:070 (5) - try NC
09:45 -Umi-: so where ?
09:45 Oyatsu: ^
09:45 -Umi-: disagree the NC
09:45 Oyatsu: 00:25:684 - add note. Can you hear it is fine after add note>
09:46 -Umi-: i don't hear nothing :o
09:46 Oyatsu: @@
09:46 Oyatsu: 00:55:798 (4,1) - NC at (4). you are baka, Voice changed at (4)
09:47 Oyatsu: you didn't hear it carefullly
09:47 -Umi-: ok
09:48 Oyatsu: hard seems more fine
09:48 -Umi-: :D
09:48 Oyatsu: I don't mod Isane, but I wil give you some comment sorry
09:48 Oyatsu: I'm bad at mod Isane ><
09:48 -Umi-: yeah np :3
09:48 -Umi-: don't worry i'm bad too xD
09:48 Oyatsu: haha ^^
09:49 Oyatsu: 00:18:866 - In hard, add note but isane is nope
09:50 -Umi-: what you mean ?
09:50 Oyatsu: let add note
09:50 -Umi-: i want keep this jump if i add one note i can't :/
09:50 Oyatsu: 00:29:434 (1) - Not anything changed here, all voice and instrument, Why NC?
09:51 -Umi-: right fixed x)
09:52 Oyatsu: 00:47:843 (9,1) - NC at (9), voice changed here, not at (1)
09:52 -Umi-: NC is here to show the jump ^^
09:52 Oyatsu: ^^"
09:53 Oyatsu: 01:13:411 - add note, it is stream really, instrument still appear to (1)
09:53 Oyatsu: I'm sure this
09:53 Oyatsu: 01:15:343 (5) - NC
09:54 -Umi-: slow part with the same nc ^^
09:54 Oyatsu: ok
09:54 Oyatsu: I finish here.
09:54 Oyatsu: I'm sorry for not equality mod
09:55 Oyatsu: anyway,
09:55 -Umi-: lol don't it was enough >3< It's just i'm so stubborn*
09:55 -Umi-: worry
09:55 Oyatsu: I still alway want to you can have ranked
09:55 Oyatsu: don't hate me, OK?
09:55 -Umi-: thx i'll !!
09:55 Oyatsu: ^^
09:55 -Umi-: why hate u ? :o
09:56 Oyatsu: We still are friend
09:56 -Umi-: ofc xD
09:56 Oyatsu: Saved! Post!
anyways thx for mod !spaminabox wrote:
You have reminded me I still need to watch this show thank you very much! Ahah you're welcome ;3
Insane
00:00:343 (1) - The whistle is creating some weird dissonances almost every time it appears. Whilst you could get multiple pitches to fit the chord progression that is so much effort to do just to even work out how best to fill some of the open chords, so my ears will thank you if you get rid of it from every diff please. x.x that's why i lower the volum for somes whistle
00:22:048 (8,9) - It feels odd playing this and there's nothing in the music which (8) should be there at all actually so I would get rid of it myself. no change
00:34:434 (3,4,5) - I don't like where (5) is, perhaps stack it on top of (3) instead of the slider? no change
00:36:252 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same issue as above. other way here
01:0989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The space between (4) and (5) doesn't suit the way you've used hit circles in the rest of the map in that there's never a gap of more than 1/2 a tick unless it's really obviously in the music. Turning (4) into a slider would solve that but then would break the pattern which is also not good... Personally myself I would want to come up with a completely new pattern like this? Though I am useless with patterns like that please for the love of god don't use that on in it was just the 1st thing I could come up with. ;_; Keep my pattern >3<
01:23:980 (3,4,5,1) - There's a missing note in between (4) and (1), more pattern breaking, sorry! drum stop a 4
Hard
00:1243 (4,5) - Stack pls. it was stack before, but i prefer whithout
00:3489 (4) - I would make this a hit circle + slider myself. dont really like this
01:16:934 (1) - 2 hit circles rather than a slider. same :/
Normal
00:42:616 (1,2) - Change into one slider, I'm also tempted to say it is happening too soon after the spinner ends so maybe shorten the spinner a bit? not a problem for me
00:58:980 (1) - Same as before with spinner same
01:02:616 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The rhythm seems rather complex, I would make (1) and (3) longer whilst getting rid of (2) and (4) it folow the voice >.<
01:0989 (1) - Shorten the slider and replace the end with a hit circle other way
Easy
00:15:343 (1) - Definitely happens too soon after the spinner. Make the spinner shorter or delete this note. I don't think so
00:19:434 (1) - Missing claps either side of the slider Fixed
00:19:434 (1) - Missing clap at end of slider Fixed
00:33:525 (1) - Make this 1 tick later, keeps things on the beat and helps with timing the next slider too though I'd still be very wary doing red beats on an easy map. I prefer like it's now
00:42:616 (1) - Too soon after spinner again. same as above
00:43:752 (2) - I would get rid of this slider and put a 2 tick one like so. no change >.<
00:48:525 (2) - Missing clap Fixed
01:15:343 (2) - Add clap at end of slider Fixed
01:1989 (1) - Add claps both ends of slider Fixed
Well I've gotta say this mod took a little longer than expected since I started transcribing this song in Sibelius and started messing around with rearraging the piece. x.x
But in any case the map set is well done overall good luck getting it ranked! ^^
[Colours]
Combo1 : 165,74,255
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 255,156,0
Combo4 : 79,255,79
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
216,80,11707,2,0,P|144:96|112:164,2,150,0|4|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
thx for mod moenely >3< !Xinely wrote:
from my queue ~
feel moe power mod >o<Moe Moe Kyun <3
General
- add sliderborder due u use skin Fixed , http://puu.sh/3yslE.png
[Colours]
Combo1 : 165,74,255
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 255,156,0
Combo4 : 79,255,79
SliderBorder : 255,255,255- omg BG 2,56 MB, too much big size, you can ask me to resize if you want to reduce the size ~ No change for the moment but f i have another reflexion i'll call u ;3
Easy
- 00:09:889 (1,3) - - how about to it branket? http://puu.sh/3yCVV.jpg Code useless i can make it by my own (branket pro!)
216,80,11707,2,0,P|144:96|112:164,2,150,0|4|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 00:13:298 (1) - end in 00:14:434 - ? it's kinda odd to me if you end in red tick when music "tet tet tet tet" still not end Fi fi fixed
- 00:38:980 (3) - just make it like http://puu.sh/3yDcT.jpg ? fixed
- 00:46:252 (3) - high vocal in start, give whistle? -Umi- give a whistle to xinely
- 00:48:525 (2,3) - it's so nazi, different 1 in y coordinate LOL eeh ? fixed >.<
- 00:49:889 (5) - whistle in head? fixed
- 00:53:070 (2) - maybe u will reject it, but imo it's better rhythm if you make http://puu.sh/3yDpu.jpg gomen REJECTED!
- 00:56:707 (3) - finish in tail? if you fell too much loud, try whistle instead fixed with whistle
- 01:03:980 (2) - whistle in repeat? fixed
- 01:08:070 (5) - whistle in head? fixed
- 01:09:434 (1) - maybe nazi thing again. 180,308? fixed
- 01:10:798 (3) - same as 00:56:707 (3) - fixed
- 01:24:434 (3) - add whistle too to consistency with 01:17:161 (1,2) - ? fixed
Normal
- AR+1 to better spread with all diff fixed
- 00:15:798 (1) - red anchor 252,64? fixed
- 00:17:843 (4) - not issue, but place in 416,200? easier to catch imo well i didn't really see the difference but fixed xD
- 00:25:798 (6) - since normal, stack when 1/1 i think it's kinda confuse to read when use HD, put in 304,180? fixed >.< Too many reflexion about it
- 00:39:661 (4) - nazi, 1 grid left? to make nice hamburger :3 *q*
- 00:46:252 (3) - same as easy, whistle in head? fixed
- 00:49:889 (3) - whistle in head? fixed
- 00:51:707 (1) - fix spacing 1,11x? i think better use 1,2 xD Why not xD
- 00:53:070 (2) - whistle in repeat? fixed
- 01:00:798 (3) - whistle in head? fixed
- 01:06:252 (1,2) - maybe u can make it more branket. u are branket maniac so you can fix it without my suggestion :p Hum it's fine for me
- 01:07:616 (2) - whistle in tail fixed
- 01:24:434 (3) - same as easy :3 fixed
Hard
- 00:05:116 (2,3) - you can make it better if you copy paste from (1) and then rotate it 45 degree http://puu.sh/3yE25.jpg Yeah not bad fixed :3
- 00:12:843 (4) - 1 grid down to staight wiht (5)? up the 5
- 00:21:707 (5) - ctrl+J for better flow? not for me >3<
- 00:33:752 (3) - 288,292? it's better imo lol hum yeah x)
- 00:36:480 (1) - no need NC imo right
- 00:45:798 (4) - whistle in end xD fixed
- 00:49:889 (3) - whistle head xD (omg lazy wrote again, just aplly all whistle hitsound if you follow that in all diff lol) fixed x 4 for the others '-'
- 01:18:525 (4) - ctrl+G? better to read imo yeah *-*
Insane
- 00:07:161 (1,2,3,4) - you are make this part in Hard diff with jump, why no in insane, insane is highest diff so you must to make jump in insane too lol fixed Jump !
- 00:09:889 (5,7) - make branket so consistency with 00:08:070 (1,3) -? no
- 00:12:161 (2) - NC for anti jump fixed
- 00:12:843 (4) - this one too same as above AND fixed
Good Luck ~ :3
Thx for mod !ushiromiya _maria wrote:
[General]
The map is great thx :3
In some cases the not are not placed very well but is ok
[Easy]
00:00:798 (1) - You can elevate more the volume until 00:11:252 (2) - but it is'nt a big problem I prefer with low volum
00:38:980 (3) - This slider does not fit with the song move the end to 00:38:980 - More or less fixed :3
[Normal]
00:00:798 (1) - The same as easy same as easy, prefer low volum ^^
00:02:161 (4) - Delete the reverse, does'nt sound good I'll keep in mind
00:2743 (2) - The slider may end here 00:2743 (2) - I don't understand what you mean sorry :/
00:28:525 (3) - Place a circle ^
00:39:661 (4) - To close from the other note Same spacing
00:4989 (3) - Make the slider finish here I don't understand what you mean sorry :/
00:50:570 (4) - Add a circle ^
01:10:570 (2) - Too close from the past note Same spacing
01:11:025 (3) - To close from the next one^
[Hard]
I did'nt find many problems here
Sorry for the bad mod and good luck
253,321,14434,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,14661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,270,14889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,272,15116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,191,15343,6,0,P|353:173|369:157,2,70,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Yay, thx a lot >3</ (Edit : finally fixed offset) so All fixed :3Byakugan249 wrote:
yo here's your mod from my random queue.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.
[General]
consider adding "2nd" and "ending" since this is the 2nd ending in the anime. Fixed
i find that the timing sounds too early. try a 1002(+18) because i find that's the correct timing in this song IMO. confirm it with someone else to make sure. Fixed but +15
please note that i'm modding with your offset, so if you apply my suggestions with any coding, remember to re-snap the notes.
[Easy]
00:11:707 (3) - i think you forgot to add a finish at the beginning, so to fix this problem, add a finish at the beginning to show emphasis in the cymbals in the BGM. Fixed
00:30:780 (2) - for this one, replace this for a drum finish at the end since the drums sound differently and it sounds a lot similar to the drums in the BGM IMO. Fixed and also in all diffs
00:32:598 (4) - same as above, but this time, add the drum finish instead. ^
00:40:570 (1,1) - the gap between the spinner and the slider is too soon and too awkward to follow for beginners since the repeat ends at an odd spot for beginners, so for this one, you should end the spinner at 00:42:616, leave that gap for beginners to recover, and add a circle at 00:44:434 so that it'd be a lot easier and more straightforward for beginners to follow during gameplay. More or less fixed, just delete the reverse slider and finished the spinner where you said, i think it's okay now ? '-'
00:48:525 (2) - for this one, it's the clap that's missing for consistency in the claps, so add a clap in this part since it feels empty and it breaks consistency with the hitsound pattern during gameplay. Fixed
[Normal]
00:03:525 (1,2,3,4,5) - personally, i find that the stack in this movement pattern breaks the sense of flow in this map since i feel that it suddenly stops here, so for this one, it'd flow a lot smoother if you can space them all out to represent that smooth transition and flow in this part of the song during gameplay. from what i see, it should look something like this. Yeah better fixed
00:27:843 (2) - for this one, i think it'd be more readable and less confusing if you adjusted the slider like this. the bad slider overlap like that would feel somewhat confusing and awkward to follow as well during gameplay IMO. Fixed
00:47:161 (5) - i think that re-adjusting the slider like this would feel more smoother and more flowy during gameplay IMO. Fixed
00:50:798 (4) - the flow behind this slider looks bad and a bit sloppy to follow IMO, so for this one, you should remove one of the points of the slider to show that smoothness in the diff during gameplay. Fixed
01:12:161 - the flow suddenly stops once the end of (4) is hit. the slider might tell the player that the flow here is still going, so for this one, add a circle, and a slider that starts at 01:12:389, and ending it at 00:13:070 for a smoother transition in this part of the song during gameplay. Nice, Fixed
[Hard]
00:14:434 (1,2,3,4,1) - i think that moving this pattern here would be more neater since (2) and the 2nd (1) would be stacked at the beginning of (5) and (4), making the transition feel smoother and neater during gameplay IMO. FixedSPOILER00:33:752 (3) - use a 3-point curved slider so that it'd look nicer and smoother to follow as well during gameplay. it should look something like this After lot and lot of reflexion on this, finally fixed x)253,321,14434,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,192,14661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,270,14889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,272,15116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,191,15343,6,0,P|353:173|369:157,2,70,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:35:570 (2) - ^ ^
01:16:934 (1) - personally in a somewhat slow song like this, i think that 2 circles would be more readable than a 1/4 slider. it might throw off players at this level during gameplay IMO. right, fixed
01:23:525 (1) - i say that you replace this for 2 1/2 sliders with a jump followed by a circle to represent the BGM in this part, which might be a fun pattern to do if you know where to put these notes . Fixed just look ;3
[Insane]
00:10:798 (7) - with the current pattern going on, this note here breaks the whole pattern because it's not placed correctly IMO, so in this case, make this slider look like (5), and the direction it should be pointing is this direction. that way, the flow and transition is steady and easier to follow during gameplay. ok, fixed
and that's it. the map has potential, and i feel that it's almost ready for a bubble, so here's a star and GL on the map .