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Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder Tale (TV Size)

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YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年9月13日 at 9:34:29

Artist: Tamura Yukari
Title: W:Wonder Tale (TV Size)
Source: Ore no Kanojo to Osananajimi ga Shuraba Sugiru
Tags: 俺の彼女と幼なじみが修羅場すぎる 俺修羅 oreshura Yukari
BPM: 158.5
Filesize: 16875kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chiwa Harusaki (1.48 stars, 74 notes)
  2. Himeka Akishino (4.87 stars, 183 notes)
  3. Masuzu Natsukawa (4.12 stars, 129 notes)
  4. Rainbow (5 stars, 249 notes)
Download: Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder Tale (TV Size)
Download: Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder Tale (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Status:
Chiwa Harusaki - Known as Easy(Done by me)
Masuzu Natsukawa - Known as Normal(Done by me)
Himeka Akishino - Known as Hard(Done by me)
Rainbow - Known as Insane(Done by Sun Rainbow)

plz redownload before 8/27 for new diff

Thanks for all modder's help!
Last edited by YoshinoSakura , edited 20 times in total.
cubelrti
61 posts
Joined February 2012
cubelrti
from m4m(算吧._.

[General]
Combo3的颜色别用黑色最好，我个人是比较推荐亮一点的颜色，因为打图时删bg或者关bg都会影响读图。
至于combo颜色，可以不用头发颜色吧……我觉得背景的颜色（黄蓝绿粉）挺好看的
其他没看到什么问题._.

[Normal]
00:16:757 (3,4) - 我觉得这里听着不太对 个人推荐把4移到长白线上，短白线加一个note
00:22:822 (1) - 这里可以听出来音在红线上
01:05:937 (4) - new combo（nc）
01:06:593 (1) - 这个new combo就不要了
01:19:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个是画歪了还是故意的._.
01:26:265 (2,1) - 这两个觉得不是很美观 如果给我就把前面的1 Ctrl+H Ctrl+J 堆成过来 然后那个note放正中间

[Easy]
00:39:708 (4) - 这个跟空拍觉得不是很好听...给我我会去掉，只是建议。
做的明显比我认真多了

个人没有什么mod经验;w;只有这近3wpc的一点习惯而已...
总之好图ww
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

cubelrti wrote:

from m4m(算吧._. 额

[General]
Combo3的颜色别用黑色最好，我个人是比较推荐亮一点的颜色，因为打图时删bg或者关bg都会影响读图。
至于combo颜色，可以不用头发颜色吧……我觉得背景的颜色（黄蓝绿粉）挺好看的 说得很好
其他没看到什么问题._.

[Normal]
00:16:757 (3,4) - 我觉得这里听着不太对 个人推荐把4移到长白线上，短白线加一个note 虽然是迎合音乐，不过加一个更好
00:22:822 (1) - 这里可以听出来音在红线上 感谢
01:05:937 (4) - new combo（nc）
01:06:593 (1) - 这个new combo就不要了
01:19:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个是画歪了还是故意的._. 看歪了==
01:26:265 (2,1) - 这两个觉得不是很美观 如果给我就把前面的1 Ctrl+H Ctrl+J 堆成过来 然后那个note放正中间 修改了一下，虽然不能ds，不过好看些了

[Easy]
00:39:708 (4) - 这个跟空拍觉得不是很好听...给我我会去掉，只是建议。 我也是这么觉得的（当时貌似是为了ds才加的
做的明显比我认真多了 哪里，我懒得很呢

个人没有什么mod经验;w;只有这近3wpc的一点习惯而已...
总之好图ww
感谢了 :)， kd已射，准备hard或insane做完在上传 ;)
- Melody
246 posts
Joined December 2012
- Melody
First Modding Try. :o

General :
"BG" has a size of 960x768, the recommended size is 1024x768

Easy ;

00:16:101 (6) - NC ( On Easy is a Combo not longer than 5 )
00:44:954 (1) - ^
00:45:609 (2) - Remove NC
00:48:232 (3) - Don't stack that with another Slider, it's an Easy Difficulty
00:02:628 (1) - Add Whistle-Sound
00:04:140 (2) - ^
00:05:654 (1) - ^
00:05:654 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
00:10:200 (1) - Add Clap-Sound
00:12:822 (3) - ^
00:14:134 (4) - ^
00:16:101 (1) - ^
00:29:872 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
00:40:363 (1) - ^
00:56:101 (1) - Add Clap-Sound
00:57:413 (1) - ^
00:58:724 (1) - ^
00:59:380 (1) - ^
01:01:347 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
01:11:183 (1) - ^
01:11:839 (1) - Remove Finish-Sound
01:24:298 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
01:26:265 (3) - Remove Finish-Sound
01:27:904 (1) - Only Finish-Sound. ( Remove Whistle & Clap)


Normal ;

00:09:545 (1) - Remove the Claps it sounds ugly?
00:10:855 (2) - Add Clap-Sound
00:12:167 (4) - ^
00:13:478 (2) - ^
00:14:790 (4) - ^
00:16:101 (2) - ^
00:17:413 (3) - ^
00:18:068 (1) - Beginn a Spinner
00:19:380 (1) - End the Spinner with a Finish-Sound
00:24:626 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
00:30:199 (2) - Add Clap-Sound
00:30:855 (2) - ^
00:31:511 (4) - ^
00:32:167 (4) - ^
00:32:822 (1) - ^
00:33:478 (2) - ^
00:34:134 (3) - ^
00:34:790 (4) - ^
00:40:363 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
00:45:281 (6) - Don't stack that with the Slider remove it to another place, it's a Normal Difficulty
00:45:609 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
00:55:118 (3) - ^
00:55:281 (4) - ^
01:09:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - They are too far away from one another remove these a little bit nearer
01:19:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:27:577 (1) - Remove that Circle
01:27:577 - Add a Spinner there
01:30:199 (1) - End the Spinner here and add only a Finish-Sound


~That was it, i hope you like my first modding ._.

Good Luck <3
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

- Melody wrote:

First Modding Try. :o

General :
"BG" has a size of 960x768, the recommended size is 1024x768 I have changed one

Easy ;

00:16:101 (6) - NC ( On Easy is a Combo not longer than 5 ) Thanks for your recommend
00:44:954 (1) - ^
00:45:609 (2) - Remove NC How about the next combo
00:48:232 (3) - Don't stack that with another Slider, it's an Easy Difficulty Thanks
00:02:628 (1) - Add Whistle-Sound
00:04:140 (2) - ^
00:05:654 (1) - ^
00:05:654 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
00:10:200 (1) - Add Clap-Sound
00:12:822 (3) - ^
00:14:134 (4) - ^
00:16:101 (1) - ^
00:29:872 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
00:40:363 (1) - ^
00:56:101 (1) - Add Clap-Sound
00:57:413 (1) - ^
00:58:724 (1) - ^
00:59:380 (1) - ^
01:01:347 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
01:11:183 (1) - ^
01:11:839 (1) - Remove Finish-Sound
01:24:298 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
01:26:265 (3) - Remove Finish-Sound
01:27:904 (1) - Only Finish-Sound. ( Remove Whistle & Clap) That sounds good :)


Normal ;

00:09:545 (1) - Remove the Claps it sounds ugly? A good idea.
00:10:855 (2) - Add Clap-Sound
00:12:167 (4) - ^
00:13:478 (2) - ^
00:14:790 (4) - ^
00:16:101 (2) - ^
00:17:413 (3) - ^
00:18:068 (1) - Beginn a Spinner
00:19:380 (1) - End the Spinner with a Finish-Sound This is a good spinner really.
00:24:626 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
00:30:199 (2) - Add Clap-Sound
00:30:855 (2) - ^
00:31:511 (4) - ^
00:32:167 (4) - ^
00:32:822 (1) - ^
00:33:478 (2) - ^
00:34:134 (3) - ^
00:34:790 (4) - ^
00:40:363 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
00:45:281 (6) - Don't stack that with the Slider remove it to another place, it's a Normal Difficulty Remaked
00:45:609 (1) - Add Finish-Sound
00:55:118 (3) - ^
00:55:281 (4) - ^
01:09:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - They are too far away from one another remove these a little bit nearer I'm sorry but it's placed by distant snapping
01:19:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:27:577 (1) - Remove that Circle
01:27:577 - Add a Spinner there
01:30:199 (1) - End the Spinner here and add only a Finish-Sound


~That was it, i hope you like my first modding ._.

Good Luck <3
Thank for your Mod.
But I'd like to replace Clap with Finish because I personally think it sounds better.
Hope for other problems which I didn't notice.
Thanks. :)

KD is coming! :)
Bungaku Shounen
114 posts
Joined May 2013
Bungaku Shounen
[Chiwa Harusaki]
  1. Easy里不建议使用滑条变速
  2. 00:04:142 (2) - 直接复制1到这里然后Ctrl+H
  3. 00:20:036 (2,3) - 不太好看
  4. 00:29:216 (4,1,1) - 尽量保持距离相等
  5. 00:32:495 (3) - ctrl+h
  6. 01:30:199 - 这里应该消音吧
[Masuzu Natsukawa]
  1. Normal里也不建议使用滑条变速
  2. 有很多变速梗放到hard里可能很好 但是放到normal里就不太搭
  3. 滑条速度略快
  4. 01:30:199 - 这里应该消音吧
[Ai Fuyuumi]
  1. 塞得太满了
  2. 间距太大
  3. 不建议所有难度都用一样的绿线
  4. 音效声音太大
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

-WhiteNEKO- wrote:

[Chiwa Harusaki]
  1. Easy里不建议使用滑条变速
  2. 00:04:142 (2) - 直接复制1到这里然后Ctrl+H 嗯
  3. 00:20:036 (2,3) - 不太好看 实在不知道怎么改了==
  4. 00:29:216 (4,1,1) - 尽量保持距离相等 ds没办法，否则aimod要闹别扭 ;)
  5. 00:32:495 (3) - ctrl+h 嗯
  6. 01:30:199 - 这里应该消音吧
好

[Masuzu Natsukawa]
  1. Normal里也不建议使用滑条变速 主要是看见别人使用
  2. 有很多变速梗放到hard里可能很好 但是放到normal里就不太搭
  3. 滑条速度略快
  4. 01:30:199 - 这里应该消音吧
好

[Ai Fuyuumi]
  1. 塞得太满了
  2. 间距太大
  3. 不建议所有难度都用一样的绿线 这个难度还没做好==
  4. 音效声音太大
thank you
KD已投
cubelrti
61 posts
Joined February 2012
cubelrti
recheck >.<

[Insane]
Insane用AR7?!?! 这太没人性了，如果不是像某Egao或者是老图AR都是9，顶多8。
圈圈较小我觉得，不过这在可以接受的范围内吧……引用某老外的话smaller circles=usually not as fun. Not because it's harder, but it's just boring that way
怎么Insane的SV还是1.40 0.0 我觉得拉到1.8左右比较好

[Hard]
没做完;w;

[Normal]
fine~

[Easy]
fine~

个人不常打N,E难度，所以没什么意见好提的 :P 觉得I难度排列还不错，加油做ww
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

cubelrti wrote:

recheck >.<

[Insane]
Insane用AR7?!?! 这太没人性了，如果不是像某Egao或者是老图AR都是9，顶多8。
圈圈较小我觉得，不过这在可以接受的范围内吧……引用某老外的话smaller circles=usually not as fun. Not because it's harder, but it's just boring that way
怎么Insane的SV还是1.40 0.0 我觉得拉到1.8左右比较好

[Hard]
没做完;w;

[Normal]
fine~

[Easy]
fine~

个人不常打N,E难度，所以没什么意见好提的 :P 觉得I难度排列还不错，加油做ww
hard求看
xHappy-
443 posts
Joined May 2012
xHappy-
General
Hit sound
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/3nepp.rar
Chiwa Harusaki
00:27:347(3) - move middle slider to x:412 y:144
SPOILER
Masuzu Natsukawa
00:45:937(2) - move to x:64 y:212
SPOILER
Himeka Akishino
01:11:183(1) - Chang to like this ?
SPOILER
Ai Fuyuumi
AR + 1 ?
Good luck :D
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

Peeoil555 wrote:

General
Hit sound Sorry,I don't know how to use this.
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/3nepp.rar
Chiwa Harusaki
00:27:347(3) - move middle slider to x:412 y:144 Good idea.
SPOILER
Masuzu Natsukawa
00:45:937(2) - move to x:64 y:212 Sorry,I cannot move it because of distance snap.
SPOILER
Himeka Akishino
01:11:183(1) - Chang to like this ? I made a even uglier one.
SPOILER
Ai Fuyuumi
AR + 1 ? Oh that's too cruel(for me).
Good luck :D
Thank you.
cubelrti
61 posts
Joined February 2012
cubelrti
Hard & Insane recheck :3
绿色的是应该要改的
蓝色的只是建议

[Timing]
很不幸我发现offset也许略晚了 大概-15ms的样子?
全选红绿线然后打-15ms吧 记住resnap all notes

[Hard]

00:12:495 (4) - 叠好
00:27:085 (1) - 这个变速实在看不出来…… 我个人觉得00:28:068 (2) - 塞一个note然后不变速比较好打
00:32:003 (5) - 这个滑条不好看 改成这样？
SPOILER
00:32:822 (7) - nc，因为这里空了一拍 然后后面的nc就不要了
00:37:740 (1,1) - 这两个没必要分开吧……不是太长
00:44:298 (3) - 这个我觉得拉成reverse比较好 然后这样放……吧
SPOILER
00:55:281 (4) - 没叠好
01:05:264 (9) - 这个是想和01:03:953 (7) - 叠在一起的话建议叠好
01:05:920 (10) - 不好看……
01:16:412 (10) - ^
01:07:887 (1,2,3,4) - 我相信是摆歪了
01:18:379 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:11:166 (1) - 这个+Finish 我觉得
01:15:756 (9) - 放中间好看

觉得梗太单调了……学我狂抄新图:3

[Insane]

CS-1 我都觉得难喂大跳图用中圈是闹哪样
00:26:265 (4) - 这里塞一个note 然后这样摆
SPOILER
00:41:347 (2,5,8,11) - nc
00:44:790 (4) - nc
01:03:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个梗太简单粗暴了吧/w\换一个好看点的
01:14:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

觉得像老图 被规则跳规矩的太死(?)的感觉 去抄抄现在的新图应该不错

Anyway , good map! :)
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

cubelrti wrote:

Hard & Insane recheck :3
绿色的是应该要改的
蓝色的只是建议

[Timing]
很不幸我发现offset也许略晚了 大概-15ms的样子?
全选红绿线然后打-15ms吧 记住resnap all notes啊电脑太差了听不出来

[Hard]

00:12:495 (4) - 叠好
00:27:085 (1) - 这个变速实在看不出来…… 我个人觉得00:28:068 (2) - 塞一个note然后不变速比较好打[/color] ？
00:32:003 (5) - 这个滑条不好看 改成这样？[/color]
SPOILER
00:32:822 (7) - nc，因为这里空了一拍 然后后面的nc就不要了 OK
00:37:740 (1,1) - 这两个没必要分开吧……不是太长 其实无所谓啦
00:44:298 (3) - 这个我觉得拉成reverse比较好 然后这样放……吧 [/color]
SPOILER
00:55:281 (4) - 没叠好
01:05:264 (9) - 这个是想和01:03:953 (7) - 叠在一起的话建议叠好[/color]
01:05:920 (10) - 不好看……[/color]
01:16:412 (10) - ^
01:07:887 (1,2,3,4) - 我相信是摆歪了
01:18:379 (1,2,3,4) - ^[/color]
01:11:166 (1) - 这个+Finish 我觉得[/color]
01:15:756 (9) - 放中间好看[/color] 这和上边是复制粘贴的==

觉得梗太单调了……学我狂抄新图:3

[Insane]

CS-1 我都觉得难喂大跳图用中圈是闹哪样 可是评级还不到5星耶
00:26:265 (4) - 这里塞一个note 然后这样摆 [/color]
SPOILER
00:41:347 (2,5,8,11) - nc
00:44:790 (4) - nc[/color]
01:03:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个梗太简单粗暴了吧/w\换一个好看点的 没梗了 :(
01:14:462 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^[/color] 没梗了 :(

觉得像老图 被规则跳规矩的太死(?)的感觉 去抄抄现在的新图应该不错

Anyway , good map! :)
感谢recheck
S o a p
359 posts
Joined March 2012
S o a p
建议而已，我也是新人XD
几个难度请用EASY NORMAL HARD INSANE来标注

easy

00:14:134 (4) - 这个地方摆好，ez不能有重叠
00:32:495 (3) - ^
00:33:806 (4) - ^
还有easy请不要使用变速

节奏的话EASY好像没什么问题，恩

normal

normal也请不要加变速.. 除了开头可以适当加下= =
00:34:462 (4) - 要叠的话请叠好
00:44:954 (5,6,1) - 是个三角吧，摆正一点
问题不大

hard
00:21:839 (6,1) - 这个中间明明有音为什么是空着的，如果你全程跟人声的话，请无视，还有很多类似这样的地方，就不一一举出了..
00:35:937 (3,4) - 这里的3可以考虑换一下位置，这样不太好看

insane
00:42:822 (2,1,2,3) - 这个地方可以考虑下别的排列方式?直直的会感觉有点僵硬?
00:55:773 (2,3,1) - ^


其他都不错呢ww加油
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
……Easy做的不错不过还是不推荐改滑条速度 Normal也是
所有diff的最后一个转盘尝试提前1/2结束
00:30:199 - 从这里开始按照鼓点下clap试试:3
Normal
00:09:631 (1) - 改成一次往返
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

S o a p wrote:

建议而已，我也是新人XD
几个难度请用EASY NORMAL HARD INSANE来标注

easy

00:14:134 (4) - 这个地方摆好，ez不能有重叠
00:32:495 (3) - ^
00:33:806 (4) - ^
还有easy请不要使用变速

节奏的话EASY好像没什么问题，恩

normal

normal也请不要加变速.. 除了开头可以适当加下= =
00:34:462 (4) - 要叠的话请叠好
00:44:954 (5,6,1) - 是个三角吧，摆正一点
问题不大

hard
00:21:839 (6,1) - 这个中间明明有音为什么是空着的，如果你全程跟人声的话，请无视，还有很多类似这样的地方，就不一一举出了..
00:35:937 (3,4) - 这里的3可以考虑换一下位置，这样不太好看

insane
00:42:822 (2,1,2,3) - 这个地方可以考虑下别的排列方式?直直的会感觉有点僵硬?
00:55:773 (2,3,1) - ^


其他都不错呢ww加油
谢谢
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

ts8zs wrote:

……Easy做的不错不过还是不推荐改滑条速度 Normal也是 已改
所有diff的最后一个转盘尝试提前1/2结束
00:30:199 - 从这里开始按照鼓点下clap试试:3 好主意我试试
Normal
00:09:631 (1) - 改成一次往返
etc
84 posts
Joined March 2012
etc
先吐槽下Insane裏面ar8/sv1.8/cs4這種看起來像遠古時期map設定的設置.
如果你想ar8的話 sv建議降低到1.3到1.6之間.如果你要ar9那麼現在就可以.cs麻煩提升到4,anime歌曲裏面用cs5的比較少,因為畢竟不是鬼畜圖.還有建議找個無聲slider聲效丟到文件夾裏,hard和insane使用.
歌曲難度名字必須修改,不然bat會找你麻煩

  • Insane

    00:23:150 (11) - change to slider
    00:30:199 - add note
    00:52:003 (4) - change to slider 後面空太多了 能多塞點東西讓他變快點嗎
    01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what happend
    01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
    如果這個是insane的話請把他做的再快點,現在這個像hard的節奏,建議可以去看看rue的dear you,總之我感覺停頓太多,kiaitime你可以把裏面紅線都塞滿.甚至藍線也塞.
  • Hard

    sv改成1.3然後重新修正

    00:21:839 (6) - change to slider
    00:32:495 - add circle
    00:36:265 (4) - 如果你是故意疊在上一個slider的尾巴的話請疊好
    00:39:216 (1) - 刪掉
    01:05:281 (9) - 改成slider
    01:27:577 (1) - Q
改完請pm我 我會試著remap一些地方給你看
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

etc wrote:

先吐槽下Insane裏面ar8/sv1.8/cs4這種看起來像遠古時期map設定的設置.
如果你想ar8的話 sv建議降低到1.3到1.6之間.如果你要ar9那麼現在就可以.cs麻煩提升到4,anime歌曲裏面用cs5的比較少,因為畢竟不是鬼畜圖.還有建議找個無聲slider聲效丟到文件夾裏,hard和insane使用.
歌曲難度名字必須修改,不然bat會找你麻煩

  • Insane

    00:23:150 (11) - change to slider Accepted
    00:30:199 - add note 虽然怪怪的不过accepted
    00:52:003 (4) - change to slider 後面空太多了 能多塞點東西讓他變快點嗎 OK
    01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what happend ?
    01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
    如果這個是insane的話請把他做的再快點,現在這個像hard的節奏,建議可以去看看rue的dear you,總之我感覺停頓太多,kiaitime你可以把裏面紅線都塞滿.甚至藍線也塞.
  • Hard

    sv改成1.3然後重新修正 我比较懒==

    00:21:839 (6) - change to slider Accepted
    00:32:495 - add circle Accepted
    00:36:265 (4) - 如果你是故意疊在上一個slider的尾巴的話請疊好 不是的 :lol:
    00:39:216 (1) - 刪掉 怪怪的
    01:05:281 (9) - 改成slider Accepted
    01:27:577 (1) - Q
Accepted

改完請pm我 我會試著remap一些地方給你看
感谢mod，kd已投
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ 615915887

Late m4m sorry ...

Chiwa Harusaki

00:29:216 (4) - delete

SPOILER

01:22:331 (2) - Add slider

01:23:642 (3) - Add slider

01:24:954 (4) - Add slider

Masuzu Natsukawa

00:09:545 (1) - At the end of the slider one tick +

SPOILER

01:30:036 (1) - It's the end of the spinner

so noisy

Looks like the same degree of difficulty. What about the difficulty of that if you delete the. The level of difficulty ..

Himeka Akishino

00:06:413 (2) - ctrl + g

00:19:708 (1) - Add to Circle

00:25:773 (3) - x208 y108 This is more good things

00:30:199 (1) - Add to Circle

Ai Fuyuumi

01:10:527 (5) - Suddenly, the player's slowness can be confusing
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ 615915887

Late m4m sorry ...

Chiwa Harusaki

00:29:216 (4) - delete Accepted

SPOILER

01:22:331 (2) - Add slider Accepted

01:23:642 (3) - Add slider Accepted

01:24:954 (4) - Add slider Accepted

Masuzu Natsukawa

00:09:545 (1) - At the end of the slider one tick + I think you are right but a previous modder told me not to :?

SPOILER

01:30:036 (1) - It's the end of the spinner Accepted
so noisy

Looks like the same degree of difficulty. What about the difficulty of that if you delete the. The level of difficulty .. deleted

Himeka Akishino

00:06:413 (2) - ctrl + g Accepted

00:19:708 (1) - Add to Circle ?

00:25:773 (3) - x208 y108 This is more good things Accepted

00:30:199 (1) - Add to Circle ?sorry my englishh is suck

Ai Fuyuumi

01:10:527 (5) - Suddenly, the player's slowness can be confusing I cant think of a better idea :?


thanks for modding
Xivaxi
133 posts
Joined November 2011
Xivaxi
Hi! From my mod queue~

[Ai - Insane]
00:28:068 (4) - x:313 y:274 to stack perfectly on the previous slider
00:31:019 (3,4,5,6,7) - Space these out a little so they're not overlapping
00:35:773 (2,3) - Replace these with two sliders
Pic
00:44:298 (3) - Repeat this slider? the short rest here feels a little awkward
00:50:773 (12) - Note here to match the triple in the piano
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are extremely awkward to play, nothing in the bgm lends itself to doubles here and the beats on the red ticks are being missed by the doubles. Just make them all evenly spaced on the timeline like this:
Pic
The placement on the map is fine the way it is
01:10:527 (5) - A little weird to play. Either NC this to make the SV change more obvious, or increase the slider tick rate so we can see the SV change
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above about doubles
01:21:019 (5) - Same as above sv change

[Himeka - Hard]
00:04:142 (4) - Make this a mirror of 00:02:628 (1) -> copy 1 -> ctrl h -> ctrl g -> adjust positioning
00:31:019 (4) - ctrl g? It follows the line of the previous pattern better
00:41:511 (4) - Add note here, the short rest in the vocals is slightly off time and is hard to time correctly without a note here bridging it
00:46:921 (3) - Add note here to match vocals
01:07:904 (1,2,3,4) - This square looks lopsided a little? Maybe i'm just going crazy
01:18:396 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Masuzu - Normal]
I'm not sure normal should have SV changes or distance snap changes, though I'm no expert on this subject
00:21:347 (3) - x:119 y:174 to stack on the slider
00:28:560 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - These notes are not very pretty, I'd suggest a pattern like this:
Pic 6,7,1,2
Pic 3,4
With 3 stacked on 1 and 4 stacked on 2.
00:32:495 (1,2,3) - Make them like this
Pic
00:35:445 (2) - Can this stack on 00:34:462 (4) 's reverse arrow?
00:38:068 (6) - 2nd point x:222 y:194, Final point x:211 y:274
00:39:052 (7) - 2nd point x:375 y:159, Final point x:347 y:274
00:45:937 (2) - x:64 to stack on previous slider
00:54:790 (3) - y:268 to stack
01:15:118 (4) - x:389 y:194 to stack
01:26:265 (2) - 2nd point x:381 y:192 Final point x:350 y:108, to blanket better

[Chiwa - Easy]
00:10:200 (1) - 2nd point x:201 y:62, Final point x:298 y:111 - cleaner blanket
00:12:822 (3) - 1st point x:111 y:267, 2nd point x:206 y:306, 3rd point x:299 y:252 ^
00:16:757 (3) - x:292 y:193 - Cleaner triangle
00:36:429 (2) - Only adjust first point of this -> x:282 y:178 - fixes blanket a bit
00:49:544 (4) - 2nd point x:125 y:286, Final point x:84 y:200 - blankets 1 better, and makes it more distinct from 3
Rest of map is pretty nice~
Cute song and cute show~ GL!
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

Xivaxi wrote:

Hi! From my mod queue~

[Ai - Insane]
00:28:068 (4) - x:313 y:274 to stack perfectly on the previous slider
00:31:019 (3,4,5,6,7) - Space these out a little so they're not overlapping
00:35:773 (2,3) - Replace these with two sliders
Pic
00:44:298 (3) - Repeat this slider? the short rest here feels a little awkward
00:50:773 (12) - Note here to match the triple in the piano
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are extremely awkward to play, nothing in the bgm lends itself to doubles here and the beats on the red ticks are being missed by the doubles. Just make them all evenly spaced on the timeline like this:
Pic
The placement on the map is fine the way it is
01:10:527 (5) - A little weird to play. Either NC this to make the SV change more obvious, or increase the slider tick rate so we can see the SV change
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above about doubles
01:21:019 (5) - Same as above sv change

[Himeka - Hard]
00:04:142 (4) - Make this a mirror of 00:02:628 (1) -> copy 1 -> ctrl h -> ctrl g -> adjust positioning
00:31:019 (4) - ctrl g? It follows the line of the previous pattern better
00:41:511 (4) - Add note here, the short rest in the vocals is slightly off time and is hard to time correctly without a note here bridging it
00:46:921 (3) - Add note here to match vocals
01:07:904 (1,2,3,4) - This square looks lopsided a little? Maybe i'm just going crazy
01:18:396 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Masuzu - Normal]
I'm not sure normal should have SV changes or distance snap changes, though I'm no expert on this subject
00:21:347 (3) - x:119 y:174 to stack on the slider
00:28:560 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - These notes are not very pretty, I'd suggest a pattern like this:
Pic 6,7,1,2
Pic 3,4
With 3 stacked on 1 and 4 stacked on 2.
00:32:495 (1,2,3) - Make them like this
Pic
00:35:445 (2) - Can this stack on 00:34:462 (4) 's reverse arrow?
00:38:068 (6) - 2nd point x:222 y:194, Final point x:211 y:274
00:39:052 (7) - 2nd point x:375 y:159, Final point x:347 y:274
00:45:937 (2) - x:64 to stack on previous slider
00:54:790 (3) - y:268 to stack
01:15:118 (4) - x:389 y:194 to stack
01:26:265 (2) - 2nd point x:381 y:192 Final point x:350 y:108, to blanket better

[Chiwa - Easy]
00:10:200 (1) - 2nd point x:201 y:62, Final point x:298 y:111 - cleaner blanket
00:12:822 (3) - 1st point x:111 y:267, 2nd point x:206 y:306, 3rd point x:299 y:252 ^
00:16:757 (3) - x:292 y:193 - Cleaner triangle
00:36:429 (2) - Only adjust first point of this -> x:282 y:178 - fixes blanket a bit
00:49:544 (4) - 2nd point x:125 y:286, Final point x:84 y:200 - blankets 1 better, and makes it more distinct from 3
Rest of map is pretty nice~
Cute song and cute show~ GL!
How perfect this mod is!
thx very much :)
etc
84 posts
Joined March 2012
etc
說好的m4m呢
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

etc wrote:

說好的m4m呢
额，忘了==晚上弄
Unsfamiliar
540 posts
Joined May 2013
Unsfamiliar
Hiya! From my queue thingo. Alright, here we go:

Chiwa Harusaki (Easy)
Seems fine. I can't really mod easy :P

Masuzu Natsukawa (Normal)
00:55:773 - Add a note here if you think it's appropriate (same with hard) for the drum hit
I don't see an other real problems with this diff

Himeka Akishino (Hard)
00:09:631 (1,1) - Some funky business going on around here. Overlapped. Move 00:09:626 (1) to 00:09:545
00:25:281 (1,2,3) - I think these are too close, given your spacing during other combos? Maybe it suits this particular part of the song but up to you.
00:37:740 - Add a note here and move the start of 00:37:740 (1) spinner 1/2 forward? Sounds better imo.
00:48:068 - Add a note here maybe. Kinda flows into the slower part
00:55:773 - I think there needs to be a note here to match the drum as in normal

Ai Fuyuumi (Insane)
00:33:642 (4) - Snap this to the start of 00:32:986 (2) slider
01:01:019 (2,1) - I think a 1/4 beat stream of some sort would be appropriate to fill in the gap between these two combos
01:21:019 (1) - I think this slider is too slow for the part. Maybe speed it up; add a reverse slider or something to match the guitar part like you do here 01:21:675 (1,2,3)
Since this is insane difficulty, I think you could get away with 1/4 beat stream from 01:26:265 (1) to 01:27:577 (1)
01:27:740 (1) - The end of this spinner conflicts with the one in hard norma and easy. Up to you but move the one here back 1/2 note, I think it sounds better as in the previous difficulties.

Overall, very nice! Feel free to look at my suggestions, disregard them if you wish. Anyway hope you found this helpful, good luck!! :D

Ciao~
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiya! From my queue thingo. Alright, here we go:

Chiwa Harusaki (Easy)
Seems fine. I can't really mod easy :P :D

Masuzu Natsukawa (Normal)
00:55:773 - Add a note here if you think it's appropriate (same with hard) for the drum hit accepted
I don't see an other real problems with this diff

Himeka Akishino (Hard)
00:09:631 (1,1) - Some funky business going on around here. Overlapped. Move 00:09:626 (1) to 00:09:545 accepted
00:25:281 (1,2,3) - I think these are too close, given your spacing during other combos? Maybe it suits this particular part of the song but up to you. it's not that close
00:37:740 - Add a note here and move the start of 00:37:740 (1) spinner 1/2 forward? Sounds better imo.
00:48:068 - Add a note here maybe. Kinda flows into the slower part
00:55:773 - I think there needs to be a note here to match the drum as in normal

Ai Fuyuumi (Insane)
00:33:642 (4) - Snap this to the start of 00:32:986 (2) slider
01:01:019 (2,1) - I think a 1/4 beat stream of some sort would be appropriate to fill in the gap between these two combos
01:21:019 (1) - I think this slider is too slow for the part. Maybe speed it up; add a reverse slider or something to match the guitar part like you do here 01:21:675 (1,2,3)
Since this is insane difficulty, I think you could get away with 1/4 beat stream from 01:26:265 (1) to 01:27:577 (1)
01:27:740 (1) - The end of this spinner conflicts with the one in hard norma and easy. Up to you but move the one here back 1/2 note, I think it sounds better as in the previous difficulties.

Overall, very nice! Feel free to look at my suggestions, disregard them if you wish. Anyway hope you found this helpful, good luck!! :D

Ciao~
others nearly all accepted
thanks for your mod :D
[-mii-chan-]
167 posts
Joined March 2012
[-mii-chan-]
From my queue :)

Overall
Your symmetry is good, but there are still some gliches that I found, I mentioned them in my mod below & I recommend you to fix those.
Your kiai is half-mapped, half copy & flip :) It's ok to use flips but your map is TV size, flipping half of the kiai can bore some players
Hitsounds are good :) no overdose~

Chiwa Harusaki
00:29:872 (1) - can you move this note a little downward? the spacing seems too near/not easily seen, my suggestion goes like this: http://puu.sh/3J0eP.jpg
00:31:183 (2,3,4) - move the slider 4 to the right for nicer symmetry between 3-4-5, like here: http://puu.sh/3J0lG.jpg
00:48:232 (3) - rotate this slider by -90degree? just for nicer symmetry ;)
00:50:855 (1) - remove a repeat at the end & put a note (2) there at 00:52:167 - like this: http://puu.sh/3J0B2.jpg

Masuzu Natsukawa
01:05:281 (3) - move this a little closer so that 01:04:626 (2,3,1) - are evenly spaced between each other, more symmetrical & beat-regconizing
01:13:478 (6) - remove this note? not match with the vocal :(

Himeka Akishino
no problems detected :) at least in my view

Ai Fuyuumi
00:54:462 (4) - maybe you can fix it like this for more symmetry. BEFORE & AFTER
00:58:232 - add a note at the center of the playfield, turning it into a tap 3?
01:04:626 (3) - rotate this by 10degree clockwise, selection centre for better look at the 4 sliders
01:15:118 (3) - ^

Great song~ Good luck to you getting it ranked~
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

o0ohitomio0o wrote:

From my queue :)

Overall
Your symmetry is good, but there are still some gliches that I found, I mentioned them in my mod below & I recommend you to fix those.
Your kiai is half-mapped, half copy & flip :) It's ok to use flips but your map is TV size, flipping half of the kiai can bore some players
Hitsounds are good :) no overdose~

Chiwa Harusaki
00:29:872 (1) - can you move this note a little downward? the spacing seems too near/not easily seen, my suggestion goes like this: http://puu.sh/3J0eP.jpg
00:31:183 (2,3,4) - move the slider 4 to the right for nicer symmetry between 3-4-5, like here: http://puu.sh/3J0lG.jpg
00:48:232 (3) - rotate this slider by -90degree? just for nicer symmetry ;)
00:50:855 (1) - remove a repeat at the end & put a note (2) there at 00:52:167 - like this: http://puu.sh/3J0B2.jpg

Masuzu Natsukawa
01:05:281 (3) - move this a little closer so that 01:04:626 (2,3,1) - are evenly spaced between each other, more symmetrical & beat-regconizing
01:13:478 (6) - remove this note? not match with the vocal :(

Himeka Akishino
no problems detected :) at least in my view

Ai Fuyuumi
00:54:462 (4) - maybe you can fix it like this for more symmetry. BEFORE & AFTER
00:58:232 - add a note at the center of the playfield, turning it into a tap 3?
01:04:626 (3) - rotate this by 10degree clockwise, selection centre for better look at the 4 sliders
01:15:118 (3) - ^

Great song~ Good luck to you getting it ranked~
thx :D
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi~ 不多说了咱们开始 :3

[Insane]
00:04:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里，莫名的overmap，实际上反而00:04:142 (1) - 这里可以拆成1/2。建议开头到00:08:684 - 的地方重做一下，减低滑条速度然后用1/1来下节奏，可以得到一个渐入的效果
00:11:347 (1) - 建议前移1/2并且在原滑条尾加圈（然后调整音效）。有一个渐开的跳感觉还是不错的
00:13:970 - 加note
00:15:445 (1,2,3,4) - 做好对称
00:18:068 - 去掉whistle看看
00:24:544 - 如果不介意的话可以试试加个note 当然这会影响到排列
00:31:019 (3,4,5,6) - 不是很动感 - 仅供参考
SPOILER
00:32:331 - +whistle，如果如此，00:32:495 - 改成finish，减小音量
00:32:986 (2) - ctrl+G
00:43:806 - 前面有点无聊，可以加个note
00:55:609 (1,2,3,1) - 跳起来很吃力，建议改成四方跳
01:06:265 (2) - flow有点差
SPOILER
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 私下觉得这种重复的跳有点二了 你看一下吧
01:16:429 (1,2) - 同01:06:265 (2) -
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同上
01:22:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 对称做好
01:24:954 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 虽然随你 不过我觉得这里增大密度最后加一个连打的串比较符合曲子的流向

[Hard]
SV1.8不是很适合Hard，建议改成SV1.6左右（虽然我都用1.3 /runs）
00:12:003 (2,3,4) - flow不太好，试试这个
SPOILER
00:17:577 - 00:17:904 - 可以加note 弄成一点小跳
00:32:822 (1) - 往右边放一些，拉远一些距离
00:44:954 (5,6,7) - 这样？
SPOILER
00:54:790 (3) - 向上平移一些，不要完全被前面的重合
01:05:281 (9) - 同上
01:09:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用ctrl+shift+D来创造完美的多边形
后面同上

[Normal]
我的建议是SV1.2 AR+1
00:02:627 (1,2) - ctrl+G
00:04:142 (4) - 放左边来比较有flow，后面的顺移到右边
00:22:822 (1) - 减速莫名
00:25:937 (3) - 最好不要有多于一次的折返
00:27:249 (4) - Normal最好不要给单个的滑条减速 这里很容易混淆
00:28:560 (5) - NC
00:50:527 (6) - 增大间距并且不要被遮挡 为后面的加速做提示
00:40:691 (2) - 折返箭头不能被遮盖
00:50:855 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个1/2都很莫名啊 原曲里不明显 不如改成1/1
00:58:724 (1) - 改成x0.8 0.5太突然了
后面的加速不适合Normal整个难度1.0其实也就足够了

[Easy]
感觉1.0有些太快了 推荐0.8 这样也可以减少与一开始的减速的速度差距（在0.8的速度下请把开头的SV设成x0.625）
有一些间距不太对 建议时时开启distance snap以及关闭grid snap来对齐
00:14:134 (4) - 这里不要有多于一次的折返 比较快的多次折返会让玩家无法反应
00:53:478 (3) - ^

就是这么多啦~ Good luck~
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

Flower wrote:

Hi~ 不多说了咱们开始 :3

[Insane]
00:04:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里，莫名的overmap，实际上反而00:04:142 (1) - 这里可以拆成1/2。建议开头到00:08:684 - 的地方重做一下，减低滑条速度然后用1/1来下节奏，可以得到一个渐入的效果
00:11:347 (1) - 建议前移1/2并且在原滑条尾加圈（然后调整音效）。有一个渐开的跳感觉还是不错的
00:13:970 - 加note
00:15:445 (1,2,3,4) - 做好对称
00:18:068 - 去掉whistle看看
00:24:544 - 如果不介意的话可以试试加个note 当然这会影响到排列
00:31:019 (3,4,5,6) - 不是很动感 - 仅供参考
SPOILER
00:32:331 - +whistle，如果如此，00:32:495 - 改成finish，减小音量
00:32:986 (2) - ctrl+G
00:43:806 - 前面有点无聊，可以加个note
00:55:609 (1,2,3,1) - 跳起来很吃力，建议改成四方跳
01:06:265 (2) - flow有点差
SPOILER
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 私下觉得这种重复的跳有点二了 你看一下吧
01:16:429 (1,2) - 同01:06:265 (2) -
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同上
01:22:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 对称做好
01:24:954 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 虽然随你 不过我觉得这里增大密度最后加一个连打的串比较符合曲子的流向

[Hard]
SV1.8不是很适合Hard，建议改成SV1.6左右（虽然我都用1.3 /runs）
00:12:003 (2,3,4) - flow不太好，试试这个
SPOILER
00:17:577 - 00:17:904 - 可以加note 弄成一点小跳
00:32:822 (1) - 往右边放一些，拉远一些距离
00:44:954 (5,6,7) - 这样？
SPOILER
00:54:790 (3) - 向上平移一些，不要完全被前面的重合
01:05:281 (9) - 同上
01:09:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用ctrl+shift+D来创造完美的多边形
后面同上

[Normal]
我的建议是SV1.2 AR+1
00:02:627 (1,2) - ctrl+G
00:04:142 (4) - 放左边来比较有flow，后面的顺移到右边
00:22:822 (1) - 减速莫名
00:25:937 (3) - 最好不要有多于一次的折返
00:27:249 (4) - Normal最好不要给单个的滑条减速 这里很容易混淆
00:28:560 (5) - NC
00:50:527 (6) - 增大间距并且不要被遮挡 为后面的加速做提示
00:40:691 (2) - 折返箭头不能被遮盖
00:50:855 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个1/2都很莫名啊 原曲里不明显 不如改成1/1
00:58:724 (1) - 改成x0.8 0.5太突然了
后面的加速不适合Normal整个难度1.0其实也就足够了

[Easy]
感觉1.0有些太快了 推荐0.8 这样也可以减少与一开始的减速的速度差距（在0.8的速度下请把开头的SV设成x0.625）
有一些间距不太对 建议时时开启distance snap以及关闭grid snap来对齐
00:14:134 (4) - 这里不要有多于一次的折返 比较快的多次折返会让玩家无法反应
00:53:478 (3) - ^

就是这么多啦~ Good luck~
完全重做了ez和nm==
1PSA
119 posts
Joined November 2010
1PSA
[Chiwa Harusaki]
  1. 00:31:183 (2,3) - 2结尾和3开头好像不水平吧
  2. easy当中最好不要出现遮盖的note吧，挨得太近也不是很美观其实，比如00:14:134 (4,1) - 01:02:659 (2,4) - 01:09:216 (3,4,1) - 01:19:708 (3,1) - etc.
  3. 01:19:708 (3) - easy中最好不要太低哦
  4. 最好不要复制粘贴太多哦
  5. 真的二四白线不加音效么，加上比较好一些感觉
[Masuzu Natsukawa]
  1. 00:10:200 (1) - 这个slider有些问题吧大于一拍了
  2. 00:13:150 (2) - 如果包住00:12:167 (4) - 会不会更好
  3. 没什么了，和easy一样其实最好不要总是有些遮挡，毕竟给新手玩，不是hard，有些滑条和easy一样不太美观
[Himeka Akishino]
  1. 其实也没什么还是一样有些滑条不太美观
  2. 如果是hard，BPM又很高那么滑条其实1.3-1.6就可以了，distance开1.1-1.2，那样最美观，一般图都是这样不是么
  3. 高潮部分太简单了吧，总是每拍一个note
[Ai Fuyuumi]
  1. 00:03:385 (3,1) - 如果竖直对齐呢
  2. 00:49:216 (7,8) - 如果斜着在一条线上会更好
然后，然后就没有然后了，不错，加油 :)
以上纯是个人意见可随意忽略 :D
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
hi
我忘了mod 抱歉 = =

黑: 普通的建议
红: 不符合规则

[Ai Fuyuumi]

00:03:006 (2,3,4) - 这些slider我还是建议你用没红点的slider
00:11:347 (1) - 这个略奇怪 我建议你把它弄成1/2 note 还是 slider
00:15:445 (1) - 头部加上finish?
00:15:937 - 为什么要空呢...不好玩... 之后的两个红点也是
00:22:003 (8) - NC
00:22:659 - 为什么要空
00:26:757 (1,2) - 这DS也太大了吧...
00:30:527 (1) - 这个不用NC
00:31:101 - 为什么要改音量...巨难听..
00:39:708 (4) - 我觉得加fnish好过加clap
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看这slider 还有怎么一直重复这梗
01:11:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 竟然复制

总结就是图有点单调 而且各种对称 不是很好

[Himeka Akishino]

00:09:872 (1,1) - 这两个不用NC吧...
00:25:281 (1,2,3) - 看起来好挤 不美
00:27:085 (1,2) - 卧槽

kiai 部分真的好单调 note好少 各种对称 感觉是懒图 ._.

[Masuzu Natsukawa]

00:10:200 (1) - 不用NC

需要一些改进...
Good Luck
Sleepy Tori
103 posts
Joined May 2013
Sleepy Tori
[general]
none

[chiwa harusaki]
wow i couldn't find a single thing wrong.
great timing and slider shape and placement :D

[masuzu natsukawa]
again, i can't find anything wrong.

[himeka akishino]
00:32:495 (6) - the overlap right here is really hard to see.try moving it slightly above the slider.
00:41:347 (3) - ^ or maybe you could change the color.it might help a little.
00:45:609 (7) - ^ :x

no further problems

[ai fuyuumi]
OH MY GOODNESS I'M IN LOVE.

I'm sorry i can't be more helpful.these maps are just so amazing.this map must be ranked and approved.
because of that, im going to shoot you a kudosu star
:D
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

mintong89 wrote:

hi
我忘了mod 抱歉 = =

黑: 普通的建议
红: 不符合规则

[Ai Fuyuumi]

00:03:006 (2,3,4) - 这些slider我还是建议你用没红点的slider
00:11:347 (1) - 这个略奇怪 我建议你把它弄成1/2 note 还是 slider
00:15:445 (1) - 头部加上finish?
00:15:937 - 为什么要空呢...不好玩... 之后的两个红点也是
00:22:003 (8) - NC
00:22:659 - 为什么要空
00:26:757 (1,2) - 这DS也太大了吧...
00:30:527 (1) - 这个不用NC
00:31:101 - 为什么要改音量...巨难听..
00:39:708 (4) - 我觉得加fnish好过加clap
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看这slider 还有怎么一直重复这梗
01:11:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 竟然复制

总结就是图有点单调 而且各种对称 不是很好

[Himeka Akishino]

00:09:872 (1,1) - 这两个不用NC吧...
00:25:281 (1,2,3) - 看起来好挤 不美
00:27:085 (1,2) - 卧槽

kiai 部分真的好单调 note好少 各种对称 感觉是懒图 ._.

[Masuzu Natsukawa]

00:10:200 (1) - 不用NC

需要一些改进...
Good Luck
果断考虑remap了==
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
Video Offset:

Video,2480,"ED.avi"
覆盖OSU里的同行文字啊
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow 
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