ONE OK ROCK - Rock, Scissors, Paper [Osu|CatchTheBeat]‬ · forum‬

Foxxer_old

Foxxer_old 2013-04-06T16:56:53+00:00

Timing Check Request

BPM: 193
Offset: 478

BPM: 191
Offset: 80063

BPM: 193
Offset: 90115

Good Luck~

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-04-06T21:10:10+00:00

Thanks, changed the 1st and 2nd one

Verlaren

Verlaren 2013-04-12T22:11:23+00:00

Nice song~

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-04-12T22:58:03+00:00

Indeed!

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,317 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-04-14T20:36:08+00:00

..wieso hat das keinen artist? D: xD

Seph

Seph 2013-04-23T16:16:40+00:00

nvm, will mod ctb when downloaded

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,565 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-05-12T17:06:28+00:00

Tenshichan requested me a mod for his CTB diff in-game. Here I am /o/

[CTB]

Put the difficulty of the map inside the name? I'd be a Rain.
OD9, to fit it to the AR.
For the part at the very beginning, before the spinner, it's better not to put any HDash. The melody is quite calm there, and they don't really fit there.
01:20:063 (1,2,3,4) - Reminded me completely of Steven's map style wwwww
01:38:338 (1) - Delete this note? Sounds better to let alone the previous triplet (2,3,4).
01:40:048 - Restart the kiai here, instead of 01:40:359? Looks more fitting.
02:10:843 - ^
01:43:156 (3,4,5) - Try to avoid a pixel-jump here, since it's quite unexpected. Delete the HDash in (4) or put one in (3) to make this pattern a bit more confortable to play.
01:44:400 (3,4,5) - This one is a bit easier to catch, because there's a HDash in the previous (2), which carries the ryuuta to the next note quickly. Still, recommendable to avoid that pixel-jump.
01:53:726 (2) - Make the NC in this note, instead of the previous one?
01:59:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - It's really nice at is it, but to make it a bit more interesting, it's possible to separate a bit those notes from the Y-axis in groups of 2 notes. HERE is an example, but it doesn't have to be so extreme, and the separation can be done gradually (starting with (2) exactly in the Y-axis, (4) a bit more separated, and so on). It could be an interesting effect that can be added >w<
02:00:566 (5) - Make it horizontal looking to the right, to increase the distance with the next slider (1).
02:03:459 (2) - This note can be closer to (1,3), just to make a not-so-spreaded "<" triplet. The next ones are okay as they are, since the player already gets prepared with this not-so-difficult triplet.
02:03:769 (2) - ^ Same reason, and to keep the symmetry =)

Awesome job, and really fun map here! Most of the comments are just mere suggestions. Good luck :3

Tenshichan

601 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-05-13T10:48:02+00:00

Deif wrote:
Tenshichan requested me a mod for his CTB diff in-game. Here I am /o/

[CTB]

Put the difficulty of the map inside the name? I'd be a Rain. ok
OD9, to fit it to the AR. ok
For the part at the very beginning, before the spinner, it's better not to put any HDash. The melody is quite calm there, and they don't really fit there. I tried out several things here and I guess you are right. I made them now possible without a hyperdash.
01:20:063 (1,2,3,4) - Reminded me completely of Steven's map style wwwww Really? Its coincidence then I just liked this kind of pattern :3
01:38:338 (1) - Delete this note? Sounds better to let alone the previous triplet (2,3,4). Deleted the note and adjusted the spacing to the next note to make it not look so poor spaced.
01:40:048 - Restart the kiai here, instead of 01:40:359? Looks more fitting. I used the same kiai as in the other diffs in this mapset, and afaik it needs to be consistent so I dont make a change here
02:10:843 - ^ ^
01:43:156 (3,4,5) - Try to avoid a pixel-jump here, since it's quite unexpected. Delete the HDash in (4) or put one in (3) to make this pattern a bit more confortable to play. I fixed this by making the first note of the pixeljump into a hyperdash, and I put the next note near the last.
01:44:400 (3,4,5) - This one is a bit easier to catch, because there's a HDash in the previous (2), which carries the ryuuta to the next note quickly. Still, recommendable to avoid that pixel-jump. The same fix as above.
01:53:726 (2) - Make the NC in this note, instead of the previous one? Well, since NC in CTB are just to prevent overfilling the catcher I fixed this for aesthetic reasons, basically you are right it would be more fitting.
01:59:789 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - It's really nice at is it, but to make it a bit more interesting, it's possible to separate a bit those notes from the Y-axis in groups of 2 notes. HERE is an example, but it doesn't have to be so extreme, and the separation can be done gradually (starting with (2) exactly in the Y-axis, (4) a bit more separated, and so on). It could be an interesting effect that can be added >w< I highly agree on this, nice idea. I didnt like how the stream looked while playing and it was a bit plain before. I made it as you suggested but I didn't make the gap between the fruits so huge, it is now comparable to the jumps on 7x7x7 from the distance.
02:00:566 (5) - Make it horizontal looking to the right, to increase the distance with the next slider (1). Because I changed the previous pattern, this slider looked awkward there, so I moved it to the middle and made it vertical, so it blends in with the next pattern.
02:03:459 (2) - This note can be closer to (1,3), just to make a not-so-spreaded "<" triplet. The next ones are okay as they are, since the player already gets prepared with this not-so-difficult triplet. I hesitated to fix this because I wanted to make a pattern which looks similar to one of my favorite patterns in CTB (the original comes from the conversion of final test in Touhou). But Since the AR is 9 and I certainly won't change this I think you are right, so I fixed it as you suggested.
02:03:769 (2) - ^ Same reason, and to keep the symmetry =) ^

Awesome job, and really fun map here! Most of the comments are just mere suggestions. Good luck :3 Thank you very much for your mod :3

http://puu.sh/2SyMg.osu

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,565 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-05-13T16:36:11+00:00

Kiai times don't have to be consistent in guest difficulties, as long as they make sense. Example: p/2256323

Forgot to give a star /o/

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-05-27T22:54:56+00:00

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SPOILER

osu file format v12

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356,256,83675,2,0,P|400:272|436:272,2,80
276,244,84146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,292,84460,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,136,84775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,72,85089,6,0,P|364:76|444:148,2,160,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,86031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,86267,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,86345,2,0,P|120:296|172:324,1,120
208,316,86659,2,0,P|256:296|328:304,1,120
360,316,86973,2,0,L|436:260,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87445,12,0,89801,0:0:0:0:
160,104,90100,6,0,P|112:160|116:252,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,91032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,104,91343,2,0,P|400:160|396:252,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,92276,2,0,L|176:128,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,92587,6,0,P|96:232|8:192,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,168,93364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,180,93519,2,0,P|344:220|352:256,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,336,93830,2,0,L|499:277,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,344,94607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,332,94763,2,0,P|120:304|100:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,136,95074,6,0,P|144:176|140:216,1,80
56,160,95384,2,0,L|224:108,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,72,96162,2,0,L|128:44,1,80
312,168,96628,2,0,L|228:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,96939,2,0,P|232:304|320:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,97405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,180,97561,6,0,P|412:124|336:60,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,212,98493,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,212,98649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,212,98804,2,0,L|56:220,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,136,99270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,76,99426,2,0,P|180:108|264:100,2,160,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,24,100359,6,0,P|348:88|324:168,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,101291,2,0,P|300:248|396:232,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,172,102068,2,0,L|128:256,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,102535,2,0,L|284:16,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,244,103312,2,0,P|404:216|416:176,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,288,103778,2,0,P|224:308|136:296,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,216,104711,2,0,P|64:296|84:376,2,160,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,148,105644,6,0,B|356:124|320:120|320:120|244:144,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,208,106110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,106265,2,0,L|352:216,1,80
256,56,106732,2,0,L|100:104,1,160
72,184,107198,2,0,P|24:192|-12:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,208,107509,6,0,P|192:240|220:264,1,80
324,236,107820,2,0,P|300:204|264:176,1,80
220,264,108131,2,0,L|196:344,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,180,108441,2,0,L|292:100,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,52,108752,6,0,P|416:112|416:188,1,160
95,186,109374,2,0,P|96:112|152:52,2,160,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,120895,6,0,L|400:160,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,121827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,52,122138,2,0,L|112:160,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,180,123071,2,0,L|368:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,180,123382,6,0,P|424:196|508:176,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,124159,2,0,P|232:124|196:120,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,208,124625,2,0,P|128:240|48:240,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,120,125402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,125558,2,0,P|120:76|108:116,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,240,125869,6,0,P|88:212|104:180,1,80
20,160,126179,2,0,L|80:320,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,84,126957,2,0,P|104:52|144:36,1,80
352,116,127423,2,0,P|308:132|272:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,28,127734,2,0,P|416:44|444:120,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,204,128200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,236,128356,6,0,P|256:240|188:304,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,129288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,129444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,129599,2,0,L|206:173,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,188,130065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,108,130221,2,0,P|200:148|192:248,2,160,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,131154,6,0,P|172:328|256:304,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,132086,2,0,P|172:56|256:80,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,140,132863,2,0,L|268:180,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,156,133330,6,0,P|456:220|400:296,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,134107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,44,134262,2,0,P|288:48|252:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,144,134573,2,0,B|140:132|140:132|128:124|128:124|56:112,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,135506,2,0,B|368:288|368:288|380:280|380:280|452:268,2,160,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,328,136439,6,0,P|136:276|236:244,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,188,136905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,120,137060,2,0,L|340:32,1,80
168,164,137527,2,0,P|216:120|224:20,1,160
144,64,137993,2,0,L|64:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,188,138304,6,0,L|96:180,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,138615,2,0,P|260:264|220:360,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,280,139081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,139236,2,0,P|276:192|312:180,1,80
412,220,139547,2,0,L|376:60,2,160,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,140480,2,0,L|136:60,2,160,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,304,141257,6,0,P|200:312|272:272,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,141724,2,0,P|388:160|476:168,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,244,142190,2,0,L|356:100,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,52,142656,2,0,L|200:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,136,142967,2,0,L|212:160,1,80
276,228,143278,6,0,P|212:264|128:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,188,143744,2,0,P|44:260|88:332,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,252,144211,2,0,P|152:180|108:108,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,32,144677,2,0,L|232:56,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,92,144988,2,0,P|360:84|396:68,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,156,145454,2,0,P|240:204|236:240,1,80
272,316,145765,6,0,P|344:340|428:320,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,248,146231,2,0,P|360:184|380:88,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,160,146698,2,0,P|364:180|288:152,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,147164,2,0,B|176:100|140:116|100:132|60:124,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,52,147630,2,0,P|144:100|116:200,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,344,148252,6,0,L|256:184,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,148718,2,0,L|356:280,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,149185,2,0,L|248:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,44,149496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,100,149651,2,0,P|108:136|112:180,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,260,149962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,150117,2,0,B|264:296|300:272|340:244|384:252,2,160,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,150817,12,0,153382,0:0:0:0:

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-05-28T14:44:53+00:00

I am so proud of you

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2013-05-31T07:02:55+00:00

Hello, thanks for m4m \o/

[General]

00:20:374 - kinda lack emphasis, idk, but i prefer to add a kiai burst here
01:40:359 - the kiai burst here seems a bit weird, prefer if you start it from here 01:40:048 -

[bomber's Easy]

00:10:892 (1) - this is too sudden after spinner, imo. My suggestion is to end the spinner at 00:09:182 - with low hitsounds, and then add a circle here 00:10:426 -
00:32:809 (1,2) - they can interact better i'm not really good at this
SPOILER
00:36:540 (2) - move it up a bit so the head of the previous slider blanketed
SPOILER
add whistle at 00:31:566 (2) - 's head, 00:32:809 (1) - 's tail, and remove whistle at 00:32:809 (1) - 's head to match hitsound pattern with 00:35:296 (1,2,1,2) -
00:44:001 (1) - remove whistle at slider's end, and 00:44:623 (2) - add whistle at slider's head for consistence hitsound pattern with 00:41:514 (1,2) -
00:47:731 (3) - nc
00:50:218 (1) - add finish
01:18:509 (5) - nc
01:22:261 (2) - 323|134 so it'll stack properly with 01:21:005 (2) - , then 01:23:518 (2,2) - should adjust too
01:30:100 (1) - add finish at slider's head
01:46:887 (1) - prefer if you start the spinner here 01:46:887 (1) - then add a note 01:46:887 - and/or 01:47:198 -
02:00:895 (1) - add finish
02:08:356 (6) - nc
02:09:599 (1) - remove nc
02:14:573 (3) - slider's head square point should be 301|221 if you want symmetry
SPOILER
02:14:573 (3,1) - i suggest you not to overlap

[Normal]

AR+1? Fit the SV imo

00:13:845 (2,1) - a bit overlap
00:07:939 (1,3) - add whistles?
00:37:783 (1,3) - stack them properly
01:06:384 (1,3) - don't make them touch
01:28:230 - prefer if you add a note here for a better rhythm flow
01:41:913 (6,2) - don't make them touch
02:17:371 (3,4) - stack them properly
nice diff :3

[Sakuya's Hard]

hi Sakuya o/

00:12:602 (6,1) - adjust the overlap more?
SPOILER
00:14:312 (3,5) - stack them properly
01:27:445 (1) - prefer if you start this spinner here 01:27:288 -
02:20:480 (6) - only suggestion, i think this rhythm fits the song more
SPOILER
02:21:724 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/350pF.jpg ?
nice diff :3

[Insane]

00:06:384 (4) - anti-jump doesn't fit, imo, i suggest you to ctrl+g here
00:17:887 (4) - nc
00:19:752 (5,6,7) - prefer to unstack, you can make more pattern
i'm not really good with insane diff x.x can't even play this

Good luck~

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-05-31T10:21:59+00:00

SPOILER

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
Hello, thanks for m4m \o/

[General]

00:20:374 - kinda lack emphasis, idk, but i prefer to add a kiai burst here Hmm I mainly use the kiai for the Chorus, so that's a no ^^
01:40:359 - the kiai burst here seems a bit weird, prefer if you start it from here 01:40:048 - The Kiai times follows the lyrics!

[Normal]

AR+1? Fit the SV imo Done!

00:13:845 (2,1) - a bit overlap Done!
00:07:939 (1,3) - add whistles? Done!
00:37:783 (1,3) - stack them properly Done!
01:06:384 (1,3) - don't make them touch Done!
01:28:230 - prefer if you add a note here for a better rhythm flowFixed it another way.
01:41:913 (6,2) - don't make them touchDone!
02:17:371 (3,4) - stack them properly Done!
nice diff :3

[Insane]

00:06:384 (4) - anti-jump doesn't fit, imo, i suggest you to ctrl+g here Done!
00:17:887 (4) - ncDone!
00:19:752 (5,6,7) - prefer to unstack, you can make more pattern Done!
i'm not really good with insane diff x.x can't even play this
Good luck~

Thanks for the mod!

Arrival

1,418 posts

Joined June 2012

Arrival 2013-06-02T11:47:30+00:00

Hi ! From the queue !

[Insane]
01:13:068 (2,3) - I feel this better for the flow : http://puu.sh/36z5s.jpg
01:31:032 (4,5,6,7) - What you do here with the circles just after the slider just ruin toally the flow, the feeling of the player. So i think this would be better: http://puu.sh/36z9O.jpg
01:32:431 (10) - Stack it with (8)
01:40:048 (5) - The second kiai time should be here !
01:45:177 (9,10,11) - This stream is awkward imo
02:02:760 (8) - This ? http://puu.sh/36zfb.jpg
02:10:065 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel this fits better with the vocal : http://puu.sh/36zjL.jpg
02:19:236 (5) - For the flow : http://puu.sh/36zmW.jpg
02:30:739 (5,1) - This ? To fit with the little scream : http://puu.sh/36zps.jpg

[Hard]
01:40:048 (6) - For the kiai time. Same at the 02:10:843 (6)
01:42:224 (3) - Here you should just place a circle on the white tick. The red tick fits with nothing
02:06:957 (3,4) - These two sliders should be the same, like this : http://puu.sh/36zGf.jpg
02:21:724 (2) - Make a better blanket : http://puu.sh/36zHP.jpg
Nice diff here

[Normal]
I won't repeat the timing of kiais anymore
You've got some spacing issues, check the aimod
00:15:089 (3) - Clap here i suggest
00:42:446 (1) - Place it better, more symmetrical, 00:44:001 (4) - Here too
01:38:493 (3) - Blanket better here : http://puu.sh/36zPc.jpg
01:45:644 (1) - It's not really a problem but loud sliderticks aren't really appreciate by players, consider change it.
01:57:457 (1) - Blanket like this : http://puu.sh/36zU1.jpg
02:16:439 (2) - Here too for the slidertick

[Easy]
Well i'm not really good modding easy so i'll do what i can :
01:11:047 (1) - Stack this with (2) if you can
01:20:691 (1) - I find all this part to the spinner confusing for beginner, try to remember that it can be the first map played by a beginner.
01:46:887 (1) - You can do something else as a spinner here.
02:14:573 (3,1) - This isn't really pretty.
02:29:185 (2) - You should do this : http://puu.sh/36Ajw.jpg

Your map is very nice ! I star it so, good luck for after !

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-06-02T18:10:50+00:00

Changed the Kiai Time for all Diffs.

SPOILER

Arrival wrote:
Hi ! From the queue !

[Insane]
01:13:068 (2,3) - I feel this better for the flow : http://puu.sh/36z5s.jpg Fixed it another way
01:31:032 (4,5,6,7) - What you do here with the circles just after the slider just ruin toally the flow, the feeling of the player. So i think this would be better: http://puu.sh/36z9O.jpg Done!
01:32:431 (10) - Stack it with (8) Oh, that happened by accident xD
01:40:048 (5) - The second kiai time should be here ! Done!
01:45:177 (9,10,11) - This stream is awkward imo I don't think that it is.
02:02:760 (8) - This ? http://puu.sh/36zfb.jpg Naaah, that would be anti-flow with the next slider.
02:10:065 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I feel this fits better with the vocal : http://puu.sh/36zjL.jpg Done!
02:19:236 (5) - For the flow : http://puu.sh/36zmW.jpg Done!
02:30:739 (5,1) - This ? To fit with the little scream : http://puu.sh/36zps.jpg Done!

[Normal]
I won't repeat the timing of kiais anymore
You've got some spacing issues, check the aimod Done!
00:15:089 (3) - Clap here i suggest Done!
00:42:446 (1) - Place it better, more symmetrical, 00:44:001 (4) - Here too Done!
01:38:493 (3) - Blanket better here : http://puu.sh/36zPc.jpg Tried it
01:45:644 (1) - It's not really a problem but loud sliderticks aren't really appreciate by players, consider change it. Let's see what I can do.
01:57:457 (1) - Blanket like this : http://puu.sh/36zU1.jpg Done!
02:16:439 (2) - Here too for the slidertick Done!

Your map is very nice ! I star it so, good luck for after !

Thanks for the mod and the star! :3

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2013-06-03T20:43:49+00:00

It was a real fun to mod your map, Tenshichan. I love it! I hope it gets ranked! Still good luck!

Here the chatlog:

SPOILER

22:10 Sey: 00:34:364 (1) - Ich sehe keinen Sinn, hier einen NC zu machen, kannst du mir das erklären?
22:11 Tenshichan: NC in CTB sind ja eher nur dazu da, damit der Catcher nicht überfüllt wird, und da hab ich versucht die Combo möglichst klein zu halten, aber im Grunde hast du REcht das sieht im Editor nicht so ästhetisch aus
22:12 Sey: Naja okay, ist kein Zwang.
22:12 Tenshichan: Hab die NC mal auf den Slider davor gesetzt
22:12 Sey: Ok. Gut.
22:12 Sey: Ok also erst mal allgemein: Die erste Minute ist echt super! Gefällt mir.
22:12 Tenshichan: Danke!

22:14 Sey: 00:59:545 (1) - bis 01:00:089 (8) - Ich würde den Stream anders machen. Ich finde, dass die Circle Distance nicht gelungen ist und mir würde es besser gefallen, wenn du sie kleiner machst, um das Ganze auch besser mit 01:01:721 (3) - zu verbinden.
22:15 Sey: Ich zeig dir mal, was ich gemacht habe: http://puu.sh/37Cxr.jpg Das lässt sich einfach flüssiger spielen, ist aber nur ein allgemeiner und sehr persönlicher Tipp.
22:16 Sey: Oh nicht (3), ich meinte 01:00:167 (1) -
22:16 Tenshichan: Ich probiers mal eben
22:17 Sey: Bei Circle Distance 0,8 im Stream lief es sehr gut, ich musste auch nicht ständig mitten im Stream nur 1 Millisekündchen dashen.
22:17 Tenshichan: Was mich an dem Stream so wie er jetzt ist stört ist das er zu weit nach rechts geht und deswegen manchmal ein random miss entsteht also finde ich es gut das du da nen Vorschlag hast
22:18 Sey: Ok, gut dass es dir gefällt! Nächster Punkt: 01:24:460 -
22:20 Sey: Ich würde die Slider 3 und 4 so setzen wie 1 und 2 oder vielleicht sogar etwas mehr auseinander, um einen kleinen HyperDash zu schaffen, weil er hier ganz gut passt. So wie hier: http://puu.sh/37D5x.jpg
22:22 Sey: Lässt sich wirklich sehr gut spielen und passt gut zu den Vocals, wenn du mich fragst.
22:22 Tenshichan: Ok finde ich gut, hab die 2 Slider aber noch etwas steiler gemacht dann sieht das allgemein etwas besser aus
22:22 Sey: Ok super. Moment.
22:23 Sey: 01:59:789 (1) - bis 02:00:566 (5)
22:23 Sey: Also, ich muss ganz ehrlich gestehen, dass mir dieses "Ding" überhaupt nicht gefällt... Es lässt sich einfach nicht schön spielen. Bitte überdenke das nochmal.
22:24 Sey: Ich würde fast eher 2 Slider daraus machen anstelle der 4 Circles...
22:24 Sey: Oder wie viele Circles auch immer^^"
22:25 Tenshichan: Mir gefällt die Stelle eigentlich, hatte da vorher was anderes gehabt. Ich lasse mir da mal was einfallen, eventuell versuche ich es mal andersrum, also das die circle nicht nach innen gehen sondern nach aussen. Warte, das probier ich einfach mal
22:26 Sey: Ok aber ich würde es irgendwie ändern, es wirkt beinahe so, als wolltest du den Player an dieser Stelle trollen orz
22:27 Sey: Und hör mal bei 25% Playback, ich finde, es klingt komisch, könnte aber auch an den Hitsounds liegen. Ich würde die Stelle einfach nochmal allgemein checken.
22:27 Tenshichan: hmm also vom sound her merk ich da nichts ungewöhnliches
22:28 Sey: Ok ne ist in Ordnung. Wenn dir die Stelle gefällt lass es so, um Gottes Willen ^^ Es ist halt einfach nicht mein Mapping Style
22:28 Tenshichan: Habs jetzt übrigens mal so wie oben beschrieben gemacht, und es ist definitiv besser. Jetzt muss man da nicht mal mehr dashen
22:28 Sey: Ok, ja Dashes hat die Map genug haha
22:28 Sey: Ok ich hab noch eine Kleinigkeit.
22:29 Sey: 02:29:962 (1) - Warum GANZ AM ENDE?! D:
22:29 Sey: Von mir aus in einer Kiai oder sonst wo... Aber warum muss man den Spieler noch schön die Max Score mit sowas GANZ am Ende stehlen!? D:
22:30 Sey: Das nimmt übrigens auch richtig die Lust weg, die Map nochmal spielen zu wollen. Ich wollte es nur gesagt haben.
22:30 Tenshichan: Die diff haben ja schon ein Paar getestet und es ist mir aufgefallen das einige dort wirklich missen. Ich selbst hatte nie so wirklich probleme damit, vllt liegts aber auch daran das ich le mapper bin
22:30 Tenshichan: Ich mach den Slider nicht so breit
22:30 Sey: Es gibt Spieler, die mögen es am Ende nochmal so schwer, aber ich finde diesen Slider schrecklich ^^"
22:30 Sey: Zumindest am Ende
22:30 Tenshichan: Also das man da nicht so einfach missen kann
22:31 Sey: Ok

Auf die Schnelle hab ich nichts weiter gefunden, lass mich nochmal einmal schnell drüberschauen!
22:31 Tenshichan: Vielleicht lass ich mir mit der Zeit auch noch was besseres da einfallen als einfach ein Slider
22:32 Tenshichan: Um ehrlich zu sein sind mir beim mappen am Ende an der Stelle die Ideen ausgegangen und dachte mir "nen slider tuts doch auch" xD
22:32 Sey: Ah eine Sache noch. Da bin ich mir aber selbst unsicher: Wäre es nicht schöner, wenn 00:10:426 (1) - und 00:10:892 (2) - horicontically flipped sind an der y-Achse?
22:33 Sey: Du kannst auch einen Stream mit Mini jumps machen, aber vorsicht, dass du es nicht NOCH SCHWERER machst als diesen Slider.
22:34 Tenshichan: hmm aber wenn ich beide slider an der y Achse spiegele dann ändert sich doch nichts an dem jump oder habe ich was falsch verstanden
22:35 Sey: Hm naja wenn die beiden zu dicht sind, würde der HDash verschwinden, du müsstest sie dann weiter distanzieren.
22:35 Sey: Ich finds nur schöner, weil die beiden Slider unterschiedliche Steigungen haben und es so einfach etwas seltsam ist. Ich war etwas verwirrt, als plötzlich der nächste Slider im Vergleich zum ersten etwas unsymmetrisch war.
22:38 Tenshichan: Ich probiere grad nen bisschen rum wie das schöner aussehen könnte
22:38 Sey: Ist deine Entscheidung, das ist so das grundlegendste, was ich gefunden habe, um deine Map etwas ästhetischer zu machen.
22:38 Sey: Aber alles in Allem, super! Ich will diese Map ranked sehen, und zwar so bald wie möglich! :3
22:38 Sey: Ok wie kann ich jetzt den Chat speichern? xD
22:38 Tenshichan: Der Sinn dabei ist nicht alles immer links > rechts > lincks > rechts zu mappen bei diesen Stellen^^
22:39 Sey: Ja na klar, ich fands dort aber ganz "hübsch"...
22:39 Tenshichan: Ich lass mir evtl was einfallen wenn mich nicht vorher noch wer anders auf eine Idee bringt

22:39 Tenshichan: Und danke für dein Lob! :3
22:39 Sey: :3

Tenshichan

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Tenshichan 2013-06-03T20:48:08+00:00

Thank you Sey :3

http://puu.sh/37FY5.osu

luxoDeh

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luxoDeh 2013-06-04T21:26:58+00:00

Hi! M4M from my queue

EASY

00:32:809 (1,2) - make the first slider follow the curve of the second one, like in this way:

SPOILER

01:09:182 (2) - maybe move it to x:300 y:216 so you can make a triangle with 01:06:695 (2,3,1) -
01:21:005 (2,2) - stack them perfectly
01:23:518 (2,2) - ^
01:58:390 (3) - maybe move it a bit up to make a light curve with all these notes

NORMAL

01:38:493 (3) - move the second point of this slider one grid right so it will be alligned with the previous slider
01:46:576 (2,3) - I know you did this also for symmetry but I think here sounds better something like this

SPOILER

SAKUYA'S HARD

00:14:312 (3,5) - stack them perfectly
01:11:047 (3,1,2,3) - maybe the rithm is better in this way?

SPOILER

01:26:973 (6) - this follow the vocal, but maybe it's better to end it at 01:27:288 - ?

INSANE

nothing here, seems good.

well, there's not too much to say, the map is good and the song too, hope to see this ranked soon

good luck!

Drafura

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Drafura 2013-06-05T14:25:13+00:00

[Tenshichan's Rain]
I'll personally use slider tick rate 1, sounds better on many parts of the song imho. (Totally up to your decision)

00:27:835 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part lack increasive flow, try something like that, or use 1/2 mouvements at this part : 00:29:079 (1,2,3,4) - instead of 1/1 mouvements. (The hitsounds calls for something increasing in term of difficulty).
00:41:825 (5,6) - This jump is kinda surprising tbh. Curving them more will help the player to predict the jump without modifying the difficulty. Something like this.
01:00:167 (1) - Too far of the stream. It breaks the visual of the "line". Fits better well placed in the end of the stream OR you can make a curve with the whole stream and have different h-spacing between each objects.
01:38:493 (5) - Move it to the left of the following object. Better consistency in the pattern.
01:42:846 (2,3) - This jump doesn't fit at all imho. Maybe make it easier OR rethink the pattern (01:42:535 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ) to get a better consistency with the previous pattern.
01:51:395 (5,1) - This one is surprising too but I think it fits. (Nothing to do here, just wanted to mention it)
01:53:882 (2,3) - ^

Nice map, I hope the mod was usefull. Good luck for rankings.

Haya

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Haya 2013-06-05T15:52:03+00:00

Thanks for the mod, luxoDEH and Drafura! :3

SPOILER

luxoDeh wrote:
Hi! M4M from my queue

NORMAL

01:38:493 (3) - move the second point of this slider one grid right so it will be alligned with the previous slider Done!
01:46:576 (2,3) - I know you did this also for symmetry but I think here sounds better something like this [img]http://i43.tinypic.com/2zrdquw.png[/img Hmm... Gonna leave it like this!

well, there's not too much to say, the map is good and the song too, hope to see this ranked soon good luck!

Tenshichan

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Tenshichan 2013-06-06T18:23:05+00:00

Drafura wrote:
[Tenshichan's Rain]
I'll personally use slider tick rate 1, sounds better on many parts of the song imho. (Totally up to your decision) Changed it to 1

00:27:835 (1,2,3,4) - I think this part lack increasive flow, try something like that, or use 1/2 mouvements at this part : 00:29:079 (1,2,3,4) - instead of 1/1 mouvements. (The hitsounds calls for something increasing in term of difficulty). You are right about the hitsounds so I chose to remap the entire pattern. I changed it to some small circlejumps instead of sliders now, which plays better.
00:41:825 (5,6) - This jump is kinda surprising tbh. Curving them more will help the player to predict the jump without modifying the difficulty. Something like this. I agree
01:00:167 (1) - Too far of the stream. It breaks the visual of the "line". Fits better well placed in the end of the stream OR you can make a curve with the whole stream and have different h-spacing between each objects. I didn't notice it while testing but you have a point there. I changed it to the former suggestion.
01:38:493 (5) - Move it to the left of the following object. Better consistency in the pattern. Yeah, I didn't even notice it, good point
01:42:846 (2,3) - This jump doesn't fit at all imho. Maybe make it easier OR rethink the pattern (01:42:535 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ) to get a better consistency with the previous pattern. I moved the 2 jumps closer, but for now I want to keep this pattern. I think rhythmical it fits because I'm only following the drums in this pattern. If I come up with something better I will change this though.
01:51:395 (5,1) - This one is surprising too but I think it fits. (Nothing to do here, just wanted to mention it)
01:53:882 (2,3) - ^ I like this kind of pattern^^

Nice map, I hope the mod was usefull. Good luck for rankings.

Thanks for your mod, Drafura!

http://puu.sh/39Kt2.osu

phaZ

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phaZ 2013-06-07T18:31:05+00:00

mod ^^

[bomber's Easy]
-00:00:478 (1,2) - erhöhe bitte das spacing ;w; du hast durchgehend den 3/4 rhythmus und du willst hier einfach du früh tappen... ich
_ meine es interessierrt noch überhaupt keinen easy player, dass das sapcing 0,8 sein soll. wissen die doch garnicht
-00:20:373 (1) - ich weiß nicht ob man den ändern muss, aber ich bin mir sehr sicher, dass hier häufig gemisst wird, weil der nicht synchopisch
_ ist. die stimme hat hier einen anderen rhythmus als bei den vorherigen stellen. man haut bei den anderen drei
_ genau dann auf den slider, wenn er "share", "care",.. singt. das hast du hier aber nicht. außerdem breaken slider
_ nicht so schnell wie circle.
-00:36:540 (2) - das sie total komisch aus, wenn die nicht parallel sind. schieb den ersten wegpunkt zu 448;276
01:19:130 (6,1) - iwie finde ich das spacing zu gering, weil man überhaupt keine ahnung hat worauf (zur musik) sich die (1) bezieht. und weil
_ es am naheligendsten ist, dass er sich auf den schlag bei bezieht, wird man sofort danach (nachdem man das
_ merkt/denkt) tappen. du kannst das spacing erhöhen, indem du das blanket verbesserst: 2. wegpunkt auf 44;224
_ schieben, 3. auf 44;128 bewegen
-01:19:130 (6) - verbessere trotzdem das blanket. 2. wegpunkt zu 52;232
-01:21:005 (2) - ende nicht richtig gestackt.... weil der endpunkt garnicht richtig auf dem head vom slider ist
-01:22:261 (2) - nicht richtig gestackt, 2. punkt muss zu 252;172, 3. zu 244;256
-01:23:518 (2) - das ende ist nicht richtig gestackt. verschieb den 2. wegpunkt auf 176;212
-01:45:644 (2) - distance mistake o:?
-02:16:439 (1) - ist nicht ganz korrekt: mach beatsnapdivisor auf 1/2, dann 2. wegpunkt auf 244;326 setzten und dann bsd wieder auf 1/4
-02:30:739 (1) - um einen tick verlängern und dann whistle oder clap drauf

DD

coole easy
[Normal]
-00:01:721 (2,3,4) - meh double stack sieht doch verwirrend aus. mach einfach n dreieck und dann einfachen stack!
-00:08:560 (2) - klingt merwürdig wenn der nicht bei 00:08:405 ist.
-> 00:08:871 - logischer weise hier n circle: 300;316 (dreieck :> )
-00:39:338 (3,4,1) - mag ich auch nicht :< (damit meine ich, dass das wahrscheinlich einige normalplayer bnicht mögen, hab aber nur ein tester)

so gute normal-diff *.* muss dich mal für ne GD fragen
[sakuya's Hard]
-
-00:00:944 (2,3,4) - dreieck :3 | triangle?
-00:07:628 (6,1,2) - dweieck | twiangle :3?
-00:09:182 (4,5) - this feels so weird ;c why isn't the offbeat on the circle? supersupersuper strange, change pls ;w;

auch gut

nice too
[Insane]
-00:07:628 (6,1,2) - nettes pattern, aber das passt doch garnet hier

-02:14:884 (3,4) - sollen die nicht parallel sein?

star o/

Last edited by phaZ 2013-06-07T23:27:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Haya

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Haya 2013-06-07T22:54:43+00:00

phaZ wrote:
mod ^^
[Normal]
-00:01:721 (2,3,4) - meh double stack sieht doch verwirrend aus. mach einfach n dreieck und dann einfachen stack! Done!
-00:08:560 (2) - klingt merwürdig wenn der nicht bei 00:08:405 ist. Hmm ich find dass es passt Klar ist es komisch wenn man auf den Guitar part hört, jedoch passt es vom Beat her.
-> 00:08:871 - logischer weise hier n circle: 300;316 (dreieck :> )Boom!
-00:39:338 (3,4,1) - mag ich auch nicht :< (damit meine ich, dass das wahrscheinlich einige normalplayer bnicht mögen, hab aber nur ein tester) Hmm, habs jetzt einfach mit nem Slider getauscht ._. Hoffe es passt!

so gute normal-diff *.* muss dich mal für ne GD fragen

[Insane]
-00:07:628 (6,1,2) - nettes pattern, aber das passt doch garnet hier Hast Recht! Fixed!
-02:14:884 (3,4) - sollen die nicht parallel sein? Sind sie doch Q_Q
star o/

Danke für den Mod und den Star! :3

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-06-07T23:02:13+00:00

Haya wrote:
Danke für den Mod und den Star! :3

ach, kd :3

Haya

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Haya 2013-06-07T23:06:02+00:00

Weder Mod noch Star fml orz

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-06-07T23:08:19+00:00

was hab ich gemacht das du mich dermassen befluchst? t-t

egal, bin ja heute so nett

Haya

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Haya 2013-06-07T23:09:46+00:00

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2013-06-07T23:11:23+00:00

phaZ

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phaZ 2013-06-07T23:35:41+00:00

-02:14:884 (3,4) - sollen die nicht parallel sein? Sind sie doch Q_Q

leg die slider mal übereinandr O:...
und btw mach mal aus dem gmpt-banner n link xD

Haya

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Haya 2013-06-08T13:03:02+00:00

phaZ wrote:
-02:14:884 (3,4) - sollen die nicht parallel sein? Sind sie doch Q_Q
leg die slider mal übereinandr O:...
und btw mach mal aus dem gmpt-banner n link xD

Ich versteh wirklich nicht was du meinst... http://puu.sh/3b0rS.jpg

bomber34

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bomber34 2013-06-11T20:48:15+00:00

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
[bomber's Easy]

00:10:892 (1) - this is too sudden after spinner, imo. My suggestion is to end the spinner at 00:09:182 - with low hitsounds, and then add a circle here 00:10:426 - I kind of see your point. However ending the spinner on 00:09:182 - is a bad idea imo because the spinner ends on nothing and not even low hitsounds will make it feel "reasonable" to end it there. I don't think that the hitcircle really starts to close after the spinner. The low AR let's it seem like it is to close, I admit that. However the spinner is long enough to get completed early and I think beginners are not that "bad" to notice that they can stop spinning and concentrate on the next circle when a big "CLEAR" appears when you finish the spinner.
00:32:809 (1,2) - they can interact better i'm not really good at this uhh tried to make it like your picture ... maybe give me next time the code if you cannot explain it good enough?
SPOILER
00:36:540 (2) - move it up a bit so the head of the previous slider blanketed ???
SPOILER
why the spoilerbox?
add whistle at 00:31:566 (2) - 's head, 00:32:809 (1) - 's tail, and remove whistle at 00:32:809 (1) - 's head to match hitsound pattern with 00:35:296 (1,2,1,2) - done
00:44:001 (1) - remove whistle at slider's end, and 00:44:623 (2) - add whistle at slider's head for consistence hitsound pattern with 00:41:514 (1,2) - done
00:47:731 (3) - nc mkay. doesn't matter that much. looks better without nc there but at one point someone will list the arguments for the nc and then it doesn't matter anyway
00:50:218 (1) - add finish ok
01:18:509 (5) - nc I don't see a specific reason
01:22:261 (2) - 323|134 so it'll stack properly with 01:21:005 (2) - , then 01:23:518 (2,2) - should adjust too tried my best to stack them all correctly .... (would have been really helpful if you added the other coordinates too .___.)
01:30:100 (1) - add finish at slider's head ok
01:46:887 (1) - prefer if you start the spinner here 01:46:887 (1) - then add a note 01:46:887 - and/or 01:47:198 - uhh I start the spinner where the spinner already starts add a note at the start of the spinner and or while the spinner is active??? no?
02:00:895 (1) - add finish ok
02:08:356 (6) - nc meh
02:09:599 (1) - remove nc meh
02:14:573 (3) - slider's head square point should be 301|221 if you want symmetry ok
SPOILER
02:14:573 (3,1) - i suggest you not to overlap and instead? I would prefer too not to overlap but i see no other way

----------------------

Arrival wrote:
[Easy]
Well i'm not really good modding easy so i'll do what i can :
01:11:047 (1) - Stack this with (2) if you can done
01:20:691 (1) - I find all this part to the spinner confusing for beginner, try to remember that it can be the first map played by a beginner. Maybe, however I think it is still in a reasonable way since we talk about sliders where it is not "that" easy to click them to soon. The sliders are easily visible imo.
01:46:887 (1) - You can do something else than a spinner here. maybe, if more people complain about it. I think it still fits enough to keep it.
02:14:573 (3,1) - This isn't really pretty. see previous mod. I don't know what to do. Will think about it.
02:29:185 (2) - You should do this : http://puu.sh/36Ajw.jpg I don't agree with the flow that you get with this

---------------------------------------------

luxoDeh wrote:
EASY

00:32:809 (1,2) - make the first slider follow the curve of the second one, like in this way: Like the first mod. Tried it to make it more like this ... (.osu code would be the most helpful, or all slider anchor coordinates
SPOILER
01:09:182 (2) - maybe move it to x:300 y:216 so you can make a triangle with 01:06:695 (2,3,1) - I like this. let's see what others think
01:21:005 (2,2) - stack them perfectly like first mod. I tried too .... hopefully it is better now
01:23:518 (2,2) - ^ ^
01:58:390 (3) - maybe move it a bit up to make a light curve with all these notes moved it a bit.

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phaZ wrote:
[bomber's Easy]
-00:00:478 (1,2) - erhöhe bitte das spacing ;w; du hast durchgehend den 3/4 rhythmus und du willst hier einfach du früh tappen... ich
_ meine es interessierrt noch überhaupt keinen easy player, dass das sapcing 0,8 sein soll. wissen die doch garnicht #YOLO inb4 23920392093029 modder sagen, dass ich doof bin NICHT 0,8x da zu haben
-00:20:373 (1) - ich weiß nicht ob man den ändern muss, aber ich bin mir sehr sicher, dass hier häufig gemisst wird, weil der nicht synchopisch
_ ist. die stimme hat hier einen anderen rhythmus als bei den vorherigen stellen. man haut bei den anderen drei
_ genau dann auf den slider, wenn er "share", "care",.. singt. das hast du hier aber nicht. außerdem breaken slider
_ nicht so schnell wie circle. Harte Nuss, ich weiß das selbst. Allerdings fängt dort der Teil der Musik an, der eindeutig (mMn) die "Pause" einläutet. Kein Platz großartig in der Ecke da übrig bleibt und der Rest von dem Ding Regelkonform ist.
-00:36:540 (2) - das sie total komisch aus, wenn die nicht parallel sind. schieb den ersten wegpunkt zu 448;276 ok Dann war das wohl in dem einen Mod gemeint xD das hier ist mir nie aufgellen.
01:19:130 (6,1) - iwie finde ich das spacing zu gering, weil man überhaupt keine ahnung hat worauf (zur musik) sich die (1) bezieht. und weil
_ es am naheligendsten ist, dass er sich auf den schlag bei bezieht, wird man sofort danach (nachdem man das
_ merkt/denkt) tappen. du kannst das spacing erhöhen, indem du das blanket verbesserst: 2. wegpunkt auf 44;224
_ schieben, 3. auf 44;128 bewegen okay, hätte sonst einfach alles von (1) bis zum Spinner verschoben. 0,9x vom (6) weg xD aber so wie du es schreibst lass ich es mal
-01:19:130 (6) - verbessere trotzdem das blanket. 2. wegpunkt zu 52;232 ... ääähh wenn ich ^ gemacht habe geht das hier nicht mehr ._.
-01:21:005 (2) - ende nicht richtig gestackt.... weil der endpunkt garnicht richtig auf dem head vom slider ist v
-01:22:261 (2) - nicht richtig gestackt, 2. punkt muss zu 252;172, 3. zu 244;256 v
-01:23:518 (2) - das ende ist nicht richtig gestackt. verschieb den 2. wegpunkt auf 176;212 ka. die anderen mods haben das bereits angesprochen, ich hoffe das ist jetzt schon gefixt
-01:45:644 (2) - distance mistake o:? ... das hat niemand gesehen, okay?
-02:16:439 (1) - ist nicht ganz korrekt: mach beatsnapdivisor auf 1/2, dann 2. wegpunkt auf 244;326 setzten und dann bsd wieder auf 1/4
-02:30:739 (1) - um einen tick verlängern und dann whistle oder clap drauf DD ;D Da hat jemand ein feines Ohr

coole easy cooler mod

Thank you all :3

UPDATE:

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 89722
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 40118,106887,136439
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Rock, Scissors, Paper
TitleUnicode:Rock, Scissors, Paper
Artist:ONE OK ROCK
ArtistUnicode:ONE OK ROCK
Creator:Haya
Version:bomber's Easy
Source:
Tags:nicovideo mad amv Tenshichan Bomber34 LunarSakuya Sakuya Bomber
BeatmapID:243551
BeatmapSetID:82282

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

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ursa

1,302 posts

Joined April 2010

ursa 2013-06-13T12:58:02+00:00

Hi

For modding CTB diff

*sorry for a bit late

Tenshichan's Rain

00:12:291 (1,2,3,4) - kinda waste of jump of that part (especially for beginning part , so my recommendation :

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810425

01:12:446 (3) - not fit with the flow song , so : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810437

01:13:690 (1) - ^ same : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810456

01:42:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - it seems it's a timing jump part .for me it's timed well but it's quite hard so :

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810467

01:43:778 (1,2,3) - ^ same as above http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810456

For this mod below , it's up to you , because i think the adding circle will make the pattern more fit to play

00:50:218 - add circle & move the spinner into 00:50:296 (I think)

01:46:732 - add circle

01:52:172 - add circle

01:54:659 - add circle

01:57:146 - add circle

That's all i can help for mod , also it's a nice CTB diff

Tenshichan

601 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-06-18T14:19:16+00:00

ursa wrote:
Tenshichan's Rain

00:12:291 (1,2,3,4) - kinda waste of jump of that part (especially for beginning part , so my recommendation :

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810425 Well okay, but I dont like that there is no symmetry in your pattern so I made it symmetrical

01:12:446 (3) - not fit with the flow song , so : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810437 lol yeah, never really noticed it

01:13:690 (1) - ^ same : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810456 Fixed

01:42:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - it seems it's a timing jump part .for me it's timed well but it's quite hard so :

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810467

01:43:778 (1,2,3) - ^ same as above http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/810456 Okay, I moved them a little bit closer, that should help a bit, but I don't want to change the pattern because it is very challenging and I don't want to make it too easy in kiai time

For this mod below , it's up to you , because i think the adding circle will make the pattern more fit to play

00:50:218 - add circle & move the spinner into 00:50:296 (I think) This is perfectly fine because the spinner starts on the syllable and ends with it

01:46:732 - add circle okay

01:52:172 - add circle There is no drums at this part and a circle would not fit in the pattern too

01:54:659 - add circle Same as above

01:57:146 - add circle Again, there is nothing to follow here, so a circle doesn't fit

That's all i can help for mod , also it's a nice CTB diff Thank you!! :3

Thanks for your mod ursa! :3
http://puu.sh/3iwHP.osu

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-06-19T03:42:58+00:00

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
hi Sakuya o/ hihi

00:12:602 (6,1) - adjust the overlap more? Fixed
SPOILER
00:14:312 (3,5) - stack them properly Fixed
01:27:445 (1) - prefer if you start this spinner here 01:27:288 - i wanted to start this at the cresendo of the vocals
02:20:480 (6) - only suggestion, i think this rhythm fits the song more hm i kinda like this transition =v=
SPOILER
02:21:724 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/350pF.jpg ? Fixed
nice diff :3

Arrival wrote:
[Hard]
01:40:048 (6) - For the kiai time. Same at the 02:10:843 (6)
01:42:224 (3) - Here you should just place a circle on the white tick. The red tick fits with nothing fine orz
02:06:957 (3,4) - These two sliders should be the same, like this : http://puu.sh/36zGf.jpg Fixed
02:21:724 (2) - Make a better blanket : http://puu.sh/36zHP.jpg Fixed
Nice diff here

luxoDeh wrote:
SAKUYA'S HARD

00:14:312 (3,5) - stack them perfectly Fixed
01:11:047 (3,1,2,3) - maybe the rithm is better in this way? nice but i wish to follow the vocals here
SPOILER
01:26:973 (6) - this follow the vocal, but maybe it's better to end it at 01:27:288 - ? remapped =v=

phaZ wrote:
[sakuya's Hard]
-
-00:00:944 (2,3,4) - dreieck :3 | triangle? Fixed?
-00:07:628 (6,1,2) - dweieck | twiangle :3? ^
-00:09:182 (4,5) - this feels so weird ;c why isn't the offbeat on the circle? supersupersuper strange, change pls ;w; hm any ideas maybe? but i kept it for now, it's playable imo

auch gut nice too

Thanks everyone ~

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Tags:nicovideo mad amv Tenshichan Bomber34 LunarSakuya Sakuya Bomber
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bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-06-19T19:42:28+00:00

RAIN

00:10:892 (2,3) - Warum kein Hyperdash? Symmetrie ist es nicht aber bei 00:12:913 (1,2,3,4) - | 00:15:400 (1,2,3,4) - | 00:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - kommt bei jedem Sliderende ein Hyperdash und diese passen besonders gut durch das Hitsounding. Entweder (2) weiter weg oder (3) weiter weg. Man könnte noch darauf eingehen das es vom flow nich konstant auf spiegelung setzt wie die nächsten (1,2,3,4) sliderjumps aber der passt immer noch ^^
00:15:400 (1,2) - Die sind doof konvertiert find ich. (1) ist nur n grader Droplet fall, während (2) so scheiße gebogen is (Also nur im Vergleich dazu). Vllt beide etwas weiter dehnen, strecken ... ka. xD oder beide wirklich nur gradlinig verlaufen lassen. Hauptsache beide wären gleich ^^
00:16:332 (3,4) - sliderenden miteinander stacken? Man möchte schon irgendwie mehr dashen... zumindest fühlt es sich besser an wenn die weiter weg voneinander wären. Ich sehe ja das (3) und (4) anfang mit den anfängen von (1) und (2) gestacked sind. Aber vllt. kannste was an der sliderform oder so ändern?
00:28:146 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nich sicher aber ich glaube das zumindest die äußersten Sprünge 00:28:301 (3,4,5,6) - bzw. nur 4,5 zu heftig sind für n dash alleine ... ka hätte es um einen grid 3 nach innen erleichtert (also 4 und 5)
00:30:633 (2,3) - und 00:32:809 (1,2) - Is nur mein persönlicher Geschmack aber ich würde es besser finden wenn man nich einfach nur unter dem Slider stehen muss um den zu catchen sondern langsam mit gehen muss. Muss ja nich viel sein aber ne kleine mindestbewegung wäre töfte ^^
00:34:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - bin kein Freund von diesen tonlosen sliderenden. 20% klingt ganz akzeptabel für mich und is auch noch leise genug, sodass es den komischen rhytmus nich kaputt macht. Man könnte immer noch argumentieren das es komplett auf vocal geht xD da passt der leise ton noch.
00:46:643 (2) - platzier den mal auf X: 80 oder X: 88 ... dieser Dash von (2) zu (1) ist zu lasch find ich. Hyperdash passt aber nich und erst recht nich mit (1,2) ... aber auch die kleine distance erweiterung die du damit auf (1,2) legst is ganz nett mit X:80 / 88
01:07:006 (1,2,3) - komischer Rhytmus. Wenn der nach dem Vocal geht müsste (1) auf 01:07:161 - enden und (2) auf 01:07:239 - anfangen. Allerdings is 01:07:317 - dann ohne was wo aber da der Beat ist >w<
01:10:737 (3,4,1) - Bitte einen dashsprung von (3) zu (4) wie es bei 01:10:115 (1,2,3) - der Fall ist. Is besser für den Flow finde ich.
01:13:690 (1,2) - entweder (2) direkt unter (1) oder etwas weiter weg. Es is leicht fangbar aber der flow is einfach ein wenig zu schwach ausgeprägt finde ich.
01:20:377 (2,3) - Hyperdash. Auf (3) ertönt ein Finish welcher immer gut kommt wenn ein HDash von ihm weg führt. Da es aber ein Slider ist kann kein HDash wegführen. Daher zwischen (2,3) HDash das passt auch eig. noch. Sollte sich so anfühlen wie 01:23:047 (4,1) -
01:21:947 (3) - hat ebenfalls dieses Finish ding
01:28:073 - Ich vermisse hier einen Beat ...vllt auf X: 288 platzieren? Ist recht langsam dann von (3,4,1) und passt zu dem folgenden Rest finde ich
01:29:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bei dem Stream vllt den Abstand um 1 grid4 vergrößern? Der Effekt käme besser als er im Moment schon is.
01:40:048 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - großteile dieses Patterns sind gut allerdings passt nicht alles auf die Stimme was schade ist (vom Flow her) ... mich stört eigentlich nur 01:40:048 (1) - und 01:42:224 (4) - Ich finde diese beiden sollte in die andere Richtung zeigen. Ka ob man jetzt aber einfach nur Strg+g benutzt oder Strg+h und die slider Anfänge miteinander stackt (vom X Wert nur mein ich ...
01:48:752 (1,2,1,2,3) - Mach den Stream bitte leise. Im Lied selbst gibt es nix was einen Stream großartig andeutet. Er passt aber, nur ist er zu laut finde ich
02:03:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Finde es lustig das mich von den 6 Triplets nur die 1. 4 stören. Vllt liegt es einfach nur an deren anordnung. Erst dachte ich es alle klingen furchtbar aber nach vielen tests find ich 02:04:625 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - gut ... Frag mich nich wieso xD
02:17:216 - Note bitte
02:17:371 (2,3) - ab dem Sliderende von (2) kommt dieser schrei ... vokal wo man eigentlich (zumindest im standard osu!) einen Slider erwarten würde... probier mal ein Hyperdash
02:22:034 (2) - ein bisschen weiter nach links
02:24:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - vllt dasselbe pattern hier wie bei 02:22:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - ?

Lustige CtB ^^ ich sehe schon warum ich kaum CtBs modde xD 1 Stunde und 20 Minuten für eine einzige diff lol

Tenshichan

601 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-06-22T21:05:38+00:00

bomber34 wrote:
RAIN
00:10:892 (2,3) - Warum kein Hyperdash? Symmetrie ist es nicht aber bei 00:12:913 (1,2,3,4) - | 00:15:400 (1,2,3,4) - | 00:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - kommt bei jedem Sliderende ein Hyperdash und diese passen besonders gut durch das Hitsounding. Entweder (2) weiter weg oder (3) weiter weg. Man könnte noch darauf eingehen das es vom flow nich konstant auf spiegelung setzt wie die nächsten (1,2,3,4) sliderjumps aber der passt immer noch ^^ Mir haben diese Slider von Anfang an nicht gefallen, aber der Ziel hierbei war nicht die ganze Zeit auf Symmetrie zu setzen. Ich habs jetzt verbessert und es zu einem symmetrischen pattern gemacht, was sich jedoch trotzdem von den anderen unterscheidet.
00:15:400 (1,2) - Die sind doof konvertiert find ich. (1) ist nur n grader Droplet fall, während (2) so scheiße gebogen is (Also nur im Vergleich dazu). Vllt beide etwas weiter dehnen, strecken ... ka. xD oder beide wirklich nur gradlinig verlaufen lassen. Hauptsache beide wären gleich ^^ Ich weiss auch nicht warum das so ist xD Ist mir nicht mal aufgefallen xD Ich hab die jetzt mal rund gemacht, aber das änderts auch nur minimal. Naja, das gameplay stört das nicht so von daher denke ich lass ich das jetzt so.
00:16:332 (3,4) - sliderenden miteinander stacken? Man möchte schon irgendwie mehr dashen... zumindest fühlt es sich besser an wenn die weiter weg voneinander wären. Ich sehe ja das (3) und (4) anfang mit den anfängen von (1) und (2) gestacked sind. Aber vllt. kannste was an der sliderform oder so ändern? Ich denke das wäre nur ein Problem an der Stelle wenn diese sich wiederholen würden, aber da (3) schon keinen Hyperdash mehr hat denke ich geht das so in Ordnung.
00:28:146 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nich sicher aber ich glaube das zumindest die äußersten Sprünge 00:28:301 (3,4,5,6) - bzw. nur 4,5 zu heftig sind für n dash alleine ... ka hätte es um einen grid 3 nach innen erleichtert (also 4 und 5) Drafura hat angemerkt das es an der Stelle gut wäre wenn sich die Schwierigkeit etwas erhöht da die Hitsounds stärker werden. Ich hab die nach etwas rumprobieren schon weiter nach innen gepackt, und ich fange die eigentlich ganz gut.
00:30:633 (2,3) - und 00:32:809 (1,2) - Is nur mein persönlicher Geschmack aber ich würde es besser finden wenn man nich einfach nur unter dem Slider stehen muss um den zu catchen sondern langsam mit gehen muss. Muss ja nich viel sein aber ne kleine mindestbewegung wäre töfte ^^ hmm warum nicht, done.
00:34:053 (1,2,3,4,5) - bin kein Freund von diesen tonlosen sliderenden. 20% klingt ganz akzeptabel für mich und is auch noch leise genug, sodass es den komischen rhytmus nich kaputt macht. Man könnte immer noch argumentieren das es komplett auf vocal geht xD da passt der leise ton noch. Habs mal geändert. War mir da aber total unsicher eventuell ändere ich es irgendwann wieder zurück, wenn sich da noch irgendein Unterschied auftut.
00:46:643 (2) - platzier den mal auf X: 80 oder X: 88 ... dieser Dash von (2) zu (1) ist zu lasch find ich. Hyperdash passt aber nich und erst recht nich mit (1,2) ... aber auch die kleine distance erweiterung die du damit auf (1,2) legst is ganz nett mit X:80 / 88 Habs auf 88 gesetzt, fand den Jump zwar bisher nicht so wichtig aber im Prinzip hast du da Recht, das spielt sich so etwas besser.
01:07:006 (1,2,3) - komischer Rhytmus. Wenn der nach dem Vocal geht müsste (1) auf 01:07:161 - enden und (2) auf 01:07:239 - anfangen. Allerdings is 01:07:317 - dann ohne was wo aber da der Beat ist >w< Habs jetzt komplett anders gemappt und es sollte jetzt besser passen.
01:10:737 (3,4,1) - Bitte einen dashsprung von (3) zu (4) wie es bei 01:10:115 (1,2,3) - der Fall ist. Is besser für den Flow finde ich. Dann würde es wiederum nicht ins nächste Pattern reinpassen, und ins vorherige passt es auch nicht wirklich und ich wüsste sonst nicht wo ich sie hinpacken soll xD
01:13:690 (1,2) - entweder (2) direkt unter (1) oder etwas weiter weg. Es is leicht fangbar aber der flow is einfach ein wenig zu schwach ausgeprägt finde ich. Habs nu anders gemappt, was mir auch besser gefällt.
01:20:377 (2,3) - Hyperdash. Auf (3) ertönt ein Finish welcher immer gut kommt wenn ein HDash von ihm weg führt. Da es aber ein Slider ist kann kein HDash wegführen. Daher zwischen (2,3) HDash das passt auch eig. noch. Sollte sich so anfühlen wie 01:23:047 (4,1) -
01:21:947 (3) - hat ebenfalls dieses Finish ding Das kriegt keinen Hyperdash weil hier die Schwierigkeit darin besteht die Slider ohne Hyperdash zu bekommen (ein Hyperdash würde das Pattern dann relativ nutzlos machen).
01:28:073 - Ich vermisse hier einen Beat ...vllt auf X: 288 platzieren? Ist recht langsam dann von (3,4,1) und passt zu dem folgenden Rest finde ich Der fehlt hier weil ich dort nach den drums mappe und da keine sind.
01:29:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - bei dem Stream vllt den Abstand um 1 grid4 vergrößern? Der Effekt käme besser als er im Moment schon is.Wären die Jumps davor nicht da hätte ich zugestimmt, aber ich will das epische pattern nach dem stream nicht verändern, das heisst der stream würde sich somit nach links verlängern, und dann wäre der stream anfang vor der letzten frucht der jumps und das würde meiner Meinung nach den flow an der stelle zerstören wenn man nach dem letzten jumps noch nen Schritt nach links machen muss.
01:40:048 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - großteile dieses Patterns sind gut allerdings passt nicht alles auf die Stimme was schade ist (vom Flow her) ... mich stört eigentlich nur 01:40:048 (1) - und 01:42:224 (4) - Ich finde diese beiden sollte in die andere Richtung zeigen. Ka ob man jetzt aber einfach nur Strg+g benutzt oder Strg+h und die slider Anfänge miteinander stackt (vom X Wert nur mein ich ... Von den Lyrics her wäre das richtig. Denn der erste Slider (Gemu) und der zweite Slider (sore) bedecken jeweils 2 Silben und die anderen nur einen. Da aber die zweite Silbe jeweils verschluckt wird und kaum hörbar ist kann man das denke ich so lassen. Das Ziel von dieser Stelle ist es den Spieler kontinuierlich ohne Hyperdash dashen zu lassen, und ich denke da es mitten in der Kiai Time ist passt es von der Schwierigkeit und von Flow auch. Das Pattern ist auch einzigartig in der Diff da man sonst nirgendwo so ähnlich dashen muss, was nicht der Fall wäre wenn man die Slider z.B. spiegeln würde. Ich hoffe ich habe dich hier richtig verstanden, wenn nicht dann brüll mich einfach in osu! an.^^
01:48:752 (1,2,1,2,3) - Mach den Stream bitte leise. Im Lied selbst gibt es nix was einen Stream großartig andeutet. Er passt aber, nur ist er zu laut finde ich Gut hingehört. Die drums haben an der Stelle deutlich ne Nebenrolle. => habs auf 65% geändert hoffe das reicht.
02:03:382 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Finde es lustig das mich von den 6 Triplets nur die 1. 4 stören. Vllt liegt es einfach nur an deren anordnung. Erst dachte ich es alle klingen furchtbar aber nach vielen tests find ich 02:04:625 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - gut ... Frag mich nich wieso xD Darüber haben wir ja schon kurz gesprochen^^. Warum die Schrift orange ist? Nun ich hab selber noch Änderungen dran vorgenommen. Ich habe jeweils die äusserste Frucht der ersten 4 1 grid3 weiter zu den inneren geschoben, weil es sich so einfach besser spielen lässt. So ein Pattern wie das von Final Test in Touhou bleibt wohl für immer einzigartig in CTB *seufz*
02:17:216 - Note bitte Stimmt die passt gut.
02:17:371 (2,3) - ab dem Sliderende von (2) kommt dieser schrei ... vokal wo man eigentlich (zumindest im standard osu!) einen Slider erwarten würde... probier mal ein Hyperdash Das merkt man nicht so deutlich, aber ich habe an der Stelle nicht nach der Stimme gemappt sondern nach dem Beat.
02:22:034 (2) - ein bisschen weiter nach links Hab die Stelle etwas verändert da ich es wie es jetzt war bisschen zu einfach fand.
02:24:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - vllt dasselbe pattern hier wie bei 02:22:812 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? Ob ich da jetzt einen Slider setze oder die beiden Noten behalte macht eigentlich keinen Unterschied, deswegen lasse ich es so.

Lustige CtB ^^ ich sehe schon warum ich kaum CtBs modde xD 1 Stunde und 20 Minuten für eine einzige diff lol

Danke für den Mod bomber :3
http://puu.sh/3lRB0.osu

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-06-24T22:09:09+00:00

MAN THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE SOME BADASS SONG WITH DEEP EDGY ANIME AND THEY BE GETTIN LIKE THE KAWAIIEST ANIME LOL

Overall:
02:21:102 - From this onward, why is this quieter? The feel of the song doesn't change.

Insane:
00:34:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The spacing here is really a lot, even though this part should be kind of softer. Like what is even being followed here?
01:15:711 (7,8,9) - The rest of this combo is all spaced normally, and nothing in the music really changes, so why is there a jump here?
01:17:110 (4) - Maybe make this part of the jumps too? It might be awkward to just have it so close to (3) relative to the previous notes

Good insane diff :3. Just make sure that your softer parts are as fitting as your more intense parts are.

Hard:
Reminds me of a hard I'd make, lol

Normal:
The diff is SUPER 1/1y. Like I know the vocals are like that, but try finding more interesting things to do than having a note on every white tick. Players want to play kawaii maps, not be a metronome.
00:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - I know patterns are pretty but you already established the dotted quarter note feel of the piece, and having it turn into 1/1 just makes it feel weird

Easy:
Is there any reason the video isn't appearing on this diff? ouo
00:40:270 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Maybe add some longer sliders instead of mapping every single syllable?
01:00:167 (1) - From here onward, now it's not mapping enough vocal. Being a snare drum is cool and all but it might be more fun to play the actual leading vocal line, and maybe adding notes for drum supplement.
02:17:527 (2) - ! ! ! This looks REALLY bad. Especially for easy players, they're all gonna not be able to see it.

I like it. Sorry it took forever to get to, lol

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-06-25T13:22:45+00:00

CDFA wrote:
Easy:
Is there any reason the video isn't appearing on this diff? ouo Illuminati
00:40:270 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Maybe add some longer sliders instead of mapping every single syllable? Was not my idea. I had to push the Star rating up, because apparently the spread would be to bad if i had a lower/easier diff. My original version had 1 star exactly lol
01:00:167 (1) - From here onward, now it's not mapping enough vocal. Being a snare drum is cool and all but it might be more fun to play the actual leading vocal line, and maybe adding notes for drum supplement. Problem with vocal is that it is not that suitable for Easy as a diff because he talks so fast. But his vocal does not fit for a lot of sliders either. I replaced some notes with sliders, which give you some form of vocal "feedback"
02:17:527 (2) - ! ! ! This looks REALLY bad. Especially for easy players, they're all gonna not be able to see it. LAWL. No idea how this happened. It is not supposed to be like this. I am totally innocent. Syntax ERROR. LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
~~even though the real way doesn't look better ....~~

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112,132,49597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,50218,12,4,52705,0:0:0:0:
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300,216,71047,5,8,0:0:0:0:
191,148,71669,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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324,314,73534,1,8,0:0:0:0:
414,223,74156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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164,176,76022,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,264,76643,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,176,77265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,92,77887,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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136,39,80691,5,4,0:0:0:0:
200,39,81005,2,0,P|276:75|324:135,1,160
348,191,81947,5,4,0:0:0:0:
323,133,82261,2,0,P|247:185|239:249,1,160
252,307,83204,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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92,291,84460,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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92,4,85717,5,4,0:0:0:0:
93,71,86031,2,0,P|185:163|89:299,1,320
256,192,87602,12,0,89487,0:0:0:0:
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156,216,91032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,280,91343,2,0,P|256:308|372:280,1,240,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,236,92587,5,2,0:2:0:0:
448,180,92897,2,0,B|448:120|448:120|448:100|448:52|408:28|384:28|384:28|384:28|316:28,2,240,0|2|0,0:0|0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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404,288,95384,2,0,P|320:324|240:316,1,160
188,316,96317,2,0,P|88:292|116:180,1,240,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,144,97561,5,2,0:2:0:0:
220,112,97872,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,80,98182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,180,98804,5,2,0:2:0:0:
304,216,99115,1,2,0:2:0:0:
252,252,99426,1,2,0:2:0:0:
196,284,99737,1,2,0:2:0:0:
144,324,100048,6,0,P|260:360|372:324,2,240
132,260,102224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,195,102535,2,0,P|260:159|372:195,2,240
256,260,105022,5,2,0:0:0:0:
298,139,105644,2,2,P|255:52|213:139,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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124,124,118856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,256,122138,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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256,256,123692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,320,124003,6,0,P|396:232|368:96,1,320,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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256,104,126179,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,126490,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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344,284,128045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,240,128356,2,0,P|404:160|348:100,1,160,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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28,172,130843,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-06-25T17:18:31+00:00

SPOILER

CDFA wrote:
MAN THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE SOME BADASS SONG WITH DEEP EDGY ANIME AND THEY BE GETTIN LIKE THE KAWAIIEST ANIME LOL
I KNOW BUT IT WAS THE ONLY SHITT [MAD] I FOUND THERE =____=

Overall:
02:21:102 - From this onward, why is this quieter? The feel of the song doesn't change. Right.

Insane:
00:34:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The spacing here is really a lot, even though this part should be kind of softer. Like what is even being followed here? That was a desperate try to increase the Star rating lol. It became 4,90 due to a bug and so I thought that I had to increase it ><
01:15:711 (7,8,9) - The rest of this combo is all spaced normally, and nothing in the music really changes, so why is there a jump here? Done!
01:17:110 (4) - Maybe make this part of the jumps too? It might be awkward to just have it so close to (3) relative to the previous notes Hmm Naaah, a small Anti Jump is always good for tha hand

Good insane diff :3. Just make sure that your softer parts are as fitting as your more intense parts are.

Normal:
The diff is SUPER 1/1y. Like I know the vocals are like that, but try finding more interesting things to do than having a note on every white tick. Players want to play kawaii maps, not be a metronome. I know, but there is not really another way to map a song like this ><
00:17:887 (1,2,3,4) - I know patterns are pretty but you already established the dotted quarter note feel of the piece, and having it turn into 1/1 just makes it feel weird Done!

I like it. Sorry it took forever to get to, lol

Thanks for the mod! :3

Smoothie

569 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2013-06-26T15:30:55+00:00

Heya~
From my modding queue.

[Insane]
00:00:788 (2) - Wie wäre es, wenn du den Whistle am Slider-start entfernst? Hört sich besser an meiner meinung.
00:03:742 (4) - Auch hier den whistle weg machen?
00:05:141 (5) - ^
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 - Wie wäre es mit einem kurzen Kiai-Flash? :3
01:19:908 (9) - Mh, Setz die Note auf x:352 y:184. Hat einen besseren Flow.
01:31:654 (7) - Strg+G und platziere diese Note 01:31:498 (6) auf den Slider-start. Hat 'nen besseren Flow~
02:04:936 (6) - Ugh... Strg+G diesen Slider bitte. So wie er jetzt ist, killt er den Flow. :c

[Sakuya's Hard]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 - A Kiai-Flash here would be nice~
01:10:892 - How about adding a note here?
01:26:267 (3,4,5,6) - That plays a bit odd imo. How about something like that?

[Normal]
00:04:830 (4,1,2) - Die Bankets sind ein wenig "uneben"

SPOILER

00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 Wie schon oben erwähnt. Ein Kiai-Flash hier?
00:17:887 (4) - Ich denke du hast die Claps bei diesem Slider vergessen.
00:19:130 (1) - NC
00:42:446 (1) - x:204 y:74?
00:43:379 (2) - Wenn du den eben erwähnten Slider beweget hast, bewege diese Note nach x:256 y:144
00:43:690 (3) - x:256 y:232
00:44:001 (1) - x:308 y:304
01:31:343 (4) - Den Clap an dem Slider-ende würde ich entfernen. Hört sich besser ohne ihn an. xP

[bomber's Easy]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 Kiai-Flash? xP
00:39:027 (2) - Willst du den Whistle nicht lieber an den Slider-end setzen? Hört sich meiner meinung nach besser an.
00:49:597 (2) - Ich denke ein Finish würde hier besser passen.
01:02:343 (1) - Warum benutzt du für den Slider-end nicht den Custom hit-clap?
01:40:048 (1) - Wie wäre es mit einem Finish am Slider-start?
02:30:739 (1) - Der spinner sollte hier enden: 02:33:382

Awesome map
Good luck!

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-06-26T16:18:02+00:00

SPOILER

[quote="Smoothie":05195]Heya~
From my modding queue.

[Insane]
00:00:788 (2) - Wie wäre es, wenn du den Whistle am Slider-start entfernst? Hört sich besser an meiner meinung.[b:05195] Done![/b:05195]
00:03:742 (4) - Auch hier den whistle weg machen? [b:05195]Hmm neeee [/b:05195]
00:05:141 (5) - ^ [b:05195]Nah[/b:05195]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 - Wie wäre es mit einem kurzen Kiai-Flash? :3 [b:05195]Würde ich gerne machen, darf ich aber nicht >_<[/b:05195]
01:19:908 (9) - Mh, Setz die Note auf x:352 y:184. Hat einen besseren Flow.[b:05195] Gute Idee, aber ich mag diesen Dreieck flow![/b:05195]
01:31:654 (7) - Strg+G und platziere diese Note 01:31:498 (6) auf den Slider-start. Hat 'nen besseren Flow~ [b:05195]Hab ne alternative Lösung gefunden ~[/b:05195]
02:04:936 (6) - Ugh... Strg+G diesen Slider bitte. So wie er jetzt ist, killt er den Flow. :c[b:05195] Done![/b:05195]

[Normal]
00:04:830 (4,1,2) - Die Bankets sind ein wenig "uneben" [b:05195]Done![/b:05195]
[spoilerbox:05195][img:05195]http://puu.sh/3oMua.jpg[/img:05195][/spoilerbox:05195]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 Wie schon oben erwähnt. Ein Kiai-Flash hier? [b:05195]Würde ich gerne machen, darf ich aber nicht >_<[/b:05195]
00:17:887 (4) - Ich denke du hast die Claps bei diesem Slider vergessen.[b:05195]Done![/b:05195]
00:19:130 (1) - NC [b:05195]Done![/b:05195]
00:42:446 (1) - x:204 y:74?[b:05195] Die sind extra versetzt :3[/b:05195]
00:43:379 (2) - Wenn du den eben erwähnten Slider beweget hast, bewege diese Note nach x:256 y:144[b:05195] Die sind extra versetzt :3[/b:05195]
00:43:690 (3) - x:256 y:232 [b:05195]Nah[/b:05195]
00:44:001 (1) - x:308 y:304 [b:05195]Nah[/b:05195]
01:31:343 (4) - Den Clap an dem Slider-ende würde ich entfernen. Hört sich besser ohne ihn an. xP[b:05195] Done![/b:05195]

Awesome map
Good luck![/quote:05195]

Thanks for the mod, Smoothie!

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2013-06-28T09:57:44+00:00

~General~

The files "sb\a1.png sb\a2.png sb\a3.png sb\a4.png sb\a5.png sb\a6.png sb\a7.png sb\a8.png sb\b1.png sb\b2.png sb\b3.png sb\b4.png sb\b5.png sb\b6.png" seems to be unused, remove them.

~bomber's Easy~

Reduce the AR and OD by 1 tick, they're too high for an Easy difficulty right now.

01:57:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part might be hard to read and play for beginners, making some sliders would be better.
02:18:304 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles in a row, that's no good for beginners, you know that.
02:23:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part might be hard to read and play for beginners, making some sliders would be better.

~Normal~

Increase HP Drain and OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

01:00:167 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is not consistent if you check carefully here.
01:49:374 (3,4) - Same as above for the same reason.
02:30:739 (1) - This spinner should end on the next blue tick, to be consistent with the "wroah!".

~Sakuya's Hard~

02:30:817 (1) - Same spinner comment as Normal.

~Insane~

01:26:188 (1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern doesn't seem to follow much with the lyrics, try remaking it.
02:30:817 (1) - Same spinner comment as Normal.

Well done :3

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-06-28T21:58:57+00:00

SPOILER

Andrea wrote:
~General~
[list:06011][*:06011][b:06011]The files "sb\a1.png sb\a2.png sb\a3.png sb\a4.png sb\a5.png sb\a6.png sb\a7.png sb\a8.png sb\b1.png sb\b2.png sb\b3.png sb\b4.png sb\b5.png sb\b6.png" seems to be unused, remove them.[/b:06011][/*:m:06011][/list:u:06011][b:06011] Done![/b:06011]

[b:06011]~Normal~[/b:06011]
[list:06011][*:06011][b:06011]Increase HP Drain and OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.[/b:06011][/*:m:06011][/list:u:06011][b:06011] Done![/b:06011]
[list:06011][*:06011]01:00:167 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is not consistent if you check carefully here.[b:06011] Done![/b:06011][/*:m:06011]
[*:06011]01:49:374 (3,4) - Same as above for the same reason.[b:06011] Done![/b:06011][/*:m:06011]
[*:06011]02:30:739 (1) - This spinner should end on the next blue tick, to be consistent with the "wroah!".[/*:m:06011][/list:u:06011]

[b:06011]~Insane~[/b:06011]
[list:06011][*:06011]01:26:188 (1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern doesn't seem to follow much with the lyrics, try remaking it. [b:06011]Done![/b:06011][/*:m:06011]
[*:06011]02:30:817 (1) - Same spinner comment as Normal.[/*:m:06011][/list:u:06011][b:06011]Done![/b:06011]

Well done :3

Thank you very much!

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-06-30T23:10:15+00:00

Smoothie wrote:
[bomber's Easy]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 Kiai-Flash? xP Etepetete Hayas Entscheidung
00:39:027 (2) - Willst du den Whistle nicht lieber an den Slider-end setzen? Hört sich meiner meinung nach besser an. Behalte Sliderende und setze auf Ende nochmal whistle
00:49:597 (2) - Ich denke ein Finish würde hier besser passen. wieder beides ... ohne clap fehlt was
01:02:343 (1) - Warum benutzt du für den Slider-end nicht den Custom hit-clap? Weil der total nicht passt mMn. Hab den jetzt komplett entfernt und n normalen clap draufgesetzt .. sofern wir jetzt vom selben reden .___.
01:40:048 (1) - Wie wäre es mit einem Finish am Slider-start? merke keinen Unterschied also wayne ... hinzugefügt
02:30:739 (1) - Der spinner sollte hier enden: 02:33:382 würde keinen Unterschied machen, endet auf der Stimme also meh

Awesome map
Good luck!

Andrea wrote:
~bomber's Easy~
Reduce the AR and OD by 1 tick, they're too high for an Easy difficulty right now. logically the AR and OD should not be higher than Normal diff, because anything easier than a "Normal" Diff is already something you can call "Easy". I also think that the AR is fine, because you can see enough of the following Hitcircle without being something like "Easy" mod where you see too much. At this moment you have 1:200 seconds to see the next hitcircle (when I began playing osu! I had a really hard time, because of low AR, that doesn't mean I recommend AR8 or more but AR4 seems fine to me . About the OD ... maybe
01:57:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part might be hard to read and play for beginners, making some sliders would be better. I actually disagree but I changed it anyway
02:18:304 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles in a row, that's no good for beginners, you know that. Well ... I got forced to increase the Star rating drasticly ... that was one result out of it... tried something new. The second (1,2,3,4) you mentions stays though. The first got changed, also changed a in previous mod mentioned problem ... but probaly it is still not perfect >w<
02:23:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part might be hard to read and play for beginners, making some sliders would be better. I don't really understand why it is hard to read... only the part between the combos(4,1) & (5,1) are a bit complicated I changed (4,1) to one slider.I stay with (5,1) because (1) is a slider and those are pretty lenient when it comes to clicking.

UPDATE

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Rock, Scissors, Paper.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 89722
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 40118,106887
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
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LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-07-02T03:36:43+00:00

Smoothie wrote:
[Sakuya's Hard]
00:10:426 ~ 00:10:503 - A Kiai-Flash here would be nice~ hmm i'll let the SV change handle that for now
01:10:892 - How about adding a note here? Fixed, made a slider
01:26:267 (3,4,5,6) - That plays a bit odd imo. How about something like that? aw I had it like that before xD but i felt the approach circles for 3,4 were a bit...cramped? idk i might change back anyway

Andrea wrote:
~Sakuya's Hard~
02:30:817 (1) - Same spinner comment as Normal.

Thanks

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Tenshichan

601 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-07-05T19:17:10+00:00

There was an unintentionally mistake in my diff where 2 fruits dropped at the same time. Thanks to Jacqli for pointing that out.
Fixed ver: http://puu.sh/3vOiq.osu

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-07-05T19:52:44+00:00

Updated ~

rezoons

rezoons 2013-07-07T18:53:24+00:00

Hi

,

Mod from The French Baguette queue! by the "Nazi modder mastah":
Sorry for late mod but there was some confusion about who should mod what. XD

[bomber's Easy]

00:18:819 (2) - Move it to x=220 y=100 for a better blanket.
00:32:809 (1,2) - Try doing a better blanket of 1 around 2. I have something good by moving the second slider point of 1 to x=92 y=112 and the end point to x=32 y=184.
00:47:731 (1) - I think you're allowed to stretch the distance snapping a little bit by moving it one grid down for a better looking overlap.
01:09:804 (4,2) - Move 2 a little bit higher because they overlap a little.
01:20:691 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Maybe you should recheck your combo here. Because even if it's common to have combo of length 2 in an Easy diff. It's not to have that many in a row. Especially when the length of the combo in your map goes from 2 to 6.
01:38:804 (1,2,3,4) - 4 isn't well aligned with 1,2,3. Move it to x=252 y=252.
01:40:048 (1) - In order to correct the previous alignment move it to x=148 y=324.
01:58:856 (4) - Move it one grid down for a better symetry.
02:16:439 (1) - It should be vertical since 02:14:573 (3) as the vertical axis as axis of symmetry. Like this:
02:18:304 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A little bit hard for an Easy diff. Why not using instead?
02:25:143 (4) - Move it 1 grid down for a perfect parallelogram with 02:23:744 (1,2,3).
02:27:164 (4) - 1 grid up logically.

[Normal]

00:06:695 (3,1) - Stack them.
00:48:353 (2,3,4) - Move 2 to x=288 y=244, 3 to x=304 y=156 and 4 to x=220 y=140 for better blanket.
01:33:208 (2) - Move it 1 grid down for 2 better blanket.

[Sakuya's Hard]

00:02:498 (6) - Maybe you could try to stack it with 00:01:721 (4) like this:
00:19:130 (4,6) - Not symetrical.
01:08:094 (2,3) - I think it would be better looking if you'd do something like this:
01:25:089 (1) - Move it to x=308 y=88 for a perfect parallelogram with 01:24:146 (4,5,6).
01:43:312 (5) - Move the end point 2 grid left for a better overlapping.
02:07:268 - Add a note or an arrow on the previous slider.

[Insane]

00:00:478 (1,2) - Why this overlapping? I don't find it really interesting and you can easily avoid it.
00:18:353 (2,4) - Stack 4 with the end of 2?
02:09:444 (1,3,4) - Stack?

[Tenshichan's Rain]

Your last spinner don't finish at the same time at the other diff.

Very good mapset. You abused a little bit of the symmetry and rotation for the Insane imo but it totally deserve star ^^
~Good Luck~

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-07-07T21:23:18+00:00

SPOILER

rezoons wrote:
Hi ,

Mod from The French Baguette queue! by the "Nazi modder mastah":
Sorry for late mod but there was some confusion about who should mod what. XD

[Normal]
00:06:695 (3,1) - Stack them. Done!
00:48:353 (2,3,4) - Move 2 to x=288 y=244, 3 to x=304 y=156 and 4 to x=220 y=140 for better blanket. Done!
01:33:208 (2) - Move it 1 grid down for 2 better blanket. Done!
[Insane]
00:00:478 (1,2) - Why this overlapping? I don't find it really interesting and you can easily avoid it. Don't know why this happened -.-
00:18:353 (2,4) - Stack 4 with the end of 2? Fits more as it is imo
02:09:444 (1,3,4) - Stack?Done!

Very good mapset. You abused a little bit of the symmetry and rotation for the Insane imo but it totally deserve star ^^
~Good Luck~

Thanks for the mod! :3

pieguyn

2,020 posts

Joined May 2009

pieguyn 2013-07-10T07:53:03+00:00

0.0

[bomber's Easy]
maybe try using the slidertick hitsound? it might help fill in all the missing claps >< ofc it's up to you

02:08:356 (6,1) - shoudn't NCs be switched
02:19:236 (4) - not sure if newbies can hit this many notes at once, maybe remove it?
02:20:480 (4) - ^
02:30:739 (1) - use finish instead like in other diffs?

[Normal]
00:05:452 (1) - add whistle on start to continue previous pattern
00:07:939 (1) - add whistle on start
01:19:441 (2) - make it blanket (1) better (x: 488 y: 196)
01:20:063 (3) - there should be NC here, cause it's the start of a new section
01:29:801 (1,2) - switch NCs cause measure starts at (2)
01:31:343 (4) - clap on end to match pattern
01:42:846 (2) - make it blanket (1) better (x: 124 y: 228) (adjust spacing after)
01:45:954 - make it 85% plz to be consistent with others
02:16:749 - make it 85%? same idea as before

[Sakuya's Hard]
01:13:690 (8,9,10) - make a perfect triangle?
01:12:913 (5) - add NC? this combo is longer than others
01:17:576 (6) - add NC? this combo is longer than others

[Tenshichan's Rain]
00:27:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move it closer in or make it go out like 01:28:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - plz, I tried it 3 times and I kept missing ><
01:07:939 (1,2) - move it more to the right plz so that there's a hyperdash here. jump all the way to the left is unexpected so a hyperdash can warn players
02:25:765 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - 2 notes at the same time, fix it plz. not sure if intentional but if it was it's still really annoying to play, I didn't catch it even once
fun diff, nice

[Insane]
00:09:338 (1) - add whistle to fit previous pattern
00:19:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo start the star jump at 00:19:441 - instead is more natural to play and match vocal better, just space normally until then
00:30:633 (4) - add NC for start of vocal
00:44:933 (7,8,9,10,1) - weird stack, move (7) up and left to fix it plz
01:05:762 (10,1) - imo stack here is kind of boring to play, maybe use this rhythm? http://puu.sh/3zhoB.jpg
01:08:716 (1) - slider looks kind of weird imo, maybe move second point left 1 grid and third point right looks more natural (if you agree, change 01:09:027 (2,3,4) too cause it's the same slider

)
01:31:032 (4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/3zhsB.jpg maybe this instead? emphasis here is on 1/1s imo

01:40:048 (5,1) - switch NCs for start of measure
01:49:996 (5) - i think center it feels good ~
02:09:599 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3zhXL.jpg maybe this rhythm plays better, you could change it without affecting the pattern too ~
02:10:221 (4) - add clap same idea as before
02:16:905 (2,3) - stack under (3)?
02:17:682 (5) - add clap
02:19:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about making a bigger jump here? it's the last part of the kiai so it might be fitting

02:20:635 (8) - replace with 2 notes? maybe it's better to "hit" on a strong beat 02:20:791 -

that's it, hope it helps

nice map and good luck ~

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-07-10T12:06:56+00:00

rezoons wrote:
Hi , Hallo

[bomber's Easy]
00:18:819 (2) - Move it to x=220 y=100 for a better blanket. k
00:32:809 (1,2) - Try doing a better blanket of 1 around 2. I have something good by moving the second slider point of 1 to x=92 y=112 and the end point to x=32 y=184. ok
00:47:731 (1) - I think you're allowed to stretch the distance snapping a little bit by moving it one grid down for a better looking overlap. k
01:09:804 (4,2) - Move 2 a little bit higher because they overlap a little. k
01:20:691 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Maybe you should recheck your combo here. Because even if it's common to have combo of length 2 in an Easy diff. It's not to have that many in a row. Especially when the length of the combo in your map goes from 2 to 6. nah. It actually depends on the length in timeline and if it fits. It does fit imo
01:38:804 (1,2,3,4) - 4 isn't well aligned with 1,2,3. Move it to x=252 y=252. lol you gave me coordinates of (3) ... Tried to fix (4) anyway
01:40:048 (1) - In order to correct the previous alignment move it to x=148 y=324. k
01:58:856 (4) - Move it one grid down for a better symetry. k
02:16:439 (1) - It should be vertical since 02:14:573 (3) as the vertical axis as axis of symmetry. Like this: ok
02:18:304 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - A little bit hard for an Easy diff. Why not using instead? ORZ ... Haya ... you failed, already "changed that part ... but well you did not update >.<
ANYWAY: Replaced the first (1,2,3,4) combo with 2 sliders... should be easier now. As for the 2nd (1,2,3,4) ... I want to keep them
02:25:143 (4) - Move it 1 grid down for a perfect parallelogram with 02:23:744 (1,2,3). k
02:27:164 (4) - 1 grid up logically.k

pieguy1372 wrote:
0.0

[bomber's Easy]
maybe try using the slidertick hitsound? it might help fill in all the missing claps >< ofc it's up to you
02:08:356 (6,1) - shoudn't NCs be switched k
02:19:236 (4) - not sure if newbies can hit this many notes at once, maybe remove it? fixed in last mod
02:20:480 (4) - ^ 4 aren't really hard here ... there are other parts with 4 hitcircles in a row and nobody complained there
02:30:739 (1) - use finish instead like in other diffs? k

Thanks you two :3

Haya: Don't fail updating again, okay?

Update

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Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-07-10T16:44:50+00:00

SPOILER

pieguy1372 wrote:
0.0

[Normal]
00:05:452 (1) - add whistle on start to continue previous pattern Done!
00:07:939 (1) - add whistle on start Done!
01:19:441 (2) - make it blanket (1) better (x: 488 y: 196) Done!
01:20:063 (3) - there should be NC here, cause it's the start of a new section Done!
01:29:801 (1,2) - switch NCs cause measure starts at (2) Done!
01:31:343 (4) - clap on end to match pattern Done!
01:42:846 (2) - make it blanket (1) better (x: 124 y: 228) (adjust spacing after) Done!
01:45:954 - make it 85% plz to be consistent with others Done!
02:16:749 - make it 85%? same idea as before Done!

[Insane]
00:09:338 (1) - add whistle to fit previous pattern Done!
00:19:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - imo start the star jump at 00:19:441 - instead is more natural to play and match vocal better, just space normally until then Nah, it fits with the countdown
00:30:633 (4) - add NC for start of vocal Done!
00:44:933 (7,8,9,10,1) - weird stack, move (7) up and left to fix it plz Fixed another way
01:05:762 (10,1) - imo stack here is kind of boring to play, maybe use this rhythm? http://puu.sh/3zhoB.jpg Not gonna change this
01:08:716 (1) - slider looks kind of weird imo, maybe move second point left 1 grid and third point right looks more natural (if you agree, change 01:09:027 (2,3,4) too cause it's the same slider ) Done!
01:31:032 (4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/3zhsB.jpg maybe this instead? emphasis here is on 1/1s imo Nope
01:40:048 (5,1) - switch NCs for start of measure Done!
01:49:996 (5) - i think center it feels good ~ Done!
02:09:599 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3zhXL.jpg maybe this rhythm plays better, you could change it without affecting the pattern too ~ Done!
02:10:221 (4) - add clap same idea as before Done!
02:16:905 (2,3) - stack under (3)? ?
02:17:682 (5) - add clap Done!
02:19:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about making a bigger jump here? it's the last part of the kiai so it might be fitting Done!
02:20:635 (8) - replace with 2 notes? maybe it's better to "hit" on a strong beat 02:20:791 -Nah

that's it, hope it helps
nice map and good luck ~

Thanks for the mod! :3

Tenshichan

601 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-07-11T15:11:45+00:00

pieguy1372 wrote:
[Tenshichan's Rain]
00:27:835 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - move it closer in or make it go out like 01:28:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - plz, I tried it 3 times and I kept missing >< I have no problems to catch it, but still I moved them a little bit closer together, hope that helps
01:07:939 (1,2) - move it more to the right plz so that there's a hyperdash here. jump all the way to the left is unexpected so a hyperdash can warn players I moved it more to the left, so the jump is better readable
02:25:765 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - 2 notes at the same time, fix it plz. not sure if intentional but if it was it's still really annoying to play, I didn't catch it even once The issue here was, that somehow the green line, which originally had a Slider Velocity of 2.0x was set to 1.0x which I don't know why. Haya did you maybe mistakely change this? Well anyway, it's fixed again.
fun diff, nice thanks :3

I also did a few changes by myself again
http://puu.sh/3Ajqj.osu

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-07-12T20:37:21+00:00

rezoons wrote:
[Sakuya's Hard]
00:02:498 (6) - Maybe you could try to stack it with 00:01:721 (4) like this: Fixed
00:19:130 (4,6) - Not symetrical. Fixed i think
01:08:094 (2,3) - I think it would be better looking if you'd do something like this:Fixed
01:25:089 (1) - Move it to x=308 y=88 for a perfect parallelogram with 01:24:146 (4,5,6). Fixed
01:43:312 (5) - Move the end point 2 grid left for a better overlapping.Fixed
02:07:268 - Add a note or an arrow on the previous slider. Fixed

Thanks rezoons~

pieguy1372 wrote:
[Sakuya's Hard]
01:13:690 (8,9,10) - make a perfect triangle? Fixed
01:12:913 (5) - add NC? this combo is longer than others Fixed on (4)
01:17:576 (6) - add NC? this combo is longer than others Fixed

Thank you pieguy

SPOILER

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Creator:Haya
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156,136,84775,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,88,85089,6,0,P|368:92|448:164,2,160,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,86031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,86267,2,0,L|136:256,1,40
228,348,86581,2,0,L|280:320,1,40
392,296,86895,2,0,L|408:244,1,40,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,172,87131,2,0,P|440:116|448:76,1,80
256,192,87445,12,0,89801,0:0:0:0:
160,104,90100,6,0,P|112:160|116:252,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,91032,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,104,91343,2,0,P|400:160|396:252,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,92276,2,0,L|176:128,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,92587,6,0,P|96:232|8:192,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,168,93364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,180,93519,2,0,P|344:220|352:256,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,336,93830,2,0,L|499:277,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,344,94607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,332,94763,2,0,P|120:304|100:276,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,136,95074,6,0,P|144:176|140:216,1,80
56,160,95384,2,0,L|224:108,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,72,96162,2,0,L|128:44,1,80
312,168,96628,2,0,L|228:196,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,96939,2,0,P|232:304|320:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,264,97405,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,180,97561,6,0,P|412:124|336:60,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,212,98493,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,212,98649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,212,98804,2,0,L|56:220,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,136,99270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,76,99426,2,0,P|180:108|264:100,2,160,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,24,100359,6,0,P|348:88|324:168,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,101291,2,0,P|300:248|396:232,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,336,102224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,176,102535,2,0,L|284:16,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,244,103312,2,0,P|404:216|412:176,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,288,103778,2,0,P|224:308|136:296,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,216,104711,2,0,P|64:296|84:376,2,160,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,148,105644,6,0,B|356:124|320:120|320:120|244:144,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,208,106110,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,106265,2,0,L|352:216,1,80
256,56,106732,2,0,L|100:104,1,160
72,184,107198,2,0,P|24:192|-12:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,208,107509,6,0,P|192:240|220:264,1,80
324,236,107820,2,0,P|300:204|264:176,1,80
220,264,108131,2,0,L|196:344,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,180,108441,2,0,L|292:100,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,52,108752,6,0,P|416:112|416:188,1,160
95,186,109374,2,0,P|96:112|152:52,2,160,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,120895,6,0,L|400:160,2,160,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,121827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,52,122138,2,0,L|112:160,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,180,123071,2,0,L|368:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,180,123382,6,0,P|424:196|508:176,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,144,124159,2,0,P|232:124|196:120,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,208,124625,2,0,P|128:240|48:240,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,120,125402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,44,125558,2,0,P|120:76|108:116,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,240,125869,6,0,P|88:212|104:180,1,80
20,160,126179,2,0,L|80:320,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,76,126957,2,0,P|108:60|144:60,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,112,127268,2,0,P|200:142|167:155,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,52,127734,2,0,P|380:64|416:140,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,128200,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,236,128356,6,0,P|256:240|188:304,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,129288,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,129444,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,68,129599,2,0,L|206:173,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,188,130065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,108,130221,2,0,P|200:148|192:248,2,160,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,288,131154,6,0,P|172:328|256:304,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,132086,2,0,P|172:56|256:80,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,133019,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,168,133330,6,0,P|432:232|376:308,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,134107,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,44,134262,2,0,P|288:48|252:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,144,134573,2,0,B|140:132|140:132|128:124|128:124|56:112,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,135506,2,0,B|368:288|368:288|380:280|380:280|452:268,2,160,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,328,136439,6,0,P|136:276|236:244,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,188,136905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,120,137060,2,0,L|340:32,1,80
168,164,137527,2,0,P|216:120|224:20,1,160
144,64,137993,2,0,L|64:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,188,138304,6,0,L|96:180,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,138615,2,0,P|260:264|220:360,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,280,139081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,139236,2,0,P|276:192|312:180,1,80
412,220,139547,2,0,L|376:60,2,160,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,140480,2,0,L|136:60,2,160,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,304,141257,6,0,P|200:312|272:272,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,141724,2,0,P|384:156|468:164,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,244,142190,2,0,L|360:92,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,52,142656,2,0,L|200:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,136,142967,2,0,L|212:160,1,80
276,228,143278,6,0,P|212:264|128:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,188,143744,2,0,P|44:260|88:332,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,252,144211,2,0,P|152:180|108:108,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,32,144677,2,0,L|232:56,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,92,144988,2,0,P|360:84|396:68,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,156,145454,2,0,P|240:204|236:240,1,80
272,316,145765,6,0,P|344:340|428:320,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,248,146231,2,0,P|360:184|380:88,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,160,146698,2,0,P|364:180|288:152,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,147164,2,0,B|176:100|140:116|100:132|60:124,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,52,147630,2,0,P|144:100|116:200,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,344,148252,6,0,L|256:184,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,148718,2,0,L|356:280,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,149185,2,0,L|248:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,44,149496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,100,149651,2,0,P|108:136|112:180,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,260,149962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,150117,2,0,B|264:296|300:272|340:244|384:252,2,160,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,150817,12,0,153459,0:0:0:0:

AndyKH

3 posts

Joined February 2013

AndyKH 2013-07-15T09:43:10+00:00

Rank it plz!

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-07-15T13:53:05+00:00

I am trying LOL

winber1

4,519 posts

Joined February 2010

winber1 2013-07-16T00:13:23+00:00

Hope this helps. I doubt I could give anything useful in CtB, so it's not here. Requested by LunarSakuya if you didn't know.

Insane

00:01:099 (3) - You are making the player play on something that doesn't exist. Often time it's a little awkward when the main beat plays on nothing in the music. Right now for me, it feels and sounds a little weird.It's up to you to change it. One possibility is http://puu.sh/3DMZc.jpg
00:03:431 - I'd add a whistle here, remove the whistle 00:03:586 - and 00:03:742 - follows the guitar and sounds better to me.
00:05:452 (1,2,3) - Same as the first thing. Honestly, if you want to keep this I think it's fine. I'm just saying if I were to map this I would do this differently
00:09:648 (3,4,5) - Something like this is what I don't think really just just ice to the music. The two strongest and most emphasized beats are at 00:09:804 - and 00:10:115 - and those are just slider ends. If I were to map this, I would put 3 hitcircles starting from 00:09:804 - . Just my opinion. Don't get me wrong, having slider ends on main beats is not a problem and in fact it can give a better flow and feeling to the beatmap than mapping it onto the beat. I do it too sometimes. However, certain spots I feel that it kinda just needs to be on the beat sometimes.
00:40:115 (6) - Perhaps add a new combo and do something like this http://puu.sh/3DNYL.jpg
01:19:908 (9) - Perhaps unstack? It gives more of an impact imo if there was a jump between combo 9 and combo 1
01:26:659 (3) - Why not http://puu.sh/3DO6b.jpg
01:59:011 (8) - This is awkward. http://puu.sh/3DOJN.jpg This feels better.
01:59:827 (1) - This is like one of the most awkward streams I've ever played, even though I somehow SS'd it. I thought I messed up somewhere because my fingers were tapping to like some random beat and I was confused. Technically this is what it is http://puu.sh/3DOEM.jpg but obviously mapping it out isn't your only option, but I can't seem to find a better alternative. If you space it correctly, the player will be able to understand the rhythm because of the music. Even though you are using 1/8, it feels so much less awkward since it follows the music perfectly.

Sakuya's Hard

00:02:032 (5) - Something like this is better imo. http://puu.sh/3DQus.jpg
00:19:130 (4) - New combo
00:23:794 (4) - I would do the same thing as 00:21:307 (4,5) - to keep consistency, otherwise you do this interesting off-beat rhythm (which sounds pretty cool) that seems misplaced. Doing it again kinda asserts the fact that "yes, it's meant to be there." Also, doing it a second time amplifies the effect.
01:32:120 - I feel like adding a note here prepares the continuous flow of 1/2 tick notes better. Just my opinion though.
01:49:374 (2) - Consider removing the repeat and adding a note with a finish.

Normal

00:00:478 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is such an awkward opening. This is a normal difficulty, and especialy since you have an easier difficulty you should not be worried about using red ticks. Doing this http://puu.sh/3DPsW.jpg and repeat is fine imo. Or maybe http://puu.sh/3DPuh.jpg Or if you don't really want the 1/2 tick notes you could just do http://puu.sh/3DPBp.jpg But either way, you should definitely follow the guitar otherwise this is really awkward. The most awkward part is 00:05:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I don't even know what this is following to be honest. They are just quarter notes
00:09:493 (4) - New combo?
00:42:446 (1,2,3,1) - I do believe this is not hard to make symmetrical. So, you want to make it symmetrical?
00:44:933 (2) - Not sure the exact reasoning to skip the white tick. If you can give a good reason for it I don't really mind it, but right now I don't see a point in doing so. imo It would sound better too if you had a beat there.
01:21:319 (1,3) - I would rather you map each white tick. It fits the music better and I like the sound better.

Bomber's Easy

01:04:208 (3) - I'm naziing you, could you make this slider more symmetrical?
01:18:819 - Add a note
01:20:691 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Not a fan of this at all. I truly believe u should map most, if not all, the white ticks. You don't need to use all hitcircles. Sliders and repeat sliders work as well, but not mapping the white ticks doesn't serve justice the music imo.
01:45:644 (2) - End the slider at 01:45:644 (2) -
01:46:887 (1) - This spinner looks more like a lazy spinner, in that you didn't feel like mapping this part so you just put a spinner. Whether or not that is actually true, I still think it's better to map this part.
01:57:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is potentially confusing because this rhythm was not used in a long time and you have no slider to give a starting indication to the beginner what the rhythm is. I would use a slider or something in the beginning to remind the player what is happening here.
01:59:633 (1) - Turn this into a note and a slider, or maybe http://puu.sh/3DQci.jpg
02:00:895 (1,2,3,4) - Very empty. Consider using sliders, or just more notes.
02:12:086 (1,2,3) - I almost want to say this feels really random. You have an enormous decrease in notes even tho the music stays the same. Yes you have nice shapes, but having patterns like this doesn't seem to mesh with the music as well as it could.

The rhythm could be a little difficult like at 02:27:630 (5,1) - or 02:25:143 (4,1) - beginners can't really understand these small spacing changes very well, but I think as long as you make it clear, it should be fine. 02:27:164 (4,5,1) - for instance, this one is not very clear imo.

Looks great in general! good luck

fanzhen0019

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,724 posts

Joined July 2010

fanzhen0019 2013-07-16T16:31:27+00:00

AWESOME AMV!!!
Req from my queue :3

General

Some green line in Normal diff are unsnapped.
Green lines
00:10:429 - snap to 00:10:426
00:30:325 - snap to 00:30:322
00:30:636 - snap to 00:30:633
00:40:118 - snap to 00:40:115
01:02:890 - snap to 01:02:887
01:03:045 - snap to 01:03:042
01:04:755 - snap to 01:04:752
01:04:911 - snap to 01:04:908
01:05:377 - snap to 01:05:374
01:05:532 - snap to 01:05:529

Easy

Hitsounds

Fine.

Arrangement & Design

Imo it's a bit hard for newbie? o.o

Normal

Hitsounds

Fine.

Arrangement & Design

Fine.

Sakuya's Hard

Hitsounds

Add clap at these point.Just use the drum clap.It will make some sense imo.
00:42:602 (4) -
00:44:467 -
00:44:778 -
00:47:576 -
00:48:819 -
02:10:221 - Clap here.
02:22:967 - ^
02:25:454 - ^
02:27:941 - ^

Arrangement & Design

Fine!(In fact I think my Hard mapping style is a bit similar to you...

Insane

Hitsounds

How about add clap here?
02:20:325 (6) -
02:20:635 -

Arrangement & Design

00:05:762 (2,3) - Exchange their position.It plays more fluently.
00:30:011 (1,2,3) - I suggest stack them.At the first sight players will treat them like 1/4 snap.
Amazing! :O

Shocking song and AMV,and so does the map!
Good luck~
★

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-07-16T18:54:32+00:00

gonna fix these mods later!

(wtf thanks Saku xD)

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-07-17T08:41:31+00:00

yo, from my queue

Easy
00:11:358 (2,3) - make 2 circle become one slider? it's make easier to newbie imo
00:34:053 (2) - spacing issue (0,74x)
00:40:270 (1) - finish in head?
00:45:866 (2,1) - add some hitsound?
01:04:208 (3) - make http://puu.sh/3EQBy.jpg ?
01:13:534 (4) - NC for consistency?
01:17:887 (4) - ^
01:39:426 (3,4) - replace with one slider?
01:40:048 (1) - finish head?
01:57:923 (2,3) - replace with one slider?
01:58:856 (4,5) - ^
02:10:843 (1) - finish
02:20:169 (3,4) - replace with one slider?
02:24:211 (2,3) - ^
02:26:232 (2,3) - ^
02:27:164 (4,5) - ^

Normal
00:03:586 (2) - make more branket? http://puu.sh/3ETSU.jpg
00:19:130 (1) - it's better if you stack it in 00:17:576 (3) -
00:20:374 (3) - imo put in 476,148 better flow
00:34:364 (5,6) - replace one slider? too much circle imo
00:37:161 (6) - put in 128,312?
00:40:115 (4) - finish in tail?
00:44:933 (2) - err, i suggest to not skip stanza since have vocal in stanza
00:49:597 (4) - 224,140 for more branket?
01:01:410 (1) - remove NC for consistency
01:07:939 (4) - spacing issue (0,86x)
01:08:560 (6) - ^
01:20:063 - volume increase 10%?
01:25:089 (3) - finish in head?
01:35:384 (2) - unstack? kinda make confuse for newbie imo
01:41:602 (5,6) - replace become one slider?
01:44:711 (6) - finish in tail?
02:02:138 (4) - spacing issue (0,86x)
02:15:817 (6) - finish?
02:17:993 (4) - same as 01:35:384 (2) -
02:30:739 (1) - remove finish?

Hard
00:30:011 (8) - ctrl+G?
00:40:115 (1) - finish in tail?
00:44:933 (6) - finish in repeat?
00:48:975 (6) - NC for consistency?
01:43:778 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency?

Insane
00:10:892 (2) - flow is better if you ctrl+G imo
01:20:063 - increase 5-10% volume?
01:44:711 (8) - finish in tail
02:15:817 (7) - finish
02:17:371 (4) - ctrl+G?
02:30:817 (1) - remove finish?

Rain
00:32:187 (5) - 256,264? imo when slow music better without jump
00:40:270 (5) - 440,200? due from slow music become hard music
01:03:897 - add note in 280,192?
01:10:115 (1,2,3) - maybe try http://puu.sh/3ELLh.jpg?
02:00:566 (5) - based music, maybe you can try SV 1,25x or 1,5x to make more challenge
02:10:765 - add note?
02:20:791 (2) - finish in head

Good Luck ~

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-07-17T12:57:47+00:00

winber1's Mod!

winber1 wrote:
Hope this helps. I doubt I could give anything useful in CtB, so it's not here. Requested by LunarSakuya if you didn't know.

Insane
00:01:099 (3) - You are making the player play on something that doesn't exist. Often time it's a little awkward when the main beat plays on nothing in the music. Right now for me, it feels and sounds a little weird.It's up to you to change it. One possibility is http://puu.sh/3DMZc.jpg Done!
00:03:431 - I'd add a whistle here, remove the whistle 00:03:586 - and 00:03:742 - follows the guitar and sounds better to me.Done!
00:05:452 (1,2,3) - Same as the first thing. Honestly, if you want to keep this I think it's fine. I'm just saying if I were to map this I would do this differently This seems fine to me
00:09:648 (3,4,5) - Something like this is what I don't think really just just ice to the music. The two strongest and most emphasized beats are at 00:09:804 - and 00:10:115 - and those are just slider ends. If I were to map this, I would put 3 hitcircles starting from 00:09:804 - . Just my opinion. Don't get me wrong, having slider ends on main beats is not a problem and in fact it can give a better flow and feeling to the beatmap than mapping it onto the beat. I do it too sometimes. However, certain spots I feel that it kinda just needs to be on the beat sometimes. You're right on this one, but the flow is the main reason I did it like this
00:40:115 (6) - Perhaps add a new combo and do something like this http://puu.sh/3DNYL.jpgDone!
01:19:908 (9) - Perhaps unstack? It gives more of an impact imo if there was a jump between combo 9 and combo 1Done!
01:26:659 (3) - Why not http://puu.sh/3DO6b.jpgDone!
01:59:011 (8) - This is awkward. http://puu.sh/3DOJN.jpg This feels better. I like it as it is.
01:59:827 (1) - This is like one of the most awkward streams I've ever played, even though I somehow SS'd it. I thought I messed up somewhere because my fingers were tapping to like some random beat and I was confused. Technically this is what it is http://puu.sh/3DOEM.jpg but obviously mapping it out isn't your only option, but I can't seem to find a better alternative. If you space it correctly, the player will be able to understand the rhythm because of the music. Even though you are using 1/8, it feels so much less awkward since it follows the music perfectly. Still very sceptical on this one. All of my testers had no problems playing this, even if what you said is right. Sorry but I don't really like your idea.

Normal
00:00:478 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is such an awkward opening. This is a normal difficulty, and especialy since you have an easier difficulty you should not be worried about using red ticks. Doing this http://puu.sh/3DPsW.jpg and repeat is fine imo. Or maybe http://puu.sh/3DPuh.jpg Or if you don't really want the 1/2 tick notes you could just do http://puu.sh/3DPBp.jpg But either way, you should definitely follow the guitar otherwise this is really awkward. The most awkward part is 00:05:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - I don't even know what this is following to be honest. They are just quarter notesDone!
00:09:493 (4) - New combo?Done!
00:42:446 (1,2,3,1) - I do believe this is not hard to make symmetrical. So, you want to make it symmetrical?Done!
00:44:933 (2) - Not sure the exact reasoning to skip the white tick. If you can give a good reason for it I don't really mind it, but right now I don't see a point in doing so. imo It would sound better too if you had a beat there. Done!
01:21:319 (1,3) - I would rather you map each white tick. It fits the music better and I like the sound better.I don't know but it first more like this imo

Looks great in general! good luck

fanzhen0019's Mod!

fanzhen0019 wrote:
AWESOME AMV!!!
Req from my queue :3

General
Some green line in Normal diff are unsnapped.
00:10:429 - snap to 00:10:426
00:30:325 - snap to 00:30:322
00:30:636 - snap to 00:30:633
00:40:118 - snap to 00:40:115
01:02:890 - snap to 01:02:887
01:03:045 - snap to 01:03:042
01:04:755 - snap to 01:04:752
01:04:911 - snap to 01:04:908
01:05:377 - snap to 01:05:374
01:05:532 - snap to 01:05:529
Done!

Insane

Hitsounds
How about add clap here?
02:20:325 (6) - Nah, it follows the lyrics at this point
02:20:635 - ^
Arrangement & Design
00:05:762 (2,3) - Exchange their position.It plays more fluently. Nah, not really
00:30:011 (1,2,3) - I suggest stack them.At the first sight players will treat them like 1/4 snap. You can see it since the approach rate is high enough
Amazing! :O
Shocking song and AMV,and so does the map!
Good luck~
★

Xinely's Mod!

Xinely wrote:
yo, from my queue

Normal
00:03:586 (2) - make more branket? http://puu.sh/3ETSU.jpg Dunno but the pic you posted shows a bad blanket
00:19:130 (1) - it's better if you stack it in 00:17:576 (3) - Done!
00:20:374 (3) - imo put in 476,148 better flowDone!
00:34:364 (5,6) - replace one slider? too much circle imo Nah
00:37:161 (6) - put in 128,312? No, it's from the previous slider
00:40:115 (4) - finish in tail?Done!
00:44:933 (2) - err, i suggest to not skip stanza since have vocal in stanzaDone!
00:49:597 (4) - 224,140 for more branket? No
01:01:410 (1) - remove NC for consistency Gonna leave it since it's for the starting Vocals
01:07:939 (4) - spacing issue (0,86x)Done!
01:08:560 (6) - ^Done!
01:20:063 - volume increase 10%?Done!
01:25:089 (3) - finish in head?Done!
01:35:384 (2) - unstack? kinda make confuse for newbie imo Should be okay
01:41:602 (5,6) - replace become one slider? Nope
01:44:711 (6) - finish in tail?Done!
02:02:138 (4) - spacing issue (0,86x) Done!
02:15:817 (6) - finish?Done!
02:17:993 (4) - same as 01:35:384 (2) - Same as my answer to that
02:30:739 (1) - remove finish? Nope

Insane
00:10:892 (2) - flow is better if you ctrl+G imoDone!
01:20:063 - increase 5-10% volume? Nope
01:44:711 (8) - finish in tailDone!
02:15:817 (7) - finishDone!
02:17:371 (4) - ctrl+G? Nah, better for the flow
02:30:817 (1) - remove finish? Nope

Good Luck ~

Thanks for the mods (and stars) guys ~ :3

winber1

4,519 posts

Joined February 2010

winber1 2013-07-17T22:47:24+00:00

Haya wrote:
01:59:827 (1) - This is like one of the most awkward streams I've ever played, even though I somehow SS'd it. I thought I messed up somewhere because my fingers were tapping to like some random beat and I was confused. Technically this is what it is http://puu.sh/3DOEM.jpg but obviously mapping it out isn't your only option, but I can't seem to find a better alternative. If you space it correctly, the player will be able to understand the rhythm because of the music. Even though you are using 1/8, it feels so much less awkward since it follows the music perfectly. Still very sceptical on this one. All of my testers had no problems playing this, even if what you said is right. Sorry but I don't really like your idea.

I played it perfectly as well. SS'd it actually. But I still didn't like i because it was, as I said, one of the most awkward streams I've ever played, at least when I was sight reading it. I thought I missed, but I didn't.

So anyways, It's up to you to change it, but I like following the music more especially if a part like this doesn't even have the drums playing the 1/4 ticks. So basically what I'm seeing is a stream that shouldn't be there in the first place. That's just my take on it though. it's still your map, so do as you please.

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-07-17T22:50:06+00:00

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints in General.

* No complaints about [bomber's Easy].

♥ [Normal] and [Sakuya's Hard] - both have awesome flow from begin to end

* Currently I can't mod CtB, but I'm looking for anyone to teach me to map/mod CtB (:

[Insane]
♥ 00:10:426 (1,2,3) - It's an example of "The flow Essence of the Insane Diff" more Insanes need around osu! beatmap sets!! Awesomely amazing ♥
00:02:809 (1,2,3) - But not so good flow here ~.~ It CAN BE improved this way → http://puu.sh/3FpF3.jpg → Basically, perfect the slider 00:02:809 (1), move 00:03:120 (2) to x:184 y:192, remove the repeat from 00:03:275 (3) and make it symmetrical with 00:02:809 (1) at X axis, and add a note at 00:03:586 at x:184 y:192. If you have any doubt, testplay it.
* I don't suggested the same for 00:38:871 (1,2,3) because of further pattern chaining.

That's it ^^

Hope get this map RANKED as soon as possible!!

Att.

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-07-18T10:37:43+00:00

SPOILER

Alarido wrote:
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

[Insane]
♥ 00:10:426 (1,2,3) - It's an example of "The flow Essence of the Insane Diff" more Insanes need around osu! beatmap sets!! Awesomely amazing ♥ Thanks, wasn't my idea tho
00:02:809 (1,2,3) - But not so good flow here ~.~ It CAN BE improved this way → http://puu.sh/3FpF3.jpg → Basically, perfect the slider 00:02:809 (1), move 00:03:120 (2) to x:184 y:192, remove the repeat from 00:03:275 (3) and make it symmetrical with 00:02:809 (1) at X axis, and add a note at 00:03:586 at x:184 y:192. If you have any doubt, testplay it. Done!
* I don't suggested the same for 00:38:871 (1,2,3) because of further pattern chaining.[/notice]

That's it ^^

Hope get this map RANKED as soon as possible!!

Att.

Thanks for the mod!

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-07-18T11:10:59+00:00

Hi~ from my queue

Sakuya's Hard

01:26:031 (2,3,4,5) - how about this rythm?
01:46:265 (3,4) -
02:06:957 (3,4) - make same shape

Insane

00:05:452 (1,4) - overlap perfectly
00:19:908 (6,7) - remove them
00:42:446 (6,9) - NC
00:43:379 (3) - remove NC
01:27:288 (6) - remove circle
01:42:846 (6,3,4) - overlap
02:15:972 (8,2,3) - ^
02:28:563 (2) - ctrl + g

Done. GL

Tenshichan

601 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-07-18T16:44:18+00:00

Will look at Xinelys mod later... currently I have no motivation for nothing in connection with osu! lol

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-07-18T17:04:06+00:00

winber1 wrote:
Bomber's Easy
01:04:208 (3) - I'm naziing you, could you make this slider more symmetrical? what is not symmetrical?
01:18:819 - Add a note fine
01:20:691 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Not a fan of this at all. I truly believe u should map most, if not all, the white ticks. You don't need to use all hitcircles. Sliders and repeat sliders work as well, but not mapping the white ticks doesn't serve justice the music imo. I am a fan of this at all though.
01:45:644 (2) - End the slider at 01:45:644 (2) - nice to give me the same spot again. you probaly mean 1/2 tick later. I did that
01:46:887 (1) - This spinner looks more like a lazy spinner, in that you didn't feel like mapping this part so you just put a spinner. Whether or not that is actually true, I still think it's better to map this part. when I have more time I think about this ...
01:57:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is potentially confusing because this rhythm was not used in a long time and you have no slider to give a starting indication to the beginner what the rhythm is. I would use a slider or something in the beginning to remind the player what is happening here. First 4 notes are 2 sliders now
01:59:633 (1) - Turn this into a note and a slider, or maybe http://puu.sh/3DQci.jpg nah. That feels more confusing especially the drums start 1/4 before the 1/1 tick which makes it really weird. So better not
02:00:895 (1,2,3,4) - Very empty. Consider using sliders, or just more notes. tried more sliders
02:12:086 (1,2,3) - I almost want to say this feels really random. You have an enormous decrease in notes even tho the music stays the same. Yes you have nice shapes, but having patterns like this doesn't seem to mesh with the music as well as it could. you are right, but you know why? Because the first version of this diff was considered "tooooooo easy" >w< and thus some parts got more notes until the Star rating was "fine" ...

The rhythm could be a little difficult like at 02:27:630 (5,1) - or 02:25:143 (4,1) - beginners can't really understand these small spacing changes very well, but I think as long as you make it clear, it should be fine. 02:27:164 (4,5,1) - for instance, this one is not very clear imo. :/ on the other hand that (1) starts with a slider which are way more lenient towards timing

Looks great in general! good luck

Easy
00:11:358 (2,3) - make 2 circle become one slider? it's make easier to newbie imo nah, there were no hitcircles before so it should be not that hard to adapt
00:34:053 (2) - spacing issue (0,74x) fixed
00:40:270 (1) - finish in head? fine
00:45:866 (2,1) - add some hitsound? no nothing fits imo
01:04:208 (3) - make http://puu.sh/3EQBy.jpg ? puush does not seem to work >w<
01:13:534 (4) - NC for consistency? ok
01:17:887 (4) - ^ ^
01:39:426 (3,4) - replace with one slider? nah
01:40:048 (1) - finish head? fine
01:57:923 (2,3) - replace with one slider? 1,2 are sliders now .. see previous mod
01:58:856 (4,5) - ^ 3,4 are lider now... see previous mod
02:10:843 (1) - finish fine
02:20:169 (3,4) - replace with one slider? nah
02:24:211 (2,3) - ^ ^
02:26:232 (2,3) - ^ ^
02:27:164 (4,5) - ^ maybe

>bomber's Easy

Uh, the map uses 1.0x spacing for 00:00:478 (1,2), but later it goes to 0.8x. Not really a problem, but why are you doing this? https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2350526 00:00:478 (1,2) - erhöhe bitte das spacing ;w; du hast durchgehend den 3/4 rhythmus und du willst hier einfach du früh tappen... ich
_ meine es interessierrt noch überhaupt keinen easy player, dass das sapcing 0,8 sein soll. wissen die doch garnicht / please increase spacing, you have throughout a 3/4 rhythm and you just want to tap this so early - I mean no easy player would care about that since they don't even see that this is not 0,8x spacing. | I agreed with that point.
Err, the combo pattern seems to be messed up. Sometimes, you apply an NC every stanza, but another time, you're applying it every two stanzas. Can this be made consistent please? good thing I know what a stanza is hue hue ... previous mods pointed out NC inconsistency,, no idea what is still inconsistent but wayne
00:32:809 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency? fixed in prev. mod
01:35:074 (1) - Add a finish here to follow the music more accurately? it doesn't follow the music more acc. with that lol
01:40:048 - ^ [/color]
01:59:633 (1,1) - Uhm, more spacing problem here... fixed

ogosh more more and more
done finally .... *würg

Upädäit

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ArtistUnicode:ONE OK ROCK
Creator:Haya
Version:bomber's Easy
Source:
Tags:nicovideo mad amv Tenshichan Bomber34 LunarSakuya Sakuya Bomber
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Last edited by bomber34 2013-07-19T17:12:05+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,826 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-07-19T04:32:02+00:00

Hi; I'm modding here~

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

Turn off the letterbox. There is a video here. Turning it on will make the letterbox overlap the video during breaks.

>bomber's Easy

Uh, the map uses 1.0x spacing for 00:00:478 (1,2), but later it goes to 0.8x. Not really a problem, but why are you doing this?
Err, the combo pattern seems to be messed up. Sometimes, you apply an NC every stanza, but another time, you're applying it every two stanzas. Can this be made consistent please?
00:32:809 (1,2) - Spacing inconsistency?
01:35:074 (1) - Add a finish here to follow the music more accurately?
01:40:048 - ^
01:59:633 (1,1) - Uhm, more spacing problem here...

>Normal

00:05:452 (1) - Drag the middle anchor point to (380,104) so the blanket-ish pattern here looks better?
00:37:161 (6) - Drag the middle node to (80,320) and the last one to (24,284) for the same reason as the suggestion above?
01:14:778 (5) - And for blanketing stuff again, middle node @ (352,292) and (456,356)?
01:29:801 (5,1) - Eh wait, what's with the spacing here...
01:36:939 (5) - Remove the clap here? It breaks the hitsound pattern and is just unfitting and loud.
01:41:913 (6) - ^
01:46:887 - ^

>Sakuya's Hard

00:12:602 (6,1) - Somehow swapping the NC here makes the play more comfortable... at least for me.
00:44:312 (4,5) - This also feels more comfortable.
00:44:933 (6,1) - Same as 00:12:602 (6,1).
01:08:871 (4,5,6) - Also try this, with (4) stacked above (5)'s head?
01:16:799 - 01:17:110 - I'm sure as hell the vocals here just demand to be mapped... Your choice, though, but I feel kinda awkward while playing here.
01:36:162 (3,4) - This pattern is kinda deceiving, IMO. These can be easily read as a regular 1/2 jump than a 1/1 one. Change the rhythm so it will be like 02:06:957 (3,4)?
01:44:711 (7,1) - Also swap NC like 00:12:602 (6,1)?
02:15:506 (5,1) - ^
02:18:615 (2) - Make this a 1/2 slider with one repeat to follow the vocal at 02:18:770? Similar case to 01:16:799 - 01:17:110...
02:20:480 (6,1) - Swap NC too here? (Yep, same as 00:12:602 (6,1)).

>Insane

00:02:809 (1,2) - Combining them into a 1/2 slider that repeats once (using the (1) slider) will create a better flow, IMO.
00:18:353 (2,4) - (2)'s end overlaps a large part of (4). I suggest to move (4) out from (2) since the overlap just look weird.
00:30:322 (3,1,2) - The spacing change here is somewhat unreadable. Probably just for me, but yeah, just saying.
00:34:985 (1,2) - I would've liked you to swap the NC here to follow the stanza because applying NCs according to the pattern while disregarding the stanza is not really a good thing to do, but I'll let this one slip.
00:38:871 (1,2) - Same as 00:02:809 (1,2).
00:40:115 (1,2) - The jump here, while actually fits to the song, is kinda unexpected...
00:46:332 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This fits with the vocal, and I think following it here is the best choice. The current rhythm doesn't seem to actually follow anything consistently...
01:06:695 (4) - What about lengthening the slider to 01:06:928 since there's a sound there and it's louder than 01:06:851?
01:07:317 (6,1) - Swap NC? I think the combo is too long...
01:09:027 (2,3,4) - Hmm, change them into two 1/2 sliders with a repeat? Far more comfortable for this place, IMO.
01:11:514 (2,3) - ^ (Just one slider ofc.)
01:41:291 (6,7,8) - Considering the song's intensity is constant here (in easier terms, there's nothing in the song that indicates the need of a spacing increase), this pattern can get really confusing...
01:47:043 (3,4,5,6) - I'd remove (6), move (4) and (5) 1/2-beats to the right of the timeline, and add a repeat for (3). Also feels better than the previous rhythm.
02:05:247 (7,8) - Ctrl+G? The flow is better like that, IMO.
02:10:843 (8,1) - Swap NC? I think it should be obvious why.
02:15:817 (7,1) - ^
02:17:060 (3,4,5,6) - Basically same as 01:47:043 (3,4,5,6).

Well, that's it I guess?

Good luck on the way

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-07-19T11:25:52+00:00

SPOILER

Hinsvar wrote:
Hi; I'm modding here~

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
Turn off the letterbox. There is a video here. Turning it on will make the letterbox overlap the video during breaks.Done!
>Normal
00:05:452 (1) - Drag the middle anchor point to (380,104) so the blanket-ish pattern here looks better? Looks better like this imo
00:37:161 (6) - Drag the middle node to (80,320) and the last one to (24,284) for the same reason as the suggestion above?It's taken over from the other note, so no
01:14:778 (5) - And for blanketing stuff again, middle node @ (352,292) and (456,356)?Done!
01:29:801 (5,1) - Eh wait, what's with the spacing here... Done!
01:36:939 (5) - Remove the clap here? It breaks the hitsound pattern and is just unfitting and loud. Somehow fixed
01:41:913 (6) - ^ ^
01:46:887 - ^ ^
>Insane
00:02:809 (1,2) - Combining them into a 1/2 slider that repeats once (using the (1) slider) will create a better flow, IMO. Done!
00:18:353 (2,4) - (2)'s end overlaps a large part of (4). I suggest to move (4) out from (2) since the overlap just look weird.Done!
00:30:322 (3,1,2) - The spacing change here is somewhat unreadable. Probably just for me, but yeah, just saying. Increased the spacing
00:34:985 (1,2) - I would've liked you to swap the NC here to follow the stanza because applying NCs according to the pattern while disregarding the stanza is not really a good thing to do, but I'll let this one slip.
00:38:871 (1,2) - Same as 00:02:809 (1,2). Done!
00:40:115 (1,2) - The jump here, while actually fits to the song, is kinda unexpected... I'll leave it like this
00:46:332 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This fits with the vocal, and I think following it here is the best choice. The current rhythm doesn't seem to actually follow anything consistently...Done!
01:06:695 (4) - What about lengthening the slider to 01:06:928 since there's a sound there and it's louder than 01:06:851?Done!
01:07:317 (6,1) - Swap NC? I think the combo is too long...Done!
01:09:027 (2,3,4) - Hmm, change them into two 1/2 sliders with a repeat? Far more comfortable for this place, IMO. Feels good like this
01:11:514 (2,3) - ^ (Just one slider ofc.) Nope
01:41:291 (6,7,8) - Considering the song's intensity is constant here (in easier terms, there's nothing in the song that indicates the need of a spacing increase), this pattern can get really confusing...Done!
01:47:043 (3,4,5,6) - I'd remove (6), move (4) and (5) 1/2-beats to the right of the timeline, and add a repeat for (3). Also feels better than the previous rhythm. Hmm it seems okay for me
02:05:247 (7,8) - Ctrl+G? The flow is better like that, IMO. Not really
02:10:843 (8,1) - Swap NC? I think it should be obvious why.Done!
02:15:817 (7,1) - ^Done!
02:17:060 (3,4,5,6) - Basically same as 01:47:043 (3,4,5,6).I like it as it is
Well, that's it I guess?

Good luck on the way

SPOILER

[ Sana ] wrote:
Hi~ from my queue

Insane
00:05:452 (1,4) - overlap perfectly They are

00:19:908 (6,7) - remove them No

00:42:446 (6,9) - NC Should be okay since it's following the pattern

00:43:379 (3) - remove NC ^

01:27:288 (6) - remove circle No

01:42:846 (6,3,4) - overlapDone!

02:15:972 (8,2,3) - ^Done!

02:28:563 (2) - ctrl + g Uhm, no

Done. GL

Thanks for the mods!

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-07-25T20:04:32+00:00

winber1 wrote:
Sakuya's Hard
00:02:032 (5) - Something like this is better imo. http://puu.sh/3DQus.jpg Fixed
00:19:130 (4) - New combo Fixed
00:23:794 (4) - I would do the same thing as 00:21:307 (4,5) - to keep consistency, otherwise you do this interesting off-beat rhythm (which sounds pretty cool) that seems misplaced. Doing it again kinda asserts the fact that "yes, it's meant to be there." Also, doing it a second time amplifies the effect.Fixed
01:32:120 - I feel like adding a note here prepares the continuous flow of 1/2 tick notes better. Just my opinion though. Fixed
01:49:374 (2) - Consider removing the repeat and adding a note with a finish. Nah, it'll be fine

Thxs winber <3

fanzhen0019 wrote:
Sakuya's Hard

Hitsounds
Add clap at these point.Just use the drum clap.It will make some sense imo.
00:42:602 (4) - Fixed
00:44:467 -
00:44:778 -
00:47:576 -
00:48:819 - Fixed on next note instead
02:10:221 - Clap here. sry I would like to keep the claps on the downbeats =v=
02:22:967 - ^ Fixed
02:25:454 - ^ Fixed
02:27:941 - ^ Fixed
Arrangement & Design
Fine!(In fact I think my Hard mapping style is a bit similar to you... omg xD!!

Thanks a lot fanzhen~!

Xinely wrote:

Hard
00:30:011 (8) - ctrl+G? hmm trying to avoid a lot of jumps but i'll think
00:40:115 (1) - finish in tail? not enough emphasis in bgm imo
00:44:933 (6) - finish in repeat? Fixed
00:48:975 (6) - NC for consistency? Fixed
01:43:778 (6,1) - swap NC for consistency? Fixed somewhere else, thxs for bringing it up

Thank you Xinely

[ Sana ] wrote:
Sakuya's Hard
01:26:031 (2,3,4,5) - how about this rythm? sorry for being so slow that the link expired /shot

01:46:265 (3,4) -
^

02:06:957 (3,4) - make same shape
I was trying to make the cursor flow downwards

Thxs Sana xD

Hinsvar wrote:
>Sakuya's Hard
00:12:602 (6,1) - Somehow swapping the NC here makes the play more comfortable... at least for me. sry orz I'd prefer to start on the strong tone like 00:15:400 (1) -
00:44:312 (4,5) - This also feels more comfortable. i got kinda confused but I changed it
00:44:933 (6,1) - Same as 00:12:602 (6,1). Here I feel like the NC defintiely starts on a different tone
01:08:871 (4,5,6) - Also try this, with (4) stacked above (5)'s head? Fixed but didn't stack
01:16:799 - 01:17:110 - I'm sure as hell the vocals here just demand to be mapped... Your choice, though, but I feel kinda awkward while playing here. Fixed, originally, I was trying to make it more lenient before the next notes
01:36:162 (3,4) - This pattern is kinda deceiving, IMO. These can be easily read as a regular 1/2 jump than a 1/1 one. Change the rhythm so it will be like 02:06:957 (3,4)? Compared to the rest of the map, theres a lot of distance between these and the AR isn't that slow i think. but idk yet lol
01:44:711 (7,1) - Also swap NC like 00:12:602 (6,1)? same as before
02:15:506 (5,1) - ^
02:18:615 (2) - Make this a 1/2 slider with one repeat to follow the vocal at 02:18:770? Similar case to 01:16:799 - 01:17:110... these are to "slow down" the part so i don't risk any heart attacks into the next section. I think the instruments are also calming down so I wanted to emphasize that
02:20:480 (6,1) - Swap NC too here? (Yep, same as 00:12:602 (6,1)). sorry =v=;

Thanks so much Hinsvar!

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128,252,144211,2,0,P|152:180|108:108,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,32,144677,2,0,L|232:56,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,92,144988,2,0,P|360:84|396:68,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,156,145454,2,0,P|240:204|236:240,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,316,145765,6,0,P|344:340|428:320,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,248,146231,2,0,P|360:184|380:88,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,160,146698,2,0,P|364:180|288:152,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,147164,2,0,B|176:100|140:116|100:132|60:124,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,52,147630,2,0,P|144:100|116:200,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,344,148252,6,0,L|256:184,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,148718,2,0,L|356:280,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,149185,2,0,L|248:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,44,149496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,100,149651,2,0,P|108:136|112:180,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,260,149962,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,292,150117,2,0,B|264:296|300:272|340:244|384:252,2,160,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,150817,12,0,153459,0:0:0:0:

Tenshichan

601 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-07-30T20:16:59+00:00

Xinely wrote:

Rain
00:32:187 (5) - 256,264? imo when slow music better without jump Moved them a bit closer. I rather don't want to remove the jumps in the calm part because they actually fit in very well while playing, and they are easily catchable.
00:40:270 (5) - 440,200? due from slow music become hard music I don't move this fruit, because: It actually is a transition to the next jump part, which goes right - left - right - left, if I move the note there and create a hyperdash, it would be left - left - right - left and completely break the symmetry in this pattern, which was the general idea behind it.
01:03:897 - add note in 280,192? This pattern follows vocals only.
01:10:115 (1,2,3) - maybe try http://puu.sh/3ELLh.jpg? I like it, changed.
02:00:566 (5) - based music, maybe you can try SV 1,25x or 1,5x to make more challenge I don't want to change the SV here, because I think the slider length how it is now is already fine and the overall difficulty in this diff is decent too. However, I made a few changes here myself and created a better flow.
02:10:765 - add note? No, because it neither changes the gameplay not does it really blend in there with the pattern.
02:20:791 (2) - finish in head ye

Thanks for mod Xinely! :3
http://puu.sh/3PE4c.osu

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,565 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2013-08-02T13:26:15+00:00

@Tenshichan: This is how a Rain is supposed to be: clean, readable and fun to play. Map more CTB diffs!

Warum sollen wir noch warten? GEAPFELT!

/me runs

Stefan

Global Moderator

10,425 posts

Joined January 2011

Stefan 2013-08-02T13:28:05+00:00

Deif wrote:
GEAPFELT!

/me runs

Oh.. my.. god.. I will get you, deif. :<

Tenshichan

601 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-08-02T13:31:05+00:00

yay thanks deif \o/

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-08-02T13:46:22+00:00

Deif wrote:
@Tenshichan: This is how a Rain is supposed to be: clean, readable and fun to play. Map more CTB diffs!

Warum sollen wir noch warten? GEAPFELT!

/me runs

Solange du uns nicht veräppelst

Hopefully this won't take to long now for this map to get ranked

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-08-02T16:42:01+00:00

Deif wrote:
GEAPFELT!

/me runs

Geapfelt Lmaoooo

Alarido

1,744 posts

Joined September 2012

Alarido 2013-08-03T00:12:12+00:00

Deif wrote:
@Tenshichan: This is how a Rain is supposed to be: clean, readable and fun to play. Map more CTB diffs!

Warum sollen wir noch warten? GEAPFELT!

/me runs

Congratz Haya ^^

Thanks Deif ^^

And let's Rank it !!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

Black Abyss

51 posts

Joined April 2012

Black Abyss 2013-08-04T19:38:03+00:00

Rank this finally, can't wait D:<
Dis map so gud.

those

3,135 posts

Joined November 2010

those 2013-08-15T00:00:36+00:00

[General]

Please get the timing checked out; since the timing point at 01:30:100 - isn't snapped to the previous timing, I am convinced that the timing also changes at 01:29:801 - . Assuming 01:30:100 - is accurate, a bpm value of 200.5 at 89801 would make 01:30:100 - snapped. Naturally, you will want to Omit first bar line for this timing point. Consult others to see if this works.

[Rain]

01:48:752 (1,2,1,2) - These would be more dramatic if the slopes were less steep as the stream progresses, requiring players to be more and more accurate toward the end of the stream. Suggested fix: reverse the order of 01:48:752 (1,2,1,2) - , flip horizontally, and restack 01:49:996 (3) - .

[Insane]

This map focuses (too) heavily on symmetry based on rotating and reflecting polygonal patterns. As a result, there are various places in the map where spacing feels forced (for example, 00:30:633 (1,2) - compared to 00:31:721 (4,5,6) - ). I strongly recommend against so many iterations of such rotational patterns as 01:40:359 (3,4,5,6,7) - and 02:03:382 (1,2,3,4,5) - .
00:40:115 (1) - I really don't like the positioning of this object. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/927721, it would synergize with 00:19:597 (4,5,6) - as well.
00:41:825 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Feels really forced. Consider replacing these with a series of 1/2 sliders instead.
01:32:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Feels like you've really limited your options by choosing to use such large spacing for symmetry.
02:02:760 (8) - Flows awkwardly here. 02:02:449 (6,7,8) - suggests 02:02:760 (8,9) - should have a more vertically stretched elliptical flow structure. Otherwise, 02:02:760 (8) - can go leftwards.

[Normal]

01:02:965 - The problem with sliderticks like this is that in order to simulate the same hitsound as 01:00:477 (2) - , you will need to incorporate the hitnormal audio track into it as well. This rhythmic arrangement isn't a horrible idea either: http://puu.sh/42ii1.jpg
01:04:519 (6) - Same idea, I recommend http://puu.sh/42imq.jpg

Please see to that you at least take my suggestions regarding symmetry in Insane into consideration before we proceed with this map. Best of luck!

Tenshichan

601 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2013-08-15T17:09:02+00:00

^ Fixed.

http://puu.sh/42Qi6.osu

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-08-16T16:26:43+00:00

Fixed almost everything, thanks those.

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,149 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-08-28T07:49:06+00:00

Haya i'm here for your mod~ o/

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[bomber's Easy]
with a high BPM song like this, AR4 feels too fast for beginners to react, so reduce the AR by 1 to make it beginner friendly for them during gameplay.
00:02:965 (2) - make this slider look like (1) because it'll be symmetrical and more fun and straightforward for beginners to follow during gameplay IMO.
00:05:141 (1,1) - this is a big issue here because 1 the spinner is too long but i can understand that, what bothers me is where the note starts and that can be really awkward for beginners to follow during gameplay, so to make it look a lot easier to follow for beginners to follow, you should delete (1) and replace (2,3,4) for a repeat slider. it'll be a lot easier, straightforward, and fun to follow for beginners during gameplay.
00:16:332 (2,3) - you can make this pattern a lot easier if you remove (3) and add a repeat on (2) since it ends at the same spot as (3). instead of making beginners guess the timing for (3), they can simply hold the keys while it follows the music during gameplay.
00:18:819 (2,3,1) - you can do 2 things here; make the pattern easier or follow the vocals instead. to make the pattern easier to follow, you should do the same suggestion as above, or if you want to follow the vocals, then reduce (2) by 1/2, move (3) down by 1/2, and add a 2/1 slider to finish it off. personally i find that following the vocals a lot easier to follow during gameplay since it focuses on the vocals. it should look like this or something similar to that.
00:40:270 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - you should do easier patterns than this because patterns like this seem to belong in a normal diff, so try to use easier patterns like 2/1 sliders and 1/1 patterns. i highly suggest that you use this code in the box so that it'd be easier to follow in vocls during gameplay. NOTE that you have to do the hitsounding yourself.

SPOILER

352,48,40270,6,0,P|252:60|200:88,2,160
412,100,41825,2,0,P|428:144|416:188,2,80
352,48,42757,6,0,P|240:28|108:56,1,240
120,132,44001,2,0,P|232:152|364:124,1,240
424,88,45244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,192,45866,6,0,L|300:356,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,76,47731,6,0,P|300:192|260:76,1,320
108,132,49597,1,8,0:0:0:0:

01:04:208 (3) - ik you can make a smoother slider than this because this doesn't flow nicely to the song during gameplay IMO. maybe something like this would make it more flowy to the song during gameplay IMO.
01:07:317 (2) - remove the finish at the repeat arrow because as it stands, it sounds too distracting and unfitting to follow for beginners during gameplay.
01:09:804 (4) - ^
01:20:691 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this might be a problem for players to react in time and to read because from a beginner's point of view, it'd look really confusing and they might not know where to start the pattern. i highly suggest that you re-map the same placement so that it'd be easier to read. i'm not saying that this is a bad pattern, but i'm only saying this because since it's the easiest diff, it'd be easier to make sure everything is visible for beginners to read during gameplay.
01:27:602 (1,1) - the timing gap in this pattern is way too soon for beginners. since this is a high BPM song, beginners won't be able to react in time for the slider, so for this one, remove (1) and extend the spinner to 01:30:100, also remove the circle at 01:31:032 so that beginners have plenty of time to react to the next note during gameplay.
01:36:317 (3) - for this one, you should make this symmetrical like this so that it'd look more smoother and more fun for beginners to follow during gameplay IMO.
01:45:644 (2) - same as 01:07:317, but it's the whistle at the sliderbody.
01:46:887 (1) - replace this spinner for a pattern of circles and sliders because the spinner doesn't fit with the vocals at all and it doesn't fit with the BGM at all during gameplay.
01:57:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - for this one, replace this for a 2/2? repeat slider(a slider starting at 01:57:923, and adding a repeat) followed by the same slider starting at 01:58:856 and ending at 01:59:332. it'll be a lot easier to follow, as well as straightforward for beginners during gameplay.
02:09:599 (2,3) - i think you can make this look more fun and easier to follow if you make (2) a 1/1 repeat followed by a circle during gameplay.
02:19:547 (1,2,3,4) - same as above, but replace (1,2,3) for a 1/1 repeat slider.
02:30:117 (3) - same as 01:07:317.

[Normal]
00:00:478 (1) - perhaps you can flip this the other way like this so that it'd look more easier to follow for an introduction during gameplay?
00:02:965 (1,2) - this pattern breaks consistency with the very 1st note since the guitar follows the same phrase, so for this one, replace this pattern for a 3/2 slider...in other words, the same slider as the very 1st note.
00:07:939 (1,2) - ^
00:34:985 (1,2) - in this part, (2) should be the NC and (1) shouldn't because the vocals change at (2), not at (1) since the vocals are connected from the previous note during gameplay.
00:37:628 - maybe you can add a circle here to follow the vocals, and to make it fun to follow for players during gameplay?
00:41:825 (3,4) - try stacking this on 00:39:338 (3) - to make the transition look a lot smoother and a lot neater as well since it's perfectly stacked during gameplay IMO.
01:02:032 (2) - perhaps you can do Gtrl+G to make the diff and this part fun for players to follow during gameplay?
01:10:115 (3) - *nazi* why don't you stack this perfectly on the previous (3) to not only make it look neater, but to make a perfect blanket in this part of the song.
02:16:128 (1) - why don't you stack this perfectly on (2) for a smoother transition in this part during gameplay? i find it more fun to follow as well for players IMO.
02:30:739 (1) - replace the finish for a default clap in this part because you can hear the clap in the BGM, therefore, the clap hitsound would show emphasis in the BGM.

[Saku-nya's Hard]
00:01:410 (3,4,5) - since you map mainly using sliders, how about replacing this for 2 1/1 sliders, the 1st one starting at the 1/1 tick, and the 2nd one starting at the 1/2 tick. it'll follow the music a lot better and it'll flow smoother during gameplay IMO.
00:23:794 (4) - perhaps you can curve this slider like this so that the transition from (4,5,6) feel more fluent and more comfortable to get to for players during gameplay IMO.
00:47:421 (4) - maybe you can make this slider look like (2) for a somewhat symmetric pattern here during gameplay? i find it more fun to follow for players as well IMO. it should look something like this.
02:30:817 (1) - same as normal, but this time, you should add it.

[Insane]
00:05:452 (1,2,3) - this is the only pattern that doesn't seem to fit with the guitar. it makes it sound like this was added randomly--no offense but this is what i personally think, so for this one, remove (2,3), and add a circle followed by a 1/1 slider so that it'd follow the music a lot accurately during gameplay.
00:19:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i like the pattern, but it doesn't follow the BGM correctly, so what i'm highly suggesting is that you replace all this for this code i'm gonna provide for you in the box. you can change it anyway you like, bit i highly suggest that you use the rhythm i provided since it follow the music during gameplay. please note that the hitsounds are on you.

SPOILER

220,336,19130,6,0,P|168:344|124:336,1,90
340,272,19441,2,0,P|392:264|436:272,1,90
444,280,19674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,292,19752,2,0,P|468:336|452:380,1,90
424,196,20063,2,0,P|412:152|428:108,1,90
476,24,20374,1,4,0:0:0:0:

00:31:099 (2) - this circle doesn't seem to fit with this calmness of this part, so i highly suggest that you remove it because of that.
01:34:763 (1,2,3,4) - ik you're following the vocals in this, but this stream is overmapped because there's no drums here and it feels as if it appears so suddenly during gameplay. follow the music instead. replace this for either a 1/2 slider or 2 circles for that purpose.
01:37:250 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:42:224 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:05:558 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:30:817 (1) - same as normal.

and that's it. overall not bad, but the easy, normal and insane diffs need more work on flow, structure, and rhythm placement. the only diffs that's ready for bubble is the hard diff and the CtB diff according to Deif. if you can improve on those 3 things, then i'm sure that this map will get ranked in no time. anyways GL and don't give up on this map

.

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-08-28T11:00:13+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
[bomber's Easy]
with a high BPM song like this, AR4 feels too fast for beginners to react, so reduce the AR by 1 to make it beginner friendly for them during gameplay. Imo that is silly, since I believe too many objects at once are way more confusing for beginners, especially since beginners tend to click on circles way to early. 00:42:757 (1,2,3,4) - you see all 4 objects with AR4 and with AR3 you already see the next combo pop up. It is arguably if that makes such a big difference. I reduce it for now but I really believe this low AR logic for Easys does not work with all songs like this one.
00:02:965 (2) - make this slider look like (1) because it'll be symmetrical and more fun and straightforward for beginners to follow during gameplay IMO. actually it is more boring, less fun and does not make much difference. Maybe more straightforward but it just does not feel right
00:05:141 (1,1) - this is a big issue here because 1 the spinner is too long but i can understand that, what bothers me is where the note starts and that can be really awkward for beginners to follow during gameplay, so to make it look a lot easier to follow for beginners to follow, you should delete (1) and replace (2,3,4) for a repeat slider. it'll be a lot easier, straightforward, and fun to follow for beginners during gameplay. fix'd. I have to say though that (1,2,3,4,1) looked soooooooo good imo, but I know that it is close to the spinner my argument was always that the spinner is so long that you already cleared it a long time ago so you can stop spinning and concentrate on the circle but I guess Beginners tend to spin so much and so long until it is finished ... so yeah :/ fix'd it
00:16:332 (2,3) - you can make this pattern a lot easier if you remove (3) and add a repeat on (2) since it ends at the same spot as (3). instead of making beginners guess the timing for (3), they can simply hold the keys while it follows the music during gameplay. mkay
00:18:819 (2,3,1) - you can do 2 things here; make the pattern easier or follow the vocals instead. to make the pattern easier to follow, you should do the same suggestion as above, or if you want to follow the vocals, then reduce (2) by 1/2, move (3) down by 1/2, and add a 2/1 slider to finish it off. personally i find that following the vocals a lot easier to follow during gameplay since it focuses on the vocals. it should look like this or something similar to that. It is really awkward to follow the vocal and it plays bad. I do the same as above - repeat slider remove (3) - change position of (1)

00:40:270 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - you should do easier patterns than this because patterns like this seem to belong in a normal diff, so try to use easier patterns like 2/1 sliders and 1/1 patterns. i highly suggest that you use this code in the box so that it'd be easier to follow in vocls during gameplay. NOTE that you have to do the hitsounding yourself.
SPOILER
352,48,40270,6,0,P|252:60|200:88,2,160
412,100,41825,2,0,P|428:144|416:188,2,80
352,48,42757,6,0,P|240:28|108:56,1,240
120,132,44001,2,0,P|232:152|364:124,1,240
424,88,45244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,192,45866,6,0,L|300:356,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,76,47731,6,0,P|300:192|260:76,1,320
108,132,49597,1,8,0:0:0:0:
looks almost like my original version until I had to change so much, because the "Star Rating" was to low ... lol. I take it, thx
01:04:208 (3) - ik you can make a smoother slider than this because this doesn't flow nicely to the song during gameplay IMO. maybe something like this would make it more flowy to the song during gameplay IMO. meh, not that much of a difference
01:07:317 (2) - remove the finish at the repeat arrow because as it stands, it sounds too distracting and unfitting to follow for beginners during gameplay. I use a clap instead then, that guitar thingy sound calls for a hitsound
01:09:804 (4) - ^ removed

01:20:691 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this might be a problem for players to react in time and to read because from a beginner's point of view, it'd look really confusing and they might not know where to start the pattern. i highly suggest that you re-map the same placement so that it'd be easier to read. i'm not saying that this is a bad pattern, but i'm only saying this because since it's the easiest diff, it'd be easier to make sure everything is visible for beginners to read during gameplay. I probaly will ask some beginners to test this, so I can see better if it is really that hard to read, because I really like this pattern

01:27:602 (1,1) - the timing gap in this pattern is way too soon for beginners. since this is a high BPM song, beginners won't be able to react in time for the slider, so for this one, remove (1) and extend the spinner to 01:30:100, also remove the circle at 01:31:032 so that beginners have plenty of time to react to the next note during gameplay. okay
01:36:317 (3) - for this one, you should make this symmetrical like this so that it'd look more smoother and more fun for beginners to follow during gameplay IMO. It was done for a purpose because the flow it gets is more fun to follow IMO
01:45:644 (2) - same as 01:07:317, but it's the whistle at the sliderbody. k
01:46:887 (1) - replace this spinner for a pattern of circles and sliders because the spinner doesn't fit with the vocals at all and it doesn't fit with the BGM at all during gameplay. done, removed spinner added notes ends where spinner originally ended
01:57:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - for this one, replace this for a 2/2? repeat slider(a slider starting at 01:57:923, and adding a repeat) followed by the same slider starting at 01:58:856 and ending at 01:59:332. it'll be a lot easier to follow, as well as straightforward for beginners during gameplay. to be honest ... I have no clue what you are telling here .__. anyway
" it'll be a lot easier to follow, as well as straightforward for beginners during gameplay." About that being easier okay I can agree with, even though I don't consider this difficult for an Easy diff at all ... I have no idea though why it should be more straight forward? These are 5 circles in one line, no crazy zigzags, overlapping, repeating square patterns with 45° to each (4) ...
just 5 Circles with a very clear path ...
02:09:599 (2,3) - i think you can make this look more fun and easier to follow if you make (2) a 1/1 repeat followed by a circle during gameplay. actually repeat sliders always look less fun. 02:09:599 (2) - and 02:10:221 (3) - follow the vocal pretty well, between those two I hear nothing that needs a slider actually
02:19:547 (1,2,3,4) - same as above, but replace (1,2,3) for a 1/1 repeat slider. I would like to have it as it is for the moment, because this seems like a nice finale before it goes over to the outro ... if you can call this so
02:30:117 (3) - same as 01:07:317. okay

WHY SO MUCH COLOR @.@ and then it is always my answer colors (red=denied) (green=applied)
mkay grey
--------------------
fix'd everything/ denied points I don't agree with
only that one point about the pattern I will think about that

ABDäit

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Rock, Scissors, Paper.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 89722
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:Rock, Scissors, Paper
Artist:ONE OK ROCK
ArtistUnicode:ONE OK ROCK
Creator:Haya
Version:bomber's Easy
Source:
Tags:nicovideo mad amv Tenshichan Bomber34 LunarSakuya Sakuya Bomber
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Last edited by bomber34 2013-08-28T17:52:07+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-08-28T16:56:38+00:00

SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:
Haya i'm here for your mod~ o/

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Green: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comments, Advice, or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Normal]
00:00:478 (1) - perhaps you can flip this the other way like this so that it'd look more easier to follow for an introduction during gameplay? Done!
00:02:965 (1,2) - this pattern breaks consistency with the very 1st note since the guitar follows the same phrase, so for this one, replace this pattern for a 3/2 slider...in other words, the same slider as the very 1st note. Done!
00:07:939 (1,2) - ^ Done!
00:34:985 (1,2) - in this part, (2) should be the NC and (1) shouldn't because the vocals change at (2), not at (1) since the vocals are connected from the previous note during gameplay. Done!
00:37:628 - maybe you can add a circle here to follow the vocals, and to make it fun to follow for players during gameplay? Done!
00:41:825 (3,4) - try stacking this on 00:39:338 (3) - to make the transition look a lot smoother and a lot neater as well since it's perfectly stacked during gameplay IMO. It's not noticeable during gameplay
01:02:032 (2) - perhaps you can do Gtrl+G to make the diff and this part fun for players to follow during gameplay?Sorry but I am not a fan of not using Distance Snap in a Normal diff
01:10:115 (3) - *nazi* why don't you stack this perfectly on the previous (3) to not only make it look neater, but to make a perfect blanket in this part of the song. My bad
02:16:128 (1) - why don't you stack this perfectly on (2) for a smoother transition in this part during gameplay? i find it more fun to follow as well for players IMO. Again, it's unnoticeable during gameplay
02:30:739 (1) - replace the finish for a default clap in this part because you can hear the clap in the BGM, therefore, the clap hitsound would show emphasis in the BGM. Done!

[Insane]
00:05:452 (1,2,3) - this is the only pattern that doesn't seem to fit with the guitar. it makes it sound like this was added randomly--no offense but this is what i personally think, so for this one, remove (2,3), and add a circle followed by a 1/1 slider so that it'd follow the music a lot accurately during gameplay. Done!
00:19:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i like the pattern, but it doesn't follow the BGM correctly, so what i'm highly suggesting is that you replace all this for this code i'm gonna provide for you in the box. you can change it anyway you like, bit i highly suggest that you use the rhythm i provided since it follow the music during gameplay. please note that the hitsounds are on you. Done!
220,336,19130,6,0,P|168:344|124:336,1,90
340,272,19441,2,0,P|392:264|436:272,1,90
444,280,19674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,292,19752,2,0,P|468:336|452:380,1,90
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476,24,20374,1,4,0:0:0:0:
00:31:099 (2) - this circle doesn't seem to fit with this calmness of this part, so i highly suggest that you remove it because of that. Done!
01:34:763 (1,2,3,4) - ik you're following the vocals in this, but this stream is overmapped because there's no drums here and it feels as if it appears so suddenly during gameplay. follow the music instead. replace this for either a 1/2 slider or 2 circles for that purpose.
01:37:250 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:42:224 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:05:558 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Sorry but these will stay. These streams give a huge part of the gameplay feeling and they fit quite well with the vocals imo. A map being overmapped is also subjective and imo it's not overmapped at all.
02:30:817 (1) - same as normal. Done!

and that's it. overall not bad, but the easy, normal and insane diffs need more work on flow, structure, and rhythm placement. the only diffs that's ready for bubble is the hard diff and the CtB diff according to Deif. if you can improve on those 3 things, then i'm sure that this map will get ranked in no time. anyways GL and don't give up on this map .

Thanks for the mod Byakugan!

Saten

Global Moderator

3,871 posts

Joined August 2010

Saten 2013-09-07T21:16:49+00:00

[General]
Feel free to ask me if you want to move the title text to 00:20:392 - (aka the break) instead (poke me in-game)

Timing

1. Offset: 496ms BPM: 193,00
2. Offset: 80 081ms BPM: 191,00
3. Offset: 88 876ms BPM: 195,00
4. Offset: 90 106ms BPM: 193,00
5. Offset: 119 328ms BPM: 173,00 Omit first bar line
6. Offset: 119 674ms BPM: 266,00 Omit first bar line
7. Offset: 119 898ms BPM: 236,00
8. Offset: 120 152ms BPM: 271,00 Omit first bar line
9. Offset: 120 594ms BPM: 188,00 Omit first bar line
10. Offset: 120 913ms BPM: 193,00

I think this sounds way more accurate
Also keep in mind that 02:00:025 - is a 1/4 triple, and 02:00:299 - is a 1/3 triple. A regular stream won't work here
The bpm's over 200 could easily be halved if you really care that much, but that would also mean that it'll be 1/8 and 1/6 instead

[Insane]
Please use Stack Leniency 7, some notes becomes completely covered by the previous object.
01:06:091 (1,2) - move these to x:364 y:196 if you consider changing back the stack leniency to 7, something like this

SPOILER

It'll look like this in game mode

02:21:586 (3,4) - using a regular 1/2 slider on an offbeat without anything else right after it after makes it kinda awkward imo. It's also because of the spacing. You should try to have an equal spacing between these sliders 02:21:120 (2,3,4) -

I used the new timing here when I modded, but not on the others.

[Sakuya]
Please, use AR 8. a lot of the overlaps and jumps makes me so confused x.x
01:26:267 (3,4,5,6) - I know what you're doing here, but I don't think it's such a good idea. Most will probably hit them too late.

[bomber]
00:05:141 (1,1) - I find this really confusing, especially when the hitcircle is on an offbeat
02:23:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - using too many like this in a row makes confusing imo. Try to make something similar to what you made in the beginning instead.

The mapset itself was fine imo. I was just more concerned about the timing, it might mess up things if you tried to map on the small part before the last chorus. You might have to hax some slider-ends to make it snap correctly.

anyways, good luck!

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-09-12T21:30:47+00:00

SPOILER

Saten wrote:
[General]
Feel free to ask me if you want to move the title text to 00:20:392 - (aka the break) instead (poke me in-game)

Timing
1. Offset: 496ms BPM: 193,00
2. Offset: 80 081ms BPM: 191,00
3. Offset: 88 876ms BPM: 195,00
4. Offset: 90 106ms BPM: 193,00
5. Offset: 119 328ms BPM: 173,00 Omit first bar line
6. Offset: 119 674ms BPM: 266,00 Omit first bar line
7. Offset: 119 898ms BPM: 236,00
8. Offset: 120 152ms BPM: 271,00 Omit first bar line
9. Offset: 120 594ms BPM: 188,00 Omit first bar line
10. Offset: 120 913ms BPM: 193,00

I think this sounds way more accurate
Also keep in mind that 02:00:025 - is a 1/4 triple, and 02:00:299 - is a 1/3 triple. A regular stream won't work here
The bpm's over 200 could easily be halved if you really care that much, but that would also mean that it'll be 1/8 and 1/6 instead
Done!

[Insane]
Please use Stack Leniency 7, some notes becomes completely covered by the previous object.
01:06:091 (1,2) - move these to x:364 y:196 if you consider changing back the stack leniency to 7, something like this

It'll look like this in game mode
Done!
02:21:586 (3,4) - using a regular 1/2 slider on an offbeat without anything else right after it after makes it kinda awkward imo. It's also because of the spacing. You should try to have an equal spacing between these sliders 02:21:120 (2,3,4) - Done another way!

I used the new timing here when I modded, but not on the others.

The mapset itself was fine imo. I was just more concerned about the timing, it might mess up things if you tried to map on the small part before the last chorus. You might have to hax some slider-ends to make it snap correctly.

anyways, good luck!

Thanks for your mod ~

Kuria

1,390 posts

Joined May 2011

Kuria 2013-10-12T00:03:44+00:00

revive this please ;_;

Diran

8 posts

Joined February 2013

Diran 2013-10-15T07:38:38+00:00

It's a really good map and I have been awaiting its release for awhile, I hope it gets revived, it'd be a shame if it didn't.

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-10-15T17:44:24+00:00

Gonna revive it next week when the autumn holidays come.

Diran

8 posts

Joined February 2013

Diran 2013-10-17T10:02:21+00:00

<3 you for this map

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-10-19T10:56:36+00:00

Saten wrote:
[bomber]
00:05:141 (1,1) - I find this really confusing, especially when the hitcircle is on an offbeat ... HAYA YOU SUCK AT UPDATING ...that is the 3rd time now lol. This was already adressed in a prev. mod. the note or better the slider starts a bit later and on a Beat.
02:23:744 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - using too many like this in a row makes confusing imo. Try to make something similar to what you made in the beginning instead. I personally don't think it is confusing ._. it is very clear to see that this is a zigzag pattern. When you click (1) you only see (2) and (3). And on (2) you see (3) and (4). For the new combo it is the same so I really don't think it is confusing.

anyways, good luck!

Haya learn updating correctly Pleeease

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2013-10-28T13:48:18+00:00

Hinsvar wrote:
So uh, since the awesome map entry is open again, I will just leave this here.

Thanks before

so I'm here

[General]
video offset is not the same in all diffs
I'll check timing later
other's fine

[bomber's Easy]
01:20:709 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this kind of patterns are hard to play for newbies, hope you can make the rhythm easier, or don't overlap the sliders
01:37:567 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - also this, 3 or more than 3 circles in a row are hard to play for newbies too, hope you can change some of them into sliders
01:57:463 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - first, the circles' rhythm is really hard to read for newbies, you can use some sliders first to show the rhythm and then use circles. using circles at first is hard to read. second, the spacing of the circles are small, and suddenly the slider's speed is fast, this is really hard to read, you'd better to make the spacing larger or make the slider speed down a bit
02:05:576 (2,1,2,3) - same as before

[Normal]
02:23:296 (1,2) - this 2 sliders can blanket better

[Sakuya's Hard]
I suggest AR+1 to this diff, the current setting is too low
00:44:019 (3,4) - make them in a line, looks better imo
01:01:117 - I suggest add a note here to follow the drum, or here is a bit empty imo
01:26:285 (3,4,5) - this 3 sliders play really bad, cuz their ends follow the heavy beats in the song but not their heads. circle/slider head fit the heavy beats in music better than slider end/slider repeat. you can put a circle at 01:26:285 - and 2 sldiers from 01:26:363 - to 01:26:599 - , 01:26:677 - to 01:26:913 - , and a circle at 01:26:991 -
01:40:365 (1,2) - they can blanket better
02:17:078 (3,4) - I'd like the spacing be a bit more larger
nice diff

[Insane]
01:06:247 (2,3) - circle first and slider later, rhythm would be better
01:59:501 (9) - slider's end is unsnapped
02:00:299 (6) - ^, and this one neither?
02:16:923 (4,5) - is this manually stack? if not, plaese stack better

[Tenshichan's Rain]
02:00:539 (5) - unsnapped slider end

feel free to call me back then

bomber34

1,529 posts

Joined February 2011

bomber34 2013-10-28T22:41:29+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
[bomber's Easy]
01:20:709 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this kind of patterns are hard to play for newbies, hope you can make the rhythm easier, or don't overlap the sliders redone the pattern, no overlaps anymore :'(

01:37:567 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - also this, 3 or more than 3 circles in a row are hard to play for newbies too, hope you can change some of them into sliders 01:38:810 (1) - is now a slider. Now there are only 3 circles in a row. Nobody can tell me that it is hard to hit 3 in a row, that is just nonsense for me.

01:57:463 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - first, the circles' rhythm is really hard to read for newbies, you can use some sliders first to show the rhythm and then use circles.
using circles at first is hard to read. second, the spacing of the circles are small, and suddenly the slider's speed is fast, this is really hard to read, you'd better to make the spacing larger or make the slider speed down a bit about that bold part: I lol'd. Haven't looked at the map since the timing update Haya made >.> slider wasn't fast .... but now there is a huge BPM jump suddenly orz. Because of the lots of BPM changes I leave a "drain time there" of 1,5 seconds... spinner doesn't fit. Iit somehow feels nice ... have to say though that it starts with a HC now ... but a slider doesn't fit there for the nonbolded part. first two HC are now one slider

02:05:576 (2,1,2,3) - same as before extended the long slider 02:04:021 (1) - to replace 02:05:576 -

And Haya please don't screw up the updating

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Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-10-28T23:02:48+00:00

Updated:

- General
- Easy
- Normal
- Insane
- CTB

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Haya 2013-10-28T23:59:11+00:00

SPOILER

wcx19911123 wrote:
Hinsvar wrote:
So uh, since the awesome map entry is open again, I will just leave this here.

Thanks before
so I'm here

[General]
video offset is not the same in all diffs Done!
I'll check timing later
other's fine

[Normal]
02:23:296 (1,2) - this 2 sliders can blanket better Done!

[Insane]
01:06:247 (2,3) - circle first and slider later, rhythm would be better Done!
01:59:501 (9) - slider's end is unsnapped Done!
02:00:299 (6) - ^, and this one neither? This one is a 1/3 slider
02:16:923 (4,5) - is this manually stack? if not, plaese stack better Done?

feel free to call me back then

(Forgot to post this)
Thanks wcx!

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-10-29T01:40:38+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
[Saku-nya's Hard]
00:01:410 (3,4,5) - since you map mainly using sliders, how about replacing this for 2 1/1 sliders, the 1st one starting at the 1/1 tick, and the 2nd one starting at the 1/2 tick. it'll follow the music a lot better and it'll flow smoother during gameplay IMO. Fixed
00:23:794 (4) - perhaps you can curve this slider like this so that the transition from (4,5,6) feel more fluent and more comfortable to get to for players during gameplay IMO. damn the link expired xD sry
00:47:421 (4) - maybe you can make this slider look like (2) for a somewhat symmetric pattern here during gameplay? i find it more fun to follow for players as well IMO. it should look something like this. Fixed my own way
02:30:817 (1) - same as normal, but this time, you should add it. i'd like to keep it as a finale

Saten wrote:
[Sakuya]
Please, use AR 8. a lot of the overlaps and jumps makes me so confused x.x Fixed
01:26:267 (3,4,5,6) - I know what you're doing here, but I don't think it's such a good idea. Most will probably hit them too late. Fixed

wcx19911123 wrote:
[Sakuya's Hard]
I suggest AR+1 to this diff, the current setting is too low Fixed
00:44:019 (3,4) - make them in a line, looks better imo Fixed
01:01:117 - I suggest add a note here to follow the drum, or here is a bit empty imo Fixed
01:26:285 (3,4,5) - this 3 sliders play really bad, cuz their ends follow the heavy beats in the song but not their heads. circle/slider head fit the heavy beats in music better than slider end/slider repeat. you can put a circle at 01:26:285 - and 2 sldiers from 01:26:363 - to 01:26:599 - , 01:26:677 - to 01:26:913 - , and a circle at 01:26:991 - Fixed
01:40:365 (1,2) - they can blanket better Fixed
02:17:078 (3,4) - I'd like the spacing be a bit more larger Fixed
nice diff thanks

thanks guys! <3

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164,108,130239,2,0,P|200:148|192:248,2,160,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,133037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,168,133348,6,0,P|432:232|376:308,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,84,134125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,44,134280,2,0,P|288:48|252:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,144,134591,2,0,B|140:132|140:132|128:124|128:124|56:112,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,135524,2,0,B|368:288|368:288|380:280|380:280|452:268,2,160,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,328,136457,6,0,P|136:276|236:244,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,208,136923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,152,137078,2,0,L|392:72,1,80
168,164,137545,2,0,P|216:120|224:20,1,160
144,64,138011,2,0,L|64:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,188,138322,6,0,L|96:180,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,138633,2,0,P|260:264|220:360,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,280,139099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,139254,2,0,P|276:192|312:180,1,80
412,220,139565,2,0,L|376:60,2,160,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,140498,2,0,L|136:60,2,160,0|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,304,141275,6,0,P|200:312|272:272,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,141742,2,0,P|384:156|468:164,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,52,142674,2,0,L|200:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,136,142985,2,0,L|212:160,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,228,143296,6,0,P|212:264|128:252,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,188,143762,2,0,P|44:260|88:332,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,252,144229,2,0,P|152:180|108:108,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,32,144695,2,0,L|232:56,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,92,145006,2,0,P|360:84|396:68,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,316,145783,6,0,P|344:340|428:320,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,248,146249,2,0,P|360:184|380:88,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Haya

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