Kirino wrote:

yusoman wrote:

其实总感觉那normal其实没怎么出界的。。。稍微出一点边不也没事么。。。。。音效什么的果然还要再等等吧，其实normal那个还是适度的弄了下音效的。话说感谢mod哦~~

不，就算我发现INSANE出界我也会很不爽。INSANE以上就算了。才NORMAL就要出界，让新手怎么打。这么多地方用非要飞到这么外面。

kueeo wrote:

easy：
00:05:693 (2) - 后面这样的滑条太多了，最好做的舒展一点FIXED，话说舒展是个什么感觉呢。。。。。总之先把弧度放平缓了一些
而且00:04:658 (1,2) - 这样的排列最好先ctrl+c复制00:04:658 (1) - 这个，然后crtl+v改好位置以后按ctrl+shift+r调整角度，能美观很多FIXED，如果前面是1的话复制之后就直接NC了。。。。有点蛋疼，所以我就把那2整形到看起来几乎一样了
00:26:383 (5) - 间隔时间比较长的话弄成NC比较好FIXED
00:43:890 (1,2) - 这样的排列放在easy里面不太好看FIXED，换了一种摆法
01:03:975 (2) - easy最好还是别加速了FIXED
可以多加一点两个拍子长度的滑条，节奏多点变化总感觉变化多了难度就加大了，毕竟是张给新手玩的EZ
滑条的口都是对着里面的，排列有点无聊，形状也应该多点变化，用用四点式，难度没问题适度调整了一下，话说四点式是啥
normal：
00:15:003 (5,6,7) - 这里的block没做好，后面还有很多，如果没有想做成block的话就别这样排列，这样只能让人觉得是没做好FIXED，本来没要做遮挡的，所以改了
00:39:314 (6) - 同一段combo距离一样最好FIXED
hard：
ar8高了，ar7正好，CS3比较合适，hard都这样了，后面要是还有难度可怎么做？FIXED
00:44:652 (2,4,6) - finish的音效最好别放在红线上，因为红线不是重音，效果不好FIXED
01:20:246 (2,3,4) - 最后这个三连多余了这个节奏还是搭调的，所以先没动
对称的排列最好在连续的二分拍节奏使用，一组一组的对称不容易让人发觉，离得太远又感觉这里一堆哪里一堆显得杂乱这个只能慢慢改了，毕竟一组一组的排列其实节奏听起来蛮不错的。。。。

1. 00:03:624 (4) - 既然是insane这个就不需要 能换成其他形式 连打 小滑条都可以

1. 00:08:279 (4) - 这个同上

1. 00:16:296 (2,3,4) - 这个好突然 咱感觉是因为前面的滑条吸引了注意力 能不能把来回的滑条改一下 不然就不能放这种三连

1. 00:18:365 (6,7,8) - 同上

1. 00:24:314 (4,5,6) - 这个距离对么Q.Q快隔了一拍了耶

1. 00:30:521 (1,2,3) - 这个距离也有问题

1. 00:33:883 (2,3,4) - 这个三连为什么要分开 玩不好因为combo的阵型不对音

1. 00:34:917 (7,8,9) - 这个也是

1. 00:41:856 (6) - 这个距离也有问题

1. 00:52:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个不可以这样做 5连打很好为什么要这样？

1. 00:53:297 (8,9,10) - 同上

1. 00:57:491 (8,9) - ....雷同

1. 01:08:042 (7,8,9) - 这个咱只能接受2连+三连 不能接受2+2+1的形式

1. 01:10:330 (1,2,6,7) - - 找人玩一下就知道了 没法读的

1. 01:06:008 (11) - 这个是距离感觉不对7到三连和三连到滑条应该是同样的距离吧 对不对

1. 01:19:991 (1,2,4) - 不需要了。。。

1. 00:51:771 (1) - 转盘前移到红线 因为后面的折返滑条是要时间去读的 给新手留出一定的读图时间

1. 01:19:991 (1) - 没必要。。

1. 00:43:890 (1) - 这个和前一个的距离有问题吧

1. 01:19:991 (1) - 这个在easy里面真的不需要 新人好不容易感觉要fc惹 最后慌神点了个missXD

rinsukir wrote:

看到猫萝我也来骗kd(不对果然猫萝大家都喜欢么

rsr's mod

因为不会作图所以说的有什么不好/不对请多多包涵0v0没关系的啦^^，多谢来凑热闹
小心被zz的我误导ww会选择性采纳的啦

[General]
节奏不错ww多谢没有设置combo colors吗 我这里显示的是皮肤ini设置的颜色好吧这还真没设置，之后再说吧
我想吐槽为什么每个难度的SV都是一样的..有变化吧，easynormal是0.75-1.0，hard是1.0-1.3，insane是1.8-2.0
建议重调SV
部分绿线不知道是用来干什么的好吧我承认部分绿线是多余的，正在着手删
每个难度按ctrl+a一下看看你的排列分布 基本上都挤成一团 边缘可以利用多一点嗯，所以都已经remap
H和I难度的od可以考虑+1?采纳了
hard和insane的跳基本上都是多边形 把一两组跳变成不规则的可能会好一点remap后的insane进行了改进

[Easy]
ez最好不要变sv嗯，确认过了没有变化，稳定的0.75
00:38:279 (2,3) - 可以考虑换成别的梗? 个人感觉ez里note应该都压白线(这里就一处应该还好吧，因为节奏在这放着呢。。。还是重要节奏

[Normal]
nor最好不要变sv+1感觉这个变化还是可以接受的，毕竟不是突然变化
00:03:107 - 前面那根绿线是不是应该对齐这里FIXED
其他柑橘良好什么问题都找不出来ww

[Hard]
00:33:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 类似这样的梗好像太多了 建议改一个这个貌似只用了两次吧。。。意见先保留好了
00:31:038 (3) - 这个可以放得远一点嘛(如果这个梗用来坑人(?)的就无视我的建议吧FIXED

[Insane]
首先作为insane的话感觉太简单了 节奏密一些比较好吧..不然的话这难度可要可不要好吧。。remap过了，应该是在你mod的同时我正在remap
00:08:279 (4,5,6,7,8) - 间距这么宽有点难打..(劈癌死:类似这样的还有几处 自己找找好了w已经通过remap解决
00:12:934 (5) - 00:31:555 (3) - 00:35:693 (1) - 01:15:415 (5) - 这样拉感觉有点难看 红点密一些应该好点其中两个抖动滑条已经取缔了，另外两个是跟着节奏抖动的，不好改
00:37:762 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 如果是我我会直接换成串这个我果然还是想保留。。。。
01:05:246 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这..FIXED，已经处理掉了

就这样了ww骗个kd还真是辛苦(喂嘛，其实也不算骗KD了

1. Red - Unrankable
2. Purple - Highly recommended
3. Black - Just suggestion

• General

1. 歌曲后面有5s的空白部分，你可以考虑去掉它
2. Offset +15
3. 所有难度的Slider Velocity都是1.4，这个不太科学- -建议重新调整（Easy1.0*0.75x Normal1.4*0.75x Hard1.4*1.0x Insane1.6-2.0*1.0x）
   
   Easy
4. HP,AR,OD-1
5. 00:05:693 (4,1) - 间距太远
6. 00:13:969 (5) - clap at end
7. 00:21:210 (1) - 用clap替代结尾的whistle
8. 00:31:555 (1,2,3) - 距离不等，也不像正方形
   改成这样

   
9. 00:38:279 (2,3) - 间距太远
10. 01:12:364 (1) - 放在01:10:330 (3) - 底下
11. 01:16:432 - 如果是我我这里就一个circle收掉了后面不需要，因为后面已经开始声音减弱了
12. 两点建议：1.开着Distance Snap做图且间距不要变，你一开始是1.2x后面又变成了1.3x还有不少跳跃，这在Easy难度中是不太能被允许的。2.合理利用音效
13. 开Open AiMod把所有距离问题全部解决掉，不仅仅是我上面指出的那些，其他难度也是一样
    
    Normal
14. 不要用0.75x的绿线，个人感觉非常没必要
15. 00:03:107 (2,3) - 间距远了
16. 00:04:658 (4) - whistle at end
17. 00:08:279 (4) - 间距远了，移到120:352
18. 00:14:486 (4,1) - 间距太远
19. 00:23:279 (4,5,6) - clap和whistle换下位置，00:23:279 (4) - 可NC
20. 00:46:940 (4,1,2) - 间距不对而且不好看，正好这里又变速实在是……
21. 00:53:805 (1,2,3) - 不好看- -
22. 01:16:432 - 同Easy diff
23. 排版有点乱- -
    
    已经懒了- -距离问题自己开AiMod应该可以解决后面几个难度就不列举了，我专门看下声效问题
    
    Hard
24. 00:04:658 (1,2) - delete whistle at end
25. 00:07:245 (3) - whistle
26. 00:09:314 (3) - delete whistle at end
27. 00:22:762 (5) - delete finish 太突然了
28. 00:31:038 (3) - whistle instead of clap
29. 00:41:347 (4) - clap instead of finish
30. 00:43:890 (1) - 开头finish
31. 01:03:085 (4) - delete whistle
32. 01:03:720 (1) - clap
33. 01:13:381 (3) - delete whistle at end
34. 01:16:432 - 同Easy diff
    
    Insane & Azusa
35. 我承认我看到这里已经没有多少耐心了不好意思，肚子饿了（咕~
36. 粗略看了一下，确实还有非常多的问题需要修改，也不是我一个人的mod所能全部解决的，大概写几点吧
37. 1. 间距问题，虽然Insane难度可以不用太考虑同等间距但至少要让玩家打的舒服，不如insane难度00:03:624 (4,5) - 开场就如此高能许多玩家看到这样的大跳估计只能大喊我去年买了个表然后换难度（目测只有曲大爷能过XD
38. 2. 音效问题，老生常谈了，这张图音效的选择很多而且不会单调，参考我Hard的mod修改一下，所有难度尽量改成一样
    
    先这样吧..等我有空可以再找我irc再帮你检查一下，不过你先改一下吧。祝好运

Hi!) That's my little free mod)

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• 00:10:880 (1) - x 352 y 344
  00:11:398 (2) - x 480 y 344
  00:11:915 (3) - x 480 y 216
  00:12:432 (4) - x 352 y 216

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Setsurei wrote:

SPOILER

[General]
no combo color? light blue & gray would be betterfixed
every changing slider velocity need NCOK,I will try

[Normal]
I just put 0.9x DS here, because I saw at the beginning of your map often use 0.9x
00:03:639 (3) - move up a bitfixed
00:04:673 (4) - x 112 y 304fixed
00:05:708 (5) - x 264 y 248fixed
00:07:260 (2) - x 128 y 120.. clap seems legit here, remove or change to whistleI don't think the note suit the position,so I put it into other place
00:08:294 (4) - x 96 y 352fixed
00:09:329 (5) - x 224 y 352, remove clapfixed,but there is no clap here
00:10:880 (1,2,3,4) - make it square?fixed
00:12:949 (1) - x 232 y 184fixed
00:14:242 (3) - fix distance spacing until the end of note.. 0.9x or 0.8x is your standard for Normal? please be constantIts DS is 0.81,I don't think it have to be changed
00:15:018 (1) - finish on headfixed
00:28:984 (3) - remove clap, no hitsound here is more suitablefixed
00:31:053 (3) - ^I think clap suit here good,I don't want to change it
01:15:938 (5) - ^fixed

[Hard]
00:43:904 (1,2,3) - change the head tail to whistleAll right.....what's the meaning?....I changed the 1's sound into whistle
00:13:984 (1) - x 176 y 96fixed
00:14:242 (2) - x 312 y 144fixed
00:14:501 (3) - x 264 y 280fixed
00:14:760 (4) - x 128 y 232fixed
00:15:018 (1) - stack to ^fixed
00:16:311 (2) - x 227 y 132fixed
00:16:570 (3) - x 326 y 231fixed
00:17:087 (1) - x 432 y 120fixed
00:37:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - stream not clean especially on this spot 00:39:199 (9,10) - change to this?

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120,248,39329,1,8,0:0:0:0:

fixed
00:48:862 (5) - x 440 y 80fixed
00:50:896 (5) - x 432 y 248fixed

[Insane]
00:41:870 - pause here seems legit, add slider or hit circles up to this point 00:42:379 -fixed
00:52:294 (2) - clap in the middle seems weird, remove or just add clap on head (so it will be head and center will have clap)fixed
01:01:192 (5) - add finishfixed,but I don't think it is necessary.

Flower wrote:

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[General]
Azusa的红线和其他的不一样，同时有unsnap 已经催促了。。。。不过貌似他最近比较忙的样子，之后会改的

00:02:199 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:02:326 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:02:453 (4) - Unsnapped circle.

而且为什么还没下音效……这个难度我就不mod了 快去找做这个难度的批评一下

感觉提升的空间还很大，放note的梗可以有意识的整齐一些，音效也可以当然这个涉及到remap，我就不详细讲了。
总之建议remap。

[Insane]
00:03:639 (4,5) - 可以往右一点，看不出重叠的意义来 fixed
00:09:846 (3) - clap可以去掉，或者找个更适合的clap fixed
00:11:398 (2) - 等 - 天国的clap君 fixed
00:16:053 (3) - 加whistle fixed
00:26:398 (1,5,6) - 这一堆没叠好 fixed
00:31:570 (3) - 形状有点捉急 fixed，简单修整了一下。。。。。不过总感觉还是不太好看
00:35:708 (1) - ^ fixed
00:42:379 (2) - clapfixed
00:42:887 (4) - 去掉clapfixed
00:43:396 - 00:43:650 - clapfixed
00:53:057 (3) - 移远一点 fixed
01:04:752 (5) - 莫名的减速没有什么必要 何况也没有加NC fixed
01:06:023 (11) - 同上 而且没叠好 fixed

[Hard]
音效问题同Insane，不再重复fixed
00:13:984 (1,2,3,4,1) - 莫名的跳ignored,不觉得这里哪里莫名了。。。明明是放在这和节奏很搭调的小跳，都连到一起反而显得很乱，不如说这张图梗就在于这些小跳了
00:15:018 (1,2,3) - ^ignored
00:17:087 (1,2,3) - ^ignored
00:19:156 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ignored
00:23:294 (1,2,3,4) - 时间不同距离却一样非常别扭fixed，把4稍微挪远了点
00:28:467 (2,3,4) - 莫名减速ignored，这里的节奏相对前面比较缓和，所以没做小跳，而且已经加了NC
00:33:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 莫名的跳ignored，这里配合背景节奏做的跳，因为后面有ds变化所以已加NC
00:37:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 全部改成滑条的话玩起来更舒服ignored，这个stream准备保留这个样子，都是滑条的话长度上会有些问题
00:46:955 (7,1,2,3) - 时间不同距离却一样非常别扭fixed
00:52:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 莫名的跳ignored，原因同上
后面基本都是同样的问题……很像2007年的图，间距相当随机而且时不时放个没有意义的全屏跳。想要rank的话请务必remap。话说这图已经因为间距问题remap过了，间距问题应该不算很大吧，另外这图主要是走的短连打和小跳，跳也还好啊，还没到需要remap的地步吧

[Normal]
音效问题同Insane，不再重复fixed
没什么明显的问题，不过请关掉grid snap开着distance snap把note重新对一遍fixed

[Easy]
音效问题同Insane，基本还是漏clap。不再重复fixed
00:48:989 (2,3) - 可以去掉finishfixed
01:02:209 (4) - 被挡住了，不好fixed

sheela901 wrote:

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[Easy]

00:26:398 (3) - Spacingfixed，make 3 ctrl+g

[Normal]

00:06:742 (1) - Spacingfixed

00:08:294 (4) - Spacingfixed

00:09:329 (5) - Remove an arrowignored，I don't want to do that because it could lose some rhythm

00:10:363 (6) - Spacingignored,I'm sure there is no problem

[Hard]

00:11:915 (4,5,6) - Maybe this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830891fixed

[Insane]

00:19:156 (1) - Stack with 00:17:605 (2)fixed

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

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[General]
Your preview time is different than the other diffs, check AiMod for help.GD‘s timing change is in progressing

[Normal]
00:03:639 (3,4) - Why not doing this > http://puu.sh/3nNxd/fd2b6a5d3f.pngsome of the rhythm will disappeared...so ignored
00:09:329 (5,6) - players would get confused with this 2-repeat-slider, i suggest you changing it.It feels strange....ignored
00:13:984 (2,1) - small overlapfixed
00:38:811 (4,1) - same as i mentioned on 00:09:329 (5,6) -All right,if remove this reverse,the important rhythm will disppear,so ignored
00:44:921 (2,4) - Why not stacking them?I have tried it but not comfortable.....so...ignored

[Hard]
00:53:820 (1,2,3) - This doesn't look nice, why not making it what you did here > 00:09:329 (1,2,3) -Since the rhythm is much quickly than the begin,the reverse make the sound sounds good,so I can't do something like you mentioned,but I still do some change for it.
00:54:836 (3,6) - another small overlap.Since I have changed it,this problem disappeared

[Insane]
00:10:880 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make a symmetry here? > http://puu.sh/3nNQn/b1184c17a8.pngIt was designed to suit the following slider,so I can't accept that.
00:56:108 (1,4) - Stack these both.fixed

1. Make sure to use same Kiai Time and Colours on all the difficulties for consistency.
2. Disable the Letterbox on all the difficulties since you're not using it.

1. 00:37:777 (1) - This note is kinda too soon after spinner, try to place it a bit more to the center at least, to avoid this issue.
2. 00:54:582 (2) - This note has an ugly overlap with the previous slider, try to avoid it.
3. 01:05:769 (1,2) - Wrong spacing here, make sure to check it carefully.

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:09:329 (5) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing and hard to read for beginners, make sure to change this.
2. 00:38:811 (4) - Same as above for the same reason.
3. 01:08:820 (1) - This spinner is way too short for a Normal, try to do something else here.

Andrea wrote:

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~General~

1. Make sure to use same Kiai Time and Colours on all the difficulties for consistency.kiai will change，but color may not change because Azusa‘s BG is suit that color.
2. Disable the Letterbox on all the difficulties since you're not using it.fixed

~Easy~

1. 00:37:777 (1) - This note is kinda too soon after spinner, try to place it a bit more to the center at least, to avoid this issue.fixed
2. 00:54:582 (2) - This note has an ugly overlap with the previous slider, try to avoid it.fixed
3. 01:05:769 (1,2) - Wrong spacing here, make sure to check it carefully.all right,it is really hard to find,fixed

~Normal~

1. Increase HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.fixed

1. 00:09:329 (5) - Too many slider repeats might be confusing and hard to read for beginners, make sure to change this.I struggled with this for a long time....finally,I changed it.
2. 00:38:811 (4) - Same as above for the same reason.fixed
3. 01:08:820 (1) - This spinner is way too short for a Normal, try to do something else here.fixed

Can't say much about the rest, it's a simple map.All right,what's the meaning of simple?

Thanks your mod,and your mod is really helpful(though it is very short).

sammy711 wrote:

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我也来骗点kds好了 说好的星星呢。。。。

Easy
00:39:837 - 这个时间点的绿线删掉 因为SV一直都是0.75没有改变这个改不了的。。。删了绿线sv就变回1.0x了，你那个没绿线是因为本来sv就是1.0x
00:26:398 (3) - so ugly 这么短的滑条建议改掉(变直的?fixed
00:35:708 (1) - 对于easy来说，这个转盘太短了，可以再延长到下一个白线 然后删掉00:37:777 (1) 这个还好吧，auto能转出8000呢，如果延长到下个白线就掉节奏了
01:02:209 (4) - 嘛 这个flow感觉怪怪的 感觉可以变成fixed
00:41:870 (3,4) - 建议把这一段拉一个滑条 原因是第四个的音和前三个不一样，不如作为滑条的结尾fixed
Normal
00:09:329 (5,6) - 放在一个直线上比较美观fixed，不过总感觉和下一个circle的space出问题了
01:17:464 (2) - 这个滑条再平点更好看 fixed
建议删掉1-2个转盘 转盘太多 而且太短 感觉不太合适
00:51:786 (1) 01:08:820 (1) -比如这两个 完全可以改成circlefixed
Hard
00:08:294 (6) - 感觉这里应该放一个滑条和一个circle 顺便remove finish 感觉没太大必要fixed，音效换clap了
00:19:673 (2) 00:21:742 (2) -ctrl+Gfixed
00:28:467 (2,3,4) - 放得远一点 而且这三个摆的不怎么整齐fixed，变成三角了。。。感觉增加难度了
00:33:639 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ...这个是不是有点过难了...如果真的要用四方请把外面那层的距离缩小一点
00:52:040 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^同上
01:06:786 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^同上这个不想改，要是没这梗这图和normal有啥区别。。。。现在都才4.5星，不过尝试缩小点了
00:43:904 (1) - ctrl+G 朝着这个方向没道理fixed
00:51:786 - Add a circle?这里是留的停拍，适度的停顿还是有必要的，何况这里也没节奏
00:53:820 (1,2,3) - 这么短的滑条还要弯曲是很难看的 改成直的更好fixed
01:00:175 (1) 01:02:209 (1) - ^同上fixed
01:05:260 (1) - 放得远一点 提示节奏fixed
00:39:837 - 无用的绿线fixed
Insane
00:39:846 - 无用的绿线嗯。。这个也是不能改的
01:07:294 - 无用的绿线fixed
00:08:036 (4) - 我觉得删掉这个note好一些fixed
00:09:587 (2,3,4,5) -这个改成两个三连吧fixed
00:11:915 (3,4) - 和上一个一样采用滑条+单点如何? 我把这两个都改成单点+滑条+单点了
00:12:683 - 00:12:820 - add a circle 这里节奏太松了,和前面的跳的难度差距太大,滑条前面放二连是个不错的选择fixed，这地方感觉放不了二连了
00:13:984 (1) - 移远一点因为在00:13:725补充了节奏，距离自然就变大了，所以这里没改
00:15:536 (2) - ctrl+G 该跳的时候就要跳fixed，这个好神啊改的
00:17:605 (2) - ^同上fixed
00:18:898 - add a circlefixed
00:24:584 - 00:24:717 - 00:25:105 - add a circle 让节奏紧密一点fixed，不过我只在00:24:587和00:25:105加了circle
00:31:570 (3) - NC 滑条变速最好NC提示玩家fixed
00:42:887 (4) - Ctrl+G 感觉很舒服fixed
00:42:887 (4) - add a circle时间错了吧，我在00:43:269加了一个
00:46:955 (5) - NC 00:47:718 (1) - remove NCfixed
00:52:294 (2) - 改成五连 这种多次reverse的滑条极度不推荐fixed，搞成短滑条加三连了
00:55:345 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - 把这两个三连连上 形成一串连打如何没连成一串，不过前面的三连变5连了听起来舒服点
00:59:159 (5)- NC fixed
01:00:175 (1) - 好难看 改成直的 然后remove NC fixed
01:02:209 (7,8) - 这东西太没道理了 01:02:209 (7) - 这个改成三连 挪到左边 这个弄成了短滑条+短折返+单点的形式
01:05:260 (6) - NCfixed
01:05:642 (9) - 删掉 然后把二连+滑条移开一点fixed
01:11:362 (5) - NCfixed
01:13:396 (4) - 这个改掉好一点 fixed
01:13:396 (4) - add a circle 然后01:14:413 (1) - remove NCfixed
01:15:430 (4) - NC 因为音量变了fixed
01:17:464 (5) - 这个 为什么不采用01:16:447 (1,2,3,4) - 一样的节奏和spacefixed

gideon5504 wrote:

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Easy:
~00:37:777 (1) - This circle in the middle after a spinner could cause an illusion and confuse beginners.What about this? --> http://puu.sh/3pZuc.jpgfixed,since at first it was there,I finally make it back.
~00:39:837 - I think 80% volume is still too loud,what about 70% for Kiai mode?fixed

Normal:
~00:09:329 (5) - Extend reverse slider by 1/2 a beat for smoother game play.fixed
~00:38:811 (4) - ^fixed
~00:39:837 - Same as easy diff with the volume.fixed

Hard:
~00:37:777 - Replace the stream with reverse sliders instead to fit the hard diff. Like this --> http://puu.sh/3q022.jpg (Just copy the reverse slider u've already made.)I think it is allright

~Too many triplets in Kiai time,consider removing some to fit hard players.Maybe it is hard to make a change.

Insane:
~00:31:570 (3) - NC for velocity change.fixed
~00:46:955 (5) - ^fixed
~00:59:159 (5) - ^fixed
~01:04:243 (3) - ^I think it is need not to change.
~01:04:752 (1) - NC to read velocity higher than 1.
~01:06:023 (1) - ^all right,what's the meaning? anyway,these NC has been canceled.
~The pattern of the mapping is sometimes a bit messy,consider tidying some notes.Make a little change.

Chloe wrote:

TAG里确定要放所有MODDER的名字？

Artist : Falcom Sound Team J.D.K.

yusoman wrote:

额。。。。。这也太短了吧。。。感觉给你KD有点对不起那些mod很多东西的。。。。
TAG和Artist已经改了。。。。真心希望能mod些关于图方面的

DarknessAngel wrote:

yusoman wrote:

额。。。。。这也太短了吧。。。感觉给你KD有点对不起那些mod很多东西的。。。。
TAG和Artist已经改了。。。。真心希望能mod些关于图方面的

post在這裡的可以是聊天、提醒、mod、祝賀、mod reply、GD finished等等的事項，他那樣屬於提醒性質，一看就不是mod啊，所以別誤會別人的用意，他是特別來提醒你的
一般來說是不用給KD，但要好好道謝畢竟是無償幫了你

話說為什麼要在你自己的圖上的tags裡加上自己的ID 0.0 ?

Satilast wrote:

Azusa (Azu-nyan~)=3:
NCs:

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00:06:727 (8)
00:17:072 (10)
00:21:210 (8)
00:25:090 (1)
00:45:924 (5)
00:58:127 (6)
01:02:195 (6)
01:14:398 (5)
01:18:466 (5)

NCs are kinda fixed. There are still some problems with it.
___________
00:30:262 (5,6,7,8) - can make as here 00:17:848 (11,12,13,14) Great suggestion, but I don't want to use too much of it since I have 2-3 already. However, it is a great option when comes to replacement.

This star prettier:

SPOILER

184,297,34141,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,34400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,297,34658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,160,34917,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,35176,1,0,0:0:0:0:

I can tell the difference, thank you.
00:54:695 (6) - on x:488 y:216I have done the previous arrangement because I don't want to go out of bounds.We will see. A little bit might be OK

Good Luck! Thank you =)

Great mod, thank you very much! =3
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sammy711 wrote:

Azusa
AR-1 这个BPM不要用AR9 除非你用了八分音符 这个我会去考虑，谢谢提醒。
00:08:423 (2,3) - 这两个和滑条尾对齐 做出perfect blanket 这样的问题其实我有特意去改，结果还是歪了么= =
00:09:846 (7) - NC √
00:10:622 (10) - Nonsense 请把这个放在00:10:880 (1) - 的起点 其实现在这样干的图很多。只不过三连最后那两个移到外面去，我的是后面两个到外面去。每次见到我也很烦，同意改掉><
00:15:018 (5) - 会让人confused 改掉 我觉得没啥问题吧，这图本来就容易。你要是说难看我倒会很同意。我试着改改吧
00:16:311 (6) - NC√
00:17:863 (6,7,8,9) - 要跳就要再跳一点 把这个梗放大一点吧OK
00:20:061 (3) - 删掉 不符合节奏 然后把后面的note放在00:19:673 (2) - 的结尾保留，我会去看看有哪些更好的排列
00:22:260 (3,4,5) - 扩大距离 要让人看出来是单点我是因为这个原因没扩大距离的。我是特意改成跟1和2相符的形状。再说，这图这么容易，没必要再改容易。
00:26:139 (7,8,9,10) - 推荐放在同一个坐标上 我觉得更好一点我取一半吧，把n形的改成向u形，其实n形是我为了不出界而出的下策。
00:28:984 (1,2) - ctrl+G 要跳起来 而且还能提示有节奏间隔谢谢，非常同意
00:29:501 (3) - ^同上√
00:30:794 (6) - 和滑条3的起始点对上
00:31:311 - Add a note 与00:30:536 (5) - 重叠[/color]
00:44:159 (2) - ctrl+G虽然这两个CTRL+G我都改了，但是我会继续看看这里跳合不合理
01:16:701 (2) - ^同上
00:45:938 (5) - NC
01:20:260 (1) - NC
Good luck!

gideon5504 wrote:

Azusa:
~00:03:380 - Unnecessary triplets,remove them. My suggestion --> http://puu.sh/3q0Au.jpgAgree. I don't think this is the best I can do, but I tried to change it. I will come back and check this again.
~00:10:751 (11) - Put the circle in between the slider and 10th circle to read as triplets. fixed
~00:22:260 (3) - NC to emphasis change of rhythm.agree, fixed

SPOILER

~00:41:108 (1) - NC for velocity reading.
~00:57:125 (4) - ^
~00:59:159 (11) - ^

sorry, NC in this map is very bad so far. I try to fix them
~01:11:870 (8) - Put this further away from 7 to read as 1/1 beat note.
~01:12:125 (9) - Put this further away from the fading 3 and a bit closer to the slider head of the next combo.I made these to increase the difficulty of the map. I agree this is not a very good idea. I have already fixed it. Most likely I will change it again, but I don't see a better solution as of now.
~01:13:650 (1) - NC.fixed
~01:20:260 (11,12) - Unnecessary,remove them.It creates a little drag to the end.deleted one note

That's all from me ^^ Good luck!

Kirino wrote:

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INSANE
排列我没多少能说的了。只能说说我打歌的感受。跟顺便跟你说说旋律有哪些地方我觉得奇怪的 欢迎啊~~

00:03:639 (4,5,6) - 虽然前面的我已经觉得不好，后面的停顿很奇怪。建议加一个圈fixed,我把6变成长条了，应该没停顿了
00:05:708 (3) - WHISTLE太多，只在最后加fixed
00:07:518 (3) & 00:08:811 (7) - 莫名停顿，后面加NOTEfixed
00:08:294 (5) - 为什么这边突然变成CLAP了fixed
00:12:173 (5) - ^fixed
00:16:570 (6) - 莫名停顿fixed
00:18:898 (7) - 为什么你选在前面停顿而不选这里。这里正好fixed
00:20:191 (3,4,5,6,7) & 00:22:260 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这两堆连击有点丑，建议改成弯型这个w形不想改，还可以吧感觉都是弯形太单调了啊
00:23:294 (1,3) - 1跟3对不中，建议重叠fixed，其实这里开始时重叠好的。。。不过因为修改过所以不小心挪开了
00:43:396 (5) - 这连CLAP听起来很奇怪。不要第二个CLAP,只加在开头结尾跟倒数第二个位置 （老实说，你这堆来回听起来也是很奇怪，只不过我暂时没想到有什么好的解决方法）这里结尾不该加clap吧，这是强弱强弱的节奏，第二个位置的clap去掉了
00:45:175 (4) - 我发现你很喜欢停顿的，刚巧我不喜欢急刹车。我不觉得这里用停顿很好。因为这是在旋律的中间。fixed，嘛这里确实不该停，因为是有节奏的，之所以我很偏好停顿是因为我之前那张坑图被人吐槽停顿不够。。。所以这会特别注意了下
00:51:531 (7) - ^ （这里是接后面旋律的转折点，真不该放停）fixed
00:52:294 (2) - = =这两个CLAP...请去掉 fixed，嗯，这个一定是误操作
00:52:294 (2,3,4,5) - 接上去会比较好- -，尽管我能打。还有，这里的8分音我觉得有点奇怪。2改成圈我觉得不错fixed，2换成circle我听着不太舒服
00:52:548 (3) - CLAPfixed
00:56:108 (1,2,3) - 这三连太奇怪了吧。不好听。fixed
00:57:633 (9) - 旋律中间停顿我不建议fixed
00:58:269 (2) - 去掉，不好听 （五连用的太频繁了）fixed
00:59:159 (1) - 这慢条太奇怪了吧。我觉得这跟BGM格格不入。举个例子，我认为慢条子可以加在这些地方：（00:27:432 (6) - ，00:29:501 (6) - & 01:08:565 (1) - ）fixed，加速换折返了
01:04:498 (4) - CLAP去掉，不好听fixed
01:05:260 (1,2,3) - 我知道你能做得比这更好看的。弯度太大了。fixed
01:01:447 (2) - 最后加CLAPfixed
01:02:718 (2) - 最开始加CLAPfixed
00:59:921 (2) - CLAPfixed
01:03:989 (1,2) - CLAPfixed
01:06:023 (5) - 移到下面的长白条上面吧（1:06:277），前面加个圈移过去听起来好奇怪，所以只在后面加个圈好了
01:07:803 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不好看话说你怎么就这么反感M/W形呢。。。。这个姑且保留
01:08:565 (1) - 我觉得这个SPINNER开始点应该是在7的位置上。fixed
01:15:430 (2) - 莫名停顿fixed
[Hard]
跟上面一样，排列我没啥异议，这圈是不是有点太大- -。另外连击的地方很多，HD用得了这么多连击么- -hard就放点福利圈圈大点好了，连击的话着手看看改

前面怎么没CLAP，后面CLAP就来了。CLAP一段有一段无的很奇怪。前面的强度比较弱。。所以都用的whistle，都改成clap看看吧
00:03:122 (3) - CLAPfixed
00:03:639 (4) - 最后CLAPfixed
00:05:191 (2) - 一开始CLAPfixed
00:05:708 (3) - 最后CLAPfixed
00:07:260 (3) - CLAPfixed
00:08:294 (6) - 前面CLAPfixed
00:08:811 (7) - CLAP去掉fixed
00:09:329 (1) - 前面CLAPfixed
00:12:949 (7) - 后面CLAPfixed
00:12:949 (7) - 后面CLAPfixed
00:14:501 (3) - CLAPfixed
00:15:018 (1) - 中间CLAPfixed
00:16:311 (2,3) - CLAP fixed
00:17:087 (1) - 中间CLAPfixed
00:18:380 (2,3) - CLAPfixed
00:17:087 (1,2,3) - 这部分跟前面那组排列的比例不一样，建议粘贴旋转。fixed
00:20:708 (5) - 跟前面说的一样，停顿问题我就不再重复了。你好好听听歌看看哪里放停顿比较合理。这里停顿刚刚好吧，正好什么节奏都没有
00:22:260 (3,4,5) - 歪了，做成跟前面那组的345一样比例fixed
00:25:363 (5) - 虽然说我明白你为什么在这里停，但是我觉得把5那个条子拉成来回或者做成一个条子效果会更好。旋律改成这样如何？
红线那地方放circle听着总不舒服，滑条变折返了
00:25:880 (1) - CLAP fixed
00:27:432 (1) - 后面CLAP fixed
00:29:501 (1) - 后面CLAP fixed
00:37:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - HD而已，用不用做成这样高端啊= = 根据前面被我ignore的建议改成滑条组试试看
从47秒到51秒这段，三连是不是太多了点，建议去掉一些。排列我是挺喜欢的。只不过有点重复太多了这个就是搞的对称节奏啊。。。没法改的吧
00:50:006 (3) - 最后CLAP这个是故意没加的，要的就是这个效果，这个和后面的节奏连在一起听就会很舒服了
00:56:108 (1,2,3) - 别一上来就三连，中间的建议去掉。下面那组也是。这里突然加强的节奏用三连表达最合适了，不好改
00:57:125 (4) - 后面加圈，因为是相连的旋律fixed
00:59:159 (4) - ^fixed
01:01:192 (4) - ^fixed
01:03:735 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 这段非常不好听，三连用太多了。建议修改。而且中间的停顿真的很奇怪这里三连和节奏配合的也不错啊，第一组最后一个变滑条了，第二组改成2连了
01:06:023 (5) - 这后面的停顿就更奇怪了fixed
01:06:023 (5) - 这一边的FINISH都去掉，在5后面的地方加。FINISH加在长线上。连续大镲不是用在这里的。总之这边的旋律本身就不是太理想，这边的音效可以先无视。等你改好后我再听听简单的调整了一下
01:08:820 (1) - 移到4哪个地方 4不想去掉，所以放在了后面的红线上
01:09:582 (1) - 01:09:836 (2) - 可以在这两个地方放圈，或者延长SPINNER。我推荐前者这两个地方的停顿是必要的，因为音乐里并没有节奏在
01:12:379 (1) - 开头加FINISHfixed
01:13:396 (3) - 最后FINISH去掉fixed
01:16:447 (1) - 开头FINISHfixed
01:17:209 (2) - 节奏有点太紧了吧，最后是逐渐远去就别用像8分这样的紧凑音符了。fixed

yurunneram wrote:

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EASY

I really suggest you use higher level square grids even though it's easy diff but whatever. Try having more creative sliders since it's an easy diff.

00:04:673 (3) - Move to x136 y264 fixed

00:17:087 (3) - move one square grid down fixed

00:35:708 (1) - I don't recommend putting this spinner here since the next note is quite close for Easy diff. Noob players take time to find their cursors after spinners fixed,spinner has been changed into circle+circle+slider

00:39:837 (1) - Move one grid square down I think it is not bad to put it here.

NORMAL

00:14:501 (4) - Move the last point of the slider one grid square up. It makes a difference fixed

00:18:639 (2) - Why not put it on the same spot as 00:16:570 (2) ? fixed

00:29:501 (1) - Move the last point of the slider one grid square down fixed

HARD

This diff has more symmetry and pattern as Easy. Please increase your symmetry in Easy since you have proven that you can do it for hard

nothing wrong with this diff.. Since easy diff is for newbies,distance is much important I think,symmetry may cause a great mess in distance,so I think it is doesn't suit the easy diff.

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Shinchaechae wrote:

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Normal:
00:09:329 (5) - Instead of one, you could put 2 arrows here. It fits well with the music.I make it like that days ago,but it may too hard for newbies,so I changed it to 1 arrow.

00:21:225 (1) - Could add an epic finish here, since slider 1 and 2 that come after it also has a finish.fixed

00:25:363 (3) - FINISH~~fixed

00:38:811 (4) - It would be a good idea to add 2 back arrows here instead of just one. It kinda sounds like a drum roll for the upcoming kiai time~All right, back to days ago...LOL

00:38:811 (4) - Imo a small slider arc would look niceArc for a short slider may looks not very good.

00:48:989 (3) - 2 arrows again >.<but I think it is need not,1 arrow is enough.
I like how you faded out the audio at the end Well......the song is fade out like that itself.

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

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渣mod其实还好啦~~~
pass easy normal azusa
[Hard]
00:21:225 (1,2) - 可以用00:19:156 (1,2) - 的slider作一個對稱fixed
01:15:430 (6) - 包著01:14:921 (5) - 可以包得更好为什么我觉得这里好像没什么问题。。。

[Insane]
00:02:604 (1,2,3) - 弄成一直線吧这里感觉稍微有个小弧度比较舒服所以没弄成直线
00:04:673 (1) - DSfixed
00:24:587 (6) - 放在00:24:070 (3) - 下方fixed
00:40:853 (4) - 加whistle 加的位置請參考00:39:837 (1) - fixed
00:41:870 (1,4) - 也在頭加whistlefixed
00:55:345 (5,6,7,8,9) - 可以擺成包著00:54:836 (4) - 的形式fixed
01:13:904 (6) - Clapfixed

CDFA wrote:

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CAPTAIN FALCOM

Overall:
Make sure your claps are consistent on beats 2 and 4 of the music.Well，I will check it out later.
01:12:379 - From here on, don't map. Mapping fade-outs usually doesn't play very well, especially since it can be hard to hear rhythms when the music is getting quieter.I don't want to map fade-out,but the song is too short,it may not comfortable with the too short song.

Insane:
00:41:870 (1) - Add finish on beginning of sliderI think a whistle is enough.
00:57:633 (8) - Spacing is inconsistent and looks really ugly fixed a little,but still feel not very comfortable.

Hard:
01:03:735 (1,2,3) - Rotate this pattern slightly so (3) is stacked with the previous (2)?fixed

Normal:
00:10:363 (6) - it's 100% fine spacing wise, but the overlap kind of implies that there's gonna be another repeat on (5), and for normal mode, readbility tricks aren't good days ago there is another reverse on (5),since someone thought that 2 reverse maybe too hard for newbies,I deleted one,but I don't know how to map the (6) well...so,finally,I make the reverse back.
00:19:156 (1) - Make this more curved so it blankets the previous slider a bit better :3 (Or at least doesn't overlap)fixed

Easy:
It's fine, I just wish it wasn't so 1/1 the entire time ;A;All right......since it is a easy diff,easy for newbie is the most important for a easy diff I think.

Moe.I think so ,too.~~~

jogfi2002 wrote:

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[General]

可以考虑缩小一下Tio.png的体积，转成JPG就好了。fixed

每个难度的combo color最好一致：combo color是配合背景颜色的，因为背景不同所以combo color 自然不同

- [Azusa] : Combo1 : 255,128,255 Combo2 : 0,0,160
- [Easy] : Combo1 : 192,192,192 Combo2 : 128,255,255

每个难度是否letterbox的设置不一致，其中Azusa和Insane是有，其他的没有。因为根本没休息时间所以没啥影响吧，不过还是都删掉了

offset建议往前调10，即2595这个保留，之后其他的都改完再说

[Easy]

虽然能够明白你设置1.4 ds的目的是为了让NOTE不要有重合，不过对于新手来说或许会有点跳。DS小了的话肯定重叠的，所以这个不可能调小了，现在也不是很难吧，没跳到哪里去
音效的音量建议调低一些，有点夺掉主旋律的感觉了。音量降到70%了

00:21:225 (1) - 开头的finish音效有点违和fixed
00:39:837 (1) - 这里可以换成slider呀fixed
00:40:853 (5) - ^fixed

节奏没什么问题，排列上可以再下点功夫，感觉现在的放得有点随意。Easy怎么才算不随意呢。。。。已经严格全程DS了，easy要摆出花样来就有点坑了吧。。。
另外用下直slider吧，全是弯的看着有点累~弄了一些直的slider，其实那些slider都是好好地包着circle的


[Normal]

DS有点混乱，建议你重新排一下。貌似只有你指出那一小部分有点问题。。。貌似之前忘改了，这个也是开着DS布的，不可能出现大范围DS问题

00:08:304 (4,5) - 前一个slider只有一次折返，新手也许会认为后面一个也是一次折返从而断连这里不会误会的，因为后面的6会提示还有一次往返，如果删掉了往返会缺节奏的听起来特别不舒服，而且后面的6就变成坑爹读图点了，如果这里我听你的改了下个modder一定会叫我改回来的
00:14:511 (4,1) - DS有问题fixed


[Hard]

00:16:311 (2,3) - 试下改成这样：
fixed

00:37:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个排列对于Hard来说明显是过难了这里原来是stream，为了降低难度做成滑条了，我现在没想到什么好的降低难度的方法
00:56:108 (1,2,3) - 你前后的连打间隔不一样啊fixed

节奏大致没问题，但是排列还是重新弄一弄好，有点单调，而且不好看。排列我在看看能不能更舒服点


[Insane]

00:16:829 (7,1) - 这里应该弄成2note+1slider才对吧fixed
00:17:605 (2) - 开头的finish不太对这里还好吧。。。和前面的相照应的
00:23:036 (9) - 这里没叠好fixed
00:55:345 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这里建议改成sliderfixed

总体感觉节奏下得有点怪。怎么说呢。。。。我个人的感觉节奏还好。。。不过确实有几个人说节奏有点怪了，我尽力去看看做做微调吧

1. 00:07:260 (10) - Move this away from 00:06:742 (8). This will make it easier to read. Possibly move it to x:356 y:396.
2. 00:10:751 (11) - Unstack this. Moving this away from 00:10:880 (1) will make that part look better. http://puu.sh/3uPWO.jpg
3. 00:15:018 (5) - This slider is so odd. Why not just change it to a normal curved slider?
4. 01:11:870 (8) - New combo.
   
   [Insane]
5. 00:42:887 (4,5,6) - This is hard to read. Try reversing 00:42:887 (4), then unstack 00:43:269 (5) so it goes into 00:43:396 (6). Like this: http://puu.sh/3uQma.jpg
6. 01:02:209 (1) - Looks like your slider broke here. Fix this.

Love wrote:

Sorry about being so late, was catching up on things. Nothing at all，things are more important in real world.
[Insane]
00:42:887 (4,5,6) - This is hard to read. Try reversing 00:42:887 (4), then unstack 00:43:269 (5) so it goes into 00:43:396 (6). Like this: http://puu.sh/3uQma.jpgIt is much better,great change,fixed
01:02:209 (1) - Looks like your slider broke here. Fix this.ok,changed it

CDFA wrote:

CAPTAIN FALCOM

Azu-nyan:
00:07:001 (2,3,4) - Space (3) out a little bit more so it doesn't overlap with (1) (Or alternatively, make the entire pattern more narrow so it does the same thing) fixed thank you
00:13:467 (9) - Move this to avoid overlap I don't quite see where is the overlap
00:28:984 (1) - Add clap oops, I placed it in the wrong place.
00:29:242 (2) - Remove clap
00:47:209 (7) - Stack this on (1) of the same combo fixed

Love wrote:

Sorry about being so late, was catching up on things.

[Azusa]
[list][*]00:07:260 (10) - Move this away from 00:06:742 (8). This will make it easier to read. Possibly move it to x:356 y:396. fixed thank you
[*]00:10:751 (11) - Unstack this. Moving this away from 00:10:880 (1) will make that part look better. http://puu.sh/3uPWO.jpg hmm, it seems will make the pattern looks more confusing. I like the idea, but I am not sure about other people. Well, I changed it
[*]00:15:018 (5) - This slider is so odd. Why not just change it to a normal curved slider? Well, I think it is fine XD.
[*]01:11:870 (8) - New combo. fixed in previous mods

Nymph wrote:

看了一遍 細節還是略不足啊 暫時有點不知道怎麼寫mod 讓我想一想

Nymph wrote:

EDIT:想了一周還是不知道怎麼寫 總之圖是中規中矩勉強算還可以吧 最大的問題是太零亂了 梗和梗之間沒有什麽聯繫.....

Nymph wrote:

EDIT2:主要梗用的太零碎了 基本是想起來什麽個別梗就撿起來用的狀況 所以整體性就欠缺了 其實我想說還有沒有remap的可能性

jonathanlfj wrote:

[General]
offset seems a bit late, first offset needs -9 (offset 2596, and ONLY this one needs adjustment). remember to resnap notes timing sections and preview time!fixed(at the moment only the easy diff)

the default clap doesnt seem to match very well with the clap sound in the music. Give this one a try: http://puu.sh/9bimB/2bd8f8efc8.wav place it in your beatmap folder and change all diffs' sampleset from S to S:C1 as shown:Sounds better than before,thank you

SPOILER

tags are separated by spaces, so you don't need to have the comma between tagsfixed(at the moment only the easy diff)

you will see a lot of "remove whistle on slider body" in the mod; those are merely my own preferences, so if you happen to have them set intentionally feel free to reject the suggestionssince remove the whistle is much better,I have removed them

[Easy]
00:03:122 (2) - remove the whistle from the slider bodyfixed
00:12:949 (4) - ^fixed
00:15:018 (1,3) - ^fixed
00:19:156 (1) - move this to x:464 y:160 to avoid overlapping previous slider. Dont forget to fix spacing as wellfixed
00:24:329 (2) - whistle on repeat to capture the high pitch tonefixed
00:26:398 (3) - remove clap on start, it doesn't really emphasis anythingfixed
00:38:294 (2) - clapfixed
00:41:870 (3,1) - wooo the spacing here please fix itfixed,I made this big space to avoid the overlap,finally i changed it
00:50:006 (3) - forgot a finish or whistle?fixed,put a finish here
00:52:040 (1) - remove whistle on slider bodyfixed
00:54:074 (1) - no need for NC here imofixed
00:57:125 (3,6) - remove whistle on slider bodyfixed
00:58:650 (5) - clapfixed
01:00:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - uhh fix the hitsounding pattern here, its pretty randomfixed
01:03:735 (1) - clap should be on the start of thisthis part I made a great change,hope it will be feeling good
01:06:786 (2) - ^same to above
01:14:413 (3) - clap on endfixed
01:17:464 (2) - forgot a finish?fixed

6.20edit:
[Normal]
00:05:708 (5) - remove the whistle on start and put it on the end insteadfixed
00:09:329 (5) - whistle startfixed
00:10:363 (6) - whistlefixed
00:11:398 (2) - hmm why did you switch to clap here? according to your pattern this should be a whistlefixed,maybe wrong changed it before
00:14:501 (4) - whistle startfixed
00:15:018 (1,1) - remove whistle on slider bodyfixed
00:18:639 (2) - this should overlap 00:16:570 (2) for spacing purposesfixed
00:19:156 (1,1,1) - remove whistle on slider bodyfixed
00:26:915 (2) - clapfixed
00:38:811 (4) - add clap at 00:39:329fixed
00:40:853 (2) - remove whistle on slider bodyfixed
00:42:887 (4) - clap endfixed
00:47:972 (2) - remove whistle on slider bodyfixed
00:50:006 (4) - clap endrhythm is become weak here,so i don't think here need a clap
00:52:040 (6) - missing NC herefixed
00:53:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern overall is very hard to play at this difficulty level, something like this would be better:

SPOILER

fixed,I think the rhythm here is important so make everyone a note,but it is really hard in normal
00:59:159 (6) - reverse the hitsounding on this sliderfixed
01:02:209 (4) - whistle start to capture the high pitch soundfixed
01:03:226 (5,1) - remove clap on (5) and put it on (1)fixed
01:06:786 (1) - clap startfixed
01:08:820 (4,5) - missing clapsfixed
01:16:447 (1,2) - ^fixed

Following diffs will be changed later

[Hard]
00:05:708 (3) - remove whistle on slider body
00:09:329 (1,2,3) - ^
00:13:984 (1,2,3,4,1) - this doesnt flow very well, i suggest you try something more interesting:

SPOILER

00:15:018 (1) - and remove the whistle on slider body
00:16:829 (3) - the clap sounds really unfitting here, i suggest you remove it
00:17:087 (1) - remove whistle on slider body
00:18:380 (2,3,1) - this is very confusing to play due to the timing difference with same spacing, suggest you distance snap these
00:22:260 (3,5) - ctrl+g makes it play better
00:24:846 (4) - remove whistle on slider body
00:28:467 (2) - blanket this properly with 00:27:432 (1)
00:37:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ok so this one is somewhat confusing to read, try arranging the rhythm like this instead:

SPOILER

00:38:294 - also make sure you have a clap here
00:39:837 (1) - forgot a finish
00:47:972 (3,6,3,6) - remove whistle on slider body, and 00:50:006 (3) is missing a clap at the end
00:56:870 (4) - use consistent spacing on this
00:57:125 (5,5) - remove whistle on slider body
01:00:175 (1,2) - try to avoid partial overlaps like this
01:01:192 (4) - remove whistle on slider body
01:04:752 (6) - clap on start
01:05:260 (1) - remove this finish, it sounds rather unfitting
01:12:379 (1,3) - remove whistle from slider body, and clap at end of 01:13:396 (3)
01:14:413 (1) - probably want to clap the start
01:17:209 (2) - whistle on end

[Insane]
00:02:604 (1) - add a finish
00:26:656 (2,3,4) - move this slightly down to blanket 00:26:398 (1) better
00:32:863 (2,3) - avoid overlapping with 00:31:570 (1)
00:41:235 - did you forget a whistle here?
00:43:396 (6) - i got a bit confused here, according to the music this should have one more repeat to connect to 00:43:904 (1)
00:43:904 (1) - add whistle or finish to the start
00:56:108 (1) - finish on start
00:59:921 (2) - overlap this properly with 00:58:142 (1,3)
01:03:226 (3) - unfitting finish, remove it or swap for whistle instead
01:10:345 (1) - no need for another NC here, it actually makes the stack more confusing to read
hitsounding in this diff is much more consistent compared to ENH, although i feel there is a lack of whistles especially during the kiai

[Azusa]
first of all naming a diff after a Username is now unrankable, you can change it to Asusa's Insane instead
Combo Colour 1 is too dark making it hard to read with dimmed bg, try a lighter tone of blue instead
00:07:260 (3) - clap
00:22:260 (1,2,3) - i think these will look and play better if you don't partially stack them
00:27:432 (3) - finish on start
00:34:156 (1,5) - clap
00:37:777 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this setup is very difficult to play; 00:38:423 (6) starts on a blue line which makes the finger alternation really hard. Change to this instead:

SPOILER

00:41:870 (5) - forgot a NC
00:46:447 (3,4,5) - two more grid up to match your symmetry
00:55:853 - feels a bit empty skipping over this sound, maybe add a note here and rearrange this pattern like this:

SPOILER

01:08:057 (6) - forgot a clap on this one? its supposed to follow your clap pattern
01:16:447 - use 45% volume here and
01:18:481 - use 30% here. 10% is barely audible and is practically unrankable if you user it over a section of notes
01:20:260 (7) - place this on 01:19:243 (4)? flows better imo
01:20:514 (1) - seems more logical to end the spinner at 01:22:548

Thats all from a quick look, i will probably come back later to do a second round of clean up mod. But before that please find more mods that focuses on hitsounding, since that's what seems to be lacking here especially in your lower diffs.