popner wrote:

Mark.

Will mod as CDFA's request if not ranked then.

Scorpiour wrote:

hi there~~random bubble check

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Do not use single chars in tags like vol. 3 where '3' is splited by spaces. Ah, okay. Fixed.

[Advanced]

1. 00:30:853 - i'd like to extend spinner to here mmkay
2. 00:44:374 (5) - +whistle here to emphasize it? sure
3. 00:44:796 (1) - the finish at end is heard odd a bit, suggest to remove right. added clap instead
4. 00:53:458 (2,3,4) - move (2) to 459:60 and make the triplet like this to avoid the placement here too linear? cool, thanks
   
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5. 00:58:317 (5) - move to 389:134 to follow the prev jump? done
6. 01:16:275 (3) - i'd like to place it at 256:264 done
7. 01:26:205 (3,4) - i may choose this kinda beat here:
   
8. 01:29:585 (3,4) - ^ nah, i think i'll keep the current one.
9. 01:32:120 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - make the increasing volumn here more smooth? add two or four more inherited timing points to adjust the volumn? done
10. 01:37:191 (9) - NC here and remove NC at 01:38:881 (1) - ? just my personal preference for follow point :> i like it
11. 01:40:782 (2,3,4) - similar to 00:53:458 (2,3,4), like this? done
    
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12. 01:48:176 (1) - hmm feel...you're wasting the 1/3 beats here... i may choose to make here like this: (1/3 repeat sliders) i like how yours looks, used it
    
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13. 01:52:402 (1,2,3,4,5) - too many finishes here.. heard noisy fixed

[Average]

1. AR+1, OD+1 to ballance the diff spread done, but is AR6 okay for normal? o_O
2. 00:18:599 (2) - split it into a note and 1/1 slider like this?
   
3. 00:21:979 (3) - ^ both done
4. 00:27:050 (2) - add one repeat, the blanket at 00:27:683 - is uncomfortable done
5. 00:30:853 - similar to Advanced, extend spinner to here? alright
6. 01:35:923 (2,3,4) - i expect more 1/2 sliders around here > > kept it this way for now. dont wanna make it too hard
   

[Amateur]

1. 01:52:402 (5) - Move NC to here
2. 01:55:782 (4) - ^ both fixed

Call me back when you're ready

Cobra wrote:

Also, thanks to the person who recommended my map to dkun.

narakucrimson wrote:

F*ck man, you've got a bright future on mapping!