Alace wrote:

<Insane>
00:08:17 (4,5,6) - XD I will set like that (picture)
00:23:81 (1,2,3,4) - (4) is too near from (3) you have some stuffs like this I SUGGEST FIX
00:32:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - super confusing
00:34:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Fixed

Awesome parts (you can also set jumps well)
00:39:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
001:55:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
1:48:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
Thanks n///n

I don`t need to make a .osu for you this one is good enough
If you need nazi help
PM me in game

mrtn wrote:

osz's without video can not be bigger than 10MB. Please resize some stuff. You can do this by lowering the quality of the MP3 and cutting it.
I'm not really sure on the offset...

[normal]
01:17:85 (1) - maybe a finish on the end point?
01:28:92 - reinsert break

[hard]
00:38:81 (5) - 1/8 later

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 7213, which is only -2 from the current. *autostar*

...not much to say about anything else, though.

mrtn wrote:

set a preview time

[normal]
00:34:66 - reinsert break

[hard]
01:16:15 (4) - new combo maybe?

Shulin wrote:

I've been playing this map for a while and I love it! I should have starred sooner, anyway here are some suggestions:

Easy: - My main suggestion is to make the finish sound effect set off the background all the time [it does the majority of the time.] ok, you can see the changes to know if i understood lol (my english is not perfect)

00:51:47 (1) – Remove finish at the end of this slider? – You could use clap?
01:00:83 (1) - ^
01:04:23 (1) – Add finish at the end, I think it sounds a looks better when finish sets off the background.
01:07:64 (1) - ^

Hard:
01:27:00 (1) – Remove new combo, it sounds odd to me breaking up half of a sentence.Done
02:10:72 (5) - Align with 4? done
03:23:81 (1) – Remove finish from this slider? There have already been 4 finishes before it. Normal beats work well.you're right

Insane:
03:23:81 (1) – Remove finish from this slider? This time there are 5 finishes before it. Normal beats work well.you're right, again n.n

Great map - star!

Shulin wrote:

I liked the old SB

Lissette wrote:

Shulin wrote:

I liked the old SB

it's the same, i just had to re-size the images >.<

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

Merry Christmas and enjoy your overdrive modding!

[Easy]
00:56:574 (3) - maybe try a finish instead of a whistle done
01:47:213 (3) - move the finish to where the sb flashes done
otherwise very nice map

[Lizbeth]
The intro seems rather significantly more difficult than the rest of the map, maybe tone it down a bit? i removed some beats at the intro
01:28:915 (6) - finish done

-this is a friendly reminder that the comments I make are suggestions on how to make your map better, and that implementing them is up to the discretion of you, the mapper-

[Hard]
00:14:234 (2) - the first of these double hits shouldnt have a hitsound on it Fixed all
00:27:851 (4) - fairly well hidden under fading notes Fixed
00:29:553 (4) - start 1/4 later and shorten by 1/4 Fixed, and the other like this too ^^
00:31:255 (4) - ^
etc.
the difficulty of the intro and the difficulty of the first verse are so far apart, its weird. Either tone down the intro or tone up the verse, please i tried to do something but the intro is not that soft as the verse,i'll leave it like this u.u
01:34:021 (6,7) - so loud lowered the volume of all diff
01:49:340 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - you're really grinding that finish hard...have some mercy on our ears
02:09:340 (1) - a bit hidden Fixed
02:33:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - random nugget of difficulty in the easy part i made the easy part ramdon on purpose ^^
also an epilepsy warning may be in order for the end there
A final silly question: why don't you have kiai in here? I didnt use kiai cuz the SB is flashy enought, if i put kiai it could really cause an epileptic attack xD

[Insane]
00:48:064 (1,2,3) - this pattern is completely unrankable because of overlap. If you want something like this, try flipping 2 vertically, just don't overlap them this much. Fixed
in the verse...maybe put some notes in the blank places?didnt add notes at the blank places cuz sound ugly, but added some triplets to increase the difficulty, hope its fine ^^
01:34:021 (6,7) - no double flashes in sb please. its positively epileptic and gives me a headache lol, Fixed
01:52:744 (1) - remove the middle finish done
02:37:000 (2,3,4) - as stated before, unrankable Fixed


send me a pm when you've fixed your map some and I'll come back. Also, Merry Christmas!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

yai back to this map

[Easy]
00:45:936 (1) - move out from under 1 Fixed

[Lizbeth]
00:23:808 (3,4) - could you maybe unstack these, or stack a different set of notes in this combo? Done

[Hard]
00:47:212 (1) - maybe move this so it isnt hidden by 2 Fixed
01:28:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this a quiet Normal section for dramatic flair if you want didnt like how it sound >.<

[Insane]
02:11:468 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - epilepsy again in the sp Fixed
02:25:085 (9) - try a finish ill leave the wisthle cuz the song has like a wisthle there ^^
02:59:978 (2) - remove finish Fixed
also there are more ways to increase difficulty than adding notes you could also add jumps or other such things i dont wanted to put jumps on the soft part of the song, i guess it have enough jumps on the rest of the map


Also, I'm about ready to bubble this so don't forget to call me back!