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FictionJunction KEIKO - Synchronicity

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Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Easy~
  1. 00:18:82 (1) - It would be more fitting if it started on the white tick at 00:19:14. Don't forget to shorten! ^.^
Normal~
  1. 01:32:33 (3) - Suggestion: Add a finish here
  2. It's Cool: 01:56:16 (6,7,8) - Ooo, I like the way you did these sliders <3
Hard~
  1. 00:19:03 (1) - Same suggestion as in Easy~
  2. 02:54:03 (4) - Redo break after this note. It'll shorten~

Insane~
  1. 00:08:50 (5,6) - Suggestion: Flip these two notes around.
  2. 00:11:91 (5,6) - ^
  3. 01:11:91 (3) - Add a whistle.
  4. 02:37:01 (2,3,4) - I know someone is going to complain about this (like me ^^) so it'd be best to make these sliders not "hidden-ish"
Lissette
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GabrielRKF
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GabrielRKF
//Easy//

00:21:485(x) - No Breaktime? o.O
00:36:166(1) - Better without New Combo?
00:39:570(1) - ^
01:57:017(1) - ^

Ps.:I'm gonna tell the truth. "I" don't like new combo sections like the one u did on the beggining and at 01:04:251. Remeber that "I" don't like it, so keep using it if you think it's cool, but i gotta say that i think that it's weard.


//Lizbeth's Normal//
Ps.:Hit sounds starting before the BPM? Nothing wrong, it's just... weard .__.

Nothing wrong here =]


//Hard//
Cool mirroring and sub-rythms ^^

00:14:038(1) - weard position :/
01:17:092(6) - 1 grid right
01:51:485(1,2) - i really like this type of sub-rythm but at this part, i don't think that sounds cool =/ I think it's because u didn't used it at 01:47:655.
02:28:506(1) - no new combo
02:34:464(4,5) - does not sounds cool at all :/
03:02:123(1,1) - like i sayid, i don't like New Combo Sections =/


//Insane//
Cool jumps =]

00:47:229(1) - hum... without new combo isn't better? XD
01:51:485(1) - no new combo
01:58:293(break) - really? break here? I think it's better use a Spinner then a short breaktime
02:28:506(1) - better without New Combo? (Thinking of Tag)
02:45:952(3) - Unecessary note?
02:49:357(3) - ^
03:01:910(1) - hum... without new combo i think it's better .__.
03:09:783(1) - ^
03:26:166(1 - END) - I won't fight here XD There are so manny new combos but this section got cool =]

ps.: Loving the song! *---*

Star \o/
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
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Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Easy:
Perfect~

Lizbeth's Normal:
01:47:12 (5) - Space further (Blue tick is hard x3)

Hard:
03:26:16 (1) - Forgot to put whistle in ending
03:28:18 (2) - ^
03:26:16 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Combo these beats like this: 03:26:16 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5)

Insane:
01:16:16 (4) - New combo also because the overall diff is pretty high.
01:22:97 (3) - Same as above.
03:27:44 (5) - Move 1 down, looks weird

Awesome map, keep it up~ :)
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
@_@ another hard to follow song
Offset minus 9
Lower hitsound volume 1 or 2 ticks (1 works fine)

Easy-
Something this easy should follow larger grid size~
Nazi-
00:44:67 (3) - might as well align this, (left a tick)
01:57:01 (1) - I say space this away or stack it properly

Lizbeth's-
I say lower the soft hitsound volume too, the finish hitsound is kinda overpowering the music
No grid snap on most parts... so some things could be stacked better, no biggie though
Coulda used less whistles on the vocal sections, but its fine..

Hard-
Please remove all soft sliderslide whistles...
Nazi-
00:15:31 (5,6) - stack better please (turn off grid snap and distance snap)
00:17:01 (5,6) - ^
00:18:71 (5,6) - ^
01:40:63 - add a note? (since the comboes before had them)
There's a lot of alignment and stacks I would prefer look better, but it seems like its your design)
Redo Breaks
And like Normal, the vocal could use less whistles...

Insane-
Hmm same as Hard, remove the soft-sliderslide whistle hitsounds please
Nazi-
00:44:67 (3) - left a tick please~
01:11:48 (2) - up two tick (to "center" from 1,3 better)
01:16:16 (4) - new combo
01:37:44 (8) - ^
01:40:63 - same as Hard
01:49:35 (6) - new combo
01:56:16 (6) - ^
02:40:42 (3) - make this a horizontal flip from 1?
03:17:44 (4,7) - new combo both
The other placements I don't mind much about
Less whistles on the softer vocal sections as well~

@_@ Like I said, the song is hard to follow
kino77
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tieff
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tieff
[Easy]
00:51:47 (1) - Remoce whistle from start.
00:55:73 (2) - Whistle.
00:59:13 (2) - ^
01:32:540 ~ 01:45:944 - Why break? o.o

[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:08:49 (4) - Whistle.
00:10:19 (4) - ^
00:11:90 (4) - ^
00:13:60 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:25:94 (3,4) - Spacing.
02:11:79 (5,6) - Spacing.

Star, nice map.
fartownik
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Joined December 2008
fartownik
[Easy]
SPOILER
Fine. What might be wrong in one starred beatmap? :P

[Lizbeth's Normal]
SPOILER
Perfect.

[Hard]
SPOILER
01:32:327 - 01:57:859 - Too much finish hitsounds.
02:56:582 - 03:24:667 - ^
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00:15:306 (5,6) - Stack with vanishing slider's end.
00:17:008 (5,6) - ^
00:18:710 (5,6) - ^
01:41:68 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move these notes 1/2 forward, then add note here and delete (6).

[Insane]
SPOILER
If I were you, I will raise HP Drain a bit.
The same problem with finish hitsounds. But the rest is fantastic.

Move to Pending please.
~Starry
Lissette
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eee
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eee
[Easy]
eh.

[Hard]
I got nothin'

[Insane]
00:34:02 - you wanna put a (1,2) here similar to, well, every other combo before it [00:32:32 (1,2) for example, sounds the like the same beat]. just opinion
01:40:62 (x) - note here?

I do have a couple of thoughts of some notes landing on 1/2 that should be 1/4, but I'll let it slide since they land on some sort of beat I DO NOT KNOW OF!!!, I mean, nobody else complains, why not eee as well.

star cause I got nothin'
Lissette
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Lissette
Thanks a lot for your help eee!!
kds 4 ya! :)
mrtn
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Ryuukun
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Ryuukun
have a star
Andrea
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Andrea
[Easy]

01:59:77 (1) - Maybe you can start this spinner here -> 02:00:19 (1) With the same end.

[Lizbeth's Normal]

00:32:96 (1,2) - Why isn't aligned with (3) ?

[Hard]

00:15:30 (5,6) - Bad placed.

[Insane]

Awesome *_*
Lissette
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Lissette
Thanks a lot for the help osuplayer111. Fixed.
SteRRuM
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SteRRuM
Hi!
[Timing]
BPM: 141,000, (fine)
Offset: 7 215.
Resnap all notes.
[Easy]
  1. 00:44:66 (3,1) - 1 grid to left.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
  1. Overall Difficulty -> 1 tick to right.
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:30 (5,6) - Stack manually on (4)s end,
  2. 00:58:91 (3) - Stack manually on (2)s end,
  3. 01:12:95 (3,4) - Hm... Stack?.
[Insane]
  1. 00:25:72 (2) - Move 1 grid to left or if it's on purpose, don't change it,
  2. 01:59:98 (1) - Maybe 1/2 later and then cut by 1/2?,
  3. 02:16:57 (4) - 1 grid down and 1 to the left,
  4. 02:16:78 (1) - Maybe 1/2 later and then cut by 1/2?.
Lissette
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Lissette
thnx for your time SteRRuM
Fixed :)
gdeath
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gdeath
Hi!
Please look at this only as suggestions^^

SPOILER
[Easy]
fine

SPOILER
[Lizbeth's Normal]
great

SPOILER
[Hard]
02:33:17 (1) - remove whistle on start of slider and add whistle on the end
02:33:59 (2) - remove whistle
02:34:44 (4,5) - ^
02:35:08 (6) - add whistle
02:38:70 (4) - add finish
you can have a try.i think if you add hitsound as my mod,maybe it sound better^^

SPOILER
[Insane]
perfect!\(^o^)/

great storyboard and map~i pretty like it~>O<
starry*
Mystearica
Mystearica
[Easy]

All fine.

[Normal]

01:25:93 (1) - Not really needed but suggest a new combo here? I'm not sure myself. Just thought it'd fit the spacing better.
01:55:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Space this part out more from the previous 01:54:87 (6)

[Hard]

01:49:76 (1) - I would suggest making these parts new combos, might be more intuitive for people on a first try of the map.
01:56:15 (6,7,8,9) - Probably could use a little volume control here.

Overall I'd add more volume control on this difficulty, up to you here.

[Insane]

I'm always awaiting Insane difficulties from you 2, awesome. Fun. No problems for me.

Starzorz
Lissette
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Lissette
Thanks a lot for modding gdeath and Mystearica
Glad you like it n___n
Alace
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Alace
<Insane>
00:08:17 (4,5,6) - XD I will set like that (picture)
00:23:81 (1,2,3,4) - (4) is too near from (3) you have some stuffs like this I SUGGEST FIX
00:32:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - super confusing
00:34:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Awesome parts (you can also set jumps well)
00:39:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
001:55:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
1:48:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -

I don`t need to make a .osu for you this one is good enough
If you need nazi help
PM me in game

dkey
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dkey
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Lissette
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Lissette

Alace wrote:

<Insane>
00:08:17 (4,5,6) - XD I will set like that (picture)
00:23:81 (1,2,3,4) - (4) is too near from (3) you have some stuffs like this I SUGGEST FIX
00:32:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - super confusing
00:34:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Fixed

Awesome parts (you can also set jumps well)
00:39:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
001:55:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
1:48:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
Thanks n///n

I don`t need to make a .osu for you this one is good enough
If you need nazi help
PM me in game
Thanks a lot for modding, glad you like it ^ ^
Alace
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Alace
<Insane>
00:25:93 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - a bit chaos here 300s block the slider
00:33:38 (5) - new combo
00:37:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - confusing (look at 1.2.3) but it is insane diff so i guess it`s fine
01:49:34 (6) - new combo
01:56:15 (6) - new combo
03:17:85 (6) - new combo

That`s all
Time to hunt BAT
mrtn
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mrtn
osz's without video can not be bigger than 10MB. Please resize some stuff. You can do this by lowering the quality of the MP3 and cutting it.
I'm not really sure on the offset...

[normal]
01:17:85 (1) - maybe a finish on the end point?
01:28:92 - reinsert break

[hard]
00:38:81 (5) - 1/8 later
Lissette
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Lissette

mrtn wrote:

osz's without video can not be bigger than 10MB. Please resize some stuff. You can do this by lowering the quality of the MP3 and cutting it.
I'm not really sure on the offset...

[normal]
01:17:85 (1) - maybe a finish on the end point?
01:28:92 - reinsert break

[hard]
00:38:81 (5) - 1/8 later
All fixed FINALLY, I was really busy with the uni.... anyway thanks for modding mrtn :)
ignorethis
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Zekira
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Zekira
Offset: 7213, which is only -2 from the current. *autostar*

...not much to say about anything else, though.
mrtn
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mrtn
set a preview time

[normal]
00:34:66 - reinsert break

[hard]
01:16:15 (4) - new combo maybe?
Shulin
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Shulin
I've been playing this map for a while and I love it! I should have starred sooner, anyway here are some suggestions:

Easy: - My main suggestion is to make the finish sound effect set off the background all the time [it does the majority of the time.]

00:51:47 (1) – Remove finish at the end of this slider? – You could use clap?
01:00:83 (1) - ^
01:04:23 (1) – Add finish at the end, I think it sounds a looks better when finish sets off the background.
01:07:64 (1) - ^

Hard:
01:27:00 (1) – Remove new combo, it sounds odd to me breaking up half of a sentence.
02:10:72 (5) - Align with 4?
03:23:81 (1) – Remove finish from this slider? There have already been 4 finishes before it. Normal beats work well.

Insane:
03:23:81 (1) – Remove finish from this slider? This time there are 5 finishes before it. Normal beats work well.

Great map - star!
Lissette
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Lissette

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 7213, which is only -2 from the current. *autostar*

...not much to say about anything else, though.
Fixed, thnx, feels better with that offset :)

mrtn wrote:

set a preview time

[normal]
00:34:66 - reinsert break

[hard]
01:16:15 (4) - new combo maybe?
Fixed! thnx for the recheck

Shulin wrote:

I've been playing this map for a while and I love it! I should have starred sooner, anyway here are some suggestions:

Easy: - My main suggestion is to make the finish sound effect set off the background all the time [it does the majority of the time.] ok, you can see the changes to know if i understood lol (my english is not perfect)

00:51:47 (1) – Remove finish at the end of this slider? – You could use clap?
01:00:83 (1) - ^
01:04:23 (1) – Add finish at the end, I think it sounds a looks better when finish sets off the background.
01:07:64 (1) - ^

Hard:
01:27:00 (1) – Remove new combo, it sounds odd to me breaking up half of a sentence.Done
02:10:72 (5) - Align with 4? done
03:23:81 (1) – Remove finish from this slider? There have already been 4 finishes before it. Normal beats work well.you're right

Insane:
03:23:81 (1) – Remove finish from this slider? This time there are 5 finishes before it. Normal beats work well.you're right, again n.n

Great map - star!
Thanks for modding you guys!
PicoLo
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PicoLo
~Star. ;)
Behon
Elite Mapper
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Behon
Cool background.

Easy:
01:45:936 (1): Make the background pulse here?

Normal:
01:31:468 (1): There's a long stretch here without any pulses. Might want to change that.

Hard & Insane:
No real problems here.
whymeman
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whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Lizbeth's Normal]

00:29:12 (6,7) - Too close together.
00:48:48 (4,5) - What's up with this stack? Make sure to have this stacked evenly.


[Hard]

01:30:61 (1,3,1,3) - Was it intentional to not line up (3) with (1)?
01:49:76 (1,3,4) - (3) and (4) not lined up with (1)?
03:04:02 (3,4) - A bit far apart unless this was really intentional?

Overall: The map seems good so far though there are some more things I want to point out. One is that your background image is quite large in the file size for a .jpeg. Its almost 1 MB. Plus, the imager for the SB is in .jpeg format instead of .png. Another thing to point out is that I can't seem to trace where that other TSC storyboard object is or how it is used and the SB objects have to be at 640 x 480 max, 1024 x 768 could be used IF the image was the background and not part of the SB.
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[Easy]/[Normal]

Great. :)

[Hard]

01:36:57 (3,4,5) - This triplet felt a bit weird, maybe replace the last 2 notes with a single note 3/4 after the first one?
01:47:21 (1) - Shift this note 1/4 earlier, and move the new combo onto the 3?
03:04:23 (4) - Spacing.

[Insane]

(these are mostly random suggestions for spacing, except 1 for timing)

01:16:14 (1,2,3) - Move these upwards a bit so that the 3 isn't so cramped.
01:24:65 (2,3) - Consider making this parallel to the bottom.
01:31:46 (3) - Move a bit to the left to line up with 1?
01:33:80 (5) - Move this one grid to the right.
01:43:80 (3) - Move a bit more up-left to line up with the 1 and 2 before it.
02:16:04 (2) - Should be moved 1/12th later onto the 1/6 after it.
02:39:55 (1,3) - 3 is slightly higher than the 1 here.
02:44:65 (1,2,3) - Looks kinda awkward.

Pretty sweet map/storyboard. Starred.
Lissette
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Lissette
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Crazy Jay
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Shulin
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Shulin
I liked the old SB :(
Lissette
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Lissette

Shulin wrote:

I liked the old SB :(
it's the same, i just had to re-size the images >.<
Shulin
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Shulin

Lissette wrote:

Shulin wrote:

I liked the old SB :(
it's the same, i just had to re-size the images >.<
Sorry, my bad I had to re-download, my copy looked wrong with the image resizing it was... well not pretty.

You might want to put that in the beatmap description for those (like me) who downloaded before the image resizing :D
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