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Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Easy]
00:42:97 (1) - Add a whistle?
01:47:22 (3) - Remove finish on repeat
01:50:63 (3) - ^
01:54:03 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:19:14 (1) - End slider with a finish?
01:59:57 (3) - Remove clap at end or use a finish for the whole slider instead
02:02:97 (1) - ^

[Hard]
01:25:95 (4,5) - Align with 2?
01:26:59 (6) - Align with 3?
01:27:01 (1) - New Combo?
02:59:57 (7) - Finish here?

[Insane]
01:29:78 (7) - Start slider here instead and remove note?
Breeze
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Joined March 2009
Breeze
hi~
tsubasa, cool :)

here's my random mod:

[Easy]
01:13:293 - 01:15:208 - add somthing, it's too empty
01:15:421 - 01:16:910 - ^
01:20:527 - 01:22:017 - ^
01:22:229 - 01:23:719 - ^
01:47:761 - 01:49:251 - ^
01:57:017 (1) - make it overlapping with the end of the front (1)

[Normal]
00:07:229 - 00:34:464 - good patten, add some clap or whistle among them, they sound a little boring
01:37:017 (4) - it doesn't match the music, a slider at 01:36:910 - 01:37:229, add a note at 01:37:442
01:40:421 (5) - same to above ^
01:42:549 (6) - repeat doesn't match anything, sounds stange

[Hard]
00:14:038 (1) - it coverd by the front notes which did'nt disappeared, ugly and confuing
00:15:315 (5) - make it overlapping with the end of the front (4)
00:15:953 (2) - it coverd by the front notes which did'nt disappeared, ugly and confuing, this one is better than front one
00:17:017 (5) - make it overlapping with the end of the front (4)
00:18:719 (5) - make it overlapping with the end of the front (4)
00:27:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - good patten, but covered by front notes, try array them in other side
00:34:464 (1) - wrong spacing
01:52:336 (2) - this covering is confused

I'm lazy and bad at mod Insane :o
anyway, great map!
so mod these for you :)
and star for you
Mafiamaster
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Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Easy~
  1. 00:18:82 (1) - It would be more fitting if it started on the white tick at 00:19:14. Don't forget to shorten! ^.^
Normal~
  1. 01:32:33 (3) - Suggestion: Add a finish here
  2. It's Cool: 01:56:16 (6,7,8) - Ooo, I like the way you did these sliders <3
Hard~
  1. 00:19:03 (1) - Same suggestion as in Easy~
  2. 02:54:03 (4) - Redo break after this note. It'll shorten~

Insane~
  1. 00:08:50 (5,6) - Suggestion: Flip these two notes around.
  2. 00:11:91 (5,6) - ^
  3. 01:11:91 (3) - Add a whistle.
  4. 02:37:01 (2,3,4) - I know someone is going to complain about this (like me ^^) so it'd be best to make these sliders not "hidden-ish"
Lissette
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Topic Starter
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GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
//Easy//

00:21:485(x) - No Breaktime? o.O
00:36:166(1) - Better without New Combo?
00:39:570(1) - ^
01:57:017(1) - ^

Ps.:I'm gonna tell the truth. "I" don't like new combo sections like the one u did on the beggining and at 01:04:251. Remeber that "I" don't like it, so keep using it if you think it's cool, but i gotta say that i think that it's weard.


//Lizbeth's Normal//
Ps.:Hit sounds starting before the BPM? Nothing wrong, it's just... weard .__.

Nothing wrong here =]


//Hard//
Cool mirroring and sub-rythms ^^

00:14:038(1) - weard position :/
01:17:092(6) - 1 grid right
01:51:485(1,2) - i really like this type of sub-rythm but at this part, i don't think that sounds cool =/ I think it's because u didn't used it at 01:47:655.
02:28:506(1) - no new combo
02:34:464(4,5) - does not sounds cool at all :/
03:02:123(1,1) - like i sayid, i don't like New Combo Sections =/


//Insane//
Cool jumps =]

00:47:229(1) - hum... without new combo isn't better? XD
01:51:485(1) - no new combo
01:58:293(break) - really? break here? I think it's better use a Spinner then a short breaktime
02:28:506(1) - better without New Combo? (Thinking of Tag)
02:45:952(3) - Unecessary note?
02:49:357(3) - ^
03:01:910(1) - hum... without new combo i think it's better .__.
03:09:783(1) - ^
03:26:166(1 - END) - I won't fight here XD There are so manny new combos but this section got cool =]

ps.: Loving the song! *---*

Star \o/
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Easy:
Perfect~

Lizbeth's Normal:
01:47:12 (5) - Space further (Blue tick is hard x3)

Hard:
03:26:16 (1) - Forgot to put whistle in ending
03:28:18 (2) - ^
03:26:16 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Combo these beats like this: 03:26:16 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5)

Insane:
01:16:16 (4) - New combo also because the overall diff is pretty high.
01:22:97 (3) - Same as above.
03:27:44 (5) - Move 1 down, looks weird

Awesome map, keep it up~ :)
Shinxyn
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Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
@_@ another hard to follow song
Offset minus 9
Lower hitsound volume 1 or 2 ticks (1 works fine)

Easy-
Something this easy should follow larger grid size~
Nazi-
00:44:67 (3) - might as well align this, (left a tick)
01:57:01 (1) - I say space this away or stack it properly

Lizbeth's-
I say lower the soft hitsound volume too, the finish hitsound is kinda overpowering the music
No grid snap on most parts... so some things could be stacked better, no biggie though
Coulda used less whistles on the vocal sections, but its fine..

Hard-
Please remove all soft sliderslide whistles...
Nazi-
00:15:31 (5,6) - stack better please (turn off grid snap and distance snap)
00:17:01 (5,6) - ^
00:18:71 (5,6) - ^
01:40:63 - add a note? (since the comboes before had them)
There's a lot of alignment and stacks I would prefer look better, but it seems like its your design)
Redo Breaks
And like Normal, the vocal could use less whistles...

Insane-
Hmm same as Hard, remove the soft-sliderslide whistle hitsounds please
Nazi-
00:44:67 (3) - left a tick please~
01:11:48 (2) - up two tick (to "center" from 1,3 better)
01:16:16 (4) - new combo
01:37:44 (8) - ^
01:40:63 - same as Hard
01:49:35 (6) - new combo
01:56:16 (6) - ^
02:40:42 (3) - make this a horizontal flip from 1?
03:17:44 (4,7) - new combo both
The other placements I don't mind much about
Less whistles on the softer vocal sections as well~

@_@ Like I said, the song is hard to follow
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
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tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
[Easy]
00:51:47 (1) - Remoce whistle from start.
00:55:73 (2) - Whistle.
00:59:13 (2) - ^
01:32:540 ~ 01:45:944 - Why break? o.o

[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:08:49 (4) - Whistle.
00:10:19 (4) - ^
00:11:90 (4) - ^
00:13:60 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:25:94 (3,4) - Spacing.
02:11:79 (5,6) - Spacing.

Star, nice map.
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
[Easy]
SPOILER
Fine. What might be wrong in one starred beatmap? :P

[Lizbeth's Normal]
SPOILER
Perfect.

[Hard]
SPOILER
01:32:327 - 01:57:859 - Too much finish hitsounds.
02:56:582 - 03:24:667 - ^
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00:15:306 (5,6) - Stack with vanishing slider's end.
00:17:008 (5,6) - ^
00:18:710 (5,6) - ^
01:41:68 (2,3,4,5,6) - Move these notes 1/2 forward, then add note here and delete (6).

[Insane]
SPOILER
If I were you, I will raise HP Drain a bit.
The same problem with finish hitsounds. But the rest is fantastic.

Move to Pending please.
~Starry
Lissette
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Lissette
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eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
[Easy]
eh.

[Hard]
I got nothin'

[Insane]
00:34:02 - you wanna put a (1,2) here similar to, well, every other combo before it [00:32:32 (1,2) for example, sounds the like the same beat]. just opinion
01:40:62 (x) - note here?

I do have a couple of thoughts of some notes landing on 1/2 that should be 1/4, but I'll let it slide since they land on some sort of beat I DO NOT KNOW OF!!!, I mean, nobody else complains, why not eee as well.

star cause I got nothin'
Lissette
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Lissette
Thanks a lot for your help eee!!
kds 4 ya! :)
mrtn
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Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Ryuukun
have a star
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Easy]

01:59:77 (1) - Maybe you can start this spinner here -> 02:00:19 (1) With the same end.

[Lizbeth's Normal]

00:32:96 (1,2) - Why isn't aligned with (3) ?

[Hard]

00:15:30 (5,6) - Bad placed.

[Insane]

Awesome *_*
Lissette
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Lissette
Thanks a lot for the help osuplayer111. Fixed.
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Timing]
BPM: 141,000, (fine)
Offset: 7 215.
Resnap all notes.
[Easy]
  1. 00:44:66 (3,1) - 1 grid to left.
[Lizbeth's Normal]
  1. Overall Difficulty -> 1 tick to right.
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:30 (5,6) - Stack manually on (4)s end,
  2. 00:58:91 (3) - Stack manually on (2)s end,
  3. 01:12:95 (3,4) - Hm... Stack?.
[Insane]
  1. 00:25:72 (2) - Move 1 grid to left or if it's on purpose, don't change it,
  2. 01:59:98 (1) - Maybe 1/2 later and then cut by 1/2?,
  3. 02:16:57 (4) - 1 grid down and 1 to the left,
  4. 02:16:78 (1) - Maybe 1/2 later and then cut by 1/2?.
Lissette
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Lissette
thnx for your time SteRRuM
Fixed :)
gdeath
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Joined May 2009
gdeath
Hi!
Please look at this only as suggestions^^

SPOILER
[Easy]
fine

SPOILER
[Lizbeth's Normal]
great

SPOILER
[Hard]
02:33:17 (1) - remove whistle on start of slider and add whistle on the end
02:33:59 (2) - remove whistle
02:34:44 (4,5) - ^
02:35:08 (6) - add whistle
02:38:70 (4) - add finish
you can have a try.i think if you add hitsound as my mod,maybe it sound better^^

SPOILER
[Insane]
perfect!\(^o^)/

great storyboard and map~i pretty like it~>O<
starry*
Mystearica
Mystearica
[Easy]

All fine.

[Normal]

01:25:93 (1) - Not really needed but suggest a new combo here? I'm not sure myself. Just thought it'd fit the spacing better.
01:55:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Space this part out more from the previous 01:54:87 (6)

[Hard]

01:49:76 (1) - I would suggest making these parts new combos, might be more intuitive for people on a first try of the map.
01:56:15 (6,7,8,9) - Probably could use a little volume control here.

Overall I'd add more volume control on this difficulty, up to you here.

[Insane]

I'm always awaiting Insane difficulties from you 2, awesome. Fun. No problems for me.

Starzorz
Lissette
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Lissette
Thanks a lot for modding gdeath and Mystearica
Glad you like it n___n
Alace
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Alace
<Insane>
00:08:17 (4,5,6) - XD I will set like that (picture)
00:23:81 (1,2,3,4) - (4) is too near from (3) you have some stuffs like this I SUGGEST FIX
00:32:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - super confusing
00:34:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Awesome parts (you can also set jumps well)
00:39:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
001:55:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
1:48:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -

I don`t need to make a .osu for you this one is good enough
If you need nazi help
PM me in game

dkey
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dkey
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Lissette
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Lissette

Alace wrote:

<Insane>
00:08:17 (4,5,6) - XD I will set like that (picture)
00:23:81 (1,2,3,4) - (4) is too near from (3) you have some stuffs like this I SUGGEST FIX
00:32:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - super confusing
00:34:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Fixed

Awesome parts (you can also set jumps well)
00:39:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
001:55:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
1:48:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
Thanks n///n

I don`t need to make a .osu for you this one is good enough
If you need nazi help
PM me in game
Thanks a lot for modding, glad you like it ^ ^
Alace
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Alace
<Insane>
00:25:93 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - a bit chaos here 300s block the slider
00:33:38 (5) - new combo
00:37:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - confusing (look at 1.2.3) but it is insane diff so i guess it`s fine
01:49:34 (6) - new combo
01:56:15 (6) - new combo
03:17:85 (6) - new combo

That`s all
Time to hunt BAT
mrtn
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mrtn
osz's without video can not be bigger than 10MB. Please resize some stuff. You can do this by lowering the quality of the MP3 and cutting it.
I'm not really sure on the offset...

[normal]
01:17:85 (1) - maybe a finish on the end point?
01:28:92 - reinsert break

[hard]
00:38:81 (5) - 1/8 later
Lissette
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Lissette

mrtn wrote:

osz's without video can not be bigger than 10MB. Please resize some stuff. You can do this by lowering the quality of the MP3 and cutting it.
I'm not really sure on the offset...

[normal]
01:17:85 (1) - maybe a finish on the end point?
01:28:92 - reinsert break

[hard]
00:38:81 (5) - 1/8 later
All fixed FINALLY, I was really busy with the uni.... anyway thanks for modding mrtn :)
ignorethis
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ignorethis
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Zekira
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Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: 7213, which is only -2 from the current. *autostar*

...not much to say about anything else, though.
mrtn
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mrtn
set a preview time

[normal]
00:34:66 - reinsert break

[hard]
01:16:15 (4) - new combo maybe?
Shulin
1,333 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
I've been playing this map for a while and I love it! I should have starred sooner, anyway here are some suggestions:

Easy: - My main suggestion is to make the finish sound effect set off the background all the time [it does the majority of the time.]

00:51:47 (1) – Remove finish at the end of this slider? – You could use clap?
01:00:83 (1) - ^
01:04:23 (1) – Add finish at the end, I think it sounds a looks better when finish sets off the background.
01:07:64 (1) - ^

Hard:
01:27:00 (1) – Remove new combo, it sounds odd to me breaking up half of a sentence.
02:10:72 (5) - Align with 4?
03:23:81 (1) – Remove finish from this slider? There have already been 4 finishes before it. Normal beats work well.

Insane:
03:23:81 (1) – Remove finish from this slider? This time there are 5 finishes before it. Normal beats work well.

Great map - star!
Lissette
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Lissette

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 7213, which is only -2 from the current. *autostar*

...not much to say about anything else, though.
Fixed, thnx, feels better with that offset :)

mrtn wrote:

set a preview time

[normal]
00:34:66 - reinsert break

[hard]
01:16:15 (4) - new combo maybe?
Fixed! thnx for the recheck

Shulin wrote:

I've been playing this map for a while and I love it! I should have starred sooner, anyway here are some suggestions:

Easy: - My main suggestion is to make the finish sound effect set off the background all the time [it does the majority of the time.] ok, you can see the changes to know if i understood lol (my english is not perfect)

00:51:47 (1) – Remove finish at the end of this slider? – You could use clap?
01:00:83 (1) - ^
01:04:23 (1) – Add finish at the end, I think it sounds a looks better when finish sets off the background.
01:07:64 (1) - ^

Hard:
01:27:00 (1) – Remove new combo, it sounds odd to me breaking up half of a sentence.Done
02:10:72 (5) - Align with 4? done
03:23:81 (1) – Remove finish from this slider? There have already been 4 finishes before it. Normal beats work well.you're right

Insane:
03:23:81 (1) – Remove finish from this slider? This time there are 5 finishes before it. Normal beats work well.you're right, again n.n

Great map - star!
Thanks for modding you guys!
PicoLo_old
188 posts
Joined July 2009
PicoLo_old
~Star. ;)
Behon
Elite Mapper
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Behon
Cool background.

Easy:
01:45:936 (1): Make the background pulse here?

Normal:
01:31:468 (1): There's a long stretch here without any pulses. Might want to change that.

Hard & Insane:
No real problems here.
whymeman
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whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Lizbeth's Normal]

00:29:12 (6,7) - Too close together.
00:48:48 (4,5) - What's up with this stack? Make sure to have this stacked evenly.


[Hard]

01:30:61 (1,3,1,3) - Was it intentional to not line up (3) with (1)?
01:49:76 (1,3,4) - (3) and (4) not lined up with (1)?
03:04:02 (3,4) - A bit far apart unless this was really intentional?

Overall: The map seems good so far though there are some more things I want to point out. One is that your background image is quite large in the file size for a .jpeg. Its almost 1 MB. Plus, the imager for the SB is in .jpeg format instead of .png. Another thing to point out is that I can't seem to trace where that other TSC storyboard object is or how it is used and the SB objects have to be at 640 x 480 max, 1024 x 768 could be used IF the image was the background and not part of the SB.
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[Easy]/[Normal]

Great. :)

[Hard]

01:36:57 (3,4,5) - This triplet felt a bit weird, maybe replace the last 2 notes with a single note 3/4 after the first one?
01:47:21 (1) - Shift this note 1/4 earlier, and move the new combo onto the 3?
03:04:23 (4) - Spacing.

[Insane]

(these are mostly random suggestions for spacing, except 1 for timing)

01:16:14 (1,2,3) - Move these upwards a bit so that the 3 isn't so cramped.
01:24:65 (2,3) - Consider making this parallel to the bottom.
01:31:46 (3) - Move a bit to the left to line up with 1?
01:33:80 (5) - Move this one grid to the right.
01:43:80 (3) - Move a bit more up-left to line up with the 1 and 2 before it.
02:16:04 (2) - Should be moved 1/12th later onto the 1/6 after it.
02:39:55 (1,3) - 3 is slightly higher than the 1 here.
02:44:65 (1,2,3) - Looks kinda awkward.

Pretty sweet map/storyboard. Starred.
Lissette
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Crazy Jay
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Shulin
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Shulin
I liked the old SB :(
Lissette
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Lissette

Shulin wrote:

I liked the old SB :(
it's the same, i just had to re-size the images >.<
Shulin
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Shulin

Lissette wrote:

Shulin wrote:

I liked the old SB :(
it's the same, i just had to re-size the images >.<
Sorry, my bad I had to re-download, my copy looked wrong with the image resizing it was... well not pretty.

You might want to put that in the beatmap description for those (like me) who downloaded before the image resizing :D
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Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
Hi :)

Insane:

00:18:070 (5) - is a tiny bit away from slider endpoint
00:54:087 (2) - ^
00:58:086 (3) - ^
01:57:085 (4) - suggest a jump or bigger spacing
02:11:004 (1) - ^
02:43:059 (3) - nazi spacing
03:03:059 (1,2,3,4) - suggest to space this more wider over the screen
03:06:057 (1,2,3) - suggest jumps
03:10:019 (1,2,3,4,5) - suggest bigger spacing
03:12:031 (6,7,8) - suggest jumps

Hard:

difficulty increase +1 or +2
00:14:002 (1) - needs bigger spacing from last circle
01:42:021 (7) - suggest to remove
01:54:002 (2) - needs bigger spacing too i think
02:15:072 (1,2,3,4) - this too because of blue tick. will make it easier to read
02:50:061 (3,1,2,1) - sounds a half beat too late

Normal:

01:05:093 (6) - nazi spacing
add beats: 1:15:723 - 1:17:425 - 1:20:830

Easy:

01:12:031 (5) - sounds better for the next circle if this is 1 beat longer
1:32:744 - this break is very unfitting :( its the highlight of the song


thats all. good map :) starred
Lissette
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Lissette
Thanks for modding and starrin' Hanyuu :) :)
Teara
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Teara
Nice.. :)

Only things I can find wrong is some minor nazi'ing

~star
Yuukari-Banteki
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Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
Merry Christmas and enjoy your overdrive modding!

[Easy]
00:56:574 (3) - maybe try a finish instead of a whistle
01:47:213 (3) - move the finish to where the sb flashes
otherwise very nice map :)

[Lizbeth]
The intro seems rather significantly more difficult than the rest of the map, maybe tone it down a bit?
01:28:915 (6) - finish

-this is a friendly reminder that the comments I make are suggestions on how to make your map better, and that implementing them is up to the discretion of you, the mapper-

[Hard]
00:14:234 (2) - the first of these double hits shouldnt have a hitsound on it
00:27:851 (4) - fairly well hidden under fading notes
00:29:553 (4) - start 1/4 later and shorten by 1/4
00:31:255 (4) - ^
etc.
the difficulty of the intro and the difficulty of the first verse are so far apart, its weird. Either tone down the intro or tone up the verse, please
01:34:021 (6,7) - so loud :(
01:49:340 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - you're really grinding that finish hard...have some mercy on our ears :P
02:09:340 (1) - a bit hidden
02:33:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - random nugget of difficulty in the easy part
also an epilepsy warning may be in order for the end there :P
A final silly question: why don't you have kiai in here?

[Insane]
00:48:064 (1,2,3) - this pattern is completely unrankable because of overlap. If you want something like this, try flipping 2 vertically, just don't overlap them this much.
in the verse...maybe put some notes in the blank places?
01:34:021 (6,7) - no double flashes in sb please. its positively epileptic and gives me a headache
01:52:744 (1) - remove the middle finish
02:37:000 (2,3,4) - as stated before, unrankable


send me a pm when you've fixed your map some and I'll come back. Also, Merry Christmas!
Lissette
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Lissette

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

Merry Christmas and enjoy your overdrive modding!

[Easy]
00:56:574 (3) - maybe try a finish instead of a whistle done
01:47:213 (3) - move the finish to where the sb flashes done
otherwise very nice map :)

[Lizbeth]
The intro seems rather significantly more difficult than the rest of the map, maybe tone it down a bit? i removed some beats at the intro
01:28:915 (6) - finish done

-this is a friendly reminder that the comments I make are suggestions on how to make your map better, and that implementing them is up to the discretion of you, the mapper-

[Hard]
00:14:234 (2) - the first of these double hits shouldnt have a hitsound on it Fixed all
00:27:851 (4) - fairly well hidden under fading notes Fixed
00:29:553 (4) - start 1/4 later and shorten by 1/4 Fixed, and the other like this too ^^
00:31:255 (4) - ^
etc.
the difficulty of the intro and the difficulty of the first verse are so far apart, its weird. Either tone down the intro or tone up the verse, please i tried to do something but the intro is not that soft as the verse,i'll leave it like this u.u
01:34:021 (6,7) - so loud :( lowered the volume of all diff
01:49:340 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2) - you're really grinding that finish hard...have some mercy on our ears :P
02:09:340 (1) - a bit hidden Fixed
02:33:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - random nugget of difficulty in the easy part i made the easy part ramdon on purpose ^^
also an epilepsy warning may be in order for the end there :P
A final silly question: why don't you have kiai in here? I didnt use kiai cuz the SB is flashy enought, if i put kiai it could really cause an epileptic attack xD

[Insane]
00:48:064 (1,2,3) - this pattern is completely unrankable because of overlap. If you want something like this, try flipping 2 vertically, just don't overlap them this much. Fixed
in the verse...maybe put some notes in the blank places?didnt add notes at the blank places cuz sound ugly, but added some triplets to increase the difficulty, hope its fine ^^
01:34:021 (6,7) - no double flashes in sb please. its positively epileptic and gives me a headache lol, Fixed
01:52:744 (1) - remove the middle finish done
02:37:000 (2,3,4) - as stated before, unrankable Fixed


send me a pm when you've fixed your map some and I'll come back. Also, Merry Christmas!
Nice modding, thanks!
Merry Christmas to you too! ^^
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
yai back to this map

[Easy]
00:45:936 (1) - move out from under 1

[Lizbeth]
00:23:808 (3,4) - could you maybe unstack these, or stack a different set of notes in this combo?

[Hard]
00:47:212 (1) - maybe move this so it isnt hidden by 2
01:28:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this a quiet Normal section for dramatic flair :P if you want

[Insane]
02:11:468 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - epilepsy again in the sp :P
02:25:085 (9) - try a finish
02:59:978 (2) - remove finish
also there are more ways to increase difficulty than adding notes :P you could also add jumps or other such things


Also, I'm about ready to bubble this so don't forget to call me back!
Lissette
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Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Lissette

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

yai back to this map

[Easy]
00:45:936 (1) - move out from under 1 Fixed

[Lizbeth]
00:23:808 (3,4) - could you maybe unstack these, or stack a different set of notes in this combo? Done

[Hard]
00:47:212 (1) - maybe move this so it isnt hidden by 2 Fixed
01:28:915 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this a quiet Normal section for dramatic flair :P if you want didnt like how it sound >.<

[Insane]
02:11:468 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - epilepsy again in the sp :P Fixed
02:25:085 (9) - try a finish ill leave the wisthle cuz the song has like a wisthle there ^^
02:59:978 (2) - remove finish Fixed
also there are more ways to increase difficulty than adding notes :P you could also add jumps or other such things i dont wanted to put jumps on the soft part of the song, i guess it have enough jumps on the rest of the map


Also, I'm about ready to bubble this so don't forget to call me back!
Thanks for modding! ^^
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
kay one final pass, here~

[Easy]
good

[Lizbeth]
nice

[Hard]
sweet~

[Insane]
bubbled ^0^
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Congratulations~ :)
Lissette
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Thanks :)
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