no kd.
few months passed.. let's see what can we improve.
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That's all. Good luck then~
few months passed.. let's see what can we improve.
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- Kiai points must be snapped on Gundam's Insane, Rotte and Shore diffs.
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- 00:06:036 (1) - for the rhythm from the song, the new combo should be removed here and add another one at 00:07:987 (2).
- 00:08:963 (1) - same as above, remove the new combo here.
- 00:11:890 (1,2) - looks so crowded with the previous slider on the last combo (3). maybe you can try to move them onto x.368 y.256 for a better looking.
- 00:17:743 (2) - i'd like to make the blanket perfect. like this -> http://puu.sh/2z2aF
- 00:23:597 (1,2) - looks really forced for the following slider (1) on the next combo. try this slider shape? would be a much better effection imo. :3 --> http://puu.sh/2z2ef
- 00:29:451 (2) - the present rhythm follows nothing. why not this? (if you did this, consider to silence the hitsound of sliderticks by inherited points for the 3/2 repeat.. http://puu.sh/2z2fF
- 01:16:280 (1) to 01:33:841 - tons of issues about new combos as well.. that one should be removed here and 01:20:182, then add a new one at 01:19:207.. (notice that the downbeats should be on the first beat on each two bars. yea the present are totally out of positions and you should bring that new combos one bar ahead or later. just keep them consistent.
- 01:31:890 (1) - such confused for beginners and it's really not allowed on easy diff. change it to a normal way. :3
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- 00:26:036 (2) - i'd like to try avoiding that overlap with the previous slider (2). just re-arrange them as circles like this? --> http://puu.sh/2z2KA
- 00:31:402 (1) - that whistle on the head of slider sounds really noisy.. the peaceful part should be started by a peaceful way. :3
- 00:35:304 (1) - same as above ^ (also at 00:39:207 (1) - and 00:43:109 (1) -
- 01:00:670 (2) - why not make them symmetrical? move onto x.176 y.288 and make adjustment for spacings of following notes.
- 01:16:280 (3) - you should make the pattern here neater.. --> http://puu.sh/2z2SE
- 01:23:597 (2) - bad blanket with previous slider (1).. ;w; --> http://puu.sh/2z2TR
- 01:27:987 (3,4,5) - also forced pattern here.. maybe it could be better if you would improving the shape of sliders. personally i prefer this. --> http://puu.sh/2z2Wq
- 01:31:890 (1) - same problem as easy diff.
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- 00:07:012 (4) - try avoiding the overlap here? you can just make the slider straight.
- 00:15:548 (2) - um.. how about moving to x.332 y.252 for a better looking since they could be a symmetrical triangle shape.. would be a better aspect imo.
- 00:19:695 (1) - just remove the noisy whistle on that repeat. (same thing at 00:23:597 (1)
- 00:34:329 (1,2,3,4) - just arrange them as a straight line plz.. looks really messy.. orz (same thing at 00:42:134 (1,2,3,4) --> http://puu.sh/2z37i
- 01:13:109 (3) - ... -> http://puu.sh/2z39l
- 01:17:012 (2) - move that slider onto x.360 y.200 so that the tail of previous slider could be on (2)'s sliderslide? http://puu.sh/2z39R
- 01:18:231 - the whistles on this part sounds a bit loud and not really suitable.. i guess it could be decreased some volume or remove some whistls from them.. depends on you.
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- as kotone said, there have so many strange shapes slider not appropriate or can't express the right things for the song.. and some strange rhythm as well. such as 00:16:768 (3,1) - i heard no any beats on the blue tick and maybe you just want to keep consistent with slider 00:17:743 (1) but it makes no sense.. only awkward feeling.. on the other side, i wish you can consider to improve the hitsounds by curtailling dense whitles and avoiding whistle+clap somewhere such as 00:28:963 (3) - 00:29:939 (2) -..
- 00:00:670 (2) - i have no idea about why you'd like to use kick slider on this part.. as i heard from the song it follows nothing.. however if you really want something special try following drums and set the rhythm like this?(same thing at 00:02:622 (2) --> http://puu.sh/2z44Z
- 00:03:841 (6) - just remove the clap here.. it's really out of the song. (also same at 00:07:743 (5) and 00:11:402 (5)'s tail and many places including 00:15:548 (3).
- 00:26:524 (2) - uesless whistle on that start.
- 01:18:231 - why not to keep the volume consistent? sounds really weird for now..
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- 00:00:183 - strongly recommend reducing the volume to 45~55% since you have used many whistles on this part, they are sound a bit noisy..
- 00:09:451 (1) - as we heard from the song, the new combo should be on the following short slider (2) rather than that (1)..
- 00:25:061 (9) - sounds like the whistle on that tail is really suitable.
- 00:25:548 (1) - and i'd like to move the whistle onto the following circle (2), then you'll find a better effect.
- 00:49:695 (3) - the rhythm on that ending is not so strong that really need whistle on it..
- 00:50:914 (1) - maybe a leftward curve would make the pattern looks better? just like this. --> http://puu.sh/2z4C8
- 00:52:378 (5) - remove the whistle here since whistle+clap always make bad effection.
- 00:56:280 (9) - um i'd like to remove the whistle on that tail as well.
- 01:12:865 (2) - ^
- 01:32:378 (1) - looks confused.. maybe you can withdraw the anchor which on that tail for readable.. for instance --> http://puu.sh/2z4K4
Nice diff.
That's all. Good luck then~
,i will change it little overlap
