mintong89 wrote:

Mod as request~

[General]
有个无用的SB (Arrow.png) 还是我没下载完整？ 本来打算做sb来着，不过后来还是放弃了.我重下了次，没有发现这个文件.上次应该删了

[Shore]

00:11:768 (1) - 建议换note, 因为这里 00:11:890 - 要放个note来放hitsound. 不然感觉空空的. 有点不清楚换了note以后要怎么改...
00:26:524 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这种 56 在一个stack 然后 789 一个stack 感觉不好, 不然 56789 全部stack住或者 56 分开？ 稍微改了改

other is no problem

nazi mod..orz

Eggache0 wrote:

你确定easy没有忘记加BG？

mintong89 wrote:

Mod as request~

[刚大木]

00:16:524 (3) - 感觉可以 Ctrl+G - done
01:04:207 (7) - 建议删这个......放这个有点乱 - done 改成slider了

1. Inconsistent preview point in Rotte
   
2. many unsnapped inherited sections in 3 Insane diffs.. i think you'd better fixed them at least the kiai time.

Strawberry wrote:

1. Inconsistent preview point in Rotte fix 可我这看是一致的orz
   
2. many unsnapped inherited sections in 3 Insane diffs.. i think you'd better fixed them at least the kiai time.

1. Tag:Delete "DJMAX" since it's in Source;Add "misato" who is the singer.

• 00:27:500 (1) - Delete the whistle of start point and add finish instead?Since the clearly finish sound here.
  00:27:500 (1) - (the end point)How about add whistle here?
  01:13:841 (3,1,2) - Sooo crowded.Move 2 to make them clearer:http://puu.sh/2mXd5

1. AR-1 would be better imo
   00:28:963 (1) - Remove NC,the combo is too short
   00:47:012 (1) - Why dont add clap at the end point...?
   00:50:670 (1) - ^
   00:52:378 (4) - ^
   00:53:353 (2) - ^but start point
   00:57:743 (3) - ^end point
   00:48:719 (1) - Remove NC.Some of the combo is too short and they can be longer.
   00:55:792 (1) - Remove NC.Same reason.
   01:08:475 (1) - ^
   Patterns are fine

• 00:07:256 (5,6) - A suggestion here: To correspond to(1,2,3,4),Make like this: http://puu.sh/2mXzi ...?
  00:13:841 (1,1) - Suggestion.Shorten the spinner to 00:14:817 - ,and add a circle at 00:15:061 - which cover (2),maybe like this:http://puu.sh/2mXMt .It would be more fit~.If you change this,dont forget add a clap at (1,2)
  00:34:573 (4,5,6) - To correspond to 00:38:231 (1,2,3,4) - ,Add new combo.
  00:37:256 (1) - Remove new combo.I cant see any reason to add new combo here.Anyway the combo is too short
  00:41:158 (1) - ^

1. AR-1.Since the bpm isnt fast,and the spacing of this difficultly aren't big,AR8 is too fast for this difficultly imo.
2. CS-1...?Big circle in high difficultly looks so...stupid.
   00:13:841 (1) - For me,whistle would be more fit than finish.Finish is too strong here.
   00:15:061 (1,2) - ehh what dont add clap...?
   00:23:597 (1) - A finish is missing.
   00:27:256 (1) - ^at end point
   00:38:231 (4) - Add whistle sounds better.
   00:42:134 (6) - Add whistle at the end point.Since you have add at the same place before...
   00:45:792 (3) - ^
   00:47:012 (1) - A finish is missing.
   00:58:719 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...A dont think it's a good way to do this.
   01:31:890 (1) - A finish....
   01:33:841 (1) - Add whistle...?

• 00:07:987 (1) - It is so strange to let clap and finish sound together...Delete clap...?
  00:13:841 (1) - ^
  00:09:817 (2) - Delete clap...?Too strong here imo.
  Nice difficultly.

Kotone wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
[General]

1. Tag:Delete "DJMAX" since it's in Source;Add "misato" who is the singer.

tag删了djmax，misato是这个版本的演唱者,tsukasa是原版唱者.一开始我是在artist里用misato的，后来Curisu告诉我aitist用tsukasa比较合理（就像mf版本一样）所以我就用了在线的tag和aitist edit:在线→现在

[Easy]

• 00:27:500 (1) - Delete the whistle of start point and add finish instead?Since the clearly finish sound here. ok
  00:27:500 (1) - (the end point)How about add whistle here?i think is ok.-.
  01:13:841 (3,1,2) - Sooo crowded.Move 2 to make them clearer:http://puu.sh/2mXd5 good,fix

[Normal]

1. AR-1 would be better imo fix
   00:28:963 (1) - Remove NC,the combo is too short fix
   00:47:012 (1) - Why dont add clap at the end point...? fix,i leak it ;w;
   00:50:670 (1) - ^ is ok.-.
   00:52:378 (4) - ^ fix
   00:53:353 (2) - ^but start point fix
   00:57:743 (3) - ^end point fix
   00:48:719 (1) - Remove NC.Some of the combo is too short and they can be longer. fix
   00:55:792 (1) - Remove NC.Same reason. fix
   01:08:475 (1) - ^ fix
   Patterns are fine

[Hard]

• 00:07:256 (5,6) - A suggestion here: To correspond to(1,2,3,4),Make like this: http://puu.sh/2mXzi ...? change some
  00:13:841 (1,1) - Suggestion.Shorten the spinner to 00:14:817 - ,and add a circle at 00:15:061 - which cover (2),maybe like this:http://puu.sh/2mXMt .It would be more fit~.If you change this,dont forget add a clap at (1,2) change,but i don't use your suggestion
  00:34:573 (4,5,6) - To correspond to 00:38:231 (1,2,3,4) - ,Add new combo. ok,fix
  00:37:256 (1) - Remove new combo.I cant see any reason to add new combo here.Anyway the combo is too short fix
  00:41:158 (1) - ^fix

[Shore]

• 00:07:987 (1) - It is so strange to let clap and finish sound together...Delete clap...? same like 00:06:036 (3) - ,no change
  00:13:841 (1) - ^ ^
  00:09:817 (2) - Delete clap...?Too strong here imo. no change
  Nice difficultly. Thank you:3

圖不錯可是gd不太行。還有Gundam的patterns有點太單一了。

EDIT:忘了說Shore leadin不一樣。fix

Kotone wrote:

首先你要搞清楚一件事：Tsukasa是arranger而不是歌手，原版的歌手還是Misato，用Tsukasa做Artist的原因不是因為他是Singer，而是因為他是Arrganer，這點很重要。不是說要迫你改Artist，我只是想你搞清楚。Misato始終是歌手，加一個tag是很正常的，一點都不過分。
下次請你先查清楚歌曲的Singer/Arranger是誰，這兩個也是可以當作Artist的，但也不要搞混了，說Tsukasa是演唱者真的有點搞笑。

Kotone wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
[Gundam's Insane]

1. AR-1.Since the bpm isnt fast,and the spacing of this difficultly aren't big,AR8 is too fast for this difficultly imo. no
2. CS-1...?Big circle in high difficultly looks so...stupid. no
   00:13:841 (1) - For me,whistle would be more fit than finish.Finish is too strong here.
   00:15:061 (1,2) - ehh what dont add clap...?
   00:23:597 (1) - A finish is missing.
   00:27:256 (1) - ^at end point
   00:38:231 (4) - Add whistle sounds better.
   00:42:134 (6) - Add whistle at the end point.Since you have add at the same place before...
   00:45:792 (3) - ^
   00:47:012 (1) - A finish is missing.
   00:58:719 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ...A dont think it's a good way to do this.
   01:31:890 (1) - A finish....
   01:33:841 (1) - Add whistle...?

all fix

Kotone wrote:

[Rotte]
很用心做可是。。。你認為這么可愛的歌適合這種有點偏奇葩的擺法么。。。至少我認為不太合適。
還有n-whistle也不適合吧。。
最後一個slider怎么聽也是白線停才對

a3272509123 wrote:

拉姥爷fight~再来颗star ww

Rotte wrote:

Kotone wrote:

[Rotte]
很用心做可是。。。你認為這么可愛的歌適合這種有點偏奇葩的擺法么。。。至少我認為不太合適。
還有n-whistle也不適合吧。。
最後一個slider怎么聽也是白線停才對

最后一个slider，我绝对不会认为我的slider在节奏上有任何问题，

Strawberry wrote:

no kd.
few months passed.. let's see what can we improve.
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1. Kiai points must be snapped on Gundam's Insane, Rotte and Shore diffs.

fix
　
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1. 00:06:036 (1) - for the rhythm from the song, the new combo should be removed here and add another one at 00:07:987 (2). fix
2. 00:08:963 (1) - same as above, remove the new combo here. fix
3. 00:11:890 (1,2) - looks so crowded with the previous slider on the last combo (3). maybe you can try to move them onto x.368 y.256 for a better looking. ok,fix
4. 00:17:743 (2) - i'd like to make the blanket perfect. like this -> http://puu.sh/2z2aF ok,change
5. 00:23:597 (1,2) - looks really forced for the following slider (1) on the next combo. try this slider shape? would be a much better effection imo. :3 --> http://puu.sh/2z2ef nice,change
6. 00:29:451 (2) - the present rhythm follows nothing. why not this? (if you did this, consider to silence the hitsound of sliderticks by inherited points for the 3/2 repeat.. http://puu.sh/2z2fF ok,change.-.
7. 01:16:280 (1) to 01:33:841 - tons of issues about new combos as well.. that one should be removed here and 01:20:182, then add a new one at 01:19:207.. (notice that the downbeats should be on the first beat on each two bars. yea the present are totally out of positions and you should bring that new combos one bar ahead or later. just keep them consistent. emm,change (有点不太懂这英语，意思是不是这样的节奏下错了，顿和击打没把握好？
8. 01:31:890 (1) - such confused for beginners and it's really not allowed on easy diff. change it to a normal way. :3 orz...这个不太想改，不过新人的确不容易读清，fix

　
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1. 00:26:036 (2) - i'd like to try avoiding that overlap with the previous slider (2). just re-arrange them as circles like this? --> http://puu.sh/2z2KA change
2. 00:31:402 (1) - that whistle on the head of slider sounds really noisy.. the peaceful part should be started by a peaceful way. :3 ok,remove
3. 00:35:304 (1) - same as above ^ (also at 00:39:207 (1) - and 00:43:109 (1) - ok,all fix
4. 01:00:670 (2) - why not make them symmetrical? move onto x.176 y.288 and make adjustment for spacings of following notes. ok,fix
5. 01:16:280 (3) - you should make the pattern here neater.. --> http://puu.sh/2z2SE ok,fix
6. 01:23:597 (2) - bad blanket with previous slider (1).. ;w; --> http://puu.sh/2z2TR ok,fix
7. 01:27:987 (3,4,5) - also forced pattern here.. maybe it could be better if you would improving the shape of sliders. personally i prefer this. --> http://puu.sh/2z2Wq fix
8. 01:31:890 (1) - same problem as easy diff. change

　
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1. 00:07:012 (4) - try avoiding the overlap here? you can just make the slider straight. fix
2. 00:15:548 (2) - um.. how about moving to x.332 y.252 for a better looking since they could be a symmetrical triangle shape.. would be a better aspect imo. fix
3. 00:19:695 (1) - just remove the noisy whistle on that repeat. (same thing at 00:23:597 (1) fix
4. 00:34:329 (1,2,3,4) - just arrange them as a straight line plz.. looks really messy.. orz (same thing at 00:42:134 (1,2,3,4) --> http://puu.sh/2z37i fix
5. 01:13:109 (3) - ... -> http://puu.sh/2z39l change
6. 01:17:012 (2) - move that slider onto x.360 y.200 so that the tail of previous slider could be on (2)'s sliderslide? http://puu.sh/2z39R
   i think is ok~
7. 01:18:231 - the whistles on this part sounds a bit loud and not really suitable.. i guess it could be decreased some volume or remove some whistls from them.. depends on you.ok,change some

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1. 00:00:183 - strongly recommend reducing the volume to 45~55% since you have used many whistles on this part, they are sound a bit noisy.. ok,i use 55%
2. 00:09:451 (1) - as we heard from the song, the new combo should be on the following short slider (2) rather than that (1).. ok,fix
3. 00:25:061 (9) - sounds like the whistle on that tail is really suitable. ok,add
4. 00:25:548 (1) - and i'd like to move the whistle onto the following circle (2), then you'll find a better effect. change,but use other program
5. 00:49:695 (3) - the rhythm on that ending is not so strong that really need whistle on it.. ok,remove
6. 00:50:914 (1) - maybe a leftward curve would make the pattern looks better? just like this. --> http://puu.sh/2z4C8 change,but use other program
7. 00:52:378 (5) - remove the whistle here since whistle+clap always make bad effection. fix
8. 00:56:280 (9) - um i'd like to remove the whistle on that tail as well. fix
9. 01:12:865 (2) - ^ fix
10. 01:32:378 (1) - looks confused.. maybe you can withdraw the anchor which on that tail for readable.. for instance --> http://puu.sh/2z4K4 emm..ok
    Nice diff.

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That's all. Good luck then~

Zero__wind wrote:

我还以为已经坟了

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi~ Random modding.

General:

-- Check your BGs on diffs except <Shore>. well,i think 800x600 is ok

Easy:

00:30:182 (3) - This is in the red line, which makes beginners confused to click. Though this is a slider, NC will work better. fix
01:19:207 (3) - Delete this? I don't think this beat was worth mapping. change
01:31:890 (1) - End with Finish as Normal? no,is noise

Normal:

-- Spinners?

00:54:573 (4,5) - What is this long jump???? ok,fix

Hard:

-- AR6 for a better balance. OD is too low currently.

00:04:573 (2) - Set a consistent distance. fix
00:15:304 (1,3) - Start NC from (3) to fit the music. fix
00:33:353 (4) - Similar with Shore. Consider deleting claps starting here. fix
01:15:914 (4) - Delete this note. fix
01:17:743 (3) - Ctrl+G? I think this is better than a slider jump. fix
01:32:378 (1) - Please reshape this. overlap with the start and the end isn't actually super unreadable currently, but fixing will be much better. Maybe ,i will change it little overlap

Shore:

00:27:012 (1) - Delete NC. It looks way better this way, since this is in the same stream. Also, the combo won't be too long. fix
00:33:353 (1) - Consider deleting Clap. The music is calm, and I don't think Clap fits. all fix
00:37:256 (1) - ^
00:41:158 (1) - ^
00:45:061 (1) - ^
00:47:743 (2) - Add Whistle at the start to not make 00:49:695 (3) weird by starting the whistle. fix
00:48:719 (1) - ^ fix
01:07:134 (6) - Maybe delete this? Feels overmapped. ok,change
01:27:743 (1,2,3) - Why not putting at (280,315)? fix

Very nice map, Shore. Good luck ^^

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

防坟

Sonnyc wrote:

For the BG, it was deleted when I played.

Zero__wind wrote:

ooooooooh nooooooooooo !
Rotte sama no god-like diff is gone !

ts8zs wrote:

shore
01:12:134 (1) - 倒数第二个点往上移一点 fix
01:14:451 (2) - Remove fix
01:32:378 (1) - 屁股~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/840273 fix
Hard
00:13:841 (1) - 下移一点 fix
01:13:109 (3) - 最后一个点动一下 往哪..
01:27:987 (1,2) - 故意错开的么？fix
01:32:378 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/840288 学会了没？ 好
Normal
01:33:841 (1) - 还是移开点比较好 我觉得这样就好
Easy
挺规矩的……

[HitObjects]
256,256,92378,38,0,B|160:192|144:128|192:64|256:96|256:96|320:64|368:128|352:192|256:256,1,480,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[HitObjects]
256,288,92378,54,0,B|368:208|384:128|304:80|256:112|256:112|208:80|128:128|144:208|256:288,1,540,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

ts8zs wrote:

哈？！左右都不对称好伐？！
算了
Hard的❤

[HitObjects]
256,256,92378,38,0,B|160:192|144:128|192:64|256:96|256:96|320:64|368:128|352:192|256:256,1,480,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Shore的❤ style1

[HitObjects]
256,288,92378,54,0,B|368:208|384:128|304:80|256:112|256:112|208:80|128:128|144:208|256:288,1,540,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

No kds

jyc-Binggan wrote:

[general]
tsukasa还有这种歌啊，意外
你sc:1的clap为啥当finish加啊，莫名
[ez]
00:30:182 (1) - 去掉nc
00:53:353 (4,5) - 最好不要stack吧，在这种难度里
00:47:012 - 在这段音乐高昂段你反而没有用clap。。。最好加了
01:18:231 (2) - 拉成包住01:16:280 (1) - 的感觉能好看点
[normal]
01:33:841 (1) - 去掉nc？
[hard]
01:33:841 (1) - ctrl+z，然后你再调整一下
00:53:841 (3) - 改成向左弧能好看一点吧
[shore]
00:27:134 (10) - 去掉note 后面放三连滑条
01:16:280 (1) - 改成折返滑条 [color=#FF0000e20]不要:d[/colore20]


已经很多人看过了，没什么大毛病啊，祝rank