...ensure that your sliders do not overlap one another, the tail end of your slider is always visible, and that the slider path is not obscured in any way - such as unpredictable U-turns or making the head and tail of the slider overlap.

_Erra_ wrote:

Hi
mod req
General
Tags:Korean
/Not Japanese/ || not change, yes its Korean singer, but its a Japanese song. I think it should be japanese

Normal
Circle Size: 3 || done
01:00:350 (3) - not whistle,finish || I use whistle for slider and finish for start of slider
01:02:437 (5) - finish
01:08:698 (3) - finish
01:52:002 (7) - finish
01:54:611 (2) - finish
02:07:133 (3) - finish
dont use clap with finish,okay?
02:39:350 - add timing point, sound 50% (offset:159350)
02:45:219 - 02:47:060 - sound 50%
02:48:728 - add timing point,sounf 65% (offset:168728) || ^^^^^^^ Done
03:53:958 - sound 35% || change 1st spinner to 30, 2nd spinner to 45

Reikosaka wrote:

[Insane]
00:36:872 (6) - Slidernya nyelip gitu , bagusnya di geser lagi deh jangan sampe kena timpahan slider sblumnya || OK
00:36:872 (6) - btw kok break disini ? di isi aja soalnya agak awkward || G ad break d situ, cek lagi deh
01:07:654 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - jump-nya jangan dari 1/16 ke 1/4 , hitsoundya keliatan aneh jadinya .. kaya gini nih http://puu.sh/3fUmN.jpg || G ad hit sound, kan d silent..
02:06:089 (1,2,3) - sama kaya sblum-nya || sama, g ad hit sound, silent
02:14:176 (3) - 02:20:437 (3) - terlalu jauh , coba di deketin sedikit || Itu distance snap koq, sama seperti sebelum"ny.. g masalah kayany..
03:14:958 (1,2,1) - masalah jump kaya di atas
03:14:958 (1,2,1) - ^
03:31:654 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - ^

Note : kenapa jump jangan kaya gitu ? , karena jump tsb berlawan arah. || Gua tunggu modding lebih bnyk deh, klo bnyk yg suruh ganti baru gua ganti

[Hard]
03:14:958 (1,2,1) - 03:31:654 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - apa ga susah nih ? kenapa ga model stream aja ? || OK

[Normal]
Bagus bagus aja sih kayanya ..

Reikosaka wrote:

[Insane]
00:36:872 (6) - Slidernya nyelip gitu , bagusnya di geser lagi deh jangan sampe kena timpahan slider sblumnya || OK
00:36:872 (6) - btw kok break disini ? di isi aja soalnya agak awkward || G ad break d situ, cek lagi deh
01:07:654 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - jump-nya jangan dari 1/16 ke 1/4 , hitsoundya keliatan aneh jadinya .. kaya gini nih http://puu.sh/3fUmN.jpg || G ad hit sound, kan d silent..
02:06:089 (1,2,3) - sama kaya sblum-nya || sama, g ad hit sound, silent
02:14:176 (3) - 02:20:437 (3) - terlalu jauh , coba di deketin sedikit || Itu distance snap koq, sama seperti sebelum"ny.. g masalah kayany..
03:14:958 (1,2,1) - masalah jump kaya di atas
03:14:958 (1,2,1) - ^
03:31:654 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - ^

Note : kenapa jump jangan kaya gitu ? , karena jump tsb berlawan arah. || Gua tunggu modding lebih bnyk deh, klo bnyk yg suruh ganti baru gua ganti

[Hard]
03:14:958 (1,2,1) - 03:31:654 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - apa ga susah nih ? kenapa ga model stream aja ? || OK

[Normal]
Bagus bagus aja sih kayanya ..

DEAncientNaga wrote:

Hi,

Just some opinions, I'm newbie too tho D:

op. = optional

[Normal]
00:10:263 - Make the break starts at this timing, the head of break to here done
00:41:306 (5,6) - Maybe (5) invert OR (6) at another place instead the head of the slider, example > 01:01:393 (4,5) I dont get it
00:52:002 (3) - NC (new combo) done
01:09:219 - KIAI time ends done
01:09:350 - Remove break Not change - draining some hp
01:17:045 (1,2) - Ignore DS, make tail of (1) stick to (2), might look better done
01:50:437 (3) - NC
02:41:567 (1) - Remove NC
02:48:872 (1) - Remove NC
02:50:958 (1) - Remove NC (op.)
02:52:263 (2) - NC (op.)
02:54:872 (1) - Remove NC
02:59:306 (2) - NC
03:07:654 (4) - NC
03:11:045 (7) - NC
03:12:611 (1) - Remove NC
03:16:002 (1) - Feels like spinner too less time (op.) not change
03:20:176 (1) - ^ (op.)changed
03:28:263 (1) - ^ (op.)changed
03:36:872 (1) - Make spinner same length as 03:41:046 (1) done
03:54:089 (1,1) - Prefer spinners tail change into note, depends on your choice not change

NC problem fixed some - same for hard and insane

[Hard]
Approach Rate: -1 done
00:52:002 (3) - NC (refer to normal on other NC)
01:09:219 - KIAI time endsdone
01:23:306 (1,1,1) - Remove NC (op.) not change
01:09:480 - Remove break not change - same as norm reason

[Insane]
HP Drain: +1 done
01:09:219 - KIAI time ends done
01:14:567 (4) - Make it same distance as (5), (6), (7) done - sorry my bad (its a mistake), thanks for telling
00:52:002 (3) - NC (also few more NC refer to normal)
02:24:350 - Maybe put something, don't break too long or just remove break (example follow 1/1 beat) - not now, mabe later~

Good luck - Thanks~~

• I think this diff is truly unrankable, i see something like copy-pasting and flipping Horizon/Vertical. but it has good jumps but the placement is not so good, remap it into better one.

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs

Red = Unrankable
Blue = Highly recommend
Black = Just my suggestion

[General]
- Tags should be this > cnblue blind love kpop japanese - done
- Breaktimes should be consistent in all diffs. - unchange, i think easy or normal maps can have more breaks than hard & insane, depending on the songs ofcourse
- Combo colors should be consistent in all diffs as well. Unchanged, i've no idea why

[Normal]
00:22:785 (1,3) - overlap, try changing it's position. done
00:41:306 (5) - too many repeats, reduce it. done
00:57:219 (3) - ^ done
01:07:654 (1,2,3) - i don't know if this is passable to normal players, consider changing it. lol.. done btw
01:39:741 (5) - same as i mentioned on 00:41:306 (5) done
01:41:567 - why not add a note here? i know you're following vocals but i just heard a beat here. owh i miss that, done
01:55:654 (3) - avoid making too many repeats, confuses the players :/ done
02:41:567 (4) - ^ done
02:45:741 (1) - don't know if a player can pass this, i'm sure they can't... consider changing it. done

You should remap this diff... it's a bit hard for normal players, this 03:21:480 (1,1,2) - is 100% unrankable, because the next slider is overlapped on the pervious one. changed overlaping slider, no more 2x slider and changed some parts.. not remapping, there must be parts where is good and suitable (from other modders). I need to know which part is too hard and which is suitable for normal, then i will remap the "too hard" part, i think thats the reason a map needs to be modded.
And if i remap, it might gone worst, since it was only from my own knowledge, while this is a modded one.. thanks btw~

[Hard]
00:20:698 (2,3) - this is confusing to players, change the slider's position. I dont think so, hard player should be able to handle that
01:07:654 (1,2,3) - not this move again >_< i've change at normal, but not here.. above reason
01:23:828 (1,1) - remove NC done
01:48:611 (4,5,1) - Distance is SO NEAR, find somewhere else to avoid confusion. done
02:54:872 (1,2) - mentioned on 00:20:698 (2,3) unchanged, same reason

[Insane]

• I think this diff is truly unrankable, i see something like copy-pasting and flipping Horizon/Vertical. but it has good jumps but the placement is not so good, remap it into better one.

copy pasting and flip is not acceptable? and 'bout not so good placement, thats the reason i need modders, pleasee be specific.. remapping whole map might go worst.. why? see normal

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Hope my mod is useful, Good luck~
Thanks V Much

CDFA wrote:

I just slept for 12 hours after being awake for 36 I feel great

Overall:
Why is the background different for Insane rather than Hard and Normal. The blue filter on Hard and Normal isn't really working for me, and it looks a LITTLE bit like it was resized to 4:3 with a direct re-sizing tool (aka. it squished it a little bit.). Might I suggest some of these BGs?

This one? I Take This One Thx~
This one might get some bad rep since osu! doesn't like white backgrounds that much but it's still cool.
This one?
This one keeps the same color structure.
Man K-Pop guys are weird lol LOL

ALSO, MUSIC THEORY TIME:
For most pop songs, the snare drum goes on counts 2 and 4 of a measure. Kind of like this

The highlighted areas are where the claps should be.
Improper claps give the map the wrong feel, as well as conflicting with the player's ears as they expect claps to follow the drums. will try make it better

For the beginning, you should really consider mapping it with soft hitsounds, and taking out the claps. Otherwise it's incredibly overbearing.
00:43:654 - Why is this break here? The music is still going. The best thing to do would be to map up to 00:45:741, then put a spinner ending at maybe 00:47:828. Then there can be a little break without making the player feel awkward. Done

Timing:
To get the metronome correct, add a timing point on MS:1915. done The first few notes are pick-up notes, and in music, go before the first measure. I'd have this go earlier, but your mp3 doesn't go that far back, and people don't like negative offsets i dont understand this 1

Insane:
00:09:480 (1) - I'd suggest for this that you remove the previous slider and fill this in there. Otherwise this is really short. Auto gets 2000, shortest allowed is auto gets 1000, and this is not easy and normal. so i think its fine
00:22:785 (2,3) - It'd be much better just to use 1 anchor point rather than 2.unchange, to make sharper bend, looks better to me this way
00:31:915 (2) - Move this to avoid overlap.done
00:26:698 (1) - To fit with the structure of the words, a note should be on the red tick and the sliders should be on white ticks. done
00:52:002 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This doesn't really follow the words at all o-o. yeah, it didnt, but it follow the music.. (??)
01:00:350 (4) - Add NCdone
01:02:437 (12) - Why does this slow down?unchange, vocal softening
01:08:176 (2) - This is not good at all, having an almost 3.0x jump with 1/4 division. Players are going to struggle to hit this. I'd suggest changing it to something a bit more achievable.done
01:10:784 - To fill up this blank space, maybe add a 1/2 slider with a repeat here, putting a clap on the end of the slider. (aka the 2nd white tick)done

01:16:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - I'm not pointing out every single one of these in the map, but just look at this. You're making the entire thing 1/2 when the song isn't fully 1/2. I guess maybe the drums are, but the main thing people are gonna follow is the vocals. Take a look at your map and see if you can find things like this, where the beatmap seems to have no correlation with the music at all. unchange, i think, there's nothing wrong by following drums, if just following the vocal, (map would be to easy??) mabe
01:23:828 (1,1) - Remove NC done
01:36:611 (1) - This can just be a slider done
01:39:741 (11) - NC done
Fix the stuff in the second chorus that I said to fix in the first chorus. done same as 1st chorus
02:09:219 - If I were mapping this, I'd map the entire section you have as (mostly) breaks, and then put the break at the soft part you currently have mapped. unchange, I would like to, but the maps would be lacking of breaks i guess
02:13:654 (1,2,3,4,5) - I wouldn't suggest just having random notes in between breaks. Players find it awkward to think their game is back starting, but it's just a little 1 combo thing. Unchange, I'm trying to make 02:09:219 to 02:48:610 to be relaxing time for players..
02:58:785 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It's fun to complete a shape but it's tedious to merry-go-round the shape. unchange for now, too much random positioning of notes i think gonna make the map looks ugly, please suggest me into what pattern should i change? coz i've no idea about it
03:11:567 (1) - This can easily be a slider done
03:14:958 (1,2) - Same issue as before. Also apply this to every other time this happens. done
03:25:654 (2,3,4) - There's no reason to have increasing spaced jumps in this part. Especially one so huge as this. done
03:30:088 (3) - According to AIMod, this slider end is unsnapped. However, I was literally able to just drag it to the left of the timeline a little bit, and back to where it was, and it snapped just fine. Just something worth pointing out tho :3. Nothing on my aimod??
03:52:002 (2,3,4,5) - I know what you're going for but silent notes are bad. Apply this to every other time this happens too. Maybe a softer soft or something or just creative soft hitsounds, but not this. No intention to make silent there (its bad for me 2), mabe its to small, i've increase the volume

thanks for modding alot, i'm tired will do the rest later. i'm updating it first for now..

CDFA wrote:

Hard:
OH HEY LOOK THE CLAPS ARE BETTER. Still, just do a general check. If you want to make things MUCH easier on your part, make this diff have consistent claps on 2 and 4, go to grumd's hitsounds copier, and use this diff's hitsounds on every other diff. It'll make your life much easier. I'm not sure if it deletes current hitsounds tho so it might kinda suck if it doesn't. But if it does, it'll be great.
Why is the 1.5x spacing in the verse sections? on process
00:39:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Um it might be better to tone this down since it's hard and all.
00:52:002 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Notes going back on themselves rarely play nicely. This is no exception.
Ima just stop my mod here, because there's a crucial issue that's happening in this that I can just say here instead of making a giant-ass mod post about it.

Your hard is pretty much Insane with less SV. I'm not just talking about like patterns and stuff, but like, Insane is a huge 1/2 fest, and so is this. Sometimes, the patterns you use are scarily similar to each other. I suggest remapping this hard, I know it sucks, I know it takes a long time, but it'll be better than people complaining "Hard and Insane are pretty much the same thing." For the hard, I'd suggest looking a lot more at the melody of the song rather than making it just a 1/2 fest. There's a lot of cool things that can be done with this that are just being missed. Also, your patterns are based a lot on stacking. Which can be good at times, but too much of it is just bad.

Hard - almost nothing changed, still working on normal.. will do this later, and then will go back to insane

Normal:
The claps are messed up like insane in this diff too? o-o.
ALLRIGHT VERSES TL;DR it's all 1/1. Which can be ok at times but if it's the entire thing then it's just boring. Players play maps to play maps, not be a metronome.
00:39:219 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is too much for the easiest diff. I'm cutting some slack because it's listed as "normal", but it takes a lot of rhythmic maturity to follow this pattern, which normal players wouldn't have yet.
01:36:611 (1) - WAY too fast for a normal
01:41:828 (6) - NC
01:46:002 (1) - WAAAY too fast done^^^

Also, for this diff, a lot of things that could have been said haven't been said because it'll require you to actually look at more maps and see how they're played. tl;dr, it's too hard at parts and too boring at parts. You choose to follow the hardest vocals to be explicitly followed, yet when there's calm vocals that can be followed, you choose to just 1/1 it, which bores players. Please take a look at some good normals and see how they're mapped. See what you like, see what excites you, and employ that kind of stuff into your map. will do thx for advice

Normal - well, i go through the whole map, changing all my (1,3 claps which i thought better at 1st) to (2,4 claps, as your suggestion. yes it looks better, thx) and also changing some other things.. still many 1/1 beat which i'll change it (only 1st part has change)

I'll say that the first few notes of the choruses made me smile because they actually fit the vocals, sounded cool, and I liked them. thanks, added more on following vocals on 1st part, will change more~~

alex_98 wrote:

Thanks for picking my modding queue
Ok, let's mod this^^

[General]
00:00:872 - I don't know but I don't think there is a need to place a uninherited timing point there... You can put notes there just like usual. Not that it would effect gameplay.. done

[Insane]
life drain is a bit high for that map, try 1 or 2 below i was suggested by some one b4 to have this high hp drain, n i think since this is insane its alright

00:09:480 (1) - a bit short but ok.. ok then unchange lol
00:38:176 (1) - short and isn't this spinner somehow out of place? change to slider
00:39:741 (3,4,5) - this distance snap (1.2x) is a bit high isn't it? this isn't a hyped up song, so normally these kind of circles overlap themselves partly (like 0.8x) or something done
00:40:263 (6,7,8) - DS done
00:40:785 (9,10) - DS + I would like to have a 3rd circle added there, making it flow the rhythm better unchanged, i'm following the vocals
01:04:263 (1) - a short spinner. Try to replace it with a slider or something
01:12:871 (3,4,5,6,7) - DS done^^
01:26:437 (5) - start from the other side of the slider would make the flow of the movement better unchange distance will be too is too far
01:31:132 (4) - maybe the same? I'm not sure, just a loose suggestion unchange same reason too
01:36:610 (9) - erm.. rather make the slider start near 01:36:089 (7) nope, i like it that way
01:38:176 (3,4,5) - DS done
01:39:219 (9,10) - DS + add 3rd ds done, 3rd unchange same reason above
01:38:176 (3,4,5) - add 3rd what u mean? its 3 already
02:02:698 (1) - slider done
02:14:176 (3,4) - DS 'cause it's confusing what u mean? its ds already (ds 1.5)
02:20:437 (3,4) - the same the same above
02:50:958 (9) - NC done
02:52:785 (1) - slider done
03:09:741 (1) - replace with some circles? no,thisway looks better 4 me
03:19:132 (5) - NC done
03:26:437 (1) - slider unchange
03:28:263 (1) - 1slider + 1circle 1 slider only
03:47:828 (1) - let it begin at 03:48:349 unchange the buzzing sound start at 03:47:828
03:50:306 (3,4,5) - 03:52:263 (3,4,5) - those have different rhythm parts which is confusing in this situation ... try to place 03:52:263 (3,4,5) more in the center of the playfield i dont understand what u mean, but changed
03:55:915 (1) - silence this spinner end sound no, a finish should be there

[Hard]

00:08:176 (5) - the break is a bit early, so t'd place the slider end on 00:09:741 and a finish circle on 00:10:262 done
00:45:741 (1) - a soft hitsound would probably sound better done, and break removed adding 2 soft hitsound circle
00:52:001 (3) - I would use a curvy slider here done
00:58:001 (5) - confusing. use 00:57:219 (4) with vertical flip and then 00:57:219 (4) on the mid-x-grid line i dont understand - change my own way to make it not confusing
you use DS=1.5x here 01:01:654 (4,5,6,7) . Why not here 01:00:349 (3,4) - too? ok
01:07:654 (1,2) - 1/2 beat sliders are enough for hard the whole map is quite alot using every 1/2 beat, i'm trying not to put 1/2 beat hear so it wont be monotonous where a beat only every 1/2.. i think hard can handle that.. unchanged
01:50:436 (3) - 01:56:436 (5) - 01:58:784 (3,4,5,6,7) - 02:06:089 (1,2) - see last 4 above same as 4 above
02:02:698 (1) - why this spin? do like you did here 01:04:262 (4) sorry my error, fixed
02:02:698 (1) - so far away... place it near or on the slider end ????????
02:41:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - mostly 90° angles aren't good in maps. here too. maybe curvy movements like these curvy sliders done
02:59:306 (2,3,4,5) - 03:01:393 (1,2,3,4) - don't stack so much circles, please done
03:00:350 (1) - complicated. 1 return fewer and place a circle change positioning only
03:02:437 (1,1) - the same i think its fine
03:04:524 (1) - this jump... done
03:16:002 (1,1) - here. no spin. add slider to 03:16:523. Then, begin at 03:17:045 with lower form size and slider speed
03:20:176 (1,1) - the same done^^
03:26:437 (1) - 2 sliders done
03:31:654 (1,2) - 1/2 beat sliders
03:35:828 (1,2) - the same
03:40:002 (1,2) - the same
03:44:176 (1,2) - the same
03:56:175 (1) - silence this spinner end sound ^^^^unchange, all same reason as b4

[Normal]
I can't really mod this, meaning I can't tell you what to do...I can only tell you not to use so much (short) spinners

cut out first 2 circles and somehow replace the spinners in the intro remove spinner (change to slider), circle not remove (unchange)
00:32:958 (4) - not there, on the slider end done
03:56:175 (1) - silence this spinner end sound unchnage same reason as b4
these are the graveliest passages

I can't find any else. If you have any questions, pls PM me, ok? ^^

peeace wrote:

alex_98 wrote:

Thanks for picking my modding queue
Ok, let's mod this^^

[Insane]

01:38:176 (3,4,5) - add 3rd what u mean? its 3 already
sorry, my fault.

02:14:176 (3,4) - DS 'cause it's confusing what u mean? its ds already (ds 1.5)
02:20:437 (3,4) - the same the same above
I mean DS is too high...

[Hard]

00:52:001 (3) - I would use a curvy slider here done
I thought of a slider pointing up

02:02:698 (1) - so far away... place it near or on the slider end ????????
sorry, wrong time: 02:23:828 (1)

I can't find any else. If you have any questions, pls PM me, ok? ^^

thx for modding

1. You can change note colors default to metallic,well 3D effect skin also very good~~

1. slidertick sounds can be chaned to a more suitable one,if can not find ,ignore this

1. 00:30:610 (4,1) - It does not look very good，

1. 00:36:872 (6) - well，second slider can be made into symmetrical shape

1. 00:56:175 (3,4,5,) - 01:54:611 (3,4,5) - this place a litter monotonous

1. 01:08:698 (3) - well this shape can be improved,but you have done it well,can ignore this~~ (I mean you can put more Creative in it.)

1. 02:39:219 - volume at this point can be reduced to 30% ,beacuse background sound is very quiet at this time.

1. 03:49:654 (1,2) - these two can be removed ...because the first two triple rhythm and the three circle rhythm is not the same

1. 00:28:523 (5) - newcombo 00:28:784 (1) - -nc

1. 00:26:437 (1) - 00:39:219 (1) - 01:33:480 (1) - color here is no change(all red)

1. 00:55:132 (2) - shape....

1. 01:24:871 (3) - nc 01:25:132 (1) - -nc

1. 01:53:567 (2) - shape?...

1. 02:14:306 (4) - 03:04:524 (1) - well add a warning？sv change

1. 03:17:045 (4) - shape~~~ （just point out...

1. 03:28:262 (3) - shape....

1. 03:56:176 (1) - well,no need to add finish,or you can reduce the volume

1. 01:04:002 (1) - There is no need spinner

1. 01:26:175 (2) - do not cover it in this diff,followed the same

1. 03:06:088 (1,2) - make it more beautiful

1. 03:49:654 (1,2) - .....no ,if I am a new ,I can not complete it well

1. 03:56:176 (1) - also,no need to add finish,I suggest a quiet end

1. Err, itu file BG yang lama masih ada. Gak dipake lagi kan? Hapus aja semuanya buat hemat tempat~
2. IMO, lebih bagus kalau offset-nya 1890 (-25 dari offset sekarang). Rasanya lebih tepat sama lagunya.

1. 00:01:890 - (Ini nge-mod pake offset yang saya saranin btw) IMO, lebih baik kalau pake sampleset Soft buat hitsound di sini; Normal terlalu nyaring. Terus mungkin tiap tick putih yang panjang itu pake whistle kalau jadi Soft? (Ini berlaku buat semua diff.)
2. 00:22:498 (1,2) - Umm, di sini spacingnya 1,09x. Spacing default-nya ~1,00x kan?
3. 00:08:672 - 00:10:237 - Buat spinner di sini lalu dikasih finish? Kesannya kosong gitu kalau gak ada apa-apa di sini...
4. 00:25:890 (2) - Remove clap? Buat saya gak perlu sih, kesannya cuma bikin ribut aja.
5. 00:32:933 (4) - Kayaknya lebih pas kalau jadi slider 1/2 (dari sini sampai 00:33:194)~
6. 00:33:716 (1) - Err, slider dengan bentuk gini gak direkomendasiin, soalnya tampak aneh aja...
7. 00:35:542 (3) - Umm, NC di sini biar combo-nya gak kepanjangan?
8. 00:54:063 (6,1) - Swap NC biar pola combo-nya konsisten? Mestinya NC diletakin tiap tick putih yang tinggi itu, kecuali kalau lagunya "minta" biar NC itu dipasang di tempat lain, tapi di sini nggak gitu.
9. 00:56:150 (2) - NC? Mestinya sampai sini udah tahu kenapa yah...
10. 01:01:368 (2) - Slider ini bentuknya... terkesan gimana gitu. Cuma komentar aja sih.
11. 01:06:324 (1) - Slider ini gak perlu NC kok. (Karena kiai kedua pada dasarnya cuma copasan dari kiai pertama yang diputer-puter... Lihat aja mod di sini buat yang di sana~)
12. 01:25:368 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern ini keren sih, tapi bakal susah buat diff Normal.
13. 01:31:629 (3,1) - Swap NC?
14. 01:33:716 (4) - NC?
15. 01:36:063 (9) - ^
16. 01:39:976 (5) - ^
17. 01:44:150 (1,2) - Repeat slider kalau nimpa awal slider selanjutnya... bakal ngebingungin kalau di Normal.
18. 01:47:281 (1) - Remove NC? Gak diperluin NC di sini.
19. 02:48:846 (1,1) - Slider dengan banyak repeat gini bakal ngebingungin. (Tolong diperbaiki kalau ada yang seperti ini nantinya. Kalau di Hard/Insane gak apa-apa sih.)
20. 02:54:846 (6) - ^
21. 03:00:846 - Clap?
22. 03:01:890 - ^
23. 03:08:672 (2) - Slider + 2 repeat juga gampang bikin bingung dan ini bisa ngerusak flow map-nya sendiri. (Kalau ada slider yang gini nanti, betulin juga please.)
24. 03:20:150 (3,1) - Err, kalau bisa jangan dipaksain gini spacing-nya buat bikin dua slider "setengah hati" (lol) itu simetris. Yang ini juga bisa bikin pemain... yep, bingung karena perubahan spacing-nya.
25. 03:49:629 (1) - Umm, ini terlalu cepet muncul setelah spinner yang sebelumnya. Hapus aja, IMO.

1. 00:38:958 - Tambah clap juga di sini buat jaga konsistensi hitsound?
2. 00:42:610 (6) - Uhm, ini pindahin ke (120,280) aja biar pattern di sini tampak lebih rapi.
3. 02:48:871 (4) - NC?
4. 03:04:523 (1,1,2) - ...Tolong ini diperbaiki. Mestinya udah kelihatan kenapa.
5. 03:07:654 - Finish untuk ngikutin lagunya.
6. 03:08:175 - Remove finish; gak ada yang bisa diikutin finish itu di sini dari lagunya.
7. 03:17:045 (4) - ...Cuma mau bilang kalau slider ini bentuknya ngaco lol
8. 03:21:219 (3) - ^
9. 03:26:958 - Clap?
10. 03:29:045 - ^

alex_98 wrote:

02:14:176 (3,4) - DS 'cause it's confusing what u mean? its ds already (ds 1.5)
02:20:437 (3,4) - the same the same above
I mean DS is too high...

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

Hellow~because of exams,a little late~~sry a little late is not a problem..
Here are some suggestions only~~
I love this song >v< Thanks~~

[General]

1. You can change note colors default to metallic,well 3D effect skin also very good~~

1. slidertick sounds can be chaned to a more suitable one,if can not find ,ignore this

How do u change note colours to default?? (what is the default colour?)

I'm poor on editing images, so no adding skins
sounds, I've no idea how to changed it, or where to find it.. so no changing sounds
(Unless u can give skins and sounds)


[Insane]

1. 00:30:610 (4,1) - It does not look very good，

done
Try this~~http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/828044

1. 00:36:872 (6) - well，second slider can be made into symmetrical shape

Changed to my own way
Try this?http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/828048

1. 00:56:175 (3,4,5,) - 01:54:611 (3,4,5) - this place a litter monotonous

done
Try this~~http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/828057 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/828060

1. 01:08:698 (3) - well this shape can be improved,but you have done it well,can ignore this~~ (I mean you can put more Creative in it.)

unchange can u suggest the pattern please, i'm lacking of creativity lol

1. 02:39:219 - volume at this point can be reduced to 30% ,beacuse background sound is very quiet at this time.

done

1. 03:49:654 (1,2) - these two can be removed ...because the first two triple rhythm and the three circle rhythm is not the same

done


[Hard]

1. 00:28:523 (5) - newcombo 00:28:784 (1) - -nc

done

1. 00:26:437 (1) - 00:39:219 (1) - 01:33:480 (1) - color here is no change(all red)

i dont get what u mean

1. 00:55:132 (2) - shape....

oops my mistake, should be a good curve

1. 01:24:871 (3) - nc 01:25:132 (1) - -nc

done

1. 01:53:567 (2) - shape?...

done

1. 02:14:306 (4) - 03:04:524 (1) - well add a warning？sv change

need image 2x speed.. i cant edit to make it without background.. can u help me?

1. 03:17:045 (4) - shape~~~ （just point out...

unchnaged I like my heart more.. (variation of heart shape) lol
Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/828090

1. 03:28:262 (3) - shape....

fixed

1. 03:56:176 (1) - well,no need to add finish,or you can reduce the volume

finish is needed, volume reduced

[Normal]

1. 01:04:002 (1) - There is no need spinner

no spinner.. then changed my way

1. 01:26:175 (2) - do not cover it in this diff,followed the same

done

1. 03:06:088 (1,2) - make it more beautiful

i dont really know how, but i make it more curved

1. 03:49:654 (1,2) - .....no ,if I am a new ,I can not complete it well

removed

1. 03:56:176 (1) - also,no need to add finish,I suggest a quiet end

volume reduced, same reason as b4
ok~~good music ,I like it ,and your map was done well, go for rank!! Thanks~~!! glad u like the song

Lucy_Heartfilia wrote:

Sorry for late mod

Random Full mod in Normal because it's last 4 Mins sorry -,-
Normal
Main prolblem:Many Spinner beyond Normal dif,it 's mabe can in hard
and slider can made better
00:16:523 - hard spinner in Normal,or you can make 00:18:610 (1) in medium remove spinner, add circle
00:32:958(4) - hard in Normal, overlap + distance corrected by alex_98 b4
00:35:567(3),(4) - hard in Normal fixed
01:01:393(2) - unbeautiful slider fixed
01:04:001 - ~ 00:16:523 had been modded n fixed b4
01:24:319 - new combol fixed
01:25:393(1),(2),(3),(4),(5) - in Normal,is this unrankable ? overlapping slider? has been modded n fixed b4
01:30:349(2) ~ 01:25:393 fixed
01:33:741 - ~ 01:04:001 spinner?? no spinner was ever there..
01:46:784 (1) - Remove new combol
01:59:828(2) ~ 01:01:393
02:02:436 - 00:16:523
2nd kiai follow 1st kiai
02:45:741 - 01:01:393
02:50:958 (1) - remove new combol and replace 02:52:262
03:02:436 (4) - new combol
03:04:523 - 01:01:393
rest is done
My mod is very fit with high Sp map not bubble map.when these maps is not bubbled,but have no unrankable thing,My mod can help these maps
Good luck

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi, mod here~

>General

1. Err, itu file BG yang lama masih ada. Gak dipake lagi kan? Hapus aja semuanya buat hemat tempat~ d folder gw ud g ad koq..
2. IMO, lebih bagus kalau offset-nya 1890 (-25 dari offset sekarang). Rasanya lebih tepat sama lagunya.

offset gw g mau ganti.. dapet dari BAT (Strawberry)

>Normal

1. 00:01:890 - (Ini nge-mod pake offset yang saya saranin btw) IMO, lebih baik kalau pake sampleset Soft buat hitsound di sini; Normal terlalu nyaring. Terus mungkin tiap tick putih yang panjang itu pake whistle kalau jadi Soft? (Ini berlaku buat semua diff.)
   Sip, tpi gw kasi whistle k smua..
2. 00:22:498 (1,2) - Umm, di sini spacingnya 1,09x. Spacing default-nya ~1,00x kan? OK
3. 00:08:672 - 00:10:237 - Buat spinner di sini lalu dikasih finish? Kesannya kosong gitu kalau gak ada apa-apa di sini... OK
4. 00:25:890 (2) - Remove clap? Buat saya gak perlu sih, kesannya cuma bikin ribut aja. OK
5. 00:32:933 (4) - Kayaknya lebih pas kalau jadi slider 1/2 (dari sini sampai 00:33:194)~ OK
6. 00:33:716 (1) - Err, slider dengan bentuk gini gak direkomendasiin, soalnya tampak aneh aja... OK
7. 00:35:542 (3) - Umm, NC di sini biar combo-nya gak kepanjangan? kayany g perlu deh..
8. 00:54:063 (6,1) - Swap NC biar pola combo-nya konsisten? Mestinya NC diletakin tiap tick putih yang tinggi itu, kecuali kalau lagunya "minta" biar NC itu dipasang di tempat lain, tapi di sini nggak gitu. kayany ud d tick putih.. (ato mungkin ud di mod sma org lain.. gw g inget )
9. 00:56:150 (2) - NC? Mestinya sampai sini udah tahu kenapa yah... Wah, ud pusing ama nc.. (mungkin dah d mod sma yg lain.. lol) gw dah coba bnerin menurut gw..
10. 01:01:368 (2) - Slider ini bentuknya... terkesan gimana gitu. Cuma komentar aja sih. sudah di mod
11. 01:06:324 (1) - Slider ini gak perlu NC kok. (Karena kiai kedua pada dasarnya cuma copasan dari kiai pertama yang diputer-puter... Lihat aja mod di sini buat yang di sana~) ok
12. 01:25:368 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pattern ini keren sih, tapi bakal susah buat diff Normal.kayany untuk normal gpp
13. 01:31:629 (3,1) - Swap NC?
14. 01:33:716 (4) - NC?
15. 01:36:063 (9) - ^
16. 01:39:976 (5) - ^ masalah NC gw coba bnerin sndiri.. thx btw
17. 01:44:150 (1,2) - Repeat slider kalau nimpa awal slider selanjutnya... bakal ngebingungin kalau di Normal. ok
18. 01:47:281 (1) - Remove NC? Gak diperluin NC di sini.
19. 02:48:846 (1,1) - Slider dengan banyak repeat gini bakal ngebingungin. (Tolong diperbaiki kalau ada yang seperti ini nantinya. Kalau di Hard/Insane gak apa-apa sih.) Karena bnyk yg komen tentang ini.. jdiny gw ganti spiner..
20. 02:54:846 (6) - ^ ok
21. 03:00:846 - Clap?owh, ketinggalan.. ok thx
22. 03:01:890 - ^ ^
23. 03:08:672 (2) - Slider + 2 repeat juga gampang bikin bingung dan ini bisa ngerusak flow map-nya sendiri. (Kalau ada slider yang gini nanti, betulin juga please.) ok
24. 03:20:150 (3,1) - Err, kalau bisa jangan dipaksain gini spacing-nya buat bikin dua slider "setengah hati" (lol) itu simetris. Yang ini juga bisa bikin pemain... yep, bingung karena perubahan spacing-nya. masalahny klo pake ds disitu, bakal jauh" posisiny, soalny wktuny jauh".. dah ad perubahan sih, cuma bikin circle g bolak-balik spaya g bikin pusing
25. 03:49:629 (1) - Umm, ini terlalu cepet muncul setelah spinner yang sebelumnya. Hapus aja, IMO.

g gw ganti, soalny cuma 1 beat gtu, g pengaruh bnyk, tpi d perlukan buat g kosong beatny

>Hard

1. 00:38:958 - Tambah clap juga di sini buat jaga konsistensi hitsound? ok, itu jg kelawatan thx
2. 00:42:610 (6) - Uhm, ini pindahin ke (120,280) aja biar pattern di sini tampak lebih rapi. ok
3. 02:48:871 (4) - NC?
4. 03:04:523 (1,1,2) - ...Tolong ini diperbaiki. Mestinya udah kelihatan kenapa. itu nnti mungkin gw ganti ato gua mau pasang warning 2x speed (dri modders sbelumny)
5. 03:07:654 - Finish untuk ngikutin lagunya. ksalahan (liat bawah ini)
6. 03:08:175 - Remove finish; gak ada yang bisa diikutin finish itu di sini dari lagunya. ksalahan, mau taro di ^ thx
7. 03:17:045 (4) - ...Cuma mau bilang kalau slider ini bentuknya ngaco lol.. tdk d ganti (liat post reply gw k Sweet Vanilla).. klo ad yg komen lgi bru gw ganti.. thx btw
8. 03:21:219 (3) - ^ ^
9. 03:26:958 - Clap? OK
10. 03:29:045 - ^ OK

Insane lanjut nanti yah; lagi pengen nge-mod pelan-pelan

1. Uh, ini kenapa bagian multiplier BPM/SV banyak yang 1,50x? Sebenernya kalau Slider Velocity (yang dipake buat nentuin kecepatan slider) diubah jadi 2.10, itu gak perlu pake 1,5x kok, 1x aja bisa, but oh well~ (Kalau beneran mau dibikin 2.10, semua multiplier BPM dikalikan dengan 2/3 atau ~66,67%.)
2. 00:14:437 (1,2) - Uhm, ekor/ujung slider (2) gak terletak pas di bawah kepala/awal (1). Copy aja (1) ke tempat (2), lalu Ctrl+H, kemudian Ctrl+G.
3. 00:14:437 (1) - IMO, lebih enak flow-nya kalau kayak gini.
4. 00:31:915 (2) - Gak pake slider 00:31:132 (1) yang diputer 180 derajat aja?
5. 00:35:045 (1,2,3) - Buat tiga circle ini, kayaknya lebih bagus kalau dibuat pattern segitiga sendiri, nggak ngikut pattern sebelumnya, soalnya ritme musiknya sendiri udah lain dari sebelumnya.
6. 00:35:306 (2) - Finish? Di musiknya sendiri ada suara... seperti cymbal di drum, dan itu perlu ditambahin finish~
7. 00:38:175 (9) - Tambah whistle? Pas-pas aja sih menurut saya.
8. 00:41:045 - Hmm, tambah circle di sini buat ngikutin instrumennya? Rasanya nanggung kalau cuma ngikutin vokal.
9. 00:54:089 - Remove finish, lalu tambah whistle tapi pake sampleset Soft (lihat di sebelah kiri editor)? Coba dengerin musiknya di sini, ada bunyi instrumen yang mendukung.
10. 00:56:176 - ^ (Berlaku untuk bunyi yang seperti di dua tempat ini nantinya.)
11. 00:57:219 (5,6) - Bakal lebih pas kalau dua circle ini di-unstack lalu dibuat pattern sendiri.
12. 01:17:045 (2) - Finish?
13. 01:33:741 (2) - ^
14. 01:44:176 (1) - ^
15. 02:21:480 - Whistle gak diperluin di sini dan cuma bikin ribut, menurut saya, jadi remove aja mungkin?
16. 02:45:741 (1) - Uhm, slider ini masih kurang simetris. Coba mainkan node di slider-nya lagi.
17. 02:53:567 - Uh, clap?
18. 02:59:306 (2) - NC karena perubahan spacing?

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! From my queue~

[General]

No need those " ; " in the tags ok

[Normal]

00:06:088 (4) - Distance fixed

00:42:610 (6) - New combo and remove new combo 00:43:654 (1) ok

02:19:915 (1,2,3) - Put it in the opposite way i made 02:13:654 (1,2,3) to be the opposite

[Hard]

01:49:393 (1) - Not well stack fixed

02:14:176 (3) - Space. Next: 1.48x all fixed

02:20:437 (3) - ^

02:45:741 (1) - Why the slider speed up?

03:04:524 (1) - ^

03:40:002 (1,2) - Maybe something like this? fixed but a little modified


03:44:176 (1,2) - ^ but in the other way fixed but a little modified

[Insane]

00:44:175 (3) - Move up to one grid

00:45:218 (3) - Move down to one grid

both fixed

Good Luck! and star! Thanks~~

Hinsvar wrote:

k, Insane.

merah - g gw ganti
biru - ganti
ijo - lain"

1. Uh, ini kenapa bagian multiplier BPM/SV banyak yang 1,50x? Sebenernya kalau Slider Velocity (yang dipake buat nentuin kecepatan slider) diubah jadi 2.10, itu gak perlu pake 1,5x kok, 1x aja bisa, but oh well~ (Kalau beneran mau dibikin 2.10, semua multiplier BPM dikalikan dengan 2/3 atau ~66,67%.)
   Dapet dari Bat
   

   Strawberry wrote:

   Use different sv for disparate diffs plz. It may touch the playability and entertainment of the map.

2. 00:14:437 (1,2) - Uhm, ekor/ujung slider (2) gak terletak pas di bawah kepala/awal (1). Copy aja (1) ke tempat (2), lalu Ctrl+H, kemudian Ctrl+G. ok
3. 00:14:437 (1) - IMO, lebih enak flow-nya kalau kayak gini. ok
4. 00:31:915 (2) - Gak pake slider 00:31:132 (1) yang diputer 180 derajat aja? ok
5. 00:35:045 (1,2,3) - Buat tiga circle ini, kayaknya lebih bagus kalau dibuat pattern segitiga sendiri, nggak ngikut pattern sebelumnya, soalnya ritme musiknya sendiri udah lain dari sebelumnya. ok
6. 00:35:306 (2) - Finish? Di musiknya sendiri ada suara... seperti cymbal di drum, dan itu perlu ditambahin finish~ jadi awkward kayany,
7. 00:38:175 (9) - Tambah whistle? Pas-pas aja sih menurut saya. ok
8. 00:41:045 - Hmm, tambah circle di sini buat ngikutin instrumennya? Rasanya nanggung kalau cuma ngikutin vokal.ok
9. 00:54:089 - Remove finish, lalu tambah whistle tapi pake sampleset Soft (lihat di sebelah kiri editor)? Coba dengerin musiknya di sini, ada bunyi instrumen yang mendukung. jadi awkward
10. 00:56:176 - ^ (Berlaku untuk bunyi yang seperti di dua tempat ini nantinya.) jadi awkward
11. 00:57:219 (5,6) - Bakal lebih pas kalau dua circle ini di-unstack lalu dibuat pattern sendiri. 5 jdi g stack 4&6 stack, jadi bolak-balik
12. 01:17:045 (2) - Finish? ok
13. 01:33:741 (2) - ^ ok
14. 01:44:176 (1) - ^ ok
15. 02:21:480 - Whistle gak diperluin di sini dan cuma bikin ribut, menurut saya, jadi remove aja mungkin?ok
16. 02:45:741 (1) - Uhm, slider ini masih kurang simetris. Coba mainkan node di slider-nya lagi.ok
17. 02:53:567 - Uh, clap?ok
18. 02:59:306 (2) - NC karena perubahan spacing?

ok

Oke, itu aja deh. Map ini oke-oke aja lah buat map pertama, tapi selanjutnya harus lebih baik lagi ofc.

Good luck on the way Thanks~~

zorefire wrote:

From Queue

[Normal]

1. 00:08:176 (2) - Press Ctrl + J maybe there would be better? ok
2. 00:25:915 (2,3) - spread out? ok
3. 00:27:741 (2) - confusing to new people fixed
4. 00:29:828 (3) - ^ fixed
5. 00:31:915 (3) - seperate ok
6. 00:44:698 (4) - ^ ok
7. 01:17:828 (2) - ^ ok
8. 01:19:132 (3,4) - ^ ok
9. 02:14:176 (2) - move to white line not change, following the vocal
10. 02:20:437 (2) - ^ not change, following the vocal
11. 02:40:002 (2) - mote to bottom middle ok
12. 03:54:089 (1,1) - make 1 whole slider not change, there's no beat at the start, if made silent, thats not good in normal
    [Hard]
13. 00:26:958 (3) - make it like > 00:29:045 (3) ? change but i made 00:29:045 (3) to be like 00:26:958 (3)
14. 00:56:697 (3) - move away from previous note?change but i made them stack
15. 01:00:349 (3,4,5,6,7) - redo all of this too hard fixed
16. 01:48:611 (4,5) - make a slider? not change, doesnt fit.
17. 01:58:784 (3,4,5,6,7) - same as beforefixed
18. Just like Normal? 03:54:089 (1,1) unchange, i think its fine if the same only in small parts

gideon5504 wrote:

My rule clearly stated no song more than 3 minutes and this song's draining time is around 4 mins.YOU ARE LUCKY I WAS IN A GOOD MOOD.
Owh sorry, too much looking at modding queues n forget which rule for which queue lol.. thx for still modding it

Normal:
~00:35:567 (3) - Put this circle closer to the end of slider to match Normal diff. not change, i did this b4, n this is being modded by (i forget who) to separate them.. i will just wait for bats for this becoz they have more experience n know better..
~00:36:611 (5) - ^ same here
~01:11:828 (1) - Add finish as well. at the end? i added it at the end
~01:31:654 (1) - Add finish.ok
~02:39:480 - Change audio to soft for better sound in this part. ok
~02:44:698 (4) - ^ ??? soft sound? or finish? its already soft because of ^, did not add finish because no support from the music
~02:40:524 (3) - Add finish.
~02:41:567 (4) - ^to the tail of slider.
~02:44:698 (4) - ^
~02:48:350 (3) - ^
finish^^^^ not added because no support from music, (no cymbals or anything to support finish)

Hard:
~00:08:176 (5) - NC for emphasizing slider velocity change.ok
~02:15:480 - Insert break time.ok
~02:39:480 - Soft sounds better.ok
~03:17:045 (4) - NC for velocity change.ok
~03:21:219 (3) - ^ok

Insane:
~01:02:437 (9) - NC for velocity change.ok
~01:14:567 - Group the slow stream closer to make it easier to read during game play.ok
~02:00:872 (9) - NC for velocity change.ok
~02:05:567 (1) - Remove NC.ok
~02:23:828 (1) - ^ok
~Nice diff. Thanks~~

That's all from me ^^ Good luck! Thanks again

peeace wrote:

고마워요

yurunneram wrote:

NORMAL

03:01:393 (3) - move to x160 y324 done

03:32:698 (1) - Shouldn't you make this shorter? Like the others done

I like our bent sliders ^^ They're nice~ Thanks

HARD

00:20:176 (4,1) - Make the jump bigger. I'd say a distance of 2.0 - 3.0 will do taking Average 2.5

00:22:263 (4,1) - ^ ^

01:02:176 (6) - Move to x304 y292 done

01:02:437 (7) - move to x376 y292 i know what u mean here, so i change to x374(not 376) y292


01:22:001 (2) - the first point move to x236 y208. Second point is x172 y80. But I don't know if there will be a problem since the repeat arrow is kind of covered by the previous slider. Maybe you should do something about it.. hmm i change distance into 1.0 (from 1.5), to make it better.. not really sure..

03:32:698 (1) - Yea I kind of have the same issue as above. Why is there one longer than the others? done

Haha I kinda like this X3 The BG kinda threw me cuz I thought it would be some sort of spazzy k-pop song XD Good job!
thanks CDFA for BG

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

1. There's some senseless inconsistency in KIAIs huehue, check it yourself and fix it.
   
   
2. Everytime you added whistles to a Slider, you added it on the whole Sliderbody. I don't think you really like the sound that gives so I guggest you to look at your diffs and remove the whistles from the Slider and add them where you need them.

1. 00:19:393 (3) - Eh, that shape is not really fiting the mood of the music, in general, use more common shapes if you are simply mapping the music. Just try normal curves.
2. 00:21:480 (3) - Try to avoid this kind of Sliders. As you can see, it looks asymmetrical and not really pleasing as it is. you should try to make more flowing shapes, you know? Something like below.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:23:567 (3) - For those short Sliders, don't make them that curved. Make them smoother because this is taking the flow out. Also, try to start those Sliders on white ticks, because they are not playing well starting on red ticks. It's because music is stronger on the white ones, and you play the start, but not the end.
4. 00:32:958 (4) - For finishes, use them on the downbeats (the long white lines) that's where the music is strongest in most cases. They are most likely to sound too loud or unfiting on red ticks.
5. 00:34:785 (2,3,4) - For these patterns, they are supposed to be symmetrical, so you gotta make them like this and dont be lazy while creating them Look at it below.
   
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1. 00:18:611 (2) - You are using this shape far too often, you should aim for smoother shapes. Look at some Sliders of the recently ranked mapsets, you'll get what I mean. I dont mean to change your style, but at least try to get your curves flowing because if you make such big circle Sliders, they won't flow very well. Also the pattern you made there doesn't look very well, because the distance between that Sliders is too small.
2. 00:22:785 (2,3,4) - This would actually be a really nice pattern, but you gotta watch out, they are not looking as neat as they could if they touch each other.
3. 00:25:132 (5) - also avoid to let your circles being touched by Sliders, it looks untidy and confusing.
4. 00:26:958 (3,4) - Things like this aren't a really good thing to have, you are killing flow because it's just unexpected and spacing is odd.

1. 00:04:785 (1) - Placing circles under Slidertracks is unrankable, you'll have to change this one way or the other.
2. 00:08:176 (8) - If you change SV on this Slider, add a NC.
3. 00:22:785 (2) - What about that shape? D: Make it smooth, make it flowing. I'll give you an example below.
   
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4. And for the most parts, your pattern are going straight and back to the points where they already were. To make a map that flows well, it's important to create exciting, and fiting patterns. You should know how to use Slider shapes in a good way and if you can't think of a good pattern, try to look at other ranked maps, that will surely help you!

Konei wrote:

Wheeep, hi.


[General]

1. There's some senseless inconsistency in KIAIs huehue, check it yourself and fix it. fixed
   
   
2. Everytime you added whistles to a Slider, you added it on the whole Sliderbody. I don't think you really like the sound that gives so I guggest you to look at your diffs and remove the whistles from the Slider and add them where you need them. i felt too, but doesnt know how to fix this.. well, i try removing whistle, it sound better to me, so thats what i do (for now, hoping get more mods on hitsound)

[Normal]

1. 00:19:393 (3) - Eh, that shape is not really fiting the mood of the music, in general, use more common shapes if you are simply mapping the music. Just try normal curves. fixed
2. 00:21:480 (3) - Try to avoid this kind of Sliders. As you can see, it looks asymmetrical and not really pleasing as it is. you should try to make more flowing shapes, you know? Something like below.fixed
   
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3. 00:23:567 (3) - For those short Sliders, don't make them that curved. Make them smoother because this is taking the flow out. Also, try to start those Sliders on white ticks, because they are not playing well starting on red ticks. It's because music is stronger on the white ones, and you play the start, but not the end. unchange, i dont really get what you mean here
   
4. 00:32:958 (4) - For finishes, use them on the downbeats (the long white lines) that's where the music is strongest in most cases. They are most likely to sound too loud or unfiting on red ticks. fixed
5. 00:34:785 (2,3,4) - For these patterns, they are supposed to be symmetrical, so you gotta make them like this and dont be lazy while creating them Look at it below. my mistake, fixed
   
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[Hard]

Nothing change on hard for now.. do you mean increasing distance make better flow?? if yes, then i think i should remapping some parts and put distance snap into 1.3-1.5 (where most of it is now at 1.0)..

[Insane]

1. 00:04:785 (1) - Placing circles under Slidertracks is unrankable, you'll have to change this one way or the other.. fixed
2. 00:08:176 (8) - If you change SV on this Slider, add a NC.. fixed
3. 00:22:785 (2) - What about that shape? D: Make it smooth, make it flowing. I'll give you an example below.. fixed
   
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4. And for the most parts, your pattern are going straight and back to the points where they already were. To make a map that flows well, it's important to create exciting, and fiting patterns. You should know how to use Slider shapes in a good way and if you can't think of a good pattern, try to look at other ranked maps, that will surely help you!

i did see some ranks map, they r good, but the problem is, i dont know why.
when to change distance snap, when to change sv's, shuld i use sharp turn or nice curve, do i have to separate 2 notes or put it in same place, and many more.. i just did not understand these important things..


Well, this is pretty much it.
Only a mod about general things, because those need to be fixed, but I really belive that you can do it.
Try to tidy your map up and never give it up.
will try fixing it

Good luck on the way :3

1. 00:31:915 (3,4) - Try avoiding to overlap these two.
2. 00:33:741 (1) - Move the second point a little bit to the right and the third one a little bit to the left in order to have a slider less sharp and more smooth and good looking.
3. 00:37:654 (7) - Move it to x=328 y=28? It looks better imo.
4. 00:57:219 (1) - Remove NC.
5. 01:01:393 (2,1) - Doesn't look really good. Maybe do something like this:
   
   
6. 01:07:654 (1) - Remove NC.
7. 01:23:045 (3) - Same as 00:33:741.
8. 01:30:349 (2,2) - Maybe you could avoid this overlap.
9. 01:40:001 (1) - Same as 00:33:741. (WTF did you do with the sldier point!)
10. 01:40:001 (1,1) - Maybe you could avoid this overlap.
11. 01:42:089 (1) - Move the end point to x=188 y=184 and then do the same by symetry to 01:43:132 (2) to zvoid the overlap.
12. 01:54:611 (1) - Remove NC. (Or if you keep it put one at 01:59:828 (2) by consistency and check your map, there are other moment like this.)
13. 01:59:828 (2,1) - Same as 01:01:393.
14. 02:06:089 (1) - Remove NC.
15. 02:14:176 (2) - It's not recommanded (and maybe forbidden) to use a 1/4-beat long slider in a Normal Diff. Turn it into a 1/2 beat long slider.
16. 02:39:480 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - The placement really seems random here.
17. 03:04:002 (4) - You're not really allowed to do jump in Normal diff. Keep a spacing constant! Move it to x=336 y=304.
18. 03:04:524 (1) - Remove NC.
19. 03:32:698 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - All these spinners.... It's really not interesting to play..... Maybe you could try to remove some of them.

1. 00:04:002 (5,2) - Avoid the overlap?
2. 00:07:132 (1,2,3,4) - They aren't well aligned.
3. 00:30:610 (1) - Why is there a NC here?
4. 02:00:088 (4,5) - Move 4 to x=248 y=188 and 5 to x=184 y=156?
5. 02:53:828 (2) - Try making it less sharp by moving the third point lower.
6. 03:01:915 (3,1,1) - The first 1 overlap with 3 and the second NC is pointless.
7. 03:04:524 (1) - Again, you have a weird way to do your slider..... Why not doing something like this:
   
   
   It will avoid your slider point to go everywhere.
8. 03:09:741 (1,3) - Overlap.
9. 03:13:393 (2) - It looks way better imo if you move it to x=252 y=192.
10. 03:21:219 (1,1,2) - Hard to read and so confusing to play.
11. 03:26:436 (3,1,2) - Overlap. Well you still have a lot after and i missed a lot before so i recommand you to recheck all your diff and remove all the pointless overlap (but keep the good one!)
12. 03:30:089 (2) - Move it to x=280 y=172 (You know you can stretch out the spacing in Hard difff)
13. 03:31:654 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1) - Again, too many slider making it annoying to play.

1. 00:30:611 (4,1) - Stack them properly.
2. 02:45:741 (1) - This slider goes way too fast since we are in a quiet moment in the music.
3. You have even more spinner in this diff.....

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

Mod from my queue:

[Normal]

1. 00:31:915 (3,4) - Try avoiding to overlap these two.fixed
2. 00:33:741 (1) - Move the second point a little bit to the right and the third one a little bit to the left in order to have a slider less sharp and more smooth and good looking. fixed
3. 00:37:654 (7) - Move it to x=328 y=28? It looks better imo. well i know what u mean, but your suggestion will make the circle off screen a bit, well i fixed it somehow
4. 00:57:219 (1) - Remove NC. unchange, i think nc is needed there
5. 01:01:393 (2,1) - Doesn't look really good. Maybe do something like this: thats nice, fixed
   
   
6. 01:07:654 (1) - Remove NC. unchange, i think nc is needed there
7. 01:23:045 (3) - Same as 00:33:741..fixed
8. 01:30:349 (2,2) - Maybe you could avoid this overlap..fixed
9. 01:40:001 (1) - Same as 00:33:741. (WTF did you do with the sldier point!).fixed
10. 01:40:001 (1,1) - Maybe you could avoid this overlap.
11. 01:42:089 (1) - Move the end point to x=188 y=184 and then do the same by symetry to 01:43:132 (2) to zvoid the overlap.
12. 01:54:611 (1) - Remove NC. (Or if you keep it put one at 01:59:828 (2) by consistency and check your map, there are other moment like this.) added at01:59:828 (2)
13. 01:59:828 (2,1) - Same as 01:01:393.
14. 02:06:089 (1) - Remove NC.
    
    well 2nd kiai is a co-paste from 1st kiai, i did not see your 2nd kiai modding again..
    
15. 02:14:176 (2) - It's not recommanded (and maybe forbidden) to use a 1/4-beat long slider in a Normal Diff. Turn it into a 1/2 beat long slider. fixed
16. 02:39:480 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - The placement really seems random here. not fixed now.. mabe later
17. 03:04:002 (4) - You're not really allowed to do jump in Normal diff. Keep a spacing constant! Move it to x=336 y=304. fixed
18. 03:04:524 (1) - Remove NC. again unchange
19. 03:32:698 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - All these spinners.... It's really not interesting to play..... Maybe you could try to remove some of them.

again, not fixed now, mabe later

[hard] & [insane] - havent see your modding.. will check later.