Melophobia wrote:

[Hard]
AR8 is really beyond this song imo because this difficulty is still Hard and BPM is also low. I highly suggest AR7 instead. I'll see other's opinions again first. If most of them say so, I'll do it then. The reason I keep AR8 is because it just fits with the CS5.
00:35:981 (5) - I prefer the default sampleset here, as far as I listen it does fit best with the instrument. The same goes to the Normal diff as well. The default sampleset sounds too harsh imo. I like this one better.
01:21:398 (3) - Shorten this by 1/1 beat so it follows the vocal better. You can add a note to where the slider end originally was. Personally I like this, since the vocal is like "fading" (or whatever) and I prefer keep this.
02:10:516 (5,1) - Move these notes a bit leftward so they can be stacked perfectly. http://puu.sh/2GIC4.jpg Cool point, sure!
02:21:129 (5) - This touches the HP bar and I think it's not acceptable. D: I'll try, and I think it might not be much noticeable, since this slider might just apparently touched the HP bar a little, very little. :3

Pretty much a perfect map. Just bring this up to +12 and call me back.

Onisakura wrote:

Sup :3
from #modreqs

Just a little recomendation about rhythm :3

[Normal]

00:31:045 - add circle Nope, pattern will be too much
00:32:279 (5,6) - remove this and and short slider with reverse at 00:32:279 I prefer the current pattern.
00:34:007 - circle Nope, doesn't fit.
01:10:537 (5) - cut end at 01:11:278 and add circle at 01:11:524 Nope either.
01:13:252 - add circle with Clap No, doesn't fit.
01:14:980 - need clap-in-slider(01:14:486 (4)) here (it's that need custom Sliderticks, like clap...put on like soft Sliderticks and enable green sections) I don't think it's necessary for now o3o
01:17:201 - circle with clap Nah.
01:18:929 - clap in slider not fit
01:28:802 (5) - change on short slider with reverse and put in here 01:28:555 No D:
01:30:530 - circle
01:40:897 - ^
01:49:288 - circle with clap
01:52:250 - ^
01:58:668 - ^ No changes for all of these.
02:02:370 (4) - change at short slider (clap in start and finish on...finish :3) Finish is just too much o3o
02:06:566 - circle Nope.
02:13:724 (3,4) - change on shrot slider with reverse (start here 02:13:724 ) and add circle at 02:14:465 (02:13:971 - and 02:14:465 - with clap) It feels too much i guess
02:06:813 (1) - clap into slider (02:07:307 - ) Nope.
02:30:015 (5) - change on short slider with reverse...02:29:768 - start Hmm this one makes sense, okay.


[D]

00:17:963 (5) - add reverse nope
00:21:418 - circle Not either.
00:32:279 (4,5) - shange on short slider with reverse I'll try to fix this
00:55:727 (1) - clap into slider (00:56:221 - ) I guess okay.
00:59:430 - circle with clap Uh... no.
01:02:145 (3) - change on slider with reverse...start and end with clap ...No.
01:06:835 - circle with clap
01:14:980 (4) - like above 01:02:145 (3)
01:17:201 - circle with clap
01:17:201 - ^
01:18:189 - circle
01:19:176 - ^
01:49:288 - ^
01:54:718 - ^ Not all of these.
01:58:421 (5) - move at 01:58:668 then add 01:58:668 (5) - circle with clap k...
02:00:642 - circle with clap
02:01:630 - ^
02:09:528 - circle Nope.
02:12:737 (3) - same thing like 01:02:145 (3) Err? ok.
02:12:737 (3) - circle with clap No.
02:32:484 (4) - clap into slider 02:17:921 (4) - Nope.

Good luck)

Fr33z3R wrote:

Hi~ From your M4M Queue.

[Normal]
Overlapping Sliders isn't my type of gameplay, though most players can play it comfortably. I guess this should be fine.

00:28:576 (3,4) - You can make a blanket out of these to make the triangle look better. Eh... I don't get it.
00:54:740 (4) - Moving this to X:192 Y:200 makes it symmetrical with 00:53:752 (3). Fixed.
02:10:762 (1) - Move one grid down. To match it with 02:08:788 (3) Err I prefer my current one (:

[D]

Didn't find any problems that can ruin the flow or anything. This is good to go.

[Notes]
This map is very well made. Just few more mods and this could be ranked. Good Luck!
EDIT: I realized your M4M doesn't Support songs that are Anime related. Just take my mod.

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi :3 from my queue

General
the SB is nice ~~~

Hard
AR7 may be better because this is kinda slow song&map OK.
00:14:507 (4) - whistle
00:20:431 (4) - whistle on head
00:26:355 (4) - ^ For these three, no. I prefer my current hitsounds (:
01:09:550 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - maybe there should one or two clap in this period ? maybe on 01:10:537 (5) - 's head or 01:12:512 (2) - ? Nope, I personally like mine.
01:21:398 (3) - maybe end at 01:22:385 - and add a note at 01:22:879 - Umm no, I like this slider (: it's so flowwy
01:58:421 (5,1) - the transition here doesn't feel so good, maybe consider to change a shape Moved it instead a little bit.
02:06:813 (1,2) - suddenly too close It's not actually, try to look at similar pattern like 02:13:231 (4,5,1) -
02:16:686 (3) - this touches the HP bar, consider to consider to move 02:14:712 (1,2,3,4) - down together (not to stack with 02:14:465 (5) - ) Ah no, I like mine better, also I stack the note because reason (:
02:19:402 (2) - this is also too high above, move 02:18:661 (1,2,3) - down together Nope either.
02:34:582 (1) - consider to lower the volume the spinner, espicially when the spinner bonus sound comes out, it's really noisy, or you may add a nuted spinner-bonus file in your folder, it's up to you Turned down the volume a little bit (:

Normal
01:19:917 (1) - make it at 01:20:163 - ? or is it for difficulty consideration Yep. It's there because I don't wanna break 1/1 pattern polarity in this part.
01:28:061 (4) - consider to make head to the right, the current arrangement is too intense due to the distance snap and dom't looks beautiful I'll try.
actually from 02:18:661 (1) - this part on, as the sv rose, the distance became bigger, and patterns like 02:26:560 (1,2,3) - would be quite hard for Normal-diff-players I know, but... I like it ):. I think I'll leave it for now.

that's all
good job~

JInxyjem wrote:

[Normal]
Nitpick: 00:51:778 (1) - End point 1 grid right to blanket (1) perfectly Sure.

[D]
...Why is this difficulty called D? Try to guess... (:
Can I just say I love you because your slider blankets are almost fucking perfect unlike my previous mods
I like the round flows around the sliders too.
Just a little tweaking which is probably quite nitpicky <3 thanks very much!

00:22:652 (3) - Middle slider point 1 grid left. I went to 1/6 for this so I guess it's not really a problem at all, but since you've already went that far with the entire map... It broke blanket ):
00:26:355 (4) - End point 1 grid down and right. OK.
00:27:095 (1) - End point 2 grids left. OK.
01:25:099 (4) - End point 2 grids up OK.
01:25:840 (5) - If ^ was applied, end point 1 grid up seems to work OK.
01:55:952 (2) - Why not make this slider perfectly symmeterical? It's what you do with the other sliders that are positioned like this. http://puu.sh/3alFn.jpg Isn't it already symmetrical?

And that's it. Sorry I couldn't find much, whatever I usually check for is already perfect here.

watashino wrote:

Let me try:) M4M please~~

General

cannot find anything~

Normal

00:15:988 (2) - I think normal should have a same distance spacing... What do you mean? I mean, which one are you talking about?
00:25:614 (3) - the start of the slider can move left by 1 tick to make a better blanket OK.
00:30:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i think normal should not use too many overlapping. it may confuse newbie. Also, spacing is a very important issue. Ah, but I think playing around with some advanced note placement here doesn't really painful (: Also note: This is not the easiest diff.
00:33:019 (1,2) - can stack more better if you want Fixed.
00:51:778 (1) - the start of the slider can be moved to X:176, Y:200 OK.
00:54:740 (4) - how about make this blanket like this? Nope, I prefer mine.
[box=]

Kyshiro wrote:

Haelo

inv wants the D

1. 00:13:026 (2) - I clearly hear some sort of whistle like sound on the repeat, why not add a whistle on it? Nop. I tend not to use the whistles on these repeats because i feel it sounds too much.
2. 00:16:235 (2) - Same for this start ^
3. 00:35:981 (1) - I suggest you use a normal sampleset finish here, I can't even hear the custom hitsound I prefer current one. Raised the volume tho.
4. Why did you skip 00:48:569 - till 00:51:778 - it sounds pretty mappable to me, feels a bit empty too I didn't like to map the bridge, plus because the break is only one on this map
5. 01:03:626 (1) - Turn off gridsnap and cover the slider track perfectly underneath the end of the previous one hurr durr nazi ocd 卐
6. 01:21:398 (3) - Reduce the slider length till 01:22:385 - and add a note at 01:22:879 - Nah :< i like how this slider is long and flowwy
7. 02:06:566 (5,1) - why did you make a custom stack here, and not here 02:10:516 (5,1) - I suggest you make custom stacks for all patterns like this, or simply stack them completely

what that must be bug when i accidentally move it lolol

Normal

1. 00:19:690 (3) - I'm not really a fan of notes like these in a normal diff, but yeah since there'll be an easy diff it might be okay, I'd still suggest you to unstack it though. you'll probably deny anyway lolol lol yaep, i personally feel stacking it just plays better
2. 00:22:652 (3) - ^
3. 00:30:798 (2) - ^ Etc. Saem for both.
4. 00:35:981 (6) - Same as D Ok.
5. 01:05:600 (3) - More fun if you CTRL+G this one imo Not my style :>
6. 01:52:497 (2,3,4) - Looks a bit weird imo, you could place (3) a bit lower: http://puu.sh/3ePdm.jpg Yeah :< but mine flows better
7. 02:32:484 (4) - Spacing? >: oho k
8. 02:34:458 - I think it'd be cool to add another note here for the finish sound Nope, it'll be hard to play on osu!mania.

pls inv pls

Sonnyc wrote:

Normal:

00:32:279 (5,6) - This rhythm feels strange. Delete then and rather put one in 00:32:526. Not so strange imo, also it was intended for pattern improvisations
01:53:978 (3) - Delete Whistle as 01:57:433 (3). No, it fits in somewhat another way.
02:02:370 (4) - Add whistle for lyrics? Nope :/
02:08:294 (2) - Distance? Ah, fixed a little bit.
02:12:243 (2) - ^ Fixed.
02:32:484 (4) - ^ maybe rotate a little.. No, it'll be weird o.o

D:

00:34:500 (3) - Clap at the reverse to follow the music. I missed that one 0.0 anyway fixed!
01:27:321 (3,5) - This symmetry isn't perfect. For this kind of ctrl+g pattern, you have to set the last slider dot where it actually ends for (3). Yeah but it was intended and I don't wanna change it :3c
01:49:041 (3) - 1 Grid right 0.0b
02:16:686 (3) - Since distance gets lower, NC. i wanna but 2 combos are just... )-:
02:20:883 (4) - I think this is a weird Whistle. Shouldn't this be at 02:20:636? OK!
02:28:781 (4) - ^ OK.
02:32:484 (4) - NC No, it's weird.

kd pls

Smoothie wrote:

Heya
From my Modding queue.

Just some suggestions~


[Normal]
01:03:626 (1) - Add a whistle on the slider start? Umm no, sounds weird.
01:10:537 (5) - ^ Nah.
01:41:143 (1) - Why don't you make this one curvy? I prefer it like that :3c
02:14:712 (1) - Whistle on the slider start~ Sounds fine.

[D]
00:14:507 (4) - How about adding a whistle here?
00:17:469 (4) - Whistle on the slider start~
00:20:431 (4) - ^
00:26:355 (4) - ^
00:29:317 (4) - ^
00:32:279 (4) - Whistle? Applied all (-:

Sorry for the poor mod ._.
Your map is just perfect!

Good luck!

Dark_Ai wrote:

General

• • seem fine

[Normal]

• • 01:49:535 (3) - it missing hitsounds at begin. may you can add something there? since you can hear something like a drum here? I'm not planning to specifically hitsound the kick sounds
  • 01:49:535 (3) - same here and also there is many parts like this lol same link ?w?
  • 02:34:705 (1) - why this long spinner here? You can map this part as well

Nah, this part meant to had spinner on it.

[D]

• • 01:26:580 (1,2) - move 1 grid left to fix spacing ah ok :3
  • 02:34:582 (1) - same as Normal

;~;

Good luck with rank ~

osu file format v12

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Gonzvlo wrote:

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1. I'm curious, what does "D" mean? I guess you can keep the custom name as long as it makes some sense. Ah, I think I should add why I named it like that on the Creator's words. D stands for "Dad", I think it's pretty obvious why now (:
2. Great map, I don't see major problems. Call me back when you're done. Roger.

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1. 01:28:061 (4) - Is a repeat missing here or is this intentional? Hm, either way, I believe you should add a repeat here, (4) -> (5) doesn't flow very well and the repeat would fit perfectly. Nice idea! Also tweaked the next patterns

|D|

1. 00:17:963 (5,1) - Flow is a bit awkward here. Perhaps you could try reversing (5) but you would need to move (4) & (5) a little further from (1). You could try that or something else. Nah, I think it's okay.
2. 00:34:500 (3,4,5) - This pattern is a little iffy, mostly because it seems like you're using the sliders with repeat for the "drums" but (4) is also mapping a part of the vocals. I'd suggest to split the pattern so that these "special" drums aren't mixed with the vocals. It seems like you're doing this to keep the symmetry, which you can do with a different pattern, let me suggest something like this, in this kind of pattern you can clearly recognize how the first 2 kick slider (3) & (4) are mapping the drums, I hope you get what I mean. Changed into something similar, and thanks for pointing out!
3. 01:21:398 (3) - This slider is a bit too long, I believe. You can clearly hear that a new "hold" starts here 01:22:385 - . You could try shortening this one until 01:22:138 - and then add a new slider here 01:22:385 - But I love it ;~;

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