- [Calm]
- 00:19:096 (1) - How about adding a whistle at the end of this slider to follow the piano? sounds too empty now imo.
- 00:49:572 (1) - ^
- 01:09:572 (5) - ^ This note sounds empty, the piano can be heard perfectly for whistle so consider adding it.
- 01:21:000 (1) - ^ At the repeat.
- 02:11:476 (4) - ^ At the start. Sounds too empty for being the slider previous to the chorus.
- 02:35:286 (5) - And here too (already explained in [Relaxing]):3?
There's not much to say, only few whistle suggestions!
- [Relaxing]
*I agree with HeatKai. Such small hitcircles aren't relaxing to play nor see imo. ;_; Consider using a bigger circle size. Clicking bigger circles is much more relaxing than smaller circles imo.
- 00:24:810 (3) - Isn't it an issue to place an slider out of the grid? I've never seen this, so that's why I'm wondering about it.
- 02:10:524 (4,5) - This pattern can flow slightly better if you flip horizontally 02:10:524 (4) and place it more like this. What changes is that (4)'s curve is more over 02:11:238 (5)'s start, that's why it feels a bit more natural imo. Looks different but plays differnt too o3o
- 02:12:191 (5) - I suggest you to add a nc here to emphasize the start of the chorus and change of melody. Fits with the piano imo, but it's up to you.
- 02:27:667 (6) - How about adding a whistle to follow the piano sound here at the repeat of this slider? (not sure if it's a piano sound but, yeah, you can understand me o3o)
- 02:35:286 (8) - Whistle at the start of this slider to follow the piano? this is the last piano sound you mapped so it would be good, I think.
Same with this difficulty. Nice job. I just don't like the small notes. They're too small and I personally find them annoying to play and watch instead of relaxing, but it may be just me..
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