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- Kevin
Thx for ur modding Itachi_Uchiha. Map updated.
Teara
IRC mod

To summarize it, I pointed out general stuff like MP3 needing to have a proper name, and that its should be 128 to 192 bitrate. (it was 320)

Pointed out inconsistencies in Preview Points and Kiai.

Worked on a lot of hitsounds/patterns on insane/normal with some new combo changes

Full IRC Log
21:24 Kaneko: hm, first thing, you need to give your mp3 a name lol
21:25 Kaneko: also, bitrate is to high, it can only be 128-196
21:25 Kaneko: its 320 atm
21:25 kevinelson: name was on kanji... editor can't read that
21:25 Kaneko: give it the roman name
21:26 Kaneko: Nanahira works
21:26 Kaneko: just, blank songs can break database queries
21:26 Kaneko: so bats will complain about it
21:26 Kaneko: even 1 works
21:26 Kaneko: but not blank
21:26 kevinelson: okay
21:26 Kaneko: also, you need to reduce quaility of the song, then find a new offset
21:27 Kaneko: btw, is a IRC mod fine with you?
21:27 Kaneko: since your online and all that =p
21:27 kevinelson: i'm fine with it
21:27 kevinelson: i'm working on mp3 right now
21:28 Kaneko: ok, muting slidertick makes the map unrankable btw
21:28 Kaneko: you not allowed to mute anything anymore
21:28 Kaneko: sliderslide*
21:28 Kaneko: but, you can fight this with a mat or bat =p
21:28 Kaneko: (just for the record, I'm a former MAT =p)
21:28 Kaneko: back in 2011
21:29 Kaneko: ok, while you fix the mp3, I'm going to make some tea~
21:29 Kaneko: then we can start with insane
21:29 kevinelson: okay
21:33 kevinelson: kk i'm ready
21:33 Kaneko: alright
21:33 Kaneko: insane flows very nicely
21:33 Kaneko: but there is a few odds places
21:34 Kaneko: 00:41:439 (7,1) -
21:34 Kaneko: this really plays awkward
21:35 Kaneko: the angle of the jump makes it really hard.
21:35 Kaneko: I'd suggest you try something else here
21:36 Kaneko: I' personalyl would make it 1 slider, instead of two notes
21:36 kevinelson: What abount Stack then?
21:37 Kaneko: well, you can stack it
21:37 Kaneko: thats another idea
21:38 Kaneko: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651583
21:40 Kaneko: 00:34:818 (6,1) -
21:40 Kaneko: or something like you did here
21:43 Kaneko: ok, moving along
21:43 Kaneko: 00:44:853 (1) - add a clap on the start of the slider
21:43 Kaneko: 00:45:163 (2) -
21:43 Kaneko: same, add a clap on the start of the sldier
21:43 Kaneko: slider*
21:43 Kaneko: 00:45:473 (3) - clap
21:44 kevinelson: done
21:44 Kaneko: 00:59:335 (3) -
21:44 Kaneko: add a finish on the last repeat
21:45 Kaneko: fits the music ;)
21:45 Kaneko: 01:10:507 (1) - even though it follows the lyrics, I'd remove the NC here
21:45 Kaneko: makes it easy to read
21:46 kevinelson: u mean at 00:59:541 - or 00:59:748 -?
21:46 Kaneko: 00:59:748
21:47 Kaneko: 01:02:232 (1) - finish hitsound to compliment the first and last finish that appear, it also gives more impact the the vocals
21:47 Kaneko: 01:02:232 (1) - finish hitsound to compliment the first and last finish that appear, it also gives more impact the the vocals
21:49 Kaneko: 01:25:818 (3) - this is minor, but you do get big skins, with huge healthbars so, this will be hidden for those players, but its rankable and up to you
21:49 Kaneko: 01:25:818 (3) - this is minor, but you do get big skins, with huge healthbars so, this will be hidden for those players, but its rankable and up to you
21:51 Kaneko: 02:06:784 (1) - this is also awkard to play, but its fine as is, I'd have kept it hitcircles =p
21:53 Kaneko: 02:21:680 (1,2) - clap on the start of the sliders
21:53 Kaneko: for both of them
21:55 Kaneko: 02:50:646 (5) - another slightly hidden under HP bar issue
21:55 kevinelson: same at 02:23:336 (3,4) - ?
21:55 Kaneko: no, you have claps on the end, which fits
21:56 Kaneko: 02:33:679 (3,4,5) - this is also very hard to read
21:57 Kaneko: its fine I guess
21:58 kevinelson: staked
21:58 Kaneko: the slow down part is awesome, no changes here
21:59 Kaneko: 03:27:886 - hitcircle with clap
21:59 Kaneko: 03:28:300 - hitcircle with clap
21:59 Kaneko: or a slider with starts on 27:886 and ends on 28:300
21:59 Kaneko: clap on both ends
22:00 Kaneko: the sudden void feels akward
22:00 Kaneko: and thats it for insane
22:00 Kaneko: now for general stuff, then hard
22:01 Kaneko: the max size a folder can be without a video is 10mb' straight, but I'm guessing when you reduce the bits of the mp3 to 192, it should come down a bit
22:01 Kaneko: the max size a folder can be without a video is 10mb' straight, but I'm guessing when you reduce the bits of the mp3 to 192, it should come down a bit
22:02 Kaneko: a quick check in the folder for all diffs shows me, there is a inconsistency in the preview times
22:02 Kaneko: easy normal and hard start on 142330
22:02 Kaneko: but insane starts on 142441
22:02 Kaneko: this annoyes bats, so better fix it
22:03 kevinelson: :D fixed
22:04 Kaneko: once we are done, make sure Kaia is consistant over all diffs
22:04 kevinelson: .mp3 become 5.45 from 9.09mb
22:05 kevinelson: Kiai?
22:05 Kaneko: ye, sorry, Kiai*
22:05 Kaneko: eek, let me play Hard quickly
22:07 Kaneko: hmm
22:07 Kaneko: hard is harder, then insane btw
22:08 Kaneko: we are going to have to do some major work on this diff
22:10 Kaneko: ok, I can see its the same as insane, just different spacing
22:10 Kaneko: this wont work sadly =p
22:11 Kaneko: its much to confusing
22:11 kevinelson: i'm thinking about remapping this
22:11 Kaneko: hmm
22:11 kevinelson: remap*
22:12 Kaneko: well, I really like this song, and I'll offer to make you a cool hard, if you like
22:12 Kaneko: it will take me 2-3 days =p
22:13 Kaneko: well, ok, going to skip this diff, because it needs way to much work
22:13 Kaneko: has to be remap imo =p
22:13 kevinelson: It would be very gratifying to have a guest in one of my first maps
22:14 Kaneko: well, if you give me the go ahead, I'll start tonight =p
22:15 kevinelson: i was looking at kiai i missed some at normal and easy
22:15 kevinelson: fixed now
22:16 kevinelson: about guest a hard dif, go ahead!
22:16 Kaneko: alright :o
22:17 Kaneko: ok, normal is next then.
22:17 kevinelson: k
22:17 Kaneko: I did a quick testplay with double time
22:17 Kaneko: and spacing is a small issue
22:18 Kaneko: what I'll suggest is, for the normal parts, keep Distance snap 1x
22:18 Kaneko: and for the speed up parts make it 1.2x
22:18 kevinelson: *normal need some aesthetic adjustments
22:18 Kaneko: that too =p
22:19 Kaneko: but, for normal and easy, always try and map with distance snap
22:19 Kaneko: to make the map flow better
22:19 Kaneko: hard and insane can break this rules a bit
22:20 Kaneko: so, I'll suggest when you do some cosmestic improvements on normal to just properly snap them all to the grid
22:20 kevinelson: about spacing and aesthetic i'll mess with it right after mod
22:20 Kaneko: distance snap that is
22:20 Kaneko: so, I wont be focusing to much on spacing for now
22:20 Kaneko: also, normal is missing a red timing section I notice
22:21 Kaneko: 03:32:059 < 145 BPM
22:21 Kaneko: 03:32:059 -
22:21 Kaneko: hard and insane had this
22:21 kevinelson: is that needed same at all difs?
22:21 Kaneko: timing is a must for all diffs
22:21 Kaneko: did you time this yourself?
22:22 kevinelson: yeah
22:22 Kaneko: good job then
22:22 Kaneko: let me ask this then, why the second red timing point
22:22 Kaneko: ?
22:23 Kaneko: (I'm very bad with timing) =p
22:23 kevinelson: from 03:32:059 notes was out of timming
22:23 kevinelson: i needed to fix
22:24 Kaneko: ah ok then
22:24 Kaneko: you need to add these to normal and easy too
22:24 Kaneko: if the offset changes abit
22:24 kevinelson: but at normal and easy i was fine
22:24 Kaneko: regardless, bats will nail you for this
22:24 Kaneko: trust me =p
22:25 Kaneko: Ok, some general guidelines for a normal
22:25 Kaneko: when making repeating sliders, try and keep it constant repeats thought the song, etc, if you have a slider which repeats 2 times
22:25 Kaneko: when making repeating sliders, try and keep it constant repeats thought the song, etc, if you have a slider which repeats 2 times
22:26 Kaneko: try and keep all the following sliders also repeating 2 times
22:26 Kaneko: 00:39:886 (1,2) -
22:26 Kaneko: like, (1) repeats 2 times
22:26 Kaneko: but (2) repeats 4 times
22:26 Kaneko: this can be confusing for newer players
22:27 Kaneko: also, another nice to know thing
22:27 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gB2B
22:27 Kaneko: if you look in the right hand side, the yellow text
22:27 Kaneko: it will show you the distance between two objects
22:27 Kaneko: now, the general rule for a normal mapset is to try and keep the distance spacing about the same thought out the diff ( in the same combo color atleast)
22:27 Kaneko: now, the general rule for a normal mapset is to try and keep the distance spacing about the same thought out the diff ( in the same combo color atleast)
22:28 Kaneko: thoughout*
22:28 Kaneko: thouhout* eek, I cant spell sorry
22:29 kevinelson: :D
22:29 Kaneko: but this doesnt mean you have to make a plain and boring diff
22:29 Kaneko: but try and keep it to one distance snap, you can ignore this when on a new combo
22:30 Kaneko: if you dont understand something I say, please say so, and I'll try and clearify
22:30 Kaneko: english is my second langauge =p
22:30 Kaneko: but I try my best
22:30 Kaneko: 01:17:955 (3,4,5) -
22:30 Kaneko: this is a no-no spacing btw
22:30 Kaneko: for normal
22:31 Kaneko: 01:19:610 (1,2) -
22:31 Kaneko: I'd make this a slider
22:32 Kaneko: ok, I'd suggest you use a distance snap of 0.8x
22:32 Kaneko: if you press "Alt"
22:32 Kaneko: the top right corner, it shows distance snap
22:33 Kaneko: spacing*
22:34 Kaneko: ok
22:34 Kaneko: 01:56:438 (2,3) -
22:34 Kaneko: I'd delete these two
22:34 Kaneko: make (1) repeat once
22:34 Kaneko: and on 01:56:852 (2) -
22:35 Kaneko: make a slider that ends on the next white tick
22:35 Kaneko: 01:57:473 (3) -
22:35 Kaneko: I'd remove 1 repeat and place a hitcircle the white tick
22:35 Kaneko: ok, going to grab some more tea, and give you some time to catch up =p
22:36 kevinelson: fixed
22:36 kevinelson: okay
22:39 Kaneko: ok
22:39 Kaneko: 02:02:024 (4) -
22:39 Kaneko: delete this and make it a slider that ends the white tick
22:40 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBzf
22:40 Kaneko: ok, and
22:40 Kaneko: 02:02:438 (5) - delete this
22:40 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBBN
22:40 Kaneko: something like that
22:41 Kaneko: and put a finish on (1)
22:41 Kaneko: fix the combo's too
22:41 Kaneko: 02:38:231 (5) -
22:41 Kaneko: new combo here
22:42 Kaneko: 03:03:886 (4) -
22:42 Kaneko: new combo here
22:43 Kaneko: 03:33:059 (7) -
22:43 Kaneko: delete this
22:43 Kaneko: and make (6) repeat once
22:43 Kaneko: and new combo on (7) then
22:43 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBJh
22:44 Kaneko: 03:34:714 (3) - delete this
22:44 Kaneko: and repeat (2) once
22:46 Kaneko: hmm, ok
22:46 Kaneko: 03:36:369 (3) - delete this
22:46 Kaneko: 03:36:576 (4) -
22:46 Kaneko: this too
22:47 Kaneko: make (2) repeat once
22:47 Kaneko: and move (3) to the white tick
22:48 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBU9
22:49 Kaneko: 03:39:266 (2) -
22:49 Kaneko: delete this
22:49 Kaneko: and repeat (1) once
22:49 Kaneko: 03:40:093 (3) - delete this then
22:49 Kaneko: and repeat (2) once
22:50 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBZt
22:50 Kaneko: 03:40:300 (3) - gets a new combo
22:51 Kaneko: 03:42:576 (2) - delete this
22:51 Kaneko: 03:42:783 (1) - and this
22:51 Kaneko: repeat (1) once
22:52 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gC5h
22:53 kevinelson: i still here dont worry o/
22:53 Kaneko: hehe =p
22:53 Kaneko: the reasons for these is, it makes it easier, but it still fits the area
22:54 Kaneko: just fix the last part as the above, you should get the general idea now
22:55 Kaneko: thats it for normal
22:55 Kaneko: quick test play on easy with hr/dt/hd
22:56 kevinelson: xD
22:59 Kaneko: ok, hitnote placement is good for easy
22:59 Kaneko: its just spacing issues
22:59 Kaneko: remember, a Easy must be 100% snapped to once distance snap
22:59 Kaneko: at all times =p
22:59 Kaneko: 01:04:714 (5,1) -
23:00 Kaneko: this doesnt work for example
23:00 Kaneko: also, 01:12:990 (1,2) - this spacing is larger then the rest =p so you will be asked to fix this
23:00 Kaneko: even if the tempo of the song picks up, its a rule that easy should be snapped 100% =p
23:01 kevinelson: =( was so fun
23:01 kevinelson: witch u thing is better 0.8 or 1.0?
23:02 Kaneko: you will have to experiment
23:02 Kaneko: what you can do is
23:03 Kaneko: change the SV
23:03 Kaneko: to 0.85x and 1x
23:03 Kaneko: you can do this in timing
23:03 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gCwJ
23:04 Kaneko: this way, you can have difference in spacing, and it wont break the rules
23:04 kevinelson: then i ill have to fix all sliders right?
23:04 Kaneko: yes
23:05 Kaneko: well, fix the spacing for easy, and it should all be good
23:05 kevinelson: 1x distance does not fill better with SV 1x?
23:06 Kaneko: well, use 0.8 as your base
23:06 Kaneko: for both speedup and slow downs
23:06 Kaneko: or use 1x
23:06 Kaneko: if you dont want them to touch
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Teara Kaneko, Thx for your modding, Map updated.

PS: Teara Kaneko Will map a Guest [Insane] mode Yay!
Teara
Took me awhile. orz

Here is "easy" insane owo

http://puu.sh/2ltAy

should even the difficulty spread a bit.
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Awesome, Thx~ Uploaded ! ヽ(*'、^*)
Teara
Here is an update.

Thanks to Roddie and SteRRuM for suggestions.

http://puu.sh/2m164
P o M u T a
hi~.

[Easy]
  1. AR+1 Seems better.
  2. 00:07:219 (5) - New combo change.
  3. 00:56:874 (5) - ^
  4. 01:01:012 (1) - ^
  5. 01:07:632 (1) - ^
  6. 01:16:322 (7) - ^
  7. 02:06:391 (5) - ^
  8. 02:10:529 (1) - ^
  9. 02:17:150 (1) - ^
  10. 02:35:770 (3) - ^

    i think NC bit random... so, you try have a regularity.
[Normal]
  1. AR+1 Seems better.
  2. 00:37:426 (2) - (1) ctrl+H and ctrl+J use better.
  3. 00:41:563 (10) - Add NC.
  4. 00:46:115 (1) - 00:44:874 (1) ctrl+J and ctrl+G use better. . if changed... next spacing check please~.
  5. 00:56:460 (6) - Add NC.
  6. 00:56:874 (7) - successive repeat (short slider) very confused. i don't like successive repeat. so 1 repeat is nice...
  7. 01:55:219 x) - i think add note is better.
  8. 02:17:150 (1) - Remove NC.
  9. You more use clap better. this song very match.
  10. 02:42:391 (3) - Add finish Slider head.
  11. 02:49:012 (1) - Add finish Slider head.
  12. 02:52:322 (5) - Add NC.
  13. 02:58:115 (1) - slider End time is 03:00:598 better~.
[Hard]
  1. this is Hard diff O:? seems insane...
  2. 00:47:357 (4) - two repeat is confused.
  3. 00:50:667 (4) - ^
  4. 00:57:288 (6) - ^
  5. 01:08:874 (5) - slider end time is 01:09:288 better.
  6. 01:11:770 (4) - slider end time is 01:12:184 sound good.
  7. 01:12:288 (5) - Delete note please. not match sound...
  8. 03:15:908 (1) - Remove NC.
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:634 (7) - sound not match.. so, 1 right 1/4.
[Teara's Insane]
  1. 00:16:115 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stack is confused play.. so, unstack better.
  2. 02:19:322 (7) - Add NC.
  3. 02:32:046 (4,5) - spacing small is bad. because, It seems 1/4 note.. i am confused.
overall ... NC is random.. so, people confused.
you should NC check~.

good luck
Topic Starter
- Kevin

P o M u T a wrote:

hi~.

[Easy]
  1. AR+1 Seems better. No change
  2. 00:07:219 (5) - New combo change.Ok
  3. 00:56:874 (5) - ^ Ok
  4. 01:01:012 (1) - ^ Ok
  5. 01:07:632 (1) - ^ Ok
  6. 01:16:322 (7) - ^ Ok
  7. 02:06:391 (5) - ^ Ok
  8. 02:10:529 (1) - ^ Ok
  9. 02:17:150 (1) - ^ Ok
  10. 02:35:770 (3) - ^ Ok

    i think NC bit random... so, you try have a regularity.
[Normal]
  1. AR+1 Seems better.No change
  2. 00:37:426 (2) - (1) ctrl+H and ctrl+J use better. Ok
  3. 00:41:563 (10) - Add NC. Ok
  4. 00:46:115 (1) - 00:44:874 (1) ctrl+J and ctrl+G use better. . if changed... next spacing check please~. No change
  5. 00:56:460 (6) - Add NC.Ok
  6. 00:56:874 (7) - successive repeat (short slider) very confused. i don't like successive repeat. so 1 repeat is nice... Ok
  7. 01:55:219 x) - i think add note is better.
  8. 02:17:150 (1) - Remove NC.Ok
  9. You more use clap better. this song very match.
  10. 02:42:391 (3) - Add finish Slider head. Ok
  11. 02:49:012 (1) - Add finish Slider head. Ok
  12. 02:52:322 (5) - Add NC. Ok
  13. 02:58:115 (1) - slider End time is 03:00:598 better~. Ok
[Hard]
  1. this is Hard diff O:? seems insane...
  2. 00:47:357 (4) - two repeat is confused. Ok
  3. 00:50:667 (4) - ^ Ok
  4. 00:57:288 (6) - ^ Ok
  5. 01:08:874 (5) - slider end time is 01:09:288 better. Ok
  6. 01:11:770 (4) - slider end time is 01:12:184 sound good. Ok
  7. 01:12:288 (5) - Delete note please. not match sound... Ok
  8. 03:15:908 (1) - Remove NC.Ok


[Insane]
  1. 00:19:634 (7) - sound not match.. so, 1 right 1/4.
Ok

[Teara's Insane]
  1. 00:16:115 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stack is confused play.. so, unstack better.
  2. 02:19:322 (7) - Add NC.
  3. 02:32:046 (4,5) - spacing small is bad. because, It seems 1/4 note.. i am confused.
overall ... NC is random.. so, people confused.
you should NC check~.

good luck
Teara

P o M u T a wrote:

[Teara's Insane]
  1. 00:16:115 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stack is confused play.. so, unstack better. ~ No, I'd rather keep it like this, it fits for me.
  2. 02:19:322 (7) - Add NC. ~ Ok
  3. 02:32:046 (4,5) - spacing small is bad. because, It seems 1/4 note.. i am confused. ~ I've actually asked a lot of people to test play this, and they all got this on the first try. I don't think its so confusing.


overall ... NC is random.. so, people confused. ~ I've tried to redo the New Combo's, for some reason its very hard to do for this map =p
you should NC check~.

good luck
Thanks for the mod!

http://puu.sh/2nKLi
StickyPicky
hi ~ :) #modreqs

:arrow: Easy

00:03:495 / 00:06:805 / 00:10:115 / 00:53:150 / 02:02:667 / 02:35:770 / 02:42:391 / 02:49:012 / 02:52:322 / 02:55:632 / 02:57:288 / 02:58:943 add finish ~
01:20:460 remove this clap ~
02:33:288 remove this slider change this to a spinner ~

:arrow: Normal

None ~

:arrow: Hard

kindly look the AiMod and fix all of this >.<
:arrow: Insane

02:59:048 Spinners must have new combo.

:arrow: Teara's Insane

03:15:742 Object's end is not snapped!

SPOILER
Thats all ~ goodluck ~ >.<
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx~ for modding newtoniorock8, Followed everything

newtoniorock8 wrote:

hi ~ :) #modreqs
Mod
:arrow: Easy

00:03:495 / 00:06:805 / 00:10:115 / 00:53:150 / 02:02:667 / 02:35:770 / 02:42:391 / 02:49:012 / 02:52:322 / 02:55:632 / 02:57:288 / 02:58:943 add finish ~
01:20:460 remove this clap ~
02:33:288 remove this slider change this to a spinner ~

:arrow: Normal

None ~

:arrow: Hard

kindly look the AiMod and fix all of this >.<
:arrow: Insane

02:59:048 Spinners must have new combo.


SPOILER
Thats all ~ goodluck ~ >.<

[Teara's Insane]

03:15:742 Object's end is not snapped!
Fixed!

Kiiwa
Hi~

[General]
  1. Letter boxing during breaks crops your background image in an awkward way, maybe disable it?

[Insane]
  1. OD+1
  2. 00:03:497 - Add a finish?
  3. 00:07:221 (2) - CTRL+G works better for spacing.
  4. 00:37:738 (4) - CTRL+G works better for spacing.
  5. 00:42:393 (5) - End this slider at 00:42:600 - for better rhythm.
  6. 01:36:186 (1) - Add a clap.
  7. 02:05:565 (7) - Extend till 02:05:772 - for better rhythm.
  8. 02:14:876 (4) - Delete this note.
  9. 02:22:117 - Add a clap.
  10. 02:33:702 (3) - Add a clap.
  11. 02:59:048 (1) - Add a clap.
  12. 03:17:564 (4) - Add a clap.
  13. 03:21:290 (1) - Remove new combo, it makes no sense...
  14. 03:28:324 (4) - Add a clap.
  15. 03:29:152 (1,1) - Remove new combos to match music more.
  16. 03:30:393 (1) - Finish sounds awful here, remove it or end your spinner at 03:31:634 -


[Teara's Insane]
  1. OD-1
  2. 00:03:495 - Add a finish.
  3. 00:16:115 (10,11,12,13,1) - Stacking all this doesn't play nor look nice, I suggest to change.
  4. 01:22:529 (4,5) - Better to stack then use this strange spacing.
  5. 01:25:426 (1,5) - Add clap.
  6. 01:26:253 (8) - New combo, 01:27:081 (1) - remove new combo.
  7. 01:27:908 (1,1,1) - Make spacing more consistent?
  8. 01:45:184 (11) - Delete note, these is nothing in the music to require this note.
  9. 02:03:081 - Add clap, 02:03:908 - Add clap.
  10. 02:11:357 - Remove whistle, 02:11:770 - Add whistle.
  11. 02:19:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These sliders should start on white/red ticks, not blue... 02:19:012 (6) - Change this to note then start the sliders at 02:19:219 -
  12. 02:32:047 (4,5) - Again, this spacing isn't good.
  13. 03:17:563 (2) - Add a clap.
  14. 03:22:115 - Add a finish.
  15. 03:31:943 - Same as Insane, it's a bad choice.
  16. 03:40:736 (2,3) - Bad spacing. Suggest you shorten 03:40:736 (2) - to end at 03:40:943 -
  17. 03:45:288 (4) - Add new combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:495 - Add a finish.
  2. 00:06:184 (12) - End at 00:06:391 - instead.
  3. 00:33:288 (1) - Add a finish.
  4. 00:37:839 (11) - Add a clap.
  5. 00:43:632 (5) - Add a clap.
  6. 00:47:770 - Add a clap.
  7. 00:48:598 - Add a clap.
  8. 00:51:081 - Add a clap.
  9. 00:52:943 - Add a clap.
  10. 00:53:563 - Add a clap.
  11. 00:54:391 - Add a clap.
  12. 00:56:046 - Add a clap.
  13. 00:56:874 (4) - Add a clap.
  14. 00:57:701 - Add a clap.
  15. 01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Long stream for a Hard...
  16. 01:12:495 (6) - Delete note.
  17. 01:12:599 (7) - End at 01:12:805 - instead.
  18. 01:13:427 (2,1) - Recheck your rhythm. I suggest you add a note at 01:13:839 - and delete the note at 01:13:943 (1) -
  19. 01:20:047 (4,5) - Same as previous.
  20. 01:21:701 - Add clap.
  21. 01:22:943 - Change the whistle to a Finish.
  22. 01:24:184 - Add clap.
  23. 01:57:288 (6) - Add clap.
  24. 02:00:598 (7) - Add clap.
  25. 02:01:426 (3) - Add clap.
  26. 02:03:082 (3,4) - Recheck rhythm.
  27. 02:05:563 - Add clap.
  28. 02:09:288 (4) - Add finish and new combo, 02:09:496 (1) - Remove new combo.
  29. 02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this stream is too long for a Hard.
  30. 02:21:805 (4,6) - Delete these notes.
  31. Now just check the rhythm for the rest of your chorus's.../me lazy

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:115 - Add a finish.
  2. Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ?
  3. 01:03:081 (3) - New combo.
  4. 01:07:632 (1) - Remove new combo.
  5. 01:19:632 (6) - New combo.
  6. 01:27:495 (2) - Remove finish, it's too noisy here.
  7. 02:20:460 (1) - Remove new combo.
  8. 02:52:322 (1) - Add a finish.
  9. 02:56:460 (4) - New combo.
  10. 03:32:460 (5) - New combo, 03:33:495 (1) - Remove new combo.
  11. 03:45:288 (6) - New combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo.
  12. 03:46:943 (1,1) - Do not use 1/4 in a normal, even if it's a slider! Change it to 1/2 instead.

[Easy]
  1. I suggest you place more claps on the 1/2 pattern, they are pretty inconsistent in this difficulty in particular.
  2. Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ?
  3. 00:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo, 00:46:943 (2) - Add new combo.
  4. 01:29:150 - Remove finish.
  5. 02:56:460 (5) - New combo.
  6. 02:59:357 (1) - Spinner is too short for an Easy.
  7. 03:48:184 (6,1) - Objects are too close for an Easy.

My longest mod... :o
Good luck~
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for modding, Kiiwa o/

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~ Hay ヾ(*´Δ`*)ノ"

[General]
  1. Letter boxing during breaks crops your background image in an awkward way, maybe disable it?

    All Disable

[Insane]
  1. OD+1 Increased
  2. 00:03:497 - Add a finish? Ok
  3. 00:07:221 (2) - CTRL+G works better for spacing. No change
  4. 00:37:738 (4) - CTRL+G works better for spacing. No change
  5. 00:42:393 (5) - End this slider at 00:42:600 - for better rhythm. Ok
  6. 01:36:186 (1) - Add a clap. Ok
  7. 02:05:565 (7) - Extend till 02:05:772 - for better rhythm. Ok
  8. 02:14:876 (4) - Delete this note. Ok
  9. 02:22:117 - Add a clap. Ok
  10. 02:33:702 (3) - Add a clap. Ok
  11. 02:59:048 (1) - Add a clap. Ok
  12. 03:17:564 (4) - Add a clap. Ok
  13. 03:21:290 (1) - Remove new combo, it makes no sense... Ok
  14. 03:28:324 (4) - Add a clap. Ok
  15. 03:29:152 (1,1) - Remove new combos to match music more. Ok
  16. 03:30:393 (1) - Finish sounds awful here, remove it or end your spinner at 03:31:634 - End at 03:31:634 -


[Hard]
  1. 00:03:495 - Add a finish. Ok
  2. 00:06:184 (12) - End at 00:06:391 - instead. Ok
  3. 00:33:288 (1) - Add a finish. Ok
  4. 00:37:839 (11) - Add a clap. Ok
  5. 00:43:632 (5) - Add a clap. Ok
  6. 00:47:770 - Add a clap. Ok
  7. 00:48:598 - Add a clap. Ok
  8. 00:51:081 - Add a clap. Ok
  9. 00:52:943 - Add a clap. Ok
  10. 00:53:563 - Add a clap. Ok
  11. 00:54:391 - Add a clap. Ok
  12. 00:56:046 - Add a clap. Ok
  13. 00:56:874 (4) - Add a clap. Ok
  14. 00:57:701 - Add a clap. Ok
  15. 01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Long stream for a Hard... Ok
  16. 01:12:495 (6) - Delete note. Ok
  17. 01:12:599 (7) - End at 01:12:805 - instead. Ok
  18. 01:13:427 (2,1) - Recheck your rhythm. I suggest you add a note at 01:13:839 - and delete the note at 01:13:943 (1) - Ok
  19. 01:20:047 (4,5) - Same as previous. Ok
  20. 01:21:701 - Add clap. Ok
  21. 01:22:943 - Change the whistle to a Finish. Ok
  22. 01:24:184 - Add clap. Ok
  23. 01:57:288 (6) - Add clap. Ok
  24. 02:00:598 (7) - Add clap. Ok
  25. 02:01:426 (3) - Add clap. Ok
  26. 02:03:082 (3,4) - Recheck rhythm. Moved 1 Tick Left
  27. 02:05:563 - Add clap. Ok
  28. 02:09:288 (4) - Add finish and new combo, 02:09:496 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
  29. 02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this stream is too long for a Hard. Ok
  30. 02:21:805 (4,6) - Delete these notes. Ok
  31. Now just check the rhythm for the rest of your chorus's.../me lazy Checked hope i didnt miss anything

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:115 - Add a finish. Ok
  2. Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ? No change
  3. 01:03:081 (3) - New combo. Ok
  4. 01:07:632 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
  5. 01:19:632 (6) - New combo. Ok
  6. 01:27:495 (2) - Remove finish, it's too noisy here. Ok
  7. 02:20:460 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
  8. 02:52:322 (1) - Add a finish. Ok
  9. 02:56:460 (4) - New combo. Ok
  10. 03:32:460 (5) - New combo, 03:33:495 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
  11. 03:45:288 (6) - New combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
  12. 03:46:943 (1,1) - Do not use 1/4 in a normal, even if it's a slider! Change it to 1/2 instead. Ok


[Easy]
  1. I suggest you place more claps on the 1/2 pattern, they are pretty inconsistent in this difficulty in particular. Worked hit sounds on all map
  2. Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ? No change
  3. 00:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo, 00:46:943 (2) - Add new combo. Ok
  4. 01:29:150 - Remove finish. Ok
  5. 02:56:460 (5) - New combo.Ok
  6. 02:59:357 (1) - Spinner is too short for an Easy. Ok
  7. 03:48:184 (6,1) - Objects are too close for an Easy.Ok

My longest mod... :o
Good luck~
Teara

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

[Teara's Insane]
  1. OD-1
  2. 00:03:495 - Add a finish.
  3. 00:16:115 (10,11,12,13,1) - Stacking all this doesn't play nor look nice, I suggest to change. ~ All a matter of opinion, I like it and for it it plays well, so no change.
  4. 01:22:529 (4,5) - Better to stack then use this strange spacing.
  5. 01:25:426 (1,5) - Add clap.
  6. 01:26:253 (8) - New combo, 01:27:081 (1) - remove new combo.
  7. 01:27:908 (1,1,1) - Make spacing more consistent?
  8. 01:45:184 (11) - Delete note, these is nothing in the music to require this note.
  9. 02:03:081 - Add clap, 02:03:908 - Add clap.
  10. 02:11:357 - Remove whistle, 02:11:770 - Add whistle.
  11. 02:19:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These sliders should start on white/red ticks, not blue... 02:19:012 (6) - Change this to note then start the sliders at 02:19:219 -
  12. 02:32:047 (4,5) - Again, this spacing isn't good.
  13. 03:17:563 (2) - Add a clap.
  14. 03:22:115 - Add a finish.
  15. 03:31:943 - Same as Insane, it's a bad choice.
  16. 03:40:736 (2,3) - Bad spacing. Suggest you shorten 03:40:736 (2) - to end at 03:40:943 -
  17. 03:45:288 (4) - Add new combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo.

My longest mod... :o
Good luck~
Done everything but the one I commented on, thanks.

http://puu.sh/2qyxn
Stefan
This song is incredible funny. no kd for this Post please

I've tested some Diffs and what I could say is that Hard feels quite overmapped, especially the Streams makes it to a very hard Hard Diff. Try to split these Streams like 00:43:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) (delete 6,8 here, they aren't really needed for this kind of Diff). I like the slider shapes you used at this Diff :3

Normal is okay.. sometimes it feels weird how did you mapped and why you set the Circle/Slider begin here and there but yeah, my opinion. You have a cheerful rhythm feeling on this Map as I can see which is a good thing imo.

About Easy, the same thing as Normal: Some weird moments which you choose to map and I find that it's a bit too much mapped. Also I've noticed some Hitsound inconsistency. Try to fix them.

Oh and use this File and add it to the Map. With this file the Sliderslide is silenced.
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Sorry for late reply.

Thx for test play.

About Hard diff, i still trying to make the map easier.

I have not decided whether or not to change the sliderslide.
DragonArchangel
Hiii This is my mod!!

:arrow: General:
Timing point:3495
Tags: add more:Rin,Len (and replace vocal for Vocaloid)

:arrow: Easy:
01:26:667 - kaia this is not very useful!even to reduce 10% of the volume the music. This for me and dispensable
02:58:115 - this slide would be best if I went through the 02:58:529 02:58:943 here and get here the spinner
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end
00:10:115 (1) - add finish
00:13:426 (1) - add finish
00:46:115 (3) - add finish

:arrow: Normal:
01:55:219 - put a hit here
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end

:arrow: Hard:
03:31:839 - here should be the end of the spinner. is very fast for perceived player
:arrow: Insane:
00:07:221 (2,3) - 4.05x Are you sure?
03:12:393 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - would be so cool ^ ^ (is optional)
03:14:876 (3,4,5,6,7) - this part, the hits have to be closer to the slide, if not, it becomes difficult to understand
:arrow: Teara´s Insane:
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end

sorry if you have some errors in english ^ ^
my english is bad, I hope it helped good at something
good luck, keep so near and bubbling and after is ranked
Topic Starter
- Kevin

DragonArchangel wrote:

Hiii This is my mod!!

:arrow: General:
Timing point:3495 *Thx~ i missed this at [Insane]
Tags: add more:Rin,Len (and replace vocal for Vocaloid) *It's not Kagamine's song It's Nanahira ヾ(*´Δ`*)ノ゙

:arrow: Easy:
01:26:667 - kaia this is not very useful!even to reduce 10% of the volume the music. This for me and dispensable *no Change
02:58:115 - this slide would be best if I went through the 02:58:529 02:58:943 here and get here the spinner *Hmm i see
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end *no Change
00:10:115 (1) - add finish *OK
00:13:426 (1) - add finish *OK
00:46:115 (3) - add finish *OK

:arrow: Normal:
01:55:219 - put a hit here *no Change
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end *no Change

:arrow: Hard:
03:31:839 - here should be the end of the spinner. is very fast for perceived player *OK
:arrow: Insane:
00:07:221 (2,3) - 4.05x Are you sure? *Yeah!
03:12:393 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - would be so cool ^ ^ (is optional) *Followed
03:14:876 (3,4,5,6,7) - this part, the hits have to be closer to the slide, if not, it becomes difficult to understand *no Change


:arrow: Teara´s Insane:
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end

sorry if you have some errors in english ^ ^ <- *Yeah I got mistake here too =(
my english is bad, I hope it helped good at something *Don't worry we ill improve
good luck, keep so near and bubbling and after is ranked
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Edit: Sorry, double post >.<
Chloe
Hello~

As m4m req :>
And just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )


[General]
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:701 (4) - remove the fin will be better
  2. 00:13:012 (4) - ^
  3. 00:40:736 (2) - remap this?
  4. 01:52:736 (5) - ^
  5. 03:33:288 (3) - hard to hold for newbie.....
[Normal]
  1. 00:47:563 (3) - remove this one and add 00:47:770 (3) -
  2. 00:52:529 (5) - 00:52:736 (6) - add these two or a slider here and remove 00:52:943 (5) -
  3. 00:57:908 (5) - reverse for 5 times
  4. 01:10:115 (3) - reverse for 2 times
  5. 02:22:529 (1) - completely stack with the beginning of 02:23:356 (3) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:219 (8) - move to x182 y252 for better flow
  2. 00:16:012 (4) - try remove this one
  3. 00:48:598 (7) - flow was bad here :(
  4. 00:53:357 (12) - 00:53:460 (13) - 00:53:563 (14) - there should be a triplet here.. does it right?
  5. 01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's overmapped here o_o
  6. 01:26:254 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  7. 01:49:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  8. 02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  9. 03:08:150 (5) - move this one
    Since there're so many stream in it, I think the diff is NOT HARD , JUST CALLED IT INSANE or make it easier plz.
[Teara's Insane]
  1. 00:11:150 (5) - ctrl g for better flow
  2. 00:11:977 (8) - ^ It's interesting www
  3. 00:11:977 (8) - ^
  4. 00:11:977 (8) - ^
  5. 01:25:943 (6) - remove this one
  6. 01:59:253 (2) - ^
  7. 02:02:874 (1,2,3) - it's too sharp for me...
  8. 02:09:288 (1) - use ds0.13 for better flow
  9. 02:28:426 (4) - remove this one
  10. 02:50:667 (5) - add finish in the beginning of it
  11. 02:53:977 (7) - ^
  12. 03:08:150 (7) - remove this one
  13. 03:28:115 (2) - add this one
  14. 03:45:701 (2) - remove this one and replace the slider behind it
  15. 03:48:184 (6) - suggest to map like this in here:http://puu.sh/3bNbl.png
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:322 (3) - ds so high
  2. 00:07:219 (2) - ctrl g
  3. 00:37:012 (2) - use 1/2 slider?
  4. 00:41:460 (7) - use ds 1.3
  5. 01:24:081 (2) - remove this one?
  6. 01:44:253 (6) - ctrl g
  7. 01:44:460 (1) - ^
  8. 01:52:943 (2) - lol ds so high....
  9. 02:22:115 (3) - follow the rythem just like 02:21:701 (1,2) -
  10. 03:16:529 (2) - do you like to map as this:http://puu.sh/3bNcc.png
  11. 03:23:253 (3) - add this one
  12. 03:48:184 (6) - suggest to map like this in here:http://puu.sh/3bNbl.png
    Well.. I couldn't understand this mapping style, so it's hard to mod for me ;______;

Good luck to your map <3.
Snowy Dream
Nanahira ver. (´・ω ・`)
Topic Starter
- Kevin
MOD

Chloe wrote:

Hello~

As m4m req :>
And just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )


[General]
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:701 (4) - remove the fin will be better
  2. 00:13:012 (4) - ^
  3. 00:40:736 (2) - remap this?
  4. 01:52:736 (5) - ^
  5. 03:33:288 (3) - hard to hold for newbie.....
[Normal]
  1. 00:47:563 (3) - remove this one and add 00:47:770 (3) -
  2. 00:52:529 (5) - 00:52:736 (6) - add these two or a slider here and remove 00:52:943 (5) -
  3. 00:57:908 (5) - reverse for 5 times
  4. 01:10:115 (3) - reverse for 2 times
  5. 02:22:529 (1) - completely stack with the beginning of 02:23:356 (3) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:219 (8) - move to x182 y252 for better flow
  2. 00:16:012 (4) - try remove this one
  3. 00:48:598 (7) - flow was bad here :(
  4. 00:53:357 (12) - 00:53:460 (13) - 00:53:563 (14) - there should be a triplet here.. does it right?
  5. 01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's overmapped here o_o
  6. 01:26:254 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  7. 01:49:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  8. 02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  9. 03:08:150 (5) - move this one
    Since there're so many stream in it, I think the diff is NOT HARD , JUST CALLED IT INSANE or make it easier plz.

[Insane]
  1. 00:04:322 (3) - ds so high
  2. 00:07:219 (2) - ctrl g
  3. 00:37:012 (2) - use 1/2 slider?
  4. 00:41:460 (7) - use ds 1.3
  5. 01:24:081 (2) - remove this one?
  6. 01:44:253 (6) - ctrl g
  7. 01:44:460 (1) - ^
  8. 01:52:943 (2) - lol ds so high....
  9. 02:22:115 (3) - follow the rythem just like 02:21:701 (1,2) -
  10. 03:16:529 (2) - do you like to map as this:http://puu.sh/3bNcc.png
  11. 03:23:253 (3) - add this one
  12. 03:48:184 (6) - suggest to map like this in here:http://puu.sh/3bNbl.png
    Well.. I couldn't understand this mapping style, so it's hard to mod for me ;______;

Good luck to your map <3.

Thx for modding, Changed Easy, Normal and Hard, no Changes for Insane.

Gonna w8 for Teara now.

Snowy Dream wrote:

Nanahira ver. (´・ω ・`)
Nanahira Ever. (´・ω ・`)
raulmax319
Great job here you deserve a star o/

Good luck! :D
Teara
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Uploaded, Thx for stars~
Slouchy haru
hard
00:17:357
00:19:012
00:35:563
01:12:391
01:44:253
Not aligned

00:42:805
01:13:426
01:20:046
Too close
open Distance Snap
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx For modding~

Slouchy haru wrote:

hard
00:17:357
00:19:012
00:35:563
01:12:391
01:44:253
Not aligned

00:42:805
01:13:426
01:20:046
Too close
open Distance Snap
kamisamaaa
from your M4M req~
I love nanahira ! ❤
osu need more nanahira~ :)
[general]
maybe you should change to this

artist is not the singer. the artist of this song is みきとP ,you should add the nanahira in the tag
maybe use a video like this?
if you use this video youshould add りゅうせー to tag who make this video

about AR~ar9 is not suitable for 145BPM. change to ar8 is better . and hard diff ar6. normal diff ar4 . easy diff ar2. make it proper reasonable。(now your normal diff only have ar3 but hard diff is ar7!)
[insane]
00:06:184 (8) - I think change this kind of rythm to two notes and make a jump is better to the song
00:12:805 (9) - ^ and delete 00:12:701 (8) - this
00:33:081 add two note here? make the begining of vocal feel comfortable
00:39:495 (5) - maybe place it far from the prev? because here has a beat rythm
03:32:046 why dont make some special rythm from here to the end
00:09:391 why add clap here not 00:09:701 (5) - ? and clap here 00:09:805 (6,7) - is ??
00:06:184 (8) - add finish on head and tail and remove finish on 00:06:805 (1) -
00:37:426 (3,4) - miss clap because the rythm. maybe add whistle on these two slider?
01:13:012 (1,2) - add whistle on these two
01:19:632 (1,2) - ^ and all the kiai time is same
01:39:495 from here to 02:09:288, miss so many clap because the rythm , sound strange :o try to only add clap on the second whhiteline and remove all clap on the fourth whiteline?
[Teara's Insane]
00:11:770 (7,8) - really hard to play! maybe use ctrl+G on 00:11:977 (8) - and stack 00:11:770 (7) - to the end of 8
02:21:701 (4,5,6,7,8) - maybe use this?
really a good diff ! I like this !

a little tired and find nothing in hard diff..sorry for pass other diff~
hope this mod can help you :)
good map~and good luck~ star ;)
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for Modding

kamisamaaa wrote:

from your M4M req~
I love nanahira ! ❤
osu need more nanahira~ :)
[general]
maybe you should change to this

artist is not the singer. the artist of this song is みきとP ,you should add the nanahira in the tag
maybe use a video like this?
if you use this video youshould add りゅうせー to tag who make this video
Added TAGS and reuploaded video with properly encode, changed artist name
about AR~ar9 is not suitable for 145BPM. change to ar8 is better . and hard diff ar6. normal diff ar4 . easy diff ar2. make it proper reasonable。(now your normal diff only have ar3 but hard diff is ar7!) i'm fine with my AR9 insane, changed Normal to AR5
[insane]
00:06:184 (8) - I think change this kind of rythm to two notes and make a jump is better to the song no change
00:12:805 (9) - ^ and delete 00:12:701 (8) - this done
00:33:081 add two note here? make the begining of vocal feel comfortable added a stream
00:39:495 (5) - maybe place it far from the prev? because here has a beat rythm no change
03:32:046 why dont make some special rythm from here to the end Ctrl + G some notes but i keep the pattern
00:09:391 why add clap here not 00:09:701 (5) - ? and clap here 00:09:805 (6,7) - is ?? Fixed
00:06:184 (8) - add finish on head and tail and remove finish on 00:06:805 (1) - nope
00:37:426 (3,4) - miss clap because the rythm. maybe add whistle on these two slider? Ok
01:13:012 (1,2) - add whistle on these two Ok
01:19:632 (1,2) - ^ and all the kiai time is same Ok
01:39:495 from here to 02:09:288, miss so many clap because the rythm , sound strange :o try to only add clap on the second whhiteline and remove all clap on the fourth whiteline? Add a new Rythm

a little tired and find nothing in hard diff..sorry for pass other diff~
hope this mod can help you :)
good map~and good luck~ star ;) Thx~ i gave a star for your map too, mutual help for a Osu! with more Nanahira
Teara

kamisamaaa wrote:

[Teara's Insane]
00:11:770 (7,8) - really hard to play! maybe use ctrl+G on 00:11:977 (8) - and stack 00:11:770 (7) - to the end of 8
02:21:701 (4,5,6,7,8) - maybe use this?
really a good diff ! I like this !
Thanks for the mod! I think its fine as it is now :)
kamisamaaa

- Kevin wrote:

Thx~ i gave a star for your map too, mutual help for a Osu! with more Nanahira
~I have add you as friend~maybe we can make more nanahira's map togather~ ;)
forget to say~add Teara to tag ;)
P A N
hi, m4m from my queue.
NC = New combo

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:977 (4) remove note seems better since you do like this on 00:11:770 (3,4) too.
  2. 00:11:770 (3,4) I recommend to remove (4) and add repeat to (3). end at blue tick and start with red tick is too hard for normal imo.
  3. 00:41:563 (4) / 00:43:219 (10) - add NC
  4. the rhythm between 00:43:839 (11,1) is too empty. maybe add note on 00:44:460
  5. 00:52:736 - add note would be great.
  6. 00:53:150 (5,1) - swap NC? and add finish on 00:53:150
  7. 00:57:908 (5,1) - too empty too. maybe add something at 00:58:529 / 00:58:943 / 00:59:357 it will easier to catch the beat too.
  8. 01:05:563 / 01:05:977 - add something, too empty for me.
  9. 01:08:874 / 01:09:288 - ^
  10. remove 01:54:805 (3) or add note on 01:55:219
  11. 02:08:046 - same reason as 00:57:908
  12. 02:18:391 - add note, there have a vocals sound.
  13. 02:33:287 (2) - remove NC
  14. 02:35:770 (2) - NC
  15. 02:52:322 (1,2,3) - not balance spacing, please check.
[Hard]
  1. make circle size smaller 1 tick and ar-1 hpdrain+1
  2. 00:17:978 (6,7) - now are 1 circle and 1 slider, change to slider then circle, I mean this for add NC on 00:18:391 or maybe it can NC instantly on 00:18:184 (7) im not sure about this one.
  3. 00:32:874 (1) - remove better imo, let it start on 00:33:288 (2) is better fit with vocals.
  4. 00:36:391 (5) - spread it into 2 circle and NC on second circle.
  5. 00:38:046 (11,1) - swap NC
  6. 00:53:150 (1) - add finish on head.
  7. 01:41:770 (3,5) - add clap.
  8. 03:11:358 (3) - overlap.
  9. 03:27:496 (2) - remove NC
    well, you have a problem of NC because some part that big white tick should be NC but your big white tick is a tail of slider so.. here is example 00:36:391 (5)
anyway good luck :)
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for modding.

MOD

P A N wrote:

hi, m4m from my queue.
NC = New combo

[Normal]
  1. 00:05:977 (4) remove note seems better since you do like this on 00:11:770 (3,4) too. Ok
  2. 00:11:770 (3,4) I recommend to remove (4) and add repeat to (3). end at blue tick and start with red tick is too hard for normal imo. I'm fine with it since I already dictated the pace in the previous combo
  3. 00:41:563 (4) / 00:43:219 (10) - add NC Ok both
  4. the rhythm between 00:43:839 (11,1) is too empty. maybe add note on 00:44:460 No change
  5. 00:52:736 - add note would be great. Ok
  6. 00:53:150 (5,1) - swap NC? and add finish on 00:53:150 Ok
  7. 00:57:908 (5,1) - too empty too. maybe add something at 00:58:529 / 00:58:943 / 00:59:357 it will easier to catch the beat too. No change
  8. 01:05:563 / 01:05:977 - add something, too empty for me. No change
  9. 01:08:874 / 01:09:288 - ^ No change
  10. remove 01:54:805 (3) or add note on 01:55:219 Removed
  11. 02:08:046 - same reason as 00:57:908 No change
  12. 02:18:391 - add note, there have a vocals sound. No change
  13. 02:33:287 (2) - remove NC Ok
  14. 02:35:770 (2) - NC Ok
  15. 02:52:322 (1,2,3) - not balance spacing, please check. Thx~
[Hard]
  1. make circle size smaller 1 tick and ar-1 hpdrain+1 +1 HP Drain -1 AR
  2. 00:17:978 (6,7) - now are 1 circle and 1 slider, change to slider then circle, I mean this for add NC on 00:18:391 or maybe it can NC instantly on 00:18:184 (7) im not sure about this one. Slider then circle OK!
  3. 00:32:874 (1) - remove better imo, let it start on 00:33:288 (2) is better fit with vocals. Ok
  4. 00:36:391 (5) - spread it into 2 circle and NC on second circle. Ok
  5. 00:38:046 (11,1) - swap NC Ok
  6. 00:53:150 (1) - add finish on head. Ok
  7. 01:41:770 (3,5) - add clap. Ok
  8. 03:11:358 (3) - overlap. Ok
  9. 03:27:496 (2) - remove NC Ok
    well, you have a problem of NC because some part that big white tick should be NC but your big white tick is a tail of slider so.. here is example 00:36:391 (5) :(
anyway good luck :)
Alarido
Olá!!!!

M4M From Queue



[General]

* Primeiramente, olhando no geral, as posições de algumas notas com relação a outras... sei lá, não me sinto muito bem, mas talvez seja alguma coisa comigo. Nestes últimos dias tou meio que deixando o osu de lado, tou quase que desistindo do negócio... sei lá... Lembro que a BounceBabe estava assim há alguns meses e agora acho que eu a entendo. Um misto de monotonia com alguma coisa de os outros te deixarem em segundo, terceiro plano (me refiro a alguns Guest Differs e, falando nisso, tou pensando seriamente em remover o Anre's easy para um link à parte e ficar só com Normal/Hard). Aplicarei teus mods nas minhas diffs, mas não mexerei na diff dele (até porque é dele). Se em trinta dias o AnreFM não vier (e pelo menos) aplicar os mods no easy diff (que é dele), eu irei tirar o Easy Diff e o porei no link do Mediafire (e no Creator Words) e vou seguir em frente, sozinho.

* Pra falar a verdade, não me sinto bem hoje. Contudo, não o quero deixar esperando. Por isso, não espere Nazi mods de mim esta vez. Focarei nos ritmos, Unrankable stuff e em coisas que me gritarem por atenção (como em alguns SV changes no Normal que me parecem não muito boas). De início, os nomes das dificuldades estão 100% OK (como peppynazi andou comentando um dia desses).

[Easy]

00:46:115 (3,1,2) - Um ritmo meio off (não completamente, mas em parte, sim). Uma sugestão: deletar 00:47:770 (2) - e colocar 00:46:115 (3,1) - para começar em 00:46:529, e depois adicionar uma nota em 00:49:426. Ficaria assim →

00:55:632 (4,1) - Ficaria melhor tirando o repeat do slider, deletando a nota e substituindo-a por um slider 1/1 mais cedo. Não esqueça de adicionar NC ao segundo slider (que vai começar no Big White Tick). Assim

01:48:184 (4,1) - Devido ao AR, estes dois estão um sobre o outro. Fosse num Insane ou mesmo Hard não teria problema, pois o AR alto não deixaria os dois aparecer ao mesmo tempo (talvez um pouquinho só), assim como o CS seria menor. O que não acontece aqui no Easy. Poderia curvar o (4) assim como fez com o 01:49:426 (1) - ou apenas movê-lo para algum lugar de forma a não quebrar o spacing e desfazer o overlap.

02:27:495 (3,1) - Aqui (e em 03:28:736 (3,1) e mais outros lugares), o spacing deixa muito a desejar. O que pode ser um teste um tanto difícil para quem está apenas começando a jogar. Os mais experientes passarão isto com destreza ─ Brainslugs que o diga. Porém, muitos não verão com bons olhos o uso de peppyspacing (vide o mapa de Chatmonchy que o próprio peppy fez, lá dos idos de 2007).

:!: 03:33:288 (3) - Tenho certeza que algum BAT vai ranhetar com isso, embora não seja um causo pra tanto.

[Normal]

00:49:012 (6) - Como mencionei acima (na seção General falei justamente desta parte), isto pode ser uma armadilha para muitos. De fato, a colocação de um redutor de velocidade aqui obriga o DS a mudar conforme a nova velocidade (mais lenta), o que deixa o spacing inconsistente com relação aos objetos vizinhos. A música não me parece sugerir algum efeito do tipo neste ponto. Também os sliders 1/1 não possuem Slider Ticks, o que poderia facilitar um pouco (aos medianos) saber que o SV muda aqui. Seria bom se este slider corresse na mesma velocidade, como o próximo slider faz.
Relembrando que SV changes dentro de padrões não são más. Apenas não são adequadas para Easy, Normal, Beginner etc (as diffs desenhadas para serem mais fáceis).

♥ 00:59:770 - A mudança de SV aqui (e também em 02:09:288 - e em 02:35:770 - ) está correta, pois reflete realmente o que a música passa pra gente em termos de andamento.

01:10:115 (3,1) - Uma posição meio canhestra (eu diria incomum) para esse (1). O flow é bom, mas peguei 100 aqui. E também o spacing do (3) com o (1) é menor com relação ao spacing de 01:10:942 (1,2,3). O 01:10:942 (1) - ficaria melhor em x:480 y:208 por isso.

01:23:770 (1) - Niemeyer Slider (lembra um trecho da Av. Niemeyer no Rio de Janeiro). Talvez queira colocar um arco ou uma forma diferente. Ou deixar assim (e ver o que os próximos irão dizer).

[Hard]

00:04:115 (3,4,5) - O flow aqui não me parece muito bom >< mas pode ser apenas uma preferência minha, nada demais.

[Teara's Insane]

♥ A Perfect Insane Diff!

[Insane]

♥ Um Insane Perfeito!

That's all (:

Espero não ter sido inútil, embora seja assim que eu me sinta.
Uma estrela pela perfeição dos Insanes e do Hard.
E muito obrigado :D

Att.
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for modding ~

MOD

Alarido wrote:

Olá!!!!

[General]

* Primeiramente, olhando no geral, as posições de algumas notas com relação a outras... sei lá, não me sinto muito bem, mas talvez seja alguma coisa comigo. Nestes últimos dias tou meio que deixando o osu de lado, tou quase que desistindo do negócio... sei lá... Lembro que a BounceBabe estava assim há alguns meses e agora acho que eu a entendo. Um misto de monotonia com alguma coisa de os outros te deixarem em segundo, terceiro plano (me refiro a alguns Guest Differs e, falando nisso, tou pensando seriamente em remover o Anre's easy para um link à parte e ficar só com Normal/Hard). Aplicarei teus mods nas minhas diffs, mas não mexerei na diff dele (até porque é dele). Se em trinta dias o AnreFM não vier (e pelo menos) aplicar os mods no easy diff (que é dele), eu irei tirar o Easy Diff e o porei no link do Mediafire (e no Creator Words) e vou seguir em frente, sozinho. Eu também não me sinto confortável com guest diff, mas até o momento Teara está sendo pontual e me ajudou muito.

* Pra falar a verdade, não me sinto bem hoje. Contudo, não o quero deixar esperando. Por isso, não espere Nazi mods de mim esta vez. Focarei nos ritmos, Unrankable stuff e em coisas que me gritarem por atenção (como em alguns SV changes no Normal que me parecem não muito boas). De início, os nomes das dificuldades estão 100% OK (como peppynazi andou comentando um dia desses). Nada cara levanta essa moral ai :) agradeço sua preocupação em me dar este MOD sem demora mas eu tbm não me importaria de esperar um pouco tendo em vista sua user page eu já estava ciente da sua desmotivação...

[Easy]

00:46:115 (3,1,2) - Um ritmo meio off (não completamente, mas em parte, sim). Uma sugestão: deletar 00:47:770 (2) - e colocar 00:46:115 (3,1) - para começar em 00:46:529, e depois adicionar uma nota em 00:49:426. Ficaria assim →

Tentei fazer desta forma mas não me senti confortável perdendo o hit finish da musica

00:55:632 (4,1) - Ficaria melhor tirando o repeat do slider, deletando a nota e substituindo-a por um slider 1/1 mais cedo. Não esqueça de adicionar NC ao segundo slider (que vai começar no Big White Tick). Assim

Segui sua dica obrigado!

01:48:184 (4,1) - Devido ao AR, estes dois estão um sobre o outro. Fosse num Insane ou mesmo Hard não teria problema, pois o AR alto não deixaria os dois aparecer ao mesmo tempo (talvez um pouquinho só), assim como o CS seria menor. O que não acontece aqui no Easy. Poderia curvar o (4) assim como fez com o 01:49:426 (1) - ou apenas movê-lo para algum lugar de forma a não quebrar o spacing e desfazer o overlap. Ok

02:27:495 (3,1) - Aqui (e em 03:28:736 (3,1) e mais outros lugares), o spacing deixa muito a desejar. O que pode ser um teste um tanto difícil para quem está apenas começando a jogar. Os mais experientes passarão isto com destreza ─ Brainslugs que o diga. Porém, muitos não verão com bons olhos o uso de peppyspacing (vide o mapa de Chatmonchy que o próprio peppy fez, lá dos idos de 2007). Ok

:!: 03:33:288 (3) - Tenho certeza que algum BAT vai ranhetar com isso, embora não seja um causo pra tanto. Vou deixar assim até um BAT me obrigar a mudar

[Normal]

00:49:012 (6) - Como mencionei acima (na seção General falei justamente desta parte), isto pode ser uma armadilha para muitos. De fato, a colocação de um redutor de velocidade aqui obriga o DS a mudar conforme a nova velocidade (mais lenta), o que deixa o spacing inconsistente com relação aos objetos vizinhos. A música não me parece sugerir algum efeito do tipo neste ponto. Também os sliders 1/1 não possuem Slider Ticks, o que poderia facilitar um pouco (aos medianos) saber que o SV muda aqui. Seria bom se este slider corresse na mesma velocidade, como o próximo slider faz.
Relembrando que SV changes dentro de padrões não são más. Apenas não são adequadas para Easy, Normal, Beginner etc (as diffs desenhadas para serem mais fáceis). Lembro que esta SV eu coloquei porque meu slider não chegava na posição que eu queria numa versão mais antiga do map, agora consegui fazer sem ele obrigado por me alertar.

♥ 00:59:770 - A mudança de SV aqui (e também em 02:09:288 - e em 02:35:770 - ) está correta, pois reflete realmente o que a música passa pra gente em termos de andamento.

01:10:115 (3,1) - Uma posição meio canhestra (eu diria incomum) para esse (1). O flow é bom, mas peguei 100 aqui. E também o spacing do (3) com o (1) é menor com relação ao spacing de 01:10:942 (1,2,3). O 01:10:942 (1) - ficaria melhor em x:480 y:208 por isso. Arrumei da minha forma

01:23:770 (1) - Niemeyer Slider (lembra um trecho da Av. Niemeyer no Rio de Janeiro). Talvez queira colocar um arco ou uma forma diferente. Ou deixar assim (e ver o que os próximos irão dizer).Sem mudança

[Hard]

00:04:115 (3,4,5) - O flow aqui não me parece muito bom >< mas pode ser apenas uma preferência minha, nada demais. Tentei aplicar uns jumps de leve aqui

[Teara's Insane]

♥ A Perfect Insane Diff!

[Insane]

♥ Um Insane Perfeito!

That's all (:

Espero não ter sido inútil, embora seja assim que eu me sinta.
Uma estrela pela perfeição dos Insanes e do Hard.
E muito obrigado :D

Att.
Kuron-kun
Olá, moddando por request via PM

General
• Stack Leniency 5 ou 4 são mais bonitas para stacks
• Marque Widescreen Support
• Que tal deixar o ultimo kiai até 03:52:115 - ?
~~

Easy

00:36:598 (1) - Esse slider, que tal deixar assim? http://puu.sh/63Tuz.png

01:11:357 (3) - What

01:14:667 (4) - Esse slider acho que fica mais bonito assim http://puu.sh/63TFd.png

02:09:288 (1) - Move pra x396 y76

02:13:839 (4) - Deixa assim pra ficar mais bonitinho :3 http://puu.sh/63TMK.png

~~ como modda easy?

Normal

02:00:185 (2) - Que tal deixar o slider assim? http://puu.sh/63V8E.png

~~ como modda normal?

Hard

00:05:563 (8,9) - Essa pattern ficou um pouco estranha, deixa ela assim http://puu.sh/63VwW.png

00:15:288 (5) - Move pra x256 y72

00:16:115 (7) - Move pra x384 y240

00:58:529 (1) - Ficaria mais bonitinho assim? :D http://puu.sh/63VSC.png

00:59:770 (4) - Move pra x420 y32

00:59:977 (1) - Pra x488 y92

01:01:839 (3) - Move pra x28 y312

02:08:046 (1) - Que tal mover pra x424 y40 e deixar o slider assim http://puu.sh/63Wau.png

03:23:358 (1,2) - Essa pattern é dificil de ler pois no kiai não tem muita nota assim e parece stream

~~

Teara's Insane

00:39:908 (8) - Move to x279 y49 to stack correctly

02:06:805 (5) - Move to x103 y281

03:30:391 (1) - End the spinner at 03:31:839 -

~~

Insane

De longe a melhor diff, não achei defeito nenhum.

boa sorte rankeando

~~
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for modding Kuron-kyun *w*

MOD

Kuron-Kun wrote:

Olá, moddando por request via PM

General
• Stack Leniency 5 ou 4 são mais bonitas para stacks Ok
• Marque Widescreen Support Ok
• Que tal deixar o ultimo kiai até 03:52:115 - ? Prefiro do jeito que está
~~

Easy

00:36:598 (1) - Esse slider, que tal deixar assim? http://puu.sh/63Tuz.png Que bonitinho *w*

01:11:357 (3) - What que slider feio...

01:14:667 (4) - Esse slider acho que fica mais bonito assim http://puu.sh/63TFd.png Ok

02:09:288 (1) - Move pra x396 y76 Ok

02:13:839 (4) - Deixa assim pra ficar mais bonitinho :3 http://puu.sh/63TMK.png Ok

~~ como modda easy?

Normal

02:00:185 (2) - Que tal deixar o slider assim? http://puu.sh/63V8E.png Ok

~~ como modda normal?

Hard

00:05:563 (8,9) - Essa pattern ficou um pouco estranha, deixa ela assim http://puu.sh/63VwW.png Ok

00:15:288 (5) - Move pra x256 y72 Ok

00:16:115 (7) - Move pra x384 y240 Ok

00:58:529 (1) - Ficaria mais bonitinho assim? :D http://puu.sh/63VSC.png nope

00:59:770 (4) - Move pra x420 y32 Ok

00:59:977 (1) - Pra x488 y92 Ok

01:01:839 (3) - Move pra x28 y312 Ok

02:08:046 (1) - Que tal mover pra x424 y40 e deixar o slider assim http://puu.sh/63Wau.png Sem mudança

03:23:358 (1,2) - Essa pattern é dificil de ler pois no kiai não tem muita nota assim e parece stream Sem mudança

~~

Insane

De longe a melhor diff, não achei defeito nenhum.

boa sorte rankeando

~~
Teara
All done, Thanks!

http://puu.sh/64C0k.zip
BigWilly
[Easy]
Dat Video tho

00:07:219 (1) - Make slider look neater
00:13:426 (1) - ^
00:36:598 (1) - Slider 'bump' is not in the middle
00:42:391 (4) - Slightly Missplaced
00:53:150 (1) - The Direction Change need to be moved forward Slightly
01:11:357 (3) - Slider looks weird
01:49:426 (1) - Does there really need to be a new combo ?
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for modding~
EDIT 1: will update later, can't do it now
EDIT 2: Updated
MOD

Feverie wrote:

[Easy]
Dat Video tho

00:07:219 (1) - Make slider look neater No change
00:13:426 (1) - ^ No change
00:36:598 (1) - Slider 'bump' is not in the middle Ok
00:42:391 (4) - Slightly Missplaced Whut?
00:53:150 (1) - The Direction Change need to be moved forward Slightly New slider shape
01:11:357 (3) - Slider looks weird Don't make him cry ;w; / changed
01:49:426 (1) - Does there really need to be a new combo ? Missed, Thx!
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