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Nanahira - 1, 2 Fan Club

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- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 14 de junho de 2014 at 13:14:33

Artist: Nanahira
Title: 1, 2 Fan Club
Tags: MikitoP Loli vocal Teara りゅうせー Nico Nico Douga megpoid gumi kagamine rin
BPM: 145
Filesize: 21196kb
Play Time: 03:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,56 stars, 257 notes)
  2. Hard (3,19 stars, 538 notes)
  3. Insane (4,07 stars, 693 notes)
  4. Normal (1,96 stars, 304 notes)
  5. Teara's Insane (3,75 stars, 613 notes)
Download: Nanahira - 1, 2 Fan Club
Download: Nanahira - 1, 2 Fan Club (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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;) Hai hai China ♪.
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Easy - by me
Normal - by me
Hard - by me
Teara's Insane - by Teara
Insane - by me

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Last edited by - Kevin , edited 90 times in total.
pandaikon
102 posts
Joined February 2011
pandaikon
from #modreqs

my mod consists mostly of suggestions

[General]
- remove the tags, they appear in the name,artist and source.

-lots of unsnapped inheriting sections. please fix that

- You might want to make an easy diff for this. Even though you have a normal that's below 3.5 diff stars, it can prove to be too hard for new players, so you should consider making the normal a bit easier or just map an easy.

[Normal]
by god, so many notes placed on the blue ticks. in some of the cases there isn't even a beat on the tick, so please avoid placing notes on blue ticks in diffs like easy or normal

00:04:300 (2,4,2) - this is really clustered. try changing the pattern a bit so it will be easier to read for the newer players. you can either find a new place for 00:06:162 (4) - or change the position of these two sliders: 00:04:300 (2,3)
00:12:783 (5,6) - a small thing. try to avoid stacking notes in diffs like easy or normal, it can prove sometimes really hard to read for newer players. you can unstack these two if you want
00:14:231 (1,1,1) - first of all, think about removing the new combo from these notes. now, the pattern here is almost the same as 00:03:473 (1,2,3,4) . think about changing it to make your map less repetitive.
00:34:093 (2) - don't end sliders on blue ticks, especially in a normal. make it end at 00:34:507 - there is a beat you can follow.
00:35:335 - add a note here or just add one more reverse to the 00:34:714 (3) . it feels like there is a gap in the rhythm without a note there.
Starting from 00:33:266 - and ending up at 00:44:024 - you placed almost all your notes in the bottom right corner of the screen. try spreading the notes in this part on the entire screen, it will play better and maintain a nicer flow.
00:42:576 (6,7,8) - i'm not sure about three stacked notes in a normal. consider unstacking them
00:44:231 - 00:44:852 - what's up with this gap left unmapped? i can see you intended to do a little pause there, but this pause should start on 00:44:852
00:48:576 - same here, add a note
00:50:645 (2,3,4) - now this is fun, as it will be very hard to read for normal players. please remove 00:50:955 (3) - from the blue tick and place it at 00:51:059. if you really don't want to, make a slider that has it's reverse at 00:50:955 . remember, usually a note on a blue tick in normal/easy is a pretty bad idea.
00:51:576 (5) - fix the slider. move it on the white tick at 00:51:473
00:53:335 (1) - end this at 00:53:955
00:54:266 (2) - not sure how i feel about this slider, maybe move it at 00:54:369 ?. i'd recommend you to follow the instrumentals hrer rather than the voice, it'll be easier to play.
00:56:438 (6,7,8,9,10) - try making this into a slider of some sort to make it easier to play.
00:57:473 - 00:57:886 - this again. map this too.
01:00:576 - think about either making 00:59:748 (1) - end here or adding a note here, it'll sound really cool that way.
01:01:817 - same as above
01:09:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ok now, change this. it's too hard for a normal. especially 01:10:093 (3,4) - streams in normals are, for the most part, a no-no, so move 01:10:197 (4) - at 01:10:300 - . also 01:10:404 (5,6,1) - move these notes 1 tick to the right.
01:11:231 (2) - the slider should start at 01:11:335
01:15:473 (5,6,7) - again, try to unstack the notes
01:17:128 (2) - the slider should end at 01:17:541
01:21:990 (5) - start at 01:22:093
01:29:541 - i guess it's a good idea to make the break start here, and map the part of the song before that.
01:44:438 (1) - end it at 01:44:852
01:48:679 (5) - start at 01:48:576
01:49:403 (1) - think about ending this slider at01:49:817
01:52:093 (6,7,8) - unstack
01:53:748 - 01:54:162 - map this part
01:57:058 (3) - move the note on 01:57:266
01:58:093 - add a note
02:00:472 (3) - move it at 02:00:576 - or make a reverse slider as before.
02:01:093 (5) - move this at 02:00:990
so i figured out that you just copy-pasted the notes here from the first part of the map (that's, by the way, not such a good idea, i have to say), so i'll tell you to do some backtracking in my mod and fix again most of the issues that arised.
02:22:403 (1,2) - what's up with the notes here? move them 1 tick to the right.
02:35:748 (2) - this should end at 02:36:162
02:36:679 (3) - start at 02:36:576
02:42:266 (3) - start at 02:42:369
02:43:922 (3) - start at 02:43:921
02:44:852 (1) - end at 02:45:266
02:47:335 (4) - end at 02:48:162
02:49:817 (2) - end at 02:50:226
02:57:266 (6) - end at 02:57:886
03:06:369 (2) - it should end at 03:06:783 - fix this in every hiatus.
03:11:231 (5) - start at 03:11:335
03:24:473 (5) - start at 03:24:576
03:26:231 (1) - end at 03:27:473

also, map the part of the song until 03:32:024

most likely i missed some of the sliders/notes placed on blue ticks. i strongly recommend you to run the map in the editor once and search and fix such notes, ok? this will make the map a lot easier and better to play.

also (take 2), i must say that it's not that of a good idea to keep copy-pasting patterns. try making new, unique patterns for every hiatus/part.

[Hard]
the map is very nice rhythm-wise, but needs a bit of aesthetic fixes. i pointed out most of the clustered zones, spread the notes there and it will turn out to be a very nice map :D

00:09:886 (5,3) - stack them so they'll look nicer
00:11:748 (5,6) - make them either sliders that end at 00:11:955 - and 00:12:369 - or add a reverse to each of them. there is no sound at the blue tick where they end, so it sounds strange.
00:13:300 (8) - move this at 00:13:197 - there is no sound at the blue tick
00:18:369 - here you can either add a note or make 00:18:162 (1) - reversed to map the sound
00:19:404 (6,7) - stack them, it'll look better imo
00:53:439 (2) - this sudden turn breaks up the flow a bit, maybe you could change the pattern so it will be easier to read and play?
00:58:508 (1) - change this into something like below:

01:11:336 (3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - man this is really, really clustered. clear this up a bit
01:17:542 (4,1,2) - same as above
01:22:405 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - clustered, it would look better if they were spread a bit imo. you can even place some jumps there, why not
02:08:025 (1) - same as 00:58:508 (1)
02:22:508 (1,3) - not perfectly stacked. move 02:23:335 (3) - at x:196 y:264
02:36:577 (3,6) - you can stack this for a prettier pattern
02:46:922 (4) - end this at 02:47:128 ?
02:58:508 (8) - you can follow the example above, or make this a reversed slider
03:15:059 - add here a stream or a reversed slider that will end at 03:15:369
03:15:474 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - clear up a bit the cluster here. also, regarding the new combo spam, i'm sure somebody will point it out sooner or later, but i'm okay with it, it's not that much of a deal :)
03:21:267 (1,2,3,1) - think about stacking this, or moving 03:21:680 (1) - away so it won't overlap
03:30:370 (1) - end this at 03:32:024

[Insane]
00:05:956 (7,8) - this breaks the flow a bit. try changing the direction of the pattern
00:11:749 (5) - end this at 00:11:955 . you can alternatively make this into a reverse slider.
00:12:163 (6) - same as above
00:42:370 (5,6) - this jump is pretty sudden and huge. maybe you can think about changing the pattern here a bit
00:58:508 (1) - same as in hard
02:08:025 (1) - same as above
02:46:922 (4) - end this at 02:47:128
02:58:508 (8) - either end this at 02:58:714 or make it a reverse slider
03:15:059 - same as hard, think about adding a stream here until 03:15:369
03:17:541 - missed a note here
03:32:059 - starting here, you mapped the end of the song, while you did not in normal and easy. if you decide to keep what you mapped in the insane, you have to map the ends of both normal and hard too. if not, just delete the end part.


i'll continue this mod tomorrow~
done. hope i helped with something~
nice map, but there is space for aesthetic improvements in it. rhythm-wise it's pretty ok imo.
good luck!
Last edited by pandaikon , edited 1 time in total.
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx pandaikon i'm really glad about your modding

pandaikon wrote:

from #modreqs


SPOILER
[General]
- remove the tags, they appear in the name,artist and source - Ok.

SPOILER
[Normal]
by god, so many notes placed on the blue ticks. in some of the cases there isn't even a beat on the tick, so please avoid placing notes on blue ticks in diffs like easy or normal

00:04:300 (2,4,2) - this is really clustered. try changing the pattern a bit so it will be easier to read for the newer players. you can either find a new place for 00:06:162 (4) - or change the position of these two sliders: 00:04:300 (2,3) I did some adjustments here Hope it's ok now.
00:12:783 (5,6) - a small thing. try to avoid stacking notes in diffs like easy or normal, it can prove sometimes really hard to read for newer players. you can unstack these two if you want Unstaked
00:14:231 (1,1,1) - first of all, think about removing the new combo from these notes. now, the pattern here is almost the same as 00:03:473 (1,2,3,4) . think about changing it to make your map less repetitive. Ok
00:34:093 (2) - don't end sliders on blue ticks, especially in a normal. make it end at 00:34:507 - there is a beat you can follow. All Blue Ticks Fixed
00:35:335 - add a note here or just add one more reverse to the 00:34:714 (3) . it feels like there is a gap in the rhythm without a note there. Ok
Starting from 00:33:266 - and ending up at 00:44:024 - you placed almost all your notes in the bottom right corner of the screen. try spreading the notes in this part on the entire screen, it will play better and maintain a nicer flow. Spread
00:42:576 (6,7,8) - i'm not sure about three stacked notes in a normal. consider unstacking them Ok
00:44:231 - 00:44:852 - what's up with this gap left unmapped? i can see you intended to do a little pause there, but this pause should start on 00:44:852
00:48:576 - same here, add a note Mapped Hope it's Ok
00:50:645 (2,3,4) - now this is fun, as it will be very hard to read for normal players. please remove 00:50:955 (3) - from the blue tick and place it at 00:51:059. if you really don't want to, make a slider that has it's reverse at 00:50:955 . remember, usually a note on a blue tick in normal/easy is a pretty bad idea. Gonna keep it on my mind
00:51:576 (5) - fix the slider. move it on the white tick at 00:51:473 Ok
00:53:335 (1) - end this at 00:53:955 Ok
00:54:266 (2) - not sure how i feel about this slider, maybe move it at 00:54:369 ?. i'd recommend you to follow the instrumentals hrer rather than the voice, it'll be easier to play. Ok
00:56:438 (6,7,8,9,10) - try making this into a slider of some sort to make it easier to play. Ok
00:57:473 - 00:57:886 - this again. map this too. Mapped
01:00:576 - think about either making 00:59:748 (1) - end here or adding a note here, it'll sound really cool that way.
01:01:817 - same as above Did Both
01:09:679 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ok now, change this. it's too hard for a normal. especially 01:10:093 (3,4) - streams in normals are, for the most part, a no-no, so move 01:10:197 (4) - at 01:10:300 - . also 01:10:404 (5,6,1) - move these notes 1 tick to the right. Changer a Little But seem hard
01:11:231 (2) - the slider should start at 01:11:335 ok
01:15:473 (5,6,7) - again, try to unstack the notes All unstaked
01:17:128 (2) - the slider should end at 01:17:541 Ok
01:21:990 (5) - start at 01:22:093 Ok
01:29:541 - i guess it's a good idea to make the break start here, and map the part of the song before that. Mapped
01:44:438 (1) - end it at 01:44:852 Ok
01:48:679 (5) - start at 01:48:576 Ok
01:49:403 (1) - think about ending this slider at01:49:817 Ok
01:52:093 (6,7,8) - unstack Ok
01:53:748 - 01:54:162 - map this part Mapped
01:57:058 (3) - move the note on 01:57:266 Ok
01:58:093 - add a note Did a reverse once more
02:00:472 (3) - move it at 02:00:576 - or make a reverse slider as before. Ok
02:01:093 (5) - move this at 02:00:990 Ok
so i figured out that you just copy-pasted the notes here from the first part of the map (that's, by the way, not such a good idea, i have to say), so i'll tell you to do some backtracking in my mod and fix again most of the issues that arised. i will try to be slightly less lazy
02:22:403 (1,2) - what's up with the notes here? move them 1 tick to the right. Fixed
02:35:748 (2) - this should end at 02:36:162 Ok
02:36:679 (3) - start at 02:36:576 Ok
02:42:266 (3) - start at 02:42:369 Ok
02:43:922 (3) - start at 02:43:921 Ok
02:44:852 (1) - end at 02:45:266 Ok
02:47:335 (4) - end at 02:48:162 Ok
02:49:817 (2) - end at 02:50:226 Ok
02:57:266 (6) - end at 02:57:886 Ok
03:06:369 (2) - it should end at 03:06:783 - fix this in every hiatus. I think i did all
03:11:231 (5) - start at 03:11:335 Ok
03:24:473 (5) - start at 03:24:576 Ok
03:26:231 (1) - end at 03:27:473 Ok

also, map the part of the song until 03:32:024

most likely i missed some of the sliders/notes placed on blue ticks. i strongly recommend you to run the map in the editor once and search and fix such notes, ok? this will make the map a lot easier and better to play. Double Checked

also (take 2), i must say that it's not that of a good idea to keep copy-pasting patterns. try making new, unique patterns for every hiatus/part. Aye Sir

SPOILER
[Hard] I had Changed all Hard mode before your mod then on some cases i couldn't change
the map is very nice rhythm-wise, but needs a bit of aesthetic fixes. i pointed out most of the clustered zones, spread the notes there and it will turn out to be a very nice map :D

00:09:886 (5,3) - stack them so they'll look nicer
00:11:748 (5,6) - make them either sliders that end at 00:11:955 - and 00:12:369 - or add a reverse to each of them. there is no sound at the blue tick where they end, so it sounds strange. Ok
00:13:300 (8) - move this at 00:13:197 - there is no sound at the blue tick Ok
00:18:369 - here you can either add a note or make 00:18:162 (1) - reversed to map the sound Added a note
00:19:404 (6,7) - stack them, it'll look better imo
00:53:439 (2) - this sudden turn breaks up the flow a bit, maybe you could change the pattern so it will be easier to read and play?
00:58:508 (1) - change this into something like below:

Thx i did it
01:11:336 (3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - man this is really, really clustered. clear this up a bit
01:17:542 (4,1,2) - same as above
01:22:405 (4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - clustered, it would look better if they were spread a bit imo. you can even place some jumps there, why not
02:08:025 (1) - same as 00:58:508 (1) Ok
02:22:508 (1,3) - not perfectly stacked. move 02:23:335 (3) - at x:196 y:264
02:36:577 (3,6) - you can stack this for a prettier pattern
02:46:922 (4) - end this at 02:47:128 ? Ok
02:58:508 (8) - you can follow the example above, or make this a reversed slider Followed
03:15:059 - add here a stream or a reversed slider that will end at 03:15:369 Added a reverse slider
03:15:474 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - clear up a bit the cluster here. also, regarding the new combo spam, i'm sure somebody will point it out sooner or later, but i'm okay with it, it's not that much of a deal :)
03:21:267 (1,2,3,1) - think about stacking this, or moving 03:21:680 (1) - away so it won't overlap
03:30:370 (1) - end this at 03:32:024 Ok

SPOILER
[Insane]
00:05:956 (7,8) - this breaks the flow a bit. try changing the direction of the pattern Moved some notes
00:11:749 (5) - end this at 00:11:955 . you can alternatively make this into a reverse slider. Ok
00:12:163 (6) - same as above Ok
00:42:370 (5,6) - this jump is pretty sudden and huge. maybe you can think about changing the pattern here a bit Didn't Change
00:58:508 (1) - same as in hard Ok
02:08:025 (1) - same as above Ok
02:46:922 (4) - end this at 02:47:128 Ok
02:58:508 (8) - either end this at 02:58:714 or make it a reverse slider Ok
03:15:059 - same as hard, think about adding a stream here until 03:15:369 Streamed
03:17:541 - missed a note here I was sure i had that note here, did i miss clicked and deleted? Thx~
03:32:059 - starting here, you mapped the end of the song, while you did not in normal and easy. if you decide to keep what you mapped in the insane, you have to map the ends of both normal and hard too. if not, just delete the end part. Easy, Normal and Hard Mapped
mathi747
59 posts
Joined September 2010
mathi747
Hi~ Kevinelson,
Saw this in mode request
Nanahira♥
First i would like to say that im new at modding so take most as suggestions :)

General
I think they are Rin and Gumi in the background picture add Gumi and Rin to the tags
There are timing points unsnapped still please fix them
Try to avoid copy pasting its boring

Easy
Here are some usless timing points please remove them or make use of them
00:16:610 - 00:48:990 - 00:49:817 - 02:19:197 - 03:00:473 - 03:00:473 -

00:56:852 (5) - this slider doesnt seem to follow anything
01:23:748 (1) - end it 01:24:990 -
If you followed ^ 01:25:404 - add a slider here and delte 01:25:817 (2) - (keep the finish)
Would look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644454
Try to make patters more beatiful for example here 01:27:059 (1,2,3,4) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644456
01:51:473 (3) - delte this and add circlles here 01:51:473 - and here 01:51:886 -
02:06:369 (5) - this looks weird
02:23:748 (4,5) - those notes overlaps with the hp bar
02:29:955 (3) - make this slider end 02:30:369 - and add a circle here 02:30:783 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644467
02:54:369 - maybe add circle
02:58:093 (7) - delte this and make a slider from 02:58:093 - to 02:58:714 - then add a spinner from 02:58:921 - to 03:00:576 -
03:14:024 - i would add a spinner here but i dont know if you like them
From here 03:32:024 - to 03:36:162 - here i would like to see moething more exciting ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644484 just an idea)

Normal
Hp drain + 1
AR + 2
OD + 1
I think this feel better now that you have an easy
Again usless timing points remove them
Use distance snap 1,0x

00:16:093 (4) - this note doesnt seem to fit the song
00:39:886 (1) - delte this and maybe add a circle here 00:40:093 (6) -
00:41:748 (9) - delte this
00:42:576 (10) - ^
00:56:852 (7) - this slider plays weird maybe remove 1 arrow
01:50:024 (2) - remove 1 arrow and move it to the white tick at 01:50:231 (2) -
01:53:748 (10) - add to arrows to this slider and remove 01:54:162 (11,12) -
02:24:990 (5,6,7) - this 3 notes plays bad. Add a note here 02:24:783 - or delte this 02:25:197 (6) - (prefer the second one)
02:36:576 (3,4,5,6) - those sliders are confusing and plays weird make them 1/4 sliders
02:40:714 (8) - make this slider 1/4 too
02:54:783 (1,2) - move this ones to the previous white and red tick
03:02:231 (1,2) - pleasee place this circles more in the center they look so boring for such a funny part try something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644518
03:32:438 -03:41:748 -
I would like you to remap this part its feel weird for me
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644529
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644532
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644534
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644537
(try to look at the circles at the top not really the mapset need to learn how to cut images)
This is again an idea
Remember to use distance snap 0,8~1,0 for easy - 1,0 for normals - 1,0~1,2~1,4 for hards - 1,4~1,5 for insanes thats what i would reccomend

Well its too late right now i cant keep moding maby tomorrow if i have time
I really like the song so good luck!
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for ur modding mathi747~

mathi747 wrote:

Hi~ Kevinelson,
Saw this in mode request
Nanahira♥
First i would like to say that im new at modding so take most as suggestions :)

Easy
Here are some usless timing points please remove them or make use of them
00:16:610 - 00:48:990 - 00:49:817 - 02:19:197 - 03:00:473 - 03:00:473 - Revised

00:56:852 (5) - this slider doesnt seem to follow anything Didn't Change
01:23:748 (1) - end it 01:24:990 - Ok
If you followed ^ 01:25:404 - add a slider here and delte 01:25:817 (2) - (keep the finish)
Would look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644454 Thx i did
Try to make patters more beatiful for example here 01:27:059 (1,2,3,4) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644456 Ok
01:51:473 (3) - delte this and add circlles here 01:51:473 - and here 01:51:886 - Ok
02:06:369 (5) - this looks weird It's fine for me, Just moved a little
02:23:748 (4,5) - those notes overlaps with the hp bar Fixed
02:29:955 (3) - make this slider end 02:30:369 - and add a circle here 02:30:783 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644467 Ok
02:54:369 - maybe add circle Added
02:58:093 (7) - delte this and make a slider from 02:58:093 - to 02:58:714 - then add a spinner from 02:58:921 - to 03:00:576 - Finished Slider at 02:58:921 cos 02:58:714 didn't sounds good and added a Spinner right before
03:14:024 - i would add a spinner here but i dont know if you like them Don't Like spinners on Easy
From here 03:32:024 - to 03:36:162 - here i would like to see moething more exciting ( http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644484 just an idea)


Normal
Hp drain + 1 Ok
AR + 2 Did +1
OD + 1 Ok
I think this feel better now that you have an easy Ok
Again usless timing points remove them
Use distance snap 1,0x

00:16:093 (4) - this note doesnt seem to fit the song Didn't Change
00:39:886 (1) - delte this and maybe add a circle here 00:40:093 (6) - Didn't Change
00:41:748 (9) - delte thisDidn't Change
00:42:576 (10) - ^Didn't Change
00:56:852 (7) - this slider plays weird maybe remove 1 arrow Didn't Change
01:50:024 (2) - remove 1 arrow and move it to the white tick at 01:50:231 (2) - Ok, And added a Circle at 01:51:265
01:53:748 (10) - add to arrows to this slider and remove 01:54:162 (11,12) - Ok
02:24:990 (5,6,7) - this 3 notes plays bad. Add a note here 02:24:783 - or delte this 02:25:197 (6) - (prefer the second one)Changed some notes by my own
02:36:576 (3,4,5,6) - those sliders are confusing and plays weird make them 1/4 sliders Ok
02:40:714 (8) - make this slider 1/4 too Ok
02:54:783 (1,2) - move this ones to the previous white and red tick Didn't Change
03:02:231 (1,2) - pleasee place this circles more in the center they look so boring for such a funny part try something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644518
03:32:438 -03:41:748 - Little Changes
I would like you to remap this part its feel weird for me Just Changed somethings by my own
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644529
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644532
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644534
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/644537
(try to look at the circles at the top not really the mapset need to learn how to cut images)
This is again an idea
Remember to use distance snap 0,8~1,0 for easy - 1,0 for normals - 1,0~1,2~1,4 for hards - 1,4~1,5 for insanes thats what i would reccomend
I Think this can vary each song

Well its too late right now i cant keep moding maby tomorrow if i have time
I really like the song so good luck! I'm w8ing for it ♥♥♥
Itachi_Uchiha
188 posts
Joined December 2011
Itachi_Uchiha
Due to Mod Req

IRC Mod
23:27 Itachi_Uchiha: well
23:27 Itachi_Uchiha: insane first
23:27 Itachi_Uchiha: set circle size to 4
23:27 Itachi_Uchiha: otherwise its no fun to play with such a high ar
23:27 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:06:162 (8) -
23:27 Itachi_Uchiha: let this come from right to left
23:28 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:16:094 (4) -
23:28 Itachi_Uchiha: is not on the grid
23:34 Itachi_Uchiha: make these
23:34 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:18:163 (1,2) -
23:34 Itachi_Uchiha: like these
23:34 Itachi_Uchiha: http://puu.sh/2eUl2
23:36 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:41:542 (1,2,3) - dont put them like this
23:36 kevinelson: This 00:18:162 (1,2,3) - Dont sounds good for me
23:37 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:52:508 (4) - dont put it under the slider
23:37 Itachi_Uchiha: let it flow with 50% speed
23:37 Itachi_Uchiha: then you hear it is with the music
23:37 Itachi_Uchiha: better than before
23:38 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:56:439 (1,2,3) - make it 4 small slider
23:40 kevinelson: 50% from?
23:40 Itachi_Uchiha: in the lower section
23:40 Itachi_Uchiha: you can choose which speed you wanna hear the song
23:40 Itachi_Uchiha: well
23:41 Itachi_Uchiha: 01:18:784 (3,4,5,6) - make it like http://puu.sh/2eUxL
23:41 Itachi_Uchiha: sounds better
23:41 Itachi_Uchiha: 01:26:232 (1,2,1,2) -
23:41 Itachi_Uchiha: make them similar
23:42 Itachi_Uchiha: 01:41:749 (3) - dont make the slider go away from the stream
23:45 Itachi_Uchiha: 03:15:474 (1,1,1,1) - why always new combo
23:45 Itachi_Uchiha: dont make this
23:46 Itachi_Uchiha: its not a tag4 map :)
23:46 Itachi_Uchiha: 03:23:336 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - make this one combo
23:46 Itachi_Uchiha: lol
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: 03:45:300 (1,2,1,2) - again
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: make these two similar
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: well
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: overall its good mapping but
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: it has nearly NO flow in it
23:48 Itachi_Uchiha: realign the circles and slider to get a better flow otherwise its nearly unplayable
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for ur modding Itachi_Uchiha. Map updated.
Teara
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814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
IRC mod

To summarize it, I pointed out general stuff like MP3 needing to have a proper name, and that its should be 128 to 192 bitrate. (it was 320)

Pointed out inconsistencies in Preview Points and Kiai.

Worked on a lot of hitsounds/patterns on insane/normal with some new combo changes

Full IRC Log
21:24 Kaneko: hm, first thing, you need to give your mp3 a name lol
21:25 Kaneko: also, bitrate is to high, it can only be 128-196
21:25 Kaneko: its 320 atm
21:25 kevinelson: name was on kanji... editor can't read that
21:25 Kaneko: give it the roman name
21:26 Kaneko: Nanahira works
21:26 Kaneko: just, blank songs can break database queries
21:26 Kaneko: so bats will complain about it
21:26 Kaneko: even 1 works
21:26 Kaneko: but not blank
21:26 kevinelson: okay
21:26 Kaneko: also, you need to reduce quaility of the song, then find a new offset
21:27 Kaneko: btw, is a IRC mod fine with you?
21:27 Kaneko: since your online and all that =p
21:27 kevinelson: i'm fine with it
21:27 kevinelson: i'm working on mp3 right now
21:28 Kaneko: ok, muting slidertick makes the map unrankable btw
21:28 Kaneko: you not allowed to mute anything anymore
21:28 Kaneko: sliderslide*
21:28 Kaneko: but, you can fight this with a mat or bat =p
21:28 Kaneko: (just for the record, I'm a former MAT =p)
21:28 Kaneko: back in 2011
21:29 Kaneko: ok, while you fix the mp3, I'm going to make some tea~
21:29 Kaneko: then we can start with insane
21:29 kevinelson: okay
21:33 kevinelson: kk i'm ready
21:33 Kaneko: alright
21:33 Kaneko: insane flows very nicely
21:33 Kaneko: but there is a few odds places
21:34 Kaneko: 00:41:439 (7,1) -
21:34 Kaneko: this really plays awkward
21:35 Kaneko: the angle of the jump makes it really hard.
21:35 Kaneko: I'd suggest you try something else here
21:36 Kaneko: I' personalyl would make it 1 slider, instead of two notes
21:36 kevinelson: What abount Stack then?
21:37 Kaneko: well, you can stack it
21:37 Kaneko: thats another idea
21:38 Kaneko: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/651583
21:40 Kaneko: 00:34:818 (6,1) -
21:40 Kaneko: or something like you did here
21:43 Kaneko: ok, moving along
21:43 Kaneko: 00:44:853 (1) - add a clap on the start of the slider
21:43 Kaneko: 00:45:163 (2) -
21:43 Kaneko: same, add a clap on the start of the sldier
21:43 Kaneko: slider*
21:43 Kaneko: 00:45:473 (3) - clap
21:44 kevinelson: done
21:44 Kaneko: 00:59:335 (3) -
21:44 Kaneko: add a finish on the last repeat
21:45 Kaneko: fits the music ;)
21:45 Kaneko: 01:10:507 (1) - even though it follows the lyrics, I'd remove the NC here
21:45 Kaneko: makes it easy to read
21:46 kevinelson: u mean at 00:59:541 - or 00:59:748 -?
21:46 Kaneko: 00:59:748
21:47 Kaneko: 01:02:232 (1) - finish hitsound to compliment the first and last finish that appear, it also gives more impact the the vocals
21:47 Kaneko: 01:02:232 (1) - finish hitsound to compliment the first and last finish that appear, it also gives more impact the the vocals
21:49 Kaneko: 01:25:818 (3) - this is minor, but you do get big skins, with huge healthbars so, this will be hidden for those players, but its rankable and up to you
21:49 Kaneko: 01:25:818 (3) - this is minor, but you do get big skins, with huge healthbars so, this will be hidden for those players, but its rankable and up to you
21:51 Kaneko: 02:06:784 (1) - this is also awkard to play, but its fine as is, I'd have kept it hitcircles =p
21:53 Kaneko: 02:21:680 (1,2) - clap on the start of the sliders
21:53 Kaneko: for both of them
21:55 Kaneko: 02:50:646 (5) - another slightly hidden under HP bar issue
21:55 kevinelson: same at 02:23:336 (3,4) - ?
21:55 Kaneko: no, you have claps on the end, which fits
21:56 Kaneko: 02:33:679 (3,4,5) - this is also very hard to read
21:57 Kaneko: its fine I guess
21:58 kevinelson: staked
21:58 Kaneko: the slow down part is awesome, no changes here
21:59 Kaneko: 03:27:886 - hitcircle with clap
21:59 Kaneko: 03:28:300 - hitcircle with clap
21:59 Kaneko: or a slider with starts on 27:886 and ends on 28:300
21:59 Kaneko: clap on both ends
22:00 Kaneko: the sudden void feels akward
22:00 Kaneko: and thats it for insane
22:00 Kaneko: now for general stuff, then hard
22:01 Kaneko: the max size a folder can be without a video is 10mb' straight, but I'm guessing when you reduce the bits of the mp3 to 192, it should come down a bit
22:01 Kaneko: the max size a folder can be without a video is 10mb' straight, but I'm guessing when you reduce the bits of the mp3 to 192, it should come down a bit
22:02 Kaneko: a quick check in the folder for all diffs shows me, there is a inconsistency in the preview times
22:02 Kaneko: easy normal and hard start on 142330
22:02 Kaneko: but insane starts on 142441
22:02 Kaneko: this annoyes bats, so better fix it
22:03 kevinelson: :D fixed
22:04 Kaneko: once we are done, make sure Kaia is consistant over all diffs
22:04 kevinelson: .mp3 become 5.45 from 9.09mb
22:05 kevinelson: Kiai?
22:05 Kaneko: ye, sorry, Kiai*
22:05 Kaneko: eek, let me play Hard quickly
22:07 Kaneko: hmm
22:07 Kaneko: hard is harder, then insane btw
22:08 Kaneko: we are going to have to do some major work on this diff
22:10 Kaneko: ok, I can see its the same as insane, just different spacing
22:10 Kaneko: this wont work sadly =p
22:11 Kaneko: its much to confusing
22:11 kevinelson: i'm thinking about remapping this
22:11 Kaneko: hmm
22:11 kevinelson: remap*
22:12 Kaneko: well, I really like this song, and I'll offer to make you a cool hard, if you like
22:12 Kaneko: it will take me 2-3 days =p
22:13 Kaneko: well, ok, going to skip this diff, because it needs way to much work
22:13 Kaneko: has to be remap imo =p
22:13 kevinelson: It would be very gratifying to have a guest in one of my first maps
22:14 Kaneko: well, if you give me the go ahead, I'll start tonight =p
22:15 kevinelson: i was looking at kiai i missed some at normal and easy
22:15 kevinelson: fixed now
22:16 kevinelson: about guest a hard dif, go ahead!
22:16 Kaneko: alright :o
22:17 Kaneko: ok, normal is next then.
22:17 kevinelson: k
22:17 Kaneko: I did a quick testplay with double time
22:17 Kaneko: and spacing is a small issue
22:18 Kaneko: what I'll suggest is, for the normal parts, keep Distance snap 1x
22:18 Kaneko: and for the speed up parts make it 1.2x
22:18 kevinelson: *normal need some aesthetic adjustments
22:18 Kaneko: that too =p
22:19 Kaneko: but, for normal and easy, always try and map with distance snap
22:19 Kaneko: to make the map flow better
22:19 Kaneko: hard and insane can break this rules a bit
22:20 Kaneko: so, I'll suggest when you do some cosmestic improvements on normal to just properly snap them all to the grid
22:20 kevinelson: about spacing and aesthetic i'll mess with it right after mod
22:20 Kaneko: distance snap that is
22:20 Kaneko: so, I wont be focusing to much on spacing for now
22:20 Kaneko: also, normal is missing a red timing section I notice
22:21 Kaneko: 03:32:059 < 145 BPM
22:21 Kaneko: 03:32:059 -
22:21 Kaneko: hard and insane had this
22:21 kevinelson: is that needed same at all difs?
22:21 Kaneko: timing is a must for all diffs
22:21 Kaneko: did you time this yourself?
22:22 kevinelson: yeah
22:22 Kaneko: good job then
22:22 Kaneko: let me ask this then, why the second red timing point
22:22 Kaneko: ?
22:23 Kaneko: (I'm very bad with timing) =p
22:23 kevinelson: from 03:32:059 notes was out of timming
22:23 kevinelson: i needed to fix
22:24 Kaneko: ah ok then
22:24 Kaneko: you need to add these to normal and easy too
22:24 Kaneko: if the offset changes abit
22:24 kevinelson: but at normal and easy i was fine
22:24 Kaneko: regardless, bats will nail you for this
22:24 Kaneko: trust me =p
22:25 Kaneko: Ok, some general guidelines for a normal
22:25 Kaneko: when making repeating sliders, try and keep it constant repeats thought the song, etc, if you have a slider which repeats 2 times
22:25 Kaneko: when making repeating sliders, try and keep it constant repeats thought the song, etc, if you have a slider which repeats 2 times
22:26 Kaneko: try and keep all the following sliders also repeating 2 times
22:26 Kaneko: 00:39:886 (1,2) -
22:26 Kaneko: like, (1) repeats 2 times
22:26 Kaneko: but (2) repeats 4 times
22:26 Kaneko: this can be confusing for newer players
22:27 Kaneko: also, another nice to know thing
22:27 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gB2B
22:27 Kaneko: if you look in the right hand side, the yellow text
22:27 Kaneko: it will show you the distance between two objects
22:27 Kaneko: now, the general rule for a normal mapset is to try and keep the distance spacing about the same thought out the diff ( in the same combo color atleast)
22:27 Kaneko: now, the general rule for a normal mapset is to try and keep the distance spacing about the same thought out the diff ( in the same combo color atleast)
22:28 Kaneko: thoughout*
22:28 Kaneko: thouhout* eek, I cant spell sorry
22:29 kevinelson: :D
22:29 Kaneko: but this doesnt mean you have to make a plain and boring diff
22:29 Kaneko: but try and keep it to one distance snap, you can ignore this when on a new combo
22:30 Kaneko: if you dont understand something I say, please say so, and I'll try and clearify
22:30 Kaneko: english is my second langauge =p
22:30 Kaneko: but I try my best
22:30 Kaneko: 01:17:955 (3,4,5) -
22:30 Kaneko: this is a no-no spacing btw
22:30 Kaneko: for normal
22:31 Kaneko: 01:19:610 (1,2) -
22:31 Kaneko: I'd make this a slider
22:32 Kaneko: ok, I'd suggest you use a distance snap of 0.8x
22:32 Kaneko: if you press "Alt"
22:32 Kaneko: the top right corner, it shows distance snap
22:33 Kaneko: spacing*
22:34 Kaneko: ok
22:34 Kaneko: 01:56:438 (2,3) -
22:34 Kaneko: I'd delete these two
22:34 Kaneko: make (1) repeat once
22:34 Kaneko: and on 01:56:852 (2) -
22:35 Kaneko: make a slider that ends on the next white tick
22:35 Kaneko: 01:57:473 (3) -
22:35 Kaneko: I'd remove 1 repeat and place a hitcircle the white tick
22:35 Kaneko: ok, going to grab some more tea, and give you some time to catch up =p
22:36 kevinelson: fixed
22:36 kevinelson: okay
22:39 Kaneko: ok
22:39 Kaneko: 02:02:024 (4) -
22:39 Kaneko: delete this and make it a slider that ends the white tick
22:40 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBzf
22:40 Kaneko: ok, and
22:40 Kaneko: 02:02:438 (5) - delete this
22:40 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBBN
22:40 Kaneko: something like that
22:41 Kaneko: and put a finish on (1)
22:41 Kaneko: fix the combo's too
22:41 Kaneko: 02:38:231 (5) -
22:41 Kaneko: new combo here
22:42 Kaneko: 03:03:886 (4) -
22:42 Kaneko: new combo here
22:43 Kaneko: 03:33:059 (7) -
22:43 Kaneko: delete this
22:43 Kaneko: and make (6) repeat once
22:43 Kaneko: and new combo on (7) then
22:43 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBJh
22:44 Kaneko: 03:34:714 (3) - delete this
22:44 Kaneko: and repeat (2) once
22:46 Kaneko: hmm, ok
22:46 Kaneko: 03:36:369 (3) - delete this
22:46 Kaneko: 03:36:576 (4) -
22:46 Kaneko: this too
22:47 Kaneko: make (2) repeat once
22:47 Kaneko: and move (3) to the white tick
22:48 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBU9
22:49 Kaneko: 03:39:266 (2) -
22:49 Kaneko: delete this
22:49 Kaneko: and repeat (1) once
22:49 Kaneko: 03:40:093 (3) - delete this then
22:49 Kaneko: and repeat (2) once
22:50 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gBZt
22:50 Kaneko: 03:40:300 (3) - gets a new combo
22:51 Kaneko: 03:42:576 (2) - delete this
22:51 Kaneko: 03:42:783 (1) - and this
22:51 Kaneko: repeat (1) once
22:52 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gC5h
22:53 kevinelson: i still here dont worry o/
22:53 Kaneko: hehe =p
22:53 Kaneko: the reasons for these is, it makes it easier, but it still fits the area
22:54 Kaneko: just fix the last part as the above, you should get the general idea now
22:55 Kaneko: thats it for normal
22:55 Kaneko: quick test play on easy with hr/dt/hd
22:56 kevinelson: xD
22:59 Kaneko: ok, hitnote placement is good for easy
22:59 Kaneko: its just spacing issues
22:59 Kaneko: remember, a Easy must be 100% snapped to once distance snap
22:59 Kaneko: at all times =p
22:59 Kaneko: 01:04:714 (5,1) -
23:00 Kaneko: this doesnt work for example
23:00 Kaneko: also, 01:12:990 (1,2) - this spacing is larger then the rest =p so you will be asked to fix this
23:00 Kaneko: even if the tempo of the song picks up, its a rule that easy should be snapped 100% =p
23:01 kevinelson: =( was so fun
23:01 kevinelson: witch u thing is better 0.8 or 1.0?
23:02 Kaneko: you will have to experiment
23:02 Kaneko: what you can do is
23:03 Kaneko: change the SV
23:03 Kaneko: to 0.85x and 1x
23:03 Kaneko: you can do this in timing
23:03 Kaneko: http://puu.sh/2gCwJ
23:04 Kaneko: this way, you can have difference in spacing, and it wont break the rules
23:04 kevinelson: then i ill have to fix all sliders right?
23:04 Kaneko: yes
23:05 Kaneko: well, fix the spacing for easy, and it should all be good
23:05 kevinelson: 1x distance does not fill better with SV 1x?
23:06 Kaneko: well, use 0.8 as your base
23:06 Kaneko: for both speedup and slow downs
23:06 Kaneko: or use 1x
23:06 Kaneko: if you dont want them to touch
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Teara Kaneko, Thx for your modding, Map updated.

PS: Teara Kaneko Will map a Guest [Insane] mode Yay!
Last edited by - Kevin , edited 2 times in total.
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Took me awhile. orz

Here is "easy" insane owo

http://puu.sh/2ltAy

should even the difficulty spread a bit.
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Awesome, Thx~ Uploaded ! ヽ(*'､＾*)
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Here is an update.

Thanks to Roddie and SteRRuM for suggestions.

http://puu.sh/2m164
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
hi~.

[Easy]
  1. AR+1 Seems better.
  2. 00:07:219 (5) - New combo change.
  3. 00:56:874 (5) - ^
  4. 01:01:012 (1) - ^
  5. 01:07:632 (1) - ^
  6. 01:16:322 (7) - ^
  7. 02:06:391 (5) - ^
  8. 02:10:529 (1) - ^
  9. 02:17:150 (1) - ^
  10. 02:35:770 (3) - ^

    i think NC bit random... so,　you try have a regularity.
[Normal]
  1. AR+1 Seems better.
  2. 00:37:426 (2) - (1) ctrl+H and ctrl+J use better.
  3. 00:41:563 (10) - Add NC.
  4. 00:46:115 (1) - 00:44:874 (1) ctrl+J and ctrl+G use better. . if changed... next spacing check please~.
  5. 00:56:460 (6) - Add NC.
  6. 00:56:874 (7) - successive repeat (short slider) very confused. i don't like successive repeat. so 1 repeat is nice...
  7. 01:55:219 x) - i think add note is better.
  8. 02:17:150 (1) - Remove NC.
  9. You more use clap better. this song very match.
  10. 02:42:391 (3) - Add finish Slider head.
  11. 02:49:012 (1) - Add finish Slider head.
  12. 02:52:322 (5) - Add NC.
  13. 02:58:115 (1) - slider End time is 03:00:598 better~.
[Hard]
  1. this is Hard diff O:? seems insane...
  2. 00:47:357 (4) - two repeat is confused.
  3. 00:50:667 (4) - ^
  4. 00:57:288 (6) - ^
  5. 01:08:874 (5) - slider end time is 01:09:288 better.
  6. 01:11:770 (4) - slider end time is 01:12:184 sound good.
  7. 01:12:288 (5) - Delete note please. not match sound...
  8. 03:15:908 (1) - Remove NC.
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:634 (7) - sound not match.. so, 1 right 1/4.
[Teara's Insane]
  1. 00:16:115 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stack is confused play.. so, unstack better.
  2. 02:19:322 (7) - Add NC.
  3. 02:32:046 (4,5) - spacing small is bad. because, It seems 1/4 note.. i am confused.
overall ... NC is random.. so, people confused.
you should NC check~.

good luck
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin

P o M u T a wrote:

hi~.

[Easy]
  1. AR+1 Seems better. No change
  2. 00:07:219 (5) - New combo change.Ok
  3. 00:56:874 (5) - ^ Ok
  4. 01:01:012 (1) - ^ Ok
  5. 01:07:632 (1) - ^ Ok
  6. 01:16:322 (7) - ^ Ok
  7. 02:06:391 (5) - ^ Ok
  8. 02:10:529 (1) - ^ Ok
  9. 02:17:150 (1) - ^ Ok
  10. 02:35:770 (3) - ^ Ok

    i think NC bit random... so,　you try have a regularity.
[Normal]
  1. AR+1 Seems better.No change
  2. 00:37:426 (2) - (1) ctrl+H and ctrl+J use better. Ok
  3. 00:41:563 (10) - Add NC. Ok
  4. 00:46:115 (1) - 00:44:874 (1) ctrl+J and ctrl+G use better. . if changed... next spacing check please~. No change
  5. 00:56:460 (6) - Add NC.Ok
  6. 00:56:874 (7) - successive repeat (short slider) very confused. i don't like successive repeat. so 1 repeat is nice... Ok
  7. 01:55:219 x) - i think add note is better.
  8. 02:17:150 (1) - Remove NC.Ok
  9. You more use clap better. this song very match.
  10. 02:42:391 (3) - Add finish Slider head. Ok
  11. 02:49:012 (1) - Add finish Slider head. Ok
  12. 02:52:322 (5) - Add NC. Ok
  13. 02:58:115 (1) - slider End time is 03:00:598 better~. Ok
[Hard]
  1. this is Hard diff O:? seems insane...
  2. 00:47:357 (4) - two repeat is confused. Ok
  3. 00:50:667 (4) - ^ Ok
  4. 00:57:288 (6) - ^ Ok
  5. 01:08:874 (5) - slider end time is 01:09:288 better. Ok
  6. 01:11:770 (4) - slider end time is 01:12:184 sound good. Ok
  7. 01:12:288 (5) - Delete note please. not match sound... Ok
  8. 03:15:908 (1) - Remove NC.Ok


[Insane]
  1. 00:19:634 (7) - sound not match.. so, 1 right 1/4.
Ok

[Teara's Insane]
  1. 00:16:115 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stack is confused play.. so, unstack better.
  2. 02:19:322 (7) - Add NC.
  3. 02:32:046 (4,5) - spacing small is bad. because, It seems 1/4 note.. i am confused.
overall ... NC is random.. so, people confused.
you should NC check~.

good luck
Teara
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814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara

P o M u T a wrote:

[Teara's Insane]
  1. 00:16:115 (1,2,3,4,1) - this stack is confused play.. so, unstack better. ~ No, I'd rather keep it like this, it fits for me.
  2. 02:19:322 (7) - Add NC. ~ Ok
  3. 02:32:046 (4,5) - spacing small is bad. because, It seems 1/4 note.. i am confused. ~ I've actually asked a lot of people to test play this, and they all got this on the first try. I don't think its so confusing.


overall ... NC is random.. so, people confused. ~ I've tried to redo the New Combo's, for some reason its very hard to do for this map =p
you should NC check~.

good luck
Thanks for the mod!

http://puu.sh/2nKLi
StickyPicky
509 posts
Joined October 2012
StickyPicky
hi ~ :) #modreqs

:arrow: Easy

00:03:495 / 00:06:805 / 00:10:115 / 00:53:150 / 02:02:667 / 02:35:770 / 02:42:391 / 02:49:012 / 02:52:322 / 02:55:632 / 02:57:288 / 02:58:943 add finish ~
01:20:460 remove this clap ~
02:33:288 remove this slider change this to a spinner ~

:arrow: Normal

None ~

:arrow: Hard

kindly look the AiMod and fix all of this >.<
SPOILER

:arrow: Insane

02:59:048 Spinners must have new combo.

:arrow: Teara's Insane

03:15:742 Object's end is not snapped!

SPOILER
Thats all ~ goodluck ~ >.<
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx~ for modding newtoniorock8, Followed everything

newtoniorock8 wrote:

hi ~ :) #modreqs
Mod
:arrow: Easy

00:03:495 / 00:06:805 / 00:10:115 / 00:53:150 / 02:02:667 / 02:35:770 / 02:42:391 / 02:49:012 / 02:52:322 / 02:55:632 / 02:57:288 / 02:58:943 add finish ~
01:20:460 remove this clap ~
02:33:288 remove this slider change this to a spinner ~

:arrow: Normal

None ~

:arrow: Hard

kindly look the AiMod and fix all of this >.<
SPOILER

:arrow: Insane

02:59:048 Spinners must have new combo.


SPOILER
Thats all ~ goodluck ~ >.<

[Teara's Insane]

03:15:742 Object's end is not snapped!
Fixed!

Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
Hi~

[General]
  1. Letter boxing during breaks crops your background image in an awkward way, maybe disable it?

[Insane]
  1. OD+1
  2. 00:03:497 - Add a finish?
  3. 00:07:221 (2) - CTRL+G works better for spacing.
  4. 00:37:738 (4) - CTRL+G works better for spacing.
  5. 00:42:393 (5) - End this slider at 00:42:600 - for better rhythm.
  6. 01:36:186 (1) - Add a clap.
  7. 02:05:565 (7) - Extend till 02:05:772 - for better rhythm.
  8. 02:14:876 (4) - Delete this note.
  9. 02:22:117 - Add a clap.
  10. 02:33:702 (3) - Add a clap.
  11. 02:59:048 (1) - Add a clap.
  12. 03:17:564 (4) - Add a clap.
  13. 03:21:290 (1) - Remove new combo, it makes no sense...
  14. 03:28:324 (4) - Add a clap.
  15. 03:29:152 (1,1) - Remove new combos to match music more.
  16. 03:30:393 (1) - Finish sounds awful here, remove it or end your spinner at 03:31:634 -


[Teara's Insane]
  1. OD-1
  2. 00:03:495 - Add a finish.
  3. 00:16:115 (10,11,12,13,1) - Stacking all this doesn't play nor look nice, I suggest to change.
  4. 01:22:529 (4,5) - Better to stack then use this strange spacing.
  5. 01:25:426 (1,5) - Add clap.
  6. 01:26:253 (8) - New combo, 01:27:081 (1) - remove new combo.
  7. 01:27:908 (1,1,1) - Make spacing more consistent?
  8. 01:45:184 (11) - Delete note, these is nothing in the music to require this note.
  9. 02:03:081 - Add clap, 02:03:908 - Add clap.
  10. 02:11:357 - Remove whistle, 02:11:770 - Add whistle.
  11. 02:19:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These sliders should start on white/red ticks, not blue... 02:19:012 (6) - Change this to note then start the sliders at 02:19:219 -
  12. 02:32:047 (4,5) - Again, this spacing isn't good.
  13. 03:17:563 (2) - Add a clap.
  14. 03:22:115 - Add a finish.
  15. 03:31:943 - Same as Insane, it's a bad choice.
  16. 03:40:736 (2,3) - Bad spacing. Suggest you shorten 03:40:736 (2) - to end at 03:40:943 -
  17. 03:45:288 (4) - Add new combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:495 - Add a finish.
  2. 00:06:184 (12) - End at 00:06:391 - instead.
  3. 00:33:288 (1) - Add a finish.
  4. 00:37:839 (11) - Add a clap.
  5. 00:43:632 (5) - Add a clap.
  6. 00:47:770 - Add a clap.
  7. 00:48:598 - Add a clap.
  8. 00:51:081 - Add a clap.
  9. 00:52:943 - Add a clap.
  10. 00:53:563 - Add a clap.
  11. 00:54:391 - Add a clap.
  12. 00:56:046 - Add a clap.
  13. 00:56:874 (4) - Add a clap.
  14. 00:57:701 - Add a clap.
  15. 01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Long stream for a Hard...
  16. 01:12:495 (6) - Delete note.
  17. 01:12:599 (7) - End at 01:12:805 - instead.
  18. 01:13:427 (2,1) - Recheck your rhythm. I suggest you add a note at 01:13:839 - and delete the note at 01:13:943 (1) -
  19. 01:20:047 (4,5) - Same as previous.
  20. 01:21:701 - Add clap.
  21. 01:22:943 - Change the whistle to a Finish.
  22. 01:24:184 - Add clap.
  23. 01:57:288 (6) - Add clap.
  24. 02:00:598 (7) - Add clap.
  25. 02:01:426 (3) - Add clap.
  26. 02:03:082 (3,4) - Recheck rhythm.
  27. 02:05:563 - Add clap.
  28. 02:09:288 (4) - Add finish and new combo, 02:09:496 (1) - Remove new combo.
  29. 02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this stream is too long for a Hard.
  30. 02:21:805 (4,6) - Delete these notes.
  31. Now just check the rhythm for the rest of your chorus's.../me lazy

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:115 - Add a finish.
  2. Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ?
  3. 01:03:081 (3) - New combo.
  4. 01:07:632 (1) - Remove new combo.
  5. 01:19:632 (6) - New combo.
  6. 01:27:495 (2) - Remove finish, it's too noisy here.
  7. 02:20:460 (1) - Remove new combo.
  8. 02:52:322 (1) - Add a finish.
  9. 02:56:460 (4) - New combo.
  10. 03:32:460 (5) - New combo, 03:33:495 (1) - Remove new combo.
  11. 03:45:288 (6) - New combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo.
  12. 03:46:943 (1,1) - Do not use 1/4 in a normal, even if it's a slider! Change it to 1/2 instead.

[Easy]
  1. I suggest you place more claps on the 1/2 pattern, they are pretty inconsistent in this difficulty in particular.
  2. Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ?
  3. 00:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo, 00:46:943 (2) - Add new combo.
  4. 01:29:150 - Remove finish.
  5. 02:56:460 (5) - New combo.
  6. 02:59:357 (1) - Spinner is too short for an Easy.
  7. 03:48:184 (6,1) - Objects are too close for an Easy.

My longest mod... :o
Good luck~
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Thx for modding, Kiiwa o/

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~ Hay ヾ(*´Δ`*)ﾉ"

[General]
  1. Letter boxing during breaks crops your background image in an awkward way, maybe disable it?

    All Disable

[Insane]
  1. OD+1 Increased
  2. 00:03:497 - Add a finish? Ok
  3. 00:07:221 (2) - CTRL+G works better for spacing. No change
  4. 00:37:738 (4) - CTRL+G works better for spacing. No change
  5. 00:42:393 (5) - End this slider at 00:42:600 - for better rhythm. Ok
  6. 01:36:186 (1) - Add a clap. Ok
  7. 02:05:565 (7) - Extend till 02:05:772 - for better rhythm. Ok
  8. 02:14:876 (4) - Delete this note. Ok
  9. 02:22:117 - Add a clap. Ok
  10. 02:33:702 (3) - Add a clap. Ok
  11. 02:59:048 (1) - Add a clap. Ok
  12. 03:17:564 (4) - Add a clap. Ok
  13. 03:21:290 (1) - Remove new combo, it makes no sense... Ok
  14. 03:28:324 (4) - Add a clap. Ok
  15. 03:29:152 (1,1) - Remove new combos to match music more. Ok
  16. 03:30:393 (1) - Finish sounds awful here, remove it or end your spinner at 03:31:634 - End at 03:31:634 -


[Hard]
  1. 00:03:495 - Add a finish. Ok
  2. 00:06:184 (12) - End at 00:06:391 - instead. Ok
  3. 00:33:288 (1) - Add a finish. Ok
  4. 00:37:839 (11) - Add a clap. Ok
  5. 00:43:632 (5) - Add a clap. Ok
  6. 00:47:770 - Add a clap. Ok
  7. 00:48:598 - Add a clap. Ok
  8. 00:51:081 - Add a clap. Ok
  9. 00:52:943 - Add a clap. Ok
  10. 00:53:563 - Add a clap. Ok
  11. 00:54:391 - Add a clap. Ok
  12. 00:56:046 - Add a clap. Ok
  13. 00:56:874 (4) - Add a clap. Ok
  14. 00:57:701 - Add a clap. Ok
  15. 01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Long stream for a Hard... Ok
  16. 01:12:495 (6) - Delete note. Ok
  17. 01:12:599 (7) - End at 01:12:805 - instead. Ok
  18. 01:13:427 (2,1) - Recheck your rhythm. I suggest you add a note at 01:13:839 - and delete the note at 01:13:943 (1) - Ok
  19. 01:20:047 (4,5) - Same as previous. Ok
  20. 01:21:701 - Add clap. Ok
  21. 01:22:943 - Change the whistle to a Finish. Ok
  22. 01:24:184 - Add clap. Ok
  23. 01:57:288 (6) - Add clap. Ok
  24. 02:00:598 (7) - Add clap. Ok
  25. 02:01:426 (3) - Add clap. Ok
  26. 02:03:082 (3,4) - Recheck rhythm. Moved 1 Tick Left
  27. 02:05:563 - Add clap. Ok
  28. 02:09:288 (4) - Add finish and new combo, 02:09:496 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
  29. 02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Again, this stream is too long for a Hard. Ok
  30. 02:21:805 (4,6) - Delete these notes. Ok
  31. Now just check the rhythm for the rest of your chorus's.../me lazy Checked hope i didnt miss anything

[Normal]
  1. 00:10:115 - Add a finish. Ok
  2. Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ? No change
  3. 01:03:081 (3) - New combo. Ok
  4. 01:07:632 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
  5. 01:19:632 (6) - New combo. Ok
  6. 01:27:495 (2) - Remove finish, it's too noisy here. Ok
  7. 02:20:460 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
  8. 02:52:322 (1) - Add a finish. Ok
  9. 02:56:460 (4) - New combo. Ok
  10. 03:32:460 (5) - New combo, 03:33:495 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
  11. 03:45:288 (6) - New combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
  12. 03:46:943 (1,1) - Do not use 1/4 in a normal, even if it's a slider! Change it to 1/2 instead. Ok


[Easy]
  1. I suggest you place more claps on the 1/2 pattern, they are pretty inconsistent in this difficulty in particular. Worked hit sounds on all map
  2. Maybe extend the first break to 00:20:046 - ? No change
  3. 00:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo, 00:46:943 (2) - Add new combo. Ok
  4. 01:29:150 - Remove finish. Ok
  5. 02:56:460 (5) - New combo.Ok
  6. 02:59:357 (1) - Spinner is too short for an Easy. Ok
  7. 03:48:184 (6,1) - Objects are too close for an Easy.Ok

My longest mod... :o
Good luck~
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara

Kiiwa wrote:

Hi~

[Teara's Insane]
  1. OD-1
  2. 00:03:495 - Add a finish.
  3. 00:16:115 (10,11,12,13,1) - Stacking all this doesn't play nor look nice, I suggest to change. ~ All a matter of opinion, I like it and for it it plays well, so no change.
  4. 01:22:529 (4,5) - Better to stack then use this strange spacing.
  5. 01:25:426 (1,5) - Add clap.
  6. 01:26:253 (8) - New combo, 01:27:081 (1) - remove new combo.
  7. 01:27:908 (1,1,1) - Make spacing more consistent?
  8. 01:45:184 (11) - Delete note, these is nothing in the music to require this note.
  9. 02:03:081 - Add clap, 02:03:908 - Add clap.
  10. 02:11:357 - Remove whistle, 02:11:770 - Add whistle.
  11. 02:19:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These sliders should start on white/red ticks, not blue... 02:19:012 (6) - Change this to note then start the sliders at 02:19:219 -
  12. 02:32:047 (4,5) - Again, this spacing isn't good.
  13. 03:17:563 (2) - Add a clap.
  14. 03:22:115 - Add a finish.
  15. 03:31:943 - Same as Insane, it's a bad choice.
  16. 03:40:736 (2,3) - Bad spacing. Suggest you shorten 03:40:736 (2) - to end at 03:40:943 -
  17. 03:45:288 (4) - Add new combo, 03:46:115 (1) - Remove new combo.

My longest mod... :o
Good luck~
Done everything but the one I commented on, thanks.

http://puu.sh/2qyxn
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,404 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
This song is incredible funny. no kd for this Post please

I've tested some Diffs and what I could say is that Hard feels quite overmapped, especially the Streams makes it to a very hard Hard Diff. Try to split these Streams like 00:43:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) (delete 6,8 here, they aren't really needed for this kind of Diff). I like the slider shapes you used at this Diff :3

Normal is okay.. sometimes it feels weird how did you mapped and why you set the Circle/Slider begin here and there but yeah, my opinion. You have a cheerful rhythm feeling on this Map as I can see which is a good thing imo.

About Easy, the same thing as Normal: Some weird moments which you choose to map and I find that it's a bit too much mapped. Also I've noticed some Hitsound inconsistency. Try to fix them.

Oh and use this File and add it to the Map. With this file the Sliderslide is silenced.
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Sorry for late reply.

Thx for test play.

About Hard diff, i still trying to make the map easier.

I have not decided whether or not to change the sliderslide.
DragonArchangel
76 posts
Joined January 2012
DragonArchangel
Hiii This is my mod!!

:arrow: General:
Timing point:3495
Tags: add more:Rin,Len (and replace vocal for Vocaloid)

:arrow: Easy:
01:26:667 - kaia this is not very useful!even to reduce 10% of the volume the music. This for me and dispensable
02:58:115 - this slide would be best if I went through the 02:58:529 02:58:943 here and get here the spinner
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end
00:10:115 (1) - add finish
00:13:426 (1) - add finish
00:46:115 (3) - add finish

:arrow: Normal:
01:55:219 - put a hit here
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end

:arrow: Hard:
03:31:839 - here should be the end of the spinner. is very fast for perceived player
SPOILER
:arrow: Insane:
00:07:221 (2,3) - 4.05x Are you sure?
03:12:393 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - would be so cool ^ ^ (is optional)
SPOILER
03:14:876 (3,4,5,6,7) - this part, the hits have to be closer to the slide, if not, it becomes difficult to understand
:arrow: Teara´s Insane:
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end

sorry if you have some errors in english ^ ^
my english is bad, I hope it helped good at something
good luck, keep so near and bubbling and after is ranked
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin

DragonArchangel wrote:

Hiii This is my mod!!

:arrow: General:
Timing point:3495 *Thx~ i missed this at [Insane]
Tags: add more:Rin,Len (and replace vocal for Vocaloid) *It's not Kagamine's song It's Nanahira ヾ(*´Δ｀*)ﾉﾞ

:arrow: Easy:
01:26:667 - kaia this is not very useful!even to reduce 10% of the volume the music. This for me and dispensable *no Change
02:58:115 - this slide would be best if I went through the 02:58:529 02:58:943 here and get here the spinner *Hmm i see
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end *no Change
00:10:115 (1) - add finish *OK
00:13:426 (1) - add finish *OK
00:46:115 (3) - add finish *OK

:arrow: Normal:
01:55:219 - put a hit here *no Change
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end *no Change

:arrow: Hard:
03:31:839 - here should be the end of the spinner. is very fast for perceived player *OK
SPOILER
:arrow: Insane:
00:07:221 (2,3) - 4.05x Are you sure? *Yeah!
03:12:393 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - would be so cool ^ ^ (is optional) *Followed
SPOILER
03:14:876 (3,4,5,6,7) - this part, the hits have to be closer to the slide, if not, it becomes difficult to understand *no Change


:arrow: Teara´s Insane:
03:52:322 - here should be the end of the spinner and move the inherit point here 03:52:115 would be better to end

sorry if you have some errors in english ^ ^ <- *Yeah I got mistake here too =(
my english is bad, I hope it helped good at something *Don't worry we ill improve
good luck, keep so near and bubbling and after is ranked
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- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
Topic Starter
- Kevin
Edit: Sorry, double post >.<
Chloe
1,160 posts
Joined April 2011
Chloe
Hello~

As m4m req :>
And just mod as suggestions, not necessary. : )


[General]
[Easy]
  1. 00:09:701 (4) - remove the fin will be better
  2. 00:13:012 (4) - ^
  3. 00:40:736 (2) - remap this?
  4. 01:52:736 (5) - ^
  5. 03:33:288 (3) - hard to hold for newbie.....
[Normal]
  1. 00:47:563 (3) - remove this one and add 00:47:770 (3) -
  2. 00:52:529 (5) - 00:52:736 (6) - add these two or a slider here and remove 00:52:943 (5) -
  3. 00:57:908 (5) - reverse for 5 times
  4. 01:10:115 (3) - reverse for 2 times
  5. 02:22:529 (1) - completely stack with the beginning of 02:23:356 (3) -
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:219 (8) - move to x182 y252 for better flow
  2. 00:16:012 (4) - try remove this one
  3. 00:48:598 (7) - flow was bad here :(
  4. 00:53:357 (12) - 00:53:460 (13) - 00:53:563 (14) - there should be a triplet here.. does it right?
  5. 01:09:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think it's overmapped here o_o
  6. 01:26:254 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  7. 01:49:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  8. 02:19:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  9. 03:08:150 (5) - move this one
    Since there're so many stream in it, I think the diff is NOT HARD , JUST CALLED IT INSANE or make it easier plz.
[Teara's Insane]
  1. 00:11:150 (5) - ctrl g for better flow
  2. 00:11:977 (8) - ^ It's interesting www
  3. 00:11:977 (8) - ^
  4. 00:11:977 (8) - ^
  5. 01:25:943 (6) - remove this one
  6. 01:59:253 (2) - ^
  7. 02:02:874 (1,2,3) - it's too sharp for me...
  8. 02:09:288 (1) - use ds0.13 for better flow
  9. 02:28:426 (4) - remove this one
  10. 02:50:667 (5) - add finish in the beginning of it
  11. 02:53:977 (7) - ^
  12. 03:08:150 (7) - remove this one
  13. 03:28:115 (2) - add this one
  14. 03:45:701 (2) - remove this one and replace the slider behind it
  15. 03:48:184 (6) - suggest to map like this in here：http://puu.sh/3bNbl.png
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:322 (3) - ds so high
  2. 00:07:219 (2) - ctrl g
  3. 00:37:012 (2) - use 1/2 slider?
  4. 00:41:460 (7) - use ds 1.3
  5. 01:24:081 (2) - remove this one?
  6. 01:44:253 (6) - ctrl g
  7. 01:44:460 (1) - ^
  8. 01:52:943 (2) - lol ds so high....
  9. 02:22:115 (3) - follow the rythem just like 02:21:701 (1,2) -
  10. 03:16:529 (2) - do you like to map as this：http://puu.sh/3bNcc.png
  11. 03:23:253 (3) - add this one
  12. 03:48:184 (6) - suggest to map like this in here：http://puu.sh/3bNbl.png
    Well.. I couldn't understand this mapping style, so it's hard to mod for me ;______;

Good luck to your map <3.
Snowy Dream
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Snowy Dream
Nanahira ver. (´・ω ・`)
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