Hi there; going for M4M~
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Good luck on the way
Kok pake Inggris yah `-`
*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the harder diffs of the mapset..
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- ...You used clap ticks on Hard, so why not here too? I can't see any reason why.
- 00:07:155 - I personally think that adding a finish would be better here, as it actually goes well with the song. At least that's what I believe. I just feel that it fits nicely and will spice the map better.
- 00:07:853 - ^
- 00:10:876 - We can clearly hear the cymbal being played here, so why no finish to follow that?
- 00:35:760 - Uhm, add whistle here to emphasize the vocal? I also don't like how the vocal is followed to the point where there are rarely any hitsounds on this part (verse) of the song, btw, and it made me feel really weird while playing the diff, so I guess you can add whistles for some varieties. There's no must to stay using hitsounds every white tick on the verse, I believe, especially with your way of mapping this diff.
- 00:36:690 (3) - ^ (In case I need to say it again, this applies to the later stanzas.)
- 01:20:876 (5,6,1) - Considering how close (5) is to (1), won't it be a bit trapping, visually? Players might think that (6) is not really long from (1), and thus might hit them faster than expected...
- 02:13:667 (1,2,3) - Looks messy, IMO. How about this?
- 00:17:853 (1) - Remove the NC so the combo pattern will be consistent?
- 00:53:667 (1,2,3,4) - ...Is the spacing change here intentional? Feels weird to suddenly switch the spacing to 1.5x.
- 02:04:364 (4) - Uhm, the cymbal is clearly being played here. Why no finish?
- 02:43:434 - ^
Good luck on the way