Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey Miya
m4m as we said o3o

General

1. seem fine for me

[Normal]

1. 00:19:253 (6) - I wouldnt make reverse-slider here just end it on 00:19:718 and begin the spinner at 00:19:951. look better for me imo I dont want to skip the finish at 00:20:183 - :<
2. 00:55:765 (4,5) - since this is the easiest Diff wouldnt I stack these two notes. it's also not good for beginner to play too. I just would make a short slider here or unstack these This is normal, not easy :3
3. 00:57:393 (1) - also making only finish-hitsound is okay here instead of finish+whistle ok
4. 01:35:997 (6) - I would remove this slider and add a note instead and let the spinner begin at 01:36:230. I think its better imo
5. 02:00:648 (3,4) - unstack this. It may confuse the beginner with this stack
6. 02:17:393 (1,2) - blanket these notes better together Idk, fixed somehow, its already good to me.
7. 02:25:997 (4,5) - remove note (4) and move the slider there instead. sounds better for me imo Nope, following vocal.
8. 02:30:416 (1,2) - same as 02:17:393
9. 02:48:323 (4,6) - these two notes doesnt even fit with the rhythm ._. I would delete it If you listen carefully there is a beat on it
10. 03:00:183 (-) - 03:03:904 (1) - why you dont map this part? >< No vocal, fit for break.
11. 03:10:648 (4,5) - same as 00:55:765

That's all on Normal. ah also I think all these note after spinner are comimg too quickly because this is the easiest diff. may it is a bit hard for all new players. Just wanted to pointing it out ><

This is not easy :3

[Hard]

1. 00:10:416 (5) - may NC here? Break my consistencies :<
2. 00:19:951 (10,1) - I would remove these two notes and let the spinner begin there instead.
3. 00:37:393 (5,6,7,8,9) - nazi xD but make this pattern better >.< I made this using ctrl+shift+d o.o
4. 00:39:718 (-) - may add a note here? like you can hear it also fit with the rhythm too I know, but i'm following vocal at this point.
5. 00:40:648 (-) - same here
6. 01:55:997 (-) + 01:56:927 (-) - same as above
7. 02:47:160 (4) - move 1 grid right to fit it with 02:47:858 (6) Fixed
8. 03:00:183 (-) - same as Normal

Nice Diff even if I dont like thise kind of Hard xDD

Sorry for ma noobi mod >.< its also a nice map.
Good luck with rank ~ ♥

1. 00:05:299 ~ 00:20:183 - KIAI here? It's the same musical part as the chorus.

1. Notes after Spinners are too sudden, you should either leave more space between them or add an Easy to the mapset lol, while first option seems more reasonable
2. 00:17:858 (4) - 1/2 Slider seems useless to me as there is not really a good audible song, you don't need to make the diff harder than it is
3. 01:20:648 (4,5,6,1) - Really a nice idea, I like it!
4. 02:00:648 (3,4) - Hm, seems too hard. 1/4 rhythm and stacking this with the start can get really confusing for newbies, so at least try to unstack them?
5. 02:47:160 (3) - Missing a whistle on the start, dont you?
6. 02:59:718 (4) - Hm, could you change this to circles? Seems better to me so that you dont have a Slider end on the powerful point but a circle to click.
7. I feel as if this diff would be too hard to be the easiest one >< The rhythm is often a bit complex and the stacks are a bit confusing but naah, star rating is fine so I guess it's ok. :3

1. Slidertick costums should be 5 ~ 10 % quieter to match with the other hitsounds.
2. 00:10:532 (6) - Hm, this note feels odd and too much considering you followed the vocal before, remove it?
3. 01:19:834 (2) - It could be that I'm imagining things, but shouldn't this have the same angle as 01:18:788 (2) - ?
4. 02:00:532 (4) - Nazi time, but if you moved 4 a bit down it would make more of that "V" pattern you are aiming to do if I'm right.

Konei wrote:

Hellow Miya ~


[General]

1. 00:05:299 ~ 00:20:183 - KIAI here? It's the same musical part as the chorus. Don't wanna adding more kiai, too much q.q

[Normal]

1. Notes after Spinners are too sudden, you should either leave more space between them or add an Easy to the mapset lol, while first option seems more reasonable Guys, this is normal. q.q + slow bpm song
2. 00:17:858 (4) - 1/2 Slider seems useless to me as there is not really a good audible song, you don't need to make the diff harder than it is No, there is audible beat here ><
3. 01:20:648 (4,5,6,1) - Really a nice idea, I like it! <3
4. 02:00:648 (3,4) - Hm, seems too hard. 1/4 rhythm and stacking this with the start can get really confusing for newbies, so at least try to unstack them?
5. 02:47:160 (3) - Missing a whistle on the start, dont you? Oh yeah, Fixed
6. 02:59:718 (4) - Hm, could you change this to circles? Seems better to me so that you dont have a Slider end on the powerful point but a circle to click. I will consider it.
7. I feel as if this diff would be too hard to be the easiest one >< The rhythm is often a bit complex and the stacks are a bit confusing but naah, star rating is fine so I guess it's ok. :3 Normal o/ not mean for newbies

[Hard]

1. Slidertick costums should be 5 ~ 10 % quieter to match with the other hitsounds. Nice suggestion. Fixed~
2. 00:10:532 (6) - Hm, this note feels odd and too much considering you followed the vocal before, remove it? I'm sure the vocal use 1/4 rhythm here.
3. 01:19:834 (2) - It could be that I'm imagining things, but shouldn't this have the same angle as 01:18:788 (2) - ? Ups, fixed~
4. 02:00:532 (4) - Nazi time, but if you moved 4 a bit down it would make more of that "V" pattern you are aiming to do if I'm right. Too narrow Dx

That's all :3

Very lovely song Miya and good work :>

Only thing I'm worrying about is that Normal could be a bit confusing for the easiest diff but meh, should be alright.

Star star and ganbatte ~

Yasora wrote:

lempaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrr

-Umi- wrote:

LET'SU GO!

Normal

somes suggestions :3
- 00:20:416 (1) - what about finish the spinner 1/2 earlier and add a circle 00:23:904 - No thanks, it will be too suprising ><
- 00:35:067 (1) - Finish 1/2 earlier and add a circle 00:35:765 - No, adding a lot of 1/2 will increase my star rating by large amount :<
- 01:09:718 - add a circle ? or 1/2 slider same as 01:24:602 (4) -
- 01:36:695 (1) - same as 00:20:416 (1) -
- 01:51:346 (1) - same as 00:35:067 (1) -
- 02:34:602 - why this hole ? add a circle Fixed, same as Andrea mod
- 02:35:997 (1) - end at 02:37:393 - then add a circle 02:37:858 - ?
- 02:47:160 (3) - what about this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/778499 ? I don't understand what you mean by this ><

Hard

- 00:13:672 (4) - head to 84,188, center to 40,228 and tail to 28,292 I think my current position is fine ><
- 01:27:858 (8) - reverse ? You mean repeat? Ok, nice idea.
- 01:32:393 (8) - delete, it doesn't follow nothing unlike here 01:31:230 (5) - (voice) Following the background beat here.
- 03:07:509 (11) - delete No, this is perfect spot for stream
Nothing elese to say nice diff :3

That all, cute song, good work (>'-')> <('-'<)

(^з^) Chu~~ !

Miya wrote:

-Umi- wrote:

Normal

- 02:47:160 (3) - what about this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/778499 ? I don't understand what you mean by this ><

1. ...You used clap ticks on Hard, so why not here too? I can't see any reason why.
2. 00:07:155 - I personally think that adding a finish would be better here, as it actually goes well with the song. At least that's what I believe. I just feel that it fits nicely and will spice the map better.
3. 00:07:853 - ^
4. 00:10:876 - We can clearly hear the cymbal being played here, so why no finish to follow that?
5. 00:35:760 - Uhm, add whistle here to emphasize the vocal? I also don't like how the vocal is followed to the point where there are rarely any hitsounds on this part (verse) of the song, btw, and it made me feel really weird while playing the diff, so I guess you can add whistles for some varieties. There's no must to stay using hitsounds every white tick on the verse, I believe, especially with your way of mapping this diff.
6. 00:36:690 (3) - ^ (In case I need to say it again, this applies to the later stanzas.)
7. 01:20:876 (5,6,1) - Considering how close (5) is to (1), won't it be a bit trapping, visually? Players might think that (6) is not really long from (1), and thus might hit them faster than expected...
8. 02:13:667 (1,2,3) - Looks messy, IMO. How about this?

1. 00:17:853 (1) - Remove the NC so the combo pattern will be consistent?
2. 00:53:667 (1,2,3,4) - ...Is the spacing change here intentional? Feels weird to suddenly switch the spacing to 1.5x.
3. 02:04:364 (4) - Uhm, the cymbal is clearly being played here. Why no finish?
4. 02:43:434 - ^

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Miya ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

1. HP-1 much better in Hard diff. Okay
2. 01:08:550 (5,7) - Missing symmetrical.
3. 01:21:574 (1,3,4) - ^
4. 02:47:155 (4,6) - ^ All fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:20:876 (5) - Try move to X:140,Y:224,looks much better. Since a lot of people like this shape, okay then, i'll change q.q
2. 02:17:155 (6) - X:308 Y:36. no for this one ><
3. 02:48:783 (6) - Remove circle,sound much better. There is a beat on it. Feels weird if remove this.
4. 03:18:550 (6) - ^ Same reason as a above.
5. 03:09:481 (3,1) - Missing symmetrical. Really? I copy paste this when making this shape o.o Oh, well, somehow fixed.

Moe song :3

Call me back ~