Alex0686 wrote:

Take in mind that these are suggestions or opinions.

[Easy]
01:26:10 (3,4,5,6) - Move up 1 grid3.
Spinner... fix the volumes to like the other diffs.

[Normal]
Last section looks unecessary...

[Hard]
01:04:76 (1) - Whistle~
01:20:93 (Break) - IMO, it looks bad to have a break here, add a spinner right after the beat 1/8th later? (Or at least remove such a useless break, it gives a nice pause effect.

[Final Stage]
00:55:68 (3,4,5) - Move 1/2 later.

Cool map, I like it! Star~

Mukku wrote:

Hiai~!

Easy
[01:05:431] (2,3,4) Finish the beginnings and the 4

Normal
[00:50:431] (4,5,6) Delete clap from 4 and put it to 6 or 5?
[01:30:098] (5,6) Are these unsymmetrically positioned by purpose, or?

Hard
[00:22:764] (x) Add a circle?
[00:22:931] (x) ^
[00:32:764] (1,2,3,4) These are a bit oddly to the right. Move a bit to the left in grid lvl 3?

Final Stage
I found NOTHING!


~~

Absolutely fantastic maps and song!

mrtn wrote:

[normal]
00:40:09 (6,1) - unintuitive spacingfixed

[hard]
01:13:26 (7,8,9) - unintuitive spacingfixed

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
No problems found yay

[Normal]
00:45:68 - The break here doesn't fit well with the song. I suggest you map this part, and instead remove the spinner at 01:02:43 and place a break there.
No problems found done

[Final Stage(Insane)]this diff doesn't not exist
01:31:43 (17) - Remove this note then move the slider here
No problems found

[Insane]done
01:20:09 (7) - Move one grid right
01:20:26 (8) - Move two grids right
No problems found

[Final Stage]
No problems found yay =)

TERRA~ Great beatmaps. Starred

strager wrote:

IRC mod.

STAR!

jericho2442 wrote:

[Easy]
pretty much perfect

[Normal]

(suggestion) 01:25:59 (2,3) - i think these would look better if they was moved up a bit the line up with the sliders
(suggestion) 01:33:76 (3,4) - i think these look better moved down one click

[Hard]
nice and fine

[Final Stage]
again no probs found

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great maps enjoy a star

Shinde wrote:

Remove both combobursts. The resolution on -0 is not good, and -1's while better res, is still also cut out pretty badly, on top of the things I'm going to point out in a screen shot below. (As for the cursor, that one's your call. I think it's almost better to just disclude it, but. *shrug*)

SPOILER

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These white splotches should've totally been caught by a modder before this point. It's the same on comboburst-0.

Re-snap your notes on all difficulties, some aren't snapped. This is also something that should've been pointed out sooner. orz It only takes a simple Ctrl+Alt+A and 5 seconds to recognize. This stuff, like the combobursts, shouldn't be happening at +46 priority, unless this was caused by a recent small change you made. But there have been numerous mod posts the past couple days or so, and I'm suprised mrtn especially didn't notice these things, assuming they were there during that post. *sigh*

Final Stage
00:21:43 (5) - Raise volume for this section one tick.
00:42:76 (9) - These sliders don't look good IMO. Left edge particularly is too sharp. Points are a little weird. It doesn't interfere with play though, do what you want with sliders like this.
That's actually all for Insane. I found it pretty enjoyable to play.

Hard
00:50:26 (5) - Just slanted a little off.
01:39:76 (4) - New combo recommended.
01:42:47 - ^
00:53:26 (9) - ^
I actually found Hard to be Harder than Insane for whatever reason.

It's been an hour since I started modding, and I've only briefly reviewed Normal and Easy, but they seem to be alright for the most part. I'm too tired at this point to continue, so I'll end it here.

It's not as if there are any big mistakes with this map, so I will star it. I just want people to try to look a little more before they hand out stars so quickly.

Ephemeral wrote:

Is it possible for you to find another background? The current one is of quite a low quality.

Italics indicate comments and suggestions that are not particularly pressing in forms of the structural integrity of your map, but rather help it to look prettier and generally make more sense.
Bold however, indicates issues that violate ranking candidacy and are -required- to be fixed before the map is to be ranked.

[Easy]
Pretty solid difficulty from what I can see. Well constructed, no errors that I could discern.

[Normal]
00:22:09 (1) - This looks strange. Personally, I would reduce this to a single point curve since the way it is now looks very, very tacky.
00:31:76 (6) - I would advise equalizing the distance between the catmull points here and spacing it properly. Picture included.
00:40:76 (1,2,3,4) - This strikes me as just a -tad- too difficult for a normal. Remove sliders 2 and 4 to retain the pattern while keeping the difficulty in check for the other segments of the song.

[Hard]
01:46:43 (1) - Unrankable spinner - must clock at least 2000 bonus in autoplay, extend 1-2 beats
01:48:76 (1) - This also feels short. Extend to the end of the stanza, at least.

[Final Stage]
No issues that I can see.

The sliders are not particularly brilliant when you did decide to use something other than catmull and linear curves, but for the most part - they're not that horrible either. If you'd like me to go through them with you, please feel free to ask. Otherwise, I'll end this mod post as is with a well-deserved star. Good luck!

Kytoxid wrote:

Being picky:

[Easy]

No issues.

[Normal]

00:12:26 (3,4,4,4) - Felt kinda fast for the start of a Normal map, maybe move these notes back by 1/2.

[Hard]

00:38:09 (1,2) - Line these up with the end of slider 4, maybe, although that'd throw off distance snap. Aesthetics vs. snapping, your call.
01:46:43 (1) - Fast spinner is too fast.

[Final Stage]

00:37:09 (x) - A 2-beat spinner here barely passes the 2k bonus test, and makes it feel a little less empty, although it leaves little room for the next note. (hey, it's your hardest difficulty)

Star.

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

[Easy]

00:32:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Double check the shape here. There was a gap of space between (2) and (4) and thinking the shape might have got slightly warped.

[Hard]

00:58:43 (4,5,6) - Looks a bit odd compared to 00:57:76 (1,2,3).

The map seems good so far, but another thing i'm wondering about is that the background for the map is 640 x 480, which is quite small but its not that bad at least. Just make sure to double check for any other needed changes before asking me again.

eee wrote:

I cannot find anything wrong with the map ;_;

only thing I "really" found was that the kiai times in [Normal] and [Hard] (I think) ended pretty early. That, or [Final Stage] and [Easy] ended late. I like the longer ones, make kiai consistent in all difficulties.

that is all.
Hopefully you can finish the map when you get back, this map looks perfect.
mmmyeah, I'll just star

Blue Dragon wrote:

Easy
00:35:43 (5,6,7) - Move them out, square is bad done
00:43:43 (7,1) - spacing... wtf?fixed
00:44:76 (2,3) - Make (2) a slider and end it at where (3) is, removing (3)done
01:37:43 (8) - new combodone

Normal
00:28:43 (4,5) - ... watfixed
01:10:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - this is really hard for a normalnah

Hard/FinalStage
Nothing here yay

JarJarJacob wrote:

01:48:76 (1) - The inherited points on this spinner change on every difficulty for no good reason. fixed

Hard:

00:55:09 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing change that doesn't make sense.fixed
01:03:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove, the break should be longer.fixed
01:32:76 - Move kiai start to here.fixed
01:43:26 (6) - MESSY SAHUIOFJDA fixe

Final Stage:

Add hitsounds to the beginning. Please.
00:18:09 (1,2) - Nobody like slider speed changes.