lkx_shore wrote:

看了Zero__wind的mod,我感觉我也得蛋疼一次
接下来说的东西可能听起来会不爽,但也请认真思考

作图可以跟什么音轨?
1.人声
2.鼓点
3.曲中其他乐器

问：Easy/Normal该跟什么轨？

答：统一1.0x间距,Easy可以1/1摆满,Normal 1/2适当摆摆

问:我跟了会人声又跟了会鼓点,这样可以吗?

答：可以,只要听起来自然

一个图的滑条风格最好保持一致，一部分全放弯滑条一部分全放直滑条看起来怪奇怪的.
当然你也可以不保持一致,类似happy30那种摆法也可以.
但我感觉你还不太会统一风格.所以还是得从最基础的学起.

kiai time的线一定要对齐,否则unrank
00:29:652开始,在00:57:220结束
01:26:409开始,在01:53:976结束
01:57:220开始,在02:15:057结束

怎样让弯滑条美观？让我们来包note,就像这样

一个note，在外圈旁边拉滑条，让滑条的边绕着外圈，这样就是包note


[Normal]
00:03:707 (1) - 加finish (finish的用法有很多，大白线加finish就是其中一种
00:10:193 (2) - 加finish
00:11:815 (2) - 滑条尾部的clap呢?
00:12:626 (3) - ^
00:12:626 (3,4) - 这样是不是美观点？多用这种滑条.

00:14:045 (5) - 拉到00:14:449就好停了
00:20:734 (5) - 把4拉好,然后把4旋转180度再ctrl+g,哦对,这里别折回了.不然打1的时候会很绕
00:25:598 (6) - NC
00:27:220 (8) - 在00:27:625开始
01:23:165 (5) - 没拉好 不明白？是要拉直吗？
01:32:895 (3) - 用滑条在这起,带到01:33:301 no~我觉得原地挺好
01:47:286 (1) - ..
01:53:165 (1) - nc,折返跳一般加nc提示
01:58:030 (6) - 很绕手 努力想出来的梗了啦
02:11:003 (6) - ^
02:11:814 (2,3) - 砍了重做吧
00:29:045 (1,2,3) - 这样堆起一坨是不好看的...你可以这样摆来试试

kiai time部分的美观性比以前好多了.可在我的标准看来还不过关.多试试拉弯滑条吧

00:36:139 (3) - 漏了clap.2/4clap一般情况下一个都不能漏 已换用别的SE
00:42:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 都拉弯点,会好看很多
00:51:139 (7) - 漏clap 已换用别的SE
00:55:193 (2) - 在00:55:395 (3) - 开始,并且加上finish
00:55:193 (2,3) - 不错,对称的确会美观，只可惜你2对不上节奏 ok
00:56:409 (3) - 头尾都加上finish
01:00:464 (1) - finish
01:04:315 (4,5,6) - 都加上whistle (whistle通常用来强化这个音.可以用在歌曲感情部分深的地方/起伏处 已换用别的SE
01:02:895 (1,2,3) - 不知道normal能不能这样摆，但是善良点比较好lol ok
01:08:572 (5) - 这种的确不好看啊...;_;扭成一团我想没多少人会喜欢,而且扭曲得太厉害还会导致看不清滑条轨迹.
01:17:491 (4,5,6) - 这里就挺好的,但把6换成←↙↓这样弯的滑条就完美了
01:19:923 (3,5) - 如果弧度不是很大的滑条,一般都是放中间的,你放在边缘的话最好还是拉成弯点的
01:23:976 (1) - 在01:25:598停,顺便调调绿线
01:39:383 (1,2,3) - 折滑条最好红点放在滑条的正中间开始折.你这样折的话红点放在1/4处,曲度要在30~45度之间才好看
01:54:179 - 加上break time

第二个kiai time也只是因为滑条不够弯所以显得有点...拉弯点就不错了

[Insane]
00:03:706 (6) - 头finish
00:03:706 (6,7,1) - 不好看 no
00:04:516 (1,2,3) - 这样也不太好看，这种情况一般是这样叠

00:31:274 (3) - 这种滑条还可以这样折 已经改成其他的梗了，不过这样的折法学习到了

00:37:962 (6) - 不合节奏,在00:38:166起,带到00:38:571还是正确的带过方式
00:40:193 (7,8,2,3) - 叠好
00:40:193 (7,8,2,3) - 全都对称小跳会好很多 已经忘了你在看到这4个时它是什么样了，我貌似改过很多次，现在的看来还不错

[Other]
不错,你进步很快,多看看正常图学梗就可以了.

lkx_shore wrote:

困......上次忘了再回来检查....我还是再看看全图.

mark

随便看了下.

Easy现在好像是规定要用1/1.
Normal还说得过去,可以不用理
Zero's hard的质量不错,但还是有unrank的梗（22号下午我再mod）,总体难度偏向简单insane.(这作图技术进步速度好像飞升啊)
Insane的话...你现在阅历已经多很多了,我推荐你现在remap.
旧的in不要动(随便改个名扔一边)要是新做的质量比以前的好,你就把新做的in替换掉旧的.

GL

Nanika133 wrote:

A small mod
As usual, only suggestions, I don't force you...

Normal:
00:11:409 (1) - Stack it maybe on 00:10:193 (2)? ok
00:29:044 (1,2,3) - Don't like how it is, more spacing between the notes? Sorry,because Normal must keep the same spacing
00:42:220 (1,2) - Symmetry please. ok
01:15:058 (6) - Take it down Like that maybe I stretched it
01:29:653 (2) - Appreciatively x:156 y:64 Considering about the symmetry,some early notes moved to fit them
01:38:774 (6) - Up Sorry,because Normal must keep the same spacing
01:49:923 (3) - Bad flow, move it to the left ok


Normal: Maybe you mean the diff of 'Zero's Hard' ? I'll tell him
00:17:084 (1,2) - Exchange their places.
00:39:382 (2,3,4) - Don't stack please
01:37:355 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Really weird jumps
01:59:652 (9) - Stack or put it away


Insane:
00:08:773 (1,2,3) - Align them maybe? ok
00:51:948 (4) - Why not round like 00:50:530 (1)? cuz this slider is not as long as that,so it can only be shaped like current
01:47:286 (1) - ^ because I see it more like a rugby ball... fixed
02:05:125 (4) - Symmetry ok

That's all
Hope I was usefull

Sherry wrote:

hi, sorry to have written in Japanese.

Easy

SPOILER

00:12:625 (1) - 00:14:247 (2)　次のcircleへの方向が悪いので、カーブを直す ok

00:15:057 (3) 下に移動した後、上方向は変わりすぎなので左上ぐらいにするまあ、そんなにはないと思います

00:17:490 (3)　ずれているので、もう少し下 or 右下に配置　(move circle to lower right)正確な場所がよくわからないので、ちょっとそう移動しました

01:26:409 (1) 　01:23:976 (1) にあわせて中央にしましょう (move center) ok

01:26:409 (1) - 01:28:030 (1) きれいに重ねたほうがいいと思います。 01:28:030 (1)を右に移動？(overlay) ok

Normal

SPOILER

-----
General
00:06:949 (1) - 00:11:004 (4)
00:23:571 (4) - 00:26:815 (7)
00:30:463 (1) - 00:34:923 (4)
01:02:895 (1) - 01:05:530 (3)
01:09:383 (1) - 01:16:680 (3)
配置がゆがんでいます。(Rearrangement)
-----

00:11:409 (1) ニューコンボを消す (remove new combo) ok

00:12:626 (3) ニューコンボ (new combo) ok

00:15:463 (1) - 00:17:085 (3) 重ねる、難しくなるようなら配置を変える ok

00:45:869 (5) new comboこのかずのNotesはやり直しました
00:47:896 (1) remove new combo ^
00:48:301 (2) new combo^

00:54:787 (1) このサークルを消して一休みするなどを所々いれるといいかもしれません。 (remove circle and next new combo)いいえ、SEがありますから

02:06:545 (7) new combo?
02:08:166 (1) remove new combo?
02:10:193 (3) new combo?
02:11:612 (1) remove new combo?All fixed

02:12:220 (2) どうせなら中央揃え ( not center )このぐらいでは大丈夫だと思います

Zero's Hard

• これ、GDなのでGuestにお伝えします

SPOILER

-----
General
コンボが長い (it long combo)
00:02:693 (1) - 00:03:706 (1)　スタートはじめにこれは難しすぎます。Hardの難易度ではありません。　(this is Insane which is not Hard)

00:04:112 (2) - 00:04:517 (3) 遠い違和感のあるジャンプです (it far ,not jump)
00:08:166 (3) - 00:08:368 (4) 同じ ( same)
少し距離を短くするといいかもしれません。 (it over 2.0x please change under 2.0x)
-----

Insane

SPOILER

-----
General
1. 全体的にジャンプ単発が多い。　近い単発と遠い単発で差をつけるときれいになると思います。実はこれ、試作品なのでこのままで置くと思います。あまり変更したくないです

2. 重ねたほうがいいところが数多くあります。見直してみてください。　　ex( 00:09:381 (3) - 00:11:003 (2) )ok
-----

New

SPOILER

-----
General
Insaneと難しさおよび開始のパターンが同じです。　作りかけ？　(change Difficulty)原因は上の言うのです
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• Modしてくれてありがとうございます

Nanika133 wrote:

SPOILER

Normal: Oh my diff is so simple that it looks like a Normal =.=
00:17:084 (1,2) - Exchange their places. nope, I want to make those notes clockwise
00:39:382 (2,3,4) - Don't stack please changed placement
01:37:355 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Really weird jumps attcually it was decortely designed =.=
01:59:652 (9) - Stack or put it away stacked properly

fixed
Thx for your mod~

Sherry wrote:

SPOILER

Zero's Hard

-----
General
コンボが長い (it long combo) fixed, Add NC totally again fromthe start to the end
00:02:693 (1) - 00:03:706 (1)　スタートはじめにこれは難しすぎます。Hardの難易度ではありません。　(this is Insane which is not Hard) changed pattern

00:04:112 (2) - 00:04:517 (3) 遠い違和感のあるジャンプです (it far ,not jump) hmm, I intended to make gap-jumps like this, so.. sorry for not changing
00:08:166 (3) - 00:08:368 (4) 同じ ( same) ^
少し距離を短くするといいかもしれません。 (it over 2.0x please change under 2.0x) the BPM is not high and the sv neither, so 2.5x is not that unfriendly I think. I've got some friends playtested this and it worked out fine for players who are not pro
-----

fixed
Thx for your mod~

Banana wrote:

Hi~ Banana here from QQ (啦啦啦

[General]

normal:
PreviewTime: 28746
Tags:Astronaut Simple Plan
other:
PreviewTime: 28804
Tags:Astronaut Simple Plan Get Your Heart On! Zero__wind

Astronaut 以及 Simple Plan 已经是Artist 和Title了 从tag中删除
专辑名填tag, Source 留空 fixed

已经用不到的bookmark可以考虑删了 我强迫症犯了挑一下啦啦啦~_(:з」∠)_

[New]

这次挑细节（slap 不是 就是把没注意的高级玩意拿出来说一下..
00:04:517 (2) - blanket包的时候稍微花点功夫修一下 而且这个滑条尾巴和上一个combo的(5)靠的比较近 视觉暂留什么应该是懂的 于是我改成了这样，包圆弧可以参考收缩那个圈 fixed，有时候懒了就没做到非常贴切._.
再啰嗦两句 mod接多了找泡的时候 没什么可挑的话 排列细节看着舒服的话比较容易泡 还没见过泡的路过
00:07:963 (6) - 既然是绕圆弧了 干脆把上面的复制粘贴然后转180°跳一下？这边似乎跳着打着舒服180°直接成对角跳了诶……只稍微增大了这两个slider的间距
00:08:976 (8) - 咱也直白点..嗯 不喜欢这种stack 而且在一句结尾的时候移动方向突然反着拐回去有点不合适 推荐的位置是下一个combo的(5)no，‘sel~f’，这样跳未尝不可，而且之前是2/2的Slider，之后还有一个空拍，并不难
00:16:679 (2) - 我不喜欢这种stack 嘛 用的好确实打起来会有乐趣 不过移动角度应该是比stack这种排列上的东西优先度高 有那么多地方可以放为什么一定是stack 比如这里 我就想把它放到 x:488 y:231 去no，这点小地方堆叠真不算什么啊……
嘛 倒是可以理解成咱用stack用的不好所以才这么说 ...
细节问题：00:16:476 (1) - stack的话 可以把这个删了然后重新摆 滑条也是 这边开头拉过去然后ctrl+g 我强迫症又犯了待定

突然想起来有点事..然后这次先不要给kd 下次我补起来再说

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there, from my mod queue.

[General]
I noticed that the spinner at 02:15:056 (1) in all diffs (except Zero's Hard) ends at 02:16:679. I think it would be better if it ended at 02:18:301 instead.i made the spinner earlier

[Easy]
00:50:733 (1) Copy and paste this slider here? remapped
00:54:787 (1) Move the start of this spinner to 00:55:598?:arrow:
01:16:679 (4) New combo.ok

[Normal]
00:15:869 (2) Move this to (92, 70), like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/555264:arrow:ok
00:17:085 (3) Why not stack this on top of 1? Decrease the stack leniency if you don't want the "stack effect" to occur.ok
00:20:733 (5,6) Distance between them is x1.11. Please move them closer a little.ok

[Insane]
00:55:395 (1) Move start of spinner to 00:55:598 and add a circle here with same position as 00:54:786 (1)?
01:11:814 (6) New combo.
01:12:219 (1) Remove new combo.
01:22:557 (2,3) Ctrl + G.Sorry I deleted this diff,the previous ’new' replaced it as Insane

I hope this helps! Good luck!

• 
  * Unsnapped timing points (in the format: current timing points => correctly snapped timing points) These may or may not apply to all difficulties, but they were in some and they need to be snapped:
  00:28:804 => 00:28:841
  01:00:425 => 01:00:463
  01:57:119 => 01:57:220
  02:15:020 and/or 02:15:108 => 02:15:057
  I think it would lead to a better introduction if the difficulties started at 00:03:301 instead, since that's where the guitar starts. Just a thought.

• 
  00:09:787 (2) Maybe have a 1 beat slider and then a circle a beat later, instead of a 2 beat slider.
  00:11:003 (3) Extend this by a beat? It kind of feels odd having a three beat gap, coming from 2 beat gaps earlier.
  * 00:27:625 (1) I feel that it would be much better if this was extended to 00:29:652
  01:20:733 (3,4) Its generally not a good idea to have more than one repeat on a slider in an Easy or Normal. Also, you could have made these symmetrical, if you decide to keep it that way.
  * 01:28:030 (1,2,3) Keep it in a triangle like 01:26:409 (1,2,3) for the sake of consistency.
  01:37:760 (5) Just a thought, but you could make a diamond shape with this, 2,3, and 4 like this (Not perfect, but you'll get the idea).
  01:41:814 (1,2) I think that 2 should be the new combo, not 1.
  01:45:057 (1,2) ^
  01:56:409 (1,2) Kind of like I suggested in the beginning, deleting these two might lead to a better introduction from the break.
  * 02:00:057 (3,1) I think a better rhythmic pattern would be (circle-2 beat slider-circle) instead of (2 beat slider-1 beat slider). If this is done right, it would still take up the same amount of space.

• 
  00:03:503 If you are going to keep the introduction, I suggest that you add a circle here since you're following the lyrics and there's a lyric here so without one (or without something to occupy the space), it doesn't feel right.
  00:12:626 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) Just a thought, but it might be better if you continued to follow the guitar here to keep consistency with the verse.
  00:18:706 It would follow the guitar better if you added a circle here. It feels too empty without one and doesn't feel right.
  00:38:976 (3,4) See 01:20:733 (In Easy)
  00:43:841 (3,4) Maybe this might be a better rhythm?
  00:56:409 (5) You should probably change the rhythm to a 1 beat slider and then a circle a beat later instead of a 2 beat slider.
  01:04:314 (1) Something doesn't fit right with the rhythm. I suggest than you delete this slider, and add two circles (at 01:04:112 and 01:04:517 )
  01:09:383 (1,2,3,4) See 00:12:626 Above
  01:16:680 (3) Kind of nazi, but I think it might look better if this was on the same y-axis as 2.
  01:19:923 (3) Maybe make a zig-zag type pattern like this?
  01:44:044 It might improve the rhythm if there was a circle here, and then 01:45:058 (1) was left with just a circle at the start point instead of a 1/2 repeat slider.
  01:51:545 (1) I don't feel like this spinner fits too well.
  01:56:410 (1) Like I've said previously, it might improve the introduction from the break if this was deleted, or at least just leave a circle at the endpoint.
  01:57:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and 02:00:058 (1,2,3,4) I think it might be better if these were consistent in rhythm, but it might be fine as is. It was just bugging me.
  * 02:05:734 (5,6) These should probably be stacked to keep consistency with 02:04:112 (2,3)

• 
  00:02:693 (1,2,3,1,2) If you're going to keep the introduction, I suggest that you keep these at the same distance spacing. Also, the new combo for the blue combo should start at 3, not 1.
  00:06:544 (2,3) This jump isn't really necessary, imo.
  * 00:13:436 (3) It would be much better if this ended at the red tick (a 1/4 beat earlier) instead of the blue tick.
  00:36:949 (5) Might be better if it was something like this instead? (The screenshot is not intended to be perfect, it is just to give you a general idea.)
  * 00:39:382 (2) Please use a normal distance spacing between 1 and 2. It give the impression that 3 is a 1/2 beat away as well, making it really awkward.
  00:52:760 (4) Basically the same general idea as ^ But I'm not quite sure...
  00:59:449 (1,2,3,1,2) See 00:02:693 Above
  01:26:004 (2,3) Maybe you forgot to use the same spacing here as the spacing between 1 and 2?
  01:45:868 (1) I was expecting this to be around a similar y-axis as 3 and 4 according to the pattern set by 01:43:841 (2,3,4,1) and 01:44:449 (1,2,3,4) -
  * 01:49:720 (3) I think it would flow more smoothly with the rhythm if this was deleted.

• 
  00:03:706 (1) If you are going to keep the introduction, I think it would look better you would continue the zigzag pattern here from 00:02:693 (1,2,3,4,5)
  00:06:139 (1,2) This seems weird stacked. Maybe either unstack this or stack this with 3.
  00:06:747 (4) I'm not sure if that big of a jump is needed. You can use the 1.8X distance space if you want, but it might not be too important, I just thought I might as well point that out.
  00:12:625 (1,2) Maybe just stack with 3?
  00:29:145 (2) This isn't needed, so I suggest that you just remove it. (Although I do personally like it as is)
  00:30:564 (4) ^
  * 00:32:895 (2,3) Imo, it would sound better if these were shortened to the red ticks. It sounds too weird when ending on the blue ticks.
  * 00:39:787 (4,5,6) There is no reason (that I could see) why the endpoints should be silenced, ESPECIALLY when it wasn't done on 00:39:382 (3)
  00:39:382 (3) to 00:55:598 This feels too empty. Add something please.
  * 01:36:139 (1,2,3) See 00:39:787 Above, except that 5 obviously doesn't need to be silenced so you can ignore the last part.
  Honestly, I think you over mapped it a little with all those unneeded triplets (like the ones discussed earlier). Try and only use them where you see them fit with the music/rhythm (if they are all going with the rhythm, then sorry about that. )

yanlu wrote:

[Zero's Hard]

00:04:720 (2)- dele改成00:04:922- 的note 没有改=。=想保持和后面一致的空拍-跳的结构
00:06:341 (1,2,3)- 不好讀(擋住了)..可以試排在別的地方 这个其实是为HDmod设计的=。=none的话……都能打hard了 这点遮挡还带NC的应该大丈夫吧 而且我完全是顺手摆的=。=顺时针转个圈而已
00:07:355 (5)- 後移然後 00:07:355- note?
(或是00:06:949 (4)- 反折一次) 这个提案我觉得比上面的好
00:12:017 (4)- 往後移然後原來的地方加個note 这个还要下面那条我都按着你说的改了 然后发现你是想跟歌词里的单词发音……但是我跟的是伴奏=。=所以不太想打乱了节奏型……
00:13:030 (1,2,3)- 試試(刪掉1.2然後3後面)做成這樣.. http://puu.sh/1JQcs

• Thx for your mod !

• Thx for your mod !

1. Storyboard lyrics contains unecessary transparency. Crop them as minimal as they could.
2. Some of the storyboard lyrics blends too much to BG and render it rather invisible, fix please. Maybe try adding drop shadow/glow/stroke or smf like that?

1. 00:29:652 - end - Slider ends are unsnapped. Seems that you make an SV change and then changed it after you make the sliders, so now it rendered wrong. Be careful when utilizing SV changes, ok.
2. 00:03:706 (1) - RNC
3. 00:04:517 (2,1) - Stack these?
4. 00:24:382 (4) - Curve assymetric. Fix please.
5. 00:35:328 (4) - ^
6. 00:53:166 (3) - Clap on slider start?
7. 01:55:193 - Remove break here?

1. 00:16:274 (5) - Drum finish on slider end?
2. 00:23:166 (5) - Drum finish on slider start?
3. 00:24:382 (6) - Whistle sounds unfitting here o3o
4. 00:27:625 (8) - ^
5. 00:39:179 (1,2,3) - Totally no, this is jump annd then anti-jump. Breaks flow too much here
6. 00:46:882 (3) - Move to 00:47:084 - and remove repeat?
7. 01:21:139 (7,8) - Again, whistle sounds unfitting.
8. 01:26:409 (1,2) - spacing
9. 01:26:409 (1,2,3) - overlap o3o
10. 01:50:733 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - confusing imo
11. 02:11:003 (3,4) - spacing

inverness wrote:

Mod request from our queue ヽ( ・∀・)ﾉ

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

General

1. Storyboard lyrics contains unecessary transparency. Crop them as minimal as they could.
2. Some of the storyboard lyrics blends too much to BG and render it rather invisible, fix please. Maybe try adding drop shadow/glow/stroke or smf like that? I'll look for some time to make it.Modifying pictures takes time.

Easy

1. 00:29:652 - end - Slider ends are unsnapped. Seems that you make an SV change and then changed it after you make the sliders, so now it rendered wrong. Be careful when utilizing SV changes, ok. I'll pay attention.All fixed
2. 00:03:706 (1) - RNC ok
3. 00:04:517 (2,1) - Stack these? ok
4. 00:24:382 (4) - Curve assymetric. Fix please. fixed
5. 00:35:328 (4) - ^ fixed
6. 00:53:166 (3) - Clap on slider start? yeah,I just forgot
7. 01:55:193 - Remove break here? not necessary

Normal
No problems found.

Insane
No problems found.

I love the song :3 so I'm giving you my star o3o
(╯ ´ ・ω ・`)╯ 彡 ☆

Good luck!

-Kirito wrote:

Hi From Mod team/M4M(Taiko/Osu), guest diff (Taiko/Osu/CTB)
Please ignore my modding!

[Easy]
00:29:652 - ~ End - To align the slide line. Yeah,All fixed

[Normal]
00:09:383 (1) - NC remove
00:10:193 (2) - NC not necessary
00:18:098 (1) - Arrow Remove? no,to follow the guitar
00:19:922 (5) - NC? ok
01:00:869 (2) - Slide the tail Clap add
01:02:895 (1) - Slide head Clap add
01:04:314 (1) - Slide the tail Clap add
01:06:139 (1) - Clap
01:07:761 (4) - Slide head Clap add
01:09:383 (1) - ^
01:12:625 (2) - Clap
01:13:030 (3) - Slide head Clap and tail Finish Finish Added
01:19:923 (3) - Slide head Finish Finish Added
01:20:734 (4) - Clap
01:22:356 (1) - Slide head Clap
01:23:166 (3) - Slide head Finish Finish Added
02:13:436 (6) - NC and Silde all finish? ok
Sorry but I don't like the clap for normal here,'cuz I think them a little too noisy

[Insane]
01:16:780 (2) - remove? (Nothing bit) ok
Then please Clap work.

Ranked Hope!

• General
  
  Offset: 2070 (Sounds much better.). Do not forget to resnap the timing points!

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue!

General SB

"In this search" is correct lyrics of "Lyric_In the search for someone else .png"
"I'm deafened by the silence" is the correct lyrics of "Lyric_I'm deaf from all the silence .png" these fixed
I suggest to make the lyrics white or more bright since you cant see the text fully after I replied to inverness's mod, I've made the lyrics brighter and surrounding with little light.I don't think lyrics need to be bright enough, becauze it might disturb the playing

Easy

00:07:760 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:544 (1) - ^ add on next element
00:49:922 (5) - NC
00:51:544 (1) - Remove NC
00:49:922 (5) - NC remove next
01:50:328 (5) - ^ All done

Normal

00:54:382 (4) - Stack this with the preview circle
00:56:409 (1) - Remove NC all done

Hard I'm waiting for the guest's response

SPOILER

00:02:895 (2,3) - Ctrl + G them to make a better transition
00:37:760 (3,4) - Delete these and put the next slider here 00:37:760 - to fit up with the vocal 00:38:976 - Then add a circle here
00:42:220 (1) - Imo this is a too big jump, Ctrl + G it and move it up
00:59:651 (2,3) - Like 00:02:895 (2,3) -
01:07:355 (1) - Spacing, dont make such an antijump
01:45:868 (1) - Move this a bit lower, since its going into the HP Bar
02:12:828 (1,2,3,1) - This is totally invisible, move them up or down where you can see them better
02:15:159 (1) - Let this spinner end at 02:18:301 - since you did on other diffs too

Insane

00:39:280 (2) - Delete this note, doesnt fit
00:42:220 (1,2,3) - I suggest to make a 1/2 reserved slider instead of this pattern fixed
00:51:747 (5) - Vocal starts at 00:51:949 - fixed
00:53:267 (4) - Delete this circle, doesnt fit here
01:09:280 (2) - ^
01:12:321 (3) - ^
01:29:652 (1,2,3,4) - Sorry but did you map here totally blind? This doesnt fit at all and breaks the flow fully ok
02:05:632 (4) - Delete this circle
02:07:862 (2) - ^
02:11:105 (6) - ^ all unnecessary circles removed
Send me a PM once youre done

Banana wrote:

SPOILER

书接上回（你够了..拖这么久居然还敢过来
[Zero's Hard]
音效音量有必要再调整 第一条kiai前后没理由差这么多 后面稍微大了 前面小了很多 后面比前面大才是对的 因为verse1根本没有鼓点而verse2有 不是么
01:17:490 - 若干无用绿线 又加了几条 这样就有用了 不知道当时怎么会做乱套了
00:06:341 (1) - (1,2,3)等边三角形？ fixed
00:24:382 (6) - 这么一串都whistle好吵，长白线的地方加个绿线改s音效 还好 我已经特意为了whistle降低音量了
00:50:125 (4) - 往右下移 (5)反向 fixed
00:52:760 (4) - 一样的间距 节奏不同 前面00:39:179 (1,2) 看起来还不太容易坑 这边各种stack就ng了 改起来也不是很难建议还是改了 fixed
01:17:490 (1) - 反人类 大改
01:27:220 (2) - ng的间距（大概看了下 这里开始有很多读图不清楚的地方 请test三次然后self check） 改了一个地方 其他的还好 我从来都会自己测很多次的 而且是开HD测

Thx for your mod

inverness wrote:

SPOILER

Zero's Hard

1. 00:16:274 (5) - Drum finish on slider end? you're right I think I mistapped a W as an E
2. 00:23:166 (5) - Drum finish on slider start? nope, I don't feel like that
3. 00:24:382 (6) - Whistle sounds unfitting here o3o =.= I think it's alright, I lower the volume of it after all
4. 00:27:625 (8) - ^ also not changing
5. 00:39:179 (1,2,3) - Totally no, this is jump annd then anti-jump. Breaks flow too much here Q^Q they used to stack, and was critisized, and they seperate, still NG...I'll reconsider abotu the jump. Not coming up with good ideas now
6. 00:46:882 (3) - Move to 00:47:084 - and remove repeat? atually you got the same opinion with me. I was just thinking about changing it like this
7. 01:21:139 (7,8) - Again, whistle sounds unfitting. not changing
8. 01:26:409 (1,2) - spacing changed pattern
9. 01:26:409 (1,2,3) - overlap o3o now they might be OK
10. 01:50:733 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - confusing imo not really, theyre just clockwise
11. 02:11:003 (3,4) - spacing

changed pattern

Thx for your mod~

-Kirito wrote:

SPOILER

[Hard]
01:49:720 (3,4) - Interval this is consistent to the former jumps, with 2.50x
very good ^_^

Thx for your mod~

BounceBabe wrote:

SPOILER

Hard

00:02:895 (2,3) - Ctrl + G them to make a better transition sorry I don't feel like that
00:37:760 (3,4) - Delete these and put the next slider here 00:37:760 - to fit up with the vocal 00:38:976 - Then add a circle here
00:42:220 (1) - Imo this is a too big jump, Ctrl + G it and move it up[/color] yeah your're right, fixed in another way
00:59:651 (2,3) - Like 00:02:895 (2,3) - also not changing, sorry
01:07:355 (1) - Spacing, dont make such an antijump
01:45:868 (1) - Move this a bit lower, since its going into the HP Bar change the slider's shape a bit and now it's fine
02:12:828 (1,2,3,1) - This is totally invisible, move them up or down where you can see them better I suppose it's only for the HDmod player the notes with differnet combo color with the slider may not be so confusing in Hard diff I think.
02:15:159 (1) - Let this spinner end at 02:18:301 - since you did on other diffs too[/color] fixed, honestly I didn't even notice this consistency problem
[b]
[/color]

Thx for your mod~

1. i think you wrong BPM. BPM is 148.000

1. 00:06:747 (4) - move to x:196 y:288. more beautiful placement.
   　
2. 00:08:368 (7,8) - move to x:28 y:140. ^
   　
3. 00:11:206 (6) - like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   　
4. 00:15:057 (1) - this placement is strange. move to 00:14:449 (6) - slider's end.
   　
5. 01:01:882 (4) - stack in 01:01:274 (2) -
   　
6. 01:33:706 (4,6) - Incomplete stack.
   　
7. 01:46:476 (2) - add clap slider end.
   　
8. 01:50:530 (2) - Incomplete stack.

1. 00:09:382 (5,6) - not match with song. suggestion
   
   SPOILER

   
   　　　00:09:382 - 1/2 slider and 1 repeat,
   　　　00:09:990 - add note.
   
   　
2. 01:12:220 (3) - add clap of slider end.
   　
3. 01:22:760 (4,6) - hide repeat allow by (4)'s hit burst. maybe unrankble staff.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:09:383 (1) - remove NC
   　
2. 00:10:193 (2) - NC
   　
3. 00:11:409 (5) - Incomplete stack.
   　
4. 01:45:057 (1,2) - bad spacing

1. 00:02:895 - ~ 00:28:841 - why you not use hitsound? you used whistle in Insane diff.
   　
2. 01:26:409 (1) - add finish.
   　
3. 01:54:326 - remove green line.

Gero wrote:

SPOILER

[Hard]
(*) 00:02:693 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think this is too uncomfortable to play u.u changed to another way
(*) 00:22:557 (2,3,4,5) - I LIKE THIS *W* glad for that~
Nice Diff Zero :3 thx~

Thx for your mod~

Guy wrote:

SPOILER

[Zero's Hard]

• 
  
  　

1. 00:09:382 (5,6) - not match with song. suggestion
   　　　00:09:382 - 1/2 slider and 1 repeat,
   　　　00:09:990 - add note.
   fixed, nice suggestion
   　
2. 01:12:220 (3) - add clap of slider end. you're right, I missed that
   　
3. 01:22:760 (4,6) - hide repeat allow by (4)'s hit burst. maybe unrankble staff.

yeah, that is a problem, I did small placement changes to the notes, and now it may be better. Hope it iwill be OK now.

Thx for your mod~

Dark Fang wrote:

HAI

[Zero's Hard]

00:04:517 (1,2) - that pattern will be confuse players. I recommend remove (1) circle and adjust timeline like Sorry I love this gap-jump pattern, not changing
00:11:003 (1,2) - same opinion as above. players confused by this pattern cuz note color and distance. neither
00:12:017 (4) - adjust this slider be cover round 00:10:598 (7) - this circle. feel like I see, fixed
01:23:166 (6) - well... this slider's arrow was covered by 01:22:760 (4) - circle's hit effect. that's too difficult for change. Tenporarily changed sv from 0.75x to 1.0x for the slider and everything's alright now
02:12:828 (1,2,3) - eh... that's so confusion pattern for play. don't overlap with slider[/color] Although I think they're only for HD mod players... but changed because this is pointed more than once.
well.. this is good map. but as we can see, that jumps too difficult for Hard diff - that looks like Insane - .consider that, reduce difficulty It will be fine imo, because the basic difficulty setting in F4 is low I think. I prefer to make a Hard diff which is easy to pass but challenging to FC, so I made this.

1. Disable the letterbox during breaks

• - 01:43:436 (4) - I'm not really fan with these type of sliders, try something like this
  - 01:49:922 (4) - This note is making a overlap with the previous object, maybe move in another place?
  - 01:51:544 (2) - You forgot to add a clap here?
  - 02:10:193 (1) - Replace this whistle for a finish, sounds better

• - 00:54:990 (3) - This pattern is hard to be a Normal, my suggestion is delete this note
  - 01:23:976 (1) - Move this spinner to the red tick
  - 01:41:003 (3) - Make this slider consistent with the others sliders
  - 01:44:044 (3) - Ups, another note, as I said is hard to newbies players in my opinion, remove it
  - 02:10:193 (1) - Replace this whistle for a finish

• - 01:19:922 (5) - The others notes have the same spacing too, why you make this slider with the same spacing?, also add a new combo

• - 01:42:220 (2) - Reduce the spacing here, the rhythm is too quick
  - 01:43:841 (2) - Same ^
  - 01:57:625 (2) - ^

MoodyRPG wrote:

SPOILER

Zero's Hard
- 01:19:922 (5) - The others notes have the same spacing too, why you make this slider with the same spacing?, also add a new combo fixed

Thx for your mod~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

SPOILER

[Zero's Hard]

1. 00:39:179 (1,2,3) - Too weird jump with 1/2,1/1 rhythm in hard diff. when they stack, NG... no they jump, NG either... OK then they become obeying DS now =.=
2. 01:05:733 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end point). oops! How did I do this
3. 01:22:760 (4,6) - Overlapping with slider body,looks much better,like this. OK fixed, though I'm really afraid of the overlapping with the reverse arrow
4. 01:26:206 (3) - Not perfect stack on 01:24:382 (8) - end point. fixed

Thx for your mod~

Sonnyc wrote:

Easy:

00:15:057 (3) - Delete Whistle
00:21:544 (1) - Whistle should be at the end
01:42:625 (2) - NC starting here will be better, considering the slider pattern

Normal:

00:23:976 (5) - NC
01:09:991 (2) - I suggest to put NC at here, since you follow lyrics from here
01:10:396 (3) - Whistle
01:10:802 (4) - Whistle at the reverse
01:29:247 (1) - Why 1.20x?

Insane:

00:35:733 (3) - Make this a line with (1,2)
00:54:179 (6) - Place at the end of (5)
01:33:909 (5) - ctrl+G for consistency of mapping
01:52:355 (1,1) - I can't hear these clearly. Maybe raise volume

Sonnyc wrote:

Zero's Hard:

01:38:976 (2,3) - Slider? Sorry I intended to do so, I think they're already fine now
02:11:408 (4) - NC maybe not, because it's in the sentence with the former objects

Sorry, nothing major founded Also thx for your effort

kajiyatta wrote:

Zero's Hard
nice diff :3 thx~
Placement
00:39:382(2) I suppose this huge jump seems a bit difficult. Yeah, the jumps are gone
01:11:003(6) maybe this part doesn't need jump because the vocal & music seems calm. I just want to keep a consistent pattern
Rhythm
01:38:976(2,3) delete these notes and replace slider better imo hmm, I don't feel like to do this changing, as either of them is OK
Hit Sonud
01:45:868(1) maybe add finish or clap at head? a finish is OK, I want the claps be added regualarly

Zero__wind wrote:

24号至28号失踪5天
http://puu.sh/1RyPk
这个是最新的修改稿
目测回来之后要改图致死

kajiyatta wrote:

Reply to Kajiyatta's mod

M4M request from your queue
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Placement
00:11:003(4,5) a bit curved like this? ok

SPOILER

00:41:003(3) to be nice flow , maybe like this? ok

SPOILER

00:42:220(1,2) swap NC? unnecessary..
01:36:139(1,2,3,4,5) to avoid stack seems good for newbie, e.g) ok

SPOILER

Rhythm
01:00:463 unnecessary green line ok
Hit Sonud
01:00:463(1) add finish at head
01:12:625(5 add finish at end
02:15:157(1) to become a lower volume better. all fixed

Normal
Rhythm
00:55:193(2,3,4) abit werid for me, so maybe it will be better ok

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
02:03:301(1) delete whistle at end and add finish ok
02:15:260(1) same as Easy ok

Insane
Placement
00:50:125(6) Ctrl+G? unnecessary
01:36:544(2) ^ ok
01:13:436(7,1) swap NC ok
Rhythm
01:41:358 unnecessary green line
01:47:541 ^
01:47:642 ^
01:51:848 ^
01:53:672 ^
02:15:057 ^ all fixed
00:11:049(6,7) maybe like this? Sorry but I keep the current

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:19:923(4) whistle→finish ok
01:57:220(1) add a fnish at head ok

overall fine. good luck & star~

lkx_Shore wrote:

Where is your 1stmap rank