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Rammstein - Mein Herz brennt (Piano Instrumental)

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Sieg

ChivaCookie wrote:

woah. nice skin and nice custom sounds. Hope i'll find something to mod.. :/ WHAT'S YOUR PROBLEM WITH DOING SUCH AN AWESOME MAP AND LETTING SOMEONE LIKE ME MOD IT?!

DO YOU WANT ME TO LOSE MY SELF-CONFIDENCE? ... I lost it. Thanks very much. :( Here, take a star. You win. And here you have a bad mod. Good luck.

oh... lol :D anyway I'm interested in any opinions and ideas :oops:

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  • 00:03:236 - I would delete that hitsound. Otherwise it would sound a bit awkward, because of that bell at 00:03:665
    this is chime btw :oops: they follow piano notes in general but I'll consider to make some corrections just need more opinions on this
    00:13:522 - delete whistle. it sounds better imo.
    same^
    00:14:379 (2) - make this a bit more curvy, it would look better
    yep
    00:28:094 (2) - change the shape of that slider, so it fits better with 00:25:950 (2)
    represent another pattern so I think this one is good
    00:46:522 (2,3) - make those sliders look like yin-yang. koi-fishes or.. dancing people. this pattern is already nice, though.
    straight for variety
    01:05:379 - break here?
    yep, I think I'll do break, just need to not forget skin this annoying arrows
    01:08:808 (1,2) - this sounds a bit awkward, imo.
    indeed, I was wondering about this spot, changed
    01:39:665 (1,2) - same like 00:46:522
    yep
    01:44:808 (3) - give that slider a little shape
    that will ruin flow to 4 I think, so left for now

    Sometimes it sounds a bit awkward with those hitsounds. You should recheck them. Please?
    I'll do

Hard

  • 00:05:379 (4,5) - let those sliders swap places. it looks sad imo.
    nice as for me :P
    01:05:573 - breaktime, maybe?
    yes
    That's all... damnit. I feel insufficient.


I really love that map. I hope it gets ranked. No kudosu if my mod wasn't helpful. Thanks.


€: Goddamit. I love that map. Here, take another star.
oh Thanks ChivaCookie for stars and mod. :oops:
Thunderstorm
Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2! :D

Some suggestions that can be ignored as well.

[Overall]
Consider to get approachcircle.png 128x128 (you have 126x)

[Easy]
Cant find anything wrong. Just one suggestion to get a break (or some), since it's easy, playing 2.15 w/ 3 sec only break can get newbies tired.

[Normal]
00:02:379 (3,1) - is that overlap really needed?
00:17:379 (1) - a bit out of the screen
00:32:808 (2) - I'd suggest to space it away since that stack don't really looks good IMO
01:56:808 (1) - a bit out of screen

[Hard]
I'd suggest to add a spinner
00:22:094 (3) - a bit out of screen
00:26:808 (5) - ^
00:28:951 (3) - ^
00:37:951 (2) - ^
01:30:879 (3) - and incoming triplet-sliders also - IMO it all totally sound out of the song. Consider to remake it.
01:59:808 (8) - broken spacing
02:01:094 (3) - ^
02:04:522 (3) - ^
02:05:379 (5) - ^
02:07:951 (3,5) - ^
If that was intended jumps, ignore that part (but it still looks weird)

That's all.
Wow, really great work with skin and custom hsounds. Good luck w/ that
Topic Starter
Sieg

Thunderstorm wrote:

Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2! :D
Hello :3

Some suggestions that can be ignored as well.

[Overall]
Consider to get approachcircle.png 128x128 (you have 126x)
fixed

[Easy]
Cant find anything wrong. Just one suggestion to get a break (or some), since it's easy, playing 2.15 w/ 3 sec only break can get newbies tired.
1 break is fine, this is slow song

[Normal]
00:02:379 (3,1) - is that overlap really needed?
yep, pretty good looking
00:17:379 (1) - a bit out of the screen
offgrid, but not offsreen, this is acceptable nowadays
00:32:808 (2) - I'd suggest to space it away since that stack don't really looks good IMO

[Hard]
I'd suggest to add a spinner
I don't have a spot in my part and Bakari decided this this is not necessary in his part, so no spinner
01:30:879 (3) - and incoming triplet-sliders also - IMO it all totally sound out of the song. Consider to remake it.
uh... I don't think they out of rhythm
01:59:808 (8) - broken spacing
02:01:094 (3) - ^
02:04:522 (3) - ^
02:05:379 (5) - ^
02:07:951 (3,5) - ^
If that was intended jumps, ignore that part (but it still looks weird)
indented jumps :3

That's all.
Wow, really great work with skin and custom hsounds. Good luck w/ that
Thanks Thunderstorm. :D
riffy

ChivaCookie wrote:

Easy

  • I don't think the finish sounds fit very well with the dark music. Think about changing that. Either this or you shouldn't overuse it. It sounds a bit awkward sometimes imo. it's up to Sieg. he did all the hitsounds
    Also does the whistle-sound. Especially in the beginning. same
    00:44:808 (3) - consider making that slider just a tiny bit round. it would look better, i think. naaah, I don't think that changing its shape will work here. I love the way how it is know, it's my style, after all.
    00:55:094 (1) - the same, i guess. same :<
    01:05:379 - maybe add a breaktime here. uguuuu

    Nothing else, sorry
Topic Starter
Sieg
longest mod ever :)
SPOILER
11:43 HeatKai: ~
11:43 Sieg: ~
11:43 Sieg: xd
11:45 HeatKai: lets start the fixing
11:45 *HeatKai is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/250553 Rammstein - Mein Herz brennt (Piano Instrumental) [Easy]]
11:45 Sieg: great :3 lets start
11:45 HeatKai: I dont like to break promise :3 so as I said yesterday, I'm going to mod it today~
11:46 Sieg: thanks :)
11:46 HeatKai: this song gives me goosebump hahaha
11:46 HeatKai: but it's okay w=
11:46 Sieg: hahaha
11:47 Sieg: it was so hard to find this trumpets
11:50 HeatKai: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand boom
11:50 HeatKai: i don't like how the slidertick go tick tick tick so loud lol
11:50 HeatKai: it's annoying
11:50 HeatKai: hah
11:50 Sieg: i'll think i make it -3db
11:52 HeatKai: what db? xD
11:52 Sieg: i mean quieter
11:53 Sieg: :3
11:53 HeatKai: oh haha ok :P
11:53 Sieg: db = decibels :3 nvm
11:55 HeatKai: wtf ;_; I saw the video at youtube
11:55 HeatKai: his voice is so scary
11:56 Sieg: lol, yes, definitely
11:56 HeatKai: I shouldn't watch it ;_;
11:56 Sieg: xD
11:57 Sieg: you so funny :)
11:57 HeatKai: wait am I? lol
11:57 Sieg: lol
11:59 HeatKai: 00:06:236 (5) - this should not have a whistle here
11:59 HeatKai: if you want the hitsound to be fit,you must find a lower pitch bell hitsound
12:00 HeatKai: 00:05:379 (4) - this part the piano pitch is higher then 00:06:236 (5) - this so if both whistle it doesn't fit :c
12:00 Sieg: hm, maybe just lower volume
12:00 HeatKai: well okay to do every circle that you do like that ^
12:01 HeatKai: 00:13:094 (5) -
12:01 Sieg: becuse most of this whistles follows low pitch piano
12:02 Sieg: fixed both
12:02 HeatKai: 00:19:094 (4,5) - i dont really think the hitsound here fits the music xD
12:03 Sieg: yes this one is not :3
12:03 HeatKai: lol
12:03 HeatKai: then fix it
12:03 Sieg: 00:19:094 (4) - replced with a clap
12:03 HeatKai: much better
12:05 Sieg: i hope i'm not failed with that idea of making unsolid volume
12:05 HeatKai: you mean the changes of volume?
12:05 Sieg: yep
12:06 HeatKai: well the only thing that annoys me is the tick
12:06 HeatKai: others fine for me
12:06 Sieg: :)
12:06 HeatKai: 01:27:665 (4) - lower the volume
12:07 Sieg: 20% would be nice there
12:09 HeatKai: 01:32:808 (3) - change this to finish for consistent hitsound pattern
12:09 Sieg: changed yes
12:10 HeatKai: ok change all of that at the other diffs too ^
12:10 Sieg: sure
12:13 HeatKai: after you're done call me again here
12:13 Sieg: okay
12:19 Sieg: done, also tick sound lowered
12:25 HeatKai: oh you resubmit?
12:25 HeatKai: wait me redl
12:26 Sieg: yep
12:35 HeatKai: tururuurru
12:35 Sieg: tratatata
12:35 Sieg: :3
12:35 HeatKai: later you savelog please, I restart osu just now :c
12:35 HeatKai: lost everything
12:35 Sieg: okay
12:37 HeatKai: 01:01:951 (1,2,3) - do it like this so it get the end before break at the middle looks better ;3
12:37 HeatKai: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762285
12:37 Sieg: yep, nice
12:39 HeatKai: 01:22:522 (1) - at the end of the slider would sound better if clap
12:40 Sieg: but it would be unconsistant, i think whistle is not so horrible there
12:41 HeatKai: Well yes but the clap fits more with the piano there :o
12:42 Sieg: so 01:27:665 (4) - this one same?
12:42 HeatKai: yes
12:42 Sieg: ok then, done
12:42 HeatKai: :3
12:42 Sieg: :3
12:45 HeatKai: You try first then you tell me do you like it or not
12:45 HeatKai: 01:52:522 (3) - change the starting to clap
12:45 HeatKai: ^ the end also
12:46 HeatKai: so it will get consistent clap hitsound
12:47 Sieg: not good imo, all whisltes in kiai follows low pitch piano notes, i used piano sheet to do this, i guess consistant it only easy issue becuse diff skips many notes
12:47 Sieg: not good imo, all whisltes in kiai follows low pitch piano notes, i used piano sheet to do this, i guess consistant it only easy issue becuse diff skips many notes
12:47 Sieg: but eh...
12:47 Sieg: consistant through diffs
12:48 Sieg: idk, i don't feel this is cry for fix
12:49 Sieg: at least hs in unconsistant piano songs is hard to make consistant :3
12:49 Sieg: lol
12:50 HeatKai: 01:52:522 (3) - because the ending of this slider doesn't sounds really good :/
12:51 Sieg: let me test 1 min :3
12:53 Sieg: uhm.. so just on end 01:52:522 (3) - clap seems more resonable
12:53 HeatKai: yes ==
12:53 HeatKai: lol
12:53 Sieg: yes
12:53 Sieg: lol
12:53 Sieg: xd
12:53 Sieg: changed
12:54 Sieg: sorry if i'm slow but i really need to hear few times and look around before change anything
12:56 HeatKai: 02:06:236 (2,3,4) - just make the pattern like this more neater
12:56 HeatKai: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762318
12:57 Sieg: laying straight sliders, i don't like them :3
12:58 HeatKai: =w= then make it curve like this
12:58 HeatKai: wait..
12:58 HeatKai: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762319
13:00 Sieg: maybe http://puu.sh/2VNNN.jpg to interact
13:00 Sieg: with 02:03:665 (1) -
13:00 HeatKai: oh ok that's good
13:00 Sieg: :)
13:01 HeatKai: That's all for easy
13:01 Sieg: this was longer than i expected :)
13:02 Sieg: but good that we fixed some important staff
13:05 HeatKai: stuff* haha
13:05 Sieg: yep
13:05 Sieg: lol
13:07 HeatKai: 00:37:951 (1) - make this a better blanket
13:07 HeatKai: it doesn't looks smooth :x
13:07 HeatKai: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762332 maybe like this
13:08 Sieg: done http://puu.sh/2VNXJ.jpg
13:10 Sieg: even better http://puu.sh/2VO0d.jpg
13:11 HeatKai: yes good
13:11 Sieg: i love to make blankets \w/
13:11 HeatKai: \w/ blankets are awesome
13:11 Sieg: yes!
13:11 Sieg: :3
13:12 HeatKai: 00:40:522 (3) - omg this slider hahha
13:12 HeatKai: looks ugly =w= fix it
13:12 HeatKai: lol
13:12 Sieg: oh lol
13:12 Sieg: yep
13:14 Sieg: much better http://puu.sh/2VO4R.jpg
13:15 HeatKai: okay! :#
13:15 HeatKai: :3
13:16 HeatKai: 00:43:522 (4) - the ending is better if it's clap
13:16 Sieg: okay
13:18 HeatKai: 00:55:522 (2,3,4) - try to make another pattern,why is this copy pasta slider haha
13:18 HeatKai: it doesn't look smooth lol
13:18 Sieg: corresponding to music ;_; eh... i'll try something
13:20 HeatKai: ok
13:22 HeatKai: 02:13:951 (1) - the spinner should start from here
13:22 HeatKai: if you're following the piano
13:22 Sieg: but
13:22 HeatKai: and starting a spinner from red tick is really awkward
13:23 Sieg: main idea of this is to let player play hard sounds
13:23 Sieg: i mean big white
13:23 Sieg: maybe just move spinner to 1\4 closer
13:24 HeatKai: that's okay too and that's all for normal
13:24 Sieg: good
13:32 HeatKai: Make your name fade same as the title
13:33 Sieg: nice idea
13:38 HeatKai: 01:37:951 (4) - this doesn't sound good
13:39 HeatKai: and there's not much beat here :x
13:39 HeatKai: why even need a repeat
13:39 HeatKai: 01:37:951 (4) - just a single circle would be fine
13:39 Sieg: i guess so
13:40 HeatKai: 01:55:094 (6) - make this as a normal spacing,doesn't need to make a lil jump here
13:41 Sieg: but fits to music, and kiai
13:41 HeatKai: just the slider can emphasize the music,the spacing isn't :o
13:42 Sieg: why not, after so many 1\4 this 1\1 feels kinda ok for 1.7x
13:42 HeatKai: well okay =w= whatever you want then
13:42 Sieg: :)
13:43 HeatKai: 02:14:594 (2) - move it to here x:484 y:208 so it doesn't touch the circle (4)
13:43 Sieg: sure
13:46 HeatKai: that's all :3
13:46 HeatKai: post the chat in the forum please :D
13:46 Sieg: uh, thank you so much
13:46 Sieg: yes such a long ride :)
HeatKai
irc mod with SIEGnature.
  1. fixed some pattern,volumes and hitsounds
Good map, bubbled.
don't watch the original video
Stefan




HEAT!!!
HeatKai
hahahaha xD
Topic Starter
Sieg
lol
Lally
lol o3o
P A N
lol gratz for bubbled. go for rank

edit: 333 posts here XD
Miya
IRC Mod :3

  1. Minor rhythm improvement on hard
  2. Minor pattern improvement
  3. Minor volume adjusment
SPOILER
2013-05-20 21:19 Sieg: Hello Miya, sorry for disturbing... can you please take a look at my bubbled beatmap its E\N\H slow piano song
2013-05-20 21:19 Miya: just gimme the link :3
2013-05-20 21:19 Miya: maybe i will take a look on it later
2013-05-20 21:19 Sieg: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/250331 Rammstein - Mein Herz brennt (Piano Instrumental)]
2013-05-20 21:19 Sieg: :3
2013-05-20 21:19 Sieg: thanks
2013-05-20 22:50 Miya: nice map ><
2013-05-20 22:50 Miya: you there?
2013-05-20 22:53 Miya: i wanna irc modding with you if you there :o
2013-05-20 23:16 Sieg: ehm.. I'll stay here, feel free to disturb me anytime :3
2013-05-20 23:17 Miya: ok, good :3
2013-05-20 23:17 Sieg: :)
2013-05-20 23:17 Miya: let's mod hard first ><
2013-05-20 23:18 Sieg: sure
2013-05-20 23:18 Miya: ups, im lazy to rewrite what i have told you in forum lol
2013-05-20 23:18 Miya: http://puu.sh/2XrkK.png
2013-05-20 23:18 Miya: for the image
2013-05-20 23:18 Miya: http://puu.sh/2XqGA.png
2013-05-20 23:19 Miya: tell me which part you dont agree and why ><
2013-05-20 23:19 Sieg: give 1 min :)
2013-05-20 23:19 Miya: ok :3
2013-05-20 23:20 Sieg: about hitfinish, it's trumpet bell and with very long echo, so quality will be lost if I cut it
2013-05-20 23:20 Sieg: ar+1 is fine
2013-05-20 23:21 Miya: hmm, okay then
2013-05-20 23:21 Miya: about the hitcircle and slider?
2013-05-20 23:21 Sieg: 02:17:379 (6) - I fell this will be ehm
2013-05-20 23:22 Miya: ok, np ><
2013-05-20 23:22 Miya: about this 01:11:165 - ?
2013-05-20 23:22 Sieg: lol, sorry can't find a good word :)
2013-05-20 23:22 Sieg: yep
2013-05-20 23:22 Sieg: +note here
2013-05-20 23:23 Miya: and here 00:37:951 (2) -
2013-05-20 23:23 Miya: almost reach the border screen <M
2013-05-20 23:23 Miya: ><
2013-05-20 23:23 Sieg: i checkedmoved little bit up
2013-05-20 23:24 Sieg: ef
2013-05-20 23:24 Sieg: moved*
2013-05-20 23:24 Sieg: :)
2013-05-20 23:24 Miya: hmm, thats all i found yet, let me check again ><
2013-05-20 23:24 Sieg: updated
2013-05-20 23:25 Sieg: sorry for my messy english :)
2013-05-20 23:25 Miya: no problem ><
2013-05-20 23:26 Miya: that's all i think for hard, really good map :3
2013-05-20 23:28 Sieg: :3
2013-05-20 23:28 Sieg: thanks
2013-05-20 23:30 Miya: on normal same case 00:17:379 (1) -
2013-05-20 23:30 Miya: move little bit up ><
2013-05-20 23:30 Sieg: moved
2013-05-20 23:35 Miya: oh yeah, no spinner on hard?
2013-05-20 23:35 Sieg: nope
2013-05-20 23:35 Miya: well, i suggest making a spinner on the last note
2013-05-20 23:35 Miya: since this is easy enough, i bet there will be a lot of similar score later
2013-05-20 23:36 Miya: and yeah, normal seems pretty good ><
2013-05-20 23:36 Miya: can't find anything other than that one
2013-05-20 23:36 Sieg: ok fine, let me think about spinner
2013-05-20 23:36 Miya: ok
2013-05-20 23:37 Sieg: tbh I don't think this is necessary :\
2013-05-20 23:38 Miya: why not?
2013-05-20 23:38 Sieg: relax map but anyway I'll add one
2013-05-20 23:38 Miya: ok, good :3
2013-05-20 23:40 Sieg: updated
2013-05-20 23:41 Miya: on easy
2013-05-20 23:41 Miya: 02:10:522 (1) - lower this spinner volume?
2013-05-20 23:42 Miya: 70% is quite high imo, and since its long, it doesnt sounds good
2013-05-20 23:42 Sieg: oh
2013-05-20 23:42 Sieg: yes to 45
2013-05-20 23:42 Miya: ok
2013-05-20 23:45 Miya: ok, upload ><
2013-05-20 23:45 Miya: oh done already? let me recheck
2013-05-20 23:45 Sieg: already done :)
2013-05-20 23:45 Sieg: yep
2013-05-20 23:58 Miya: this is not relaxing song >,
2013-05-20 23:58 Miya: but scary song xD
2013-05-20 23:59 Sieg: lol
2013-05-20 23:59 Sieg: xD

Anyway, awesome map, Ranked!

And yeah, this is not relaxing song, this is scary song =3=
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks Miya \w/
Kurai
Cool stuff o.o
HeatKai
Mein Herz brennt!
Deni
so fast o_o

Congrats! :)
riffy
We did it, yay!
YTYuyu
ahh i'm too late ;_;

oh well congratz on the rank :D.
Stefan
Some good music from germany. :D
Hard
Congratz *_*
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks guys :3
Kodora
Congratz!
P A N
Congratz 0.0
so fast
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks. :oops:
NatsumeRin
Too late to get it ... congrats~!
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