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happy30
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on woensdag 7 augustus 2013 at 2:48:36

Artist: 24 Bit Lolitas ft. Aihara Chihiro
Title: Dear big sister~remix ver.~
Source: Touhou
Tags: Tennenjemini gemini Komeji Koishi Kannami C80 Hartmann's Youkai Girl Touhouchireiden Subterranean Animism Card_N'FoRcE
BPM: 128
Filesize: 7394kb
Play Time: 03:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. CNF's Easy (2,43 stars, 218 notes)
  2. Hard (4,96 stars, 439 notes)
  3. Normal (3,45 stars, 250 notes)
Download: 24 Bit Lolitas ft. Aihara Chihiro - Dear big sister~remix ver.~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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melancholy..
spboxer3
yaaa
Natteke
2rd!
AngelHoney
3rd!
Topic Starter
happy30
4th.. damn so late
yeahyeahyeahhh
Wow fuck so many beat me... I hate this game
Card N'FoRcE
I have no words for how amazing the rhythm of this beatmap is.
Also, first stars were shot by me, what now!

EDIT:
Combo colours suggestion :3
Combo1 : 99,93,46
Combo2 : 125,81,56
Combo3 : 163,149,87
Combo4 : 192,182,170
Natteke
why graved :(
Card N'FoRcE
Because graveyard has the most interesting maps ever \:D/
Card N'FoRcE
Hello there, Easy is finally ready.
laport
10rd :(
Chyo-Kun
cool
Kodora
[General]

  1. You forgot to add Card N'FoRcE in tags
  2. Your mp3 have 204 kb/s bitrate, you need to recode it or find another.
  3. 2 osb files
  4. Recompress all .jpg files at your storyboard to .png?
  5. Strongly suggest you cut ending of your mp3, since you use only 77% of it.
  6. Even if CnF make an easy for you imo better if all diffs will have same kiai time
  7. Offset feels wrong for me, but i cant find better one tho
[Hard]

Maybe a bit hard for a regular Hard diff, but i think its ok

  1. 00:14:032 (1,2,3,4) - Why claps? Imo with normal sampleset without additions sounds much better.
  2. 00:24:345 (5) - NC for better readability
  3. 00:45:438 (2,3,4) - Just suggestion: i tried to make 00:45:907 (4) - more readable, look under spoilerbox
  4. 00:59:970 (3) - how about add a little kiai fountain here?
  5. 01:20:126 (4) - Begin NC here, it will helps to read your pattern and will be more consistent with music.
  6. 01:40:282 (3) - NC follow new pattern & new part of music?
  7. 02:14:032 (4) - NC since you use slowdown here
  8. 02:47:548 (6) - NC should begins here, follow new part of music
  9. 02:56:923 (4) - nazi: x:235 y:354
  10. 02:58:329 (2) - Missed whistle? Imho fits.
  11. 03:00:673 (2,3,4,5) - spacing! or just set nc at 03:01:610 (4) -
  12. 03:09:110 (7) - NC follow new part of music
  13. 03:11:923 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not pefect spacing :s
  14. 03:43:095 (1) - add little kiai fountain here?
awesome diff <3

[Normal]

Strongly suggest you use AR 5 and OD 4 here, it may be too hard for a regular Normal diff.

  1. 00:23:876 (4) - Imho NC should begins here follow new pattern.
  2. 01:16:610 (4,5,6) - Really looks like too cruel jump for a normal diff, reduce spacing here
  3. 01:19:657 (4) - Add NC follow new part of music & for better readability, this kind of patterns can confuse newbies a lot, also i strongly suggest you make little overlap istead perfect stacking.
  4. 01:31:845 (7) - NC?
  5. 01:35:595 (3,4) - Same about stacking
  6. 02:02:548 (3) - add whistle to the end of slider?
  7. 02:04:657 (2,3) - same about stacking
  8. 02:07:938 (2,3) - ^
  9. 02:08:876 (4) - NC follow new part of music?
  10. 02:10:282 (8,9) - same about stacking
  11. 02:12:860 (3) - forgot clap & finish at the end?
  12. 02:14:032 (1) - Strongly suggest you avoid any speedchanges ib easiest diff in mapset, it can confuse newbies a lot
  13. 02:15:438 - add note? imo sounds too empty w/o it
  14. 02:18:485 (6) - NC follow new part of music?
  15. 02:29:032 (6) - ^
  16. 02:46:376 (2) - Imho too cruel for a normal diff, strongly suggest unstack
  17. 02:47:548 (4) - ^
  18. 02:49:188 (1) - ^
  19. 02:51:298 (3) - NC follow new part of music?
  20. 02:55:048 (4,5,1) - really dont like rhytm in this part, try to use something other here :s
  21. 03:07:470 (1) - stacking!
  22. 03:18:485 (4,5,6) - too cruel jump for a normal diff, reduce spacing here
  23. 03:21:063 (3,4) - stacking! also add nc at 03:21:532 (4) -
  24. 03:26:923 (6) - Imho SC should begins here
  25. 03:33:720 (7) - NC follow new part of music
  26. 03:37:470 (3,4) - stacking!
[CNF's Easy]


Strongly suggest you use AR 4 and OD 3 here, it may be too hard for a regular Easy diff.
Diff full of stacks, really not sure is this good idea to use them in easiest diff on mapset, but it up to you.


  1. 00:20:829 (2,3) - Dont hide please notes in easiest diff in mapset, it may be too hard for newbies
  2. 00:28:329 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:44:032 (6) - Imho NC should starts here follow new part of music
  4. 00:54:345 (5,6,7) - all diff have spacing 1.0, why suddenly 0.9 here?
  5. 00:55:048 (7,1) - stacking
  6. 00:56:688 (2) - very ugly overlap, also with such low AR it hard to read, please, move it out from 00:55:048 (7) -
  7. 00:58:095 (5,6,7,8,9) - again about spacing change, also add nc at 00:58:095 (5) - follow new part of music
  8. 01:33:720 (1,2,1) - spacing
  9. 01:37:470 (1,2,3) - spacing ;_;
  10. 01:39:813 (4) - NC follow new part of music?
  11. 02:03:251 (6) - NC should starts here, also spaaacing ;_; ( 02:01:845 (5,6) )
  12. 02:05:595 (2) - spacing
  13. 02:08:876 (3) - Add NC? Looks like a jump
  14. 02:14:032 (6) - Too cruel for an easy, really, unstack them
  15. 02:16:024 (2) - should starts tick earlier imo
  16. 02:19:774 (2) - ^
  17. 02:24:345 (5,6,7) - spaaacing ;_;
    also nc at 02:24:345 (5) -
  18. 02:26:220 (1) - same about stacking
  19. 02:26:688 (2) - same about circle under slidertrack
  20. 02:28:095 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing, also add nc at 02:28:095 (5) - please
  21. 02:48:016 (6,1) - do not use jumps in easiest diff in mapset please
  22. 02:57:626 (2,3) - please make spacing perfect
  23. 02:59:032 (3) - should ends on white tick
  24. 03:06:532 (3) - ^
  25. 03:19:891 (5,1) - do not use jumps in easiest diff in mapset please
  26. 03:35:595 (1,2,1) - spacing
  27. 03:39:345 (1,2,3) - ^
  28. 03:41:688 (4) - add nc follow new part of music?
Great map, good luck :)
Ayu
http://puu.sh/2XFQd.txt irc mod ty

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@ Kodora, don't forget this map has been uploaded a year ago. Thus, I think the old ranking criteria rules apply.
Kodora
@ Ayu, in any case i must mentiore all here to prevent potential problems with ranking.
btw, rule about bitrate is very old (2010 or so) so happy30 must change mp3 :\
Card N'FoRcE

Kodora wrote:

  1. Your mp3 have 204 kb/s bitrate, you need to recode it or find another.
    That's basically 192kbps but VBR instead of CBR, recompressing would only be a waste.
  2. Strongly suggest you cut ending of your mp3, since you use only 77% of it.
    I strongly disagree: the intro and outro are perfect this way and cutting for such a small amount would only ruin them.
  3. Even if CnF make an easy for you imo better if all diffs will have same kiai time
    Not necessary as we are different mappers with different ways of mapping.
My 2cents about these.

Kodora wrote:

[CNF's Easy]

Strongly suggest you use AR 4 and OD 3 here, it may be too hard for a regular Easy diff. That's actually the opposite: a lower AR makes everything too cluttered and harder to read.
Diff full of stacks, really not sure is this good idea to use them in easiest diff on mapset, but it up to you. This kind of stacking is consistent through the whole map: every stacked beat is 1/2 after the previous beat, so there's no way to misclick/misread any of them after the first few of them.

  1. 00:20:829 (2,3) - Dont hide please notes in easiest diff in mapset, it may be too hard for newbies explained above
  2. 00:28:329 (2,3) - ^ ^
  3. 00:44:032 (6) - Imho NC should starts here follow new part of music It's the opposite actually, the vocals are not making a new line
  4. 00:54:345 (5,6,7) - all diff have spacing 1.0, why suddenly 0.9 here? because that kind of "close-up" between these beats tells the player that the circles are timed differently. 1.0x spacing doesn't have the same effect.
  5. 00:55:048 (7,1) - stacking This isn't following the 1/2 stacking thing i mentioned so yeah, changed
  6. 00:56:688 (2) - very ugly overlap, also with such low AR it hard to read, please, move it out from 00:55:048 (7) - Agree, changed as well.
  7. 00:58:095 (5,6,7,8,9) - again about spacing change, also add nc at 00:58:095 (5) - follow new part of music spacing thing is the same as before, the new combo is not necessary as it would be inconsistent
  8. 01:33:720 (1,2,1) - spacing Why?
  9. 01:37:470 (1,2,3) - spacing ;_; Again, same as before
  10. 01:39:813 (4) - NC follow new part of music? Not necessary and inconsistent
  11. 02:03:251 (6) - NC should starts here, also spaaacing ;_; ( 02:01:845 (5,6) ) Dude, spacing is not only following distance multipliers. Also no, the new combo in that place would be, again, inconsistent. I followed a simple pattern for new combos: every 2 stanzas i make the new combo, every time. Not gonna change that as it works fine and actually helps following the music's structure.
  12. 02:05:595 (2) - spacing already explained why it's not wrong.
  13. 02:08:876 (3) - Add NC? Looks like a jump Except it isn't at all.
  14. 02:14:032 (6) - Too cruel for an easy, really, unstack them I agree, the repeat may make it more confusing. Pattern reworked.
  15. 02:16:024 (2) - should starts tick earlier imo Nope, listen to the instruments :p
  16. 02:19:774 (2) - ^ ^
  17. 02:24:345 (5,6,7) - spaaacing ;_; also nc at 02:24:345 (5) - same stuff as before
  18. 02:26:220 (1) - same about stacking fixed as the similiar one that was before
  19. 02:26:688 (2) - same about circle under slidertrack ^
  20. 02:28:095 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing, also add nc at 02:28:095 (5) - please same stuff as before
  21. 02:48:016 (6,1) - do not use jumps in easiest diff in mapset please Just because it's 1.24x doesn't mean it's a "jump".
  22. 02:57:626 (2,3) - please make spacing perfect That's 0.96x, so i assume you're just joking.
  23. 02:59:032 (3) - should ends on white tick Listen to the instruments.
  24. 03:06:532 (3) - ^ ^
  25. 03:19:891 (5,1) - do not use jumps in easiest diff in mapset please Just because it's 1.15x doesn't mean it's a "jump".
  26. 03:35:595 (1,2,1) - spacing same stuff as before
  27. 03:39:345 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
  28. 03:41:688 (4) - add nc follow new part of music? ^
Thank you for modding, updated diff here
Topic Starter
happy30
ill update this soon. ill try to get a better mp3 file. w/e
Andrea
Why is this in the Graveyard? You should revive it :P
grumd
ok i'll not do any formatting for the text, only modding

hardest diff:
00:15:907 - the hitsounds like these are way too loud, they feel uncomfortable and out of place. maybe you could make that last timing point (as well as all the similar points) 40% or so, or just change the hitsounds to some bassy custom ones
00:45:555 (3) - i never like such patterns, when one slider overlaps other one like fully. i'd place it somewhere else so the next slider path is visible. it was unrankable iirc
00:59:149 (4) - 02:22:118 (6,7) - such imperfectness actually takes my attention, but i'll not point out all of that anyway xD
01:21:298 (5,6,7,8,9) - do it parallel pls
01:24:110 (5) - idk maybe it's just an error, but the spacing seems broken
01:40:048 - it feels more natural to play if you add a note here
02:57:274 (5) - previously (02:52:938 (2) - ) you were using same spacing for 1/1 and now for 3/4. it's a bit confusing, you can't tell the rhythm at once. just replace some circles in the beginning of this section with sliders to make it clear (as you did later 03:04:071 (1,2) - but it should be done when such pattern appears for the first time)

middle diff:
01:44:970 - move the break start here?

easiest diff:
the hitsounds are VERY loud everywhere. example: 00:30:673 (3) - you even don't understand what is this mapped for until you remove the slider
00:44:970 (1) - i think you need one repeat for this slider to end the pattern in a proper way. it's white-blue-red (3/4 back and forth), as 00:40:048 (3) - or 00:48:720 (1) - .
02:14:970 (1,2) - this is very weird, you need to rethink it till 02:22:470 -
02:59:501 - it's better to end this slider here i bet. but if you want to follow the music and not the vocal, at least add a repeat to finish this pattern. it feels very empty without it
finally, same od and ar as on normal don't really fit the rhythm and circle sizes here. -1 for both works better.

and general stuff just for the record:
mp3 still 204kbps
sb pictures must be maximum of 800x600 so pls change your background2.jpg and background2blur.jpg to 800x600 sizes
also i guess tags are wrong in normal diff; reason: extra space after "C80" in both easy and hard diffs. also you don't need to put "C80" twice in the tags, remove one.
aibat says that you have to add following skin pics: spinner-clear.png; spinner-spin.png; spinner-osu.png;
it also says that kiai are different
Card N'FoRcE

grumd wrote:

easiest diff:
the hitsounds are VERY loud everywhere. example: 00:30:673 (3) - you even don't understand what is this mapped for until you remove the slider It doesn't really seem that way to me, but i made the volume for every section slightly lower anyway.
00:44:970 (1) - i think you need one repeat for this slider to end the pattern in a proper way. it's white-blue-red (3/4 back and forth), as 00:40:048 (3) - or 00:48:720 (1) - . I know what makes you think that way (i had an hard time trying to make this same pattern you're suggesting), but it just doesn't work as well.
02:14:970 (1,2) - this is very weird, you need to rethink it till 02:22:470 - I agree that 02:14:970 (1,2) - 02:18:720 (1,2) - were fairly flow-breaking so i changed them, but the rest works fine (especially now that i changed the others).
02:59:501 - it's better to end this slider here i bet. but if you want to follow the music and not the vocal, at least add a repeat to finish this pattern. it feels very empty without it I didn't understand what you mean here.
finally, same od and ar as on normal don't really fit the rhythm and circle sizes here. -1 for both works better. Since Normal has the same settings, i'll lower them (even though i believe the AR is kinda low)
Updated diff here.

Also i can help with providing a new mp3 if needed.
sheela
Hi! From my queue~

[General]
There's a lot spacing errors. You should rewiew it
[CNF's Easy]
00:19:657 (3) - y:88
00:20:126 (4) - y:112
00:27:157 (3,4) - ^
00:42:157 (3) - Move down one grid
00:53:407 (3) - Move up one grid and a little at the right so it will space 1.00x
00:56:688 (2) - Move to the left one grid
00:57:157 (3) - Same as 00:53:407 (3)
01:18:720 (1) - Space
01:35:595 (2) - Space
01:38:524 (2) - Space
02:03:251 (6) - Space
02:03:720 (1) - Space

[Normal]
A lot of elements aren't stack.
01:19:657 (1) - Not well stack
01:36:063 (4) - ^
02:08:407 (3) - ^
02:10:751 (9) - ^
02:46:376 (2) - Stack with 02:46:610 (3)
02:47:548 (4) - Not well stack
02:49:188 (1) - ^
02:51:298 (3) - Don't stack it
03:21:532 (4) - Not well stack
03:37:470 (3) - ^

Good Luck!
Card N'FoRcE

sheela901 wrote:

[CNF's Easy]
00:19:657 (3) - y:88 It's not alligned intentionally
00:20:126 (4) - y:112 ^
00:27:157 (3,4) - ^ ^
00:42:157 (3) - Move down one grid Intentionally not alligned because 00:42:626 (4) - is stacked
00:53:407 (3) - Move up one grid and a little at the right so it will space 1.00x But it IS 1.0x...?
00:56:688 (2) - Move to the left one grid This whole pattern, as the previous one, is not alligned to the grid intentionally.
00:57:157 (3) - Same as 00:53:407 (3) ^
01:18:720 (1) - Space ?
01:35:595 (2) - Space ??
01:38:524 (2) - Space ???
02:03:251 (6) - Space ????
02:03:720 (1) - Space ????? I already explained these in a previous mod.
Thank you, but no changes as there's nothing to change.
Refer to my previous post for the latest version of my diff.
ErunamoJAZZ
Easy:
00:21:532 (3) - and 00:29:032 (3) - You might consider them not under the slider?. I think it's difficult to read for a noob.
00:58:095 (5) - I think would be good a new combo because the snap time between notes changes.
01:59:970 (1) - Before this circle, the storyboard does strange behavior, which only shows in this difficulty.

Normal:
Cool ^_^

Hard:
Very cool *-*
00:14:970 (1) - There is too much space between the 1st and 2nd. I think it would be better to place it well: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/838189
00:45:555 (3) - This is too hidden, it seems better if you move slightly (grid 4) up or down.
03:17:079 (2) - Surely in your screen looks fine, but in mine (4:3) is very low and not seen.


;D
Topic Starter
happy30
thanks!
I adjusted the SB there, thats for finding it.
I made the slider not hidden anymore and moved that beat at 3:17 a bit up.
Card N'FoRcE
My diff is still not updated though x)

p/2350320


Oh wow the diff wasn't updated in my dropbox ._.

Sorry for the mistake, this one should be fine.
Kodora
Change "Card N'Force" in tags to "Card_N'Force" because search wont work w/o "_"

+stars
Nemis
Suggestion
High suggestion (sometimes you must fix if it's unrankable)

[General]
Fix the tags in Card N'Force's difficulty

[Hard]
OD8 is excessive for this difficulty, 02:45:020 (1) - this part has an unstable rhythm (vocals 1/2 - instruments 3/4), I'd suggest to use OD7

00:19:004 (2) - Move this note at x:400 y:190 (remove the grid) to overlap it on 00:19:707 (5) - this slider. It's better to see imo
00:20:879 (1,2) - Improve this blanket a little bit:
00:24:395 (5) - Add a new combo on this note
00:39:160 (5,1) - Move these two notes at x:352 y:80 to improve 00:39:160 (5,1,2) - this triangle
00:47:832 (3,4,5) - Move 00:48:301 (5) - this note at x:448 y:44 to obtain this pattern:
00:48:535 (1,2) - Improve this blanket a little bit:
01:21:348 (5,6,7,8,9) - Change this pattern's rhythm in the one below, I don't like how these two triples sound:
01:21:348 (5) - Add a new combo here
01:41:270 (1) - Add a finish note 1/1 after this spinner (at 105020 exatly):
02:12:910 (1) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G) for a better flow with 02:12:324 (4) - this slider. Then move 02:13:379 (2) - this note up or keep it under the slider (I like the second way)
02:14:082 (1) - Decrease its end's volume a little bit
02:29:082 (1) - Remove this spinner, I'd not use it since you didn't 00:59:551 (1,2,3) - here too
02:46:660 (5,6) - These two sliders don't fit the music imo, try something else
02:56:973 (1) - Add a new combo on this note to emphasize the 3/4 rhythm
03:09:395 (8) - I'd add a new combo here or 03:09:160 (7) - here
03:13:027 (5) - Add a new combo on this note as you did 02:58:027 (1) - here
03:23:223 (3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 01:21:348 (5,6,7,8,9) -
03:43:145 (1) - End this slider 1/1 before and then add a finish note 1/1 later (at 226895):

[Normal]
00:27:207 (5,1) - Improve this blanket
00:31:895 (4,5) - Move these two slider at x:56 y:192 to make a triangle with 00:31:426 (3,4,5) - these elements even if this would break the spacing, but it's still playable and perfectly readable:
00:35:645 (6,1,2) - Make a blanket with these three elements, it would be cool to see:
00:38:457 (4,5) - Make a blanket with these two elements:
01:41:270 (1) - Fix the break's start after this spinner:
SPOILER
[img]WRONG:

CORRECT:
02:26:270 (3,5) - Improve this stack or stack these elements manually, I don't like the way how they're overlapped
02:55:801 (5,1) - Add a note between these two elements, it follows the vocals
03:06:582 (3,1) - Stack these two elements manually as you did 01:19:238 (3,1) - here (the pattern is similar)

[CNF's Easy]
E' la difficoltà più semplice, abbassa le settings a a HP2 AR3 OD2. L'AR4 sarebbe necessario per una migliore lettura delle note 3/4, ma spero vivamente che tu le cambi con degli sliders...

00:16:426 (3,1,2) - Migliora un poco questo blanket modificando la curva di 00:17:129 (2) - questo slider senza rompere 00:15:254 (2,3,1,2) - questo triangolo
00:23:926 (3,1,2) - Stessa cosa che ho scritto sopra
00:54:395 (5,6,7) - Forse questo è troppo difficile per una easy, questo 3/4 è davvero poco leggibile ed intuitivo. Sostituisci le note con uno slider e magari aggiungigli un reverse rimuovendo 00:55:098 (7) - questo slider:
00:58:145 (5,6,7,8,9) - Ok questo è davvero poco sano per una easy, molto meno sano del 3/4 di prima xD Sostituisci in qualche modo anche queste note
00:59:551 (9) - Aggiungi un finish alla fine di questo slider
01:11:270 (1) - Magari abbassa il volume della fine di questo spinner, è troppo forte secondo me
01:15:020 (1,2) - Migliora un poco questo blanket
01:30:020 (1,2,3,4) - Sistema leggermente questi due blanket:
02:24:395 (5,6,7) - Stessa cosa di 00:54:395 (5,6,7) -
02:28:145 (5,6,7,8,9) - Stessa cosa di 00:58:145 (5,6,7,8,9) -
02:45:957 (3,4,5) - Migliora un poco questo blanket
02:49:707 (3,4,5) - Stessa cosa detta sopra
02:52:520 (1,2,3) - 02:55:801 (4,1) - Ancora ^
03:00:020 (1,2,3,4) - Prova a fare un perfetto triangolo equilatero con questi elementi
03:16:895 (1,2,3) - Migliora questi due blanket
03:30:723 (3,1) - Sistema questo blanket ed in seguito fai combaciare la testa di 03:30:723 (3) - questo slider e 03:33:770 (2,3) - queste due note (nello screenshot li ho avvicinati nel tempo per farteli vedere più o meno tutti):
03:39:395 (1,2,3) - Rimuovi questo 3/4 o usa uno slider, è difficile per una easy
03:41:738 (4,5,6) - Crea un triangolo equilatero con queste tre note
Davvero bella diff, solo qualche imprecisione che volevo sottolineare :D Mi piace molto il ritmo che hai usato, ma davvero, quei 3/4 sono difficili per dei principianti...
Card N'FoRcE

Nemis wrote:

[CNF's Easy]
E' la difficoltà più semplice, abbassa le settings a a HP2 AR3 OD2. L'AR4 sarebbe necessario per una migliore lettura delle note 3/4, ma spero vivamente che tu le cambi con degli sliders... Questa è una cosa che vorrei comunque evitare, le impostazioni che mi suggerisci sono eccessivamente facili.

00:16:426 (3,1,2) - Migliora un poco questo blanket modificando la curva di 00:17:129 (2) - questo slider senza rompere 00:15:254 (2,3,1,2) - questo triangolo Nonostante non volessi fare una blanket, mi sembra giusto. Corretto
00:23:926 (3,1,2) - Stessa cosa che ho scritto sopra Idem
00:54:395 (5,6,7) - Forse questo è troppo difficile per una easy, questo 3/4 è davvero poco leggibile ed intuitivo. Sostituisci le note con uno slider e magari aggiungigli un reverse rimuovendo 00:55:098 (7) - questo slider: Cambio in uno slider solo perché effettivamente questa Easy è legermente troppo difficile rispetto allo spread della mappa, ma altrimenti non so se l'avrei fatto
00:58:145 (5,6,7,8,9) - Ok questo è davvero poco sano per una easy, molto meno sano del 3/4 di prima xD Sostituisci in qualche modo anche queste note Idem come sopra; due slider.
00:59:551 (9) - Aggiungi un finish alla fine di questo slider Nah, troppo esagerato
01:11:270 (1) - Magari abbassa il volume della fine di questo spinner, è troppo forte secondo me È piuttosto voluta, come cosa
01:15:020 (1,2) - Migliora un poco questo blanket fare la blanket a dovere mi smonta tutto
01:30:020 (1,2,3,4) - Sistema leggermente questi due blanket: E va beeeeene (amate tutti ste blanket eh)
02:24:395 (5,6,7) - Stessa cosa di 00:54:395 (5,6,7) - Risolto
02:28:145 (5,6,7,8,9) - Stessa cosa di 00:58:145 (5,6,7,8,9) - Risolto
02:45:957 (3,4,5) - Migliora un poco questo blanket Sistemato un po'
02:49:707 (3,4,5) - Stessa cosa detta sopra ^
02:52:520 (1,2,3) - 02:55:801 (4,1) - Ancora ^ Eh ma qui lo slider è a posto però (ripeto che non mi interessano le coperte perfette)
03:00:020 (1,2,3,4) - Prova a fare un perfetto triangolo equilatero con questi elementi Non è il motivo per cui sono posizionati in quel modo
03:16:895 (1,2,3) - Migliora questi due blanket fare la blanket a dovere mi smonta tutto
03:30:723 (3,1) - Sistema questo blanket ed in seguito fai combaciare la testa di 03:30:723 (3) - questo slider e 03:33:770 (2,3) - queste due note (nello screenshot li ho avvicinati nel tempo per farteli vedere più o meno tutti): Lo stack dei due cerchi rende questa procedura inutile
03:39:395 (1,2,3) - Rimuovi questo 3/4 o usa uno slider, è difficile per una easy Leggere sotto
03:41:738 (4,5,6) - Crea un triangolo equilatero con queste tre note Ho rilavorato completamente tutta la pattern a 03:39:395 () con qualcosa di più semplice, sempre per diminuire leggermente la difficoltà totale in funzione di uno spread migliore.
Davvero bella diff, solo qualche imprecisione che volevo sottolineare :D Mi piace molto il ritmo che hai usato, ma davvero, quei 3/4 sono difficili per dei principianti... E meno male che qualcuno apprezza sti ritmi un po' alternativi!
Thank you for modding, that was quite helpful.

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Teara
Very nice.

Might be on the harder side, but it plays well.
ErunamoJAZZ
yey!, the rank is coming *-*
dkun
The title should be capitalized as "Dear big sister~remix ver.~" - sauce
In this case as well, shouldn't the artist be the vocalist? - "Chihiro Aihara/愛原 千尋"?
Also for consistency, could you remove the other .osb's you have in your folder? There's currently three.

Let me know what you decide. :o
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happy30
thanks for finding that.. just when i was sure i had everything set correctly...orz
I changed the artist to [arranger] ft. [vocalist], capitalized the title correctly and removed the osbs! o/
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