hi m4m
[Summer]
00:06:297 (1,2,3) - Isn't this too jumpy? It's only the beginning of the song.. try reducing it about like this: 00:11:944 (1,2)
00:08:239 (6,7,2,3) - ^
00:22:709 (1,2) - ^ x3.0..
00:23:944 (4,1) - it's really hard to stop after a big jump
00:24:298 (1,2) - not a good flow
00:30:120 (3,4) - woa.. this is like airman jump
00:44:415 (2) - Ctrl + g? flows better imo
The section you use x1.33 -
+ Too fast honestly that it feels overmapped when the actual objects are not. This solo is not like an intense guitar solo but a pleasant, peaceful violin. 1.1~1.2 should be enough. Try remapping this part; it could be more fun, and look better
+ The distance between sliders are fine, but between circles & circles, or sliders & circles should be smaller.(use around x1.2, x0.8 for each after fixing the bpm to 1.1~1.2)
For example,
02:04:356 (1,2) // 02:07:180 (1,2) - should be closer (DS x1.2 looks fine)
02:07:356 (2,3,4) - the space between objects make players break sliders easily in this kind of situation
02:12:827 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - and it makes these almost unable to read. a slider and two circles should be overlapping more.
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02:35:239 (3,1) - suddenly too close
02:37:356 (2,3) - horribly large jump
02:41:768 (3,4,1) - is there a reason for anti-jumps?
[384's insane]
00:38:239 - add a note? preferably stack on 1. This is because there was a big jump (00:36:827 (1,2)), which might make players confuse the distance between 00:37:886 (3,1)
00:43:533 (3,1) - ^same. too close this time
00:45:650 (2,4) - ctrl + g? makes it more fun imo.
01:23:062 (2) - try something more stylized. Something like this might look better.
01:36:474 - add a note? feels empty (stack on blue 1)
02:07:886 - ^^ (stack on green 3)
02:33:650 (3) - ctrl + g and move up, end on 02:34:003 or 02:34:180, to fit to the vocal sustain
good diff
[Hard]
00:21:827 (4,5,6) - jump into a stream in a hard diff is not a good idea; it's hard to do that.
00:30:827 (5,3) - bad overlap. Especially since 3's color is similar to the background.
00:34:886 (4,5) - bad flow
02:16:180 (3,4,5) - i recommend changing the rhythm like this (in all the patterns here)
(because the triplets in the music are not well conveyed since some upbeats are on the slider's tail. // you can change the last slider into a repeat slider or a triplet circle)
[Normal]
00:04:709 (4,1) - (nazi) perfect blanket?
00:43:533 (2) - make this shape neater
00:45:297 (1,2) - (nazi) better blanket
01:29:768 (2,1) - (nazi) blanket each other?
That's about it~ Hope this helps
GL