1. Normal (4.26 stars, 318 notes)
2. Sharon's (5 stars, 663 notes)

awp wrote:

TIMING: I went with a single timing section at BPM: 190.00 and offset: 1230. The drums are a bit human in this so it kinda goes in and out by a few milliseconds. It feels a bit late though.

It might just be my screwing around, but you might need to resnap all notes. I'm not 100% sure, since I played with the timing.

[Normal]
01:37:54 (6) - Sliders like this one are totally unacceptable because it is impossible to tell where the ball is going, and it disrupts the flow of play.
02:01:23 (2) - Another unacceptable slider. Also, it's too close to the note before it.
02:19:54 (2,3,4) - This is imbalanced for a Normal difficulty. Quarter notes at 190bpm is too much, dood!
02:53:65 (4) - This is just a personal preference but I would shorten this slider by half a beat.
03:11:65 (1) - Though this is a minor offender, you should straighten this slider out so it doesn't overlap itself.

[Hard]
I'd rename this to Insane, to start.
01:12:28 (12) - Start a new combo here and space it away from the 11 a bit.
02:13:54 (12) - Same as above.
02:33:44 (12) - It might be good to put some prompt that this slider is double speed, it feels a bit unpredictable.

Overall, you got some pretty fun patterns going on and for the most part made good use of the space around the playfield, so it shouldn't take much to get this sucker going.

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

Timing:
Sorry I'm using my notebook and there's no mouse . so i cant test it .


Normal:
You use 1/8 beat snap?? i think 1/4 is enough . change to 1/4 . and resnap all notes.
Why your DS sometimes 0.8 sometimes 0.9 sometimes1.0. plz choose one . and replace all notes.

00:03:404 - remove this section line . i think it's useless.
00:05:969 - ^
01:05:009 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - oh. it's awesome in normal.
02:23:208 - remove this section line .
03:04:034 (1) - jump jump jump .
02:19:520 (2,3) - for a normal . i dont like 1/4 beat because it's hard and it looks a little hard to read.

Hard:
00:03:404 - remove this section line . i think it's useless.
00:05:969 - ^
01:12:271 (1) - too close to 11 slider
02:13:521 (1) - ^
02:23:208 - remove this section line .

for hard . i really don't like a map made by Ctrl+c and Ctrl+v . try to make some strange.after all,this is your first map . Great job.

Mianki wrote:

Normal:

-02:42:883 I would add one more circle here

Hard:

Can't find any probs


Normal felt a bit repetitive, nothing else wrong with it and Hard was okay.
Good map
Star~

DJMax wrote:

This is my 1st map........I think it is perfect.......How about you?

1. BPM: 190
2. Offset: 1,230

1. 00:10:07 (1,2,3) - Finish on each of these
2. 01:20:49 (1) - Finish on the end
3. 01:21:75 (2,3) - And on both of these
4. 01:35:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Claustrophobic spacing which is smaller than the rest of the map
5. 02:03:12 (1,3) - Finishes
6. 02:16:30 (10) - Move forward by a 1/4.
7. 02:16:62 (1) - Lengthen by a 1/4.
8. 02:17:88 (2,3,4) - Move each forward by a 1/4.
9. 02:19:54 (2,3,4) - wtf
10. 03:02:17 (1) - Finish on end
11. 03:03:44 (2,3) - And on these
12. 03:04:07 (1,3) - Ugly overlap
13. 03:12:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Weird & squished

1. 00:47:33 (7,8) - Ugly overlap
2. 01:01:86 (1,2) - Ugly overlap
3. 01:48:59 (7,8) - Ugly... you get the idea. Try moving up to a higher grid snap if you can't put notes near slider ends where you want them.
4. 02:03:12 (1) - Remove the New Combo.
5. 02:19:54 (3,4,5,6,7) - lol
6. 02:19:94 - Another note here?

Darkoff wrote:

this map is awesome.

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