SPOILER

1. Spacing is very inconsistent. Just because this is a high-tier difficulty, spacing must not be ignored.
2. Try to avoid overlaps that don't look appealing. 00:32:076 (2,4) - 00:39:712 (2,4) - 00:40:803 (6,9) - these were just some examples.

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hey, from my Q~

[General]
Flawless.

[Easy]
wow, this diff is very linear...
But otherwise, it's fine ATM. Just one little thing:
01:24:076 (2) - Spacing issue.

But that's pretty much it.

[Normal]
This diff is quite hard for a Normal. Maybe you should make some parts a little easier, and besides, don't forget about design:
00:10:621 (1,2,3) - For example, this. The flow doesn't really promise much. Maybe re-arrange this?
And also, try to avoid as many overlaps as possible in easier difficulties.

00:22:985 (5) - New combo here.
00:34:621 (1,2,3) - Don't make (1) so narrow and compact. Rather expand it (placement-based). Also, re-shape the sliders so they make a great blanket pattern:

SPOILER

00:40:440 (4) - Definitely new combo.
00:41:530 (5,6,1) - Spacing inconsistency between (6) and (1).
00:43:349 (1,2,3) - (box)

SPOILER

1. 00:43:349 (1) - last node one grid up
2. 00:44:803 (3) - adjust last two nodes to make better blanket

00:53:349 (5,6) - Don't make the reverse arrow reach (6).
01:03:712 (1,2,3,4) - This is all narrow and overlapping. Re-arrange this, please.

[Hard]
AR -1

00:23:712 (3,4,5) - Spacing inconsistency.
00:44:803 (4) - Delete second node, it is just unnecessary.
00:47:712 (8,1) - Spacing issue.
01:20:985 (1) - Spinner ends offbeat. Please change that.

[Ixxm's]
Just some general tips:

1. Spacing is very inconsistent. Just because this is a high-tier difficulty, spacing must not be ignored.
2. Try to avoid overlaps that don't look appealing. 00:32:076 (2,4) - 00:39:712 (2,4) - 00:40:803 (6,9) - these were just some examples.

00:27:348 (8,9) - Whistle overusage here?
00:51:530 (1) - Remove NC here.

Stopped here. It's basically the two general aspects repeating over and over again. You should consider remapping this. If not, please re-arrange concerned patterns.

[Insane]
HPDR -1
AR -1
OD -1

00:05:894 (4,5,6) - Remove (5).
It doesn't follow any sound that is in the background or whatever. It is just redundant.
00:25:167 (7,1) - Serious spacing issue.
01:25:440 (1) - Silence this spinner.

Nice diff. I like it.

Good luck.

vahn10 wrote:

starred

xChippy wrote:

Quiz-chan wrote:

Hey, from my Q~

[General]
Flawless.

[Easy]
wow, this diff is very linear...
But otherwise, it's fine ATM. Just one little thing:
01:24:076 (2) - Spacing issue.

But that's pretty much it.

[Normal]
This diff is quite hard for a Normal. Maybe you should make some parts a little easier, and besides, don't forget about design:
00:10:621 (1,2,3) - For example, this. The flow doesn't really promise much. Maybe re-arrange this?
And also, try to avoid as many overlaps as possible in easier difficulties.

00:22:985 (5) - New combo here.
00:34:621 (1,2,3) - Don't make (1) so narrow and compact. Rather expand it (placement-based). Also, re-shape the sliders so they make a great blanket pattern:

SPOILER

00:40:440 (4) - Definitely new combo.
00:41:530 (5,6,1) - Spacing inconsistency between (6) and (1).
00:43:349 (1,2,3) - (box)

SPOILER

1. 00:43:349 (1) - last node one grid up
2. 00:44:803 (3) - adjust last two nodes to make better blanket

00:53:349 (5,6) - Don't make the reverse arrow reach (6).
01:03:712 (1,2,3,4) - This is all narrow and overlapping. Re-arrange this, please.

[Hard]
AR -1

00:23:712 (3,4,5) - Spacing inconsistency.
00:44:803 (4) - Delete second node, it is just unnecessary.
00:47:712 (8,1) - Spacing issue.
01:20:985 (1) - Spinner ends offbeat. Please change that.

[Ixxm's]
Just some general tips:

1. Spacing is very inconsistent. Just because this is a high-tier difficulty, spacing must not be ignored.
2. Try to avoid overlaps that don't look appealing. 00:32:076 (2,4) - 00:39:712 (2,4) - 00:40:803 (6,9) - these were just some examples.

00:27:348 (8,9) - Whistle overusage here?
00:51:530 (1) - Remove NC here.

Stopped here. It's basically the two general aspects repeating over and over again. You should consider remapping this. If not, please re-arrange concerned patterns.

[Insane]
HPDR -1
AR -1
OD -1

00:05:894 (4,5,6) - Remove (5).
It doesn't follow any sound that is in the background or whatever. It is just redundant.
00:25:167 (7,1) - Serious spacing issue.
01:25:440 (1) - Silence this spinner.

Nice diff. I like it.

Good luck.

Fixed all :3
Thanks for your mod !

Tsusuko wrote:

Star~

1. off Letterbox during breaks
2. your current offset is too early, set it as 456

1. 00:08:238 (1) - too soon after spinner, i'd not use the spinner for this Easy diff
2. 00:21:510 (3) - awkward, remove the arrow and make it as 2/1 slider
3. 00:24:420 (3) - ^ but this slider is ok with an arrow
4. 00:41:874 (3) - make it 2/1 slider
5. 00:43:329 - add a circle
6. 00:54:056 (1) - it should be end at 00:56:056 - , but that would make another problem. so i recommend to remove this spinner and add some notes instead
7. 01:05:874 (1) - no, it doesn't fit with the music at all
8. 01:23:147 (1) - too soon after spinner
9. 01:25:147 - maybe add 1/2 slider here, move the spinner to 01:25:510 -

1. 00:19:874 - ~ 00:30:238 - follow vocals, it's too boring
2. 00:41:510 (2) - stack on 00:39:692 (3) -
3. 00:43:329 - ~ 00:55:692 - remap this part, you could really make it better and better
4. 00:54:238 (1) - it should be end at 00:56:056 -

• sorry, remap these diffs if you really want to rank this map

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General] Fixed

1. off Letterbox during breaks
2. your current offset is too early, set it as 456

[Easy] Fixed

1. 00:08:238 (1) - too soon after spinner, i'd not use the spinner for this Easy diff
2. 00:21:510 (3) - awkward, remove the arrow and make it as 2/1 slider
3. 00:24:420 (3) - ^ but this slider is ok with an arrow
4. 00:41:874 (3) - make it 2/1 slider
5. 00:43:329 - add a circle
6. 00:54:056 (1) - it should be end at 00:56:056 - , but that would make another problem. so i recommend to remove this spinner and add some notes instead
7. 01:05:874 (1) - no, it doesn't fit with the music at all
8. 01:23:147 (1) - too soon after spinner
9. 01:25:147 - maybe add 1/2 slider here, move the spinner to 01:25:510 -

I see only 1/2 sliders with an arrow, that was too boring. try to catch more dynamic beats

[Normal] Fixed

1. 00:19:874 - ~ 00:30:238 - follow vocals, it's too boring
2. 00:41:510 (2) - stack on 00:39:692 (3) -
3. 00:43:329 - ~ 00:55:692 - remap this part, you could really make it better and better
4. 00:54:238 (1) - it should be end at 00:56:056 -

[Hard,Insane,Ixxm's] Remapped parts of these difficults

• sorry, remap these diffs if you really want to rank this map

Good luck then

Verlaren wrote:

Hi~ From Aincrad's Modding queue~

Red: must be fixed
Blue: high recommended
black: suggestion

General:
add to title (Short ver.) Uuhm is it necessary? Because it already got TV size in the title


Easy:
AR -1, because 4 too fast for easy diff, fix it please.
00:03:365(1) - mahe this slider same as previous slider.
00:41:910(3) - add clap on slider's end
00:45:183(2) - ^
00:52:819 - add clap
01:04:819(4) - NC. Fix it! otherwise it will be difficult for beginners to restore the level of HP after blunders.
01:19:728(3) - add clap on sliders's end


Normal:
00:05:910(4) - make same as 00:04:637 (more symmetrical)
00:54:092(6) - maybe add finish. IMO
00:56:092 - add finish. you must add this finish
01:03:728(1) - spacing...use distance snap tool please!!

and good job - nice diff


Hard:
00:06:274(8) - move to x:359 y:348. That is more fun
00:44:546(4) - unsnapped slider! move to one tick back!!
00:46:274(8) - NC
00:48:819 - add note
00:57:365 - maybe add note?
01:03:910 - ^
01:17:365(2) - add one reverse
01:22:637 - add note.
01:23:001(1) - remove NC


Ixxm's:
AR -1 IMO
00:02:456(3) - make slider more symmetrical
00:36:637(2) - move to x:168 y:180 IMO it's better
00:41:728(7) - NC
00:56:183(6) - hidden reverse arrow. Fix it please!
01:07:637(5) - unsnapped pattern
01:25:274(5) - remove this note.
...and remove all bookmarks in this diff.


Insane:
AR -1 IMO it's better
CS -1 !
00:41:183(3) - make a symmetrical slider, same as 00:40:456(1)
01:17:365(2,3,4,5,6) - make a polygon circles. That is more fun and looks better.


Nice map and good luck

P.S. if something is not clear - ask me in game.

MineC24 wrote:

Modding queue~

Easy

00:13:546 (1,2,3) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735532
(00:13:546 (1) - x:144 y:120 and 00:15:728 (3) - stack by 00:13:546 (1))
00:31:001 (3) - move -> x:272 y: 180
00:47:365 (5) - stack by 00:45:910 (3)
(and 00:45:910 (3) - stack grid)
01:00:092 (2) and 01:01:546 (1) - avoid these
01:07:728 (4) - avoid 01:07:001 (3)'s reverse?
01:09:183 (2,4) - avoid these

Normal

imo, AR - 1

00:03:365 (1) - Distance (keeping x1.0 spacing plz)
00:05:910 (4) - ^
00:35:728 (2,3) - Blanket these

Hard

00:04:092 (4) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735547 (Blanket )
00:06:274 (8) - imo, NC here
00:11:728 (4) - this jump -> looks bad...
01:03:910 (1,2) - unstack by 01:04:456 (3) and change by slider
01:12:092 (2) - unstack by 01:11:728 (1) (because this stack -> little unfollow music..)

Ixxm's

Diff name change -> Ixxm's Insane

00:17:910 (11) - move -> x:184 y:268
00:19:910 - add note here (stack by 00:20:092 (1))
00:26:456 (2,3) - this jump -> looks bad... change this plz
00:37:365 (1,2) - Blanket plz
00:44:274 (2,4) - stack plz
00:49:910 (1) - 1/1 beat slider plz
00:53:546 (1) - stack by 00:52:819 (4)
00:59:001 (1,2) - Distance
01:06:819 (1,2,3,4,5) - note shape change -> Star
01:13:728 (2) - Distance (Close plz)
01:25:183 (4,5) - stack plz

Insane

imo, OD - 1

00:03:365 (1,2,3,4) - how about this? -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735572
00:34:637 (1) - stack by 00:34:092 (4)
00:53:546 (8) - avoid 00:52:637 (7) plz (So Hidden...)
00:58:092 (7,8) - So confuse these... change by -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735576
01:07:365 (3,4) - connection these
01:09:728 (7,8) - same as 00:58:092 (7,8)

GL

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
From my queue.~

General

Nothing here except one: hitsound volume is a bit low. Try to raise it up.
Fixed
My Mod

[Insane]
Overall, this diff is good, but about hitsound, you almost used only clap, that's too boring. The part you used clap doesn't have whistle and same as whistle part - no clap. Try to use more. I'm pretty sure it will be better than.
OD - 1, your circle size 5 with OD 8 is hell. CS is 4 o_O
00:33:874 (3) - Stack with 00:33:147 (1) -
00:39:510 (2,3,4,5) - This seem so random. Make it better.
00:52:601 (7) - Make some jump instead of so many slider repeat. Also, you can add more note and start spinner at 00:54:056 - instead of 00:53:692 (1) -
00:57:874 (6) - NC.
00:58:601 (1) - Remove NC.
00:59:329 (3) - NC here.
01:09:510 (6) - NC.
01:10:237 (1) - Remove NC.
01:10:965 (4) - NC.
Fixed all
[Ixxm's]
00:25:874 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Meh....Hitsound in this diff seem so random,especially last part. And also, if you want a fast slider, try to use high slider velocity. You changed slider speed too much and that's really annoying
Flow is good but i really don't like the way you use stack in this map.
Unecessary timing point:
00:07:420
00:16:783
00:48:420
01:03:513
01:13:692
01:19:692
01:25:510
01:28:420
Fixed

00:06:965 (4) - One grid to the left.
00:46:238 (1,2,3) - I don't see any reason in music to make 00:46:601 (3) - jump from 00:46:420 (2) -
01:08:056 (1) - Finish at start and clap at the end.
01:08:783 (3) - remove clap at the end
01:09:147 (4) - Clap here.
01:11:329 (4) - Clap at start.
01:18:420 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - No hitsound?
01:22:601 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Random hitsound
Few things here we're already fixed
[Hard]
BPM is 165, and i don't think slider velocity 1.00 is good for a hard diff. Yes it is 165 o_O
Also, this diff try to avoid overuse Shift key. I mean, it's a bit straight and diagonal. Make it more free.

00:15:692 (5) - Overlap. I dont see overlapping O_o

[Normal]
Hitsound problem like the other diff.
00:07:692 (1,2,3,4) - Too hard for a normal diff.

[Easy]
Same problem with hitsound, pattern seem fine.
Good luck

Good luck~ <3

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi there o/
Summoned because M4M :3

[General]
00:31:718 - Add an uninherited timing point (red line) here with the same BPM, just to adjust the metronome, It may happen that some green lines may unsnap by -1ms, check at least that the ones needed for kiai time are properly snapped after this. Resnap all your objects after this.

[Easy]
00:21:536 (3) - Making this a bit more curved would look nicer, remember fix the spacing after you do this, in case you do.
00:41:910 (3) - You can make this a curved slider, greatly improving the flow and make it nice to play for beginners.

SPOILER

00:44:092 (1) - Soften a bit the curve for these type of sliders, maybe like this.

SPOILER

00:46:274 (4,5) - Something similar as above.
01:00:456 (3,1,2,3,1) - All these repeat sliders may be a bit boring even in an Easy, try to make this part with more variety, maybe like this, of course if you decide to change, you can make your own pattern.
http://puu.sh/2NwUt.png
01:05:910 (2) - There's a strong beat in 01:06:456, you can do this and this will sound better in my opinion.


[Normal]
It seems this is a collab, put who made which parts in Creator's Words :p well we didnt kinda did it in parts :3
Why this diff has different claps than the other diffs? o3o
01:09:183 (2) - Maybe make this curve leads more to the next circle?
01:12:456 (3) - Make this curve a bit softer, in a way it looks similar to the previous slider, adding a nice look.

[Hard]
This diff uses the same Slider Velocity than Normal, I'd recommend incresing it a bit.
00:06:274 (1) - Maybe remove the NC here?
00:15:910 (8) - Remove clap in the end.
00:08:274 (3) - Stack this with 00:08:092 (2), it plays better in my opinion.
01:22:637 (1) - Unstack this, it's a bit confusing as it's after a spinner, or you could add a circle in 01:22:819, fitting very nice.

[Ixxm's Insane]
00:06:456 (4) - Remove the whistle in this slider and put it in each of its beats, select the circle in the slider until it becomes red and you put the whistle.
00:13:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - For this part you could use this hitsound pattern, put claps on every white tick, delete those claps in red ticks, it hears very spammy. Also, put a finish in the start of 00:16:456 (1).
00:19:092 (3,4) - Move both to the previous blue tick, after you do, fix the placement.
00:23:001 (2) - Remove the whistle in the body and put only in the sides.
00:24:456 (6) - ^
00:25:910 (1,3,5,6) - ^
00:28:456 (1,8) - ^
00:29:819 (7) - Delete this circle, the triple here is not expected.
00:31:728 (1) - Put a finish in te start
00:35:910 (5) - Put a whistle in the reverse, to keep consistency with your previous whistle in 00:34:637 (1)
00:31:728 - 00:47:728 - For all this part you could use a whistle every 3rd beat, like the one you used in 00:34:637 (1).
01:13:728 (2) - Make this a single circle, remember what I said about unexpected triples, this is one of them
01:14:546 (5) - Delete this too, same reason as above.
01:14:546 (5) - Make a circle instead.
01:16:000 (5) - Delete this.

[Insane]
00:19:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - To be honest, I find this quite boring as it's the same circular motion for all this part, please rearrange this part in a diferent way
00:52:183 (2,4,6) - This is a bit overmapped, please delete them.
01:04:910 (2,4) - As I said above, delete this.
01:07:365 (3,4) - I think these sliders could be better as 1/2 sliders.
01:10:910 (8) - Delete this.
01:13:819 (2) - ^
01:22:546 (4) - ^
01:24:728 - Add a circle here
01:24:910 (2,6) - And delete this two, by doing this and the one above, this would be a nice final for the map.

That'd be all from my part, good luck /o/

zorefire wrote:

[Easy]

Ok 00:49:182 add finish.

what's with those inherited timing point mumbo jumbo going on there. If your not doing anything special with it I suggest u remove them will decrease file size by like 0.56% percent xD. Well it's slowly decreasing the sound :3

P.S - I know it's a little tiny modd but I have nothing to really fix win people give me maps near perfect like that sorry.

Hehe its not near perfect though :3 but thanks anyway

AnimeStyle wrote:

From my modding queue


[General]

The map is a little bit to "straight" :< imp

Unsnapped Circles and Sliders at Normal Diff:
00:58:273 (2)
00:58:637 (3)
01:07:364 (3)
01:07:728 (4)

01:25:546 - In alomost every diff, this slider ends at an other time , pls let all end at 01:27:909
[Hard]

00:16:546 - Low the volume of this timing point to 5%
01:00:445 - Rotate this 23°, Clockwise, Selection centre
01:08:808 - Unsnapped
01:24:081 - ^
01:24:263 - ^

[Ixxm's Insane]

00:19:183 - Maybe delete this Slider, fits not imp

[Insane]

00:19:365 - Volume = 5%
01:01:536 - Rotate this 11° , Clockwise, Selection Centre

Defnitly the best diff ;P

Hitsounds are very well placed at this map :3
( Sry I'm bad at modding Insanes :/ ) , I'm better at modding Easy and Normal XD

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XeVary wrote:

hi
Little suggestion
on insane
00:42:928 (9) - Try to put one here?

00:45:473 (7) - 00:50:382 (6) - 01:01:473 (6) - Here too
01:23:201 (1) - More that of the DS(Distance Snap) might be good
01:23:746 (4) - Let's reverse　:D

01:25:019 (3) - DS
on Ixxm's Insane
01:06:837 (1,2,1,2,1) -New Combo

I like this song　:D
do your best!

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

Hihi~

GENERAL: Good patterns and spacing. but some hitsounds need to be improved on, especially in hard

EASY

00:05:540 (3) - Change the audio here, lower it to 10% to finish it better before the slider. Fixed

00:47:382 (4,5) - Should be changed to one long slider. Its easy difficulty, so the long sliders would be more appropriate. Fixed

01:00:473 (3,1) - ^ I like it better this way :3

NORMAL

00:16:268 (7) - Please add finish sound

00:45:565 (5) - The circle note doesnt sound so approriate. consider changing it to a slider, then making 00:45:928 (6) - not bounce back



01:06:474 (4) - Without hitsounds, the circle isnt exactly appropriate for this part of the song. can be improved by adding Finish+Whistle hitsound

01:13:928 (1) - Distance spacing, should be X:324 y:100
Fixed all
HARD

00:06:269 (7) - This section should be changed to a spinner, to make the playing more smooth for players

00:22:655 (3) - A circle should be added after 00:21:564 (2) - to make the rhythm sound better

00:42:655 (5,6) - Finish/Clap hitsounds for emphasis on stacked circles

01:04:291 (3) - Try to make this slider more curvy, like this



01:20:473 (6) - Finish hitsound after the slider . Sounds weird to me :/
Fixed the rest.

Sorry but Im not good at mapping Insane difficulties so I only did 3. but i hope I helped~

Awaken wrote:

Here's my mod.

I am just a newbie in modding
Maybe my mod can't help you
I can only mod harder difficulty than "hard" sorry!

[Hard]
00:19:904 (1,2) - I always don't like this kind of flow http://puu.sh/2S17o.jpg fix
01:05:746 (1) - this spinner may be better to use slider to replace ^

[Ixxm's Insane]
01:13:564 (1,2,3) - jump or may read wrong Fix
01:15:019 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:18:450 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should add a note on 0:19:086Fix
01:06:473 (7,8,1,2,1,2) - the jump may be able to be more interesting http://puu.sh/2S0ZG.jpg no fix


[Insane]
00:03:360 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about changing this? http://puu.sh/2S00s.jpg fix
00:05:905 (4,5,6) - i think it's a little crowded. you can try jumping http://puu.sh/2S09p.jpg ^
00:52:109 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think this jump is more beautiful http://puu.sh/2S0ny.jpg Changed it but into something else
01:04:837 (1,2,3) - jump or may read wrong fix
01:23:201 (1,2,3,4) - try jumping http://puu.sh/2S0x7.jpg ^

TheVileOne wrote:

Mod

Easy
It's a very clean map. Only minor things to say.

00:10:631 (3) - Wrap more evenly around 4? That gap just looks ugly to me. Just in case you don't know the terminology, wrapping an object around another object is referred to as blanketing. I will refer to it as such.
00:34:655 (1,2) - Blanket around this should be more even. I fixed this by having the second point (of slider 2) at x 33 y 134, the last point is at x 58 y 193. I turned grid snap off to fix. Make sure to fix the spacing with 3 afterwards.
00:47:382 (4,5) - Blanket here?
00:52:110 (3) - Any particular reason why you didn't add a finish here? I think I know this answer. you're only using them every so many measures. This sound stood out from the other sounds in terms of tone though. Maybe consider having a finish here because of that.
01:00:473 (3) - I suggest having this look similar to 1.

01:05:928 (2) - Starts a bit too close to the body of 1 for my tastes. It would help if 01:05:201 (1) - and 01:07:382 (3) - were in the exact same position. 01:05:201 (1) - is at x 266 y 242 and 01:07:382 (3) - is at x 267 y 244. The easiest way to fix this is to move 1. This will make the gap a little better.

Normal

00:07:722 (1,2,3,4) - Straight sliders just don't give this part justice. I think you could create a more interesting pattern utilizing two repeat sliders or at the very least adding more curves.
00:20:110 (2,3,4) - I think this looks better as a blanket. What do you think?
00:27:383 (2,3,4,5) - These curves look sloppy to me. I think reducing the arc makes a nicer pattern in general. Here's an example. You don't really have to change it if you don't want to. The arc just seems out of place to me.
00:51:383 (4,5) - Too linear. Something like this makes more sense IMO.
00:59:383 (1) - Move lower and more under previous slider for a better alignment. I'm pretty sure you could fix the alignment without screwing with your patterns.
00:59:383 (1,2) - Too close/ spacing breaks pattern consistency.
01:10:292 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Normally I would prefer patterns like these to be more consistent (similar slider shapes, spacings etc) But I rather like how 01:13:201 (4,1,2,3) - is executed. It makes up for the lack of consistency.
01:22:655 (1,2) - I think this could be a better pattern. I suggest placing the sliders in a more interesting way.

Hard
[Note] Chrome ate my first attempt at a mod for Hard. I apologize if this mod feels rushed. ask me if you have any questions.

Some parts of this difficulty felt randomly placed. It would be nice if this difficulty had elements that all fit together coherently and were based upon a common structure. There were parts that were just mapped very differently than other parts, sometimes unnecessarily so.

Kiai lacked finishes. the easier difficulties had more finishes than this difficulty has.

00:01:178 (3,4,5,6) - I think it would be better if you made the blanket perfect with 3,4 and then made a triangle pattern with the stack. http://puu.sh/2Sh3M.jpg
00:03:723 (3,4) - I think a perfect blanket here would look better. http://puu.sh/2Sh8N.jpg
00:05:904 - I suggest adding a note here. The gap between the next note throws me off the rhythm, which in turn makes the spinner uncomfortable to spin.
00:07:723 (1,2,3,4,5) - Are you happy with this pattern? It's probably not the best pattern, but it's not bad either. I could try to find a better one in a recheck if you want.
00:14:814 (4,5,6) - Stack leaning is messing with the spacing. You might want to manually space to fix it.
00:19:904 (1,2) - I don't like this blanket. It's imperfect and I think that the beat spread out is much more desirable to look at. consider forming it similarly to the next segment.
00:32:837 (3,4) - Weird pattern. How about something like this? http://puu.sh/2SizE.jpg
00:36:109 (3,4) - I did not expect this pattern to be angled. Could you try to make it so 3 doesn't angle upward as much?
00:42:655 (5,6,1) - Spacing is different and it shouldn't be. It's fine that you're using a higher distance snap, but make sure that the distance snap is the same spacing across the transition. (It isn't).
00:44:110 (3,4,5,6) - Randomly shaped pattern doesn't really fit considering that there are so many consistent patterns in this area.
00:47:438 - I'm not sure about this finish.
00:53:382 (2,3,4) - Is this spacing change intentional?
01:03:746 (2) - Looks bad curved in that direction. I recommend curving in the other direction and making a blanket with 01:02:837 (4) - Example http://puu.sh/2ShUR.jpg
01:05:746 (1) - The flatness of this doesn't complement the rest of the pattern IMO. Try adding more of a curve to wrap around the previous part.
01:22:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Just looks random to me. I think it could be a lot better.

Ixxm's Insane
I will need to be a better mood to more accurately mod this. There's a lot of senseless speed changes and some parts were so slow it was affecting my ability to play. The slowest parts of the Insane should not be the hardest parts.

00:02:450 (3) - Use a better curve. Use the new slider algorithm. It should look similar to 00:04:995 (3) -
00:20:110 (2) - Move last point to x 112 y 199. I think it looks better entering the note curve that way IMO.
00:29:564 (5) - The misalignment here is bad. You should fix this.
00:39:746 (2,3,4) - This would look so much better if the pattern after 2 was placed where 2 is pointing. http://puu.sh/2Sjnf.jpg
00:41:928 (2) - Looks to curve unnecessarily inward. If anything it should curve like this http://puu.sh/2SjrW.jpg
00:43:382 - This slowdown had terrible flow.
00:45:746 (4) - Use a better curve here?
00:52:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - A spam of annoying hitsounds >.< also the jumps are faster than the slider speed of the slider right before them. I find that very awkward.
00:54:110 (4) - I consider this abusing slider velocities. Slowing down like this doesn't make any sense here.
01:17:201 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Annoying.
01:18:473 (6,7,8,9,1,2) - Speed changes are unreadable and do not make any sense.
01:19:382 (9) - I feel this should be a single note.

Insane
There's probably a lot more things to be naziid about in this. I covered a large portion of the issues though.

00:04:632 (2) - I suggest a curve similar to 00:04:086 (5) - .
00:14:086 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's weird that the slider shapes keep changing. I recommend making it more consistent, especially here 00:14:631 (4,5,6) - 00:15:177 (6,7,8) - could use a pattern change. It's not that interesting.
00:28:837 (1) - I feel this doesn't look great in relation to slider 7. I suggest blanketing around the edge of 7 for a better pattern. http://puu.sh/2SkvK.jpg
00:29:564 (3,1) - Doesn't look that good either. Not sure how to fix though.
00:34:655 (1,2,3) - Spacing looks like an error to me. (Make sure this whole combo has consistent spacing)
00:49:928 (4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern just screws me up. Sliders are so slow. >.< it just kills the flow. i'm pretty sure it's because of that triple. I highly recommend removing the middle note, and spacing out. It plays a lot better.
00:58:655 (5,6) - Too close.
01:00:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Structure is shaky here. I feel that the notes don't form a cohesive pattern, despite first appearing like they were going to. also 4 and 5,6,7 look randomly placed.
01:11:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Structure is a bit off here too, but not as much.


Conclusion

I don't want to star this with the GD is such a poor shape. I would be willing to recheck, but perhaps after a mod or two. I'd appreciate it if you would :3

_nara_ wrote:

hi, m4m from your queue.

[Easy]
00:07:722 insert break between this 00:16:450 bcs its easy diff, and youre gonna kill their hands o.O
-1 ar and hd?

[Normal]
00:06:268 spinner?
00:07:722 break between this? 00:16:450

[Hard]
well, this is a hard diff, so no break time isn't big case.
and so for other diff.

sorry for the short mod ^^ bcs your map was good.