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Update!spboxer3 wrote:
<-我真的是差點就悲傷了... mod差點全消失233※ Notice
red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.Sekai's Hentai Easy
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(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- nazi:
- 00:04:926 (2,1) - Umm. looks this pattern should be blanket, but you didn't make it. if you think it's just a easy and just spend few time to make your pattern more pretty, you can do this :> 動了下
- 00:16:089 (4,1) - same as minor issue, make both of slider parallel? If you do this, you should check 00:18:879 (3) - too. k
- 00:31:438 (4) - &00:34:228 (3) - add NC and remove NC for 00:33:182 (1) - it's a kinda mess NC switch for here. you should make NC set at suit place not only "5 combo or x combo so I should make this place set NC" k
- 00:43:996 (4) - [suggestion] you can add NC for here to fit the music. k
- 00:49:577 (3) - ^ I will add NC for this place too, when rhythm is 1/2 -> 1/4 use NC is more suitable. k
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Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)不論本身間距 稍微錯開點吧...這樣可以避免hit skin有壓邊的情形
- 00:34:228 (1,3) -
- 01:14:693 (1,3) -
- 01:20:275 (1,3) - 都修了
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(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 可以nazi甚麼的注意一下
00:38:414 (3) - 何不加個NC來凸顯四個點?
- 00:00:391 (1,1) - 對稱
- 00:36:147 (4,1) - 對稱形狀? 這地方歪了
- 01:07:542 (3,4) - ^
- 01:21:496 (3,4) - 形狀問題
- 01:24:810 (4,1) - blanket的部分 形狀都動了一下...應該不太好看 求nazi >_<
00:43:996 (3) - ^同類型
00:49:577 (5) - ^ 都NC了形狀,blanket甚麼的有需要找我 我幫你調Hard
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(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- nazi:
- 01:10:856 (4,5,6) - 各間距之間的問題 動了一下
- 01:23:065 (1,2) - 給點建議 下次注意一下這種間距,你在01:22:717 (7,1) - 用了1.7的間距 可是後頭用了1.0 差距實在有點大 而節奏又不同 所以看起來後頭的1.0會十分奇怪 這個嘛..先暫時不動 因為還能read(有NC
- 00:28:385 - 事實上這個點是空拍 因此在這邊聽打擊音會顯得有些突兀 可以考慮改一下 >:前面都是連這裡突然空不好反應過來 不如直接用折返帶過去
- 00:43:996 (4) - 同前面幾個diff所說的 NC問題 k
- 00:50:275 (5) - ^ 下在(4)比較好看
Insane
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(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:29:693 (4,1) - 以聽到這首歌的感覺這邊並不適合作停頓 反而用跳會比較適合, 可是你用了停頓 因此我會建議下次做圖時注意遺下這部分 給我的感覺是00:29:344 (3,4) - 較遠的間距00:29:693 (4,1) - 1.0即可 這樣 如果要作跳就做大一點吧...就是兩邊都1.7這樣
- 00:50:885 (12,1) - 間距問題你懂的... IRC說過了 k