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blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
00:43:996 (3) - ^同類型
00:49:577 (5) - ^形狀,blanket甚麼的有需要找我 我幫你調
※ Notice
red is unrankable issue.blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.
Sekai's Hentai Easy
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- nazi:
- 00:04:926 (2,1) - Umm. looks this pattern should be blanket, but you didn't make it. if you think it's just a easy and just spend few time to make your pattern more pretty, you can do this :>
- 00:16:089 (4,1) - same as minor issue, make both of slider parallel? If you do this, you should check 00:18:879 (3) - too.
- 00:31:438 (4) - &00:34:228 (3) - add NC and remove NC for 00:33:182 (1) - it's a kinda mess NC switch for here. you should make NC set at suit place not only "5 combo or x combo so I should make this place set NC"
- 00:43:996 (4) - [suggestion] you can add NC for here to fit the music.
- 00:49:577 (3) - ^ I will add NC for this place too, when rhythm is 1/2 -> 1/4 use NC is more suitable.
Normal
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
- 00:34:228 (1,3) -
- 01:14:693 (1,3) -
- 01:20:275 (1,3) -
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 可以nazi甚麼的注意一下
- 00:00:391 (1,1) - 對稱
- 00:36:147 (4,1) - 對稱形狀? 這地方歪了
- 01:07:542 (3,4) - ^
- 01:21:496 (3,4) - 形狀問題
- 01:24:810 (4,1) - blanket的部分
00:43:996 (3) - ^同類型
00:49:577 (5) - ^形狀,blanket甚麼的有需要找我 我幫你調
Hard
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- nazi:
- 01:10:856 (4,5,6) - 各間距之間的問題
- 01:23:065 (1,2) - 給點建議 下次注意一下這種間距,你在01:22:717 (7,1) - 用了1.7的間距 可是後頭用了1.0 差距實在有點大 而節奏又不同 所以看起來後頭的1.0會十分奇怪
- 00:28:385 - 事實上這個點是空拍 因此在這邊聽打擊音會顯得有些突兀 可以考慮改一下
- 00:43:996 (4) - 同前面幾個diff所說的 NC問題
- 00:50:275 (5) - ^
Insane
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:29:693 (4,1) - 以聽到這首歌的感覺這邊並不適合作停頓 反而用跳會比較適合, 可是你用了停頓 因此我會建議下次做圖時注意遺下這部分 給我的感覺是00:29:344 (3,4) - 較遠的間距00:29:693 (4,1) - 1.0即可 這樣
- 00:50:885 (12,1) - 間距問題你懂的... IRC說過了
Muzukashii
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:26:554 (79,80,81,82,83) - kddkk/ddkdd?
- 00:43:996 (152,153,154,155,156,157) - ...既然前頭已經跟了vocal 這地方怎麼突然改成drum? 令人感到confuse的地方是00:42:600 - 到00:45:391 - 是同一段 可是分了兩段不同的下法
- 00:45:740 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170) - 同感覺 這段感覺不像是跟vocal 也不像跟drum 可是自創節奏也並沒有帶給音樂加分 打起來就是看到->打過 如此而已. 並沒有符合這歌的音樂性
- 00:48:182 (170,176,177,178,179,180) - 既然你這幾個都下了 那何不統一點 把00:48:879 - 也一起map?
- 00:52:891 (185,186) - kd, 當你在00:51:496 (181,182) - 使用了dk 可以聽出這是一對並且是相反音高的 所以我會建議使用kd
Oni
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:27:251 (122,123,125) - 聽起來為一組的 而且是音比較重的那種 所以建議把00:27:513 (124) - 刪除 這樣會比較容易凸顯背景音樂(鼓點)的重要性
- 00:34:228 (170,171,172,173,174,175) - 感覺因為這整段map起來了 所以整個段落變的模糊不清 感覺混和在一起 這樣其實並不好 我會建議把00:34:403 (171,172) - 刪除 而加個note在00:34:839 -
- 01:08:938 (345) - k或許會比較好點, 因為01:08:065 (339,342,344) - 都使用了k 而依照這個下法01:09:112 (346) - 也應該會是k 而你並沒有在這使用k 反而選擇跟隨vocal 因此在01:08:938 (345) - 使用k可以調和這種感覺
- 01:13:996 (374,375,376,377,378) - 同道理 kdkkd?
- 01:25:158 (434,435,436,437,438) - 跟隨著音高變化kkdkd貌似會比較適合