Lally wrote:

come richiesto Mod :3

[General]
megusta \( ° w ° )/

riguardo alla taiko l'ho guardata in auto credo che ci siano alcuni spazzi vuoti che comunque andrebbero posizionate delle note ò.ò

poi ci sono cose incoerenti tra tutte le difficolta come il kiai time :

Easy:
00:14:896 - 00:28:848
01:05:128 - 01:19:081
01:47:337 - ~ (finisce non si sa dove)

Xin's Normal:
00:14:896 - 00:28:848
01:05:128 - 01:19:081
~

Normal:
00:14:896 - 00:28:848
01:05:128 - 01:19:081
01:47:337 - ~ (finisce non si sa dove)

Hard:
00:14:896 - 00:28:848
01:05:128 - 01:19:081
01:47:337 - ~ (finisce non si sa dove)

Chyo's Taiko Oni
00:14:896 - 00:28:848
01:05:128 - 01:19:081
~

hai 2 scelte :
1~ elimini 01:47:337 - ~ (finisce non si sa dove) (scelta consigliata)
2~ o inserisci nelle altre diff il kiai time da 01:47:337 a xx:xx:xx dato che ogni difficolta finisce in un modo dovresti metterli tutti diversi
solo 2 difficolta finiscono nello stesso punto quindi segui il punto 1 \:D/

cavolo, quello è un errore di distrazione dovuto alla mod di ieri, aggungendo gli inherit points x ridurre il tempo mi son dimenticato di rimuovere la spunta su kiai time

[Easy]

usa lo snap divisor 1/4 non capissco il motivo di usare 1/6 :V
il resto tutto ok fatto, l'avevo spostato per errore su 1/6

[Xin's Normal]

00:36:174 - add a circle sounds better k

01:36:872 - add a circle sounds better k

[Normal]

00:08:965 - metti anche alla fine il clap come hai fatto nei altri slider originariamente c'era, poi qualcuno moddandomela mi disse di rimuoverlo, lo rimetto va

00:19:779 - clap alla fine dello slider per proseguire il ritmo che stai seguendo e anche qui : yes

00:20:128 - clap okay

00:22:569 - dato che prosegui il ritmo con i clap mettilo anche qui fatto

00:35:825 (2,3) - dato che stai seguendo una simmetria qui secondo me sarebbe meglio allinearli per bene fatto

00:48:383 - il 3 point è di troppo mi sa :V nah dai xD

01:05:128 (1,2,3,4) - allineali meglio per fare un arco

fiquo

[Hard]

00:52:918 - sistema bene la linea che è un po storta si lo so sono precisina @@

01:24:662 - credo che il 2 point non serve a nulla serve x tenere il ritmo, rimuovendolo resta il "buco"

01:28:848 - troppi point si può ottenere la stessa forma usandone molti dimeno poi la forma a ''C'' non è molto dritta la puoi migliorare :3

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

[Easy]
00:14:895 (1,2) - This curve are pretty ugly for me, do it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452375 done
01:13:500 (1) - Why you add finish+clap at end slider? It doesn't follow the song fixed
01:21:872 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452385 ohhh finally a good solution, thx a lot


[Xin's Normal]
00:06:174 (4) - New combo? k
01:00:942 (2) - Make a same slider shape as 00:59:546 (1) k
01:41:407 (5) - New combo? k
01:49:430 (5) - ^ k


[Normal]
* This diff has inconsistent spacing through this diff. You should make it consistent on spacing through this diff. Easy/Normal must have a consistent spacing
resized
00:14:895 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452385 ok
00:31:639 (1) - This will overlapped by spinner-osu, it makes hard to read for beginnersok
00:53:965 (1) - Same issue as 00:14:895 (1)ok


[Hard]
00:35:825 (1,1,1,1) - Why you need this combo? just to change a bit

Bye now <3

1. I think 1500 in Audio Lead-In is a liitle excessive, adjust to 1000?
2. Disable the letterbox during breaks

• - 00:14:895 (1,2) - Looks bad the overlap between those sliders, so try to move (2), something like this
  - 00:19:779 (6) - Delete whistle because sounds weird
  - 00:40:709 (2) - Add a whistle here for consistency
  - 00:51:872 (2) - Same ^
  - 01:02:337 (2,1) - Spacing
  - 01:10:011 (2) - Delete whistle and add a clap here
  - 01:40:709 (2) - Add a whistle to follow your hitsound pattern
  - 01:49:081 (4) - Delete clap and add a finish please

• - 00:36:872 (1) - Sounds a little off this slider in my opinion, move to 00:37:221
  - 01:49:430 (5,6) - This part sounds off for me, in my opinion you should to end here 01:49:081

• -- Nice diff but the sliders needs more work in my opinion
  - 01:16:988 (2) - Add clap here and here 01:16:639
  - 01:18:383 (5,6) - Same about the claps
  - 01:23:267 (1) - Remove new combo to follow your combo pattern

• - 00:05:128 (5,1) - Spacing
  - 00:35:825 (1,1,1,1,) - Why you do this about new combos? Remove all

MoodyRPG wrote:

Random mod here.

General

1. I think 1500 in Audio Lead-In is a liitle excessive, adjust to 1000? done
2. Disable the letterbox during breaks

done

Easy

• - 00:14:895 (1,2) - Looks bad the overlap between those sliders, so try to move (2), something like this yes sir
  - 00:19:779 (6) - Delete whistle because sounds weird sure
  - 00:40:709 (2) - Add a whistle here for consistency 'kay
  - 00:51:872 (2) - Same ^ 'k
  - 01:02:337 (2,1) - Spacing it was already, but i checked again
  - 01:10:011 (2) - Delete whistle and add a clap here ok
  - 01:40:709 (2) - Add a whistle to follow your hitsound pattern done
  - 01:49:081 (4) - Delete clap and add a finish please

yes sir
Xin's Normal

• - 00:36:872 (1) - Sounds a little off this slider in my opinion, move to 00:37:221 done on purpose
  - 01:49:430 (5,6) - This part sounds off for me, in my opinion you should to end here 01:49:081

fixed but at 01:49:430 -

Normal

• -- Nice diff but the sliders needs more work in my opinion i will think about it
  - 01:16:988 (2) - Add clap here and here 01:16:639 yes
  - 01:18:383 (5,6) - Same about the claps okay
  - 01:23:267 (1) - Remove new combo to follow your combo pattern

done

Hard

• - 00:05:128 (5,1) - Spacing just a regular jump, done to introduce next ones
  - 00:35:825 (1,1,1,1,) - Why you do this about new combos? Remove all

made on purpose because those jumps are far each other

Good luck

Hi, sorry I have no time to check mods feel free to delete the diff Xin's Normal

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Genshin

Your request from my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Add "Chyo-Kun" in tags, because he/she is Taiko guest diff.

done

Easy

1. 00:12:104 (3) Add NC be better. done
2. 01:00:942 (2,1) - Spacing is too far. Please fix it. done
3. 01:13:500 (1) - Add clap in slider end.

done

Xin's Normal

1. 00:06:523 (3) - Add clap in slider begin. ok
2. 00:08:267 (4) - Switch clap between slider begin and end. It suits the melody better. ok
3. 00:39:662 (5) - Add NC? ok
4. 01:30:244 (6) - Add NC here. ok
5. 01:49:430 (1) - Remove NC be better.

ok

Normal

1. 00:14:895 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner. done
2. 00:28:151 (5,6) - Move to down 2 grids? ok
3. 00:32:367 (1,2) - Move (1,2) to left 2 grids, then move (1) to up 1 grid. changed sliders directly
4. 00:55:360 (3,4) - Switch clap them.

done

Hard

1. 00:23:267 (1) - Add finish? can work
2. 00:36:174 (1,1,1) - Remove NC all. May be consider from 00:34:430 (1,2,3,4). 2nd person who tells me this, so okay
3. 01:31:988 (6,7,8) - Add whistle them. done
4. 01:37:211 (1) - Remove whistle.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

1. 00:10:011 (4,5,6) - Triplet doesn't fit the music here, how about changing it to 1/2?
2. 00:11:407 (4,5,6) - ^
3. 00:12:104 (1) - hum, I'm wondering why you want to end the spinner at blue tick? Anyway, I prefer either white tick or red tick.
4. 00:17:860 (2) - , 00:18:209 (4) - , 00:19:081 (3) - How about changing these note to don?
5. 00:30:244 (1,2,3,4) - These diplets don't fit the music here. Considering changing it?
6. 01:05:476 - Add a note here to make the note more coherent?
7. 01:06:697 - , 01:06:872 - ^Same.
8. 01:09:662 (7,1,2) - I didn't see any reason that big notes were needed because there were no accent present there.
9. 01:10:360 - This place is too empty compare to the whole difficulty.
10. Please map the whole MP3!

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko mod here. Sorry for long delay.

[Chyo's Taiko Oni]

1. 00:10:011 (4,5,6) - Triplet doesn't fit the music here, how about changing it to 1/2?
2. 00:11:407 (4,5,6) - ^
3. 00:12:104 (1) - hum, I'm wondering why you want to end the spinner at blue tick? Anyway, I prefer either white tick or red tick.
4. 00:17:860 (2) - , 00:18:209 (4) - , 00:19:081 (3) - How about changing these note to don?
5. 00:30:244 (1,2,3,4) - These diplets don't fit the music here. Considering changing it?
6. 01:05:476 - Add a note here to make the note more coherent?
7. 01:06:697 - , 01:06:872 - ^Same.
8. 01:09:662 (7,1,2) - I didn't see any reason that big notes were needed because there were no accent present there.
9. 01:10:360 - This place is too empty compare to the whole difficulty.
10. Please map the whole MP3!

I can see there are a lot of room for refinement. You need to find more Taiko mods.
Anyway, good luck with ranking.

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Hi there, from my lazy mod queue!
Lets see now =.o...

[General]

00:00:941 - How about setting the volume here at 35%? Sounds better :3 ok
00:31:639 - Put a new green timing point here with 40% volume :3 ok
01:31:872 - ^

no thx
[Easy]

00:21:872 (2) - this shape looks ugly.. breaks the flow aswell, consider shaping it better changed pattern
00:24:662 (2) - ^ same
00:31:639 (1) - you can certainly think of a better shape than that. done
A nice shape would fit the melody and give a nice flow...here try this

slider shape

160,96,31639,6,0,B|232:48|296:100|296:100|356:152|420:104|420:104,2,280

00:37:221 (1) - same for this slider like 00:31:639 (1) - just mirror it done
00:42:802 (1) - too plain.. how about this? ok

slider shape

152,96,42802,6,0,B|148:184|232:208|232:208|304:228|320:296,2,280

01:21:872 (1) - well...its nicely done but not 100% perfect..maybe with time you can improve it xD so? xD
01:27:453 (1) - ^

same
[Xin's Normal]

00:06:523 (2) - this clap doesnt fit on the intro at all. changed
00:08:267 (4) - ^ ^
00:15:244 (2) - how about making a blanket of 00:16:290 (3) ? no thx
00:20:476 (1,2,3,4) - I think this arrangment will be better to rhythm http://puu.sh/1gvql ye
00:53:965 (1) - curve it more so it matches the curve of 00:53:267 (4) done
00:55:360 (2) - ^ (mirror) ^
01:05:477 (2) - same as 00:15:244 (2) no thx
01:10:709 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:20:476 (1,2,3,4) its seems copy pasta done
01:27:453 (1,2) - looks overmapped and doesnt fit very well.... maybe this instead http://puu.sh/1gvzr done
01:36:174 (1) - shape it to match 01:35:128 (4) 's curve no thx
01:38:616 (1,2,3,4) - this combo doesnt fit the rhythm at all. Try this arrangement http://puu.sh/1gvK5 done on purpose to be different from the other normal
01:46:640 (1,2) - swap their places, it sounds better when they're switched.

[Normal]

I kinda feel this difficulty is redundant in the mapset...
Its overmapped imo

[Hard]

00:10:709 (7) - split this repeat slider to 2 small sliders? yes
00:31:639 (1) - :U ... xD
Looks really plain and linear...If i was in your place, i'd remap this difficulty. Its an opinion.

...thx anyway

Overall nice for a first map.
good luck!

xRayne wrote:

Star because your map is awesome ;3

1. wrong offset imo, try 961
2. for all diffs, the finish sound for last note doesn't fit well imo, maybe whistle for that

1. 00:05:128 (3,4) - make it perfectly, you could copy 00:03:732 (1,2) - and stack on 3

1. i recommend you to use only Xin's for Normal diff..

1. CS4 could be a bit hard for beginners, -1?

1. 00:05:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - keep your distance plz
2. 00:07:918 (5) - arrow is hidden by 1's hitburst, try other way
3. 00:10:360 (6) - NC due to the sudden jump
4. 00:19:430 (3) - clap? would fit well with your clap patter
5. 00:35:825 (1,2,3,4) - too sharp for this diff, maybe you could copy from 00:34:430 (1,2,3,4) - and ctrl+h
6. 00:57:453 (4) - clap on the head, like you did for 00:18:383 (3) -
7. 00:58:500 (2) - same as 00:19:430 (3) - if you followed ^
8. 01:08:616 (4,2) - ^
9. 01:13:500 (4) - NC
10. 01:33:035 (1) - arrow is almost hidden by 6's hitburst, try other way plz
11. 01:44:546 (3) - ^

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]

1. wrong offset imo, try 961 sounds a bit off
2. for all diffs, the finish sound for last note doesn't fit well imo, maybe whistle for that

ok

[Easy]

1. 00:05:128 (3,4) - make it perfectly, you could copy 00:03:732 (1,2) - and stack on 3

ok

[Normal]

1. i recommend you to use only Xin's for Normal diff..

:S

[Xin's]

1. CS4 could be a bit hard for beginners, -1?

yes

[Hard]

1. 00:05:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - keep your distance plz it's a pattern
2. 00:07:918 (5) - arrow is hidden by 1's hitburst, try other way done
3. 00:10:360 (6) - NC due to the sudden jump ok
4. 00:19:430 (3) - clap? would fit well with your clap patter this works
5. 00:35:825 (1,2,3,4) - too sharp for this diff, maybe you could copy from 00:34:430 (1,2,3,4) - and ctrl+h nah, it's slow
6. 00:57:453 (4) - clap on the head, like you did for 00:18:383 (3) - nice
7. 00:58:500 (2) - same as 00:19:430 (3) - if you followed ^ yes
8. 01:08:616 (4,2) - ^ ok
9. 01:13:500 (4) - NC ok
10. 01:33:035 (1) - arrow is almost hidden by 6's hitburst, try other way plz just on edit
11. 01:44:546 (3) - ^

^ same

Good lukc with rank~

Deni wrote:

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General

Add Chyo to the tags.

Imo the kiai time doesn't really fit the song that much and would be fine without it.

You should use some more hitsounds. Some parts are completly without hitsounds.

I can't mod taiko.

Folder seems fine.

Easy

00:12:104 (1) - Finish is too loud here. Use 30%-40% volume.
01:21:872 (1) - Make it more beautiful like this (2) :[/color] that's too long

Spiral

Or use a different slider.

01:27:453 (1) - Same here, doesn't look good.
01:38:616 (1) - Add whistle on reverse ? yes
01:45:593 (2,1) - Overlap yep but just the side, and i can't move it anywhere because spacing
[/color]
Xin's Normal

00:46:726 - 00:47:250 - Why so empty here?
01:31:639 (3) - Delete (3) and (4) and make 1 long slider so that it fits to the music.ok
01:49:430 (5) - Remove New Combo[/color]

Normal

No real problem here, just think of what I said in General about the hitsounds.

Hard

00:10:709 (7) - New Combo
01:13:500 (4) - ^ ok
01:49:430 (6) - Too silent. ok

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via pm.[/color]

Nitori-n wrote:

So many mods already. o.o I'll try to help with something...

[General]

Maybe it's just me, but the Kiai time looks kinda out of place in this song. It's quiet and doesn't really have a "climax".

[Easy]

Switch the pattern of 01:10:709 (1,2,3,4) - with 01:13:500 (1,2) - so you can establish the rhythm of that triple hit. danke

[Normal]

01:31:639 (3,4) - I would replace these clap sounds with soft whistle sounds (the bell ones). Just so it's consistent with the rest of this part.

[Hard] okay

00:19:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is the only stream I saw that was this close together. So I think these should be spaced out like the others.

UnderminE wrote:

[Easy]
01:00:942 (2) - x: 96 y: 272
01:03:732 (3) - x: 304
Slider tick rate 2 goes amazing with this song just saying

[Xin's Normal]
Needs more hitsounds, also you can use normal-whistle to catch that violin at background
01:25:360 (4,5,6) - such a good usage of whistles, try this kind of hitsound-pattern more in the rest of the map

Checked the rest, nothing wrong with mapset but needs a good usage of hitsounds. Especially soft-whistles. Also as I said in Xin's Normal diff, you can use Normal-whistle with low-volume for those viloin parts on sliders. It would sound awesome.

HellDawn wrote:

Just a quick mod :/

Normal

00:06:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern looks bad so I made something like this

SPOILER

104,184,6523,5,2,0:0:0
160,280,6872,1,0,0:0:0
256,232,7221,1,2,0:0:0
352,280,7569,1,0,0:0:0
408,188,7918,2,0,B|368:124|288:116,1,120
204,120,8616,2,8,B|108:152|100:200,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:31:639 (1,2,3) - It would be better If you move to center them

Hard

00:50:128 (5,6,7) - 1 grid down

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi

[Genral]

offset +3 (945) ok

[Easy]

00:04:430 (2) - 2 grid down with (3),(4) and adjust next notes
00:09:314 (1) - keep DS
00:27:453 (3) - 2 grid down
00:53:267 (4) - why don't you use Whistle instead Clap?
01:14:895 (4) - add Clap at end of slider
01:37:221 (3) - remove Whistle and 01:37:919 (4) - add Whistle
all done
[Xin's Normal]

00:47:337 (3) - 1 grid down
01:16:290 - add Whistle pls like 1st KIAI Time for consistent
01:43:151 (4) - add Whistle?
done
[Normal]

Circle -1
nothing special. but sound is boring can you stuff Whistle sound?
no for circle size
[Taiko]

00:18:386 (1) - d?
00:19:084 (1) - d?
I like it <3

[Hard]

01:23:267 (4) - add Whistle at start of slider?
01:28:848 (4) - ^
01:33:035 (1) - this slider's arrow coverd by 01:31:988 (6)'s hitbuster. Tilt angle pls
01:44:546 (3) - ^
about hitsound. same as Normal diff

bomber34 wrote:

This does not get ranked because .... ?

yu_yu12354 wrote:

HI~ I am a Taiko modder.
I find this song randomly and may I mod it please? wwwwwww

[Overall:]
The map sounds good at all. But you should try to add more notes at Taiko . Is that finished yet? If don't, just ignore it wwwww
Overall, Oni should have at least 500 notes and the difficulty is harder than Taiko . Otherwise,it's better for you changing to Taiko but not Taiko Oni
Also, you should need more mods on Taiko
[Taiko Oni:]
It is quite easy for the Taiko Oni
you've better change the difficulty and Change the name to Taiko
difficulty change → 4

I think you should add more notes in the Taiko
00:03:910 (2) remove clap
00:04:084 (3,4) clap
00:05:567 add a clap note
00:07:747 add like this?k k d d k
00:12:107 remove the spinner Is it better to change like this?k k d d k k d d ....until 00:14:549
00:20:131 add a finish note
01:02:340 same as 00:12:107


GOOD LUCK
If you need more modding, you may PM me AHHA(If you don't mind)

Foxxer wrote:

General

The beatmap looks great. You can put the Approach Rate of Hard on 8, looks better for me. done
Slider Tick Rate of Hard should be 2.

Hard

Red = Unrankable, you should fix.
Black = My suggestion.

00:41:410 (4,5) - It's out of the playfield. fixed
01:22:921 (2,3,4) - Can you move this a little bit down? sure
01:33:038 (1) - It's out of the playfield.fixed
01:44:549 (3) - ^fixed
01:45:945 (3) - ^fixed
01:49:782 (no notes) - You can add a spinner here, since the sound is decreasing. no thanks

Good Luck~

1. aggiungi Kingdom Hearts alle tag credo che sia la tag piu' importanche che ti sei dimenticato.

1. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
2. 00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
3. 01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
4. 01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
5. 01:47:337 - snap to 01:47:340
6. 01:48:035 - snap to 01:48:038
7. 01:48:732 - snap to 01:48:735

1. 01:44:200 (1,2) - se noti lo spacing non è giusto qui

1. 00:09:317 (1,2) - questa pattern personalmente non mi piace molto perche non cerchi di redere il flow un po' migliore facendo una cosa del genere? ho semplicemente fatto meglio lo slider (1) - e poi lo copiato e rotato di +30 gradi per redere la parren piu' carina e un pochino simmetrica come si potrebbe dire o3o ovviamente poi aggiusta lo spacing con la prossima nota
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:16:293 (2) - questo slider in se non ha problemi ma se fai caso 00:14:200 (4) - è cosi brutto da vedere, perche non cerchi di stackare la fine del slider (2) - con il (4) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:35:131 (2,3,4,1) - questa pattern è un po' troppo rigida che ne dici se invede facessi una cosa del genere?: allora come prima cosa lo slider (1) -dopo lo spinner non va a cambiare posizione,crei una pattern a triandolo con i prossimi cerchi (2,3) - in questo modo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   inseguito il cerchio (4) - è posizionato in modo tale da formare una blanket con il prossimo slider,cio' vuol dire che lo dovrai modificare un po' del tutto in questo modo; se ovviamente segui il mio consigllio tieni sempre conto di fixare lo spacing con il prossimo cerchio
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:107 (4,1,2) - lo slider (1) con i cerchi (4) - e (2) - non formano una blanket perfetta che si potrebbe migliorare un sacco secondo me per rendere la pattern piu' carina e piu' pulita.
5. 01:27:456 (1) - ciao slider o3o che ne dici di renderlo piu' pulito e dare una forma piu' semplice come: // secondo me ci starebbe molto meglio :V ed è anche piu' facile da fare con la 3 point formula,vabbe se decidi di usare questo slider fixa lo spacing ecc
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:34:433 - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body

1. 00:03:732 - snap to 00:03:735
2. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
3. 00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
4. 00:31:639 - snap to 00:31:642
5. 01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
6. 01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
7. 01:48:383 - snap to 01:48:386

1. 00:08:270 (3) - the next object is a bit far
2. 00:10:363 (4) - same about here
3. 00:38:270 (2) - look good the spacing here
4. 00:58:851 (9) - prev object is to close to this circle

1. 00:15:247 (2,3) - you can make a better blanket here since the new 3 point formula can help you a lot
2. 00:37:224 (1,2) - the end of slider (1) - can make a better blanket for slider (2) -
3. 00:45:945 (1) - this slider can be make more simmetrical and much better try to improve it and try to create a simmetrical patter with 00:45:596 (5,1,2) - i think it will flow much better imo
4. 00:56:758 (5,6,7,8,9) - this pattern is uhm not so good try to improve the ugly overlap >.<
5. 01:05:479 (2,3) - this blanket can be done better imo
6. 01:27:805 (2,3) - try to improve a bit this smal overlap :V
7. 01:28:851 (3) - the slider form can be done better since the end is not so cute
8. 01:32:340 (3,1) - the slider (1) - make a not so nice blanket for slider (3) - try to make slider (1) - better with the new 3 formula point >u<
9. 01:37:572 (4,1) - try to make a better blanket with (4) - slider end for having a better flow

1. 00:20:479 (1) - add a whistle at slider ens , try to continue your prev hitsound pattern and add a whistle at 00:21:526 (2) -
2. 00:21:875 (3) - remove whistle at reverse arrow , and add it at slider end
3. 00:22:921 (4) - add a whistle
4. 00:26:758 (2) - whistle at slider start and end
5. 00:35:479 (3) - whistle at slider end
6. 00:36:875 (6) - remove whistle
7. 00:38:270 (2) - whistle at slider end
8. 00:40:014 (1) - whistle at slider start
9. 00:46:991 (2) - whistle
10. 00:47:689 (4) - whistle at slider start
    
    same with the next hitsounds relook they >u<

1. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
   00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
   00:31:639 - snap to 00:31:642
   01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
   01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
   01:47:511 - snap to 01:47:514
   01:48:209 - snap to 01:48:212
   01:48:907 - snap to 01:48:910

1. 00:34:084 (4) - è un po' vicina al prev slider
2. 00:38:619 (3) - un po' troppo vicino al prossimo cerchio

1. 00:20:131 - questa nota sembra di troppo
2. 00:40:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - èerche non cercho di creare simmetria qui?
3. 00:45:596 - questo slider non è semmetrico credo che riusciresti a migliorare la simmetria o3o
4. 01:02:340 - qui si sente un suono di un finish che ne dici di iniziare lo spinner qui : 01:02:689 - e aggiungere li un circle + finish?

1. 00:36:526 - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body
2. 00:48:386 (1) - whistle all'inizio dello slider
3. 00:49:084 (2) - add a whistle
4. 00:49:782 - whistle qui
5. 00:50:479 (4) - whistle
6. 00:59:200 - missing clap ?
7. 01:10:363 - missing clap?
8. 01:21:875 - whistle
9. 01:27:456 - a 01:31:642 - sembra cosi vuoto senza hitsounds ._.
10. 01:37:921 (6) - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body

1. Sulla hard diro poco perchè credo che ci voglio un lavoro serio sullo spacing perchè la parte iniziale con cui hai cominciato a 0.80 di spacing sembra cosi stretta,devi pensare al play dato che la mappa è molto semplice e i giocatori per la maggior parte della mappa singletapperanno e avere uno spacing cosi stretto è un po' d'inpiccio, come dopo lo spinner hai iniziato a usare lo spacing a 1.0 mi è sembrato tutto meglio,ma pur in certi punti restava lo spacing a 0.80 che rende tutto inconsistente, io ti consiglierei ri riprendere tutto dall'inizio e rifare tutto lo spacing a 1.0, lo so che è un lavoro faticose e rompi palle ma l'ho fatto anche io e ti dico che il flow della mappa potrebbe migliorare molto,è una mappa abbastanza pulita anche se segue sempre gli stessi pattern a stella e a quadrato,quindi per prima cosa cerca di migliorare lo spacing qui >-< poi anche qui ci sono le linee verdi unsnappate quindi fixa anche qui tutto,questo è una conseguenza del timing change o3o quindi non dimenticartene :3

Lally wrote:

Hi Hi from TAM :3

[General]

1. aggiungi Kingdom Hearts alle tag credo che sia la tag piu' importanche che ti sei dimenticato.

[Easy]
Snapping:
green timing lines che non sono snappate:

1. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
2. 00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
3. 01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
4. 01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
5. 01:47:337 - snap to 01:47:340
6. 01:48:035 - snap to 01:48:038
7. 01:48:732 - snap to 01:48:735

Spacing:

1. 01:44:200 (1,2) - se noti lo spacing non è giusto qui

Placement:

1. 00:09:317 (1,2) - questa pattern personalmente non mi piace molto perche non cerchi di redere il flow un po' migliore facendo una cosa del genere? ho semplicemente fatto meglio lo slider (1) - e poi lo copiato e rotato di +30 gradi per redere la parren piu' carina e un pochino simmetrica come si potrebbe dire o3o ovviamente poi aggiusta lo spacing con la prossima nota
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:16:293 (2) - questo slider in se non ha problemi ma se fai caso 00:14:200 (4) - è cosi brutto da vedere, perche non cerchi di stackare la fine del slider (2) - con il (4) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:35:131 (2,3,4,1) - questa pattern è un po' troppo rigida che ne dici se invede facessi una cosa del genere?: allora come prima cosa lo slider (1) -dopo lo spinner non va a cambiare posizione,crei una pattern a triandolo con i prossimi cerchi (2,3) - in questo modo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   inseguito il cerchio (4) - è posizionato in modo tale da formare una blanket con il prossimo slider,cio' vuol dire che lo dovrai modificare un po' del tutto in questo modo; se ovviamente segui il mio consigllio tieni sempre conto di fixare lo spacing con il prossimo cerchio
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:107 (4,1,2) - lo slider (1) con i cerchi (4) - e (2) - non formano una blanket perfetta che si potrebbe migliorare un sacco secondo me per rendere la pattern piu' carina e piu' pulita.
5. 01:27:456 (1) - ciao slider o3o che ne dici di renderlo piu' pulito e dare una forma piu' semplice come: // secondo me ci starebbe molto meglio :V ed è anche piu' facile da fare con la 3 point formula,vabbe se decidi di usare questo slider fixa lo spacing ecc
   
   SPOILER

   

Hitsounds:

1. 01:34:433 - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body

[Xin's Normal]
Snapping:
green lines that are not correctly snapped:

1. 00:03:732 - snap to 00:03:735
2. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
3. 00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
4. 00:31:639 - snap to 00:31:642
5. 01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
6. 01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
7. 01:48:383 - snap to 01:48:386

Spacing:

1. 00:08:270 (3) - the next object is a bit far
2. 00:10:363 (4) - same about here
3. 00:38:270 (2) - look good the spacing here
4. 00:58:851 (9) - prev object is to close to this circle

Placement:

1. 00:15:247 (2,3) - you can make a better blanket here since the new 3 point formula can help you a lot
2. 00:37:224 (1,2) - the end of slider (1) - can make a better blanket for slider (2) -
3. 00:45:945 (1) - this slider can be make more simmetrical and much better try to improve it and try to create a simmetrical patter with 00:45:596 (5,1,2) - i think it will flow much better imo
4. 00:56:758 (5,6,7,8,9) - this pattern is uhm not so good try to improve the ugly overlap >.<
5. 01:05:479 (2,3) - this blanket can be done better imo
6. 01:27:805 (2,3) - try to improve a bit this smal overlap :V
7. 01:28:851 (3) - the slider form can be done better since the end is not so cute
8. 01:32:340 (3,1) - the slider (1) - make a not so nice blanket for slider (3) - try to make slider (1) - better with the new 3 formula point >u<
9. 01:37:572 (4,1) - try to make a better blanket with (4) - slider end for having a better flow

Hitsounds:

1. 00:20:479 (1) - add a whistle at slider ens , try to continue your prev hitsound pattern and add a whistle at 00:21:526 (2) -
2. 00:21:875 (3) - remove whistle at reverse arrow , and add it at slider end
3. 00:22:921 (4) - add a whistle
4. 00:26:758 (2) - whistle at slider start and end
5. 00:35:479 (3) - whistle at slider end
6. 00:36:875 (6) - remove whistle
7. 00:38:270 (2) - whistle at slider end
8. 00:40:014 (1) - whistle at slider start
9. 00:46:991 (2) - whistle
10. 00:47:689 (4) - whistle at slider start
    
    same with the next hitsounds relook they >u<

[Normal]
Snapping:

1. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
   00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
   00:31:639 - snap to 00:31:642
   01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
   01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
   01:47:511 - snap to 01:47:514
   01:48:209 - snap to 01:48:212
   01:48:907 - snap to 01:48:910

Spacing:

1. 00:34:084 (4) - è un po' vicina al prev slider
2. 00:38:619 (3) - un po' troppo vicino al prossimo cerchio

Placement:

1. 00:20:131 - questa nota sembra di troppo
2. 00:40:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - èerche non cercho di creare simmetria qui?
3. 00:45:596 - questo slider non è semmetrico credo che riusciresti a migliorare la simmetria o3o
4. 01:02:340 - qui si sente un suono di un finish che ne dici di iniziare lo spinner qui : 01:02:689 - e aggiungere li un circle + finish?

Hitsounds:

1. 00:36:526 - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body
2. 00:48:386 (1) - whistle all'inizio dello slider
3. 00:49:084 (2) - add a whistle
4. 00:49:782 - whistle qui
5. 00:50:479 (4) - whistle
6. 00:59:200 - missing clap ?
7. 01:10:363 - missing clap?
8. 01:21:875 - whistle
9. 01:27:456 - a 01:31:642 - sembra cosi vuoto senza hitsounds ._.
10. 01:37:921 (6) - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body

[Hard]

1. Sulla hard diro poco perchè credo che ci voglio un lavoro serio sullo spacing perchè la parte iniziale con cui hai cominciato a 0.80 di spacing sembra cosi stretta,devi pensare al play dato che la mappa è molto semplice e i giocatori per la maggior parte della mappa singletapperanno e avere uno spacing cosi stretto è un po' d'inpiccio, come dopo lo spinner hai iniziato a usare lo spacing a 1.0 mi è sembrato tutto meglio,ma pur in certi punti restava lo spacing a 0.80 che rende tutto inconsistente, io ti consiglierei ri riprendere tutto dall'inizio e rifare tutto lo spacing a 1.0, lo so che è un lavoro faticose e rompi palle ma l'ho fatto anche io e ti dico che il flow della mappa potrebbe migliorare molto,è una mappa abbastanza pulita anche se segue sempre gli stessi pattern a stella e a quadrato,quindi per prima cosa cerca di migliorare lo spacing qui >-< poi anche qui ci sono le linee verdi unsnappate quindi fixa anche qui tutto,questo è una conseguenza del timing change o3o quindi non dimenticartene :3

Spero ti posso aiutare un po >.<

Flower wrote:

Hi~ random mod

[General]
BPM is doubled imo. Technically it has no problem, but some BATs may think it inappropriate. Half the BPM and double the SVs. (you can ignore this, until you get further ideas from BATs)
The hitclaps are reaaaally annoying. I think the map should at least use some custom claps, or you can remap the sound samples with a better pattern.
from 01:46:991 - to end, it's better using a spinner to fit the fade-out, rather than using other notes.
However, I strongly recommend you remap all diffs, since the quality is still not improved to a satisfying status, especially that of the sliders and hitsounds.

[Easy]
ok

[Xin's Normal]
00:13:154 (3) - doesn't blanket well
00:23:270 (1,3) - slider shape

[Normal]
00:10:014 - 00:11:410 - clap
00:44:200 (3,4) - fix shape
00:53:968 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:12:107 (3) - not stacked properly. if you intend doing this, move 1 grid left-downward
01:13:503 (1,2,3,4) - use ctrl+shift+D make a perfect square
01:30:247 - whistle
01:30:945 - ^

[Hard]
00:31:642 (1) - fix shape
00:32:689 (2,3,4) - separate a bit more
01:01:293 (6,7,8) - ^
01:41:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use ctrl+shift+D make a perfect star

Sephibro wrote:

Y U NO RANK THIS MAP

Easy

ok


Xin's Normal

ok



Normal

01:35:828 (1,2,3,4) - i think 1-4 and 2-3 should have the same y to make the pattern symmetrical



Hard

00:19:084 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe a little bit more spaced, but it's cool like this too. up to you
00:57:805 (5) - clap here



And btw, if there exists a single reason not to make this map ranked, please explain it.

bomber34 wrote:

can someone rank this anyhow?
This one hangs here for a year now ...

1. 00:06:526 (1) - A whistle on the start would fit perfectly to the pitch, consider to add it.
2. 00:07:224 (2) - Consider to add a whistle at the start and end here aswell to follow the piano.
3. 00:09:317 (2) - Here a whistle on the start would bring the song's piano out much better.
4. 00:14:550 (5) - Try to whistle this aswell to follow the piano.
5. 00:16:992 (4) - Whistle on the start? Same reason as above.
6. 00:18:039 (1,3) - Whistling those 2 would fit the pitch of the piano perfectly.
7. 00:19:085 (4) - I'd use a whistle on the end aswell, the piano is as strong on the end as on the start.
8. 00:53:273 (4) - Try to use a whistle on the start? Sounds empty here, so it might be a good idea.
9. 00:55:366 (3) - Use a whistle on the start, the reason is above.
10. 00:56:413 (4) - Same.
11. 01:05:483 (2,3,4) - I'd suggest a whistle on start of all of these, they all follow the piano much better.
12. 01:09:321 (4) - Start is missing a whistle to have a consistent pattern.
13. 01:12:111 (3) - Remove whistle on the repeat and add it on the start, it is inconsistent right now.
14. For all copy pasted parts that left, the same suggestions should be applied to keep hitsounding consistent.

those wrote:

Nice to know you have a found list of potentially otherwise formatted maps. Point of the post?

pimpG wrote:

good to see some activity here

the correct is surely Shimomura Yoko and i don't doubt that people already noticed that in the previous maps

they probably keep using Yoko Shimomura to keep consistency.

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Before rank...
Name: Yoko Shimomura - Wonderland

this xD!
i'm kh player :3

ThoomyyxD wrote:

i'm kh player :3

Genshin wrote:

here is the proof

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Go for ranking !!!

pimpG wrote:

FINALLY !!!!!

congratulations my friend

edit:
lanturn, in the future, changing title/artist of ranked maps will be possible, so i think atm consistency is more important.
they will change if this is actually the best for the maps...

btw dkun gave the bubble and jericho looks to not disagree at all,
i suppose he checked the previous discussion about tittle, there is no much to do i guess