pimpG wrote:

hi there again o/

has been a long time : 3


easy

00:26:058 (1,2,3,4) - change this to something more fun? done (square pattern)
00:41:407 (2) - remove clap?done
00:42:104 (3) - ^done
00:52:569 (2) - ^done
01:31:639 (3) - ^done

01:44:197 - i still think that the map should end here : 3... how can i explain.... the song's volume is already decreasing


normal+

00:03:732 (1,2) - spacing error, you are using 0,80x in this difficulty right? use here too
00:10:011 (2,4) - slider 2 is overlapping slider 4, move them away
00:18:383 (3,4,5,6) - circle 3 and 4 is overlapping slider 5 and 6
00:33:035 (3,5) - slider 3 is overlapping slider 5
01:07:221 (6,2) - slider 6 is overlapping circle 2
01:08:616 (3,4,5,6) - 3 is overlapping 5, and 4 is overlapping 6
01:10:011 (6,2) - overlap
01:14:895 (5,2,3) - overlap
01:29:895 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - overlap
01:34:430 (2,2) - overlap

01:44:197 - end of the map, as i said before? ^^


hard

00:16:639 (3) - make this a reverse slider? i think the next red divisor(in 00:16:814) should be filed didn't get u
00:28:500 (6) - remove whistle? done
00:31:639 (1) - this slider is strange oO fixed with a normal one
01:08:267 (2) - 1 grid up (grid lvl 4)done
01:09:139 (6,7,8) - 1 grid leftdone
01:30:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use the same spacing?done (changed to a star pattern)

01:44:197 - end of the map? or maybe its just my own opinion, ask a very experienced mapper about it please ^^

01:46:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this pattern is cool, how about using it a bit more in this difficulty??mm for example?


keep looking for modders, and request in #modreqs too

good luck

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hi~

[General]
#You have inconsistency in preview time, it must be same in all diff.
#Same goes with kiai, it must be same in all your diffs.
#And remove all *,* comma from the tags !

[Easy]
Dif set:
for 1 star diff
HP-1
AR-3
OD-1

00:08:616 (6) - whistle
00:19:779 (6) - change clap to whistle
00:31:639 (1) - this slider is starts too early after spinner, its not suitable for [Easy] diff it must be changed
01:10:011 (2) - change clap to whistle
01:21:872 (1) - same, this slider is starts too early after spinner, its not suitable for [Easy] diff it must be changed
01:44:197 (1) - and again, in E diff minimum space between spinner and next pattern http://puu.sh/FaNV
01:49:779 (1) - this spinner too fast for E diff, suggest you to remove it

[Normal+]
Change it to [Normal]
Diff set
AR-5 better for 178 bpm N diff imo

SV - a bit high for normal, its better to change it to 1.0-1.2 and remap it
00:03:732 (1) - osu bug, you must add NC to this manually
01:12:104 (3) - hidden reverse arrow unrankable

[Hard]
Diff set:
HP-6 to balance with OD

00:03:732 (1) - NC bug
00:28:500 (6) - remove whistle

Good luck~

Dyron wrote:

Hard:
00:19:081 (3) - sistema la simmetria del 3° rev slider
00:53:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - come sopra, piazza sto pattern al centro

Buona fortuna con la mappa

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Ti avviso che sono un pò inesperto come mapper taiko,quindi se non ti piace la mia difficoltà,o per qualche motivo è inrankabile,rimuovila pure ^^

Kurokami wrote:

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Ti avviso che sono un pò inesperto come mapper taiko,quindi se non ti piace la mia difficoltà,o per qualche motivo è inrankabile,rimuovila pure ^^

If the taiko diff have some problem it will solved through some mod so don't worry. :3 (in the case if it will be accepted by the mapper)

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Ok,this is the base of the map,but it isn't complete,it need better hitsounds,a bg and some fixes


http://www.2shared.com/file/XOAdQNp6/45 ... nderl.html

But I really need to know if this diff will be accepted, I don't want to ask for nothing.

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Thanks a lot to Boat and Kurokami

http://puu.sh/XJu0

This is the last map change,and now this can be modded.

Genshin wrote:

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Thanks a lot to Boat and Kurokami

http://puu.sh/XJu0

This is the last map change,and now this can be modded.

ok thx, i'll add.

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Scusa genshin,mi sono dimenticato di mettere il bg sulla mappa e te lo ho messo direttamente nella cartella D: questo è il link,mettilo sulla taiko

http://puu.sh/XQPO

152,204,38616,2,0,B|100:168|40:188|20:248|40:308|100:328|152:292,1,280

176,112,3732,2,0,B|272:80|272:144|376:104,1,200,2|0

pimpG wrote:

hi o/

easy

00:10:709 (2,3,4) - imo this strainght alignment should be changed to curved alignment to fit the next notes done
00:21:872 (2) - move this note 1 grid right to fix the spacing done
00:23:267 (1) - remove the useless red curve point done
00:46:988 (3,1) - i highly sugest you avoid this overlap changed shape
01:21:872 (1) - this slider looks sudden after the spinner, better move it away from centre and maybe change shape? nope, just reduced the spinner length
01:26:058 (3,4,1,1) - you should avoid this overlap moved pink notes after that slider in another position
01:33:035 (1,2) - strange shape, looks random and senseless imo changed shape
01:35:825 (1,2,3,4,1) - try to make a star pattern to avoid the stacking? displaced in a different way
01:49:779 - remove this useless inherited section

normal

00:14:895 (1,2,3,4) - looks random placed done on purpose, to follow circle movements of the spinner
00:17:686 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - try star pattern and consider avoiding the overlaps? changed placement
00:21:872 (3,1) - consider avoiding this overlap changed sliders shape
00:42:802 (5,1,2,3,1) - imo you should make the pattern consistent to 00:31:639 (1,2,3,4). because its a slow down after kiai time no thx
00:48:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same as above changed something
01:05:825 (3,4,5,6,2) - ugly overlaps here not a good idea in normal diffs changed
01:13:500 (1) - better not jump in normal diffs reverse is the way
01:49:779 - remove spinner and inherit? looks better imo nope but silenced the spinner (5%)

hard

00:38:616 (4) - ugly shape try this:

remove all curve point and keep only 7
1st curve point x152 y204
2nd x100 y168
3rd x40 y188
4th x20 y248
5th x40 y308
6th x100 y328
7th x152 y292
or osb code if you want

152,204,38616,2,0,B|100:168|40:188|20:248|40:308|100:328|152:292,1,280

way better
..........
00:39:662 (1) - this antijump does not fits imo stacked on the begin of the next slider
01:13:500 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this rhythm is not good in hard imo, its more simple than normal rhythm at this part changed the entire pattern
01:28:848 (4) - same as 00:38:616 (4) ^
01:46:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - as i said before this part is well mapped imo, you could use this notes style in similar parts in the song ( 00:06:523 - for exemple), or just copy paste ok
01:49:430 - remove spinner, looks better imo, if you agree remove the inherit too nou

edit
i was not noticed about the normal guest diff
i hope its usefull to you too xin-kun

xin's normal

00:03:732 (1) - the curves would look more clean if you move 2nd and 3rd curve points 2 grids left perfect

176,112,3732,2,0,B|272:80|272:144|376:104,1,200,2|0

..........
00:06:523 (4) - imo this long white tick should be a circle or slider start.. intead of a slider tick it will make this diff a bit different from the regular normal one
00:09:314 (1) - ^ ^
00:16:988 (4) - ugly shape imo changed a bit
00:20:476 (1,2,3) - this rhythm fits the sound better and more consistent made on purpose
00:36:174 - feels empty no longer xD
00:37:221 (1) - same as 00:06:523 (4) same reason
00:40:011 (5) - ^ ^
01:05:128 - i'm not sure if its of to fully copy paste a section like that btw cange in both sections if you want to use some of my sugestions, for consistency

good luck

Irreversible wrote:

Hey
i only make suggestions, no need to change it !

easy

Looks okay to me

xin's normal

pretty hard for a normal, hm? o.o anyway xD

00:36:523 (4,1) - ehm, maybe delete this and make it like http://puu.sh/1avKw changed a bit
00:45:942 (1,2,3) - same for this part ok
01:27:453 (1) - make this 1 shorter, and put in a reverse slider http://puu.sh/1avNn ok
01:36:174 (1,2,3) - again this part from above fixed
01:49:430 (5) - maybe put in a circle here, and thats the end done

normal

00:41:407 (1,2,3,4) - make it a bit rounder-looking done
00:58:151 (5) - weird hitsound done on purpose
01:13:500 (1,2) - put these hitsounds to 3,4 done
01:49:779 (1) - i would kinda delete it XD done

love the hitsounds though!

i have no plan about taiko, sorry

hard

00:09:314 (8) - new combo 'k
00:10:709 (7) - ^ nah, it would be only that slider as new combo. too short
00:16:639 (3) - remove new combodone
00:17:686 (6) - new combodone
00:19:081 (10) - ^ done
00:59:197 (5) - http://puu.sh/1avXl ???
01:14:546 (1) - new combo changed, but at 01:14:895 (1) -
01:14:895 (2) - new combo ^
01:17:686 (4) - new combook
01:24:314 (5) - add a circle maybe? nah thx
01:48:383 (5) - new combo nah, being the end can work in that way
01:49:430 (10) - xD you can delete the spinner and put in a circle with clap done but with "finish" sound

oki that's it ^.^
love the song <3 and its a coop beatmap!

1. Don't know ^^ your Normal plays more like a Hard diff. So I would recommend renaming Normal to Hard and Hard to Challenging or so :3

1. 00:53:965 (1,2) - mmh slider look a bit weird with that edge at the end ._.
   
   My suggestion

   
2. 01:19:081 (1) - maybe end it at 01:21:174 - ? Spinner is abit short for an Easy
3. 01:24:662 (1) - bad overlapping with previous slider. Try 01:24:662 (1) - X: 344 and Y: 88 & 01:25:360 (2) - X:344 Y:200

1. Maybe OD + 1
2. 00:11:755 - add circle
3. 00:34:430 (1) - Slider is kind of ugly. Maybe try this code
   

   160,272,34430,6,0,B|120:264|120:208|160:200,1,100,2|0

   Don't forget to fix spacing afterwards
4. 01:35:128 (4) - ^
   

   376,136,95128,2,0,B|416:144|416:200|376:208,1,100

1. HP Drain and OD +1
2. 00:14:895 (1) - Copy 00:15:593 (2) - and use ctrl + H and ctrl+ J / R instead. (1) and (2) look similar but (2) looks way better
3. 00:17:686 (1) - overlaps a bit with 00:16:290 (3) - which doesn't look very well
4. 00:34:430 (5,1) - red slider end point. I also don't like the edge at the end. Would have used some slider that looks more like a L then a l. ^^
5. 00:42:802 (5) - New Combo and remove combo from 00:43:500 (1) -
6. 00:55:360 (3,4) - could be better bows
7. 00:56:755 (1) - amall overlap with 00:56:058 (4) -
8. 01:00:244 (2) - overlaps a bit with 00:58:151 (5) - in a bad way. I actually would stack the slider beginning with the slider end of 00:58:151 (5) -
9. 01:44:895 (2) - One grid down to Y: 144. looks better with (1)
10. 01:49:779 - unused green inherit line

1. 00:31:639 (1) - Improved your slider. Use this code. You have to place it again afterwards correct.
   

   72,196,31639,6,0,B|72:280|88:304|120:320|120:320|152:304|168:280|168:196,1,280

2. 01:34:081 (2,3,4) - mmmh (4) overlaps with (1) in an ugly way. I would recommend to use 1.0x Distance snap for this "triplet" and place it on X:452 and Y:192
   
   like this

   
3. 01:25:709 (2,3) - because osu! stacks it with his "Stack Leniency" here 2 and 3 look weird while playing (not in the editor). Can you try to fix it someway?

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi~

General
Change forum name to "Yoko Shimomura - Wonderland"

Easy
Put snap Divisor to 1/4

00:06:523 (5) - Sliderslide is a bit noisy? Delete the whistle on it sure
00:09:314 (1,2) - ^ yes sir
00:12:104 (3) - Finish da
00:23:267 (1) - Finish at beginning ja
01:02:337 (1) - Finish fatto
01:05:128 (1) - Whistle at beginning to emphasize new section using soft sounds, whistle doesn't work, do i should add it as custom sound?
01:07:918 (1) - Replace by copy & pasting 01:05:128 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/450756 hai
01:13:500 (1) - Finish at beginning oui
01:49:081 (4) - Lower the volume

Xin's Normal
00:06:174 (4) - try this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/450763 already changed
00:08:965 (1) - ^, add single note then start slide on next white tick 2nd person who says that, so, changed xD
00:36:174 - Add note to keep the flow of the tune done
01:36:872 - ^ done

Normal
00:03:732 (1) - Whistle at beginning, feels a bit empty same as before, i'd place it but it has a different sound, being soft
00:06:523 (1,3) - Whistles if you want sounds good
00:14:895 (1) - Delete clap, inconsistent with other ones; maybe add whistle at beginning 'solved
00:19:081 (5) - Maybe try to get the (5) to blanket (2)? idk http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/450775 it doesn't respect spacing ç_ç
00:23:267 (1) - Finish added
00:31:639 (1) - Whistle at beginning sounds nice fine
00:49:430 (3) - Move 2 grids left same problem, spacing, but i solved moving this 00:48:383 (1) -
01:06:523 (5,6) - Clap at end of (5) and clap on (6) hey this works
01:13:500 (1) - Finish 'k
01:21:872 (1) - Whistle at beginningokay
01:49:081 (7) - Lower volume at clap yup

Hard
00:04:430 (5,6) - Too close; and NC on (6) maybe ok for the nc, but i'll keep that pattern as it is, the high AR won't make any trouble
00:07:569 (4,5) - Go like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/450782 i really like this **
00:31:639 (1) - Whistle at beginning sure
01:07:918 (6) - NC, delete NC on 01:08:616 (1) - 'k
01:13:500 (4) - Finish done
01:21:872 (1) - Whistle at beginning ok
01:23:267 (4,1) - Too close reversed placements of 01:24:662 (1,3) -

Cute song xD GL! thx

Lally wrote:

come richiesto Mod :3

[General]
megusta \( ° w ° )/

riguardo alla taiko l'ho guardata in auto credo che ci siano alcuni spazzi vuoti che comunque andrebbero posizionate delle note ò.ò

poi ci sono cose incoerenti tra tutte le difficolta come il kiai time :

Easy:
00:14:896 - 00:28:848
01:05:128 - 01:19:081
01:47:337 - ~ (finisce non si sa dove)

Xin's Normal:
00:14:896 - 00:28:848
01:05:128 - 01:19:081
~

Normal:
00:14:896 - 00:28:848
01:05:128 - 01:19:081
01:47:337 - ~ (finisce non si sa dove)

Hard:
00:14:896 - 00:28:848
01:05:128 - 01:19:081
01:47:337 - ~ (finisce non si sa dove)

Chyo's Taiko Oni
00:14:896 - 00:28:848
01:05:128 - 01:19:081
~

hai 2 scelte :
1~ elimini 01:47:337 - ~ (finisce non si sa dove) (scelta consigliata)
2~ o inserisci nelle altre diff il kiai time da 01:47:337 a xx:xx:xx dato che ogni difficolta finisce in un modo dovresti metterli tutti diversi
solo 2 difficolta finiscono nello stesso punto quindi segui il punto 1 \:D/

cavolo, quello è un errore di distrazione dovuto alla mod di ieri, aggungendo gli inherit points x ridurre il tempo mi son dimenticato di rimuovere la spunta su kiai time

[Easy]

usa lo snap divisor 1/4 non capissco il motivo di usare 1/6 :V
il resto tutto ok fatto, l'avevo spostato per errore su 1/6

[Xin's Normal]

00:36:174 - add a circle sounds better k

01:36:872 - add a circle sounds better k

[Normal]

00:08:965 - metti anche alla fine il clap come hai fatto nei altri slider originariamente c'era, poi qualcuno moddandomela mi disse di rimuoverlo, lo rimetto va

00:19:779 - clap alla fine dello slider per proseguire il ritmo che stai seguendo e anche qui : yes

00:20:128 - clap okay

00:22:569 - dato che prosegui il ritmo con i clap mettilo anche qui fatto

00:35:825 (2,3) - dato che stai seguendo una simmetria qui secondo me sarebbe meglio allinearli per bene fatto

00:48:383 - il 3 point è di troppo mi sa :V nah dai xD

01:05:128 (1,2,3,4) - allineali meglio per fare un arco

fiquo

[Hard]

00:52:918 - sistema bene la linea che è un po storta si lo so sono precisina @@

01:24:662 - credo che il 2 point non serve a nulla serve x tenere il ritmo, rimuovendolo resta il "buco"

01:28:848 - troppi point si può ottenere la stessa forma usandone molti dimeno poi la forma a ''C'' non è molto dritta la puoi migliorare :3

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

[Easy]
00:14:895 (1,2) - This curve are pretty ugly for me, do it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452375 done
01:13:500 (1) - Why you add finish+clap at end slider? It doesn't follow the song fixed
01:21:872 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452385 ohhh finally a good solution, thx a lot


[Xin's Normal]
00:06:174 (4) - New combo? k
01:00:942 (2) - Make a same slider shape as 00:59:546 (1) k
01:41:407 (5) - New combo? k
01:49:430 (5) - ^ k


[Normal]
* This diff has inconsistent spacing through this diff. You should make it consistent on spacing through this diff. Easy/Normal must have a consistent spacing
resized
00:14:895 (1) - While the default skin of spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/452385 ok
00:31:639 (1) - This will overlapped by spinner-osu, it makes hard to read for beginnersok
00:53:965 (1) - Same issue as 00:14:895 (1)ok


[Hard]
00:35:825 (1,1,1,1) - Why you need this combo? just to change a bit

Bye now <3

1. I think 1500 in Audio Lead-In is a liitle excessive, adjust to 1000?
2. Disable the letterbox during breaks

• - 00:14:895 (1,2) - Looks bad the overlap between those sliders, so try to move (2), something like this
  - 00:19:779 (6) - Delete whistle because sounds weird
  - 00:40:709 (2) - Add a whistle here for consistency
  - 00:51:872 (2) - Same ^
  - 01:02:337 (2,1) - Spacing
  - 01:10:011 (2) - Delete whistle and add a clap here
  - 01:40:709 (2) - Add a whistle to follow your hitsound pattern
  - 01:49:081 (4) - Delete clap and add a finish please

• - 00:36:872 (1) - Sounds a little off this slider in my opinion, move to 00:37:221
  - 01:49:430 (5,6) - This part sounds off for me, in my opinion you should to end here 01:49:081

• -- Nice diff but the sliders needs more work in my opinion
  - 01:16:988 (2) - Add clap here and here 01:16:639
  - 01:18:383 (5,6) - Same about the claps
  - 01:23:267 (1) - Remove new combo to follow your combo pattern

• - 00:05:128 (5,1) - Spacing
  - 00:35:825 (1,1,1,1,) - Why you do this about new combos? Remove all

MoodyRPG wrote:

Random mod here.

General

1. I think 1500 in Audio Lead-In is a liitle excessive, adjust to 1000? done
2. Disable the letterbox during breaks

done

Easy

• - 00:14:895 (1,2) - Looks bad the overlap between those sliders, so try to move (2), something like this yes sir
  - 00:19:779 (6) - Delete whistle because sounds weird sure
  - 00:40:709 (2) - Add a whistle here for consistency 'kay
  - 00:51:872 (2) - Same ^ 'k
  - 01:02:337 (2,1) - Spacing it was already, but i checked again
  - 01:10:011 (2) - Delete whistle and add a clap here ok
  - 01:40:709 (2) - Add a whistle to follow your hitsound pattern done
  - 01:49:081 (4) - Delete clap and add a finish please

yes sir
Xin's Normal

• - 00:36:872 (1) - Sounds a little off this slider in my opinion, move to 00:37:221 done on purpose
  - 01:49:430 (5,6) - This part sounds off for me, in my opinion you should to end here 01:49:081

fixed but at 01:49:430 -

Normal

• -- Nice diff but the sliders needs more work in my opinion i will think about it
  - 01:16:988 (2) - Add clap here and here 01:16:639 yes
  - 01:18:383 (5,6) - Same about the claps okay
  - 01:23:267 (1) - Remove new combo to follow your combo pattern

done

Hard

• - 00:05:128 (5,1) - Spacing just a regular jump, done to introduce next ones
  - 00:35:825 (1,1,1,1,) - Why you do this about new combos? Remove all

made on purpose because those jumps are far each other

Good luck

Hi, sorry I have no time to check mods feel free to delete the diff Xin's Normal

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Genshin

Your request from my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Add "Chyo-Kun" in tags, because he/she is Taiko guest diff.

done

Easy

1. 00:12:104 (3) Add NC be better. done
2. 01:00:942 (2,1) - Spacing is too far. Please fix it. done
3. 01:13:500 (1) - Add clap in slider end.

done

Xin's Normal

1. 00:06:523 (3) - Add clap in slider begin. ok
2. 00:08:267 (4) - Switch clap between slider begin and end. It suits the melody better. ok
3. 00:39:662 (5) - Add NC? ok
4. 01:30:244 (6) - Add NC here. ok
5. 01:49:430 (1) - Remove NC be better.

ok

Normal

1. 00:14:895 (1) - Add NC here, since this note follows a spinner. done
2. 00:28:151 (5,6) - Move to down 2 grids? ok
3. 00:32:367 (1,2) - Move (1,2) to left 2 grids, then move (1) to up 1 grid. changed sliders directly
4. 00:55:360 (3,4) - Switch clap them.

done

Hard

1. 00:23:267 (1) - Add finish? can work
2. 00:36:174 (1,1,1) - Remove NC all. May be consider from 00:34:430 (1,2,3,4). 2nd person who tells me this, so okay
3. 01:31:988 (6,7,8) - Add whistle them. done
4. 01:37:211 (1) - Remove whistle.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

1. 00:10:011 (4,5,6) - Triplet doesn't fit the music here, how about changing it to 1/2?
2. 00:11:407 (4,5,6) - ^
3. 00:12:104 (1) - hum, I'm wondering why you want to end the spinner at blue tick? Anyway, I prefer either white tick or red tick.
4. 00:17:860 (2) - , 00:18:209 (4) - , 00:19:081 (3) - How about changing these note to don?
5. 00:30:244 (1,2,3,4) - These diplets don't fit the music here. Considering changing it?
6. 01:05:476 - Add a note here to make the note more coherent?
7. 01:06:697 - , 01:06:872 - ^Same.
8. 01:09:662 (7,1,2) - I didn't see any reason that big notes were needed because there were no accent present there.
9. 01:10:360 - This place is too empty compare to the whole difficulty.
10. Please map the whole MP3!

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko mod here. Sorry for long delay.

[Chyo's Taiko Oni]

1. 00:10:011 (4,5,6) - Triplet doesn't fit the music here, how about changing it to 1/2?
2. 00:11:407 (4,5,6) - ^
3. 00:12:104 (1) - hum, I'm wondering why you want to end the spinner at blue tick? Anyway, I prefer either white tick or red tick.
4. 00:17:860 (2) - , 00:18:209 (4) - , 00:19:081 (3) - How about changing these note to don?
5. 00:30:244 (1,2,3,4) - These diplets don't fit the music here. Considering changing it?
6. 01:05:476 - Add a note here to make the note more coherent?
7. 01:06:697 - , 01:06:872 - ^Same.
8. 01:09:662 (7,1,2) - I didn't see any reason that big notes were needed because there were no accent present there.
9. 01:10:360 - This place is too empty compare to the whole difficulty.
10. Please map the whole MP3!

I can see there are a lot of room for refinement. You need to find more Taiko mods.
Anyway, good luck with ranking.

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Hi there, from my lazy mod queue!
Lets see now =.o...

[General]

00:00:941 - How about setting the volume here at 35%? Sounds better :3 ok
00:31:639 - Put a new green timing point here with 40% volume :3 ok
01:31:872 - ^

no thx
[Easy]

00:21:872 (2) - this shape looks ugly.. breaks the flow aswell, consider shaping it better changed pattern
00:24:662 (2) - ^ same
00:31:639 (1) - you can certainly think of a better shape than that. done
A nice shape would fit the melody and give a nice flow...here try this

slider shape

160,96,31639,6,0,B|232:48|296:100|296:100|356:152|420:104|420:104,2,280

00:37:221 (1) - same for this slider like 00:31:639 (1) - just mirror it done
00:42:802 (1) - too plain.. how about this? ok

slider shape

152,96,42802,6,0,B|148:184|232:208|232:208|304:228|320:296,2,280

01:21:872 (1) - well...its nicely done but not 100% perfect..maybe with time you can improve it xD so? xD
01:27:453 (1) - ^

same
[Xin's Normal]

00:06:523 (2) - this clap doesnt fit on the intro at all. changed
00:08:267 (4) - ^ ^
00:15:244 (2) - how about making a blanket of 00:16:290 (3) ? no thx
00:20:476 (1,2,3,4) - I think this arrangment will be better to rhythm http://puu.sh/1gvql ye
00:53:965 (1) - curve it more so it matches the curve of 00:53:267 (4) done
00:55:360 (2) - ^ (mirror) ^
01:05:477 (2) - same as 00:15:244 (2) no thx
01:10:709 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:20:476 (1,2,3,4) its seems copy pasta done
01:27:453 (1,2) - looks overmapped and doesnt fit very well.... maybe this instead http://puu.sh/1gvzr done
01:36:174 (1) - shape it to match 01:35:128 (4) 's curve no thx
01:38:616 (1,2,3,4) - this combo doesnt fit the rhythm at all. Try this arrangement http://puu.sh/1gvK5 done on purpose to be different from the other normal
01:46:640 (1,2) - swap their places, it sounds better when they're switched.

[Normal]

I kinda feel this difficulty is redundant in the mapset...
Its overmapped imo

[Hard]

00:10:709 (7) - split this repeat slider to 2 small sliders? yes
00:31:639 (1) - :U ... xD
Looks really plain and linear...If i was in your place, i'd remap this difficulty. Its an opinion.

...thx anyway

Overall nice for a first map.
good luck!

xRayne wrote:

Star because your map is awesome ;3

1. wrong offset imo, try 961
2. for all diffs, the finish sound for last note doesn't fit well imo, maybe whistle for that

1. 00:05:128 (3,4) - make it perfectly, you could copy 00:03:732 (1,2) - and stack on 3

1. i recommend you to use only Xin's for Normal diff..

1. CS4 could be a bit hard for beginners, -1?

1. 00:05:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - keep your distance plz
2. 00:07:918 (5) - arrow is hidden by 1's hitburst, try other way
3. 00:10:360 (6) - NC due to the sudden jump
4. 00:19:430 (3) - clap? would fit well with your clap patter
5. 00:35:825 (1,2,3,4) - too sharp for this diff, maybe you could copy from 00:34:430 (1,2,3,4) - and ctrl+h
6. 00:57:453 (4) - clap on the head, like you did for 00:18:383 (3) -
7. 00:58:500 (2) - same as 00:19:430 (3) - if you followed ^
8. 01:08:616 (4,2) - ^
9. 01:13:500 (4) - NC
10. 01:33:035 (1) - arrow is almost hidden by 6's hitburst, try other way plz
11. 01:44:546 (3) - ^

Star Stream wrote:

From my queue

[General]

1. wrong offset imo, try 961 sounds a bit off
2. for all diffs, the finish sound for last note doesn't fit well imo, maybe whistle for that

ok

[Easy]

1. 00:05:128 (3,4) - make it perfectly, you could copy 00:03:732 (1,2) - and stack on 3

ok

[Normal]

1. i recommend you to use only Xin's for Normal diff..

:S

[Xin's]

1. CS4 could be a bit hard for beginners, -1?

yes

[Hard]

1. 00:05:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - keep your distance plz it's a pattern
2. 00:07:918 (5) - arrow is hidden by 1's hitburst, try other way done
3. 00:10:360 (6) - NC due to the sudden jump ok
4. 00:19:430 (3) - clap? would fit well with your clap patter this works
5. 00:35:825 (1,2,3,4) - too sharp for this diff, maybe you could copy from 00:34:430 (1,2,3,4) - and ctrl+h nah, it's slow
6. 00:57:453 (4) - clap on the head, like you did for 00:18:383 (3) - nice
7. 00:58:500 (2) - same as 00:19:430 (3) - if you followed ^ yes
8. 01:08:616 (4,2) - ^ ok
9. 01:13:500 (4) - NC ok
10. 01:33:035 (1) - arrow is almost hidden by 6's hitburst, try other way plz just on edit
11. 01:44:546 (3) - ^

^ same

Good lukc with rank~

Deni wrote:

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General

Add Chyo to the tags.

Imo the kiai time doesn't really fit the song that much and would be fine without it.

You should use some more hitsounds. Some parts are completly without hitsounds.

I can't mod taiko.

Folder seems fine.

Easy

00:12:104 (1) - Finish is too loud here. Use 30%-40% volume.
01:21:872 (1) - Make it more beautiful like this (2) :[/color] that's too long

Spiral

Or use a different slider.

01:27:453 (1) - Same here, doesn't look good.
01:38:616 (1) - Add whistle on reverse ? yes
01:45:593 (2,1) - Overlap yep but just the side, and i can't move it anywhere because spacing
[/color]
Xin's Normal

00:46:726 - 00:47:250 - Why so empty here?
01:31:639 (3) - Delete (3) and (4) and make 1 long slider so that it fits to the music.ok
01:49:430 (5) - Remove New Combo[/color]

Normal

No real problem here, just think of what I said in General about the hitsounds.

Hard

00:10:709 (7) - New Combo
01:13:500 (4) - ^ ok
01:49:430 (6) - Too silent. ok

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via pm.[/color]

Nitori-n wrote:

So many mods already. o.o I'll try to help with something...

[General]

Maybe it's just me, but the Kiai time looks kinda out of place in this song. It's quiet and doesn't really have a "climax".

[Easy]

Switch the pattern of 01:10:709 (1,2,3,4) - with 01:13:500 (1,2) - so you can establish the rhythm of that triple hit. danke

[Normal]

01:31:639 (3,4) - I would replace these clap sounds with soft whistle sounds (the bell ones). Just so it's consistent with the rest of this part.

[Hard] okay

00:19:081 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is the only stream I saw that was this close together. So I think these should be spaced out like the others.

UnderminE wrote:

[Easy]
01:00:942 (2) - x: 96 y: 272
01:03:732 (3) - x: 304
Slider tick rate 2 goes amazing with this song just saying

[Xin's Normal]
Needs more hitsounds, also you can use normal-whistle to catch that violin at background
01:25:360 (4,5,6) - such a good usage of whistles, try this kind of hitsound-pattern more in the rest of the map

Checked the rest, nothing wrong with mapset but needs a good usage of hitsounds. Especially soft-whistles. Also as I said in Xin's Normal diff, you can use Normal-whistle with low-volume for those viloin parts on sliders. It would sound awesome.

HellDawn wrote:

Just a quick mod :/

Normal

00:06:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pattern looks bad so I made something like this

SPOILER

104,184,6523,5,2,0:0:0
160,280,6872,1,0,0:0:0
256,232,7221,1,2,0:0:0
352,280,7569,1,0,0:0:0
408,188,7918,2,0,B|368:124|288:116,1,120
204,120,8616,2,8,B|108:152|100:200,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:31:639 (1,2,3) - It would be better If you move to center them

Hard

00:50:128 (5,6,7) - 1 grid down

Dark Fang wrote:

Hi

[Genral]

offset +3 (945) ok

[Easy]

00:04:430 (2) - 2 grid down with (3),(4) and adjust next notes
00:09:314 (1) - keep DS
00:27:453 (3) - 2 grid down
00:53:267 (4) - why don't you use Whistle instead Clap?
01:14:895 (4) - add Clap at end of slider
01:37:221 (3) - remove Whistle and 01:37:919 (4) - add Whistle
all done
[Xin's Normal]

00:47:337 (3) - 1 grid down
01:16:290 - add Whistle pls like 1st KIAI Time for consistent
01:43:151 (4) - add Whistle?
done
[Normal]

Circle -1
nothing special. but sound is boring can you stuff Whistle sound?
no for circle size
[Taiko]

00:18:386 (1) - d?
00:19:084 (1) - d?
I like it <3

[Hard]

01:23:267 (4) - add Whistle at start of slider?
01:28:848 (4) - ^
01:33:035 (1) - this slider's arrow coverd by 01:31:988 (6)'s hitbuster. Tilt angle pls
01:44:546 (3) - ^
about hitsound. same as Normal diff

bomber34 wrote:

This does not get ranked because .... ?

yu_yu12354 wrote:

HI~ I am a Taiko modder.
I find this song randomly and may I mod it please? wwwwwww

[Overall:]
The map sounds good at all. But you should try to add more notes at Taiko . Is that finished yet? If don't, just ignore it wwwww
Overall, Oni should have at least 500 notes and the difficulty is harder than Taiko . Otherwise,it's better for you changing to Taiko but not Taiko Oni
Also, you should need more mods on Taiko
[Taiko Oni:]
It is quite easy for the Taiko Oni
you've better change the difficulty and Change the name to Taiko
difficulty change → 4

I think you should add more notes in the Taiko
00:03:910 (2) remove clap
00:04:084 (3,4) clap
00:05:567 add a clap note
00:07:747 add like this?k k d d k
00:12:107 remove the spinner Is it better to change like this?k k d d k k d d ....until 00:14:549
00:20:131 add a finish note
01:02:340 same as 00:12:107


GOOD LUCK
If you need more modding, you may PM me AHHA(If you don't mind)

Foxxer wrote:

General

The beatmap looks great. You can put the Approach Rate of Hard on 8, looks better for me. done
Slider Tick Rate of Hard should be 2.

Hard

Red = Unrankable, you should fix.
Black = My suggestion.

00:41:410 (4,5) - It's out of the playfield. fixed
01:22:921 (2,3,4) - Can you move this a little bit down? sure
01:33:038 (1) - It's out of the playfield.fixed
01:44:549 (3) - ^fixed
01:45:945 (3) - ^fixed
01:49:782 (no notes) - You can add a spinner here, since the sound is decreasing. no thanks

Good Luck~

1. aggiungi Kingdom Hearts alle tag credo che sia la tag piu' importanche che ti sei dimenticato.

1. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
2. 00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
3. 01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
4. 01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
5. 01:47:337 - snap to 01:47:340
6. 01:48:035 - snap to 01:48:038
7. 01:48:732 - snap to 01:48:735

1. 01:44:200 (1,2) - se noti lo spacing non è giusto qui

1. 00:09:317 (1,2) - questa pattern personalmente non mi piace molto perche non cerchi di redere il flow un po' migliore facendo una cosa del genere? ho semplicemente fatto meglio lo slider (1) - e poi lo copiato e rotato di +30 gradi per redere la parren piu' carina e un pochino simmetrica come si potrebbe dire o3o ovviamente poi aggiusta lo spacing con la prossima nota
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:16:293 (2) - questo slider in se non ha problemi ma se fai caso 00:14:200 (4) - è cosi brutto da vedere, perche non cerchi di stackare la fine del slider (2) - con il (4) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:35:131 (2,3,4,1) - questa pattern è un po' troppo rigida che ne dici se invede facessi una cosa del genere?: allora come prima cosa lo slider (1) -dopo lo spinner non va a cambiare posizione,crei una pattern a triandolo con i prossimi cerchi (2,3) - in questo modo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   inseguito il cerchio (4) - è posizionato in modo tale da formare una blanket con il prossimo slider,cio' vuol dire che lo dovrai modificare un po' del tutto in questo modo; se ovviamente segui il mio consigllio tieni sempre conto di fixare lo spacing con il prossimo cerchio
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:107 (4,1,2) - lo slider (1) con i cerchi (4) - e (2) - non formano una blanket perfetta che si potrebbe migliorare un sacco secondo me per rendere la pattern piu' carina e piu' pulita.
5. 01:27:456 (1) - ciao slider o3o che ne dici di renderlo piu' pulito e dare una forma piu' semplice come: // secondo me ci starebbe molto meglio :V ed è anche piu' facile da fare con la 3 point formula,vabbe se decidi di usare questo slider fixa lo spacing ecc
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:34:433 - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body

1. 00:03:732 - snap to 00:03:735
2. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
3. 00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
4. 00:31:639 - snap to 00:31:642
5. 01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
6. 01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
7. 01:48:383 - snap to 01:48:386

1. 00:08:270 (3) - the next object is a bit far
2. 00:10:363 (4) - same about here
3. 00:38:270 (2) - look good the spacing here
4. 00:58:851 (9) - prev object is to close to this circle

1. 00:15:247 (2,3) - you can make a better blanket here since the new 3 point formula can help you a lot
2. 00:37:224 (1,2) - the end of slider (1) - can make a better blanket for slider (2) -
3. 00:45:945 (1) - this slider can be make more simmetrical and much better try to improve it and try to create a simmetrical patter with 00:45:596 (5,1,2) - i think it will flow much better imo
4. 00:56:758 (5,6,7,8,9) - this pattern is uhm not so good try to improve the ugly overlap >.<
5. 01:05:479 (2,3) - this blanket can be done better imo
6. 01:27:805 (2,3) - try to improve a bit this smal overlap :V
7. 01:28:851 (3) - the slider form can be done better since the end is not so cute
8. 01:32:340 (3,1) - the slider (1) - make a not so nice blanket for slider (3) - try to make slider (1) - better with the new 3 formula point >u<
9. 01:37:572 (4,1) - try to make a better blanket with (4) - slider end for having a better flow

1. 00:20:479 (1) - add a whistle at slider ens , try to continue your prev hitsound pattern and add a whistle at 00:21:526 (2) -
2. 00:21:875 (3) - remove whistle at reverse arrow , and add it at slider end
3. 00:22:921 (4) - add a whistle
4. 00:26:758 (2) - whistle at slider start and end
5. 00:35:479 (3) - whistle at slider end
6. 00:36:875 (6) - remove whistle
7. 00:38:270 (2) - whistle at slider end
8. 00:40:014 (1) - whistle at slider start
9. 00:46:991 (2) - whistle
10. 00:47:689 (4) - whistle at slider start
    
    same with the next hitsounds relook they >u<

1. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
   00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
   00:31:639 - snap to 00:31:642
   01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
   01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
   01:47:511 - snap to 01:47:514
   01:48:209 - snap to 01:48:212
   01:48:907 - snap to 01:48:910

1. 00:34:084 (4) - è un po' vicina al prev slider
2. 00:38:619 (3) - un po' troppo vicino al prossimo cerchio

1. 00:20:131 - questa nota sembra di troppo
2. 00:40:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - èerche non cercho di creare simmetria qui?
3. 00:45:596 - questo slider non è semmetrico credo che riusciresti a migliorare la simmetria o3o
4. 01:02:340 - qui si sente un suono di un finish che ne dici di iniziare lo spinner qui : 01:02:689 - e aggiungere li un circle + finish?

1. 00:36:526 - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body
2. 00:48:386 (1) - whistle all'inizio dello slider
3. 00:49:084 (2) - add a whistle
4. 00:49:782 - whistle qui
5. 00:50:479 (4) - whistle
6. 00:59:200 - missing clap ?
7. 01:10:363 - missing clap?
8. 01:21:875 - whistle
9. 01:27:456 - a 01:31:642 - sembra cosi vuoto senza hitsounds ._.
10. 01:37:921 (6) - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body

1. Sulla hard diro poco perchè credo che ci voglio un lavoro serio sullo spacing perchè la parte iniziale con cui hai cominciato a 0.80 di spacing sembra cosi stretta,devi pensare al play dato che la mappa è molto semplice e i giocatori per la maggior parte della mappa singletapperanno e avere uno spacing cosi stretto è un po' d'inpiccio, come dopo lo spinner hai iniziato a usare lo spacing a 1.0 mi è sembrato tutto meglio,ma pur in certi punti restava lo spacing a 0.80 che rende tutto inconsistente, io ti consiglierei ri riprendere tutto dall'inizio e rifare tutto lo spacing a 1.0, lo so che è un lavoro faticose e rompi palle ma l'ho fatto anche io e ti dico che il flow della mappa potrebbe migliorare molto,è una mappa abbastanza pulita anche se segue sempre gli stessi pattern a stella e a quadrato,quindi per prima cosa cerca di migliorare lo spacing qui >-< poi anche qui ci sono le linee verdi unsnappate quindi fixa anche qui tutto,questo è una conseguenza del timing change o3o quindi non dimenticartene :3

Lally wrote:

Hi Hi from TAM :3

[General]

1. aggiungi Kingdom Hearts alle tag credo che sia la tag piu' importanche che ti sei dimenticato.

[Easy]
Snapping:
green timing lines che non sono snappate:

1. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
2. 00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
3. 01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
4. 01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
5. 01:47:337 - snap to 01:47:340
6. 01:48:035 - snap to 01:48:038
7. 01:48:732 - snap to 01:48:735

Spacing:

1. 01:44:200 (1,2) - se noti lo spacing non è giusto qui

Placement:

1. 00:09:317 (1,2) - questa pattern personalmente non mi piace molto perche non cerchi di redere il flow un po' migliore facendo una cosa del genere? ho semplicemente fatto meglio lo slider (1) - e poi lo copiato e rotato di +30 gradi per redere la parren piu' carina e un pochino simmetrica come si potrebbe dire o3o ovviamente poi aggiusta lo spacing con la prossima nota
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:16:293 (2) - questo slider in se non ha problemi ma se fai caso 00:14:200 (4) - è cosi brutto da vedere, perche non cerchi di stackare la fine del slider (2) - con il (4) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:35:131 (2,3,4,1) - questa pattern è un po' troppo rigida che ne dici se invede facessi una cosa del genere?: allora come prima cosa lo slider (1) -dopo lo spinner non va a cambiare posizione,crei una pattern a triandolo con i prossimi cerchi (2,3) - in questo modo:
   
   SPOILER

   
   inseguito il cerchio (4) - è posizionato in modo tale da formare una blanket con il prossimo slider,cio' vuol dire che lo dovrai modificare un po' del tutto in questo modo; se ovviamente segui il mio consigllio tieni sempre conto di fixare lo spacing con il prossimo cerchio
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:42:107 (4,1,2) - lo slider (1) con i cerchi (4) - e (2) - non formano una blanket perfetta che si potrebbe migliorare un sacco secondo me per rendere la pattern piu' carina e piu' pulita.
5. 01:27:456 (1) - ciao slider o3o che ne dici di renderlo piu' pulito e dare una forma piu' semplice come: // secondo me ci starebbe molto meglio :V ed è anche piu' facile da fare con la 3 point formula,vabbe se decidi di usare questo slider fixa lo spacing ecc
   
   SPOILER

   

Hitsounds:

1. 01:34:433 - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body

[Xin's Normal]
Snapping:
green lines that are not correctly snapped:

1. 00:03:732 - snap to 00:03:735
2. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
3. 00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
4. 00:31:639 - snap to 00:31:642
5. 01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
6. 01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
7. 01:48:383 - snap to 01:48:386

Spacing:

1. 00:08:270 (3) - the next object is a bit far
2. 00:10:363 (4) - same about here
3. 00:38:270 (2) - look good the spacing here
4. 00:58:851 (9) - prev object is to close to this circle

Placement:

1. 00:15:247 (2,3) - you can make a better blanket here since the new 3 point formula can help you a lot
2. 00:37:224 (1,2) - the end of slider (1) - can make a better blanket for slider (2) -
3. 00:45:945 (1) - this slider can be make more simmetrical and much better try to improve it and try to create a simmetrical patter with 00:45:596 (5,1,2) - i think it will flow much better imo
4. 00:56:758 (5,6,7,8,9) - this pattern is uhm not so good try to improve the ugly overlap >.<
5. 01:05:479 (2,3) - this blanket can be done better imo
6. 01:27:805 (2,3) - try to improve a bit this smal overlap :V
7. 01:28:851 (3) - the slider form can be done better since the end is not so cute
8. 01:32:340 (3,1) - the slider (1) - make a not so nice blanket for slider (3) - try to make slider (1) - better with the new 3 formula point >u<
9. 01:37:572 (4,1) - try to make a better blanket with (4) - slider end for having a better flow

Hitsounds:

1. 00:20:479 (1) - add a whistle at slider ens , try to continue your prev hitsound pattern and add a whistle at 00:21:526 (2) -
2. 00:21:875 (3) - remove whistle at reverse arrow , and add it at slider end
3. 00:22:921 (4) - add a whistle
4. 00:26:758 (2) - whistle at slider start and end
5. 00:35:479 (3) - whistle at slider end
6. 00:36:875 (6) - remove whistle
7. 00:38:270 (2) - whistle at slider end
8. 00:40:014 (1) - whistle at slider start
9. 00:46:991 (2) - whistle
10. 00:47:689 (4) - whistle at slider start
    
    same with the next hitsounds relook they >u<

[Normal]
Snapping:

1. 00:14:896 - snap to 00:14:898
   00:28:848 - snap to 00:28:851
   00:31:639 - snap to 00:31:642
   01:05:128 - snap to 01:05:131
   01:19:081 - snap to 01:19:084
   01:47:511 - snap to 01:47:514
   01:48:209 - snap to 01:48:212
   01:48:907 - snap to 01:48:910

Spacing:

1. 00:34:084 (4) - è un po' vicina al prev slider
2. 00:38:619 (3) - un po' troppo vicino al prossimo cerchio

Placement:

1. 00:20:131 - questa nota sembra di troppo
2. 00:40:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - èerche non cercho di creare simmetria qui?
3. 00:45:596 - questo slider non è semmetrico credo che riusciresti a migliorare la simmetria o3o
4. 01:02:340 - qui si sente un suono di un finish che ne dici di iniziare lo spinner qui : 01:02:689 - e aggiungere li un circle + finish?

Hitsounds:

1. 00:36:526 - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body
2. 00:48:386 (1) - whistle all'inizio dello slider
3. 00:49:084 (2) - add a whistle
4. 00:49:782 - whistle qui
5. 00:50:479 (4) - whistle
6. 00:59:200 - missing clap ?
7. 01:10:363 - missing clap?
8. 01:21:875 - whistle
9. 01:27:456 - a 01:31:642 - sembra cosi vuoto senza hitsounds ._.
10. 01:37:921 (6) - rimuovi il whistle dal slider body

[Hard]

1. Sulla hard diro poco perchè credo che ci voglio un lavoro serio sullo spacing perchè la parte iniziale con cui hai cominciato a 0.80 di spacing sembra cosi stretta,devi pensare al play dato che la mappa è molto semplice e i giocatori per la maggior parte della mappa singletapperanno e avere uno spacing cosi stretto è un po' d'inpiccio, come dopo lo spinner hai iniziato a usare lo spacing a 1.0 mi è sembrato tutto meglio,ma pur in certi punti restava lo spacing a 0.80 che rende tutto inconsistente, io ti consiglierei ri riprendere tutto dall'inizio e rifare tutto lo spacing a 1.0, lo so che è un lavoro faticose e rompi palle ma l'ho fatto anche io e ti dico che il flow della mappa potrebbe migliorare molto,è una mappa abbastanza pulita anche se segue sempre gli stessi pattern a stella e a quadrato,quindi per prima cosa cerca di migliorare lo spacing qui >-< poi anche qui ci sono le linee verdi unsnappate quindi fixa anche qui tutto,questo è una conseguenza del timing change o3o quindi non dimenticartene :3

Spero ti posso aiutare un po >.<

Flower wrote:

Hi~ random mod

[General]
BPM is doubled imo. Technically it has no problem, but some BATs may think it inappropriate. Half the BPM and double the SVs. (you can ignore this, until you get further ideas from BATs)
The hitclaps are reaaaally annoying. I think the map should at least use some custom claps, or you can remap the sound samples with a better pattern.
from 01:46:991 - to end, it's better using a spinner to fit the fade-out, rather than using other notes.
However, I strongly recommend you remap all diffs, since the quality is still not improved to a satisfying status, especially that of the sliders and hitsounds.

[Easy]
ok

[Xin's Normal]
00:13:154 (3) - doesn't blanket well
00:23:270 (1,3) - slider shape

[Normal]
00:10:014 - 00:11:410 - clap
00:44:200 (3,4) - fix shape
00:53:968 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:12:107 (3) - not stacked properly. if you intend doing this, move 1 grid left-downward
01:13:503 (1,2,3,4) - use ctrl+shift+D make a perfect square
01:30:247 - whistle
01:30:945 - ^

[Hard]
00:31:642 (1) - fix shape
00:32:689 (2,3,4) - separate a bit more
01:01:293 (6,7,8) - ^
01:41:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use ctrl+shift+D make a perfect star