daw i still remember this map months ago =v=;
General
- Offset sounded a bit early, try increasing it a little? But we'll deal with this eventually
- Just an idea, but maybe one of the Normals could have a bigger Circle Size for some variety
Easy
00:09:317 (1) - Clap on tail
00:14:898 (1) - Clap on head? I suggest you check all the appropriate downbeats for claps, hitsound consistency~
00:16:293 (2) - ^
00:24:665 (2) - move it a little towards the lower left for a better blanket around (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698154
00:56:758 (1) - Delete NC, you didn't have this at the beginning
01:07:921 (1) - ^
01:13:503 (3) - Finish on head, hear bg music
01:24:665 (1) - Delete NC
01:30:247 (1) - ^
01:30:945 (2,4) - Whistles for consistency, delete clap on (4)
01:35:828 (1) - Delete NC
Xin's Normal
00:06:177 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note
00:36:875 (1) - Whistle on head, & try this rhythm instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698194, the long slider at least has to start on 00:37:224
00:39:665 (1) - similar as above, start a slider on the next white tick, fits the violin
00:53:968 (1,2) - kinda breaks the rhythm with the red tick, i love this pattern but I suggest you redesign these to follow the 1/1 pattern, same for 00:59:549 (1,2) -
01:32:340 (3) - how about a slider like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698211
nice, just double check for combo consistency here and there~
Normal
00:19:084 (5) - i think the clap fits on the tail of this instead of on (6)
00:24:665 (4,5,6) - Adjust upwards so (6) fits in (3) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698216
00:34:433 (1) - similarly, you can bring this up if you can http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698220
00:45:596 (1,2) - need hitsounds!
Also in the future, avoid multiple repeats in easier diffs =v=
01:12:107 (3) - Bring up for better blanket with (2)
01:30:247 (1,2,3,4) - Very cool but I think it's safer to stick with distance snap on Normals
01:49:084 (7) - Finish on tail like other diffs?
Hard
00:07:049 (1) - Delete NC, didn't catch the point of it
00:10:363 (1) - ^
00:11:758 (1) - ^
00:37:224 (1) - this struggle slider seemed a bit "strong" for this part? maybe make the wiggles less dramatic lol
Timing and several more good mods should do it so I'll leave the star
General
- Offset sounded a bit early, try increasing it a little? But we'll deal with this eventually
- Just an idea, but maybe one of the Normals could have a bigger Circle Size for some variety

Easy
00:09:317 (1) - Clap on tail
00:14:898 (1) - Clap on head? I suggest you check all the appropriate downbeats for claps, hitsound consistency~
00:16:293 (2) - ^
00:24:665 (2) - move it a little towards the lower left for a better blanket around (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698154
00:56:758 (1) - Delete NC, you didn't have this at the beginning
01:07:921 (1) - ^
01:13:503 (3) - Finish on head, hear bg music
01:24:665 (1) - Delete NC
01:30:247 (1) - ^
01:30:945 (2,4) - Whistles for consistency, delete clap on (4)
01:35:828 (1) - Delete NC
Xin's Normal
00:06:177 (1) - Delete NC, NC on next note
00:36:875 (1) - Whistle on head, & try this rhythm instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698194, the long slider at least has to start on 00:37:224
00:39:665 (1) - similar as above, start a slider on the next white tick, fits the violin
00:53:968 (1,2) - kinda breaks the rhythm with the red tick, i love this pattern but I suggest you redesign these to follow the 1/1 pattern, same for 00:59:549 (1,2) -
01:32:340 (3) - how about a slider like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698211
nice, just double check for combo consistency here and there~
Normal
00:19:084 (5) - i think the clap fits on the tail of this instead of on (6)
00:24:665 (4,5,6) - Adjust upwards so (6) fits in (3) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698216
00:34:433 (1) - similarly, you can bring this up if you can http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698220
00:45:596 (1,2) - need hitsounds!

01:12:107 (3) - Bring up for better blanket with (2)
01:30:247 (1,2,3,4) - Very cool but I think it's safer to stick with distance snap on Normals
01:49:084 (7) - Finish on tail like other diffs?
Hard
00:07:049 (1) - Delete NC, didn't catch the point of it
00:10:363 (1) - ^
00:11:758 (1) - ^
00:37:224 (1) - this struggle slider seemed a bit "strong" for this part? maybe make the wiggles less dramatic lol
Timing and several more good mods should do it so I'll leave the star
