1. Easy (1.86 stars, 109 notes)
2. Hard (4.72 stars, 268 notes)
3. Normal (3.2 stars, 158 notes)

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modder~thanks a lot

A normal person
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thanks very much for the useful mod

A normal person wrote:

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easy 00:47:272 (1,1) - Move Right And Cut down One Tick Plz nice~fixed

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Hard I think AR7 good. too. okay, let me try this

I hope Your Map Rank

kuronotsubasa wrote:

H! 来自我的队列
我是一个新手MODDER，因此你可以选择无视我的建议，这完全是可以的。:D 中文写起来就是舒服
Normal

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感觉滑条速度略快？嘛、不过这个我不太擅长更改什么的……SV是1.1 個人認為不算太快
另外，滑条的奇葩形状……总觉得奇葩够奇葩、但也许和这首歌的温婉风格不太搭……嘛XD 不同的人有不同的看法
在一段转盘之后接上NOTE是可以的、但是Note的距离有点远离圆心了。也就是说在短时间里把光标从转圈转移到点上会比较艰难。
我不确定我有没有说明白……举个例子：
00:28:897 (1,1) - 转盘后面跟的是滑条、但是滑调的起始位置距离圆心的距离太远了一些，会让人难以把握。呵呵 沒錯啊 在這個難度不應該放這麼遠~~移近了一點
同样的时间间隔，你可以参照 00:26:085 (1,2) - 的距离。
其他转盘和NOTE的衔接就不赘述了。
00:47:085 (8,1) - 这样的NOTE的重叠并不美观 改了
插一句——01:30:960 (2) - 突然出现的clap音效很突兀、并且感觉之后的clap有点太频繁了……我的建议是一句歌词最多两次clap，而且音量也可以调轻一点、因为这首歌本来就很轻……也對 移除了~~

00:12:960 (1) - 在重新MOD时候发现的问题……这个NC有点问题……歌词接的是上一句，建议移除NC，在下一个HIT NC 改了 現在聽了也發現這個
00:46:710 (7) - NC 這個NC的話比較怪 因為在一句的中間...所以先不了
00:54:960 (1) - 建议移除NC，在下一个HIT NC 改了 加了NC在前面
01:06:585 (7) - 建议移除NC 這個感覺還可以
01:15:960 (1) - 同上 是的 改了
01:31:710 (4) - NC 那三個音都加了NC
01:34:335 (1) - 建议移除NC，在下一个HIT NC 改了
01:51:960 (1,2,3) - 这三个点可以分别NC （即成不同的颜色）不錯的意見 但改了的話感覺太亂 所以還是不改了

Hard

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又见奇葩滑条……忍不住吐槽一下。 滑條的問題 我會改一下的
其实最好的建议是所有难度的游戏时长都一致……我记得在哪里看到过这个条目，各个难度的时长一致，以体现你不是在随便制作其他的难度。其實不是的 我見過有些ranked map的長度都不同...我晚點加一些東西在前面吧~
另外、建议distance spacing 调节高一点、总体给人的感觉是点挤在一起、有点分辨不清……困難地圖不太需要考慮spacing的 而且 我反而覺得現在隔得有點開...
00:27:210 (5,6,7) - 此处的hit节奏比较特殊、但是在谱面面上体现不出这一点。（其实我的建议是普遍把你的滑条都“拉直”）一点、过于弯的滑条（而非形状特殊）容易降低难易度和美观、而且视觉上难以辨认 這個我要考慮一下 因為我聽到的音都放了東西...滑條的問題 我想我會改一改的
00:40:710 (9) - NC ok
00:44:835 (6) - NC加了在00:44:085
00:46:335 (5,6) - 这种重叠并不美观改了
00:46:522 (11) - 这个滑条的节奏很别扭。建议：延长至 “00:46:897 - ” 把“00:47:085 (12) - ” 挪到“00:47:085 - ” 时间点 改了 用了你的建議
00:54:960 (1) - 移除NC、下一个HIT NC 感覺上一個COMBO已經很多了
00:56:085 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 此处滑条略单调……可以考虑多添加一些变化 改了
01:17:835 (6,7,8,9,10) - 此处感觉并不是那么好看……可以略添变化、比如把后两个HIT变为滑条。但其实依照你的谱面的AR来说都会让人看不清楚、并不是很合适重叠 好吧 我改了位置...感覺改滑條太難
01:22:710 (3) - 建议缩短滑条时间到“01:23:085 - ”即可 好的~這或許太難了
01:25:710 (1) - 转盘时间延长至“01:27:960 - ” 兩轉盤重疊沒問題嗎?
01:38:085 (2) - 鉴于前后的排列，此处不建议HIT重叠嗯嗯 好吧 改了~
01:45:960 (12) - 此处不建议HIT重叠 這個之前也覺得有點不好~~改了~
01:40:710 (10) - NC OK

结束。以上皆为建议……不过总体感觉前面的部分缺少音效；总体歌曲来说音效略单薄了。还有就是要注意COMBO的设置啊喂:3
希望我的建议能对你有帮助

kuronotsubasa wrote:

H! 来自我的队列
我是一个新手MODDER，因此你可以选择无视我的建议，这完全是可以的。:D 中文写起来就是舒服

Hard

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其实最好的建议是所有难度的游戏时长都一致……我记得在哪里看到过这个条目，各个难度的时长一致，以体现你不是在随便制作其他的难度。其實不是的 我見過有些ranked map的長度都不同...我晚點加一些東西在前面吧~这个我是知道的、过去有部分图的确是、EASY最短，难度增加了之后时间依次变长、但是最新的规定貌似是这么说的、难度最好一致……好像是贴吧里翻译的……
另外、建议distance spacing 调节高一点、总体给人的感觉是点挤在一起、有点分辨不清……困難地圖不太需要考慮spacing的 而且 我反而覺得現在隔得有點開...倒是没有觉得隔得有点开。感觉大部分地方的距离其实还可以增加的并不算太开、就是这些要连续打的地方最好能分开一些让人能分辨清楚

01:25:710 (1) - 转盘时间延长至“01:27:960 - ” 兩轉盤重疊沒問題嗎? 转盘应该是没有重叠的？！让我再核对一下！……这里是我没有说清楚，第一个转盘是从“01:25:710 - ”到“01:27:960 - ”、第二个转盘从“01:28:147 - ”到“01:30:210 - ”是我没有说清楚、抱歉

结束。以上皆为建议……不过总体感觉前面的部分缺少音效；总体歌曲来说音效略单薄了。还有就是要注意COMBO的设置啊喂:3
希望我的建议能对你有帮助

kuronotsubasa wrote:

kuronotsubasa wrote:

H! 来自我的队列
我是一个新手MODDER，因此你可以选择无视我的建议，这完全是可以的。:D 中文写起来就是舒服

Hard

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其实最好的建议是所有难度的游戏时长都一致……我记得在哪里看到过这个条目，各个难度的时长一致，以体现你不是在随便制作其他的难度。其實不是的 我見過有些ranked map的長度都不同...我晚點加一些東西在前面吧~这个我是知道的、过去有部分图的确是、EASY最短，难度增加了之后时间依次变长、但是最新的规定貌似是这么说的、难度最好一致……好像是贴吧里翻译的……
另外、建议distance spacing 调节高一点、总体给人的感觉是点挤在一起、有点分辨不清……困難地圖不太需要考慮spacing的 而且 我反而覺得現在隔得有點開...倒是没有觉得隔得有点开。感觉大部分地方的距离其实还可以增加的并不算太开、就是这些要连续打的地方最好能分开一些让人能分辨清楚

01:25:710 (1) - 转盘时间延长至“01:27:960 - ” 兩轉盤重疊沒問題嗎? 转盘应该是没有重叠的？！让我再核对一下！……这里是我没有说清楚，第一个转盘是从“01:25:710 - ”到“01:27:960 - ”、第二个转盘从“01:28:147 - ”到“01:30:210 - ”是我没有说清楚、抱歉

结束。以上皆为建议……不过总体感觉前面的部分缺少音效；总体歌曲来说音效略单薄了。还有就是要注意COMBO的设置啊喂:3
希望我的建议能对你有帮助

Evil_Twilight wrote:

Source加上Kotoura-san
tag加上ed1
不用給kd了o3o

歌很好聽阿
加油

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, from popner's queue!

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 607ms BPM: 160,00
Resnap after and set timing points right! thx and resnapped all
You didn't set any combo colours I will consider it.
01:31:732 - Kiai should start here fixed, thx~
Make more slidershapes which are readable i am learning this. maybe i some time to correct this.

Easy

You used a lot of different spacings, you need to chose only one and fix the spacing oh...my fault...fixed

00:06:982 (1) - You should never ever make such sliders in Easy or Normal diffs, its too confusing to play for new players and unexpected as well. They need to learn in Easy and Normal how you play sliders and circles and these shapes would just confuse them. yes. i got it. i will delete it
00:09:232 (3) - 2 reverse arrows are always bad in Easy, you should remove one okay let me remap this part
01:10:732 (1,1) - Between spinner and next element must be at least 1/1 beat space okay i cut a part of spinner. is this rule only apply in easy?
01:27:044 (1,1) - ^ also fixed
01:51:982 (1) - Remove NC ok, fixed

Normal

00:13:710 (1) - 00:16:710 (1) - , 00:34:335 (4) - , 00:40:710 (6) - , 00:58:710 (6) - , 01:04:335 (5) - Same as Easy ok, all fixed or remapped.
00:47:085 (8) - way too many repeats, reduce it ok, fixed
00:53:460 (1) - Doesnt really follow the music right i remapped this part
01:17:835 (3) - Circle is a little too hidden from the previous circle ok let me put it to other place
01:21:210 (1) - Remove NC ok, fixed
01:30:960 (1,1) - ^ ok, fixed too

Hard

00:10:732 (9,1) - Reverse NC do you mean add nc in 00:10:732 - ? fixed
00:33:044 (7) - NC ok, fixed too
00:49:732 (5,1) - Reverse NC ok, fixed too
00:51:794 (6,7) - You should unstack this, due to the stacking its really hard to read and might confuse ok, i have remapped this part
00:52:544 (9) - Doesnt follow the song ok, changed this part
00:52:732 - Here should be a NC actually okay, i remapped
01:30:982 (1,1) - Remove NC yes...addingNC will make this part become more hard
01:43:169 (1,4) - Reverse NC ok, fixed too
01:51:982 (1,1,1) - Remove NC keep nc in 01:51:982 (1) -

Needs lot more improvment, GL

Asdedix147 wrote:

Please, make it ranked. It's awesome on osu!mania

vahn10 wrote:

offset: 1732

General

1. Offset: 1710
2. BPM: 80
   There's absolutely no way this can be a 160BPM map. Just listen to the song, it's so calm for the current BPM.
   Like previous people have told you to change the offset (in which you didn't changed), I strongly suggest you to change both offset and BPM (in every diff), because the timing is really wrong. Please keep in mind you should change the slider velocity to 1.40x in Easy, 2.20x in Normal and 2.80x in Hard and resnap all notes after making those changes.

Easy

1. 00:01:732 (1) - Would be better if this was extended to 00:06:982 - and put 00:06:982 (1) - to start in 00:07:732 - to 00:08:482 - for a better pattern
   
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2. 00:10:732 (5) - What about a New Combo here? I honestly think it'd be better if you add here because of the sudden change on the piano, plus, minding this is an Easy, long combos aren't recommended.
3. 00:33:982 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This feels way too much repetitive because the lots of circles you've added. I think you can keep up with your pattern, but changing some circles for sliders is strongly recommended to improve it.
4. 01:07:732 (7,1) - Feels a bit harsh considering this is an Easy. I know you want to follow the vocals, but I think you could have worked on a slider here for being something better to play.
   
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5. 01:13:732 (4) - Consider adding a New Combo here, because the currently is using 8 objects in a combo, which I wouldn't recommend in an Easy.
6. 01:31:732 (4) - Add New Combo because os kiai.
7. 01:40:732 (6) - New Combo because it's too long, (Same reason as 01:13:732 (4) - )
8. 01:47:857 (2) - Hmm, would be nice if you move a grid left so it won't touch with 01:46:732 (1) - . What do you think?

Normal

1. 00:07:732 (2) - Would be nice adding a New Combo here because of the finish hitsound.
2. 00:34:357 (4) - You could have made this slider with a better looking - minding a more circular shape-.
   
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3. ^
4. 01:41:857 (7,1) - Why there is no objects between them? Consider adding something there, it feels something is missing when playing that part, so do that minding for improving gameplay.
5. 01:48:232 (5) - Same as 00:34:357 (4) - .
6. 01:51:607 - Strongly recommend adding an object here to improve flow.

Insane

1. 00:12:232 (3) - Can you place this somewhere else on the grid? With the current position it is, it feels quite repetitive because of the previous combo in 00:10:732 (1,2) -.
2. 00:12:982 (1) - I wouldn't place this slider considering you could have placed other two objects instead, minding this is an Insane. The first beat is in 00:12:982 - and the other in 00:13:732 - , so you could split the current slider into two objects for a better flow.
3. 00:35:107 - Add object?
4. 00:53:294 - ^
5. 01:38:294 (3) - V-shape slider here doesn't fit well imo. Try making a circular shape slide instead, like the one I have showed in the Normal diff.
6. 01:45:888 (9) - Remove Clap.
7. 01:45:982 (10) - Add Clap.

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue.

General

1. Offset: 1710
2. BPM: 80
   There's absolutely no way this can be a 160BPM map. Just listen to the song, it's so calm for the current BPM.
   Like previous people have told you to change the offset (in which you didn't changed), I strongly suggest you to change both offset and BPM (in every diff), because the timing is really wrong. Please keep in mind you should change the slider velocity to 1.40x in Easy, 2.20x in Normal and 2.80x in Hard and resnap all notes after making those changes.

okay, changed. but i don't understand why offset should be 1710.

Easy

1. 00:01:732 (1) - Would be better if this was extended to 00:06:982 - and put 00:06:982 (1) - to start in 00:07:732 - to 00:08:482 - for a better pattern nice. i agree with this
   
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2. 00:10:732 (5) - What about a New Combo here? I honestly think it'd be better if you add here because of the sudden change on the piano, plus, minding this is an Easy, long combos aren't recommended. i am weak at making nc.
3. 00:33:982 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This feels way too much repetitive because the lots of circles you've added. I think you can keep up with your pattern, but changing some circles for sliders is strongly recommended to improve it. okay. here have too much notes
4. 01:07:732 (7,1) - Feels a bit harsh considering this is an Easy. I know you want to follow the vocals, but I think you could have worked on a slider here for being something better to play. okay. this is good idea
   
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5. 01:13:732 (4) - Consider adding a New Combo here, because the currently is using 8 objects in a combo, which I wouldn't recommend in an Easy. haha. fixed
6. 01:31:732 (4) - Add New Combo because os kiai. ok. fixed
7. 01:40:732 (6) - New Combo because it's too long, (Same reason as 01:13:732 (4) - ) also fixed
8. 01:47:857 (2) - Hmm, would be nice if you move a grid left so it won't touch with 01:46:732 (1) - . What do you think? ok. let me move it

Normal

1. 00:07:732 (2) - Would be nice adding a New Combo here because of the finish hitsound. do you mean when i use finish hitsound here, nc should be added?? ok, i added
2. 00:34:357 (4) - You could have made this slider with a better looking - minding a more circular shape-. ok. fixed as yours
   
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3. ^
4. 01:41:857 (7,1) - Why there is no objects between them? Consider adding something there, it feels something is missing when playing that part, so do that minding for improving gameplay. sorry this is my mistake. i remapped this part
5. 01:48:232 (5) - Same as 00:34:357 (4) - .
6. 01:51:607 - Strongly recommend adding an object here to improve flow.

Insane

1. 00:12:232 (3) - Can you place this somewhere else on the grid? With the current position it is, it feels quite repetitive because of the previous combo in 00:10:732 (1,2) -. ok. fixed
2. 00:12:982 (1) - I wouldn't place this slider considering you could have placed other two objects instead, minding this is an Insane. The first beat is in 00:12:982 - and the other in 00:13:732 - , so you could split the current slider into two objects for a better flow. ok. i distributed it to two sliders
3. 00:35:107 - Add object? ok. added
4. 00:53:294 - ^ sorry, i cannot hear anything at this point. i aims to make a hard map so this may be too hard.
5. 01:38:294 (3) - V-shape slider here doesn't fit well imo. Try making a circular shape slide instead, like the one I have showed in the Normal diff. ok. but i use other shape
6. 01:45:888 (9) - Remove Clap. haha. this is my mistake. thanks for mention it
7. 01:45:982 (10) - Add Clap. ^
   

If you're still uncomfortable about the timing issue, please do contact me through forum pm or ingame to explain it to you again.
Good luck!

Andrea wrote:

Timing check as requested from my timing queue.

BPM: 80,00 - Offset: 1.740 (Remember to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Good luck ^^

Clique wrote:

okay lets go

from my queue

Easy

try to use grid 4 (tiny) sorry, how to do this?

00:09:210 (3,4) - make these same okay
00:32:460 (2,3) - ^ okay, also fixed
01:12:585 (1,2,3,4,1) - try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719458 (smoother flow + basket) good idea~changed
01:19:710 (2) - 2grid left okay i remaked the slider
01:21:210 (3,2) - not-good overlap. why don't you move red one? okay, i moved it
01:31:710 (1) - difficult notes for easy players okay, fixed
01:34:710 (1) - ^ ^
01:46:710 (1) - ^ ^
01:37:710 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719460 ? good idea. the flow seem to be more smooth

Normal

sv 2.2 <- bit too fast? idk... im not sure.... <-- nonono lol

00:10:710 (3) - more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719466 okay, your slider is better than me
00:28:897 (1) - map here instead of putting spinner. doesn't fit and it's so lazy. lazy and slow has difference. okay, remapped this part
00:34:335 (4) - why don't you put more impact on the vocal? i mean emphasis. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719468 okay, but i don't use same slider with your~
00:47:835 - vocal stops here and piano also ends here so make this slider shorter to get on red tick?
00:53:647 - consider remove this. I can understand you want to follow the vocal but I think its not that good.
01:04:335 (5,1,2) - your rhythm pattern has changed so drastically.consider this rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719471 placement is your own. okay. although this may reduce the difficulty of the map very much
01:13:710 (1) - remove finish and put whistle okay~fixed
01:42:397 (4) - remove ^
01:43:710 (2) - if you want to put this kind of notes, put this 01:46:710 (1) - to keep consistency. reason is same above okay~i make the slider just repeat twice. it is okay?
01:51:960 (1,2,3) - make this rhythm on slider, not circle. OR nc each circles to make normal players be aware of the change of the rhythm. lol...someone call me to remove the nc...btw i like note here. let me add nc~

Hard

00:16:335 (8,1) - not-good overlap okay~fixed
00:26:835 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - follow the vocal here please okay~remapped this part
00:47:085 (9) - consider this rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719476 okay~good idea
00:52:710 (1,2,3) - not good.... or low down your volume of hitsound. okay~i turn the volume down by 10% here
00:58:710 (1) - awkward spinner. okay~i remove this and remap this part
01:40:710 (1,3) - stack completely okay~
01:46:522 - put a note okay~
01:52:710 (1) - needless finish. removed~

considering its your first one, did a great job.
hope your map ranked!

1. title : Kibou no Hana (Tv Size)
2. I felt slider slide.wav is raspy. it would be better to silence sliderslide.wav imo. use this
3. mp3 is really bad imo. 01:57:990 - is odd.......... if you can change mp3 , should do it.

1. AR+1
   AR1 is hard to see imo.
2. 00:07:740 (1,2) - remove (2) and extend (1) to 00:08:865 - .
   (2) followed the piano, however (1)'s end could not follow anyone. so that would fit. in addition I felt that should reduce notes because this part is really silent.
3. 00:20:490 - I suggest to remove break time and add notes in every downbeats.
   break end is really odd imo. this map follow mainly the piano, however I like the end started to follow vocal.
4. 00:44:865 (2,3,4) - why these notes follow vocal? the reason is same above.
   
   
   1. 00:45:240 (2) - 1/1 slider
   2. 00:46:365 (3) - 1/2
   ^ my suggestion
5. 00:47:490 (1) - what does this spiner follow?
   
   
   1. 00:47:115 (4) - circle
   2. 00:47:490 (5) - circle
   3. 00:47:865 (6) - 3/2 slider
   4. 00:49:740 (7) -
   if you did not have the reason, try this.
6. 01:06:615 - piano exist here so add note.
7. 01:08:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:44:865 (2,3,4).
8. 01:10:740 (1) - end at 01:12:240?
   reason is same as 01:06:615
9. 01:15:615 (2) - remove?
   would be better to add intonation.
10. 01:17:115 (2) - ^
11. 01:21:240 (3) - missing whistle. should remove whistle and add it on slider start and end.
12. 01:25:365 (6) - move to 01:25:740 and remove reverse. because vocal was started in there.
13. 01:31:740 (1) - this a little kick slider will confuse beginner. should change 1/1 slider.
14. 01:34:740 (1) - ^
15. 01:39:615 (3) - same as 01:15:615 (2)
16. 01:45:615 (4) - ^
17. 01:46:740 (1) - same as 01:31:740 (1)

1. 00:28:927 (1) - same as 00:47:490 (1) in Easy.
2. 00:34:365 (4) - start to 00:34:552 and add circle here? like 00:27:615 (4,5) - .
3. 00:40:740 (1) - fmm...I suggest to change 1/1 slider (no reverse) becouse vocal extended.
4. 00:47:115 (2) - piano exist in 00:47:865. so end at that.
5. 00:48:615 (3) - same as above.
   try to start at 00:48:990 and remove 00:49:740 (1) - .
6. 00:51:615 (5,6) - same as 00:34:365 (4)
7. 01:43:740 (2) - same as easy
8. 01:51:990 (1,2,3) - I think 1/8 confuse beginner on this BPM....
   if you want to use this rhythm, try to change reverse slider.

1. 00:06:990 (1) - this slider should be 1/8. I feel 1/4 is late.
   how do you think this?
2. 00:08:490 (5) - I suggest to change 1/2 slider and add circle in 00:09:052 - 00:09:240 - .
   I feel this can be difficult.
3. 00:10:740 (1,2) - I suggest to add symmetry.
   
   
   try this.
4. 00:27:052 (4,5) - change to 1/2 slider. like 00:28:552 (9) -
5. 00:53:021 (2) - what does this circle follow?
6. 00:55:365 (2) - same as 01:21:240 (3) in Easy
7. 01:52:740 - add circle and move spinner to 1/4 after.

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
red: Unrankable issue.
blue: may be unrankable issue.
Bold: not unrankable, but should fix it.

I only cheked rhythm because not afford to be modded me in this mapsets. never, it is okay

[General]

1. title : Kibou no Hana (Tv Size) okay
2. I felt slider slide.wav is raspy. it would be better to silence sliderslide.wav imo. use this thanks~put inside the file
3. mp3 is really bad imo. 01:57:990 - is odd.......... if you can change mp3 , should do it. i know...but i don't know how to make the song be well i will change it later...
   

[Easy]

1. AR+1
   AR1 is hard to see imo. okay
2. 00:07:740 (1,2) - remove (2) and extend (1) to 00:08:865 - . okay
   (2) followed the piano, however (1)'s end could not follow anyone. so that would fit. in addition I felt that should reduce notes because this part is really silent.
3. 00:20:490 - I suggest to remove break time and add notes in every downbeats. sorry, i don't want to remove the break time. If other modder mention this, i will consider to change it
   break end is really odd imo. this map follow mainly the piano, however I like the end started to follow vocal.
4. 00:44:865 (2,3,4) - why these notes follow vocal? the reason is same above. ok. this is what i haven't think about.
   
   
   1. 00:45:240 (2) - 1/1 slider
   2. 00:46:365 (3) - 1/2
   ^ my suggestion
5. 00:47:490 (1) - what does this spiner follow? removed. put note with your suggestion
   
   
   1. 00:47:115 (4) - circle
   2. 00:47:490 (5) - circle
   3. 00:47:865 (6) - 3/2 slider
   4. 00:49:740 (7) -
   if you did not have the reason, try this.
6. 01:06:615 - piano exist here so add note. ok.
7. 01:08:115 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:44:865 (2,3,4). ok.
8. 01:10:740 (1) - end at 01:12:240? ok.
   reason is same as 01:06:615
9. 01:15:615 (2) - remove? sorry. i think here should start to follow vocal since the singer sing more loudly here.
   would be better to add intonation.
10. 01:17:115 (2) - ^
11. 01:21:240 (3) - missing whistle. should remove whistle and add it on slider start and end.
12. 01:25:365 (6) - move to 01:25:740 and remove reverse. because vocal was started in there.
13. 01:31:740 (1) - this a little kick slider will confuse beginner. should change 1/1 slider.
14. 01:34:740 (1) - ^
15. 01:39:615 (3) - same as 01:15:615 (2)
16. 01:45:615 (4) - ^
17. 01:46:740 (1) - same as 01:31:740 (1)

I felt this diff had problem about rhythm. many notes are mixed by vocal and piano. that just confuse rhythm beginner imo. You should think about what to do priority.

[Normal]

1. 00:28:927 (1) - same as 00:47:490 (1) in Easy.
2. 00:34:365 (4) - start to 00:34:552 and add circle here? like 00:27:615 (4,5) - .
3. 00:40:740 (1) - fmm...I suggest to change 1/1 slider (no reverse) becouse vocal extended.
4. 00:47:115 (2) - piano exist in 00:47:865. so end at that.
5. 00:48:615 (3) - same as above.
   try to start at 00:48:990 and remove 00:49:740 (1) - .
6. 00:51:615 (5,6) - same as 00:34:365 (4)
7. 01:43:740 (2) - same as easy
8. 01:51:990 (1,2,3) - I think 1/8 confuse beginner on this BPM....
   if you want to use this rhythm, try to change reverse slider.

[Hard]

1. 00:06:990 (1) - this slider should be 1/8. I feel 1/4 is late.
   how do you think this?
2. 00:08:490 (5) - I suggest to change 1/2 slider and add circle in 00:09:052 - 00:09:240 - .
   I feel this can be difficult.
3. 00:10:740 (1,2) - I suggest to add symmetry.
   
   
   try this.
4. 00:27:052 (4,5) - change to 1/2 slider. like 00:28:552 (9) -
5. 00:53:021 (2) - what does this circle follow?
6. 00:55:365 (2) - same as 01:21:240 (3) in Easy
7. 01:52:740 - add circle and move spinner to 1/4 after.

sorry, I could not mod this map. however I can advise.
there is some odd rhythm. pls check what you want to follow.


gl

P.S.
this map updated when I mod. so some suggestion may be useless.

NewRulerNA wrote:

[General]

1. title : Kibou no Hana (Tv Size)

1. title : Kibou no Hana (TV Size)

NewRulerNA wrote:

I need to apologize.

NewRulerNA wrote:

[General]

1. title : Kibou no Hana (Tv Size)

sorry, I edited my post, however I could not fix with a bug.

1. title : Kibou no Hana (TV Size)

should change above. really sorry watashino.

Of course, no kds pls.

P A N wrote:

Hi From my queue ><

[General]

Change your mp3 name from "123" to your song name okay. Let me change it later
maybe add "ending" to your tags added
remove enable countdown? okay...i don't know what is this

[Easy]

OD+1
00:13:740 - this spinner end at 00:16:740 is better. imo >_> okay. i agree with you
00:16:740 - move at 00:16:927 and end at 00:19:740 ^
00:47:865 (3) - move to 408|168 nice move
00:56:490 (2) - move down 2 grid okay
01:12:615 (1) - remove this note is better okay. it seem to be very difficult
01:17:490 (3) - er.. sry it's ugly XD. maybe try to a normal one? http://puu.sh/2GJW5.jpg like this okay. maybe i will change the shape later
01:19:740 (2) - move left 2 grid okay
01:25:740 (7) - new combo? haha. here should added nc
01:44:865 (2) - move to 280|112 very nice move~~it seem to be more better~:)
01:45:615 (3) - move to 312|264 ^
01:46:740 (1) - move to 136|232 ^
01:48:240 (3) - move center to 264|256. move tail to 288|232 ^
01:49:740 (1) - move to 328|176 ^
01:52:365 (4) - move to 88|256 ^

[Normal]

00:10:740 (3) - this silder is ugly too :/ try to use a normal slider lol. okay, fixed
00:28:740 (6) - move to 264|152. then move head of slider up 2 grid awesome move.
00:34:552 (5) - this slider start at 00:34:740 and end at the old one would be great sorry, i don't know what is old one....
00:39:615 (4) - sorry, try to make the beautiful slider please >< http://puu.sh/2GK6W.jpg just this. sorry. I am weak at about making slider. thanks for advice and I will make it more beautiful
01:12:990 (2) - move to 256|256 nice move!! i love it
01:13:365 (3) - move to 176|184 ^

[Hard]

00:09:240 (7) - NC here? okay
00:14:865 (3,4,5) - overmap here? D: this...if other modder mention this. I will change it...
00:28:552 (8) - this slider start here is better 00:28:740. imo okay and i add a note at this position
01:01:365 (6) - NC here yes. you right. here should add nc for showing a sudden change

Good luck watashino

General

Easy

Normal

Hard

1. Your MP3's ending is terrible. It just basically stop suddenly. Did you cut the MP3 yourself? If so, I would highly suggest you edit the MP3 and make it fade on the last part so it doesn't end bad.

• 00:09:990 (3,1,2,3,4) - Adding a whistle on these circles would be much better to hear when playing in my opinion.

1. 00:10:740 (1,4) - Unstack properly for better gameplay I guess? (: ^^
   
   
2. 00:25:740 - You sure you don't a circle added here? It feels really empty and boring without it, please add one. By the way, don't forget to add a new combo on this circle and remove the new combo on 00:26:490 (1) if you'll do this.
   
   
3. 00:26:490 ~ 00:37:740 - Why didn't you any hit sounds on this part? Adding some whistles wouldn't be that bad since I think hearing the normal hit sounds playing over and over again is kind of a bit boring. Why not whistles on:
   
   1. 00:26:490 (2)
   2. 00:27:240 (2) -Slider's Tail-
   3. 00:28:740 (1)
   4. 00:29:490 (2) -Slider's Tail-
   5. 00:30:990 (3)
   6. 00:32:490 (2)
   7. 00:33:990 (3)
   8. 00:35:490 (1)
   9. 00:36:240 (2) -Slider's Tail-
4. 00:50:490 ~ 01:06:240 - Man these whistles are too much in my opinion. Why not just follow the hit sound pattern I suggested like above? It plays on a Normal > Whistle > Normal > Whistle basis. I hope you can understand my point here.
   
   • If you can't, feel free to PM me and I'll do the fixing in your hit sound myself. ^^
5. 01:19:365 (1) - I know that you are trying to follow the vocals in your new combo, but I think it's a lot more better to follow the music. So therefore, I would suggest you remove the new combo on this note and mark a new combo on 01:19:740 (2) instead.
   
   
6. 01:49:740 (1,2) - This beat blanket could be improved a lot more better by moving the 2nd point of the slider on x:328 y:80 and the 3rd point on x:224 y:48. Yeah I know it's Nazi, but this could improve the gameplay a lot in my opinion.
   
   
7. 01:52:927 (1) - I would highly suggest you make the spinner start on 01:53:115. I think the current one appears to early making the players (beginners, specifically) a bit confused since they will have to spin quickly right after they hit on a circle.
   
   
8. I think the spread of this difficulty would be a lot better if you follow this setting:
   
   1. HP Drain Rate: 3
   2. Overall Difficulty: 3
   3. Approach Rate: 4

1. This map is having issues as well with the hit sounds. Can you try following the hit sound pattern I suggested on Easy as well?
   
   
2. 00:01:740 (1) - Please end this on 00:06:240. It ends too late, and this might be hard for Normal players to handle since they will have to hit the slider on 00:06:990 (1) right after they finished spinning. Giving a little more space in the timeline would solve this problem in my opinion.
   
   
3. 00:27:802 (5,6) - This pattern could be better I believe. Try the image I provided below (Code Included ^^):
   
   SPOILER

   If you do not know how to fix this stuff, try following the instructions provided below this image

   
   -CODE-
   

   448,64,27802,2,0,B|403:43|358:69|358:69|307:73|282:27,1,165
   264,152,28740,2,0,B|299:177|379:168|409:139|409:139|383:204,1,220

   
   If you really want to follow the image I provided in your map, follow this:
   1. Go to your osu! folder, open osu! > Songs > [ Your map's folder ]
   2. Find the file Chisuga Haruka - Kibou no Hana (TV Size) (watashino) [Normal].osu and open it using a Notepad.
   3. In the notepad, find [HitObjects] part.
   4. Try looking at the 3rd code on each line. This usually goes higher and higher after every line (e.g 1740,6990,7740)
   5. On every 3rd code, try finding the digits that are bolded in the code above in the notepad.
   6. Copy the whole code that I gave above.
   7. Replace it with the code in the notepad.
   8. Click File > Save.
   
   
4. 01:21:240 (2,2) - These sliders are overlapping at each other. Can you try to find a way to avoid them? It's not really good to look and it will be a little hard for Normal players to read this kind of pattern in my opinion.
   
   
5. 01:30:615 (1) - Move this circle near the center (or in the center as much as possible) so that players can hit this one right after they finished spinning. It's a bit early to appear because the spinner just ended so I think this would solve the problem.
   
   
6. 01:51:990 (1) - The new combo here is not really necessary. Please remove it instead.
   
   
7. I think your map's Overall Difficulty should be set to 4. It'll make the spread better.

1. 00:07:740 (2) - Perhaps try adding a new combo here to make it consistent with the new combo pattern you did in your Normal difficulty.
   
   
2. 00:30:240 (5) - I think the reverse in this slider is too much. Why not remove one reverse instead? I think this will solve the issue.
   
   • Note: Don't forget to move the circle on 00:30:990 (6) somewhere and make sure the spacing is consistent to avoid complications.
3. 00:42:052 (6) - Same issue like the statement I said above. Reduce one reverse on this slider. But since there's no circle on 00:42:615 if you removed the reverse, I would suggest you add a circle there to fill up the emptiness in this part.
   
   • Be careful with the spacing, make it consistent ^^
4. 00:50:115 (2) - Why is the spacing with the previous slider so small? Can you make the spacing consistent here perhaps?
   
   
5. 00:53:490 (3,4,5) - This pattern is very confusing to be honest. I think you should unstack either 3 or 4. Unstacking one of them would solve this case in my opinion. Please fix this, really..
   
   
6. 00:58:740 (1,3,5) - You forgot to add whistles on these circles. ^^
   
   
7. 01:48:802 (9) - I would reduce one reverse on this slider if I were you. There's too much hitting happening around in this part. Giving a little break in time would make it better in my opinion.
   
   
8. As for the hit sounds, you're having hit sound issues with this difficulty as well. Better call on some other people about this. If you think they've helped you, good. But if you think they haven't feel free to PM me about this and I can help you with that. Only thing is, I'm pretty busy this week so I might not response fast.
   
   
9. Regarding the crumpled sliders you have there, they are way too crumpy to be readable in some parts. It might be a little confusing since I myself can't read whether the crumpled part is gonna end soon or not but I can still play them well, I guess it's just me. You might wanna space out the crumpy thingy a bit more so it could be readable. But that's just me. You could ignore this if you want but try asking other people about this and get their opinions from it.

neonat wrote:

Hard

00:09:240 (1,2) - I feel the music behind are connected here, maybe instead of 2 circles, have a slider here
00:22:365 (8) - add a whistle
00:25:365 (8) - whistle at the end of the slider
00:27:802 (6) - I think this slider is too long, end at 00:27:990
00:32:302 (4) - replace with a slider that ends at 00:32:677
00:54:802 - add a note

Normal

01:45:615 (5) - instead of just 1 slider replace with a note at 01:45:615 and a slider from 01:45:990 to 01:46:365 so the slider starts on a white line (on-beat), more natural
01:37:740 (1,2,3,4) - switch (1) and (2)'s positions around with each other, and do the same with (3) and (4), so that the pattern is slider-circle-slider-circle and not circle-slider-circle-slider. example:

SPOILER

Good luck

neonat wrote:

Hard

00:09:240 (1,2) - I feel the music behind are connected here, maybe instead of 2 circles, have a slider here oaky. I changed it
00:22:365 (8) - add a whistle sorry, about the hitsound, I will follow the pervious modding
00:25:365 (8) - whistle at the end of the slider same as above
00:27:802 (6) - I think this slider is too long, end at 00:27:990 okay. here may have a little bit overmapping
00:32:302 (4) - replace with a slider that ends at 00:32:677
00:54:802 - add a note

Normal

01:45:615 (5) - instead of just 1 slider replace with a note at 01:45:615 and a slider from 01:45:990 to 01:46:365 so the slider starts on a white line (on-beat), more natural okay...I should not waste the word that singer sung in this position
01:37:740 (1,2,3,4) - switch (1) and (2)'s positions around with each other, and do the same with (3) and (4), so that the pattern is slider-circle-slider-circle and not circle-slider-circle-slider. example: lol...that more better than original one thanks very much

SPOILER

Good luck

_Erra_ wrote:

General
Seach a normal BG(HD),because is now BG a bad :C