TERRA - DoLL (full version) [For Approval] · forum

James

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James 2010-02-16T17:44:27+00:00

1. background image SUCKS, and I mean it. lower than low quality.. change it.
2. whats with finish attacks? the map sounds noisy as it is, and finish attacks makes it noisier.. if you want to keep your finish attacks lower the volume for those or something.
3. those claps.. will never fit the song.. sounds like youre playing CS while mapping this one.. RATATATATATATAT!!
4. i think map is not really hard... you can just add a crap boring easy diff and this can go to ranked instead of approval.

in other words:

change the background image and youll get your bubble again.

i really dont care about hitsounds since they dont go to the system's ranking/approval criteria. those were just my complaints and suggestions as well.

although i did not really give you suggestions, i just made you think on how to improve on it rather than giving you actual suggestions and you might not like it in the end.

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-02-17T02:04:45+00:00

How difficult is an approval supposed to be then? Since my map isn't hard enough to be for approval. Does the max score need to be 30 or 40 mill? If so, tell me now. I know plenty of places where streams can be added, including the end.

EDIT: changed BG

NaomiMinette

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NaomiMinette 2010-02-17T04:47:42+00:00

Just an opinion, but I liked the last BG, spinner, and combo colors better. Your choice though.

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-02-17T14:59:03+00:00

02:00:925 (6) - I prefer to delete this note, sounds a little werid

Alough hitsound volume changed perfectly, I still fell this map lack of hitsound lol
others are all fine for me, I love the last part
And I think it's not so hard :/
no kds for this post, I can't help you more (*ﾟдﾟ*)

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-02-17T23:18:21+00:00

Star :3

00:11:363 (3) - hard to read ;_;

I hate spinner... Q_Q

CheeseWarlock

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CheeseWarlock 2010-02-19T04:06:45+00:00

03:04:631 - Has this always been like this? Did I really miss a total fumble on the "epic chorus" two times through? Regardless, move the kiai back 1/2, and I would like to see mapping so that there's a hitcircle or slider start there.

And does the BG have anything to do with the song?...

gdeath

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gdeath 2010-02-19T11:05:54+00:00

00:10:643 (2,3) - the slider absolutely covers the slider .really confusing...hopefully,you can change this pattern
04:34:984 (1) - i'd make the spinner totally silence

Star.

MMzz

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MMzz 2010-02-28T03:10:01+00:00

Could I make a Taiko Map for this? :3...

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-02-28T03:13:11+00:00

sure

MMzz

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MMzz 2010-02-28T04:43:41+00:00

Here it is, Taiko background included. I used BPM: 170, so it wouldn't be as slow. :3

Download: TERRA - DoLL (MittenMasterzz) [MittenKatsu - Taiko Oni].osu

Shinxyn

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Shinxyn 2010-03-07T02:34:48+00:00

~~ interesting to listen to a full song after only knowing the shorter versions
Spinner so bright, spinner metre and bg so dark... eh?
Add approachcircle.png?

the one for osu standard-
00:08:963 (2) - ... either remove this clap or follow and add a clap to 00:10:883, cuz this clap sounds out of place on its own
00:40:278 (1,9) - bring 1 down a tick, and 9 up a tick? to "perfect" the hexagon
01:06:278 (2) - .... I hear no need for this to be on 1/6, 1/4 works
01:07:984 (2) - don't like the clap+finish hitsound mix at start
01:09:396 (2) - ^
01:51:925 (1) - remove new combo? or remove the next one's new combo
02:02:749 (2) - same as 01:06:278!
02:24:396 (1) - start the soft hitsound section at the end of this?
I get the slight clap patterns in the soft section, but I don't like them >_<
02:42:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too quiet, add some whistles please
02:43:455 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - a bit louderrr
03:02:337 (1) - this combo... what? the intense claps come out of nowhere ;_; don't like
03:30:043 (9) - new combo?
04:01:455 (1) - the spinner got shifted now too, so the notes are out of place
04:03:925 (1) - this section, too quiet.. or at least, too quiet compared to the notes before it
04:08:867 (1,1) - spinner shift, the notes are out of place now
Dislike the jumpy ending, doesn't match music imo >_<
I hear lots of places where you can add the normal-finish hitsound

Why does the taiko diff have so much red lines? ehh, not that I know if they're needed or not

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-03-10T15:33:25+00:00

Mitten's diff..... well I'll mod something important, not with patterns... yet
(underlined=important, gray=not important)

MittenKatsu - Taiko Oni
Please fix BG image. Image is distorted because you put big image to too small space.
00:33:564 - change uninherited section to inherited.
01:06:034 - change uninherited section to inherited. or delete timing section 01:06:034 & 01:06:299
01:30:387 - delete uninherited section and set uninherited timing section at 01:30:034
02:38:152 - delete uninherited section and set uninherited timing section at 02:37:799
or...
Remove all timing section except first one and set kiai time at 01:13:093 ~ 01:30:034, 02:09:564( uninherited) ~ 02:26:505.

This song needs one non-inherited section: 02:09:564, so Shinxyn is right, there are too many uninherited sections.

MMzz

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MMzz 2010-03-18T20:03:37+00:00

Here, removed all uninherited. Explain to me what is wrong with the BG, looks fine to me. and the pattern is fine, please don't change it. (I made minor changed to get rid of that repetative ddddkkkk roll.)
http://www.sendspace.com/file/torjvk

Jarby

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Jarby 2010-03-22T05:49:43+00:00

You know, if you placed proper breaks and made a couple more difficulties, this wouldn't need to be approved. So, get to it. Also, HOLY SHIT FIX THAT TAIKO BACKGROUND.

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-03-22T11:18:45+00:00

Ouran doesn't know wut to do anymore

Garven

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Garven 2010-03-29T12:06:13+00:00

This kicked my butt from when the tempo picked up until the piano sliders at the end. :P

The claps from 02:26:161 to 02:38:161 stick out really bad. Maybe reduce the volume on those hits?

When you go into breaks, the letterbox during the break cuts off the background guy's head. The healthbar also cuts off a bit of the background text. *shrug*

I got nuttin' Star~

Dusty

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Dusty 2010-04-03T01:51:41+00:00

i'm not touching this with a ten-foot pole :/

but sure, I'll throw a star

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-04-03T11:25:01+00:00

Dusty wrote:
i'm not touching this with a ten-foot pole :/

is that bad

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-04-04T14:09:57+00:00

Add the Source and Tags from [Challenge] to the taiko difficulty.

That's about it. Spinner looks like sherbet ice cream~

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-04-04T14:20:59+00:00

Mafiamaster wrote:
Add the Source and Tags from [Challenge] to the taiko difficulty.

That's about it. Spinner looks like sherbet ice cream~

Done

Mafiamaster

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Mafiamaster 2010-04-04T14:32:01+00:00

Bubble #1!

Enadriel

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Enadriel 2010-04-04T18:10:29+00:00

Personally, I think the sliders should be slower, but if you don't wanna change that, it's fine. Starred~

Jarby

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Jarby 2010-04-10T09:36:36+00:00

Sigh.

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-04-10T12:02:31+00:00

wut.

youngdow

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youngdow 2010-04-11T05:53:05+00:00

[MittenKatsu - Taiko Oni]

01:12:387 - Distance between spin and note is too short. Move spinner forward(Earlier)

02:51:917 - Delete speed change of last silder. Maybe, It is unrankable issue.
(For example, 'Kechadon2000' Arken deleted x4 speed timing because of unrankable issue.)

And Sound re-starts from 02:53:417 part.

Reduce length of silder.

+Star~

Last edited by youngdow 2010-04-11T14:55:05+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-04-11T13:32:10+00:00

mittemasterz where are you

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-04-11T14:35:35+00:00

I didn't check about slider speed rule also applies to taiko map, hmm....
for arken that issues were for taikosu map. well arken maybe know about this.
Well let's go safe way. please follow youngdows acvice...

EDIT:
Wait, already bubbled? well...

MMzz

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MMzz 2010-04-11T15:57:52+00:00

youngdow wrote:
[MittenKatsu - Taiko Oni]

01:12:387 - Distance between spin and note is too short. Move spinner forward(Earlier)

02:51:917 - Delete speed change of last silder. Maybe, It is unrankable issue.
(For example, 'Kechadon2000' Arken deleted x4 speed timing because of unrankable issue.)

And Sound re-starts from 02:53:417 part.

Reduce length of silder.

+Star~

I'd like to make the changes, specialy with the denden, it does seem to close to the next note. And I didn't know the slider speed would be an issue. That map is already Bubbled though, nothing I can do :[

EDIT: And if you can, just delete the Taiko BG since people like to complain about it.

ouranhshc

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ouranhshc 2010-04-11T16:33:43+00:00

i can ask mafia to rebubble it

MMzz

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MMzz 2010-04-11T16:43:22+00:00

youngdow wrote:
[MittenKatsu - Taiko Oni]

01:12:387 - Distance between spin and note is too short. Move spinner forward(Earlier)
Removed spinner, added a don.

02:51:917 - Delete speed change of last silder. Maybe, It is unrankable issue.
(For example, 'Kechadon2000' Arken deleted x4 speed timing because of unrankable issue.)
DOne

And Sound re-starts from 02:53:417 part.

Reduce length of silder.

What do you mean??

+Star~