1. 00:53:799 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - play better as a circle that as a back-and-forth.(It isn't easy to explain, neither to see)
   
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   01:46:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why not a star formation like before? it's funnier
   
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1. 00:07:577 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+R, follow lyrics better, but remember to reorganize the graphic part
2. 00:35:799 (4,5,6) - Shall play better not stacked, move (5) for example
   
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3. 00:52:021 (7) - Curve it like 00:52:466 (8) -

1. 00:43:132 (3,1) - Is the spacing inconsistency here intentional?
2. 00:44:910 (1,2) - Use Whistle here? The hitsounds fit more than a normal one on (1) and a clap on (2).
3. 00:58:688 - 01:00:021 - The delay to break here is... jarring and a bit too long, to say the least. Adding a circle on every white tick is recommended. If you do this, NC the first circle and add a Finish to the last.
4. 01:17:799 (1,1) - See 00:43:132 (3,1) (I guess I won't mention the ones with 1x DS anymore.)
5. 01:20:466 (1,2) - See 00:44:910 (1,2) (^; if you accept my suggestions, change the similar parts.)
6. 01:22:243 (5,6) - See 00:43:132 (3,1) (0.88x while normally ~0.8x.)
7. 01:48:243 (2,3) - Make (2) a 1/2 slider, remove the repeat and then move (3) to 01:48:910? I found the current rhythm... weird.
8. 01:51:799 - Add a circle at 01:50:466 (2)'s place?

1. 00:06:688 (4) - Since it seems like you're following the vocal here, why not simply make this a circle like 00:04:910 (5)?
2. 00:44:021 (1) - I'm sure enough that a 1/1 slider works better than a 3/2 one. I'm bad at explaining this, TBH, so you should try it first.
3. 00:48:021 (2) - NC? I find the NC placement weird.
4. 01:23:577 (2) - ^
5. 01:33:799 (1,2,3,4,1) - Remove NC on the (1)s and apply NC on (3)? (Reason: ^)
6. 01:46:243 (5) - NC this? (Reason: ^)
7. 01:48:021 (7) - Simply continuing the back-and-forth pattern you have done at 01:46:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6) should do better. Also, if you do this, make the pattern like this?
8. 02:20:466 (2) - See 01:23:577 (2).
9. 02:30:688 (5) - ^
10. 02:48:910 (2) - ^

1. 00:07:799 (4) - Are you sure this one's not a case of overmapping?
2. 00:27:354 (6) - NC? IMO, an obvious or sudden (not a progressive/accelerated one) change of spacing needs it, although that's not always the case.
3. 00:30:910 (6) - ^ (There's still a few cases like this here, but I won't point them out since they're not really too bad. That doesn't mean that these two cases are bad, though.)
4. 00:44:910 (1,2,1) - It would fit with the song better if you make an anti-jump here (and on the similar spots). Also, Whistles (look at Normal's 00:44:910 (1,2)).
5. 01:36:021 (2,3,4,5,6) - Sure this spot isn't overmapped? Overmapping here is bad, IMO.
6. 01:40:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
7. 01:48:466 - Maybe add a circle somewhere? A moment of silence here doesn't go well for me.
8. 02:19:577 (5,6,7,8,9) - See 01:36:021 (2,3,4,5,6).

Gabe wrote:

One more thing I want to say: Do not ignore this because you have a bubble and I am not a part of the MAT/BAT Team.

meiikyuu wrote:

wth lol, I have been out of town , unable access my computer. already made changes but can't update til I get back

Gabe wrote:

meiikyuu wrote:

wth lol, I have been out of town , unable access my computer. already made changes but can't update til I get back

Could have atleast said it.
Sorry.

Gabe wrote:

I am not here to start a flame.

Hinsvar wrote:

>Mythol's Hard

1. 00:44:021 (1) - I'm sure enough that a 1/1 slider works better than a 3/2 one. I'm bad at explaining this, TBH, so you should try it first.

Gabe wrote:

Hi, here's a random mod. (:
These are mostly suggestions!

Insane

New combos
02:17:354 (1) - Add a new combo here to prevent a Spinner bug.

Circle emplacement
00:31:132 (7) - One tick to the right to be perfecly aligned with the previous note. ok
00:59:132 (1) - This slider looks weird in my opinion. It should look like that: i see

Screenshot+Code

200,208,59132,6,0,B|208:256|256:272|256:272|304:256|312:208,1,180,0|2

02:28:910 (1,2,3) - These sliders should be moved to the middle of the gamefield. It looks better. like this ; http://puu.sh/HyaM ok
02:41:355 (1) - *nazi* This slider should be moved two ticks down to look like that; http://puu.sh/HycB ok
02:42:466 (4,5) - Again a nazi thing, move these circles one tick at the left to be perfecly aligned with the previous note. (3) yay nice catch~

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Insane] (there are a bunch of underworked slider shapes, here)

1. 00:07:577 (3,4,5) - Ctrl+R, follow lyrics better, but remember to reorganize the graphic part ok i changed to that rythm but re-arranged the whole thing as well
2. 00:35:799 (4,5,6) - Shall play better not stacked, move (5) for example ok
   
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3. 00:52:021 (7) - Curve it like 00:52:466 (8) - ok

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo.

Not sure how did I get here, but since I don't know what to do now, I'll give a (hopefully helpful) random mod.

Yes, I don't care even if this is already bubbled.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants.

>Insane

1. 00:07:799 (4) - Are you sure this one's not a case of overmapping? i already changed up this whole part so it should be fine now
2. 00:27:354 (6) - NC? IMO, an obvious or sudden (not a progressive/accelerated one) change of spacing needs it, although that's not always the case. ehh i think it's fine, tested with a few ppl and they can read it ok
3. 00:30:910 (6) - ^ (There's still a few cases like this here, but I won't point them out since they're not really too bad. That doesn't mean that these two cases are bad, though.) yeah it's fine to me, but i'm aware of what you are saying tho ty
4. 00:44:910 (1,2,1) - It would fit with the song better if you make an anti-jump here (and on the similar spots). Also, Whistles (look at Normal's 00:44:910 (1,2)). moved the notes closer if that's better..
5. 01:36:021 (2,3,4,5,6) - Sure this spot isn't overmapped? Overmapping here is bad, IMO. fixed
6. 01:40:910 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ no change in notes but it did look a little clustered so i changed pattern shape
7. 01:48:466 - Maybe add a circle somewhere? A moment of silence here doesn't go well for me. no change b/c i want it to fit this pause too at 00:58:688 -
8. 02:19:577 (5,6,7,8,9) - See 01:36:021 (2,3,4,5,6). k fixed

ty, i fixed some things in normal diff. too

Uh... That's it, I guess.

Also, most of these stuff are actually some kind of 'what-would-I-do-if-I-were-the-mapper' stuff (or in other words, might be not fitting to your style), so feel free to ignore this long mod.

It's already bubbled anyway.

SO WHY AM I MODDING THIS

Good luck on the way

Andrea wrote:

[General]

Make the kiai consistent through the difficulties.

[Normal]

02:57:354 (5) - I'd add a new combo here.

[Insane]

02:17:354 (2) - New combo is missing.

That's all, nice map and song ^^

Zarerion wrote:

Uhm. Needs to be updated. AFAIK this is unrankable, isn't it? (There was a similar issue with Freedom Dive, if I recall)

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/383168

Andrea wrote:

I'll check if I have this problem as well.

In case I'll just unrank and let the mapper full submit, please people wait a bit!

Gabe wrote:

inb4 Mercurial post the unranker acchievement.

LunarSakuya wrote:

holy shit 9.8 lol