Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ I just saw a slight error ~
Random mod ~

Red - Must Fix !!
Purple - Suggest to fix?
Black - Feel free to ignore

[General]
All seems fine ~ :3

[Normal]
01:18:964(4) - doesn't seems good this part... Do it like this http://puu.sh/1WcTi Seems strange, fixed in another way

[Insane]
01:24:200 - This part seems weird. How about put your slider here end 01:24:483
01:24:624 - if you agree ^ please add note here so the beat will flow nicely ^^

Good Luck ~ <3
Star for Shana's song >///<!

No_Gu wrote:

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From my queue

[General/All diffs]
why not add a custom clap? custom clap??

[Easy]
00:03:964 (2) - use grid 4 to change it to avoid overlaping?
00:25:756 (2,1) - move them 1 grid(lv.3) to get symmetrical
00:41:888 (2) - add clap in the beginning according to what you did like before
01:00:284 (4) - spacing

[Normal]
00:00:568 (1) - remove finish is better imo
00:06:794 (4) - make a triangle?
00:24:341 (4) - 1 grid right&down for the second white point
00:33:398 (3,1) - this may disturb new players
00:54:341 (4) - I think you forget a clap here
01:18:681 (3,4,5,6) - I don't think this pattern is good

[hard]
00:00:568 (1) - still.useless finish imo
00:16:417 (3) - move to 00:16:275 is better
00:26:464 (3,4) - ugly
00:39:907 (6,1) - ^
00:49:105 (3) - 2 grids down?
01:04:105 (4,5) - move away from 3 a bit

[Insane]
00:22:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - quite unnecessary I think What do you mean?
00:29:435 (4) - I may regard this as a jump..
01:29:152 (1,2) - move them away from 6

[Muzukashii]
00:10:756 (1) - NC bug


orz I think this mapset still need much work

kajiyatta wrote:

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from modding queue
General
tihis song ends at 01:29:860, so you should follow it. Actually I hear that the song isn't end at 01:29:860, there is still some music, so i end it with a slider
and I supose Normal-whistle doesn't fit to this music...
Easy
Placement
01:00:284(4) this spacing seems a bit short.
01:16:983(2) to follow the flow, it seems much better

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Rhythm
00:31:983 missing note here is a bit weird because back music hears strong.
00:40:190(3) to follow the vocal, maybe like this?

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00:44:718(4) delete this and add a spinner?

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Hit Sonud
01:02:832(1) delete whistle. it doesn't fit

Normal
why changed spacing? I suppose you should arrange same spacing in this diff for newbie if you don't have special reason. it's a bit confused. Still using spacing x 1.0
Placement
00:30:284(3,4,5,6) you can replace these notes beautifully.
00:41:888(1,2) ^

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00:43:869(1,2,3) to be consistently

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01:20:945(1) 1 grid down
Rhythm
00:32:549(7,8) to follow the music, maybe this should be this

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Hit Sonud

Hard
Placement
00:23:067(2) unstacked note.
00:43:586(1) aimming to jump, this flow seems better.

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00:49:954(2) hmm I don't know this spacing... if you aim to jump, you can move away
00:53:209(5) Ctrl+G?

Insane
AR9 seems so faster... try AR8. a map which has many jump looks nice for AR9, but this map basically follows distant snap.
and not good barrance in this map, basically followed distant snap but sudden jump at 00:40:190~, 01:27:737. I don't know why you placed like this.
Placement
00:34:671(4,5) this flow doesn't seem better imo
00:55:190(2) Ctrl+G?
Hit Sonud
01:01:558(5) remove finish or whistle. it sounds weird...

umm, you can still need more work but not bad. good luck!

Mercurial wrote:

Hi there, I'm from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫. My modding was requiered, that's why I'm here.

General

[*]Actually, you have a Taiko BG, which is unrankable. You must delete it. Fixed

Easy

[*]00:00:568 (1) This note deserves a Finish. Add it, listen it and tell me what do you think. I think it does not fit, so I may not add it.
[*]00:02:832 (1) Nazi here, these notes could be in the center (Better shape and less ugly to see). http://puu.sh/23iCZ Just take the end of the slider at x:320 y:312 and you will see the difference. Look better, followed
[*]00:04:711 (1) Just being a bit nazi here, this slider is not perfectly centered (Dunno if that's what you're looking for). http://puu.sh/23iAX Fixed
[*]00:08:775 (3) This note is not hitting anything in the song... I think it's better to remove it and re-place 00:09:058 (4) to not mess that section. Changed into a slider
[*]00:33:398 (5) This note deserves a NC for the vocal/rhythm changes. Try to follow the music. Fixed
[*]01:00:567 (5,6) ^ Fixed
[*]01:30:001 (5) The music stops at 01:29:860, so I don't see a valid reason of that kickback slider. Followed

Normal

[*]00:33:398 (5) This note deserves a NC for the vocal/rhythm changes. Try to follow the music. Fixed

In this diff there's not much to say, but you could make better sliders or place them not that randomly to try to make them look awesome. Try it, you will get fun making weird but awesome sliders


Hard

[*]00:29:860 (3) Random and senseless jump, get rid of it. Fixed
[*]01:09:341 (4) ^ Fixed

Insane

[*]AR 9, please. Used
[*]00:34:388 (3,4) This spacing is terrible... please move it a bit far from there or make a jump with the next circle. Fixed by making jump
[*]00:35:662 (1,2,3) I was expecting some 1/2 jumps... these sliders are boring and (3,4) are totally unexpected. Fixed by making some jumps
[*]01:29:860 (4) Get rid of this slider and add a circle instead (As I told you on easy), it sounds a lot better. Followed

Yeah, that was all that I found, I hope this mod could help you to improve your mapping. Good luck dude.

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, meetmeetdee

My mod from your request in my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should consider
Black = My suggestion

General

1. bg.jpg is 1024x576. You must adjust this picture is 1024x768 or 800x600.

Easy

1. 00:06:228 (2,3,4) - It will be easier if you change to slider + repeat 1 time like 00:07:360 (1).
2. 00:09:624 (1) - Spinner is too short for Easy diff. You should change is slider. If you fix it, add NC here, too.
3. 00:24:341 (1) - Move to left 5 grid to reduce spacing.
4. 00:33:398 (1) - It will cause confusion to play because slider begin stack with 00:32:266 because. Please try to avoid stacking this.
5. 00:41:888 (2) - Move to up 1 grid to reduce little spacing.
6. 00:44:718 (1,1) - Spinner is too short imo. I suggest that spinner end replace a circle on 00:46:983.
7. 00:47:832 (1) - This spinner as well. I suggest that remove it. Then add a circle on 00:29:247 and 00:49:813 instead.
8. 01:02:832 (1,1,2) -
9. 01:07:360 - Add a circle to follow the rhythm.
10. 01:19:183 (1) - And this spinner. I suggest that change it to this, and add a circle and NC on 01:21:511. Then if you fix it, remove NC on 01:22:077 (1).
    
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11. 01:27:454 (2) - The rhythm is weird. It will be better if you make to slider end at 01:27:737.

Normal

1. 00:02:832 (1) - Slider end at 00:03:115. It will be better and easier.
2. 00:22:007 (5) - Move to up 1 grid to reduce little spacing.
3. 00:44:718 (3,4) - Spacing between these is too far. Please reduce these.
4. 00:47:832 (1) - Spinner is too short imo. I suggest that start spinner to 00:47:407.

Hard

1. 00:05:096 (1,2) - Ctrl+G to make these follow the rhythm.
2. 00:09:624 (1,1) - Ths spinner is hard than Insane diff. Please end spinner on 00:10:756 instead of a circle. If you fix it, add NC on 00:11:039 (2), and add finish on spinner, too.
3. 00:34:530 (6) - You forget add clap on slider repeat.

Insane

1. 00:05:237 (1) - Hitsound on slider begin is weird. Youshoukd remove finish here.
2. 00:13:162 - It isn't suitable for the rhythm and vocal. Please remove a circle.
3. 00:18:115 - Add a circle here be better.
4. 00:19:813 ~ 00:49:247 Hitsounds are too low. Please increase volume about 40%
5. 00:32:549 (6) - Add NC here to follow the rhythm, and I suggest that move it to x:324 y:52.
6. 00:36:794 (7) - Add NC here
7. 00:37:360 (1) - Remove NC
8. 00:46:770 (6) - Move to right 1 grid.
9. 00:47:832 (1) - Start spinner to 00:47:336 or 00:47:407.
10. 01:01:558 (4) - Why do you use S hitsound on here? I suggest that remove a green line section on 00:11:487 and 00:11:629.
11. 01:26:039 (5) - Try to stack (congruent) with (6,3).

Comment: This map is good for newbie mapper, but hitsound on Easy and Normal diffs is randomly. I suggest you try to put hitsound to be similar to Hard of Insane diffs, but I think Insane diff is the best for me.

Hope that my mod will be useful for you.

Good luck~

Kaneko wrote:

[Normal]

00:31:983 (6) - it touches the HP Bar.(It looks not so nice) Maybe think of a different placement? Moved
00:41:039 (2) - Also slightly close to the HP Bar. Moved
00:39:058 (3) - Add a whistle to the last repeat. Added
01:05:945 (4) - ^ Added
01:09:624 (5) - Remove the whistle from the whole slider, and only add it to the start. ok


[Hard]
AR +1 ok

00:08:351 (1) - It touches the HP Bar. (It looks not so nice) Maybe think of a different placement? Moved
00:56:039 (6) - NC -> To follow the vocals. ok

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi meetmeetdee (:3 」_)=3

From my queue (i'm late.. sorry)

[Easy]

00:10:898 ~ 00:19:671 The short length of the songs, And break time to put in this section is not recommended.
please add note OK Added

00:19:813 (1) slider head add finish OK

00:32:549 (4,1) blanket -> http://puu.sh/2e2pB More pretty blanket Please Fixed

00:36:086 (3,4) blanket too http://puu.sh/2e2qH Fixed

00:37:360 add note? This part, my feeling more empty Added

01:20:945 (6) slider end add finish OK

01:22:916 (2,3) blanket http://puu.sh/2e2tg Fixed


[Normal]

00:05:096 (1) This is slider 00:00:568 (1) same 1/2 slider change?
According to the sound of the background music seems to go better. I think it is fine

00:10:898 ~ 00:19:671 The short length of the songs, And break time to put in this section is not recommended.
please add note OK Added

00:19:813 (1) slider head add finish OK

00:42:171 (1) slider end remove finish 00:42:454 slider head add finish OK

00:46:700 (5) slider arrow remove and spin start 00:47:124 OK
Tempo songs do not fit in very awkward.

01:04:388 (1,1) Obscured by the score effects on slider http://puu.sh/2e2Aq Fixed


[Hard]

00:13:869 (3,4) slider end stack Fixed

00:37:926 (1) slider head add finish OK

00:49:176 (2,3,1) specing

01:06:865 (7,9) slider end stack OK

01:14:152 (4) specing

01:18:610 (5,1) ^

In fact, the spacing is used intentionally,but i fixed a little bit

[Insane]


AR - 1 No since it fit the jump at this high BPM

00:15:992 (2,3,4) speicng Fixed

01:06:511 (1,2,3,4,5) This is stream shape, it's bad shape change please -> http://puu.sh/2e2KC Fixed

01:29:718 (4) slider arrow remove and remove green line OK


Good luck

Makar wrote:

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Hi! Taiko mod from this queue

Bolded suggestions are things that are unrankable or in some way related to the ranking criteria.

[General]

1. Offset: 580 (+12). Tested by ear and with taiko diff testing.
   Song folder, bg, mp3, video, timing, storyboard, all check out fine~

[Taiko Muzukashii]

1. General: it would be really nice to go over this in IRC with you, so we can identify some parts and address issues accordingly (based on your intentions). Please PM me when you are available.
2. 00:03:964 (9) - k here, to follow the guitar pitch change (since that is what you are following in this section)
3. 00:05:096 (3) - d here, for consistency with your intro.
4. 00:10:756 - I think it's best if you try to follow the drums in this section. As of now, this part doesn't seem to follow anything in the music (this is mainly why I want to talk in IRC about it). Here are suggestions to make it more fitting for the drums:
5. 00:11:322 (1,1,1,1) - d d k d to follow the drum
6. 00:11:888 (1) - Move this note to 00:12:030 to follow the drum (previously didnt follow anything).
7. 00:12:454 (1,1,1) - d d k to follow the drum again.
8. 00:14:152 (1) - Delete this note since it doesnt follow anything here~
9. 00:14:294 - Add a d here, then change the 3 notes to be like what I suggested at 00:12:454.
10. 00:15:426 (1) - Delete this note to give the player a break while playing.
11. 00:18:681 (1) - Move this to 00:18:822 - so that the structure is consistent.
12. Okay, that's all for this section. Again, I would like to talk in IRC to help identify your intentions so my suggestions will be more based around that. It's hard to tell what you are following, because none of it is in the music. I gave suggestions to follow the drums, but if you do not like that, then you can ignore but please explain what you are trying to follow so that I can give better suggestions based around you.
13. 00:24:624 (1) - Since you are following guitar here, delete this note. Things get kinda messy if you try to follow two instruments at the same time.
14. 00:33:751 (3) - Delete this note. A triple is too much for a muzu at this BPM imo.
15. 00:38:634 (1) - Delete this note to give the player a break (too much 1/2 at once for this BPM).
16. 00:40:473 (5,6) - These finishers are really out of place. I suggest removing them~
17. 00:57:737 (1) - Another really out of place finisher; remove it?
18. 01:07:643 (1) - Again, out of place finisher. This one is a beat after the phrase has started, so its a bit more obvious. Either move the finisher on 01:07:360 or just remove it.
19. 01:19:671 (3,4) - Move this to 01:19:530 since that is where the crashes are.

[Lunasa's Taiko Oni]

1. The same general comment I made on the muzu applies here too. I'd really like if you could catch me on IRC sometimes so we can help identify some stuff more easily.
2. Overall, this difficulty is very overmapped. For this BPM you do not need so many streams and 1/4; it doesn't fit the music or follow anything. Most of this mod will be identifying these overmapping issues.
3. 00:05:591 (4) - Delete this since it doesnt follow anything (overmapping and the intro is better when its not so dense anyways).
4. 00:06:723 (6) - Same here.
5. 00:11:464 (1) - d here to follow drums.
6. 00:11:605 (2,1,1,2,3) - Overmapped. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/664805 fits more nicely imo.
7. 00:13:586 (1,2,3,1) - I suggest d d k here. These doubles are really confusing to play at this speed since it doesnt follow anything.
8. 00:14:718 (2,1,2,1) - Same situation here. Try k ddk?
9. 00:15:426 (1,2,1) - This triple breaks consistency in your structure, so I suggest changing it to d k.
10. 00:17:195 (4) - Delete this note - it's a bit too much for this BPM ;c
11. 00:18:115 (1,2,3,1) - Same as before with the doubles. Try d d k again.
12. Well, this is all I can give for now. The suggestions will be the same. Contact me in IRC so we can continue this, but please try to reduce your density (the overmapped 1/4 that doesnt follow the music) and we can talk about addressing the issues more appropriately. If you have any questions and I am not online, you can send me a forum PM as well and I can get to it asap. I really would like to help you getting these taikos ready for ranking standards.

That's all for now, goodluck and remember to contact in IRC for questions!

• • I don't like your combo colors, they kinda blend with your BG, try to use these:
  
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  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 211,217,102
  Combo2 : 91,124,69

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3
  • 00:09:624 (1) - Flip this slider horizontally.
  • 00:11:322 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:15:851 (2) - Remove the whistle from the end of this slider, it sounds really awkward, add a clap instead.
  • 00:18:115 (2) - ^
  • 00:19:530 (3) - Delete this circle, keep in mind that this is an Easy so try to keep things easier.
  • 00:28:586 (3) - ^
  • 00:31:983 (2,3) - Convert these circles into a slider.
  • 00:37:643 (5) - Delete this circle.
  • 00:47:832 (1) - ^
  • 00:48:115 (2) - End this slider at 00:48:681 and add a repeat.
  • 00:49:813 (3) - Add a new combo here...
  • 00:50:379 (1) - ...and remove it here.
  • 00:51:228 (2) - Delete this circle.
  • 00:52:360 (1,2,3,4) - I'll repeat again, this is an Easy so try to keep things easier, even if this pattern follows the lyrics it's too hard to play for a inexperienced player, try to do this:
  
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  • 01:00:284 (4) - Delete this circle.
  • 01:06:228 (3,4) - Delete (4) and end (3) 1/1 later.
  • 01:19:813 (5) - Delete this circle.
  • 01:28:020 (3) - ^

• • HP Drain Rate: 5
  • Approach Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 5
  • 00:11:322 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:22:077 (5) - Uhh why this whistle? Remove it, it doesn't really fit the music.
  • 00:26:605 (3) - ^
  • 00:28:586 (x) - Add a circle. (or delete 00:28:303 (6) this circle, then start a slider there and end it at 00:28:586)
  • 00:30:851 (4) - Stop using whistles, they're just wrong imo, keep using claps.
  • 00:53:209 (3) - Remove the repeat and end this slider 1/2 later, then add a circle at 00:54:058.
  • 01:00:567 (2,3) - Delete (3), end (2) 1/2 earlier and add a repeat.
  • 01:01:558 (4,5) - Delete (5), end (4) 1/2 later and add a circle at 01:02:266.
  • 01:02:832 (1) - This is the only diff with a spinner here, delete it and map this part.

• • HP Drain Rate: 7
  • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • You used a lot of whistles in this diff and I really don't like them, claps fit a lot better with this song.
  • 00:12:454 (5) - Remove the repeat, then start a slider at 00:12:737 and end it at 00:12:879.
  • 00:16:983 (5) - Same thing here.
  • 00:19:954 (2,3) - Delete (2) and move (3) 1/2 earlier.
  • 00:22:077 (1) - I don't like this slider, try to do something like this:
  
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  • 00:36:652 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:46:134 (2) - Move this slider 1/2 earlier and remove the repeat.
  • 01:02:832 (1) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 01:03:256.
  • 01:21:228 (2) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 01:21:369.
  • 01:26:605 (5) - End this slider at 01:26:888 and add a circle at 01:27:171.

• • HP Drain Rate: 8
  • Overall Difficulty: 8
  • 00:33:115 (1) - Try this pattern:
  
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  • 00:37:926 ~ 00:41:181 - Too many jumps here, spacing here is changing way too much.
  • 00:47:832 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:47:407.
  • 00:49:813 (1) - Remove this and the next whistles, as I said before they don't really fit with this song imo, you should keep using claps.
  • 01:12:313 (x) - Add a circle.

xxheroxx wrote:

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Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
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General

• • I don't like your combo colors, they kinda blend with your BG, try to use these:
  
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  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 211,217,102
  Combo2 : 91,124,69

Easy

• • HP Drain Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3
  • 00:09:624 (1) - Flip this slider horizontally.
  • 00:11:322 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:15:851 (2) - Remove the whistle from the end of this slider, it sounds really awkward, add a clap instead.
  • 00:18:115 (2) - ^
  • 00:19:530 (3) - Delete this circle, keep in mind that this is an Easy so try to keep things easier.
  • 00:28:586 (3) - ^
  • 00:31:983 (2,3) - Convert these circles into a slider.
  • 00:37:643 (5) - Delete this circle.
  • 00:47:832 (1) - ^
  • 00:48:115 (2) - End this slider at 00:48:681 and add a repeat.
  • 00:49:813 (3) - Add a new combo here...
  • 00:50:379 (1) - ...and remove it here.
  • 00:51:228 (2) - Delete this circle.
  • 00:52:360 (1,2,3,4) - I'll repeat again, this is an Easy so try to keep things easier, even if this pattern follows the lyrics it's too hard to play for a inexperienced player, try to do this:
  
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  • 01:00:284 (4) - Delete this circle.
  • 01:06:228 (3,4) - Delete (4) and end (3) 1/1 later.
  • 01:19:813 (5) - Delete this circle.
  • 01:28:020 (3) - ^

Normal

• • HP Drain Rate: 5
  • Approach Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 5
  • 00:11:322 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:22:077 (5) - Uhh why this whistle? Remove it, it doesn't really fit the music.
  • 00:26:605 (3) - ^
  • 00:28:586 (x) - Add a circle. (or delete 00:28:303 (6) this circle, then start a slider there and end it at 00:28:586)
  • 00:30:851 (4) - Stop using whistles, they're just wrong imo, keep using claps.
  • 00:53:209 (3) - Remove the repeat and end this slider 1/2 later, then add a circle at 00:54:058.
  • 01:00:567 (2,3) - Delete (3), end (2) 1/2 earlier and add a repeat.
  • 01:01:558 (4,5) - Delete (5), end (4) 1/2 later and add a circle at 01:02:266.
  • 01:02:832 (1) - This is the only diff with a spinner here, delete it and map this part.

Hard

• • HP Drain Rate: 7
  • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • You used a lot of whistles in this diff and I really don't like them, claps fit a lot better with this song.
  • 00:12:454 (5) - Remove the repeat, then start a slider at 00:12:737 and end it at 00:12:879.
  • 00:16:983 (5) - Same thing here.
  • 00:19:954 (2,3) - Delete (2) and move (3) 1/2 earlier.
  • 00:22:077 (1) - I don't like this slider, try to do something like this:
  
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  • 00:36:652 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:46:134 (2) - Move this slider 1/2 earlier and remove the repeat.
  • 01:02:832 (1) - End this slider 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 01:03:256.
  • 01:21:228 (2) - Move this circle 1/2 earlier and add a circle at 01:21:369.
  • 01:26:605 (5) - End this slider at 01:26:888 and add a circle at 01:27:171.

Insane

• • HP Drain Rate: 8
  • Overall Difficulty: 8
  • 00:33:115 (1) - Try this pattern:
  
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  • 00:37:926 ~ 00:41:181 - Too many jumps here, spacing here is changing way too much.
  • 00:47:832 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:47:407.
  • 00:49:813 (1) - Remove this and the next whistles, as I said before they don't really fit with this song imo, you should keep using claps.
  • 01:12:313 (x) - Add a circle.

Broccoly wrote:

Hey~ from my queue

[General]
BG quality is pretty low. I recommend getting a better one May fix it later

[Insane]
00:06:228 (4,5) - 5 is too close to 4, and it's confusing because the beat between slider 1's tail and 2 is same with 4 and 5, so the spacing should be similar to 00:05:237 (1,2) - this Fixed
00:17:973 (2,3) - Also confusing, because it unnaturally ties the players' ankle right after the big jump. If you're gonna put a jump there, I recommend something like this↓ remove jump

(stack 2 and 5)
00:25:049 (3) - similar reason ^ I'd do like this ↓ I think it is fine

(good flow, more fun imo)
00:31:700 (2) - how about stacking on 3's head? Fixed
00:56:464 (3) - consider ctrl + g ing. feels more natural and playable to me. OK
01:04:247 (2,3) - Larger spacing? like 01:03:822 (5,1) - this OK

[Hard]
00:14:011 (4,5) - too close.. use spacing about around between 00:12:171 (4,5) // 00:19:247 (6,1) // Fixed
00:18:681 (4,5,6) - how about this ↓? looks better, and still plays well seems good, fixed

00:33:115 (3,4) - (nazi) better blanket? Fixed
00:56:039 (1,2) - blanket maybe? Fixed
01:00:567 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:06:086 (6,7) - ^ ^
01:24:341 (4,5,6) - ^ ^

[Normal]
00:02:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Consider using this↓ rhythm. Right now, it might make players boring Changed a part of it

00:32:549 (7,1) - (nazi) better blanket Fixed
00:54:058 (4,5,1) - make an equilateral triangle? /ok
01:08:492 (3,4,5) - (nazi) better blanket Fixed
01:11:888 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:13:303 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:27:737 (1,2,3) - ^ ^

[Easy]
00:32:549 (3,1) - ^ ^
00:35:662 (3,4) - ^ (turn off grid snap for these) ^


That's about it. Hope this helps.
Sorry for bunch of nazis, but no harm in making them look good.
Good luck~

Combo1 : 211,217,102

Xinely wrote:

Hi meetmeetdee
from my queue
sorry but i'm kinda tired, just do quick mod
feel free to not kd if not useful for you

[General]
combo 1 is not similar with BG imo, try this? Combo 1 is already using this code

Combo1 : 211,217,102

[Easy]
HP-1 OD-1 for same spread with other diff I think it is fine
00:02:832 (1) - end in 00:03:398 - ? It is weird in my sense, I prefer no change for this
00:14:152 (2) - ctrl+J and put in x:484 y:312 Fixed
00:18:115 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/711453? Fixed
00:22:077 (1,2) - make this slider to same for better Fixed
00:33:398 (1,2) - ^ [prefer (1) slider :3] Fixed
00:25:756 (2,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/711456? Fixed
00:28:869 (1) - curved? OK
00:41:605 (1) - x:280 y:220 (if yes, fix the spacing) Fixed
00:49:247 - finish Added
00:50:379 (2) - end in 00:50:803 - ? and add note in 00:51:228 - I prefer no such tight pattern in easy diff
01:18:681 (4) - nc for consistency Fixed
01:21:511 (1,2) - don't stack it, make confuse for newbie Fixed
01:29:152 (4) - nc for consistency Fixed

[Normal]
HP-1 OD-1 for same spread with other diff I think it is fine
00:02:832 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/711469? I prefer straight slider for the reverse slider
00:06:511 (4,5) - unstack? Fixed
00:11:322 - clap? No to keep consistency
00:16:417 (2) - 1 grid right for avoid little overlap with 00:15:567 (5) - Fixed
00:17:549 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/711483 OK
00:19:530 (5,1) - same with 01:21:511 (1,2) in easy Fixed
00:35:662 (4,5) - ^ Fixed
00:41:605 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
00:28:020 (5) - better if stacked with 00:26:322 (2) - Fixed
00:59:152 (3,4) - change rhtym same as 00:58:020 (1) - ? Fixed
01:00:567 (2) - 236,96 . if yes fix the spacing afterthis Fixed
01:02:549 (5) - 212,244 Fixed
01:28:586 (3) - better crtl+G imo, but just suggest Seems better, fixed

[Hard]
00:05:096 (1,2) - don't stack this Fixed
00:09:341 (3) - ctrl+G better imo Fixed
00:13:303 (2) - 316,204 Fixed
00:14:860 - add note? It seems that it isn't fit
00:37:643 (9) - spacing issue (1,07) Fixed
00:49:105 (3) - 244,164 for make jump too~ It is fine now imo
00:52:501 (2,3) - make this slider to same for better Fixed
00:55:756 (5) - curved too to make similar with 00:55:190 (3,4) - Fixed
01:01:983 (3) - make slider tail stacked with 01:00:992 (3) - Fixed
01:04:105 (5,6) - make this slider to same for better Fixed
01:18:681 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
01:06:086 (6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/711525? Fixed
01:08:351 - add note for better flow? Added
01:29:011 (1) - ctrl+G better imo Fixed

sorry for suck mod orz
Good Luck ~ (:

Andrea wrote:

Timing check as requested from my timing queue.

BPM: 212,00 - Offset: 580 (Remember to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Good luck ^^

Zweib wrote:

Nice map~
GL

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

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It's a very, very late mod, as I had noticed this mapset about 5 months ago.
The 2 taiko diffs are already mature enough, so I don't have much to suggest.
Let's start modding~ :3

[Taiko Muzukashii]

00:14:447 k d
00:22:372 add k ?
00:24:070 k k
00:30:296 (3,1) k d
00:45:721 add k ?
01:07:655 K ?
01:10:485 d
01:19:683 add k ?

[Lunasa's Taiko Oni]

00:28:740 add k ?
01:18:551 add k ? It seems to match the identical hitsound at 01:18:410
01:18:693 D (change this if you employ ^, forming d d k k D, simply because d d k k K is a bit hard to press...)

Verlaren wrote:

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Hai meetmeetdee~ From Aincrad's Modding queue~
My 400th post~

~Shana~

Red: Must be fixed
Pink: Need to consider
Black: Just suggestions

Easy

1. DR -1. IMO is better.
2. 00:03:834(1,2) - spacing.
3. 00:05:957(1,2) - ^
4. 00:24:070(2,1) - ^
5. 00:36:240(4) - that is much better and more beautiful:
   
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6. 01:11:900(1,2,3) - make a more symmetrical sliders please.

Normal

1. DR, OD -1 IMO is better
2. 00:17:561(1,1) - make a symmetrical sliders please. example -
   
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3. 00:18:127(1) - remove NC
4. 00:22:938(6) - maybe make a more simple slider?
5. 00:25:768(1,3) - same as 00:17:561, make symmetrical sliders.
6. 00:27:466(4) - same as 00:22:938(6)
7. 01:09:636(5) - make symmetrical slider and same as 01:08:504(3), example -
   
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Hard

• DR, AR, OD -1

1. 00:14:306(5,6) - move to x:296 y:260
2. 00:44:730(4,5) - make a symmetrical sliders please. example -
   
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3. 00:45:579(1,2) - ^

Insane

1. About diff settings - same as in Hard diff, but for insane this setting IMO is better
2. 00:18:127 - add note
3. 00:23:716 - ^
4. 00:23:504(2,3) - stack on 00:23:646(4) (x:288 y:200)

Very nice map
Hope this can help you. Good luck

Megurine Luka wrote:

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[General]

nah

[E]

Basically I think the slider velocity is too fast. The reason is BPM is too high. It is not suitable for new players at all.
It depends on you. Because changing the SV is a lot work.

00:22:089 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Uxsn.jpg
00:28:881 (1) - fin
00:31:995 (2) - http://puu.sh/2UxtV.jpg
00:33:410 (1) - fin
00:52:089 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Uxvt.jpg
00:54:919 (1,2) - This arrangement is too ugly. Try something like
http://puu.sh/2UxBa.jpg
http://puu.sh/2UxBo.jpg

[N]

Your Nornal is more likely to be a hard. And the main reason for being like this is also because of SV.
Whatever I will skip this diff.

[I]

Sorry my push is experiencing some problems so I'm not going to make a full mod but I will point out some problems that you have.

Basically your spacing is the largest problem. Take an example:

00:02:844 (3,4,5) - These three and 00:05:108 (1,2) - should share the same amount of spacing since they are similar pattern, not only in rhythm but also in drums. However you're using two totally different spacings.

00:13:740 (4,5,6,7) - This sudden enlarge in spacing is non-sense.

00:14:589 (8,9,10,11) - Can you see the differences in spacing btw these notes?

00:17:844 (1,2) - and 00:18:268 (3,4,5) Yes, the same problem.

YES. We do not be so strict follow with distance snap in Insane or Hard diff. But before you become a experienced mapper who can control the spacing by sense, I recommend you open distance snap and rearrange your map.

Not going to point out more. Keep working and GL.

CDFA wrote:

WAAA SU DEE TAAIIIII

KOONOO KA TA DI WOOOOAH

Insane:
00:02:844 (3) - NC OK
00:07:372 (1,2,3) - If you have a jump here, put it on the one before too, since they're like the same thing owo Fixed
00:22:089 (9) - NC OK
00:30:155 (1) - This stack feels awkward. Like I'm hesistating to hit it and it messes me up Fixed
00:35:674 (11) - NC OK
00:42:466 (4) - ^ OK
01:13:457 (6) - It's so close to being symmetrical, but make it perfect and all :3. the easiest thing to do is to take it out of context, place the slider so the red point is on the y axis, and then move the middle points around until they're both equal. You can flip the slider horizontally to make sure of this :3. Fixed

Hard:
00:31:146 (3,4,5,1,2) - I feel like you can switch the styles of these, where the first part has the regular notes and the second part can have the 1/2 sliders, since there's actually 1/2 parts there. OK

Normal:
01:02:844 (1) - Maybe try avoiding this overlap here? It's not happening during playing, but because of the low AR, when this appears, it doesn't look kawaii Fixed

Easy:
Solid. Only thing I can say is try not to make it seem so monotone. I like the efforts you have to not do that, but add some more 2nd and 4th white tick stuff >w<~ (Just don't add too much, otherwise it'll become too hard) I will consider it

Solid first map. Yay.

orioncomet wrote:

[Easy]
01:29:447 (2) - Maybe end this slider at red tick like other diff? sound good, imo. ok

[Hard]
- Oh.. This's kinda hard, I would like to ask you to -1 AR because AR8 is kinda fast, but SV on this diff is a bit too fast too (even it's just 1.4, but the problem is that BPM is 212), so that if you do AR7, the approach would really looks overlapping each other.. x~x OK, I am going to reduce the sv


The map looks fine, the only thing that bothering me is Hard diff lol and I blame my poor eyes for not seeing dark colour very well lol, only if I could I would ask you to change dark-green combo colour to be a bit brighter. Fixed the colour

MMzz wrote:

[Insane]
01:01:570 (5,1) - Swap these combos? To follow the combo pattern you have been using.
01:14:872 (4,5,6,7) - Nothing in the music resembles this stream, I highly suggest you remove it.
01:15:155 (8) - new combo?
01:16:146 (1,2) - Swap these combos too.

[Hard]
01:16:429 (6,1) - Swap these combos to follow the downbeat.