Hello there~ From my M4M queue!
General:
~Uninherited timing points conflicts with Extra diff.No 5% volume pls. In most cases, they are unrankable.Easy:
~00:15:660 (4,1) - This overlap looks untidy while playing. Wat about like this?
http://puu.sh/3WCzr.jpg~00:26:093 (1) - Wat about a hook like this? Cuz the one now looks unfinished.
http://puu.sh/3WCDE.jpg~01:02:070 (3) - Move point after red point to X:152 Y:220 for better shape.
~01:22:217 (3) - Add finish on head to match the music.
~01:38:046 (1) - 0.o Just a normal 'M' shape will be fine.
~02:16:901 (1) - Move the point after red point to X: 200 Y: 24 for better shape and flow.
Normal:
~00:26:453 (2,3) - A bit sudden, change it to this?
http://puu.sh/3WD35.jpg~00:33:828 (2,2,2) - Reduce them by 1/2 a beat.
~00:43:002 (6) - Stack them together? Cuz beginners might not get the overlap.
~00:46:779 (2,2) - Same as the sliders b4.
~01:05:667 (4) - Point the reverse arrow towards next slider instead of pointing back to the previous one for better flow.
~01:07:106 (3) - Doesn't really fit music. This fits more.
http://puu.sh/3WDfi.jpg~01:11:424 (3) - Remove clap, sounds better to skip it. Low volume doesn't really fit here, just use 60%.
~01:32:830 (2) - Save the short sliders for the 2 strong beats. 2 circles here would be fine.
~02:07:547 (4) - Move reverse point to X: 8 Y: 200 for better flow.
~02:11:685 (2) - Shape looks bad.
~02:13:304 (6) - Move this to X: 460 Y: 152
~02:20:319 (2) - Normal curve?
Hard:
~00:26:093 (1,2,3,4) - Dun stack them, that only works better at fast rhythm.
~01:19:339 (1,2) - Wat about using 4 circles here instead? I'll create some build up after the first 4 circles before.
~01:22:936 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make them shape like a mountain instead? Feels better.
~01:41:824 (4) - Move this down a bit for better flow.
~01:42:184 (5) - Move this up a bit.
Insane:
~01:23:656 (1) - Remove NC, unnecessary.
~01:34:359 (1,2) - Jumps not here?
~01:37:327 (1,2,3,4) - Try this?
http://puu.sh/3WE73.jpg~01:53:876 - Soft audio? 55% volume?
~02:08:987 (5) - Overlapping with previous, space it properly pls.
Extra:
~Hmm..Do you think you could put triplets to where the music is? By this I mean removing and adding. It'll be more fun!
~00:49:118 (1,2) - Dun stack this, it ruins the pace.
~01:59:453 (1,2) - Space them, cuz it's a bit confusing at that certain moment. Space the others as well for consistency.
Overall, good insanes, they play well, but the organisation and arrangement could be a bit more tidy.
That's all from me here ^^ Good luck!!~