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Topic Starter
gdeath

tieff wrote:

Skin.

It contains:
spinner-circle
spinner-metre
spinner-background
spinner-approachcircle
lighting
hitcircleoverlay
And 4 hitcircle.

About hitcircle... You can choice it. Just rename hitcircle1/hitcircle2/hircircle3 as hitcircle.
really thanks for your making the skin^_^
lukewarmholiday
Hard

The silent beats come out of nowhere and feel a little dumb, thats all I got for modding good job.
Topic Starter
gdeath

lukewarmholiday wrote:

Hard

The silent beats come out of nowhere and feel a little dumb, thats all I got for modding good job.
i agree wiht you.its fixed~
thanks for your modding^_^
alvisto
Hi ! ^o^ I really like this song ! Your selection of song is good ! And skin is nice too ! I hope someone can help me do my skin.... T^T

EASY
00:47:022 - This seems hard for easy. I used this kind of beats too in my easy, and many people said it's too hard for easy. So, depends on your decision la.
01:15:897 - Try making the slider start & end align in a straight vertical line.
Otherwise, it's perfect

NORMAL
01:24:334 - You had inserted a note at 01:12:334, so why not here ? Ok, ignore me, just realize you want to make stack notes. =P
Otherwise, it's good

HARD
00:51:897 - this finish sounds weird. >.<
01:17:772 - A silent note ? Maybe give it at least some sound ?
01:39:334 - 好像加多一个note here比较爽
Do you wanna map those areas after the spinner ? That parts sounds like got a lot of potential to map. =P

Your 1st Map ? Very good ! Star !
Topic Starter
gdeath
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Breeze
哟 gdeath
又有新map了啊
现在map进步很快啊,比我做的好呢...TAT
话说你在linking park那个map加的diff.很棒 awesome work


话说你map文件夹里的hicircle1,2,3是怎么回事- -,不要的就删掉吧...貌似我看见别人的hitcircle了...
hit sound基本没有,只有soft的whistle,BAT会抱怨的- -最好加些其他的hit sound
KIAI time设置的很不对劲,不要还好些,这种soft的歌还是不要好了
加个原创的spinnercircle吧,默认的不怎么好看,也可以加个hitcircleoverlay
这给你个:


这次真的是随便看看...:

[Easy]
没什么问题,great

[Normal]
hitcircle大些玩起来会更有意思的
00:41:397 (3) - 还是以前说到过的遮挡问题,不是和以前的note完全重合的话,看起来很不爽,当然这只是我个人的意见
00:41:397 - add break
01:15:897 (1) - 遮挡
01:29:397 (3) - ^
01:35:397 (6) - ^

[Hard]
hitcircle也该大一点,难度完全可以靠其他的弄上去,太小就没那么有意思了,容易点飞
00:53:959 (4) - 和前面(2)的结尾对齐

great map
star!
Topic Starter
gdeath

Breeze wrote:

哟 gdeath
又有新map了啊
现在map进步很快啊,比我做的好呢...TAT
话说你在linking park那个map加的diff.很棒 awesome work
多谢(# ̄▽ ̄#) (羞


话说你map文件夹里的hicircle1,2,3是怎么回事- -,不要的就删掉吧...貌似我看见别人的hitcircle了...
okay
hit sound基本没有,只有soft的whistle,BAT会抱怨的- -最好加些其他的hit sound
okay
KIAI time设置的很不对劲,不要还好些,这种soft的歌还是不要好了
fixed
加个原创的spinnercircle吧,默认的不怎么好看,也可以加个hitcircleoverlay
这给你个:
[attachment=0:a5f95]hitcircleoverlay.png[/attachment:a5f95]
万岁 \(‵▽′)/

这次真的是随便看看...:

[Easy]
没什么问题,great

[Normal]
hitcircle大些玩起来会更有意思的
fixed
00:41:397 (3) - 还是以前说到过的遮挡问题,不是和以前的note完全重合的话,看起来很不爽,当然这只是我个人的意见
这里我其实是故意做成遮挡来增加难度的。hm...我在考虑下
00:41:397 - add break
01:15:897 (1) - 遮挡
01:29:397 (3) - ^
01:35:397 (6) - ^

[Hard]
hitcircle也该大一点,难度完全可以靠其他的弄上去,太小就没那么有意思了,容易点飞
fixed
00:53:959 (4) - 和前面(2)的结尾对齐
fixed

great map
star!
kino77
其实我是跟踪Breeze来的这
gdeath 酱的ava好Q~
先撒颗星~晚些再来看看~ :)
tieff
Topic Starter
gdeath
Thank you tieff. <(_ _)>
Great work. :)
Topic Starter
gdeath

kino77 wrote:

其实我是跟踪Breeze来的这
gdeath 酱的ava好Q~
先撒颗星~晚些再来看看~ :)
先谢谢你的星星啦 ヽ(⌒~⌒)ノ
Yes_old
Awesome mapp (: STAR!
Symbolic
[Easy]

00:22:27 (1,2,3) - Move these 2 level 3 grids to the left for symmetry and then respace the rest or put everything 2 level grids to the left.
01:23:39 (3) - New combo.
01:29:39 (3) - ^
01:35:39 (2) - ^
02:00:52 (TIMING SECTION) - Remove the Kiai Time, it doesn't fit.


[Normal]

00:57:52 (4) - New combo.
01:57:52 (TIMING SECTION) - Remove the Kiai Time, it doesn't fit.
02:00:52 (TIMING SECTION) - Remove the Kiai Time, it doesn't fit.


[Baka tieff]

00:43:27 (1) - Remove new combo.


[Hard]

00:30:89 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:00:52 (1) - ^
01:00:89 (1) - ^
01:01:27 (1) - ^
02:03:14 (x) - Add a note here.
02:03:52 (x) - Add a note with finish or whistle here.


Fun map, boring song :P
Starred *
Topic Starter
gdeath
Symbolic<<nice mod!all fixed.thank you.
XepherX3
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Breeze

kino77 wrote:

其实我是跟踪Breeze来的这
gdeath 酱的ava好Q~
先撒颗星~晚些再来看看~ :)
被尾行了////不要推倒我 |o|
T>A<kuma~~~
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Topic Starter
gdeath

x3ns0r wrote:

[video offset]
-300
FIXED

[easy]
sound on last section on 3 tick from left
add section on end of spinner with sound off
i can not understand what's the meaning,can you speak more specifically?

[normal]
same as easy

[hard]
same as easy

starred

eee wrote:

[Hard]
00:54:14 (5) - one level 3 grid to the right
01:04:27 (4) - ^
01:10:08 - wanna add a note here, and placing it under (2), idk, would be nice
01:56:02 (11) - one more reverse? eh, just what I would do

nice modding,all fixed
star
tieff
Mafiamaster
Easy~
01:47:39 (2) - New combo.
01:54:89 (7) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the end.

Normal~
01:06:14 (1) - Add a finish.
01:24:89 (5,6,7) - Looks kind of clustered. Not really good in a Normal difficulty. =\

Tieff's~

This doesn't have the video added. Add it please~
01:30:14 (3) - Move this note up so it's not cut off from the bottom of the screen.

Hard~
01:03:14 (1) - This doesn't sound good. Maybe just make it into a single circle?
Topic Starter
gdeath
Mafiamaster<<nice mod!all fixed
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Easy]
  1. 01:21:89 (2) - Cut by 1/4,
  2. 01:30:89 (5) - Cut by 1/4.
[Normal]
  1. Fine.
[Baka tieff]
  1. Fine. >.<.
[Hard]
  1. 01:30:89 (8) - Stack manually on (7)s end,
  2. 01:35:77 (2) - Why this slider isn't straight? o.o.
Ahh, now i'm moar sleepy than before :<.
xierbaliti
good map :)
aio_sama
:arrow:
Topic Starter
gdeath

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
[Easy]
  1. 01:21:89 (2) - Cut by 1/4,
  2. 01:30:89 (5) - Cut by 1/4.
[Normal]
  1. Fine.
[Baka tieff]
  1. Fine. >.<.
[Hard]
  1. 01:30:89 (8) - Stack manually on (7)s end,
  2. 01:35:77 (2) - Why this slider isn't straight? o.o.
nice mod.all fixed. ^^
Starrodkirby86
Change Source from "Narcissus opening theme" to "Narcissu".

Correct tags from "vedio game" to "video game". Maybe you should add opening theme in tags here, too.

[Easy]:
01:09:52 (1,2) - Shorten sliders by 1/4 each...oxo

I think that's it...*sleeps*
Topic Starter
gdeath
Starrodkirby86<<--- all fixed.thank you <3
Takuma
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Topic Starter
gdeath
Takuma<<---all fixed.thanks~<3
Takuma
It's good for me now, bubbled!
RemmyX25
Eh... I hate having to pop for things like this, but I have to.

spinner-background.png doesnt feel like an appropriate spinner background. It gets covered up by the spinner, which makes a subjective background pointless, imo. I mean, I like it, but it doesnt feel like it should be a spinner background.

All Difficulties:
Just a suggestion, but I think the slider ticks could be turned up a notch.
ACC
GD我爱你~\(≧▽≦)/~
Topic Starter
gdeath

RemmyX25 wrote:

All Difficulties:
Just a suggestion, but I think the slider ticks could be turned up a notch.
i thinks 0.5 slider ticks sound better.so i decide to leave it xD
thanks for your modding.Remmy>O<

Hillman_Q wrote:

GD我爱你~\(≧▽≦)/~
姗姗~<3
skranger
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Breeze
换个spinner-metre就应该好多了
其实其他的都不用改的
先试试这个:

Topic Starter
gdeath
thank you.breeze~! :)
skin fixed
RemmyX25
The colors match better, so I'll just give you back your bubble.

I totally bubbled that before >_>
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
00:30:89 (6) - repeat one more time?
lower hitvolume by a tick
02:03:14 (1) - try a finish


[Normal]
02:04:27 (1) - finish?
also i think part of the trouble with your tick rate is that the way you have your sliders set up, the ticks are always on the offbeat...maybe look into that a bit....


[tieff]
00:53:39 (1,2,3) - jump comes flying out of NOWHERE for no discernable reason
01:09:52 (1) - note appears too soon after spinner's end
01:15:89 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:33:52 (1) - note appears too soon after spinner
01:38:02 (3,4,5) - spacin
02:13:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - either make a different timing section with correct timing or delete this section - the timing is NOT CORRECT as is and therefore UNRANKABLE



[Hard]
02:03:70 (1) - finish?

starred and...the spinner doesnt go with the spinner bg at ALL, change one or the other please
Topic Starter
gdeath

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:30:89 (6) - repeat one more time?
sorry,if i fix it as your request,it will be harder.its a easy diff.so i decide to leave my pattern
lower hitvolume by a tick
02:03:14 (1) - try a finish
done

[Normal]
02:04:27 (1) - finish?
done
also i think part of the trouble with your tick rate is that the way you have your sliders set up, the ticks are always on the offbeat...maybe look into that a bit....
i tried.if slider tick is increased,there are a lot of ticks in a slider.it sound worse.
i really dont increase tick anymore



[Hard]
02:03:70 (1) - finish?
done

starred and...the spinner doesnt go with the spinner bg at ALL, change one or the other please

changed
really thanks for your modding,SFG
tieff
[tieff]
00:53:39 (1,2,3) - jump comes flying out of NOWHERE for no discernable reason kk
01:09:52 (1) - note appears too soon after spinner's end And?
01:15:89 (1,2,3) - spacing kk
01:33:52 (1) - note appears too soon after spinnerAnd?
01:38:02 (3,4,5) - spacin kk
02:13:27 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - either make a different timing section with correct timing or delete this section - the timing is NOT CORRECT as is and therefore UNRANKABLE
Oh shi. Fuck timing, it's play very well without right timing and I can't make another timing section 'cos BPM slowly decrease.
Download: REM - Narcissus (gdeath) [Baka tieff].osu
Starrodkirby86
Everything is fine...except...well, I wouldn't exactly "hold" "hold" this from ranking, but seeing I can't bubble in the case you make changes...


This is my concern:

Ahhh, look at the bottom border there, it's cut off. T.T

Yeah. I know this is a lame post...but I seriously could not find anything else. x3
Topic Starter
gdeath
Starrodkirby86 <<---fixed.i hope this is my last version
Takuma
o:
Larto
Since tieff wanted to map the very ending, you should use timing sections to get it right ;( That will also make the osu! symbol pulsate correctly at those points.

Add these lines to every .osu's [TimingPoints] section:

133272,413.793103448276,4,2,0,31,1,0
134927,461.538461538462,4,2,0,31,1,0
135388,521.739130434783,4,2,0,31,1,0
137300,521.739130434783,4,2,0,31,1,0

And resnap the notes for the ending.
Topic Starter
gdeath
Larto<<---okay.tieff's baka was fixed.other diffs is unnecessary to be received.
Starrodkirby86
Every time I look at this map, I get impressed more and more. =w= Nice!
Topic Starter
gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Takuma
Ranked (finally)!
tieff
Takuma I love you.
sesito71
hmm, the song is called Narcissu, not Narcissus :?


^^
FurukawaPan
I freaking love the tieff difficulty. :)

edit: no, actually I love everything about this map ^-^
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