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Shinde
Skin looks beautiful, hitsounds sounded great, timing was spot on to me.

So far as playability issues go, my only concern was with the 01:21:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) pattern on Azure's. I just think it's a bit hard to read. (Though it is true there's a very small spot you can keep your mouse to hit all 6.) I think those 2 'Star Slider' patterns could use a little more star shape to em too. I can't say I was able to play 'S.t.a.r.S' difficulty, so that's about it.

whyme, please don't kudosu this post, lol.

*'star this map' joke goes here*

SPOILER

whymeman wrote:

Hmm.... That would be cool. Though I just hope it doesn't get blocked by hitnotes and that I could fit it into the file size...
I could probably do this SB/lyrics thing and it'd only add about 700kb to file size. I'm a little busy with skinning atm, but feel free to consider it and talk to me about it at some point. You can look at ztrot's Fly Away map to get an idea of what it'd look like, I did that one a few days ago. 2nd time around should be easier too, I'd guess it'd take around 6 hours.
Scar
*_*
Star~
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whymeman
Thank you for the support :)

Also, to anyone having an issue with the fail-background.png: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=17676
Shulin
I love the skin on this, all great maps, here are my suggestions, feel free to ignore them:

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Sweet Stars:

00:28:87 – Adding a beat here makes it easier to follow the beat I think.
01:07:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – This beat is a little hard to follow, there’s nothing wrong with it, but I think the way you mapped it at 01:22:28 (1,2,3,4,5) – was easier to hit.
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:25:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:22:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:41:60 (5) – Add a beat?

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Tasty Stars:

01:07:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Same as easy.
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – ^
03:51:37 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:58:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Even though the same type of beat appears in the song at these places it was hardest to follow, again there’s nothing wrong with just difficult to hit at these times.

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Azure’s S.t.a.r.S:

I like this difficulty, even managed to pass it.

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S.t.a.r.S:

I didn’t pass this though, but I watched osu and it seems fine, I recommend:
00:38:42 (4) – Add a clap on the third beat.
00:41:37 (3) – Add a clap on the second beat.

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That's all, great map, star.
Topic Starter
whymeman

Shulin wrote:

I love the skin on this, all great maps, here are my suggestions, feel free to ignore them:

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Sweet Stars:

00:28:87 – Adding a beat here makes it easier to follow the beat I think.
01:07:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – This beat is a little hard to follow, there’s nothing wrong with it, but I think the way you mapped it at 01:22:28 (1,2,3,4,5) – was easier to hit.
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:25:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:22:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:41:60 (5) – Add a beat?

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Tasty Stars:

01:07:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Same as easy.
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – ^
03:51:37 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:58:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

Even though the same type of beat appears in the song at these places it was hardest to follow, again there’s nothing wrong with just difficult to hit at these times.

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S.t.a.r.S:

I didn’t pass this though, but I watched osu and it seems fine, I recommend:
00:38:42 (4) – Add a clap on the third beat.
00:41:37 (3) – Add a clap on the second beat.

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That's all, great map, star.

My mapping style may be confusing but its because I tend to map at both the beats and the lyrics (in this case). But, i'll check into the hitsounds in [S.t.a.r.S] to make sure its in sync. Thanks for checking into the map though. :)
0_o
Offset -10

THIS IS SO LONG
Honestly, I reallllly don't think it would hurt to cut this shorter...

Sweet
00:42:96 (5) - Repeat sliders like this are tricky for beginners since it isn't obvious how many repeats there are. (I only point this out because it's the easiest difficulty)

Tasty
~

S.T.A.R.S
16M high score, but it's freakin hard so ok

Azure
00:57:28 (10,11) - when this came up I was like "wait, what??" It's pretty easy to mistake 10 for a slider
01:20:01 (5,6,1) - Doesn't flow well from the previous combo
01:21:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - REALLLLLLY MEAN AND NASTY you can't even see 6 coming
01:24:78 (4) - This slider's endpoint backtracks a tiny bit, fix?
01:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The increasing distances don't really fit imo
01:54:78 (1) - I would move this a bit closer to 6
02:02:05 (1) - ^
02:28:42 (6) - Same star thing
02:35:69 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - RAGE AGAIN
02:54:67 (8,9,10) - Move these ahead 1/4
02:56:26 (4,5,6) - ^, then add a hitcircle where 4 started before
erg, the whole part until the break here could really use some work, it sounds/plays pretty awkward. Try to stick to an intuitive rhythm/beat
03:42:96 (1) - This star isn't as pretty and symmetrical as the other ones ;_;

My only other complaint is that difficulties jump from a hardish-normal to two crazy Insanes; it doesn't have a real "hard" level difficulty, where a large percentage of players fall on.
XepherX3
star shape fruits for CTB
updated: >>
Download: Stars ctb.zip

also a star for this map :lol:
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whymeman
Sweet
00:42:96 (5) - Repeat sliders like this are tricky for beginners since it isn't obvious how many repeats there are. (I only point this out because it's the easiest difficulty)



I see.... well, i'll have that fixed in the next update then.
XepherX3
vectorized the fruit images
added the score images
fixed up the combobursts and added a cursortrail

^^

Download: Stars ctb.zip

Download: other images.zip

Download: Score images.zip


GabrielRKF
Awesome :3
Star :D

One question: Here is this song from? o.O
Topic Starter
whymeman

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Awesome :3
Star :D

One question: Here is this song from? o.O
Its from the Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann: Kirameki Yoko Box :-3
ACC
I like it
but why i DL without video,there still with a video
Topic Starter
whymeman

Hillman_Q wrote:

I like it
but why i DL without video,there still with a video
Good question because I never noticed that either.

I'll make sure to redo the upload to fix it right now.
Azure_Kite

0_o wrote:

Azure
00:57:28 (10,11) - when this came up I was like "wait, what??" It's pretty easy to mistake 10 for a slider... Kinda, I'll move the slider slightly to make it more readable
01:20:01 (5,6,1) - Doesn't flow well from the previous combo It's there to force players to jump back and do it but anyways. Made a little easier
01:21:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - REALLLLLLY MEAN AND NASTY you can't even see 6 coming Brilliant, huh?
01:24:78 (4) - This slider's endpoint backtracks a tiny bit, fix? I think fixed?
01:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The increasing distances don't really fit imo Changed
01:54:78 (1) - I would move this a bit closer to 6
02:02:05 (1) - ^ Done and Done
02:28:42 (6) - Same star thing Fixed
02:35:69 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - RAGE AGAIN Brilliant... Just Brilliant
02:54:67 (8,9,10) - Move these ahead 1/4 Done
02:56:26 (4,5,6) - ^, then add a hitcircle where 4 started before See that number in the Total objects section? I wanna keep it
erg, the whole part until the break here could really use some work, it sounds/plays pretty awkward. Try to stick to an intuitive rhythm/beat.
03:42:96 (1) - This star isn't as pretty and symmetrical as the other ones ;_; Changed
Thanks for your mod

Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Azure's S.t.a.r.S].osu
Topic Starter
whymeman
For those trying to download without the video, yes, I already know about the problem now and trying to look into it (; ._.)
Ex Boy
I like this song too!!!!!! Can I make a difficulty for it?? Please give me a chance!!!! :D
Topic Starter
whymeman
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Ex Boy
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Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Ex Boy's S.t.a.r.S.].osu
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whymeman
Well.... its going to be difficult to add in any other difficulties.... especially since the Credits was already completed...

Plus I took a look into the difficulty and there are plenty of errors/issues to work out like the note placement and the jumps. Also, I already have 3 full lengh hard maps......

I do wish I got this request sooner to make things much easier but like I said, the credits was already done plus the deadline at the overdue point... not trying to sound mean about it though....
Mystearica
Hey there, a 10 mb xvid video file for you as promised.

http://www.fate-testarossa.com/stuff/Stars.avi

I hope you wanted 10 ~_~
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whymeman

Mystearica wrote:

Hey there, a 10 mb xvid video file for you as promised.

http://www.fate-testarossa.com/stuff/Stars.avi

I hope you wanted 10 ~_~
This will do though I wish you uploaded it from mediafire but that's okay. (; ^_^)

Edit: It seems the no-video link is fixed now.
Azure_Kite
Here's the final credits :)

alvisto
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whymeman
On the tag there, I believe you misspelled blissfulyoshi's name, it's not blissfulyohsi.


Oh dear... (; ._.)

I'll make sure to fix that right now then.
Ekaru
All difficulties checked out. *yawn* Sorry, it's late. Have a star.
ztrot
Looks so far just a reminder you need to pick what you want this map to go for approved or ranked.
IMO the map plays like a ranked map but it's score is way over the top.
Star worthy none the less( too bad I'm out of kudos ._.) Great work on this map I just hope it finds a home in the ranked/approved fourms soon :)
Duoprism
Hmm, while there's nothing too technically wrong with the beatmap, I can't help but getting the feeling that the hardest difficulty is a bit overmapped. And I guess the mapping style is a bit too linear for my taste :o I'll star this for now and see what other mods have to say about this map.
Topic Starter
whymeman

Reikin wrote:

Hmm, while there's nothing too technically wrong with the beatmap, I can't help but getting the feeling that the hardest difficulty is a bit overmapped. And I guess the mapping style is a bit too linear for my taste :o I'll star this for now and see what other mods have to say about this map.
Thanks for checking into the map. I know my insane seems a bit intense, but I feel that it has to be really hard to make the score reasonable as well.
Evangeline AK
Or2......
[S.t.a.r.S.] : the distance are tooooooooo long! and the normal audio is too loud,turn down a little will be batter :)
and why don't you add Ex Boy's map? his map are good I think.Though some jumps are not very good \o/
~Give you a star for this good song~
Topic Starter
whymeman
Got the hitsounds adjusted but also, i'm not accepting anymore collab difficulties now. I'm trying to get this map ranked at this point.
ouranhshc
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
jericho2442
pure love this song and all the maps for it,

epic work on this and i hope its ranked soon so take a s.t.a.r :D
Starrodkirby86
Stop it, too much boobies of Yoko. <3

[Azure's S.t.a.r.S]:
01:55:69 (2) - Nazi: Move 1 up on Grid Level 3?
02:06:94 (4) - Nazi: Move 1 right on Grid Level 3?
02:35:69 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Is one able to even see that (9) is actually 1/2 apart after bamming through all of those 1/4s earlier?

[S.t.a.r.S]:
03:50:23 (1,2,3) - Just for safety, check the hidden-ness of the second slider?

What's up with the Template Skin-esque elements in the song folder? If you insist on using those elements, then you might as well force the Default Skin by going to Song Setup > Storyboard > Preferred Skin > Default. oxo

Oh wow, I didn't notice that speed warning ever existed. Niiice. xD

I'm very unsure about the maximum scores here. This song is definitely challenging and is around that though, but Azure's is easier than whyme's, though the score difference is only a meager 40,000 or so.
Topic Starter
whymeman
Lol, silly me for not seeing the default skin selection (; ._.)
Azure_Kite

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Stop it, too much boobies of Yoko. <3

[Azure's S.t.a.r.S]:
01:55:69 (2) - Nazi: Move 1 up on Grid Level 3?
02:06:94 (4) - Nazi: Move 1 right on Grid Level 3?
02:35:69 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Is one able to even see that (9) is actually 1/2 apart after bamming through all of those 1/4s earlier?
All fixed

More fixes made

Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Azure's S.t.a.r.S].osu
Gens
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Topic Starter
whymeman

Gens wrote:

starry~!

I hope you'll remove those default-x.png from the song folder. ;o
Working on that for the next update :-3
Jarby
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whymeman

JarJarJacob wrote:

02:13:87 - This section of the video is probably enough to add a nsfw tag to the map, no?
Yoko Littner is not an artist. Go put her in tags.
Pieces Of Sweet Stars should be Pieces of Sweet Stars, right?

Azure's S.t.a.r.S:

Kiai for half of the first chorus, no kiai on second or final chorus What.
02:50:69 - This break isn't needed. Add notes.
03:53:87 (2) - Spacing. SPACING.
Inoue Marina is the voice actor for Yoko Littner (Japan version) which was why I added that to the song artist, but i'll have that fixed in the update then.
Azure_Kite
Jars fixes done

'nsfw' tag added to my diff

Download: Inoue Marina - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Azure's S.t.a.r.S].osu
Jarby
Azure's S.t.a.r.S still needs kiai for the other half of the first chorus. That's it.

YOU ARE MY STAR BUBBLE
Topic Starter
whymeman
Lol, thanks for checking into the map Jar (and everyone else too).
Larto
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
alvisto
Congrats, whyme, finally =D
Topic Starter
whymeman
Goob job everyone. 8-)
peppy
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whymeman
I see. I'll make sure to take note of that (; ._.)
peppy
You may thing I am being unreasonable, but on one of my test machines with onboard graphics it is the difference between 120 and 50fps. When it can be avoided, it should.
Topic Starter
whymeman

peppy wrote:

You may thing I am being unreasonable, but on one of my test machines with onboard graphics it is the difference between 120 and 50fps. When it can be avoided, it should.
Nah, its cool. You have a good reason for doing that. At least I know now to avoid making that same mistake.
Hyp3r50n1c
Link me to the Skin?
Andrea

Hyp3r50n1c wrote:

Link me to the Skin?
You can take the skin from the beatmap folder.
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