This song is so amazing *0*

[Insane]

1. 00:14:526 (1,2,3,4,1) - well personally I don't like this pattern because you're trying to mix curved stream and that linear slider, and it doesn't fit the whole pattern: 00:14:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3). How about http://puu.sh/1YIuN?
2. 00:16:401 (6,7,1) - too intensive for a beginning. Also, you're trying to follow both vocals and the beat with 00:16:635 (7), but I would follow vocals only in the intro
3. 00:24:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - better use linear one to match other patterns around
4. 00:25:307 (8,9) - make them less curvy, they look.. broken? Don't know how to explain
5. 00:34:916 (5) - finish sounds odd, try placing it on the next note before spinner
6. 00:40:659 (4,5,1) - you can make it better by putting 00:41:127 (5,1) on the other side: http://puu.sh/1YIMc. Make sure you didn't forget to put 00:41:596 (2) closer to it lol
7. 00:47:807 - I wouldn't increase SV multipliet here, because spacing gets higher
8. 00:49:565 (6) - it will play better if you bend it to the opposite side (if yes, move it down to keep the spacing between it and the next stream)
9. 00:50:971 (2) - unstack for consistency with 00:51:557 (4)

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1. 00:52:846 (2) - two grid right to make a linear triplet
2. 00:53:432 (5,6,7) - in my opinion, it works only with horizontal symmetry. Here I would recommend you to change this pattern to another one (idk really, it just bugs me)
3. 00:54:604 (2,3,4) - ouch, circles are too close to slider end, so I'd try something like http://puu.sh/1YIXy
4. 00:57:182 (7,8,9) - make it better by rotating (9) by -30 degrees (also move it up a bit)
5. 01:04:682 (7,8,9) - it will work better and look nicer if 7's end, 8 and 9's beginning will be on the line: http://puu.sh/1YJ3f. I'd also do the same with 01:06:557 (4,5,6): http://puu.sh/1YJ4K
6. 01:09:370 (1) - I see no point in using this slider, how about replacing it with two circles instead
7. 01:11:245 (1,2,3) - neat

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1. 01:24:838 (3,4) - fix the spacing, it plays odd
2. 01:25:541 (1) - there's something wrong with it (idk, looks like you just had no ideas on what to map here and put this as a filler)
3. 01:26:245 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please no (reason is the same as above), better change it to something else cause you just copied the first square pattern with no changes
4. 01:28:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - blargh it plays bad (at least for me). Why don't you delete this loop and map something instead of it? Yeah I hear that sound in the music you mapped, but long sliders are boring and sometimes don't reflect the song's rhythm or don't have a "flow"
5. 01:32:573 (4,5,6) - I would unstack it for a better visual experience (yeah this triangle with a stack in the center looks boring for me): http://puu.sh/1YJn4
6. 01:36:323 (2,3) - move them 1/2 forward and put a note on 01:36:323, they will follow the music really better
7. 01:38:432 (5,6) - looks nice, but I'd prefer it to be more comfortable for playing ("change it somehow so I don't have to move my hand in a way that's a bit unnatural for it")
8. 01:40:307 (5,6) - it's soooo shriveled (found this word in a dictionary lol), so you may want to fix 6's direction and shape
9. 01:43:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - doesn't look nice and accurate, I'd shrink the streams and change their shape: http://puu.sh/1YJC0.
   
   As you might notice, that's nearly the only way to map streams followed by a curvy slider that I like. Maybe it's just me, I don't know, but a "curvy slider and wide-spaced stream" pair rarely looks good.
   
10. 01:51:323 (2,3,4)
    
    1. First of all: 2 and 3 should be moved 1/2 forward to follow the music better. Also, you literally skipped the downbeat on 01:52:495 that has an important meaning for the gameplay. I mean, there should be a note or a slider or something a player can click.
    2. Due to the movements you make to reach the jumps, 01:50:620 (1) should be somewhere on the bottom of the playfield (implying it follows the last jump note).
    3. Don't use linear sliders near the curvy one in this way. They simply don't fit it.

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1. 01:52:963 (1) and the whole calm part - you better hitsound it with hitnormal as you did in the very beginning
2. 01:59:760 - nooo, 100% is way too loud. Lower it to 70 or something
3. 02:01:870 (1) - remove it and map it in a proper way, as you mapped all the "together we can play some R&R" parts before
4. 02:04:916 (5) - http://puu.sh/1YKiH is a better idea, seriously
5. map the blue tick at 02:05:502
   
   I see there is a copypasta from the first similar part, so I'll copy and paste my suggestions as well:
   .....
6. 02:10:659 (4,5,1) - you can make it better by putting 02:11:127 (5,1) on the other side (SMIC NOW IMAGINE http://puu.sh/1YIMc BUT MIRRORED). Make sure you didn't forget to put 02:11:596 (2) closer to it lol
7. 02:18:041 - I wouldn't increase SV multipliet here, because spacing gets higher
8. 02:19:565 (6) - it will play better if you bend it to the opposite side (if yes, move it down to keep the spacing between it and the next stream)
   .....
9. 02:25:776 (6) - remove clap from the end
10. 02:29:995 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - there's no need to make it complicated, I suggest a better one: http://puu.sh/1YKr6
    
    SPOILER

    444,72,149995,6,2,P|440:116|461:167,1,86.25,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    484,236,150463,2,2,P|496:272|484:320,1,86.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    460,332,150932,5,8,0:0:0
    432,332,151049,1,0,0:0:0
    404,328,151166,1,2,0:0:0
    376,324,151284,1,0,0:0:0
    348,316,151401,1,0,0:0:0
    320,308,151518,1,0,0:0:0
    296,296,151635,1,2,0:0:0
    272,284,151752,1,0,0:0:0
    248,268,151870,6,2,P|196:279|172:331,1,115

11. 02:33:276 (6) - remove clap from the end
12. 02:34:213 (8) - a linear one looks better, I think: http://puu.sh/1YKwf
13. 02:35:620 (1) - booring and a bit ugly, divide it into two: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601916
14. 02:39:370 (1) - you better bend it to the opposite side (t least it plays better for me that way)
15. 02:40:307 (4) - add a little curve to fit 02:40:776 (5)
16. 02:43:120 (1,2) - better make them curvy too: http://puu.sh/1YKDm (don't forget about 02:44:409 (4) going around it: http://puu.sh/1YKDI)
17. 02:45:932 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - well okay, but fix the spacing here: 02:45:463 (2,3)
18. 02:48:276 (6) - remove clap from the end
19. 02:49:213 (2) - ^
20. 02:49:682 (3) - I hear that you skipped that sound at 02:49:916, so you better make it 1/4 shorter and put a note on the blue tick
21. 03:00:229 and the whole quiet part: don't use 100% volume here. Go down to 50 and increase it step by step
22. 03:01:870 (7) - newcombo
23. 03:03:745 (2) - ^ (remove it from the repeating slider before)
24. 03:07:143 (2) - better replace finish with a whistle here

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1. 03:08:432 (5,6) - that's even better than a similar pattern but with a note in between
2. 03:10:073 (4,5,6) - unstack it to keep a player on the move: http://puu.sh/1YKJL
3. 03:10:541 (7) - plays like a filler. Are you sure you can't map something more interesting here?
4. 03:15:698 (1,2,3,1) - doesn't have a flow. I mean, you always have to return the same way you moved before, and this is no good
5. 03:18:041 (1) - what I said about boring and uninteresting slider above
6. 03:21:323 (2,3) - move them 1/2 forward and put a circle on 03:21:323 to follow the music better
7. 03:23:432 (5,6) - what. I mean, it doesn't make sense for me. Either use a lesser distance here and change the second one, or change both sliders
8. 03:25:776 - add a circle
9. 03:28:588 (5) - well I remember I wrote it somewhere up there that I personally don't find long sliders entertaining and/or fitting in most of cases, so you should know what to do :Р
10. 03:30:698 (1,2,3) - doesn't have a flow, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601948 (don't forget to move 03:32:104 (2) somewhere or swap some notes in your square to keep it going round and round)
11. 03:33:041 (5) - long slider reminder
12. 03:33:979 (2,3) - swap them, it'll play a lot better (at least for me)
13. 03:36:323 (2,3,4) - these three sliders have eeeexactly the same problem as 01:51:323 (2,3,4), so you should know what to do. Also, remove a clap from 03:35:620 (1). In short, something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601958 should work perfectly. Try it out:
    
    SPOILER

    96,56,215620,6,2,P|54:216|215:254,1,368,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    296,92,216323,1,0,0:0:0
    132,188,216557,2,2,P|112:280|160:349,1,184,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    328,148,217025,2,2,P|276:69|193:43,1,184,0|2,0:0|0:0,2:0:0
    160,349,217495,5,4,0:0:0

That's it. If you have any questions or don't understand my thoughts due to my limited vocabulary, catch me on IRC!

Skrillex<3

Hi.

Easy
01:03:745 (1,2) - Unstack pls, it would be weird for begginers.
01:39:370 (1,2) - ^
01:40:307 (3) - Ending this slider in 01:40:776 - will make it sound better and look nicer.

I do like what you're doing with this diff.

Normal
01:25:073 (1) - make it a slider.
01:32:573 (1) - ^
01:47:573 (1) - ^
02:07:495 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - nope. It sounds and looks ugly. Look at this:

Not the shape, but the combination, that will sound good.

03:10:073 (1) - slider pls.
03:17:573 (1) - ^

This diff needs a remap 'cuz most of the shapes are made with the old editor and they look ugly. :<

Ticl!ck's Hard
01:40:541 - add note here?

Amazing work. Just amazing.

Insane
00:35:737 (1) - What about mapping this instead of making a spinner? It breaks the flow imo.
02:20:854 - add a break here pls.

Hmm. I like your style of overmapping :3
GL with rank!

OH MAI GOD SKRILLEX! <3

Asked to check out the Insane difficulty for aesthetics and flow ((I assumed)). I think the 1/6 is fine personally, seeing it fits the music; but you should get some more opinions first! ♥

[Insane]

1. 00:26:948 (4, 5, 6, 7) - I actually believe that it would flow best and be more natural to the player ((and fit the music better in a way)) if you had made the circles come after the short sliders!
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:690 (1) - This slider wasn't ended properly; should be moved to a 1/4 red tick that comes after where it ends as of now; then make sure the following circles after it are spaced properly with distance snap.
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:57:651 (9) - I do believe that this would flow better if it was flipped vertically instead; goes in the direction the first slider and note after it was headed as well.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:08:198 (4) - May you please not stack this under (3)? It kind of ruins the great flow you had on the playfield spacing things out and having jumps.
5. 01:10:073 (6) - Same as mentioned above.
6. 01:28:588 (5) - From here to the end of this combo pattern- the flow seems off to me proceeding from the slider, seeing that it goes downwardsand back in the direction of where the slider started- I would say change the slider shape or find another way to make the pattern more freeflowing in a different way? ((re-map the pattern and try to find something that flows better)).
7. 01:40:776 - I think it's vital to have a note here; there's clearly a important sound/beat present in the music and i do believe it would bring more emphasis to the map if this was added; ((to be honest I thought there was one here already so it felt kind of weird to play!))
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:56:010 - Same as stated previously.
9. 02:02:573 (1) - Shorten the slider to the third repeat and add a note here instead?

AkagamiNamikaze wrote:

Hi. hey!!

Easy
01:03:745 (1,2) - Unstack pls, it would be weird for begginers. imo its fine, the approachcircles should well enough be an indicator of the time you need to click.
01:39:370 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:40:307 (3) - Ending this slider in 01:40:776 - will make it sound better and look nicer. I really wanted to accent that last part of the phrase because it's so poppy and needs to be stressed! I discussed the rhythm with some others and it looks like the syncopation should be easy to understand as well.

I do like what you're doing with this diff. thanks!

Normal
01:25:073 (1) - make it a slider.
01:32:573 (1) - ^
01:47:573 (1) - ^
02:07:495 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - nope. It sounds and looks ugly. Look at this:

SPOILER

Not the shape, but the combination, that will sound good.

03:10:073 (1) - slider pls.
03:17:573 (1) - ^

This diff needs a remap 'cuz most of the shapes are made with the old editor and they look ugly. :< uhhh, dw it will get a full remap. Sorry you modded this diff! ;_;

Ticl!ck's Hard
01:40:541 - add note here?

Amazing work. Just amazing.

Insane
00:35:737 (1) - What about mapping this instead of making a spinner? It breaks the flow imo. okay!
02:20:854 - add a break here pls.stylisticly, i don't think it fits. idk, i'll get some more opinions!

Hmm. I like your style of overmapping :3 hue
GL with rank!

Thank yew <3

omg fuck you SMIC


ohyeah hi, from my modding queue

[Easy]
00:52:495 (1) - 01:50:620 (1) - Just suggestion: Keep clap even if there is a whistle.
02:25:073 (4) - I'll just assume you didn't want to end the map here cause you didn't finish this diff yet :>

[Normal]
00:52:495 (1) - 01:50:620 (1) - Just suggestion: Keep clap even if there is a whistle. Again : P (Only if you did it in Easy)
01:49:682 (4) - New combo?
03:34:682 (4) - ^

[TicCl!ck's Hard]
00:40:659 (4) - Make a small curve in the slider. Like 00:41:596 (2) just not in the same way.
00:52:495 (1) - 01:50:620 (1) - Just suggestion: Keep clap even if there is a whistle. (Only if this was done in Easy/Normal too)
02:10:659 (4) - Make a small curve in the slider
02:11:245 (1) - ^

[Insane]
01:08:432 (1) - Use same slider as (2)
01:25:776 - 01:27:651 - Just wondering why there's nothing here
02:52:495 (1) - Keep combo


Nice map, nice song. And because you are SMIC, star : D

Re-made some parts to follow the music better, thanks for modding (also fixed some missing notes).
[http://puu.sh/23zcd]

Pls finish normal
the map is too good for graveyard ;_;

i sinned and added an sb

So please redownload!

this new sb makes me wanna blink al the time and my eyes feel quite incomfortable, maybe it's just me but I don't really find it acceptable

i heavily dislike the new SB, as stated above, it's too confusing and uncomfortable

Alright, it was for practice anyway, I'll take it off

GOOOOOO to ranking plzzzzzz!!!!!!!!
it a good map thank for you create !

Well, I would like to help polishing the map's visuals.

I urge you to change the current 1024x768 BG to this one which is widescreen (1366x768) and rankable (check guidelines)



It would look pretty neat if you did this, if you decide not to well then I guess it's your map.

Oh sweet! Thanks. :p

also update i finally figured out howto map normal

nice beatmap
i

Gave my opinion on spaced stream/confusing slider/area after kiai \:D/

As well as a wonderful playtest and advice. <3

and a wonderful star so you beat CDFA \:D/

How about AR9 at insane? With 8 objects are placed heap, with hr AR is 10 +drain+od+cs, 9 is better imo =\

Can I do a CtB guest difficulty?

nice beatmap
the skin is good and the timing is perfect

On hard, there are really too many streams. Consider making less harder streams, to keep the spread in order.

It's okay, though. It's not that hard to play, since this song has relatively average BPM (not too slow nor too fast)

and because I love Tick's way to place streams <3

fak new page

General
resolution of reversearrow.png should be exactly 128x128 (currently 125x125).
there is additional space in TicClick's diff between "TicClick Scary", remove it.
i think your offset is early a bit. i'd use +5 to yours. so 0.

Insane
AR8 for so many streamy parts? i'd say ar9, but up to you
01:00:932 (4,5,6,7) - in places like that your whistles sound off, 01:01:401 (6) - whistle should be set to the start, not to the end, also + sliderbodywhistle there. there are few places like that, rest sounds good, just try to follow music~ (yes i'm too lazy to pick all of them orz)
02:20:737 - you have a break is a same place in music before
02:28:120 (1) - two different sliderspeeds on one slider is unrankable
02:37:963 (2,3) - that's how it should be imo http://puu.sh/2Hp99.jpg
02:39:213 - very strong 1/6, i'd add two notes or slider : http://puu.sh/2Hpcs.jpg
02:42:182 (7) - whistle in the miiddle of slider sounds awkward
02:51:791 (6) - 5% of volume for note is unrankable, everything should be hearable, 20% here as min, reaise volume for nex soft section too
overall: some places with sliderspeed changes feel unnatural. i'd call it overusing, but oh well, it looks good on kiai time

TicCl!ck's Hard
cool diff, nothing to say. only one : if mapper will change ar in insane to 9, better increase ar here to 8.

Normal
00:16:870 (1,2) - spacing
00:27:182 (2,3,4) - hard to read, use slider+reverse instead?
01:25:541 - i'd add note here + whistle
01:31:401 (3) - beeter replace nc here from next note, it follows music more
01:32:573 (4) - suggest to remove(it's off from those 1/2 sounds)
01:46:401 (3,1,2,3) - ^ same
70% only? is it unfinished? oO

Easy
00:35:620 (1,2) - different quantity of reverses is bad for Easy. turn 2 into 2 regular sliders
01:02:807 (3,4,1,2) - stacks with different time (1/1 and 1/2 here) is bad too, try to avoid it, as example, stacks olny for 1/2, 1/1 - regular spacing. oh wait, you use more 1/1 later, unstack 1/2 less work for you~
01:39:370 (1,2) - ^
02:35:620 (1,2) - hidden stacks are not welcome is Easy, change if possible
02:50:620 (1,2,3) - ^
03:05:620 (1) - imo, finish fits better than whistle here
03:36:557 (2,3,1) - why so close to each other? oO


i'd give "star" icon, but unfinished normal makes me sad.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
pls revive it ;_;

We want rank!!!!

All finally clear.

Aleks, I followed most of your points, thanks for mod. o3o

feel free to star

everyone can now cheer

i finally resized the arrow by 3 pixels

still dont see the point, but professionalism is okay! \:D/]

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oh and normals done

so FINALLY

we can actually try to rank this! \:D/

Pls add this in description ;_;

http://puu.sh/2GpLo.osz

Awesome <3

Hi, Random mod because i found some things that maybe could help you, feel free to ignore them ^-^

[Insane]

00:16:171 (4) - I would move this to x:500 y:312. The reason is: It looks better with the next slider. Of course, yeah, it is harder to play, but with the direction of 00:15:703 (3) - you have to get there somehow anyway, just now you have to move your mouse a bit faster.
00:23:906 (8) - Just for aestetics (or however this is written): Move this a bit to the left.
00:38:437 (3,3) - I would add new combo here, just to get really sure that there is a SV change.
00:57:187 (7,8,9,10) - I don't think this extended sliders are needed, I think if you make them 1/4 shorter it will still be awesome to play (imo even better, i like listening to them more than the current version)
Not sure about that but:
01:25:546 (1) - remove NC
01:26:250 (2) - add NC

02:03:750 (1,2,3,4) - Between 1 and 2 i can see a rotation, but not at the others, why? I think it would fit
02:14:660 - You added SV changes here too, same NC suggestions as above
02:50:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can definetly improve that Star pattern, it looks weird (maybe its just me XD)

You really did a nice job here, the map is really very fitting with the song Sorry for the mod, but i felt like it :c, as I said, feel free to ignore

[TicClicks Hard]

00:50:625 (1) - Move this one to x: 128 y: 184? It would flow pretty well with the previous slider

Lol, that's the only suggestion i have so far, xD I really like the stacks!

[Normal]

AI Mod tells something about the spacing (cross the tick Distance Snap) Maybe you should check that, not sure if AI Mod is right oô

[Easy]

Same for easy! (as in normal)

Normal and Easy look fine for me, good luck for rank!

take my star for this awesome job :3

Irreversible wrote:

Hi, Random mod because i found some things that maybe could help you, feel free to ignore them ^-^

[Insane]

00:16:171 (4) - I would move this to x:500 y:312. The reason is: It looks better with the next slider. Of course, yeah, it is harder to play, but with the direction of 00:15:703 (3) - you have to get there somehow anyway, just now you have to move your mouse a bit faster. Flows well, done!
00:23:906 (8) - Just for aestetics (or however this is written): Move this a bit to the left. you missed an 'h' aesthetics. anyhow, i moved it a bit further to the left. not much, because it's supposed to play like a stack!
00:38:437 (3,3) - I would add new combo here, just to get really sure that there is a SV change. agreed. done.
00:57:187 (7,8,9,10) - I don't think this extended sliders are needed, I think if you make them 1/4 shorter it will still be awesome to play (imo even better, i like listening to them more than the current version) oh dear, this has been an on-going issue with these 1/6 sliders. obviously I added them in and that means I thought they looked and played fine and I still think they do. at this point, I think it's just a matter of preferance. :s i have some people telling me to change and some people telling me to keep. im going to stick to my gut and keep it for now i think XD
Not sure about that but:
01:25:546 (1) - remove NC oh, nice catch. done and
01:26:250 (2) - add NC done

02:03:750 (1,2,3,4) - Between 1 and 2 i can see a rotation, but not at the others, why? I think it would fit remapped this pattern.
02:14:660 - You added SV changes here too, same NC suggestions as above le done
02:50:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can definetly improve that Star pattern, it looks weird (maybe its just me XD) waaaat how? :c

You really did a nice job here, the map is really very fitting with the song Sorry for the mod, but i felt like it :c, as I said, feel free to ignore never feel bad for modding! a mapper saying he doesnt want a mod is like saying you dont want free money and bacon. :3

[TicClicks Hard]

00:50:625 (1) - Move this one to x: 128 y: 184? It would flow pretty well with the previous slider fixed it upon his request :p also adjusted the angle of (3)

Lol, that's the only suggestion i have so far, xD I really like the stacks!

[Normal]

AI Mod tells something about the spacing (cross the tick Distance Snap) Maybe you should check that, not sure if AI Mod is right oô

[Easy]

Same for easy! (as in normal)

Normal and Easy look fine for me, good luck for rank! yay

AIMod didn't show anything for me.

take my star for this awesome job :3

Thank you so much for the mod and star!

LOL first i was like wtf everything written in red, gg xDD but cool that you changed nearly everything

Good luck!

oh gosh i came with that image. thx xD

also, good luck. Just a little more for rank!

Hi~ Just wanted to try modding this map. I wub this song. :>
Ignore this if its not that good. ^^

[Easy]

If possible, please maintain proper distance snapping on Easy Difficulties. It could also aid the flow of the map

02:32:812 - Add note here with Clap Hitsound. Sounds better and has some nice flow in it.
02:40:312 (2) - Suggest not stacking it on the slider?
02:47:812 (4) - Same as the 1st one.
03:25:312 (3) - Same with 2nd.

[Normal]

00:58:593 (2) - Suggest moving this to X: 100 Y: 372 to have a better blanket.
02:24:375 (1) - Another Stack.
02:31:875 (1) - ^ Sorry, i feel like stacking these sliders can give trouble to some beginners.
02:45:000 (1) - Might wanna move this slider? It overlaps 02:45:937 (2).

The rest are already good. Just some minor problems that i hope could be fixed.
Good luck on your map!!

EXAMS ARE ALMOST DONE o3o

On the other hand, Freezer, I followed some of your points, but I think the stacks can stay because they are for the most part 1/2 apart and pretty readable. I'll see if anyone else complains.