396,124,24370,6,0,B|400:100|436:84|472:100|472:132,1,100,8|0
472,224,24838,2,0,B|468:248|432:264|396:248|396:216,1,100,8|0

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:15:932 (3) - save this pattern for the "rock'n'roll" phrase - it works better there and plays awkwardly elsewhere because its less emphasized
00:19:682 (3) - ^ yeah all of these
00:30:932 (2,1) - you're getting a bit ahead of yourself difficulty-wise. Maybe ditch the repeat on 2
00:33:510 (4,1) - difficulty again and also if you are going to do this please please please line the circle up with the slider
I guess what I'm trying to say is, having notes half a beat apart is fine but you are doing it too often, save it for the parts of the song that have a really emphasized pair I completely remapped the beginning, so consider these points... uh... done...?
01:09:838 (1,2) - this is a good example of a time when its okay to have them half a beat apart, in fact it adds some spice and players should be able to handle it
01:29:057 (2,1,2,3) - too much Changed, but I need an opinion on this ;_; I need the new (3) because there's a bass there that sounds so myahhh alone
01:37:026 (2,1,2,3) - ^ ^
01:44:526 (3,1) - iffy Kept. The 1/2 slider stresses the melody. :O
02:23:901 (2,1) - i have no idea what part of the music this is supposed to go to Indeed, changed to a hitcircle.
02:27:182 (2,1) - line them up please done
02:31:401 (2,1) - again ^
02:39:370 (2,3) - ^ Changed (1)
02:50:620 (1) - bit heavy on the finishes I took off the last Finish and it sounded awesome. :O
03:04:448 (2) - i dont really like this but you can keep it if you want Changed to a 1/1 slider and a hitcircle.
03:14:057 (2,1,2,3) - too hard for an Easy changed as before, need opinions
03:22:026 (2,1,2,3) - ^ ^

[Normal]
00:17:807 (5) - given what you have in Easy, this should deeefinitely end on blue Scaled down.
01:18:745 (1) - add a whistle to the second to last hit instead of a clap; the clap isnt audible enough done
01:33:745 (1,2,3,4) - the sudden slowdown feels like i ran into a tree XD I changed (2)-(5), should be a bit better.
01:41:010 (4) - remove clap please done
02:10:073 (2,3) - i dont know if its the storyboarded hitsound or 3 itself but this feels weird It's actually a slidertick clap. :O But um, imo it's fine because it kind of sets up the claps on beats 2 and 4, I'll get more opinions on this matter, however.
02:28:120 (3) - nice
02:23:432 (2,3,1) - nitpicky but spacing on this and all others like it Uhh, they're spaced closer because of the SV slowdown, it's still 0.9x. Again, will get more opinions on this!
03:05:151 (4,5) - god don't do this to your players. Make this a slider. done.
03:18:745 (1,2,3,4) - tree lol'd

...wait what the hell i said i was only modding Easy. Oh well, extra stuffs for you.

Gabe wrote:

Little Remod.

[General]
There's some inconsistency with the combo colours. Mostly the SliderBorder.
TicClick doesn't have any SliderBorder and Ex's Taiko Oni has a SliderBorder of 255,255,255 and the other are 215,215,215 I forced all diffs white. TicClick, if you see this, please update your map to get the forced sliderborder! D:

[Easy]
00:35:620 (1) - As I saw on Insane, you have a Finish here. You could replace the Whistle by a Finish. Also it sounds better because with the current whistle it sounds more soft than it supposed to be. Done
00:36:088 (2,3) - Delete these two Objects. Like you did on Insane in some ways but instead, you have a spiner. ...I guess since the remap, this point is null? Hurhur...
01:13:588 (4) - *nazi* One grid left to align with (3) Eh? Looks perfectly linear to me, you can even check with Shift.
01:14:057 (5) - ^ ^

[Insane]
00:24:370 & 00:24:838 - These two sliders are weird and ugly in some ways. Lot's of people on #modhelp was talking about it. I'm suggesting you to change it for this Haha, those sliders bring back good memories. >w< But they have to go. Replaced!

396,124,24370,6,0,B|400:100|436:84|472:100|472:132,1,100,8|0
472,224,24838,2,0,B|468:248|432:264|396:248|396:216,1,100,8|0

CDFA wrote:

ALLRIGHT GONNA MOD THIS

Skin:
Your repeat arrow is 125x125, when it should be 128x128 :> asdasd 3 pixels is okay! :<

INSANE:
01:10:307 (4) - Space this away from the previous slider so there's no overlap moved (2)~
01:15:932 (5) - Move this so there isn't overlap I got so caughtup in this I ended up doing quite a few of my sliders LOL
01:41:245 (1) - Make this into something more moe I made a better blanket, if that's what you meant.

Normal:
00:31:870 (3) - Make this into 2 sliders or something done
00:35:620 (1) - Center this on y-axis? done
01:39:370 (3) - Make this into 2 sliders or something I think it's fine here; It makes the phrase seem more connected imo
03:24:370 (3) - ^ ^

Easy:
01:25:307 (3) - This thing is too small to have the curve noticable, and it looks weird ;~; changed!
01:39:370 (1) - Make this into 2 sliders or something as with normal
01:47:807 (3) - Same thing as before changed
02:20:971 - Unneccesary break okie
03:05:971 - ^ ^
03:24:370 (1) - Make this into 2 sliders or something as with other

Cools.

1. Add album name, Scary Monsters and Nice Sprites, to tags

1. 00:33:745 (1,2,3,4) - even if you want it to be symmetrical, you better swap 3 and 4 or change all the pattern to something else (for example, two 1/1 sliders or two 1/2 repeating ones)
2. 00:38:432 (2,3) - how the hell is a newbie supposed to read this? Here's what I suggest:
   SPOILER

   
   The same goes for all patterns with 3/4 gap on Easy (00:40:307 (2,3) - and so on)
3. 00:37:963 (1) - I don't think you need NC here, because you put it on previous note. Moments like this one don't always need to be marked
4. 00:45:229 (1) - start it 1/2 earlier
5. 00:51:088 (4) - remove whistle from the beginning and add it to repeat
6. 00:48:745 (2) - NC
7. 00:53:432 (3) - okay, there are two things I want to say:
   
   1. Maybe it's just me, but I don't like to skip downbeat (you just did it at 00:54:370). It's not that important on low diffs, but anyway, don't do it too often
   2. You mixed clap with whistle. It works sometimes, but the best solution is to use either standard normal clap or standard normal whistle, because they sound a bit different, and clap makes whistle sound rough and harsh. When it happens, I usually remove clap (it exists in music, so it won't be lost completely) and leave whistle.
8. 01:04:682 (2,4) - I think they're supposed to be.. um.. alike?
9. 01:06:557 (4) - I think you don't need a whistle on its end
10. 01:12:182 (3) - ^ (you could add whistle on 01:13:354 instead, but there's nothing, so just remove it)
11. 01:19:213 (1) - I know it's real 1/3, but I'd remove one repeat and make it 1/2 instead for better playing
12. 01:23:432 (3) - remove whistle from slider's body
13. 01:29:057 (2) - looks broken, what if you change it a little?
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:33:276 (3) - move it up and left (keep the spacing at 1.0)
15. 01:35:620 (1) - man, you really need to add whistle on its beginning and body!
16. 01:39:370 (1) - oh no, make it curvy instead
    SPOILER

    
17. 01:43:588 (2) - move it up and use approach circle from previous note to fix curve. AR is low, so people may notice that it's not good enough
18. 01:45:932 (3) - remove whistle from its body

1. 01:50:620 (1) - it's better to make it 1/1 slider without repeats to follow vocals (lol)
2. 01:51:557 (2) - I would use 3 1/1 notes instead of this repeating thing because I don't like many repeats in a row, so it can be avoided here
3. 02:07:495 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - that's too long! Please, use 1/1 gap somewhere for better gameplay
4. 02:09:370 (3) - also, if you put NCs on every big white tick, put it on this slider
5. 02:23:901 (2) - better remove clap (doesn't fit here)
6. 02:26:245 (1) - ^
7. 02:29:526 (2) - ^
8. 02:28:120 (1) - I've got something better:
   SPOILER

   
   

   196,96,148120,6,0,B|132:96|132:96|80:96|44:128|44:180,1,200,4|2

9. 02:31:401 (2) - remove clap, please
10. 02:33:745 (1) - ^
11. 02:35:620 (1) - I don't know, you skipped good beat at 02:37:963. What if you map through this spinner?
12. 02:39:370 (2) - make it 1/2 shorter, it's Easy, not Normal or something else
13. 02:40:307 (3) - whoops, you broke its end
14. 02:41:245 (1) - remove all the claps, please
15. 02:42:182 (2) - I think you should fix it:
    SPOILER

    
16. 02:43:120 (1) - remove clap
17. 02:44:057 (2,1) - take a look:
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:45:932 (2) - oh. Please, make it less compressed (at least 1.7x longer)
19. 02:47:338 (1) - remove clap from its beginning
20. 02:50:620 (1) - remove finish from its end. Also, better solution:
    SPOILER

    
21. 02:52:026 (1) - remove claps?
22. 02:59:995 (1,2) - seriously, they don't look nice
23. 03:08:432 (3) - remove whistle from slider body
24. 03:14:057 (2) - the same as before. In short, just copy and revert the whole previous kiai part, lol

1. 00:27:182 (3,4) - they're not centered, dunno if it's good or bad
2. 00:29:057 (5) - make it curvy?
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:29:995 (1) - remove finish. Also, 00:29:995 (1,2) contain too many straight lines, it's always better to avoid overusing them
4. 00:44:760 (5) - use two notes instead of it or change it a little:
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:45:229 (1) - remove whistle
6. 00:49:682 (1) - remove whistle from beginning
7. 01:16:870 (1,2,3,4) - do you really need these stacks?
8. 01:18:745 (1) - no. Please, don't use so many repeats, it makes this slider hard to read
9. 01:22:495 (1,2,3) - unnecessary stack again
10. 01:24:370 (1,2,3) - ^. Get rid of all of them, and fix new combos
11. 01:35:620 (5) - add new combo and whistle to its beginning, body and end
12. 01:41:245 (1) - either remove whistle from its beginning, or add it to the next slider
13. 01:48:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - please no, not on Normal
14. 01:52:612 — remove this green line
15. 02:07:495 (1,2) - might be a problem to play at first times
16. 02:14:526 — use 70% instead of 100
17. 02:18:745 (1) - remove whistle from beginning

1. 02:22:495 (1) - add whistle to its body?
2. 02:25:776 (4) - remove clap? I'm not sure, though
3. 02:29:526 (4) - remove clap
4. 02:31:870 (1) - guess what's wrong with it (tags: grid, offscreen)
5. 02:39:135 (4) - don't stack it. Also, remove clap
6. 02:42:182 (1,1) - there should be more empty space between them
7. 02:43:354 (2) - I wish you could go another way, it's a little bit confusing
8. 02:47:573 (2) - it starts on red tick, better use two notes instead (it plays weird for me)
9. 02:49:682 (3) - ok, I don't like how it plays too (mostly because of its shape and position)
10. 02:50:620 (1) - I know how to help you:
    SPOILER

    
11. 02:52:026 (1,2) - remove claps, please, they don't fit
12. 03:06:791 (1) - better remove it (too sudden and loud)
13. 03:07:495 (1,2,3) - here we go again. Please, don't stack notes too often! People like to move, not to move and then suddently stop (also, this is Normal, don't forget)
14. 03:18:041 (2) - remove clap from beginning
15. 03:20:620 (5) - NC, whistles on the whole slider (body and both ends)
16. 03:26:245 (1,2) - think about adding whistle to 2 or removing it from 1
17. 03:30:698 (4) - plays a little bit strange
18. 03:33:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no

1. 00:37:260 (1) - whistle, please
2. 00:41:948 (4,5,1) - you can make it better, can't you?
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:43:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - space it out, please
4. 00:44:760 (1,2) - this speed-up is barely readable and doesn't fit at all
5. 00:47:807 (5,6,7,8,9) - / 00:49:330 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - think of having the same spacing in streams (or two-three kinds of it) and try not to mix it
6. 00:55:776 (5) - pointless, I can't see that it wobs in game mode, only in editor (because it shows anchors). Also, it overlaps with (4)

1. 00:58:120 (1) - what
2. 01:05:620 (1) - what again
3. 01:06:088 (2) - don't stack it
4. 01:08:432 (4,5) - shouldn't there be more distance between them?
5. 01:11:127 (6) - you don't need it
6. 01:11:479 (2,3) - better use triplet instead of it
7. 01:12:182 (5,7) - I don't like how they look to me
8. 01:18:745 (1,2,3) - I don't like it too, maybe because there are too many straight lines. *sigh*
9. 01:29:878 (11) - remove whistle
10. 01:30:698 (1,2,3) - how about this:
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:31:401 (6) - what's wrong with it? There's a very little distance between its ends
12. 01:35:737 (1,1) - remove clap, doesn't fit. Also, think about mapping through the spinner
13. 01:39:838 (3) - looks broken
14. 01:41:127 (7) - don't stack it, please:
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:41:245 (1) - noo, you ruined it by adding repeats. Remove them all:
    SPOILER

    
16. 01:43:120 (5,6) - better use usual stream without sliders. Also, if you applied previous suggestion, thing about avoiding overlap
17. 02:09:838 (3,5,6) - my eyes, I can see only overlaps
18. 02:14:760 (8) - start it at 02:14:526 (instead of previous note), add some notes after it
19. 02:15:112 (1) - five seconds of spinning, I think it's too long for Insane. Consider making it shorter (end at 02:18:276)

1. 02:24:252 (9,1) - fix spacing
2. 02:26:245 (1) - fat one
3. 02:28:002 (10,1) - fix spacing
4. 02:31:752 (9,1) - you^ know^ what^ to^ do^
5. 02:32:807 (3) - you don't need to stack it
6. 02:33:745 (1) - I'd make it 1/4 shorter and start next slider right after it
7. 02:35:503 (8,1) - spacing (please don't tell me you're about to map streams with jumps)
8. 02:37:495 (5) - bad-looking because of its shape
9. 02:37:963 (6,1) - I don't think that 4x speed-up is a good idea
10. 02:39:956 (5) - no! Sliders are intended to slide, not spin or do something else
11. 02:40:776 (9) - well.. I'll just skip it
12. 02:43:120 (1,2,3) -
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:46:752 (9,1) - spacing? Anyone?
14. 02:49:682 (3) - doesn't look good for me, unfortunately. Maybe there are too many straight lines again
15. 02:50:854 (2,4) - remove finishes from these notes and avoid spamming same hitsounds
16. 02:59:995 (the whole hexagon thing) - why are we running in circles? Make something funny, for example, triangle jumps instead of second hexagon:
    SPOILER

    
    

    388,268,181870,5,0
    256,39,182104,1,0
    123,268,182338,1,8
    388,115,182573,1,0
    123,115,182807,1,0
    256,344,183042,1,8
    388,116,183276,1,0
    124,268,183510,1,8

17. 03:06:557 (1) - remove it and add something to 03:07:495?
18. 03:08:432 (4,5,6,7) - fix spacing, please
19. 03:10:541 (8) - ewww, no
20. 03:14:409 (6,7,8,9,1) - uncomfortable to play (I don't say it's hard, it's exactly uncomfortable because of mixing notes and sliders in 1/4 and having different gap between sliders)
21. 03:18:041 (1,2,3) - boring
22. 03:20:620 (1) - remove clap, add whistle
23. 03:26:245 (1,2,3,4) - they look ugly, sorry. Try to fix it, for example, make them curvy or something
24. 03:29:409 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - stacking a part of the stream is bad. Either unstack it, or stack it with slider's end
25. 03:31:870 (1) - it looks poor, please get rid of that little thing on its end
26. 03:33:627 (6,1) - unstack it
27. 03:35:620 (1) - add whistle to its body and beginning. Also, I'm sorry to say that but you better remove it and make something interesting to play. Seriously

Marcin wrote:

[Easy]
00:15:932 (2) - how about, rotating a bit (every slider like this were normal, just this one is weird ) I don't quite understand you, but I hope I fixed it...?
[Normal]
00:21:557 (5) - i'm not sure why there is no whistle, and instead its put to (1) :< Thanks for catching that, fixed!
[Hard]
Nothing here ~ (noticeable copy & paste /me runs)
[Insane]
00:16:166 (4,5,6,7,1) - - spacing, i mean, later you make other than here :/ You'll notice (6,7,1) form their own triangle as well. This whole section is about those yummy triangles. :>
02:40:073 (6,7,8,9) - WHY STOP WHILE STREAMING So true, changed spacing.
Nothing to mod here, but still /o/ hope you get ranked this

SuperMICrophone wrote:

Thanks, but no kudos, it was a pretty short mod. :< But again, your input was greatly appreciated! \:3/

EDIT: Actually, have a KD, I edited stuff in my map and you deserve something for taking the time. o3o

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

[size=150]Hi~! ♡ ~ Boss Modding Team ~ ♡
Just to let you know that i don't really like the song therefore the mod might be pretty rough... sorry about that....

Insane
the slider velocity is kinda high... just saying... lul
01:34:682 (1,2,3,4) - suggest to make the square smaller like this . just a suggestion looks good, added.
02:24:252 (9,1) - i think these two should be really close in order not to confuse people, cauz after a short stream, if there is a bigger spacing, people will think there's a stop, so i suggest to make them closer. I wanted to stress the little bounce when you switch from the slow part to the normal-paced music. It's perfectly playable, anyway.
02:28:002 (10,1) - Also these two ^
actually you got a lot of this kinda pattern...

MKSTAR26 wrote:

>Bancho on Mac
>expects uploading the map to work

SuperMICrophone wrote:

The name is "Rock 'n' Roll". HOWEVER, on the BSS post, the name is "Rock N' Roll", and you'll notice the difficulties exclude Ex's Taiko Oni and include a Hard. This is an extremely early version of my map... so erm, I don't know if I can fix this issue, but I don't have a copy of the up-to-date map on my Mac.

tetsutaro wrote:

Hi there! This is a mod for my modding queue!

[General]
I see one spot of profanity ( 03:06:088 ) ... Doesn't affect much though.

[Easy]
Serves a good preview for the song.
00:35:620 (1,2) - A bit of confusing (quite hard to see it's actually a 3/4 beat slider) but it's alright I guess. I think it adds a nice twist, and there's no overlap or unreadability I think so far, so I think this'll stay.
00:37:495 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - Unless it is on purpose, reset the combo as (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) Very good catch, don't know why I didn't catch that before. o_o
00:44:995 (1,1) - Moving this spinner to the end of the "Rock n' Roll, Rock n' Roll..." area? Tried it out, but I like the current version better.
01:20:854 - Fill up the break "OMG~" with a spinner. I like this standing on its own, it's also kind of a break.
03:06:088 - Fill up the "I f**k you" with a spinner. ^

[Normal]
01:20:854 - Fill up the break "OMG~" with a spinner. As with Easy.
01:35:620 (1) - Great work on controlling the slider so that each segment is 1 beat! Thank you!
02:43:354 (2) - This is covered by 02:42:182 (1) and its Elite Beat sign. Mmmm, I've got a lot of mixed opinions about this. I think it's fine because the player can see the circle before the hitburst from (1) appears, however I understand your reasoning. When a MAT/BAT (if they ever ;_;) checks this I'll be sure to point it out to them.
01:42:182 (2,3,1) and 03:27:182 (2,3,1) - (2) 's end is over (3) and (1) ' head. Move things around so that these three circles become a little triangle would be a good suggestion. I redid the patterning a bit to make it look neater.

[Taiko Oni]
00:37:260 (129) - Moving to 00:37:026 (129) ?

[Hard and Insane]
These two are out of my ability to play.
Even if I think something is wrong, it's probably acceptable because it's Hard and Insane.
So... nice flow?

Star when the 's are fixed or justified.

tetsutaro wrote:

Hi there! This is a mod for my modding queue!

[Taiko Oni]
00:37:260 (129) - Moving to 00:37:026 (129) ? nope because the "pow" sound is in 00:37:260

1. Offbeat Removal - why i point something like this more important? because those patterns doesn't follow the song, also it's a beat awkward feeling when i compare it. i'm really tired pointing those offbeats orz
   00:21:791 (2,1,1,1,1) - ddk d
   00:29:291 (2,1,1,1,1) - kdk d
   00:33:041 (2,1,1,1,2) - ddk k
   00:33:745 (1,1,1,1,1) - kkd k
   00:38:080 (1) - remove this.
   00:39:955 (2) - ^
   00:41:830 (1) - ^
   00:43:705 (1) - ^
   00:45:580 (5) - ^
   00:59:877 (1) - ^
   01:20:776 (1,2) - total offbeat, no 1/3 here. its d kk (1/4 snap)
   01:22:729 (3,4,1) - d k
   01:30:932 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - wrong. dkd dkk (1/4 snap)
   01:39:721 (1) - offbeat -> 01:39:760
   01:40:307 (1,1,1,1,1) - find a way to get 1/3 only there.
   01:43:705 (1,2,3) - false deathstream part.
   01:44:174 (3) - neither this.

dialgadu77 wrote:

Is this normal that there is not my Taiko in the mapset?

SuperMICrophone wrote:

Oh, and I'm sorry dialgadu but I think the taiko has to go. I don't think this song needs a taiko, and with the lessening ability to get a taiko mod... idk

1. 00:14:526 (1,2,3,4,1) - well personally I don't like this pattern because you're trying to mix curved stream and that linear slider, and it doesn't fit the whole pattern: 00:14:526 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3). How about http://puu.sh/1YIuN?
2. 00:16:401 (6,7,1) - too intensive for a beginning. Also, you're trying to follow both vocals and the beat with 00:16:635 (7), but I would follow vocals only in the intro
3. 00:24:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - better use linear one to match other patterns around
4. 00:25:307 (8,9) - make them less curvy, they look.. broken? Don't know how to explain
5. 00:34:916 (5) - finish sounds odd, try placing it on the next note before spinner
6. 00:40:659 (4,5,1) - you can make it better by putting 00:41:127 (5,1) on the other side: http://puu.sh/1YIMc. Make sure you didn't forget to put 00:41:596 (2) closer to it lol
7. 00:47:807 - I wouldn't increase SV multipliet here, because spacing gets higher
8. 00:49:565 (6) - it will play better if you bend it to the opposite side (if yes, move it down to keep the spacing between it and the next stream)
9. 00:50:971 (2) - unstack for consistency with 00:51:557 (4)

1. 00:52:846 (2) - two grid right to make a linear triplet
2. 00:53:432 (5,6,7) - in my opinion, it works only with horizontal symmetry. Here I would recommend you to change this pattern to another one (idk really, it just bugs me)
3. 00:54:604 (2,3,4) - ouch, circles are too close to slider end, so I'd try something like http://puu.sh/1YIXy
4. 00:57:182 (7,8,9) - make it better by rotating (9) by -30 degrees (also move it up a bit)
5. 01:04:682 (7,8,9) - it will work better and look nicer if 7's end, 8 and 9's beginning will be on the line: http://puu.sh/1YJ3f. I'd also do the same with 01:06:557 (4,5,6): http://puu.sh/1YJ4K
6. 01:09:370 (1) - I see no point in using this slider, how about replacing it with two circles instead
7. 01:11:245 (1,2,3) - neat

1. 01:24:838 (3,4) - fix the spacing, it plays odd
2. 01:25:541 (1) - there's something wrong with it (idk, looks like you just had no ideas on what to map here and put this as a filler)
3. 01:26:245 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please no (reason is the same as above), better change it to something else cause you just copied the first square pattern with no changes
4. 01:28:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - blargh it plays bad (at least for me). Why don't you delete this loop and map something instead of it? Yeah I hear that sound in the music you mapped, but long sliders are boring and sometimes don't reflect the song's rhythm or don't have a "flow"
5. 01:32:573 (4,5,6) - I would unstack it for a better visual experience (yeah this triangle with a stack in the center looks boring for me): http://puu.sh/1YJn4
6. 01:36:323 (2,3) - move them 1/2 forward and put a note on 01:36:323, they will follow the music really better
7. 01:38:432 (5,6) - looks nice, but I'd prefer it to be more comfortable for playing ("change it somehow so I don't have to move my hand in a way that's a bit unnatural for it")
8. 01:40:307 (5,6) - it's soooo shriveled (found this word in a dictionary lol), so you may want to fix 6's direction and shape
9. 01:43:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - doesn't look nice and accurate, I'd shrink the streams and change their shape: http://puu.sh/1YJC0.
   
   As you might notice, that's nearly the only way to map streams followed by a curvy slider that I like. Maybe it's just me, I don't know, but a "curvy slider and wide-spaced stream" pair rarely looks good.
   
10. 01:51:323 (2,3,4)
    
    1. First of all: 2 and 3 should be moved 1/2 forward to follow the music better. Also, you literally skipped the downbeat on 01:52:495 that has an important meaning for the gameplay. I mean, there should be a note or a slider or something a player can click.
    2. Due to the movements you make to reach the jumps, 01:50:620 (1) should be somewhere on the bottom of the playfield (implying it follows the last jump note).
    3. Don't use linear sliders near the curvy one in this way. They simply don't fit it.

1. 01:52:963 (1) and the whole calm part - you better hitsound it with hitnormal as you did in the very beginning
2. 01:59:760 - nooo, 100% is way too loud. Lower it to 70 or something
3. 02:01:870 (1) - remove it and map it in a proper way, as you mapped all the "together we can play some R&R" parts before
4. 02:04:916 (5) - http://puu.sh/1YKiH is a better idea, seriously
5. map the blue tick at 02:05:502
   
   I see there is a copypasta from the first similar part, so I'll copy and paste my suggestions as well:
   .....
6. 02:10:659 (4,5,1) - you can make it better by putting 02:11:127 (5,1) on the other side (SMIC NOW IMAGINE http://puu.sh/1YIMc BUT MIRRORED). Make sure you didn't forget to put 02:11:596 (2) closer to it lol
7. 02:18:041 - I wouldn't increase SV multipliet here, because spacing gets higher
8. 02:19:565 (6) - it will play better if you bend it to the opposite side (if yes, move it down to keep the spacing between it and the next stream)
   .....
9. 02:25:776 (6) - remove clap from the end
10. 02:29:995 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - there's no need to make it complicated, I suggest a better one: http://puu.sh/1YKr6
    
    SPOILER

    444,72,149995,6,2,P|440:116|461:167,1,86.25,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    484,236,150463,2,2,P|496:272|484:320,1,86.25,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    460,332,150932,5,8,0:0:0
    432,332,151049,1,0,0:0:0
    404,328,151166,1,2,0:0:0
    376,324,151284,1,0,0:0:0
    348,316,151401,1,0,0:0:0
    320,308,151518,1,0,0:0:0
    296,296,151635,1,2,0:0:0
    272,284,151752,1,0,0:0:0
    248,268,151870,6,2,P|196:279|172:331,1,115

11. 02:33:276 (6) - remove clap from the end
12. 02:34:213 (8) - a linear one looks better, I think: http://puu.sh/1YKwf
13. 02:35:620 (1) - booring and a bit ugly, divide it into two: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601916
14. 02:39:370 (1) - you better bend it to the opposite side (t least it plays better for me that way)
15. 02:40:307 (4) - add a little curve to fit 02:40:776 (5)
16. 02:43:120 (1,2) - better make them curvy too: http://puu.sh/1YKDm (don't forget about 02:44:409 (4) going around it: http://puu.sh/1YKDI)
17. 02:45:932 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - well okay, but fix the spacing here: 02:45:463 (2,3)
18. 02:48:276 (6) - remove clap from the end
19. 02:49:213 (2) - ^
20. 02:49:682 (3) - I hear that you skipped that sound at 02:49:916, so you better make it 1/4 shorter and put a note on the blue tick
21. 03:00:229 and the whole quiet part: don't use 100% volume here. Go down to 50 and increase it step by step
22. 03:01:870 (7) - newcombo
23. 03:03:745 (2) - ^ (remove it from the repeating slider before)
24. 03:07:143 (2) - better replace finish with a whistle here

1. 03:08:432 (5,6) - that's even better than a similar pattern but with a note in between
2. 03:10:073 (4,5,6) - unstack it to keep a player on the move: http://puu.sh/1YKJL
3. 03:10:541 (7) - plays like a filler. Are you sure you can't map something more interesting here?
4. 03:15:698 (1,2,3,1) - doesn't have a flow. I mean, you always have to return the same way you moved before, and this is no good
5. 03:18:041 (1) - what I said about boring and uninteresting slider above
6. 03:21:323 (2,3) - move them 1/2 forward and put a circle on 03:21:323 to follow the music better
7. 03:23:432 (5,6) - what. I mean, it doesn't make sense for me. Either use a lesser distance here and change the second one, or change both sliders
8. 03:25:776 - add a circle
9. 03:28:588 (5) - well I remember I wrote it somewhere up there that I personally don't find long sliders entertaining and/or fitting in most of cases, so you should know what to do :Р
10. 03:30:698 (1,2,3) - doesn't have a flow, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601948 (don't forget to move 03:32:104 (2) somewhere or swap some notes in your square to keep it going round and round)
11. 03:33:041 (5) - long slider reminder
12. 03:33:979 (2,3) - swap them, it'll play a lot better (at least for me)
13. 03:36:323 (2,3,4) - these three sliders have eeeexactly the same problem as 01:51:323 (2,3,4), so you should know what to do. Also, remove a clap from 03:35:620 (1). In short, something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/601958 should work perfectly. Try it out:
    
    SPOILER

    96,56,215620,6,2,P|54:216|215:254,1,368,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    296,92,216323,1,0,0:0:0
    132,188,216557,2,2,P|112:280|160:349,1,184,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    328,148,217025,2,2,P|276:69|193:43,1,184,0|2,0:0|0:0,2:0:0
    160,349,217495,5,4,0:0:0

1. 00:26:948 (4, 5, 6, 7) - I actually believe that it would flow best and be more natural to the player ((and fit the music better in a way)) if you had made the circles come after the short sliders!
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:690 (1) - This slider wasn't ended properly; should be moved to a 1/4 red tick that comes after where it ends as of now; then make sure the following circles after it are spaced properly with distance snap.
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:57:651 (9) - I do believe that this would flow better if it was flipped vertically instead; goes in the direction the first slider and note after it was headed as well.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:08:198 (4) - May you please not stack this under (3)? It kind of ruins the great flow you had on the playfield spacing things out and having jumps.
5. 01:10:073 (6) - Same as mentioned above.
6. 01:28:588 (5) - From here to the end of this combo pattern- the flow seems off to me proceeding from the slider, seeing that it goes downwardsand back in the direction of where the slider started- I would say change the slider shape or find another way to make the pattern more freeflowing in a different way? ((re-map the pattern and try to find something that flows better)).
7. 01:40:776 - I think it's vital to have a note here; there's clearly a important sound/beat present in the music and i do believe it would bring more emphasis to the map if this was added; ((to be honest I thought there was one here already so it felt kind of weird to play!))
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:56:010 - Same as stated previously.
9. 02:02:573 (1) - Shorten the slider to the third repeat and add a note here instead?

AkagamiNamikaze wrote:

Hi. hey!!

Easy
01:03:745 (1,2) - Unstack pls, it would be weird for begginers. imo its fine, the approachcircles should well enough be an indicator of the time you need to click.
01:39:370 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:40:307 (3) - Ending this slider in 01:40:776 - will make it sound better and look nicer. I really wanted to accent that last part of the phrase because it's so poppy and needs to be stressed! I discussed the rhythm with some others and it looks like the syncopation should be easy to understand as well.

I do like what you're doing with this diff. thanks!

Normal
01:25:073 (1) - make it a slider.
01:32:573 (1) - ^
01:47:573 (1) - ^
02:07:495 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - nope. It sounds and looks ugly. Look at this:

SPOILER

Not the shape, but the combination, that will sound good.

03:10:073 (1) - slider pls.
03:17:573 (1) - ^

This diff needs a remap 'cuz most of the shapes are made with the old editor and they look ugly. :< uhhh, dw it will get a full remap. Sorry you modded this diff! ;_;

Ticl!ck's Hard
01:40:541 - add note here?

Amazing work. Just amazing.

Insane
00:35:737 (1) - What about mapping this instead of making a spinner? It breaks the flow imo. okay!
02:20:854 - add a break here pls.stylisticly, i don't think it fits. idk, i'll get some more opinions!

Hmm. I like your style of overmapping :3 hue
GL with rank!

Irreversible wrote:

Hi, Random mod because i found some things that maybe could help you, feel free to ignore them ^-^

[Insane]

00:16:171 (4) - I would move this to x:500 y:312. The reason is: It looks better with the next slider. Of course, yeah, it is harder to play, but with the direction of 00:15:703 (3) - you have to get there somehow anyway, just now you have to move your mouse a bit faster. Flows well, done!
00:23:906 (8) - Just for aestetics (or however this is written): Move this a bit to the left. you missed an 'h' aesthetics. anyhow, i moved it a bit further to the left. not much, because it's supposed to play like a stack!
00:38:437 (3,3) - I would add new combo here, just to get really sure that there is a SV change. agreed. done.
00:57:187 (7,8,9,10) - I don't think this extended sliders are needed, I think if you make them 1/4 shorter it will still be awesome to play (imo even better, i like listening to them more than the current version) oh dear, this has been an on-going issue with these 1/6 sliders. obviously I added them in and that means I thought they looked and played fine and I still think they do. at this point, I think it's just a matter of preferance. :s i have some people telling me to change and some people telling me to keep. im going to stick to my gut and keep it for now i think XD
Not sure about that but:
01:25:546 (1) - remove NC oh, nice catch. done and
01:26:250 (2) - add NC done

02:03:750 (1,2,3,4) - Between 1 and 2 i can see a rotation, but not at the others, why? I think it would fit remapped this pattern.
02:14:660 - You added SV changes here too, same NC suggestions as above le done
02:50:625 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can definetly improve that Star pattern, it looks weird (maybe its just me XD) waaaat how? :c

You really did a nice job here, the map is really very fitting with the song Sorry for the mod, but i felt like it :c, as I said, feel free to ignore never feel bad for modding! a mapper saying he doesnt want a mod is like saying you dont want free money and bacon. :3

[TicClicks Hard]

00:50:625 (1) - Move this one to x: 128 y: 184? It would flow pretty well with the previous slider fixed it upon his request :p also adjusted the angle of (3)

Lol, that's the only suggestion i have so far, xD I really like the stacks!

[Normal]

AI Mod tells something about the spacing (cross the tick Distance Snap) Maybe you should check that, not sure if AI Mod is right oô

[Easy]

Same for easy! (as in normal)

Normal and Easy look fine for me, good luck for rank! yay

AIMod didn't show anything for me.

take my star for this awesome job :3

jacob wrote:

https://gist.github.com/peppy/65634825af9a9f237407

SuperMICrophone wrote:

BULLSHIT

UKCKWKSFJLAMDWMS

Ijah wrote:

This can still get ranked since First of the year is still in the rankings BUT the osz is on a remote server.

If you're denied this then I'd suggest you might want to reconsider contributing beatmaps to the osu! community.