timing check~
[Timing]
[Timing]
- BPM 188.000
- Offset 280
don't forget resnap all notes.
FixedGuy wrote:
timing check~
[Timing]
- BPM 188.000
- Offset 280
don't forget resnap all notes.
thanks-Cloudchaser wrote:
☢ Request from my modding queue ☢
In general this map all its ok.
- Suggestions or comments.
- High recommend
Level 9
- the 4th speed (0.5x) has drain less than 4 beat, it might be ok ?
Level 6
- 00:36:503 (1) - remove New Combo?.
- 00:36:822 (1,2) - ^
Add more combo instead (HP barely recovered in this part)Nothing else I can say, good map!
- 01:02:354 - and 01:02:833 - i'd like add circles here o3o
Added
thanks for this very-long modsxxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
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General
- • Your mp3 is 80 kbps, which is below the miniumum of 128 kbps. Please find a better mp3.
it's VBR. 80kbps is the lowest bitrate in this file (i've rendered at the highest VBR, average is 224kbps.)
if they have lift that stupid no more than 192kbps (which is still sucks) let me know, i'll changed them to 320kbps CBR.
• Remove audio from video to reduce filesize.
i've already removed the audio since first submission. or do i miss something ?
edit: i've checked with both mp4box and MediaInfo: there is no audio in this video.
Level 1
- • HP Drain Rate: 3
• Approach Rate: 3
• Overall Difficulty: 3
AR / OD changed, not HDR (supposed to be easiest : can miss so much and not die easily)
• 00:07:939 (1,2,3,4) - Try this:
Fixed
• 00:28:365 (1) - ^
Fixed
• 00:38:577 (2,1) - End the slider 1/1 earlier and start the spinner 1/2 earlier.
Fixed
• 00:42:088 (1) - This slider is too soon after the spinner for an Easy, delete it and add a circle at 00:42:407. (also, consider moving it near the center of the screen)
Fixed (moved down to the x-axis), but it leaves some question to me: why center ?
• 00:51:662 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 00:51:982.
Fixed
• 01:04:748 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 01:05:067. (or just add a circle at 01:04:748)
Circle added.
• 01:11:131 (2) - Delete this circle. Start a slider at 01:10:811 and end it at 01:11:131.
Mmmm... kay
• 01:13:045 (1,2,3,4) - Try this:
trying now
• 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.
x
Level 4
- • HP Drain Rate: 5
• Approach Rate: 5
• Overall Difficulty: 5
AR5 OD5 HDR4
• 00:07:939 (1,2,3,4,5) - Delete (2) and add 2 repeats on (1), also try this spacing:
Fixed
• 00:28:684 (2) - Try this spacing:
well, i don't like the spacing on 2 (looks neat, but not equally spaced), moved repeats on 1 iinstead
• 00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
3 isn't a lot. this part still keep on my standard (6-8 downbeat -> new combo)
• 00:51:662 (x) - Add a circle.
okay
• 00:58:843 (4) - I don't like this slider, try to do something different:
Broken down this slider into 3
• 01:04:748 (x) - Start a slider here and end it at 01:05:067. (or just add a circle at 01:04:748)
off-beat. or else i'll have to put circles on 1/8.... well, at least not on easy/normal
• 01:06:822 (5,6,7) - Try this:
Fixed (Good idea )
• 01:13:843 (1,1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos.
well, second time on here. that means i have to remove them for sure
• 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.
Level 6
- • HP Drain Rate: 6
• Approach Rate: 7
• Overall Difficulty: 6
Fixed
• 00:00:599 (2) - I don't understand why you used this slider here, try to do something like this to better follow the music:
• 00:02:833 (1,2) - Same as before, I really don't like these long sliders.
• 00:06:503 (4) - ^
Fixed (all 3 above : broken down sliders)
• 00:27:726 (x) - Add a circle.
Added
• 00:29:801 (x) - ^
'kay
• 00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
• 00:32:354 (x) - Add a circle.
wow, you does catch the guitar sounds
• 00:34:907 (x) - ^
yay~
• 00:37:460 (x) - ^
added
• 01:13:843 (1) - Remove this new combo.
• 01:15:120 (1,1) - ^
....okay //okayface
• 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.
Level 9
- • HP Drain Rate: 6
• Approach Rate: 7
• Overall Difficulty: 6
too easy + too slow for insane sight-reading.
• Slider Tick Rate: 1
no. or else the 0.5x part will not be easily read. imo, it's a very fast to slow, letting them know via ticks.
• 00:15:439 (x) - Add a circle.
added
• 00:27:726 (x) - ^
added
• 00:30:918 ~ 00:37:141 - Used a lot of new combos here and I don't think they're really necessary, consider removing some.
reduced. still, more than other diffs.
• 00:48:631 (5) - I don't like this slider, try to do something like this:
edit : fixed (accidentially skip it)
• 00:51:583 (2) - This part is kinda confusing, don't hide this circle under the previous one.
spread a bit ( i actually want to stacked them up ).
• 01:04:708 (3) - Delete this circle, it doesn't follow anything.
• 01:04:867 (5) - ^
• 01:05:027 (7) - ^
rip this stream. removed
• 01:06:184 (5) - Convert this slider into 3 1/2 circles.
• 01:06:822 (7) - ^
• 01:11:609 (6) - ^
• 01:12:248 (8) - ^
no to all (too much circles, and it's downtime. i mean, those SPEED part has gone, should be more relax).
• 01:14:960 (1,1) - Remove these new combos.
removed.
• 01:15:599 (1) - End this spinner at 01:19:428.
i hear nothing at that point. but well, maybe my earphone is too sucks
oh, i accidentially gives you KDs (i'm getting used to throwing KDs when i found something useful to me before posting)copolah123 wrote:
Just re checking using AIBat (I dont know if its correct or not) and some my suggestion
AIBat is half-half correct. this is because the guidelines isn't really stable. So something might be outdated.
I hope its useful no kd pls since you had given it at my last post
[General][Level 1]
- All your BG are 1024x576, it should be 1024x768 (4:3)
- Maybe you should lower the video bitrate since your folder size is 24 MB (I myself don't like downloading big size osz)
- bg4.jpg and spinner-rpm.png are unused
Please re-download. Because i don't include bg4.jpg (sky raker) anymore.
Also, i prefer 16:9 (1366x768). the current osz is that size, and guidelines has changed.
about the video:render lower bitrate gives more crappy spot. i'll think of it. for now, i won't.- mp3 bitrate is 80 kbps, maybe you should find higher one? (ppl doesn't see the VBR or CBR, they see the bitrate at song properties)
it's VBR. BATs should know.- If you don't lower the vid bitrate maybe you should convert your skin to jpg? (to save size)
skin must be in .png just like how game skins are made- doesn't need letterbox during breaks since this has no break and has a video
hmmm.. kay- I don't think you have storyboard, just uncheck the "display storyboard in front of combo fire"
i've planned to do in the past... but i don't now.- use normal hitsound instead of soft? This song is loud and soft can't beat it
custom hitsound.
HP and CS +1 (its just my personal preference, you don't have to follow)
easy
I think the distance is too far for easy (I usually use 0.8 or lower) even your normal uses 0.7 which is lower,I don't find a reason for using more far DS on easier diff
00:38:577 why the slider end at red tick, maybe it should be at previous white tick
yeah.. my bad . Fixed
00:50:865 NC
well, i though it's new combo at the first look... it isn't right ?
Added
01:15:120 change to circle
x
01:15:439 if you follow ^ you should longer the spinner here
because spinner has no sounds. no change
[Level 4]
00:15:599 NC
mini-break
00:38:577 I prefer curved slider
Fixed
00:41:131 end the spinner here better
too long time spacing between spinner and slider
00:46:875 NC
00:57:088 ^
01:12:088 ^
01:12:726 ^
well, you don't have to follow the NC part since its my personal taste
All fixed, it looks better. Also broken down some long sliders so these circles fit
[Level 6]
Why 1/1 when you have 1/2 one
well, i always change them between 1/1 -> 1/2 -> 1/4, so i can really check on hitsounds.
You have some unstacked notes, I think its better to stack them
AIMod says it is all stacked
00:05:386 use finish instead of whistle, I think sounds better (soft finish)
Timing at 00:10:652 : I cant hear the hitsound even after I plugged my headphone lol
Because there's nothing; Timing for hitsounds purpose
00:15:599 use finish on here too (soft)
x
00:20:705 just finish ^
x
00:50:545 (3,4,5) bad spacing
Fixed
00:56:928 (7) change to 2 circles (R & W tick) like this
Fixed
01:01:237 remove NC
x
As usual, I can't mod Insane, but I think Insane is overmapped (no offense)
it isn't.
thanksYuki-kun wrote:
Small re-check.
Offset 294 is better than imo
i don't think so (the drums are actually off)
Also, in your Insane diff, so many un-perfect stack.
For example
00:03:166 (2,3,4,5) - Stack 4 with tail of 2, start of 5 with 3
stack leinency 0.7 and osu! will stack these (while playing) just like how i manually stack them
00:04:602 (7) - Stack with 00:03:964 (5) -
00:05:400 (1,2) - Same here.
We have option Stack laniency in F4, use it instead of make ugly place
00:49:123 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4) - because of stack leinency that stacked the middle,
0.4 is the highest point that osu! won't stack the middle for me. (means stack only 1/4 or lower)
So, the rest of the map that need to be stack (1/2): i've to manually stacked them.
that's why you saw it not properly stack
edit: you won't see how osu! stacked them on edit mode.
umm.. if you don't understand something feel free to ask then.
Well, good luck :p
- i'll try ask BATs when i request them for bubbles.copolah123 wrote:
Maybe ask the BAT to remove it?
Oh and 1 more, I have downloaded but the bg4 and rpm is still there, I don't know it is my error or yours (no offense again)
ตอนแรกกะจะไม่เล่นเสียงกลองเลย (เวล 1 กับ 4 อ่ะ) เพราะส่วนใหญ่วางโน้ตตาม vocalindyinyou wrote:
[level1] (ผมนับเป็นดิฟ easy นะ)
อ่าฮะ ไล่ E - N - H - I ตามเวลเลย
แนะนำให้ใช้ distance spacing 1.2 เวลาวางโน๊ต ลองกดชิบค้างนะ มันจะมีเส้น(อันนี้ไม่ค่อยแนะนำแต่ให้กด ait วางเองจะดีกว่า
หรือกดชิบบางอันก้ได้)
เหมือนหลายๆคนยจะบอกให้ใช้ DS ต่ำๆอ่ะ (เลยใช้ 0.8 ไปก่อนเพราะเซทดิฟใหม่มันก้ตั้ง 0.8x มาให้) (ติดเป็นพรืดเลย)
00:00:275 : ช่วงต้นลองทำสไลลากยาวแล้ว ใส่ เสียงสไลติกเอานะ (หรือ โน๊ตเว้น โน๊ตตามเสียงกลอง)
00:20:700 : ช่วงนี้ ถ้าจะทำโน๊ตเว้นโน๊ตแบบนั้นนะ ให้ ลงเสียงกลองเว้นกลองจะดีกว่า
00:22:934 : หรือ ลากยาวแบบนี้
คงรูปเดิมแหละ ลง downbeat เล่นง่ายดี
00:41:126 : สปินจบนี่ก้พอมั๊ง
สั้นไปอ่ะ
00:42:402 : ดูในตัวอย่าง วิธีใส่ new combo ให้ นับ เส้นที่ ขาวใหญ่ ใส่ NC แล้วผ่านไปเส้นนึง แล้ว ใส่ new combo ที่ 00:44:955
โอเคเลย
ดิฟ easy มันยังลูกเล่นไรมากไม่ได้ ลอง ดูไปก่อน ที่ผมแนะนำ มันเป็นเบสิก ไว้สำหรับทำเพลงให้มันแร้งน่ะ
เด๋วว่างๆจะมาดูอีก จะช่วยทีล่ะดิฟให้มันเข้าที่ เข้าทางก่อน พยายามใส่เสียงกลองด้วยอะ
http://puu.sh/2eGCA
ตัวอย่างจ้า
copolah123 wrote:
Maybe ask the BAT to remove it?
Oh and 1 more, I have downloaded but the bg4 and rpm is still there, I don't know it is my error or yours (no offense again)
well, I don't mind the kd anyway so maybe you dont need to now lolFroztic wrote:
- i'll try ask BATs when i request them for bubbles.
- spinner-rpm.png is being used. AIBat is wrong on that (you can test on it by applying some really weird coloring and see)
- about bg4: it isn't there anymore, i've try re-download and don't see it.
(maybe you forgot to remove all of the old files before importing them)
thanks for this very long modsAndrea wrote:
~General~
The bitrate for Misawa Sachika - Unite (TV Size).mp3 is 80 kb/s, which is below the miniumum of 128 kb/s.
it's VBR. 80kbps is the lowest bitrate in the file.
(click on images to view in full size)
You should resize all of your BGs to 1366x768, that's the correct dimension.
hmm... osu! resize this dimension for me. (i'm throwing x1080 img) anyway, fixed
The files cursormiddle.png and spinner-rpm.png are unused, removed them.
please... don't really trust AIBat that much.
cursormiddle is being used, along with support of new type cursor http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/119648
spinner-rpm.png is being used. you can try re-coloring a very weird one and see.
~Level 1~
Reduce OD and AR by 1 tick.
AR -1
00:08:732 (2) - Add a finish at the end of this slider.
okay~
00:26:285 (2,3,4) - This pattern is not a good idea for an Easy difficulty, it might confuse beginners, use some sliders instead.
Change 1,2 to slider.
00:30:594 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Same for this one.
Change 1,2 to slider. following vocal would be easiest for beginners. i think
00:42:402 (1) - Add a finish.
Added
00:57:721 (1,2,3) - Wrong spacing, check carefully with distance snap and fix it.
DS snap that for me. i'll move end of slider 1 so it don't confuse someone
01:10:487 (1) - Remove this whistle and add a finish instead, sounds better.
inconsistent of finish hitsounds
01:15:115 (3) - Finish at the end of this slider.
sounds weird to me
~Level 4~
00:05:381 (1) - Add a finish, sounds better than a whistle.
okay~
00:07:934 (1,2,3) - Different slider repeats are not suggested on easier difficulty, they confuse beginners, please consider using the same repeats for all of the sliders to make it consistent and easily readable.
following the bg sounds shouldn't be so difficult to beginners. synths are somehow catchy too.
00:37:934 (4) - Add a new combo here, lyrics restarts.
Added
00:51:657 (5,6) - Change these circles to a slider, it would be much better imo.
Fixed
00:55:168 (4) - New combo, otherwise it will be too long.
Fixed
01:00:275 (6) - ^ Same with this.
Fixed
01:14:477 (4) - ^ And this.
nope
~Level 6~
00:07:934 (1,2) - These sliders could be stacked much better.
Fixed. should be better
00:31:711 (4) - I don't think it's a good idea to place this note where you had some notes before, move it somewhere else perhaps? It would be better imo, though it's your choice.
moved to the 3rd quarter
00:58:838 (6) - I don't like this slider shape, it looks kinda ugly, try to make it better.
Fixed
01:04:264 (3) - Why this sudden slowdown? Also, the slider seems to be unsnapped.
speedy slider here just don't match with fading vocal. so i slow it down.
01:04:623 (4,5,6,7) - Unsnapped notes.
1/8 snap
01:15:434 (5) - Remove the clap and add a finish instead.
a stand-slone finish here doesn't fit. add like -Level 9-
~Level 9~
Whole difficulty has weird stacks, please disable grid snap and fix all of them manually.
okay. should be completed (if i don't forget something)
00:00:115 (1,2,3) - These triplet might be hard to catch, change it to a slider.
too easy. and if you're playing E/N/H before. you sure will know these these drum sounds do exist. also it gives a nice intro
00:35:062 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:221 (2) - Add new combo, it should go there instead.
Fixed (NC issue)
00:39:530 (7) - This slider is completely hidden from the previous one, do something else.
(so hidden that i don't see it too) (Fixed)
00:41:604 (4,1,1) - I don't like this slowdown, also that new combo spam doesn't make sense.
removed the nc-ing.
00:45:115 (4,5) - These sliders could be stacked much better than this.
i don't know how can i stack them better than this. so i unstack them
00:51:179 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - Really ugly pattern, please don't overlap circles in this way.
look at it as a butterfly flying to the slider direction
00:52:934 (3,4,5) - Again, stack these sliders without grid snap.
Fixed
01:00:434 (3) - Weird slider, I suggest you to make it in another way than this.
Fixed
01:04:264 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as the other difficulty.
1/8 snap
01:14:157 (3) - Finish on slider start.
Added
01:15:274 (5) - Finish on slider end and remove the clap.
Added
Good luck with this!
thanksIrreversible wrote:
Hi there from my queue!
[General]
The ranking criteria says: Try to keep osz files under 10mb, or 24mb if you include a video/storyboard (please remove the audio track from video files to save space). Yours is currently 25 MB, dunno if you have to change it though.
if the size is over the maximum, osu! won't allow me to upload. if i can upload, this means it's fine
Is there a reason why you call them Level 1,4,6,9 ? i mean.. the numbers, not level, i'm ok with that
referring to the anime, each diff level is the level of the character's duel avatar. 1 is the lowest while 10 is the maximum.
[Level 1]
I suggest using 1.0x Distance snap, it looks ways better
some says 0.8x, 1.0x or even 1.2x. i'm going to stick with 1.0x from now on
also, reduce SV to 0.7
00:29:477 (3) - make a straight slider?
okay~
00:36:019 (5,6) - this is confusing for new players D:
Fixed
00:48:626 (4) - remove this slider, and use circles and sliders instead (listening to the vocals is good there)
Fixed
01:07:934 (1,2,3) - this pattern, for exmaple, is the reason why you should use 1.0x distance snap. in my eyes, it just looks very bad :X
eventually fixed
The rhythm is very good though! good job :3
thanks
[Level 4]
00:04:743 (5) - hold shift while placing it, for a straight line, and a better flow
oh,i don't know that function like this do exist. pretty handy. fixed
00:06:657 (3,4) - very bad flow - place 4 over the slider end
Fixed
in my opininion, this spinner ( 00:39:689 (1) - ) should end here:00:41:126 -
i'll think of it
00:48:626 (5) - same as easy
Fixed
00:55:009 (4) - add a circle
there is already a circle
01:03:785 (4,5) - hm.. 0.7 DS is very less u.u i would higher it as well ><
well, it's fine. 1/2 space should look like that
i really love the hitsounds! woo! xDD
[Level 6]
00:00:594 (2) - ctrl + j for a better flow, arrange 3,4,5 also, that there will be a good flow
Fixed
00:01:711 (6) - nc
too frequent
00:28:040 (1,2) - place 2 a bit more up.
okay
00:37:455 (8,9,10,1) - http://puu.sh/2h5ZV
Fixed
rest seems fine
[Level 9]
woops, seems i forgot to change DS back to 1.0
00:00:195 (2) - x:208 / y: 188
00:00:275 (3) - x: 180 / y: 148
move (2) down
00:00:594 (5) - DS
yeah, DS is wrong, not me
00:06:019 (4,5,6,7) - this pattern just doesn't work, plz fix circle 5 and put it somewhere else
hmm, you don't actually 'slide' (4). just hold on and then press (5). should be worked
00:51:179 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - same here, this looks a bit odd
2nd time on here (actually, 3rd time though) i'll changed to something else then.
00:51:817 (1,2,3) - i don't really get this pattern, try use smth easier to read?
just a sliderstream. nothing more
00:52:934 (3,4,5) - iLike :3
Rest is okayish
________
The map is kinda okay. But unfortunately, i totally dont like how less Distance Snap you use, but it's up to you. you should use a bit more, otherwise everything looks so.. squashed. I hope you can understand me, this is no offence!
should be better by now
Good lcuk ~ ASK ME EVERYTIME IF YOU HAVE A QUESTION!
thanksHellzero wrote:
Hi from ♥Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[Level 1]
Use more hitsounds particularly "finish"hitfinish mod by HellzeroE / N has too less notes to make a good continuous drum sequence. so you will bearely heard it.00:05:381 (1) - add finish
00:10:487 (1) - ^
00:20:700 (1) - ^
Try this hit-sounds pattern
00:25:806 - finish with 65% volume
00:26:923 - finish with 50% volume
00:28:360 - 65%
00:29:477 - 50%
00:30:913 - 65%
00:32:030 - 50%
ect
00:47:189 (1) - finish at end
00:48:626 (4) - finish at start
00:50:062 (6) - finish
00:51:179 (3) - ^
00:52:615 (1) - ^
00:57:721 (1) - F at star
00:58:838 (3) - ^
00:59:955 (5) - F at end
01:01:392 (3) - F
01:05:381 (1) - ^
01:10:487 (1) - ^
01:14:157 (2) - F at start
01:15:115 (3) - F at end
although those hitfinish sequence is nice, put them standalone will be weird.
and i also intended to make hitsound not thhe same for every diff.
00:36:019 (5) - add NC
Added
00:37:934 (1) - remove NC
no. combo will be too long
01:15:115 (3) - unsnapped
Fixed
01:15:753 (1) - remove clap
Fixed
[Level 4]
The same suggestions about finish
00:15:594 - good place for note
rest (no vocal)
01:07:296 (6,7,1) - spacing
Fixed
[Level 6]
The same suggestions about finish
00:02:189 - if follow the music you need add here note or make spacing beetwen 00:01:711 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - these triplet more far, because it look like jumps and maybe confuse players.
move 00:02:030 (8) down. should be nice too look at
00:07:934 (1,2) - use more creative
intended
[Level 9]
The same suggestions about finish
00:49:104 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - I can't to read it even AR9
changed to something else.
Too many random. Try use more pretty patterns and slider shape. Your DS good but notes too close it hard too read.Use jumps but don't abuse. Good luck
slider fixed ( curved most of them. some straight lines are intended )
i personally don't like jump that much, so i put them when i feel right and its fit.