Hello! I'm so sorry for taking so long to get to this. I hope you don't mind
By the way , I decided to skip the normal diff because it's still WIP. :3
[General]
[Insane]
[Easy]
By the way , I decided to skip the normal diff because it's still WIP. :3
[General]
- the current bitrate of .mp3 is unrankable, it needs to be under 192kbps.
- Insane diff has a different preview time.
- Audio lead-in for Insane diff is too short now. it needs to be at least 1500ms.
[Insane]
- From AIBat..SPOILERSnapping 00:01:104 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
00:01:849 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:13:775 - snap to 00:13:769
00:36:668 - snap to 00:36:674
00:49:331 - snap to 00:49:337
00:50:542 - snap to 00:50:547
00:50:728 - snap to 00:50:733
00:52:031 - snap to 00:52:037
00:52:218 - snap to 00:52:223
I'm not sure if it's problem or not, but just mentioning here. - 00:01:851 - According to the crush cymbal in the music, soft finish fits better imo. if you want to emphasize this finish more than 00:01:104 (3,4) - , you can use higher volume for this one I think.
- 00:15:259 (4) - I'd prefer something like this since the current pattern looks a bit odd and this one is surely looking better. same for 00:18:797 (6) -
- 00:33:322 (4) - To be honest, this rhythm sounds a bit odd to me because the slider beginning doesn't follow anything noticeable and there's a bussdrum at 00:33:695 - . probably this rhythm works better I think. (I just moved the slider forward by 1/2 beat.)
- 00:39:468 (6) - CTRL+G flows better imo. or you can do something like this for better flow.
- 00:50:641 (3) - How about setting "Addition" to "Soft", and add whistle here? sounds very good to me.
- 00:52:131 (3) - ^
- 00:59:998 (1,4) - Honestly, I don't think this partial overlapping looks that great. And it might cause players mistake where the beginning of 01:01:115 (4) - is. Thus consider changing slider shape or pattern please.
- 01:19:365 (6) - Adjust the shape of this slider a bit so that it fits with the spinner-circle? :3
- 01:20:855 - A finish would fit nicely with the last of this difficulty imo.
- From AIBat..SPOILERUnsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:13:775 - snap to 00:13:769
00:36:668 - snap to 00:36:674
00:49:331 - snap to 00:49:337
00:50:542 - snap to 00:50:547
00:50:728 - snap to 00:50:733
00:52:031 - snap to 00:52:037
00:52:218 - snap to 00:52:223
I'm not sure if it's problem or not, but just mentioning here. - 00:01:851 - According to the crush cymbal in the music, soft finish fits better imo. if you want to emphasize this finish more than 00:01:104 (3,4) - , you can use higher volume for this one I think.
- 00:12:093 (1) - Considering where the emphasis is, it'd sound better if this spinner starts at 00:12:280 - instead. Probably there can be a note at 00:12:093 - too.
- 00:16:376 - You probably want to set the sampleset to Normal and remove the clap.
- 00:21:777 (5) - How about shortening this slider by 1/1 beat and add a note at 00:22:708 - ? Currently this slider ruins your hitsounds pattern and I don't think it's a good idea to follow emphasis (i.e downbeat) with a slider end.
- 00:27:177 (5) - I think this slider should end at 00:27:736 - considering both the vocal and instruments.
- 00:42:820 (3) - Move this note leftward by 1grid so that spacing can be more consistant?
- 00:50:641 (3) - How about setting "Addition" to "Soft", and add whistle here? sounds very good to me.
- 00:52:131 (6) - ^
- 00:52:503 (1) - I thought you wanted to use white/gray combo color only for calm part o.o
- 00:57:019 (3) - Since spacing is inconsistant due to offset change and this is a heavy beat, I think it'd be better to space this note out at higher DS.
- 01:13:406 (1,2,3) - This pattern flows better imo. Not only because the current pattern doesn't do well, but considering how 01:12:661 (5) - flows, this one is better imo.
- 01:20:855 - 01:20:855 - A finish would fit nicely with the last of this difficulty imo.
[Easy]
- From AIBat..SPOILERUnsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:13:775 - snap to 00:13:769
00:36:668 - snap to 00:36:674
00:49:331 - snap to 00:49:337
00:50:542 - snap to 00:50:547
00:50:728 - snap to 00:50:733
00:52:031 - snap to 00:52:037
00:52:218 - snap to 00:52:223 - 00:06:693 (4) - You forget to add a whistle here I guess. xD
- 00:19:728 (1) - Umm, normal sampleset doesn't fit well and is a bit too loud to me. How about using drum-finish instead?
- 00:25:315 - This finish is too loud and I think a whistle is enough and works well.
- 00:25:687 - Add a soft finish here for the sake of consistency with the Insane diff?
- 00:39:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - Honestly awkward flow.. I expected something like this here. (lol bad alternative. but I think you can figure out what I want you to do. xD)
- 00:49:524 (1) - 00:50:641 (3) - How about setting "Addition" to "Soft", and add whistle here? sounds very good to me.
- 00:52:131 - ^
- 00:56:227 - and 00:56:600 - How about adding notes here? Without them I feel a bit empty here and they're very important imo. The recovery time will be still enough considering that the recovery time between 00:11:162 (1,1) - is even shorter.
- 01:02:233 - Add a whistle here?