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spboxer3
looks fine now.
Englisg ver.

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

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  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. title: 君のとなりに
  2. about SB:
    1. Rikka3及title4並未使用到 需要刪除 ->unused sb element should be removed.

    2. 00:00:500 - ~00:00:879 - 是紫圈scale放大及fade in 00:00:879 - 到00:04:297 - 是慢速scale放大及fade out 但是就視覺上來看 就會變的慢半拍了 可以聽見00:00:500 - 處是重音 可以試著把fade out這段的開始處放在這, 如何改就是把ring系列的SB都向前移1/2拍 效果會比現在好的多
      ->recommend "ring item (SB)" effect onward 1/2 rhythm to make SB junction more smooth.

Normal


  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 02:02:018 (1,2,3,4) - 之間是平行的 是否讓上下間距作成一致的? 不需要管ds (不是grid...昨天你貌似以為我說的是grid)
    ->make identical y-axis spacing for this pattern?

Hard


  • mapping
    (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:58:221 (1,2,3,4) - 就排列及節奏來看 這是沒有問題的 但是在打擊點上就會感覺有些差異 看著slider的位置 第二次是在藍線上 但是那個點在歌聲以及鼓點上都沒有非常明顯的點 因此打擊時的感覺沒有第一個來的好 不如就像第一個排法一樣 slider+note的排法 會好許多
    -> click point/playing feel issue. it's pass pattern regardless rhythm or pattern. but click point is too odd for play. for example: 00:58:981 (3,4) - you can't find any vocal/drum at 00:59:170 - , but you make the slider start here, that is confuse click point as I said. otherwise, the first pattern (00:58:221 (1,2) - ) is fine.
  2. 01:36:196 (4,5,6,7,8) - x x x xx x x x 有底線的是slider 試試看這樣吧
    -> same as click problem. I recommend used the rhythm like this: x x x xx x x x (underline = slider, x = note )

真是花的發
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks!
LKs
hi

[general]

  1. Tags 里的demo Koi ga Shitai!可以不写吧 有Chuunibyou就足够了
  2. letter box关了?
[Hard]

00:22:525 (2) - 首先是stack 其次是能不能再和后面的三连离远点 第1pc还是直接当1/2了

[Normal]

00:21:765 (1) - 这个逆时针转一下么 感觉太偏向前面00:21:006 (4) - 了
00:53:284 (3) - 这个sliderslide感觉不必要
Topic Starter
Nymph

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

  1. Tags 里的demo Koi ga Shitai!可以不写吧 有Chuunibyou就足够了
  2. letter box关了?
[Hard]

00:22:525 (2) - 首先是stack 其次是能不能再和后面的三连离远点 第1pc还是直接当1/2了 。干脆直接往左挪顺便换个角度

[Normal]

00:21:765 (1) - 这个逆时针转一下么 感觉太偏向前面00:21:006 (4) - 了
00:53:284 (3) - 这个sliderslide感觉不必要 改成note了
LKs
popner
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No_Gu
壮我泥
fanzhen0019
wa
Dark_Ai
omedeto :33
Topic Starter
Nymph
thanks guys :3
spboxer3

No_Gu wrote:

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Fumika
Nymph you ninja *w*
kanpakyin

No_Gu wrote:

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YTYuyu
yay a Nymph map <333. and Chunnibyou omg

congratz on the rank ;)
Andrea
Cute storyboard and map ^^
Topic Starter
Nymph
^w^thanks~
Flask

No_Gu wrote:

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mintong89

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wantuole
好像还欠一个mod
o,0
下次再还了
恭喜rank
raririn

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awesome2635
[color=#80FF40]릿카 너무 착하고 귀엽다 :3
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