HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

SPOILER

General
Normal and Hard has different kiai plz fix this ah mistake>< fixed

Normal
how about cut kiai time 01:43:791 - here and 01:58:981 - start here again? seems good

00:45:310 (3) - 1.3x DS here? fix this? un I think this doesn't matter that much so
00:53:284 (3) - i think this slider's sliderslide hears not good, try using Sampleset instead inherited point? yeah right

Hard
00:23:473 (1) - clap hears nice imo sounds a little weird for me..
00:36:006 (2) - whistle on start? hears good un seems not bad, I am gonna to think this over ><
00:44:550 (5) - how about this? http://puu.sh/1SbRX ( plays better i guess ) i think current pattern seems hard to hit00:45:120 (6) - this slider actually I like mine better so keep it for now
01:40:753 (1) - add whistle? ( sounds hears like 01:19:487 (1) - here )
02:08:094 (1) - ^ yeah actually I think not big difference kinda like it more quietyly without whistle
00:48:158 (6) - if you do 00:36:006 (2) - this, same as here

great! nice clam song lol
good luck for rank! xD

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions
   

• --Common-- --Warning-- --Strongly recommendation-- --Emphasis--

1. the current offset sounds a bit early. i personally suggest that offset 504(+4).

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 00:25:563 (1) - the note is placed after spinner, should be put a nc here.~!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. since the diff is original, consider od-1?
   2. 00:32:778 (2) - 感觉突出去了啊这个circle, why not make a symmetry. i recommend to move the note to x:461 y:280, and then adjusting the next two notes' position. like this
      picture

      
   3. 01:36:196 (3) - baka老妮，这里做个对称吧。 然后后面的(4,5)调整下位置， 然后通过(6)circle来平衡接下来的，不会打破梗.
      picture

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:23:284 (1) - consider to add a finish on that spinner with 10% hitsound volume?. 我想说这里common结尾太难听了..
   2. 00:52:145 (1) - 觉得这里开始转向一个新的阶段，就和前面spinner那里一样。如果上面那里加了，这里也一并加个10%finish好很多我觉得.
   3. 00:55:183 (1) - whistle on that head with normal hitsound volume? 然后从这里开始建议两长白线一个finish(直到kiai截止). 不然作为kiai觉得不太好 :p

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:22:525 (2) - 比较明显的没cover好。左移一点就好了:p
      00:23:473 (1,2,3,4) - 直直的不好看诶. 我觉得应该向左偏一点啊~不论是从看上去还是打起来都舒服很多. 你看
      pictrue~

      
      00:24:993 (1) - 觉得spacing不太对劲. 这后面00:24:993 (1,2,3)这组应该也是1.4x吧按理说. 如果单单是前面(5,6)用1.4的话看起来有点奇怪说实话.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:24:803 - 我觉得从这里开始还保持1,3whistle有点不妥了. 3拍上用whistle我觉得明显吵了..你听听看吧.~
   2. 00:55:183 - 然后这里恢复1,3whistle
   3. 01:19:487 (1) - 用whistle有点没气势诶, finish? 然后same as Easy, 两小节一个finish?
   4. 02:22:525 (6) - um. i feel that set a whistle on that slider's end can make a great effect to ornament the song, especially on ending.

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Fine w!

[Normal]
00:25:563 (2) - Newcombo !w 咦没必要啦
00:23:284 (1) - Add finish? (It maybe sound better to me). 事实上我觉得finish对于这首歌很蹩脚
00:43:411 (1) - Consider Ctrl+G since the vocal takes a breath.感觉还好啦
00:45:310 (3) - Spacing? Following the same spacing looks better.好吧第二次有人提拉其实不是没关系咩
00:55:183 - Consider adding finish at the start?
01:19:487 (1) - ^^^ (好吧我就喜欢加几个finish .-.)
01:58:981 (1) - Finish! since the background music.
02:20:246 (1) - Move to position such as x:356 y:296 then you get a better flow ww! 嗯K


[Hard]
00:26:322 (4) - I guess this spacing may be a bit large. 这些spacing就饶了我吧 很简单的
00:28:031 (1) - Do a jump contrarily.
00:32:778 (2) - It had better not touch 00:31:639 (6).嗯好吧
00:33:917 (1) - Too large jump :< （良心何在）
00:36:575 (3) - ^^^^^^
01:10:943 (2) - Consider adding a note between two sliders?
01:24:803 (7) - Why suddenly a big jump appears?
01:58:981 (1,2) - I like such ...

02:16:639 (9) - Move to x:436 y:168 pleeease. w!嗯
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妮妮获得了称号：不随机跳会死星人
Excellent Mapset
本来想给2颗星的结果感觉跳太多了

Strawberry wrote:

:>

• --Common-- --Warning-- --Strongly recommendation-- --Emphasis--

[ General]
　

1. the current offset sounds a bit early. i personally suggest that offset 504(+4).

I will try this later.
　
[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 00:25:563 (1) - the note is placed after spinner, should be put a nc here.~!
   sure but I assume nc bug doesn't matter any more?
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. since the diff is original, consider od-1? I think od4 is fine :3
   2. 00:32:778 (2) - 感觉突出去了啊这个circle, why not make a symmetry. i recommend to move the note to x:461 y:280, and then adjusting the next two notes' position. like this
      picture

      
   3. 01:36:196 (3) - baka老妮，这里做个对称吧。 然后后面的(4,5)调整下位置， 然后通过(6)circle来平衡接下来的，不会打破梗.
      picture

      
   changed these 2
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:23:284 (1) - consider to add a finish on that spinner with 10% hitsound volume?. 我想说这里common结尾太难听了..
   2. 00:52:145 (1) - 觉得这里开始转向一个新的阶段，就和前面spinner那里一样。如果上面那里加了，这里也一并加个10%finish好很多我觉得.
   3. 00:55:183 (1) - whistle on that head with normal hitsound volume? 然后从这里开始建议两长白线一个finish(直到kiai截止). 不然作为kiai觉得不太好 :p

同上面的嘛我觉得这歌家finish很奇葩
　
[ Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:22:525 (2) - 比较明显的没cover好。左移一点就好了:p
      00:23:473 (1,2,3,4) - 直直的不好看诶. 我觉得应该向左偏一点啊~不论是从看上去还是打起来都舒服很多. 你看
      pictrue~

      
      00:24:993 (1) - 觉得spacing不太对劲. 这后面00:24:993 (1,2,3)这组应该也是1.4x吧按理说. 如果单单是前面(5,6)用1.4的话看起来有点奇怪说实话.
   这2个改了
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:24:803 - 我觉得从这里开始还保持1,3whistle有点不妥了. 3拍上用whistle我觉得明显吵了..你听听看吧.~
   2. 00:55:183 - 然后这里恢复1,3whistle
   3. 01:19:487 (1) - 用whistle有点没气势诶, finish? 然后same as Easy, 两小节一个finish?
   4. 02:22:525 (6) - um. i feel that set a whistle on that slider's end can make a great effect to ornament the song, especially on ending.

hitsound还是不喜欢finish所以没换= =　
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嘿嘿 (/me runs

indyinyou wrote:

Normal

01:13:411 : this silder return 01:13:791 end 01:14:170 en I think this is fine~
01:14:550 : silder to 01:15:310 en thought out a way to change this

they're just suggestions

no kd for this

EmPao wrote:

早安~ Nymph

Mod from My Modding Queue

[Normal]
01:40:373 -加note? Hard diff有map這 嗯好
[Hard]
00:58:981 (3,4) - Ctrl+G如何? 嗯这个故意这样摆的呢所以不改了

找不出什麼._. ...

star!

1. Move your break to 01:46:829 pretty much because following the music but it's kinda far from the slider before so i'm not sure whether it's ok or not
2. why don't you put "togashi yuuta" in the tags too.
3. 00:55:183 - I would love to see here got a kiai because for me that part really fits for kiai but it's you to decide.

1. 00:23:284 (1) - remove clap,doesn't really fits there.
2. 00:35:436 (3) - make a better blanket,move it a bit down and fix some grid to make a better one.make sure check spacing tho.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:310 (3) - why don't you make it blanket?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:06:575 (3) - it hit the life bar,i'm not sure whether this one is a problem or not,so I'm just point it out here.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:21:386 (X) - add a circle here,feels really empty because it's ending of the song and the beat doesn't fully mapped.

1. 00:23:473 (1) - please move it a bit more far.when i testplay always miss this one.lol
2. 00:37:145 (1) - this jump is quite sudden tbh.it would be better this part just make it normal distance?
3. 00:45:120 (6) - this one also.
4. 01:12:272 (5) - newcombo? basing on the music because the vocal finish on the circle before.
5. 01:24:044 (5) - same as above

HeatKai wrote:

Halo Mr.Nymph! :3

[General]

1. Move your break to 01:46:829 pretty much because following the music but it's kinda far from the slider before so i'm not sure whether it's ok or not yeah I did consider about this before but actually I test it and feel weird then I cancel :3
2. why don't you put "togashi yuuta" in the tags too. en
3. 00:55:183 - I would love to see here got a kiai because for me that part really fits for kiai but it's you to decide. yeah... but actually I don't this part is kiai so..

[Normal]
AR+1? I think ar4 is fine :3

1. 00:23:284 (1) - remove clap,doesn't really fits there. oops mistake here><
2. 00:35:436 (3) - make a better blanket,move it a bit down and fix some grid to make a better one.make sure check spacing tho.sure
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:45:310 (3) - why don't you make it blanket? sure
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:06:575 (3) - it hit the life bar,i'm not sure whether this one is a problem or not,so I'm just point it out here.np I think this is fine
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:21:386 (X) - add a circle here,feels really empty because it's ending of the song and the beat doesn't fully mapped.well I think I prefer it no note here :3

[Hard]

1. 00:23:473 (1) - please move it a bit more far.when i testplay always miss this one.lol actually this is just normal spacing... I think it is not hard to read so
2. 00:37:145 (1) - this jump is quite sudden tbh.it would be better this part just make it normal distance?
3. 00:45:120 (6) - this one also. nah I test it pretty nicely so I think I wanna keep it
4. 01:12:272 (5) - newcombo? basing on the music because the vocal finish on the circle before.
5. 01:24:044 (5) - same as above ah, actually I think it is fine

I love this diff


Hehe good map! >w< good luck Nymph baka

kiddly wrote:

炫酷 不能多说

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. title: 君のとなりに 奇怪了我明明就是写的日文 什么时候变回去的
2. about SB:
   
   1. Rikka3及title4並未使用到 需要刪除 忘记了嗯
      
      
   2. 00:00:500 - ~00:00:879 - 是紫圈scale放大及fade in 00:00:879 - 到00:04:297 - 是慢速scale放大及fade out 但是就視覺上來看 就會變的慢半拍了 可以聽見00:00:500 - 處是重音 可以試著把fade out這段的開始處放在這, 如何改就是把ring系列的SB都向前移1/2拍 效果會比現在好的多

Normal

• 
  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 02:02:018 (1,2,3,4) - 之間是平行的 是否讓上下間距作成一致的? 不需要管ds (不是grid...昨天你貌似以為我說的是grid) 重新拽了一下

Hard

• 
  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:58:221 (1,2,3,4) - 就排列及節奏來看 這是沒有問題的 但是在打擊點上就會感覺有些差異 看著slider的位置 第二次是在藍線上 但是那個點在歌聲以及鼓點上都沒有非常明顯的點 因此打擊時的感覺沒有第一個來的好 不如就像第一個排法一樣 slider+note的排法 會好許多 嗯确实
2. 01:36:196 (4,5,6,7,8) - x x x xx x x x 有底線的是slider 試試看這樣吧 嗯改了

真是花的發

00:00:500 - ~00:00:879 - 是紫圈scale放大及fade in 00:00:879 - 到00:04:297 - 是慢速scale放大及fade out 但是就視覺上來看 就會變的慢半拍了 可以聽見00:00:500 - 處是重音 可以試著把fade out這段的開始處放在這, 如何改就是把ring系列的SB都向前移1/2拍 效果會比現在好的多

1. Tags 里的demo Koi ga Shitai!可以不写吧 有Chuunibyou就足够了
   
2. letter box关了?

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

1. Tags 里的demo Koi ga Shitai!可以不写吧 有Chuunibyou就足够了 好
   
2. letter box关了? 好

[Hard]

00:22:525 (2) - 首先是stack 其次是能不能再和后面的三连离远点 第1pc还是直接当1/2了 。干脆直接往左挪顺便换个角度

[Normal]

00:21:765 (1) - 这个逆时针转一下么 感觉太偏向前面00:21:006 (4) - 了 嗯
00:53:284 (3) - 这个sliderslide感觉不必要 改成note了

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