Leader wrote:

[General]
Manca un Easy. So che hurr durr star rating, ma manca comunque una difficoltà per la gente alle prime armi. < La farò al più presto
Le altre mappe hanno "dai" nelle tags, adda quel poveraccio di un composer :< - < Addato
Sarà una mia opinione ma per me il volume degli hitsounds in entrambe le diff è troppo alto ;_;" < Fixed

[Hard]
00:52:930 (1) - Rimuovi beat? :v - No o.o forma un pentagono con quel pattern e mi piace così <w<
01:17:114 (7) - wat
01:36:246 (4) - Adda un beat qui, mi suona meglio x.x Fixed
01:59:665 (1,2,3) - Son brutti da vedere messi così orz Fixed

Leader wrote:

[General]
[Normal]
00:01:807 (1,2,3) - Bruttini questi slider lineari :v -
00:25:685 (4,5) - Invertili. -
00:30:583 (5) - CTRL+G? -
00:57:522 (4) - ^ Done
01:46:808 (5) - Delete? -

k1llrogg wrote:

Hello :3

Hard

- 00:49:563 (3) - Suggest to move this at x:256 y:228
- 00:50:175 (4) - Suggest to move this at x:256 y:156
- 01:08:236 (1) - Lift this a bit :<
- A-a-a-and you can do some jumps! >:3

Good luck \o/

UnderminE wrote:

Ahhh how i missed this ;_;

1. Please re-snap your kiai #3; it seems to be off a bit. (Should be started at 01:49:563)
2. I wouldn't use letterbox during breaks here, it hurts your BG a bit. without letterboxes, map looks even better!
3. 01:00:583 - This section should be louder, I can't hear hitsounds :<

1. Try to reduce Distance Spacing for 1/4 notes? It'll make them even more enjoyable for us! If you do it, they will become much easier to read, trust me!
2. 00:12:828 (7,8) - ULTIMATE-NAZI - move (8)'s end one grid down, to make it parallel with (7) o3o/ I guess you wanted to do it.
3. 00:17:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - please, I'm begging you, do not use this kind of jumps here! This is calm song and [Hard] diff! THere's nowhere to put those crazy jumps! :< It ruins flow and patterns and makes map worser :<
4. 00:43:440 (1) - in patterns, like this one you can place some jumps. Not those x4.0+ crazy jumps, but some little jumps to follow heavy beat. le image
5. 00:48:338 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this jump fits here. You normally don't use them so often here. What's more this jump is quite unexpected for such a calm song.
6. 01:10:685 (2,3,4) - ULTIMATE-ULTRA-SUPER-NAZI - make it perfectly symmetrical by moving two grids right.Actually, it's not about exactly this pattern. It's about your flow, you can make some patterns perfectly symmetrical, so go ahead and do it!
   note: If you will mix your flow with some symmetrical things this map will be my favourite!
   
   Very neat diff, cute flow and great rhythm! I like it!

1. Rename this diff to Nemis' Normal to keep diff names consistent. At first, I thought that this is Revy's diff :<
   note: if you disagree, ask Ran to rename his/her diff to Easy, so you;ll keep diff names consistent!
2. Try to use AR5 here, it will hurt your creativity a bit, but it will make your patterns much more playable.
3. 00:04:869 (2,3) - do not use jumps in Normal diff! It gives you a good flow but jump is too huge and unplayable for average normal-diff-player!
4. 00:15:277 (3,4) - BPM is quite slow, but 1/4 notes here are still kinda confusing. They're the way too unexpected for such a calm song. I guess you should avoid them :<
5. If you agree with suggestions above, Increase your OD by one tick. So, diff will become more balaced!
6. 00:54:461 (3,4,5) - some patterns here flow in a weird way, imo. For example this one
   
   le picture

   As you can see, due to low AR this pattern can be read in two different ways. THis problem caused by low AR, it's kinda confusing here.
   

1. Your diff has same velocity as [Hard]! This is the way TOO fast for easiest diff of mapset! Please, it's unplayable for beginners!
2. Your beat spacing is totally inconsistent, please make sure you use distance snap wverywhere. At this moment, beats are randomly placed and it looks kinda unreadable.
3. 00:29:971 (5,6) - there's no way for patterns like this to be in easiest diff! (5) is too short and (6) is covered by (5)'s hitburst!
4. 00:58:134 (3) - how do you want beginners to read this slider? There's NO WAY for beginners to guess how many repeats does this slider have!
5. 01:44:665 (6) - nazi - missed new combo here. This combo is too long for [Easy] :<

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo!

[General]

1. Please re-snap your kiai #3; it seems to be off a bit. (Should be started at 01:49:563)
2. I wouldn't use letterbox during breaks here, it hurts your BG a bit. without letterboxes, map looks even better!
3. 01:00:583 - This section should be louder, I can't hear hitsounds :<

[Hard]

1. Try to reduce Distance Spacing for 1/4 notes? It'll make them even more enjoyable for us! If you do it, they will become much easier to read, trust me!
2. 00:12:828 (7,8) - ULTIMATE-NAZI - move (8)'s end one grid down, to make it parallel with (7) o3o/ I guess you wanted to do it.
3. 00:17:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - please, I'm begging you, do not use this kind of jumps here! This is calm song and [Hard] diff! THere's nowhere to put those crazy jumps! :< It ruins flow and patterns and makes map worser :<
4. 00:43:440 (1) - in patterns, like this one you can place some jumps. Not those x4.0+ crazy jumps, but some little jumps to follow heavy beat. le image
5. 00:48:338 (1,2) - I'm not sure if this jump fits here. You normally don't use them so often here. What's more this jump is quite unexpected for such a calm song.
6. 01:10:685 (2,3,4) - ULTIMATE-ULTRA-SUPER-NAZI - make it perfectly symmetrical by moving two grids right.Actually, it's not about exactly this pattern. It's about your flow, you can make some patterns perfectly symmetrical, so go ahead and do it!
   note: If you will mix your flow with some symmetrical things this map will be my favourite!
   
   Very neat diff, cute flow and great rhythm! I like it!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo!

[General]

1. Please re-snap your kiai #3; it seems to be off a bit. (Should be started at 01:49:563)
2. I wouldn't use letterbox during breaks here, it hurts your BG a bit. without letterboxes, map looks even better!
3. 01:00:583 - This section should be louder, I can't hear hitsounds :<

[Ran's Easy]
I guess you need to read this.

1. Your diff has same velocity as [Hard]! This is the way TOO fast for easiest diff of mapset! Please, it's unplayable for beginners!
2. Your beat spacing is totally inconsistent, please make sure you use distance snap wverywhere. At this moment, beats are randomly placed and it looks kinda unreadable.
3. 00:29:971 (5,6) - there's no way for patterns like this to be in easiest diff! (5) is too short and (6) is covered by (5)'s hitburst!
4. 00:58:134 (3) - how do you want beginners to read this slider? There's NO WAY for beginners to guess how many repeats does this slider have!
5. 01:44:665 (6) - nazi - missed new combo here. This combo is too long for [Easy] :<

No-no-no! No! Please, read osu!wiki, take a look at other's Easy-diffs! I totally disapprove this diff, sorry. Rhythm is too hard, Slider Velocity is too fast and what's more Approach Rate doesn't match with Slider Velocity at all! Get some help, you can PM me any time, I'll try to help you if you want. It's not about your style, it's about this diff.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good luck!

neonat wrote:

Hard

00:03:491 - add a note -
00:07:165 - ^
00:09:614 - ^
00:13:287 - ^
00:15:736 - ^
Fixed :3
(would help with flow and follows the music better)
00:22:012 (3) - end at 00:22:471 ~ im not sure about it.. D:
00:26:910 (3) - ^
00:24:920 - add a note ~ Fixed :3
00:29:818 - ^ ~ Fixed :3
00:40:379 (9) - repeat one more time/add a note at 00:40:838 im not sure about it.. D:
00:50:634 - add a note Fixed :3
00:51:859 - ^ It sounds bad :C
01:45:736 - ^ Fixed :3
02:09:767 (2) - end at 02:10:226 ~ im not sure about it..
02:14:665 (3) - ^
02:12:675 - add a note Fixed :3
02:17:573 - ^ Fixed :3
all the added notes are to compliment the sounds emphasized in the song.

Good luck.

1. 00:09:154 (3,4) - Try to avoid stacks on the easiest difficulty of the mapset since they can confuse beginners, try my suggestion to fix the problem you actually have right now.
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:14:052 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, please fix it correctly with using the distance snap.
3. 00:18:950 (3,4) - Again, do not stack notes this way since beginners could find them hard to read.
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:12:828 (3,4) - Another confusing stack you've got there, but obviously I'll help you to find a way to fix it.
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:44:665 (6) - New combo due to the new stanza, and also, since the combo is (10) it's way too long for the easiest difficulty, so you should fix it.
6. 01:49:561 (x) - Kiai should start here, it's unsnapped right now.
7. 01:49:563 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing, again. Use distance snap properly to fix that.
8. 02:03:032 (4,5,6) - This pattern is way too hard and confusing to read compared to the rest of the map. You can try to follow my suggestion if you want, so you can fix this problem and avoid to confuse players.
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:04:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is also too hard compared to the rest of the map. What about making it the same as the other kiai? It would be a nice solution to me.
10. 02:17:726 (4,5,6) - Again, a bit too hard compared to the rest, make it a slider instead to fix it.

1. 00:06:705 (1,2) - Do not make such jumps on a Normal difficulty, that's not acceptable for this kind of difficulty.
2. 00:09:154 (1,2) - Same goes for this, spacing is way too big and not good for a Normal.
3. 00:12:828 (4,5) - Try to avoid stacking sliders like that together, they're too hard to read for beginners.
4. 00:14:665 (2,3) - Again, such jumps are not acceptable for a Normal difficulty, use distance snap and fix it.
5. 00:15:277 (3,4) - Try to avoid stacking sliders like that together, they're too hard to read for beginners.
6. 00:17:726 (3,4) - Again, such jumps are not acceptable for a Normal difficulty, use distance snap and fix it.
7. 00:20:787 (4,1) - Same thing again, don't stack sliders like that on Normal, there are much more of them, please do the same for every pattern like that, use distance snap.
8. 00:25:073 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing for a Normal, fix it manually with distance snap.
9. 00:27:522 (3,4,1,2,3) - Again, there are too many spacing issues like these on this difficulty, make sure to not make any jump on a Normal difficulty, it's just wrong.

1. 00:03:644 (4,5,6) - Make the spacing equal, it doesn't look so good right now to my eyes.
2. 00:24:461 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, make sure to fix it with the distance snap correctly.
3. 00:26:910 (3,4,5,6) - Same goes for this pattern, use distance snap to fix it.
4. 00:30:583 (7) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
5. 00:50:634 (1,2) - New combo should go on (2) and not on (1), fix it to follow your previous comboing.
6. 01:29:971 (1) ~ 01:48:950 (5) - This part doesn't have hitsounds at all, make sure to add them.
7. 01:46:808 (8) - New combo due to the stanza change.
8. 02:04:256 (1) ~ 02:07:930 (6) - This part doesn't have hitsounds at all, make sure to add them.

Andrea wrote:

~General~
Rename the difficulties with adding the guests as well so people can recognize who made such difficulty.~Hard~

1. 00:03:644 (4,5,6) - Make the spacing equal, it doesn't look so good right now to my eyes.
2. 00:24:461 (3,4,5) - Inconsistent spacing, make sure to fix it with the distance snap correctly.
3. 00:26:910 (3,4,5,6) - Same goes for this pattern, use distance snap to fix it.
4. 00:30:583 (7) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
5. 00:50:634 (1,2) - New combo should go on (2) and not on (1), fix it to follow your previous comboing.
6. 01:29:971 (1) ~ 01:48:950 (5) - This part doesn't have hitsounds at all, make sure to add them.
7. 01:46:808 (8) - New combo due to the stanza change.
8. 02:04:256 (1) ~ 02:07:930 (6) - This part doesn't have hitsounds at all, make sure to add them.

This map still need much work, good luck though, I hope my mod will be useful.

• • Non sono sicuro sul timing, secondo l'offset è un pò in anticipo, prova a chiedere aiuto agli esperti di timing per avere la conferma.
  • Considera di aggiungere un "soft-sliderslider.wav" silenziato, alcuni slider sono un pò troppo rumorosi in alcune parti della canzone.
  • Prova ad usare questi colori per le combo, si abbinano meglio col BG:
  
  SPOILER

  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 112,207,184
  Combo2 : 148,112,207

  • Ti consiglio di spostare il preview point a 00:31:195, questa parte, così come le altre parti kiai, sono quelle con più enfasi.
  • 01:41:561 (green timing section) - Questa sezione è unsnappata, muovila a 01:49:563.

• • Approach Rate: 3
  • Overall Difficulty: 3
  • You should add at least 1 spinner to avoid tie scores.
  • Some finishes in this diff sound a bit weird; music here is soft so try to replace them with whistles.
  • 00:16:501 (1) - Remove finish, music here is too soft so having a finish here sounds weird.
  • 00:29:971 (4) - Move this circle a bit up, it's almost overlapping with the previous slider.
  • 00:59:359 (5) - Increase the volume here, I don't really understand why you reduced it so much.
  • 01:04:256 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier to follow the melody in the background.
  • 01:44:665 (6) - Add a new combo.

• • HP Drain Rate: 4
  • Approach Rate: 5
  • Overall Difficulty: 5
  02:00:332 (break) - Avere un break qui per poi avere gli ultimi 6 secondi di mappa prima della fine non ha senso, mappa questa parte.
  
  Non ho altro da aggiungere, buoni hitsound, combo che seguono perfettamente la musica, pattern ottime e facili da intuire/giocare. Questa diff dovrebbe essere una Normal e sono sicuro che ti romperanno il cazzo riguardo i jump che hai usato nella diff, personalmente a me piacciono, non sono troppo esagerati e soprattutto forzati, si abbinano bene col tuo stile di mapping.

• • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • Aggiungi il letterbox nel break come le altre due diff.
  • Non mi piace come hai messo alcune combo, non metterle in modo che seguino le pattern ma mettile in modo che seguino la musica, prova ad aggiungerne una ad ogni stanza. (tick bianco grande)
  • Il flow in questa diff può essere migliorato parecchio, ad esempio guarda qua 00:05:481 (1,2,3) invece di mettere sti cerchi in fila indiana prova a creare una curva, stessa cosa qui 00:12:828 (7,8,9) il (7) invece di farlo dritto fallo come il (9).
  • Gli hitsound qua sono un pò scarsi, riguarda la diff e prova ad aggiungere qualche clap e whistle in più. (sarebbe fantastico se creassi una pattern di hitsound come ha fatto Nemis) Inoltre, ci sono dei cerchi dove puoi aggiungere qualche finish, ad esempio 00:36:093 (1) puoi sentire un suono simile a quello di un tamburo quindi un finish ci sta bene.
  • 00:59:971 (green timing section) - Non abbassare il volume così tanto qui, al limite mettilo al 30/40%.

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey moe :3!
Only suggestions here ><

Must be fix
It's only what I think

General

1. seem fine

[Revy]

1. 00:15:736 (6,7) - 6 1 grid right; 7 2 grid left
2. 00:17:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this part more systematic
3. 00:19:563 (2) - this slider end point should be 1 grid left to make it same like the slider before
4. 00:23:237 (3) - try to stack this slider end with 00:20:787 (5)
5. 00:28:746 (1) - 1 grid left
6. 00:33:032 (7) - this slider end should be 2 grid left to make it like the slider before
7. 00:47:420 (7) - make this slider like 00:46:195 (3). Just copy 00:46:195 (3) > ctrl + v > ctrl + h >ctrl + g
8. 00:52:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this more systematic
9. 01:14:052 (5,6) - same like 00:47:420
10. 01:38:389 (5) - 1 grid down
11. 01:40:379 (4) - NC ?
12. 01:59:665 (1) - I dont know if you do it with purpose but there is a spacing error

Yeah that's all
Nice map ~ Good luck with get it ranke C:

ErufenRito wrote:

from #modreqs

[General]

00:21:399 - 00:31:042 - that section could be greatly improved by using a hitsound like this one: http://puu.sh/2lbqO and later on could be used to mix up with other hitsounds too Your choice to use it or not. And if you do, and you're not sure how, don't hesitate to ask me for help! ~ I think i will keep this hitsounds :3

01:49:561 - green section not snapped to timing, and it is important to fix it cause it's kiai ~ Fixed :O

[Revy]

00:09:154 (1,2) - What about changing this: http://puu.sh/2lbe7 to this: http://puu.sh/2lbeQ ~ Puush offline Q.Q will update later
00:43:440 (1,2) - Spacing error? jumpy! idk if it right or not , i shall be grateful if you give me x: y: coordinates :3
00:47:420 (7) - Object not properly stacked (Not that it matters anyways) ~ Fixed ! (Ohgod didn't noticed that D:)

Revy wrote:

00:43:440 (1,2) - Spacing error? jumpy! idk if it right or not , i shall be grateful if you give me x: y: coordinates :3

Thankyouu!! :3

Dark_Ai wrote:

[Ran]

1. 00:03:644 (3) - move this slider 2 grid left + 2 grid up to blanket it better with (2) and I would delete whistle on the begin and adding on the end. It sounds better for me imo　　 fix
2. 00:40:991 (1,2) - this pattern look horrible :/ make it like this maybe? (would be better imo) 　fix
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:56:910 (2) - move this slider to x 476 y 120 　fix
4. 01:00:583 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I would end all these slider on the white lines hmm :/　all 1/4 rhythm get bored so no here sorry

ErufenRito wrote:

[Ran]

00:21:399 (1,2,3) - That sliderslide whistle... is that on purpose? If not... you should probably take it out, doesn't sound that good imo here
02:09:154 (1) -
02:11:603 (3) - Same as above
02:12:828 (4) - Same as above

ErufenRito wrote:

Revy wrote:

00:43:440 (1,2) - Spacing error? jumpy! idk if it right or not , i shall be grateful if you give me x: y: coordinates :3

Thankyouu!! :3

I meant the fact that 00:44:052 (2) - has a DS with previous object of 0,90x, and with next object 1,20

You could place that circle in somewhere like X=200 ; Y=214 , so it would have 1,20 DS with previous and next object

Chewin wrote:

http://puu.sh/2m0p8

1. 00:03:644 (3) - This slider repeat feels really good for a whistle
2. 00:16:501 (1) - Pls blanket with next slider
3. 00:39:767 (4) - Do a better blanket
4. 00:40:991 (1) - Stack under the previous (3)
5. 00:56:910 (2) - Better blanket pls
6. 01:38:542 (4) - If you're using sliders like this, do proper blankets

1. Amazing diff omg

1. 00:03:032 (2) - Metti la NC qua invece che prima. I red tick sono molto bbrutti
2. 00:04:256 (1) - NC
3. 00:05:481 (5) - Togli NC
4. 00:22:624 (1) - ^
5. 00:53:236 (2) - Omg NC qua xD
6. 00:56:910 (1) - Togli NC
7. 01:12:216 (7) - Fallo uguale a quello subito prima
8. 01:32:420 (3) - La NC va sui main beat, perciò qua
9. 01:37:318 (3) - ^
10. 01:39:154 (1) - Togli NC
11. 01:39:767 (7) - NC e togli quella dopo
12. 01:42:216 (7) - ^
13. 01:44:052 (6) - Fallo uguale a quello subito dopo
14. 01:56:910 (1,2,3) - Questo overlap è brutto, direi di sistemare un po' questo pattern
15. 02:15:277 (1) - Togli NC

1. 01:49:561 - snap to 01:49:563
   
2. 00:18:338 (6) - Visto che tutta la parte iniziale ha un flow con movimenti a cerchio, direi di fare reverse qua
3. 00:43:440 (1,1,1,1,1) - Wat huehue
4. 01:13:440 (3,1) - Si gioca molto male questo, io direi di togliere il reverse e far iniziare lo slider kick sul white tick. Ah si, e suona molto meglio così http://puu.sh/2q3Qc
5. 01:19:563 (1) - Stesso spacing dello stream pls ._. Non vedo anche il motivo della combo singolare; toglierei
6. 01:41:603 (3) - Quanto detto prima, flowa molto meglio in reverse
7. 01:52:624 (3) - Blanket plz
8. 01:53:237 (5) - Terzo puntino slider 1 grid down plz
9. 02:13:440 (3) - Blanket? O:
10. Pro diff , umad?