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[General]
use 'em for all diffs: Tronix DJ Remix [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_ Gezo
unsnapped kiai
[eLtigreXXx's Easy]
try to use whistles instead of claps for soft part of song? (aka use whistles instead of claps during non-kiai parts)
00:20:212 (4) - try to keep nimbers on circles under 6 (it;s confusing for beginners) and also put New Combo (NC) here for two reasons 1) it fits with music/vocals 2) it follows your pattern
00:24:510 (2) - try to make this slider 1/1 shorter? (end 00:25:227 - ) if you'll do it think about adding circle at 00:25:585. sounds much better
00:35:255 (1) - probably confusing for beginners because it's kinda hard to read/detect this slider (it's covered by spinner's hitburst)
00:59:611 (1) - it's too far from spinner. i think you shoul try to put it closer to spinner center (but be careful! try to avoid overlap with spinner's hitburst)
01:08:923 (3) - eh.. new combo here? (follows your comboing?)
01:34:710 (1) - doesn't really fits here. if you want to follow vocals remove this circle. (sounds kinda odd here)
01:49:395 (4) - sounds random here. and plays awkward for me. try to do it like this (01:49:395 (4) - circle / 01:49:753 - 2/1 slider)
02:28:794 (4) - same as 00:20:212 (4)
02:37:390 (4) - same as 00:20:212 (4) orz
02:35:241 (3,6) -didn't really like these slideres and crossing them isn't really good idea, imo. (nazi)
02:39:539 (1) - finish is surely should be deleted. it doesn't fit here at all.
[Normal]
comboing feels inconsistent. try to use new combos more often for 1st half of song
Approach Rate 5 - for consistency with your slider velocity and to keep diff settings balanced
00:24:152 - note here placed even on easiest diff. it's better if you'll put it here :/
00:43:314 - unused green line. remove green line here, please
00:43:672 - ^
01:02:834 (3,5) - no! it sounds odd. try to separate beats here. example
01:10:356 (1,2) - rhythm here is wrong. try to use circle instead of (1) (01:10:356) and start slider (2) at 01:10:714
01:35:069 - try to remove unused green line or add circle here.
01:50:828 (1) - ^ same as above. and example how to fix
01:53:693 - start spinner here? follows vocals better
02:04:796 (4) - remove reverse and make it 1/2 longer. sounds much better, imo
02:09:094 (1) - overlapped with spinner's hitburst. try to move circle somwhere else
02:13:751 (4) - same as 01:02:834 (3,5)
[Hard]
00:44:568 (1,1) - didn't really like these spinners. try to remove one of them and make first spinner longer?
01:54:051 (1,1) - same as above ^
02:02:558 (1,2,3) - shoul be 1/4 later o.o (move (1) at 02:02:558 - )
02:05:513 (1,1) - same suggestion about spinners. not a problem but plays awkward, imo
02:39:897 (1,1) - yes. spinners.
[TeA's Insane]
00:34:718 (1) -- try to remove this spinner (it doesn't fits here) and put circle at 00:35:972
00:46:180 (1) - ^ same here o.o (blah..blah..blah, do the same for all similar patterns)
00:56:208 (7) - 1/2 slider here would be good idea since i can clearly hear beat at 00:56:387 (and some similar patterns)
00:57:104 - and circle here (jumpy pattern) will help you to follow rhythm closer
[Taiko]
nice :3
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that's all for me.
[General]
use 'em for all diffs: Tronix DJ Remix [Te][Amo] eLtigreXXx _Gezo_ Gezo
unsnapped kiai
[eLtigreXXx's Easy]
try to use whistles instead of claps for soft part of song? (aka use whistles instead of claps during non-kiai parts)
00:20:212 (4) - try to keep nimbers on circles under 6 (it;s confusing for beginners) and also put New Combo (NC) here for two reasons 1) it fits with music/vocals 2) it follows your pattern
00:24:510 (2) - try to make this slider 1/1 shorter? (end 00:25:227 - ) if you'll do it think about adding circle at 00:25:585. sounds much better
00:35:255 (1) - probably confusing for beginners because it's kinda hard to read/detect this slider (it's covered by spinner's hitburst)
00:59:611 (1) - it's too far from spinner. i think you shoul try to put it closer to spinner center (but be careful! try to avoid overlap with spinner's hitburst)
01:08:923 (3) - eh.. new combo here? (follows your comboing?)
01:34:710 (1) - doesn't really fits here. if you want to follow vocals remove this circle. (sounds kinda odd here)
01:49:395 (4) - sounds random here. and plays awkward for me. try to do it like this (01:49:395 (4) - circle / 01:49:753 - 2/1 slider)
02:28:794 (4) - same as 00:20:212 (4)
02:37:390 (4) - same as 00:20:212 (4) orz
02:35:241 (3,6) -
02:39:539 (1) - finish is surely should be deleted. it doesn't fit here at all.
[Normal]
comboing feels inconsistent. try to use new combos more often for 1st half of song
Approach Rate 5 - for consistency with your slider velocity and to keep diff settings balanced
00:24:152 - note here placed even on easiest diff. it's better if you'll put it here :/
00:43:314 - unused green line. remove green line here, please
00:43:672 - ^
01:02:834 (3,5) - no! it sounds odd. try to separate beats here. example
01:10:356 (1,2) - rhythm here is wrong. try to use circle instead of (1) (01:10:356) and start slider (2) at 01:10:714
01:35:069 - try to remove unused green line or add circle here.
01:50:828 (1) - ^ same as above. and example how to fix
01:53:693 - start spinner here? follows vocals better
02:04:796 (4) - remove reverse and make it 1/2 longer. sounds much better, imo
02:09:094 (1) - overlapped with spinner's hitburst. try to move circle somwhere else
02:13:751 (4) - same as 01:02:834 (3,5)
[Hard]
00:44:568 (1,1) - didn't really like these spinners. try to remove one of them and make first spinner longer?
01:54:051 (1,1) - same as above ^
02:02:558 (1,2,3) - shoul be 1/4 later o.o (move (1) at 02:02:558 - )
02:05:513 (1,1) - same suggestion about spinners. not a problem but plays awkward, imo
02:39:897 (1,1) - yes. spinners.
[TeA's Insane]
00:34:718 (1) -- try to remove this spinner (it doesn't fits here) and put circle at 00:35:972
00:46:180 (1) - ^ same here o.o (blah..blah..blah, do the same for all similar patterns)
00:56:208 (7) - 1/2 slider here would be good idea since i can clearly hear beat at 00:56:387 (and some similar patterns)
00:57:104 - and circle here (jumpy pattern) will help you to follow rhythm closer
[Taiko]
nice :3
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that's all for me.