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Purist_old
32 posts
Joined August 2012
Purist_old
hi :)
因为我是新人所以如果哪说的不对的话请多包涵


General

因为音乐的声音比较大所以音效的音量可以调大点
个人推荐在60%左右

Easy

.osu文件里的SliderMultiplier听说还是改一下比较好
00:04:186(1)可以试试这个节奏
00:39:479(1)后移到00:39:656
00:59:420(2)这个呢
01:02:950(1)remove nc
01:14:773(3)感觉这样比较舒服
01:20:597(1)尾部延长到01:21:302
01:26:244(1)^
01:47:520(1)finish

Normal

00:02:775(3)叠好
00:27:127(3,4)^
00:58:009(2)这个滑条会碰到上方的血条
01:47:346(1)finish

Hard

OD-1
00:11:245(1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1)感觉这一串没必要每一个都加nc
另外可以加绿线让音量逐个减小
00:15:656(8)nc
00:16:009(1)remove nc
00:42:832(x)add note
00:44:244(x)^
00:49:715(5,6,7,1)滑条尾没叠在一起
01:09:303(6)nc
01:09:479(1)remove nc
01:14:950(1,1)这两个间距稍微大了点
01:27:655(x)add note
01:29:067(x)^
01:47:346(1)finish

Sakusaki

OD-1
几个比较长的连打可以用nc分下段
00:02:775(7)nc
00:03:304(1)remove nc
00:04:186(6)nc
00:04:716(1)remove nc
还有一段跟上面这个相似的
00:08:598(7,2)叠歪了
00:17:244(4)超出边界了
01:14:244(1,2,3)感觉改成3note就可以了

大概就这么多了 加油 :)
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Purist wrote:

大概就这么多了 加油
Thanks~音效我觉得能听到就行了
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lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
General
Mod from my queue
音质听起来很渣的样子...
new combo统一一下,每到大白线就用一个会比较好
music track调到1比较好(在song setup的audio最下面
enable countdown可以去掉(在song setup的storyboarding里
Stack leniency最好是调到4
mod得略渣,主要从玩家的感觉上来mod.如果你想的是难,而不是打起来爽而且随手FC,那么可以无视我的mod
这图红线只需要插一个

Sakusaki
HP8→7 (8的判定较高,7是最妥当的
OD8→7
00:06:127 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 我猜有人会吐槽这是烂梗.
00:30:480 (5) - 如果你要用这个梗，就别在下面叠note，会很不舒服(至少露出来一点
00:41:068 (1,2) - 来回一次就好
01:00:479 (4,5) - 叠着不舒服
01:35:861 (7) - 去掉note或者改成滑条在白线前停,白线放note
01:41:861 (2) - 去掉note
01:42:038 (3) - ^
01:42:038 (3) - ........你觉得这样打着会舒服吗?从良用滑条带过会比较好

其他地方没什么问题，只是这样打起来感觉不会“非常爽”
可以多套用01:32:597 (4,5) - 这个梗.这样打起来会比较“爽”
音效方面你没怎么添加whistle,这样也行,不过你要添加的话就得整个图加.
如果加了一半不加一半，感觉会很奇怪.
大致加法就是听音,起伏较大的音就加上whistle.
连着加三个以上听着会不太好.所以我一般是加两个就留一个note不加whistle.

Hard
HP7→5
OD6→5
AR7→8
00:48:832 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 差评！
01:13:361 (3,4,5,6,7) - 改了吧
01:21:655 (4) - ......
01:30:832 (8) - 不要叠着
01:33:126 (4,5,6,7) - 叠太多了
01:38:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 节奏都对不上

hard还是有点小跳会比较好，叠的地方也太多了.建议取缔

Normal
HP3→4
00:01:010 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 叠得太多，打起来不舒服
00:14:774 (4) - 这种滑条下叠note的梗在normal里不要用,新手们会很困扰的
00:45:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/3在normal里是用滑条带过的.(新手打得准起来会很难
01:14:244 (1,2,3) - 这种最好也用滑条带一下
01:45:843 (1) - ...这里可不是用1/3就能对上节奏的地方

Easy
Od2→1
00:04:186 (1) - 取缔，节奏对不上
00:39:479 (1) - ^
01:14:508 (2) - 1/3在easy里还用. 毫无人性;_;
01:25:538 (2) - 只有insane难度才能在滑条上叠note
01:45:786 (1) - 节奏对不上,而且在easy里不要两个转圈连在一起...

渣mod见谅 :?
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

lkx_shore wrote:

Sakusaki
01:42:038 (3) - ........你觉得这样打着会舒服吗?从良用滑条带过会比较好
说的是最后一段……？我打着没什么感觉 :?

Hard
AR7→8
我觉得hard还是不要太高……
已改，感谢mod~
音乐已换……虽然感觉还是渣
cmn_891127
1,308 posts
Joined July 2010
cmn_891127
Hi, Eggache0
Sorry for delay, you know, Midterm Exam

[Sakusaki]
00:06:127 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I really cannot see them clearly, if you really like this pattern, plz add NC, or you can use Ctrl+Shift+R
01:25:185 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:45:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not For Human. Ctrl+R (1,2) and (12,13)

[Hard]
00:12:127 (1,1,1,1,1) - why not use 1/4 reverse slider instead of notes
00:26:862 (2) - not fit here, remove
00:47:420 (5) - NC
00:49:538 (5) - NC
01:23:067 (7,1) - NC at (7) instead of (1)

[Normal]
00:45:303 (1,1) - too close for Normal diff, you can use One Note instead of spinner
00:55:185 (1,1) - ^, end at 00:56:597 and remove (1)
01:17:773 (1,1) - ^, end at 01:19:185

[Easy]
00:01:539 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - NC so frequently
01:17:773 (1,1) - like [Normal]
01:47:520 (1) - special start time

I love mapset of [Sakusaki]:3
GL and Star~
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

cmn_891127 wrote:

Exam too...
Thanks for modding and star!
Fia
Fia
换音效看看？现在的clap效果太弱

[Easy]
00:58:906 add note
01:11:965 - (1) remove nc
01:20:436 - (1,2) 这个梗和后面的放在一起太难了 缩短slider circle改到01:21:141

[Normal]
00:14:083 - (3,4) slider有点近……玩的时候看错拍了
00:28:000 - (1) add note
00:45:141 - (1) remove nc
00:46:553 - (3) nc
01:14:083 - (1,2,3) 1/3用slider

star 祝好运
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Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

PinkHeart wrote:

以上 差不多还是star了 考试顺利
star感谢 太晚了明天再看 不许提考试！
Fia
Fia
[Hard]
00:11:259 - (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) 太难了！
00:26:436 - (5,6) 间距和前面请保持一致
01:34:377 - (8) 换到下面的位置 nc
01:34:553 - (1) remove nc
01:45:451 - (1,2,3,4,5) 难按...

[Sakusaki]
00:43:024 - (9) clap
00:43:730 - (7) finish
00:45:141 - (1) finish

另两个难度mod补上
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Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

PinkHeart wrote:

[Easy]
01:20:436 - (1,2) 这个梗和后面的放在一起太难了 缩短slider circle改到01:21:141 正在考虑...
[Normal]
00:45:141 - (1) remove nc 我觉得不合适...
[Hard]
01:34:377 - (8) 换到下面的位置 nc 位置现在的比较好
麻烦补mod了 抱歉
UnderminE
osu! Alumni
4,011 posts
Joined August 2010
UnderminE
First of all, loved the song.

[Easy]
You don't have to write your name in tags since the map its yours already. If you have a guest diff or guest storyboard, you have to add their names in tags.

40% is really loud for this song, dunno maybe use 50? (Well if you will use 50 and will use that suggestion I did below, you will have to change the volume according to 50)
00:33:865 - This part has to get louder. So I am suggesting you to add these:
SPOILER
I am suggesting you to use whistles for that back-sound during kiai time. Normal-whistle ofc. So if you want to do it, add these time points:
SPOILER
You can use 1/4 beat snap divisor to add easily. Also I used 60%, whistles will be heard better.




After adding all:
01:20:454 (1) - Whistle (but only on this note)
01:21:689 (1) - Whistle on slider (not on hit notes)
01:23:101 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:24:513 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:26:101 (1) - Whistle but only on this note
01:27:336 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:28:748 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:31:042 (3) - Whistle (remove clap)
01:31:748 (1) - Whistle but only on this note
01:32:983 (2) - Whistle on slider
01:34:395 (3) - Whistle on slider
01:35:807 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:37:395 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:38:631 (2) - Whistle on slider
01:40:042 (3) - Whistle on slider

You can do the same trick for the first kiai time, but dunno it's up to you.

00:57:865 - Add one timing section here with kiai mode. And end it here 00:57:954 - Because that part has an effect like BAM and after that song goes normally. That will make a good affect.

About spacing;
You used 0,8x distance but when I check all, some of them are placed with 0,9 and some of them 1,0. You can do this with Hard or Insane diffs, but we don't prefer this kind of spacing on Easy and Normals. (Well, you can do a little bit tricky on Normals maybe, but definitely not on Easy)
I am suggesting you to use 0,9x or 1,0x distance. To change it, press Alt and while pressing change it from top-right.

If you want to see which notes are too far or not, just click on an object and look top-right. If you will use 0,8x, this must be about 0,80-0,90x
Hope you understood :D

[Normal]
You don't have to write your name in tags since the map its yours already. If you have a guest diff or guest storyboard, you have to add their names in tags.

40% is really loud for this song, dunno maybe use 50?
Same thing about spacing goes here too. Use 1,0x distance spacing~
You can use that trick I talked about before (whistles on kiai :D). If you don't know how to make it, I can help you with timing sections. I am following your map~
00:04:042 (3) - stack it properly
00:15:159 (4,5,6,7) - This part is too confusing for a Normal diff. Make it a bit easier.
00:20:807 (3,4,5,6) - ^ Same thing
00:26:454 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:29:630 (1,2,3,4) - You used these four so many times. Why don't you use a repeat-slider? You can see so many repeat sliders in Normal diffs, it's like a solution for things like these.
00:33:865 (2,4,6) - Add same timing sections in Easy diff, remember this one:
00:33:865 - This part has to get louder. So I am suggesting you to add these:
SPOILER
00:57:865 - Add that kiai time here too.
01:11:983 (3) - Move this to somewhere else
01:12:689 (4,5) - Make a slider with these two
Those longs sliders in the end: You can try different kind of shapes for sliders. Using same kind of slider doesn't look good dear.

[Hard]
You don't have to write your name in tags since the map its yours already. If you have a guest diff or guest storyboard, you have to add their names in tags.

40% is really loud for this song, dunno maybe use 50?
Use soft whistle time to time, its like you dont have any hitsound except finish-sound.
You can add that kiai time I suggested here too.

There is nothing wrong with spacing or sliders in my opinion. But IT NEEDS HITSOUNDS. Really, try to use Normal-hitsounds too, whistles, all kind of them. You made a nice rhythm in Hard, but its nothing without hitsounds. Try on them more~~

[Insane]
Everything I said in Hard diff goes for this diff too. It needs hitsounds, whistles too much.
You can add that short kiai time I suggested in this diff too.
01:10:572 (5,6,7) - This pattern looks ugly, try something different

[Song Folder]
There are 2 .osb files, delete one please.

Okay that's all, sorry for my shitty mood. All I can say that your map needs hitsounds so much. Star'd, good luck~
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

UnderminE wrote:

Okay that's all, sorry for my shitty mood. All I can say that your map needs hitsounds so much. Star'd, good luck~
Thank you for modding and star. I'll try adding some whistles.
Tenshichan
596 posts
Joined September 2011
Tenshichan
M4M From my queue~

[General]
  1. Delete Unneeded osb file from your song folder (there are 2 right now)
  2. Your Kiai time must be the same in every diff
  3. Give every diff a Lead-in of at least 2 seconds
[Easy]

  1. 01:44:258 (1) - Unsnapped
  2. 01:45:819 (1) - ^
  3. 01:47:206 (1) - ^
  4. 00:02:630 (2,3) - Make it a slider?
  5. 00:05:983 (1,2,3) - How they are placed under the slider is pretty difficult for the easiest diff, I would suggest to try something else there
  6. 00:16:924 (2) - End this slider at 00:17:630
  7. 00:39:159 - Probably make a short slider until 00:39:512 and delete (1)?
  8. 00:47:630 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This may be also unfriendly for beginners, perhaps change it a bit, and I don't think there is a need for so many NC
  9. 00:47:983 (2) - Add finish sound
  10. 01:02:454 (3) - Move it to the same height as (2)
  11. 01:02:807 (4) - Move it to the same height as (1)
  12. 01:07:748 (1,2) - Try this? If you change, don't forget to add finish sound on the slider ends
  13. 01:12:689 (5,6) - Better make them a slider because of the sudden spacing change
  14. 01:21:336 (2) - Might not be suitable for an easy diff
  15. 01:26:983 (2) - ^
[Normal]

  1. 01:44:258 (1) - Unsnapped
  2. 00:29:630 (1,2,3,4) - Move it a bit away from the slider so it isn't under it, doesn't look so nice
  3. 00:33:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This feels somehow a bit wrong. Probably make (2) and (3) into a slider and (4) and (5) too
  4. 00:43:748 (6) - Don't make it overlap the next slider
  5. 00:47:630 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Pretty difficult for normal I guess, maybe make at least one of those combos a repeating slider
  6. 01:08:454 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:09:159 (1) - ^
  8. 01:14:807 (2) - Add finish sound
  9. 01:17:630 (1) - Too short spinner for a normal diff
  10. 01:19:042 (1,1,1,1,1) - I think this new combo spam is not needed
  11. 01:40:042 (1) - Remove clap and whistle and add finish sound
  12. 01:42:689 (3) - Move it that it isn't on the edge of the slider
[Hard]

  1. 01:43:039 (1) - Unsnapped
  2. 01:44:258 (1) - ^
  3. 01:44:779 (2) - ^
  4. 01:45:125 (3) - ^
  5. 00:00:865 (1,1,1) - No need for new combos here
  6. 00:10:571 (3) - Make it parallel to (1) from the same combo
  7. 00:11:277 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - You seem to like this, but I don't know if so much new combos are necessary ^^
  8. 00:20:101 (4) - Better move it on top of (5)
  9. 00:21:865 (2,3) - You should try to make a proper spacing here, because it looks weird
  10. 00:43:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it is better to not stack them
  11. 00:44:277 - Perhaps add a slider here and let it end where (7) is now, and delete (6)
  12. 00:49:218 (1) - Better move it on top of (2)
  13. 01:06:248 (8) - Probably delete it as I think it doesn't follow the rhythm quite well
  14. 01:12:512 (2,3) - This gap is imo a bit far for a hard
  15. 01:22:042 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice, but also a bit confusing pattern, some of the patterns after it are also very confusing ... Probably alternate a bit to make them more readable
  16. 01:39:865 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't stack
  17. 01:40:571 (6) - Make the curve on the other side so it doesn't overlap with the next pattern
  18. 01:45:469 (1,2) - I think this notes don't fit very well
[Sakusaki]

  1. HP Drain -1? It's too high right now
  2. 00:05:983 (2) - I think it is hard to read that the stream goes in circles here (more hard if players use a skin without transparent 300s and)
  3. 00:34:571 (1,3) - CTRL + G
  4. 00:35:101 (4,5) - ^
  5. 00:39:159 (9) - NC
  6. 01:02:983 (4) - Maybe give it a better spacing
  7. 01:10:924 (6) - Delete note and let slider end here
  8. 01:25:042 (2) - As in 00:05:983
  9. 01:49:978 (1,1,1) - Too close to the spinner, shouldn't be a triplet here
Awesome song! Sakusaki is very good, with all the cool star patterns. Good luck to get it ranked! :D
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Tenshichan wrote:

M4M From my queue~
Thanks for mod~
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
Easy

00:01:395- kiai should start here
00:05:983- dont stack with previous slider
00:39:336- hard to catch for beginner
00:52:218- Finish
00:57:865- kiai should start here
01:20:454- ^

Normal

Kiai's are same > easy diff
00:45:865- RNC
00:49:042- far from previous combos so hard to catch
01:10:218 (1,2) looks bad because touching hp bar maybe 2 grid down ?
01:21:689- finish
01:23:101- ^
01:27:336- ^
01:28:748- ^
01:30:159- ^

Hard

Check spacing.

Insane

Looks great
Star Stream
2,038 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
Timing check from my queue~
1. Offset: 1,430ms BPM: 170.00
Only 1 red line~
Good luck then~
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

HellDawn wrote:

Thanks for mod~

Star Stream wrote:

Thanks for the timing check! Helped a lot...
Kuroneko-sHerald
1,081 posts
Joined August 2008
Kuroneko-sHerald
Sorry for delay :(

[General]
After loading loading the map on osu! Hard and Sakusaki give "audio error for this beatmap".
After first refresh they disappear and after the second they reappear with the audio error fixed :o
I tried to download the map again to see if the osz i had was corrupted, but it gave the same issue.
Then i found that the problem is caused by the folder named "beifen", because it has a sort of backup of Hard and Sakusaki in it.
Remove this folder and the problem should fixes.

Hard has audio lead-in 1004 instead of 1015.

Please be consistent with kiai. Use these kiaki on all diffs.
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:01:430, ends on 00:12:547
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:57:724, ends on 00:58:253
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:20:488, ends on 01:43:077

[Tags]
On Hard and Sakusaki there is double space between "TINKERBELL" and "Sakura_Sakimashita". Remove it.
Why there is underscore between "Sakura" and "Sakimashita"? The right name is "Sakura, Sakimashita". So, since comma can be omitted, I suggest to change to "Sakura Sakimashita"

[Normal]
01:44:312 (1) - end this slider at 01:45:371 -
01:45:900 (1) - I think you should move it at 01:45:724 - (end at 01:46:782 - ) and to add a beat at 01:46:959 -

[Hard]
Hard? This time the star system is right, this is SPARTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA insane.
HP Drain Rate -1 or -2
00:45:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since this part is mapped with 1/6 i suggest to change the placement order to be more easy to get the time change.
Example
00:46:606 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Messy, really messy :?
01:14:135 (1,1,1,1) - Should be mapped with 1/6 
01:14:135 - 
01:14:371 - 
01:14:606 - 
01:14:841 -

01:20:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Messy
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio
[quote="Kuroneko-sHerald"]Sorry for delay :(

[General]
After loading loading the map on osu! Hard and Sakusaki give "audio error for this beatmap".
After first refresh they disappear and after the second they reappear with the audio error fixed :o
I tried to download the map again to see if the osz i had was corrupted, but it gave the same issue.
Then i found that the problem is caused by the folder named "beifen", because it has a sort of backup of Hard and Sakusaki in it.
Remove this folder and the problem should fixes.

→I‘m so sorry for that......

[Tags]
On Hard and Sakusaki there is double space between "TINKERBELL" and "Sakura_Sakimashita". Remove it.
Why there is underscore between "Sakura" and "Sakimashita"? The right name is "Sakura, Sakimashita". So, since comma can be omitted, I suggest to change to "Sakura Sakimashita"

→ok.
[Normal]
01:44:312 (1) - end this slider at 01:45:371 -
01:45:900 (1) - I think you should move it at 01:45:724 - (end at 01:46:782 - ) and to add a beat at 01:46:959 -

→it sounds good, thanks.
[Hard]
Hard? This time the star system is right, this is SPARTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA insane.

HP Drain Rate -1 or -2 →HD-1.

01:14:135 (1,1,1,1) - Should be mapped with 1/6 →ok.
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
哇软妹
说真的我不喜欢这vocal

hitsounds不想多说没issue可吐

[General]
后面的萌萌萌萌萌萌萌萌萌萌妹子萌音从mapping来说没必要建议砍掉 而且过20%了貌似
offset拉前一拍 不要把绿线和红线叠一起

怎么感觉preview点不对...副歌不在这里?

[Storyboard]
white2.png是什么用处...osb那行代码也是

[Easy]
这张图的spacing感觉一直在0.9±0.1波动...
节奏略违和..太跟vocal了

00:12:724 (1) - imo这里spacing别跟0.75x跟1x 没可读性
00:28:253 (3,4) - 感觉这里别一样斜度
00:39:194 (1) - ...真的跟vocal? 有点难读
01:21:724 (1) - spacing
01:45:900 (1) - 可读性...建议拉前1/2

[Normal]
这个的节奏比上一个难度处理的更不好
...因为该难的地方你跟vocal出不来 间奏和前奏又那么密
like these
01:00:724
01:03:547
01:06:371
...etc.

00:00:900 (1,2,3) - 有点响了 vol-15
00:07:077 (1,2,1) - 三角形nazi
01:14:841 (2) - addition normal...那为啥+clap

[Hard]
00:06:018 (1,1,1) - 这里听起来已经不是不舒服了
01:07:782 (4,5,6) - hmm...突然那么大个gap
01:14:135 (1,1,1,1) - 很明显3/4*2+1/2 不是等分

[Sakusaki]
00:05:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这什么新梗
00:12:724 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏上说没必要 像是硬塞 后面同
00:15:547 (4) - +NC
00:50:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 前半段没什么打击力 还有怎么那么大疾走感感觉这里需要打击感
01:14:135 (1,2,3) - 同Hard 非等分
01:45:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 太鬼畜

一些pattern还是有好好设计的也看得出很用心 但总体来看大局不是很有规划
比起前面些po所说的hitsounds...其实比起音效进阶更应该先抓抓图感而不是硬插梗

要给赞 快把萌梨那张b a diamond挖出来
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Curisu wrote:

说真的我不喜欢这vocal
+1...

[General]
offset拉前一拍 不要把绿线和红线叠一起
改了

怎么感觉preview点不对...副歌不在这里?
preview副歌我觉得效果不好

[Storyboard]
white2.png是什么用处...osb那行代码也是
我蠢只会这样拖时间拖到萌音那块

[Easy]
这张图的spacing感觉一直在0.9±0.1波动...
节奏略违和..太跟vocal了

00:12:724 (1) - imo这里spacing别跟0.75x跟1x 没可读性
00:28:253 (3,4) - 感觉这里别一样斜度
00:39:194 (1) - ...真的跟vocal? 有点难读
01:21:724 (1) - spacing
01:45:900 (1) - 可读性...建议拉前1/2

都改了

[Normal]
这个的节奏比上一个难度处理的更不好
...因为该难的地方你跟vocal出不来 间奏和前奏又那么密
like these
01:00:724
01:03:547
01:06:371
...etc.

00:00:900 (1,2,3) - 有点响了 vol-15
00:07:077 (1,2,1) - 三角形nazi
01:14:841 (2) - addition normal...那为啥+clap

我考虑要不要remap

[Hard]
00:06:018 (1,1,1) - 这里听起来已经不是不舒服了
我觉得还好我再去看看其他人怎么说
01:07:782 (4,5,6) - hmm...突然那么大个gap
是说前面那个gap么...这个spacing才0.88...
01:14:135 (1,1,1,1) - 很明显3/4*2+1/2 不是等分
改了

[Sakusaki]
00:05:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这什么新梗
坑人好爽啊s/25372打这个老图时看到的
00:12:724 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏上说没必要 像是硬塞 后面同
改了
00:15:547 (4) - +NC
改了
00:50:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 前半段没什么打击力 还有怎么那么大疾走感感觉这里需要打击感
不太懂疾走的意思……大概是说我犯懒加了一片clap？
01:14:135 (1,2,3) - 同Hard 非等分
改了（大概
01:45:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 太鬼畜
直接打打不过去么我觉得已经很不鬼畜了……

一些pattern还是有好好设计的也看得出很用心 但总体来看大局不是很有规划
比起前面些po所说的hitsounds...其实比起音效进阶更应该先抓抓图感而不是硬插梗
坑人还是好爽啊我去试试抓...

要给赞 快把萌梨那张b a diamond挖出来
这么黑的黑历史我居然忘了删 /摔
连续两次啪的就连不上了 语气不好 太抱歉
Heatherfield
927 posts
Joined March 2010
Heatherfield
aiaiclala fans club presents
[General]
offset:2,目前长白线位置不对.
[Sakusaki]
Overmapped
看得出排列是花了心思想要摆好看的,但是很多地方其实和歌曲并不相合.另外节奏方面,一般来说那种音乐里没有的三连不会像这样放这么多白线起,这种节奏打起来很别扭的.下面只是找些典型,重复的不提了.
details:
kiai和别的难度统一?
00:06:003 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - astom作图如同弱智...学学sb就好,梗还是算了
00:11:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不知道是表现什么..
00:13:061 (2,3,4) - ^
00:36:356 (3,4,5) - 白线起的3连还是少放为妙
00:45:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议这样
00:54:884 (7) - 似乎摆歪了?
00:57:179 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 三个一组的意义...?
01:04:061 (6) - 碰到血条 前面也有几个地方有点沾边
01:13:238 (4,5,6) - 建议这样
01:23:120 (3,4,5) - 血条
01:28:591 (2) - ^
01:32:209 (2,3) - 不妙的节奏,这里开始的这段节奏违和感都蛮强的
01:45:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个间距实在略大..
01:47:061 (11) - 这个地方已经不是/1/3了,可以把10改成slider拖半拍
01:50:032 (1,1) - 其实这里有1/8 不来一发吗(误

[Hard]
01:13:856 (7) - add note?
01:41:650 (1) - 间距是不是近了点
01:46:944 (4) - 同insane,这个就不用1/3了吧

[Normal]
AR略低吧好像..+1?
01:45:885 (1,2,3) - 打击点会很奇怪吧..另外最后一个的节奏修改意见同其他diff

[Easy]
01:14:120 (1) - 这不是3/4么

:)
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Heatherfield wrote:

aiaiclala fans club presents
[General]
offset:2,目前长白线位置不对. 天意（
[Sakusaki]
Overmapped 球翻译
看得出排列是花了心思想要摆好看的,但是很多地方其实和歌曲并不相合.另外节奏方面,一般来说那种音乐里没有的三连不会像这样放这么多白线起,这种节奏打起来很别扭的.下面只是找些典型,重复的不提了. 我也觉得是花了心思摆的 可惜I是瞎摆的……
details:
kiai和别的难度统一? 居然还没有统一 简直……
00:06:003 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - astom作图如同弱智...学学sb就好,梗还是算了 stress 换梗又要大改……
00:11:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不知道是表现什么.. 这里不会摆了 stress
00:13:061 (2,3,4) - ^
00:36:356 (3,4,5) - 白线起的3连还是少放为妙 了解了……
00:45:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议这样
00:54:884 (7) - 似乎摆歪了? 不太懂 应该没有
00:57:179 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 三个一组的意义...? 好看（飞
01:04:061 (6) - 碰到血条 前面也有几个地方有点沾边 改了 谢提醒
01:13:238 (4,5,6) - 建议这样 好像很不错……
01:23:120 (3,4,5) - 血条
01:28:591 (2) - ^
01:32:209 (2,3) - 不妙的节奏,这里开始的这段节奏违和感都蛮强的 节奏无能 试着改改吧
01:45:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个间距实在略大.. 缩小了
01:47:061 (11) - 这个地方已经不是/1/3了,可以把10改成slider拖半拍 确实是……改了
01:50:032 (1,1) - 其实这里有1/8 不来一发吗(误 好（大误

[Hard]
01:13:856 (7) - add note? 没懂……前面一拍？
01:41:650 (1) - 间距是不是近了点
01:46:944 (4) - 同insane,这个就不用1/3了吧 同insane，改了……

[Normal]
AR略低吧好像..+1? 加几都无所谓（飞
01:45:885 (1,2,3) - 打击点会很奇怪吧..另外最后一个的节奏修改意见同其他diff 改了

[Easy]
01:14:120 (1) - 这不是3/4么 大脑已然脱线看不出是什么了

:)
Ranger
939 posts
Joined June 2011
Ranger
From my modding queue

[Hard]
00:06:356 (1) - Remove NC here
00:06:708 (1) - ^
00:30:003 (3) - how about make more as a triangle?like this
00:46:591 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - um...it`s too hard i think.make more easier plz (throw more interval...maybe?)
01:22:061 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^


[Sakusaki]
lol....very hard....
i think this diff like overmapping....but rhythm is good.
i`m recommended silder velocity a little lower

00:43:237 (5,6) - how about this two note change the silder?
01:10:238 (3) - put the end of the 01:10:591 (5) (x:256 y:120).it looks better to me


normal and easy diff is nothing special to me
good luck~ :)
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

[Ranger] wrote:

From my modding queue

[Hard]
00:06:356 (1) - Remove NC here
00:06:708 (1) - ^
00:30:003 (3) - how about make more as a triangle?like this
→looks fine...Changed
00:46:591 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - um...it`s too hard i think.make more easier plz (throw more interval...maybe?)
→Maybe interval is good. Changed


[Sakusaki]

00:43:237 (5,6) - how about this two note change the silder? →ok

normal and easy diff is nothing special to me
good luck~ :)
Thanks for modding.
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
mod
[Sakusaki]
其实这diff好绕的啊，我就提点特别绕的
00:04:061 (1) - ^ (flow)
00:04:767 (5) - clap
00:06:531 (7) - finish
00:07:238 (2) - 好绕
00:12:708 (1) - 头finish
00:13:061 (2) - remove finish
00:42:707 - add note
00:42:796 (1) - remove note
00:43:767 (1,2,3) - 感觉这里这样打击感不好.改成这样？
00:45:002 (5) - remove clap
你这一段的clap太乱了，用2/4clap的效果最好,然后把下面的finish也改了试试
01:19:061 (1) - addfinish
01:19:414 (5) - ^
01:19:767 (9) - ^
01:20:120 (13) - ^
01:20:472 (1) - 这个finish音量100%处理！
01:42:709 (6) - 头finish
01:44:297 (8) - removefinish
01:45:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 建议换成大跳滑条，不然可能会因为这个梗，你的图被黑到8.9分
01:47:209 (1) - 停在01:49:766并且20%音量，把后面的梗改成01:49:943起的1/4三连打

[Hard]
所有难度Timing必须一致！ 加粗醒目
01:27:532 - addnote,然后蓝线的音效移到红线
01:28:944 (9) - ^

[Normal]
00:07:414 (2) - 这种梗用在nm难度真是要灭绝nmplayer;_;

00:07:060 (1) - removenc
00:07:414 (2,5,8) - NC
00:11:120 (1) - 大白线起，要给nmplayer准备时间
01:14:120 (1,2,3) - nmplayer不会打,换成滑条吧
01:24:532 (1) - 换成长滑条
01:30:179 (1) - ^,后面这么难真是
01:42:356 (6,7) - 好像nm不能这么放
01:45:885 (1,2,3) - 最好是改成一/两个滑条

[Easy]
00:24:356 (2) - 在easy叠起来感觉不会再爱(虽然没问题)
00:40:238 (3) - 思考
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

lkx_Shore wrote:

Easy
00:24:356 (2) - 在easy叠起来感觉不会再爱(虽然没问题)　－叠头我觉得不是大问题
00:40:238 (3) - 思考　－nc了后面的note

Normal
00:07:414 (2) - 这种梗用在nm难度真是要灭绝nmplayer;_;
00:07:060 (1) - removenc
00:07:414 (2,5,8) - NC　－NMplayerl就没必要用nc帮助读图了吧……
00:11:120 (1) - 大白线起，要给nmplayer准备时间　－fixed
01:14:120 (1,2,3) - nmplayer不会打,换成滑条吧　－fixed
01:24:532 (1) - 换成长滑条　－fixed
01:30:179 (1) - ^,后面这么难真是　－fixed　改简单了
01:42:356 (6,7) - 好像nm不能这么放　－fixed
01:45:885 (1,2,3) - 最好是改成一/两个滑条　－两个滑条打击点会很奇怪……这里不太会改

Hard
所有难度Timing必须一致！ 加粗醒目　－你没加粗
01:27:532 - addnote,然后蓝线的音效移到红线　－加了，但是难度变得很卧槽……
01:28:944 (9) - ^

Sakusaki
其实这diff好绕的啊，我就提点特别绕的 －用的都是五角星梗难以不绕（玩笑
00:04:061 (1) - ^ (flow) fixed
00:04:767 (5) - clap －……你认真的？
00:06:531 (7) - finish －听着真是喜感 先改了看看
00:07:238 (2) - 好绕 －算了 想让slider砸一下
00:12:708 (1) - 头finish fixed
00:13:061 (2) - remove finish
00:42:707 - add note －这片大改了一下
00:42:796 (1) - remove note
00:43:767 (1,2,3) - 感觉这里这样打击感不好.改成这样？
00:45:002 (5) - remove clap
你这一段的clap太乱了，用2/4clap的效果最好,然后把下面的finish也改了试试
01:19:061 (1) - addfinish
01:19:414 (5) - ^
01:19:767 (9) - ^
01:20:120 (13) - ^
01:20:472 (1) - 这个finish音量100%处理！
01:42:709 (6) - 头finish
01:44:297 (8) - removefinish 　－都改了
01:45:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 建议换成大跳滑条，不然可能会因为这个梗，你的图被黑到8.9分　－思考 改完我觉得说不定会到7分
01:47:209 (1) - 停在01:49:766并且20%音量，把后面的梗改成01:49:943起的1/4三连打　－fixed（笑
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
你好
[Sakusaki]
00:12:620 (8) - add clap
00:40:944 (1,2) - 这梗好容易路人...
00:42:532 (3,4) - add clap
00:45:179 (1) - 降音量处理55~60%你自己挑一个喜欢的音量，我觉得57%比较好
00:46:238 (6) - add clap
00:48:003 (1) - add finish
00:48:709 (1) - add finish
00:49:414 (1) - add finish
00:57:356 (3,5,7,8) - add clap
01:12:003 (1,3) - 头add finish
01:14:650 (3) - remove clap
01:20:296 (15) - add clap
01:23:648 (2) - 这一段开始漏了clap?
01:37:061 (6) - 头finish
01:46:237 (1,1,1) - NC (哇好带感)
01:47:119 (8) - 放在x280,y36?（不改也没问题,不过我能想象到正常人玩到这会说wtf...!）
01:47:209 (1) - remove finish,5%音量
01:49:943 (1) - 用50%音量的S-1
01:50:119 (3) - removefinish
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

lkx_Shore wrote:

你好
→这啥梗
[Sakusaki]
00:12:620 (8) - add clap
00:40:944 (1,2) - 这梗好容易路人... →说的是前面那个梗？
00:42:532 (3,4) - add clap
00:45:179 (1) - 降音量处理55~60%你自己挑一个喜欢的音量，我觉得57%比较好 →]我想升音量把后面的60%拖过来了[/color]
00:46:238 (6) - add clap →好
00:48:003 (1) - add finish
00:48:709 (1) - add finish
00:49:414 (1) - add finish →算了
00:57:356 (3,5,7,8) - add clap
01:12:003 (1,3) - 头add finish →好
01:14:650 (3) - remove clap
01:20:296 (15) - add clap
01:23:648 (2) - 这一段开始漏了clap? →真漏了……
01:37:061 (6) - 头finish →好
01:46:237 (1,1,1) - NC (哇好带感) →你在说哪……
01:47:119 (8) - 放在x280,y36?（不改也没问题,不过我能想象到正常人玩到这会说wtf...!）
01:47:209 (1) - remove finish,5%音量
01:49:943 (1) - 用50%音量的S-1
01:50:119 (3) - removefinish
怎么从第二页开始每次一给就是2kd 另助攻三页给个赞
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
sorry。。你的图太难MOD了（能力不足）所以。。。。
只能Shoot Star了。。。。
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Sun Rainbow wrote:

sorry。。你的图太难MOD了（能力不足）所以。。。。
只能Shoot Star了。。。。
我等这句话等了四个月（砸桌
谢star
qkenan
134 posts
Joined October 2010
qkenan
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. 没有用到的whitle2.jpg，以及无用的.osb文件，删了

Easy

  1. 似乎曾经改过offset，所以有些note是unsnapped的，按Ctrl+Alt+A用AIMod检查一下Snapping，有很多差了2ms
  2. 01:43:061 (1,1,1) - 拉点形状吧……三条直线实在有点……

Normal

  1. 第一次见到有如此长串的N难度……
  2. 同Easy，检查Unsnapped Notes
  3. 绿线似乎也有不少unsnapped的，不过看来只有差1ms，大概不要紧

Hard

  1. 00:29:649 (1) - 不舒服……尤其是前面还有鼓点的情况下空一拍stack，在00:29:472 加个note吧
  2. 00:39:002 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 挤作一团_(:з」∠)_ 按着0.7~0.8x继续摆就好，没空的间考虑下按上下交错着放？Just suggestion
  3. 00:43:237 (6,7) - 这里要跟vocal，前后却是加强鼓点的5连，怎么都不会觉得很协调吧……建议改成滑条
  4. 00:44:649 (6,7) - ^
  5. 00:45:178 (1,2,3,4) - …………突然变成1/3的节奏……虽然音乐的确如此，但是一般初见就是2x100 1x50了吧……好歹把距离放近些
  6. 01:07:766 (4) - NC？
  7. 01:14:384 (1,1) - 没必要都加NC，跟着前面的NC就行

Sakusaki

  • 太多五角星单点的梗了……越到后来间距还越大，不仅没那么好看了也难的没什么意义……即便再好的梗也经不起反复使用哦
  1. 同Easy，检查Unsnapped Notes
  2. 00:18:091 (9,10) - 摆成这样稍微顺一些
    SPOILER
  3. 00:18:708 (2) - 这里应该是Whistle？
  4. 00:22:944 (6) - ^删掉Clap？
  5. 00:24:354 (2) - ^Whistle？这一段是想放24Clap然后改成的24Whistle？感觉有些乱，一些clap的使用觉得比较奇怪
  6. 00:30:003 (2,3) - 从音乐来听，没必要放1/4的slider吧，circle就好
  7. 00:43:060 (7,8,1) - 别手，⑦⑧应该不能动，把①slider的角度调一下吧
  8. 00:57:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 啧啧，真是凶残
  9. 01:43:591 (4,5,6,7) - +Clap，用大概40~50%的绿线
  10. 01:45:179 (3,4) - ^ 首尾都加
  11. 01:45:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 虽然貌似更凶残不过意外得打起来还不错，bdbf
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. 没有用到的whitle2.jpg，以及无用的.osb文件，删了
white2我用来拖时间拖到妹子卖萌（
osb我看看去……

Easy

  1. 似乎曾经改过offset，所以有些note是unsnapped的，按Ctrl+Alt+A用AIMod检查一下Snapping，有很多差了2ms
    ._.检查不出来……手动摆了一下
  2. 01:43:061 (1,1,1) - 拉点形状吧……三条直线实在有点……
我弱逼我去改

Normal

  1. 第一次见到有如此长串的N难度……
    反正4.5的N有的是（飞
  2. 同Easy，检查Unsnapped Notes
  3. 绿线似乎也有不少unsnapped的，不过看来只有差1ms，大概不要紧

Hard

  1. 00:29:649 (1) - 不舒服……尤其是前面还有鼓点的情况下空一拍stack，在00:29:472 加个note吧加了俩
  2. 00:39:002 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 挤作一团_(:з」∠)_ 按着0.7~0.8x继续摆就好，没空的间考虑下按上下交错着放？Just suggestion好
  3. 00:43:237 (6,7) - 这里要跟vocal，前后却是加强鼓点的5连，怎么都不会觉得很协调吧……建议改成滑条
    虽然不知道怎么回事但我跟的好像是大鼓
  4. 00:44:649 (6,7) - ^
  5. 00:45:178 (1,2,3,4) - …………突然变成1/3的节奏……虽然音乐的确如此，但是一般初见就是2x100 1x50了吧……好歹把距离放近些._.改成四个二连？我觉得距离近了会直接读成1/2
  6. 01:07:766 (4) - NC？
    哦哦漏了
  7. 01:14:384 (1,1) - 没必要都加NC，跟着前面的NC就行

Sakusaki

  • 太多五角星单点的梗了……越到后来间距还越大，不仅没那么好看了也难的没什么意义……即便再好的梗也经不起反复使用哦
    单纯不会摆note了而已（飞（难度这方面我不认可
  1. 同Easy，检查Unsnapped Notes
    ._.这个难度居然查出来了……真是良心
  2. 00:18:091 (9,10) - 摆成这样稍微顺一些
    SPOILER
    sakura脸被遮住了 差评考虑
  3. 00:18:708 (2) - 这里应该是Whistle？
  4. 00:22:944 (6) - ^删掉Clap？
  5. 00:24:354 (2) - ^Whistle？这一段是想放24Clap然后改成的24Whistle？感觉有些乱，一些clap的使用觉得比较奇怪
    音效我渣扬声器啥都听不出来
  6. 00:30:003 (2,3) - 从音乐来听，没必要放1/4的slider吧，circle就好
    改了3
  7. 00:43:060 (7,8,1) - 别手，⑦⑧应该不能动，把①slider的角度调一下吧
    加弯了
  8. 00:57:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 啧啧，真是凶残
    超顺的好吧bbu虽然加了HR就死了
  9. 01:43:591 (4,5,6,7) - +Clap，用大概40~50%的绿线
  10. 01:45:179 (3,4) - ^ 首尾都加
  11. 01:45:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 虽然貌似更凶残不过意外得打起来还不错，bdbf
    だよね为啥就我打不好！
闲的蛋疼全程看了你mod和test（
qkenan
134 posts
Joined October 2010
qkenan

Eggache0 wrote:

闲的蛋疼全程看了你mod和test（
真闲的话再帮我摸张图呗
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow

Eggache0 wrote:

Sun Rainbow wrote:

sorry。。你的图太难MOD了（能力不足）所以。。。。
只能Shoot Star了。。。。
我等这句话等了四个月（砸桌
谢star
orz sorry
还有我觉得你的SV太高了，有可能会使图overmap。不过加油~
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
忘记收割kd

mod in qq
lkx 19:12:53
let's qq mod?
lkx 19:12:58

水天一色 19:13:03
你得理解一个正在打日吗马上就要避4的人的心情
lkx 19:13:15
...
水天一色 19:13:24
好我避了
lkx 19:13:28
我不打日麻布打ma不打lol
水天一色 19:13:36
那是个啥
lkx 19:13:51
你居然不知道ma
水天一色 19:13:53
我图里有这么猎奇？
lkx 19:13:59
唉
lkx 19:14:02
那就是你的图啊
lkx 19:14:08
你啥时候有空
水天一色 19:14:09
我没这颜色啊
水天一色 19:14:11
现在（
lkx 19:14:20
我ign了皮肤
lkx 19:14:38
1.哪个无良让你改成ar8的
水天一色 19:14:45
……图里没皮肤也会自动变颜色？
水天一色 19:14:58
AR8不是perfect readable么
lkx 19:15:03
不是，打图的时候ign了皮肤，作图的时候也会这样
lkx 19:15:16
我觉得你做得这么鬼畜不用ar9会难点啊
lkx 19:15:30
你想象下大钱用ar8
水天一色 19:15:47
空气人AR8也能读啊 这个不提 AR89都行
lkx 19:16:06
嗯
lkx 19:16:13
00:20:825 (5) - 这个
水天一色 19:16:38
？
lkx 19:16:49
等等，我在改着摆
lkx 19:17:12

lkx 19:17:15
这样
lkx 19:17:17
会顺手点
水天一色 19:17:29
。好
水天一色 19:17:47
code发一下？
lkx 19:17:55
稍等
lkx 19:19:55
88,272,20825,2,0,B|36:256|20:200,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
21,205,21090,1,0,0:0:0
21,205,21178,1,4,1:0:0
102,109,21354,1,0,0:0:0
102,233,21531,1,2,0:0:0
29,132,21707,1,0,0:0:0
lkx 19:20:00
应该是这几个
lkx 19:20:37
如果不是，后面那几个note的位置你微调下
水天一色 19:20:43
。稍等
lkx 19:20:49
嗯
lkx 19:22:25

00:26:825 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
水天一色 19:22:45
改不了真是莫名
水天一色 19:24:56
改了（
水天一色 19:25:04
←然后
lkx 19:28:22
唉
lkx 19:28:27
我刚才莫名断网
水天一色 19:28:32
难怪莫名裂梗
水天一色 19:28:43
网费只剩100了堪忧
lkx 19:28:48

00:26:825 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
lkx 19:28:51
这里
lkx 19:29:12
五角星那ctrl+g随便改改就能改成这个效果
水天一色 19:29:30
太扭曲了……
lkx 19:29:38
嗯...
lkx 19:29:56
00:36:707 (4,5) - 这两
水天一色 19:30:05
先等等 我看看这里怎么改
lkx 19:30:06
位置换一换？
lkx 19:30:08
嗯
lkx 19:31:05
好了call我
水天一色 19:31:18
我人性了 搞定
lkx 19:31:49
01:04:590 (1,2) -
lkx 19:31:59
01:04:590 (1) - x224 y248
lkx 19:32:06
01:04:766 (2) - x312 y100
水天一色 19:32:33
36秒那俩怎么了
lkx 19:32:42
哦对对
lkx 19:32:44
我忘了
lkx 19:33:05
00:36:707 (4,5) - ctrl+g，然后自己调下音效（比较顺手）
lkx 19:34:17
01:08:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g,然后调音效?
水天一色 19:34:29
蛤？
lkx 19:34:45
这个连打的其实方向倒转过来你不觉得顺手点么
水天一色 19:35:05
这里没必要顺手啊（
lkx 19:35:11
....
lkx 19:35:17
作图没必要flow
lkx 19:35:27
嘛算了，下一个
水天一色 19:35:33
跟人声啊
lkx 19:35:48
note的摆位和人声有关么。。
水天一色 19:35:59
我觉得他吸了口气……
lkx 19:36:09
我没听出。。
水天一色 19:36:14
先过 这个好改
lkx 19:36:25

01:12:707 (3,4) -
lkx 19:36:37
01:13:766 (1,2,3) - x12,y336
水天一色 19:36:47
尿了这啥
lkx 19:36:55
你不觉得更顺手吗
lkx 19:36:58
或者是
lkx 19:37:01
樱花瓣
水天一色 19:37:00
我先看看这在哪
水天一色 19:37:32
……
水天一色 19:38:08
没看懂
lkx 19:38:31

lkx 19:38:34
你原来是这样的
水天一色 19:38:41
。懂了
lkx 19:38:46
01:13:237 (4) - 这玩意我们ctrl+>两下
lkx 19:39:04
然后把末尾对准前面滑条的开头
lkx 19:39:20
然后调调后面三连打的位置
水天一色 19:39:31
……樱花瓣是什么意思
lkx 19:39:40
看起来像
水天一色 19:39:46
……
水天一色 19:39:49
got it

lkx 19:40:13
01:18:354 (5) - clap
01:18:531 (7) - 滑条尾巴clap（白线）
lkx 19:41:00
01:25:060 (1) - nc,变距离提示
水天一色 19:41:21
提示？
lkx 19:41:30
。。。
lkx 19:41:34
方便读图
水天一色 19:41:36
思考（
lkx 19:41:38
01:28:766 (1,2,3) - WTF,这跳过来天难了吧
水天一色 19:42:51

lkx 19:42:59
01:27:354 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 关于这里，我认为他响的地方作为滑条的开始处，这样更有表现力
水天一色 19:43:39
1分28那里是按spac摆的 算了……
lkx 19:43:51
奥
lkx 19:44:35
hard
00:28:943 (4,1) - no sex
水天一色 19:44:37
那节奏怎么排 三连塞到尾巴……
lkx 19:44:49
我看看
lkx 19:45:35

水天一色 19:45:58
保持一致么
lkx 19:46:10
大概
lkx 19:46:19

水天一色 19:46:38
蛤？
lkx 19:46:54
看世界
lkx 19:46:56
时间
水天一色 19:47:02
星星呢
lkx 19:47:19

水天一色 19:47:45
我看看吧
lkx 19:49:42
hard刚才说的地方你看了没
水天一色 19:49:52
1分27那里我觉得还是算了
水天一色 19:50:10
没
lkx 19:50:39
00:28:943 (4,6,1) -
lkx 19:50:49
接2连然后藏个note
lkx 19:50:55
这是hard啊！！
水天一色 19:51:04
后面还有翔一样的单点呢
lkx 19:51:32
01:16:766 (4) - newcombo
水天一色 19:51:50
你先说 我妈叫我出下门
lkx 19:51:57
嗯
lkx 19:52:12
01:21:531 (4,5,6) - 挡住了，can't see anything
lkx 19:52:30
01:30:178 (7) - nc
lkx 19:54:45
01:40:766 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - normal你也用这么多单点 .
水天一色 20:02:18
回来了
水天一色 20:20:09
normal那个我觉得图是4星就行 算了
lkx 20:20:19
..
水天一色 20:20:32
其实是我怕改完了变4.5
lkx 20:21:42
怎么会
水天一色 20:22:02
经常就这样
lkx 20:22:22
那是你太鬼畜了

水天一色 20:22:37
normal鬼畜个叼
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

lkx_Shore wrote:

忘记收割kd

mod in qq
lkx 19:12:53
let's qq mod?
lkx 19:12:58

水天一色 19:13:03
你得理解一个正在打日吗马上就要避4的人的心情
lkx 19:13:15
...
水天一色 19:13:24
好我避了
lkx 19:13:28
我不打日麻布打ma不打lol
水天一色 19:13:36
那是个啥
lkx 19:13:51
你居然不知道ma
水天一色 19:13:53
我图里有这么猎奇？
lkx 19:13:59
唉
lkx 19:14:02
那就是你的图啊
lkx 19:14:08
你啥时候有空
水天一色 19:14:09
我没这颜色啊
水天一色 19:14:11
现在（
lkx 19:14:20
我ign了皮肤
lkx 19:14:38
1.哪个无良让你改成ar8的
水天一色 19:14:45
……图里没皮肤也会自动变颜色？
水天一色 19:14:58
AR8不是perfect readable么
lkx 19:15:03
不是，打图的时候ign了皮肤，作图的时候也会这样
lkx 19:15:16
我觉得你做得这么鬼畜不用ar9会难点啊
lkx 19:15:30
你想象下大钱用ar8
水天一色 19:15:47
空气人AR8也能读啊 这个不提 AR89都行
lkx 19:16:06
嗯
lkx 19:16:13
00:20:825 (5) - 这个
水天一色 19:16:38
？
lkx 19:16:49
等等，我在改着摆
lkx 19:17:12

lkx 19:17:15
这样
lkx 19:17:17
会顺手点
水天一色 19:17:29
。好
水天一色 19:17:47
code发一下？
lkx 19:17:55
稍等
lkx 19:19:55
88,272,20825,2,0,B|36:256|20:200,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
21,205,21090,1,0,0:0:0
21,205,21178,1,4,1:0:0
102,109,21354,1,0,0:0:0
102,233,21531,1,2,0:0:0
29,132,21707,1,0,0:0:0
lkx 19:20:00
应该是这几个
lkx 19:20:37
如果不是，后面那几个note的位置你微调下
水天一色 19:20:43
。稍等
lkx 19:20:49
嗯
lkx 19:22:25

00:26:825 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
水天一色 19:22:45
改不了真是莫名
水天一色 19:24:56
改了（
水天一色 19:25:04
←然后
lkx 19:28:22
唉
lkx 19:28:27
我刚才莫名断网
水天一色 19:28:32
难怪莫名裂梗
水天一色 19:28:43
网费只剩100了堪忧
lkx 19:28:48

00:26:825 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
lkx 19:28:51
这里
lkx 19:29:12
五角星那ctrl+g随便改改就能改成这个效果
水天一色 19:29:30
太扭曲了……
lkx 19:29:38
嗯...
lkx 19:29:56
00:36:707 (4,5) - 这两
水天一色 19:30:05
先等等 我看看这里怎么改
lkx 19:30:06
位置换一换？
lkx 19:30:08
嗯
lkx 19:31:05
好了call我
水天一色 19:31:18
我人性了 搞定
lkx 19:31:49
01:04:590 (1,2) -
lkx 19:31:59
01:04:590 (1) - x224 y248
lkx 19:32:06
01:04:766 (2) - x312 y100
水天一色 19:32:33
36秒那俩怎么了
lkx 19:32:42
哦对对
lkx 19:32:44
我忘了
lkx 19:33:05
00:36:707 (4,5) - ctrl+g，然后自己调下音效（比较顺手）
lkx 19:34:17
01:08:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g,然后调音效?
水天一色 19:34:29
蛤？
lkx 19:34:45
这个连打的其实方向倒转过来你不觉得顺手点么
水天一色 19:35:05
这里没必要顺手啊（
lkx 19:35:11
....
lkx 19:35:17
作图没必要flow
lkx 19:35:27
嘛算了，下一个
水天一色 19:35:33
跟人声啊
lkx 19:35:48
note的摆位和人声有关么。。
水天一色 19:35:59
我觉得他吸了口气……
lkx 19:36:09
我没听出。。
水天一色 19:36:14
先过 这个好改
lkx 19:36:25

01:12:707 (3,4) -
lkx 19:36:37
01:13:766 (1,2,3) - x12,y336
水天一色 19:36:47
尿了这啥
lkx 19:36:55
你不觉得更顺手吗
lkx 19:36:58
或者是
lkx 19:37:01
樱花瓣
水天一色 19:37:00
我先看看这在哪
水天一色 19:37:32
……
水天一色 19:38:08
没看懂
lkx 19:38:31

lkx 19:38:34
你原来是这样的
水天一色 19:38:41
。懂了
lkx 19:38:46
01:13:237 (4) - 这玩意我们ctrl+>两下
lkx 19:39:04
然后把末尾对准前面滑条的开头
lkx 19:39:20
然后调调后面三连打的位置
水天一色 19:39:31
……樱花瓣是什么意思
lkx 19:39:40
看起来像
水天一色 19:39:46
……
水天一色 19:39:49
got it

lkx 19:40:13
01:18:354 (5) - clap
01:18:531 (7) - 滑条尾巴clap（白线）
lkx 19:41:00
01:25:060 (1) - nc,变距离提示
水天一色 19:41:21
提示？
lkx 19:41:30
。。。
lkx 19:41:34
方便读图
水天一色 19:41:36
思考（
lkx 19:41:38
01:28:766 (1,2,3) - WTF,这跳过来天难了吧
水天一色 19:42:51

lkx 19:42:59
01:27:354 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 关于这里，我认为他响的地方作为滑条的开始处，这样更有表现力
水天一色 19:43:39
1分28那里是按spac摆的 算了……
lkx 19:43:51
奥
lkx 19:44:35
hard
00:28:943 (4,1) - no sex
水天一色 19:44:37
那节奏怎么排 三连塞到尾巴……
lkx 19:44:49
我看看
lkx 19:45:35

水天一色 19:45:58
保持一致么
lkx 19:46:10
大概
lkx 19:46:19

水天一色 19:46:38
蛤？
lkx 19:46:54
看世界
lkx 19:46:56
时间
水天一色 19:47:02
星星呢
lkx 19:47:19

水天一色 19:47:45
我看看吧
lkx 19:49:42
hard刚才说的地方你看了没
水天一色 19:49:52
1分27那里我觉得还是算了
水天一色 19:50:10
没
lkx 19:50:39
00:28:943 (4,6,1) -
lkx 19:50:49
接2连然后藏个note
lkx 19:50:55
这是hard啊！！
水天一色 19:51:04
后面还有翔一样的单点呢
lkx 19:51:32
01:16:766 (4) - newcombo
水天一色 19:51:50
你先说 我妈叫我出下门
lkx 19:51:57
嗯
lkx 19:52:12
01:21:531 (4,5,6) - 挡住了，can't see anything
lkx 19:52:30
01:30:178 (7) - nc
lkx 19:54:45
01:40:766 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - normal你也用这么多单点 .
水天一色 20:02:18
回来了
水天一色 20:20:09
normal那个我觉得图是4星就行 算了
lkx 20:20:19
..
水天一色 20:20:32
其实是我怕改完了变4.5
lkx 20:21:42
怎么会
水天一色 20:22:02
经常就这样
lkx 20:22:22
那是你太鬼畜了

水天一色 20:22:37
normal鬼畜个叼
超不服 怀疑我服毒鸡了提醒到
Sonnyc
7,762 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
I'd like to say that a new diff should be made between Hard and Sakusaki.
Imo, some parts of Sakusaki is overmapped, and also I could find some 1/3 parts mapped at 1/4.
In contrast of Sakusai, Hard was quite following the vocals which made a gap among those 2 diffs.

The suggestion is to remove some 1/4 notes in hard to make it a bit easier, and make an advanced diff harder than Hard, easier than Sakusaki.
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Sonnyc wrote:

I'd like to say that a new diff should be made between Hard and Sakusaki.
Imo, some parts of Sakusaki is overmapped, and also I could find some 1/3 parts mapped at 1/4.
In contrast of Sakusai, Hard was quite following the vocals which made a gap among those 2 diffs.

The suggestion is to remove some 1/4 notes in hard to make it a bit easier, and make an advanced diff harder than Hard, easier than Sakusaki.
Considering.
qkenan
134 posts
Joined October 2010
qkenan

lkx_Shore wrote:

忘记收割kd

mod in qq
lkx 19:12:53
let's qq mod?
lkx 19:12:58

水天一色 19:13:03
你得理解一个正在打日吗马上就要避4的人的心情
lkx 19:13:15
...
水天一色 19:13:24
好我避了
lkx 19:13:28
我不打日麻布打ma不打lol
水天一色 19:13:36
那是个啥
lkx 19:13:51
你居然不知道ma
水天一色 19:13:53
我图里有这么猎奇？
lkx 19:13:59
唉
lkx 19:14:02
那就是你的图啊
lkx 19:14:08
你啥时候有空
水天一色 19:14:09
我没这颜色啊
水天一色 19:14:11
现在（
lkx 19:14:20
我ign了皮肤
lkx 19:14:38
1.哪个无良让你改成ar8的
水天一色 19:14:45
……图里没皮肤也会自动变颜色？
水天一色 19:14:58
AR8不是perfect readable么
lkx 19:15:03
不是，打图的时候ign了皮肤，作图的时候也会这样
lkx 19:15:16
我觉得你做得这么鬼畜不用ar9会难点啊
lkx 19:15:30
你想象下大钱用ar8
水天一色 19:15:47
空气人AR8也能读啊 这个不提 AR89都行
lkx 19:16:06
嗯
lkx 19:16:13
00:20:825 (5) - 这个
水天一色 19:16:38
？
lkx 19:16:49
等等，我在改着摆
lkx 19:17:12

lkx 19:17:15
这样
lkx 19:17:17
会顺手点
水天一色 19:17:29
。好
水天一色 19:17:47
code发一下？
lkx 19:17:55
稍等
lkx 19:19:55
88,272,20825,2,0,B|36:256|20:200,1,97.50000371933,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
21,205,21090,1,0,0:0:0
21,205,21178,1,4,1:0:0
102,109,21354,1,0,0:0:0
102,233,21531,1,2,0:0:0
29,132,21707,1,0,0:0:0
lkx 19:20:00
应该是这几个
lkx 19:20:37
如果不是，后面那几个note的位置你微调下
水天一色 19:20:43
。稍等
lkx 19:20:49
嗯
lkx 19:22:25

00:26:825 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
水天一色 19:22:45
改不了真是莫名
水天一色 19:24:56
改了（
水天一色 19:25:04
←然后
lkx 19:28:22
唉
lkx 19:28:27
我刚才莫名断网
水天一色 19:28:32
难怪莫名裂梗
水天一色 19:28:43
网费只剩100了堪忧
lkx 19:28:48

00:26:825 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
lkx 19:28:51
这里
lkx 19:29:12
五角星那ctrl+g随便改改就能改成这个效果
水天一色 19:29:30
太扭曲了……
lkx 19:29:38
嗯...
lkx 19:29:56
00:36:707 (4,5) - 这两
水天一色 19:30:05
先等等 我看看这里怎么改
lkx 19:30:06
位置换一换？
lkx 19:30:08
嗯
lkx 19:31:05
好了call我
水天一色 19:31:18
我人性了 搞定
lkx 19:31:49
01:04:590 (1,2) -
lkx 19:31:59
01:04:590 (1) - x224 y248
lkx 19:32:06
01:04:766 (2) - x312 y100
水天一色 19:32:33
36秒那俩怎么了
lkx 19:32:42
哦对对
lkx 19:32:44
我忘了
lkx 19:33:05
00:36:707 (4,5) - ctrl+g，然后自己调下音效（比较顺手）
lkx 19:34:17
01:08:472 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g,然后调音效?
水天一色 19:34:29
蛤？
lkx 19:34:45
这个连打的其实方向倒转过来你不觉得顺手点么
水天一色 19:35:05
这里没必要顺手啊（
lkx 19:35:11
....
lkx 19:35:17
作图没必要flow
lkx 19:35:27
嘛算了，下一个
水天一色 19:35:33
跟人声啊
lkx 19:35:48
note的摆位和人声有关么。。
水天一色 19:35:59
我觉得他吸了口气……
lkx 19:36:09
我没听出。。
水天一色 19:36:14
先过 这个好改
lkx 19:36:25

01:12:707 (3,4) -
lkx 19:36:37
01:13:766 (1,2,3) - x12,y336
水天一色 19:36:47
尿了这啥
lkx 19:36:55
你不觉得更顺手吗
lkx 19:36:58
或者是
lkx 19:37:01
樱花瓣
水天一色 19:37:00
我先看看这在哪
水天一色 19:37:32
……
水天一色 19:38:08
没看懂
lkx 19:38:31

lkx 19:38:34
你原来是这样的
水天一色 19:38:41
。懂了
lkx 19:38:46
01:13:237 (4) - 这玩意我们ctrl+>两下
lkx 19:39:04
然后把末尾对准前面滑条的开头
lkx 19:39:20
然后调调后面三连打的位置
水天一色 19:39:31
……樱花瓣是什么意思
lkx 19:39:40
看起来像
水天一色 19:39:46
……
水天一色 19:39:49
got it

lkx 19:40:13
01:18:354 (5) - clap
01:18:531 (7) - 滑条尾巴clap（白线）
lkx 19:41:00
01:25:060 (1) - nc,变距离提示
水天一色 19:41:21
提示？
lkx 19:41:30
。。。
lkx 19:41:34
方便读图
水天一色 19:41:36
思考（
lkx 19:41:38
01:28:766 (1,2,3) - WTF,这跳过来天难了吧
水天一色 19:42:51

lkx 19:42:59
01:27:354 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 关于这里，我认为他响的地方作为滑条的开始处，这样更有表现力
水天一色 19:43:39
1分28那里是按spac摆的 算了……
lkx 19:43:51
奥
lkx 19:44:35
hard
00:28:943 (4,1) - no sex
水天一色 19:44:37
那节奏怎么排 三连塞到尾巴……
lkx 19:44:49
我看看
lkx 19:45:35

水天一色 19:45:58
保持一致么
lkx 19:46:10
大概
lkx 19:46:19

水天一色 19:46:38
蛤？
lkx 19:46:54
看世界
lkx 19:46:56
时间
水天一色 19:47:02
星星呢
lkx 19:47:19

水天一色 19:47:45
我看看吧
lkx 19:49:42
hard刚才说的地方你看了没
水天一色 19:49:52
1分27那里我觉得还是算了
水天一色 19:50:10
没
lkx 19:50:39
00:28:943 (4,6,1) -
lkx 19:50:49
接2连然后藏个note
lkx 19:50:55
这是hard啊！！
水天一色 19:51:04
后面还有翔一样的单点呢
lkx 19:51:32
01:16:766 (4) - newcombo
水天一色 19:51:50
你先说 我妈叫我出下门
lkx 19:51:57
嗯
lkx 19:52:12
01:21:531 (4,5,6) - 挡住了，can't see anything
lkx 19:52:30
01:30:178 (7) - nc
lkx 19:54:45
01:40:766 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - normal你也用这么多单点 .
水天一色 20:02:18
回来了
水天一色 20:20:09
normal那个我觉得图是4星就行 算了
lkx 20:20:19
..
水天一色 20:20:32
其实是我怕改完了变4.5
lkx 20:21:42
怎么会
水天一色 20:22:02
经常就这样
lkx 20:22:22
那是你太鬼畜了

水天一色 20:22:37
normal鬼畜个叼
简直就像一块kd田，bdbf
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
ARGGHHH!!!! ÒAÓ I was posting the mod and I lost all my data by accident!!!! So now I'm doing all three diffs all over again so sry for my bad mood and messy mod

HARD
00:08:296 (1) - Impossible for me to reach the note after(though its just me)
00:09:707 (1) - ^
01:05:472 (6) - Impossible for me to reach this note

Thats all

NORMAL
01:07:413 (7) - to x240 y284 and 01:07:766 (1) to x352 y248. Resnap the other notes urself
01:30:354 (5) - I reccomend u make it start at 01:30:707 and delete one repeat (ofc u reposition as well) cuz it sounds nicer

EASY
00:38:825 (5) - move to x392 y344
01:31:766 (1,2,3) - You should give these some sort of pretty arrangement
01:38:649 (2) - move to x 300 y 400 and obv reposition the next slider

THATS ALL. I'm pretty sure there was some more but I can't remember gomen >~< still. I liked normal diff the best~ good luck for the rank!

You've been modded out by Yurun Neram
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

yurunneram wrote:

ARGGHHH!!!! ÒAÓ I was posting the mod and I lost all my data by accident!!!! So now I'm doing all three diffs all over again so sry for my bad mood and messy mod
that's really annoying(same thing just happened to me days ago

HARD
00:08:296 (1) - Impossible for me to reach the note after(though its just me)
00:09:707 (1) - ^
01:05:472 (6) - Impossible for me to reach this note
no~

Thats all

NORMAL
01:07:413 (7) - to x240 y284 and 01:07:766 (1) to x352 y248. Resnap the other notes urself fixed
01:30:354 (5) - I reccomend u make it start at 01:30:707 and delete one repeat (ofc u reposition as well) cuz it sounds nicer no~but I changed the sound

EASY
00:38:825 (5) - move to x392 y344 ……sorry, can't understand
01:31:766 (1,2,3) - You should give these some sort of pretty arrangement yeah I should...
01:38:649 (2) - move to x 300 y 400 and obv reposition the next slider can't understand either, the xy seems wrong

THATS ALL. I'm pretty sure there was some more but I can't remember gomen >~< still. I liked normal diff the best~ good luck for the rank!

You've been modded out by Yurun Neram
Flower
1,728 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi~ Tieba request (啥)
red=must be changed
others = depends on whether I say "just suggestion"

[General]
单独从难度上看做的不错……音效很棒
diff spread, 难度的分布与把握不是很好。
Easy用了很多Normal才能用的梗，Normal尾段有大量的高速1/2单点，因此建议好好检查这两个难度。Hard和Insane有不合理的overmapping，不该摆note的地方摆了note，就像是纯粹为了增加难度才摆的一样。
Audio lead-in 1.5s
kiai time应为00:57:884 - 01:20:472 ，个人意见

[Easy]
最大的问题还是在于DS不恒定与太明显的变速，建议是设成一个slider velocity重新做整个难度，当然看你怎么看了。
0.8的SV+0.8的DS是一个好的选择。
如果你坚持remap，那么请看一下下面的mod。
00:36:354 (1) - 摆这么远 有点过分 还是按DS来摆
00:39:531 (1,2) - 建议合成一个滑条 然后还是spacing的问题 摆近一些
00:40:237 (1,2,3) - 最好不要在easy里搞这种堆叠
00:47:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ 第一次打的时候都不知道是什么玩意 最好+3mod玩来检查一遍对新手的友好度
00:52:237 (2) - 建议不要堆叠
00:57:707 (1) - 离中心在摆近一些
01:07:766 (1) - DS
01:29:649 (2,1,2) - 摆成正三角形多好

[Normal]
请确认下这图是给有一定水平的玩家玩的而不是给有相当经验的玩家玩的。最后一段坑爹。
00:00:884 (1,2,3) - 建议做成一个折返滑条以方便新人读图
00:06:354 (4,5,6,7) - 建议两个一组改成滑条
00:08:296 (3) - 建议不要stack
00:08:649 (4) - 我认为可以删掉 因为没有任何明显的音在上面
00:10:060 (7) - ^
00:34:590 (4,5,6,7,8) - 改成2滑条+1圈或者1折返两次滑条+1圈
00:45:178 (1) - 太短了 请留给玩家可玩的空间
00:57:178 (1) - 请像DS一样的把滑条移近中心附近
00:57:884 (2) - 虽然有镲音但是很弱，而且有点难读，我的看法是删去，但是由你决定
00:58:943 (2,3,4) - 改成1滑条+1圈或者1折返滑条
01:26:119 (1,2,3) - 有点无聊……改不改由你决定
01:31:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - 为什么做成这样……完全没必要的增加note 还是继续白线下note多好
01:33:002 往后 - 请remap……看不下去了

[Hard]
00:05:472 (1) - 因为音乐没有任何音，你也没有下任何音效，用折返滑条不如改成一个长滑条
00:11:119 (5) - whistle？因为没有声音 不过由你决定
00:12:001 (1,2,3,4) - 其实可以做成折返滑条或者不移动的连打 因为背景鼓点在那
00:20:119 (4) - 移开一点，因为Hidden下是看不见的
00:21:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 太无聊了 加点东西吧
00:26:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:32:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:50:825 (5) - 这个可以改成1/2单点，理由与同刚才第一个
00:53:737 (2) - 这个应该在00:53:560 -
01:03:531 (7) - 移开一点
01:09:884 - 加note
01:13:413 - 加note
01:13:678 (5) - 应该在01:13:943 -
01:20:472 以后的遮挡比较严重 最好分开来 间隔大一点比不能读要好
01:21:619 (5) - 删掉
01:27:443 (9) - ^
01:28:854 (8) - ^
01:33:090 (2) - ^
01:37:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - 改成1/2单点因为没有鼓点在这你也没加合适的音效（这句话好像重复好多次了）
01:38:649 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:39:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^，或者改成normal音效

[Sakusaki]
不合理overmap比较严重 而且一听就听出来（2ha的某张图overmap更严重但是听不出来，因为normal音效有盖住原曲的效果）
这里用的soft音效 同时下三连的地方往往不合适 导致打着很涩 也没起到调整音效的作用
下面列出不合理overmap的地方，建议一般是删去，有些可以删掉，或者按你的偏好改成normal音效（有此建议的标记为n）。
当然也可以不改，你可以保留你不同意的然后等后来的人的看法。
SPOILER
00:01:501 (2) - n
00:05:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - n
00:17:031 (2,6) -
00:26:472 (3,4,5,6,7) - n
00:28:943 (3,4,5,6,1) - n
00:37:149 (7) -
00:38:913 (7) - 应该在00:39:090 -
00:43:149 (2) - 应该在00:43:325 -
00:44:825 (3,4,5,6,1) - n
00:46:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 过分的跳也是不合理overmap的表现之一，我认为这里太跳不符合这里相对安静的气氛
00:50:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 可以改成逐渐增加的1/2跳，毕竟符合原曲意境的话应该只有00:51:884 (13,14,15,16) - 才对，或者可以改成4个一组逐渐增加DS的连打。
00:56:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - n
00:57:266 (2) -
01:07:060 (4,5,6) - n
01:08:207 (5) - 似乎应该在01:07:854 -
01:14:913 (2) -
01:24:619 (2) -
01:43:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 空气人？

其他事项
00:40:943 - finish
00:46:149 (5) - 应该在00:46:119 -
00:55:060 - 建议加一个note 转盘晚1/4开始
01:08:648 (3) - 这里我觉得可以删掉这个 原因是我觉得可以自创节奏……看你的了
01:19:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 请做的好看些XD
01:33:001 (1,2) - 节奏很奇怪
01:38:472 (6) - 移开一些因为hidden下不可见
01:42:354 (4,5) - 咦这里歌里有连打怎么这里不放了……
01:45:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 太跳难以把握，最好不要这么摆。另外这里全部是1/3，请必改。

Good luck~
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Flower wrote:

Hi~ Tieba request (啥)
red=must be changed
others = depends on whether I say "just suggestion"

[General]
单独从难度上看做的不错……音效很棒 一半说很棒一半说翔 感觉我该去吃电视
diff spread, 难度的分布与把握不是很好。
Easy用了很多Normal才能用的梗，Normal尾段有大量的高速1/2单点，因此建议好好检查这两个难度。Hard和Insane有不合理的overmapping，不该摆note的地方摆了note，就像是纯粹为了增加难度才摆的一样。 求别说 以后一定改
Audio lead-in 1.5s
kiai time应为00:57:884 - 01:20:472 ，个人意见 这种personal的设置就这样吧……

[Easy]
最大的问题还是在于DS不恒定与太明显的变速，建议是设成一个slider velocity重新做整个难度，当然看你怎么看了。
0.8的SV+0.8的DS是一个好的选择。
如果你坚持remap，那么请看一下下面的mod。 已remap
00:36:354 (1) - 摆这么远 有点过分 还是按DS来摆
00:39:531 (1,2) - 建议合成一个滑条 然后还是spacing的问题 摆近一些
00:40:237 (1,2,3) - 最好不要在easy里搞这种堆叠
00:47:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ 第一次打的时候都不知道是什么玩意 最好+3mod玩来检查一遍对新手的友好度
00:52:237 (2) - 建议不要堆叠
00:57:707 (1) - 离中心在摆近一些
01:07:766 (1) - DS
01:29:649 (2,1,2) - 摆成正三角形多好

[Normal]
请确认下这图是给有一定水平的玩家玩的而不是给有相当经验的玩家玩的。最后一段坑爹。 我找了新手来test感觉还好
00:00:884 (1,2,3) - 建议做成一个折返滑条以方便新人读图 考虑了一下 让新人retry吧
00:06:354 (4,5,6,7) - 建议两个一组改成滑条 和最后面一样
00:08:296 (3) - 建议不要stack 不stack太难看了
00:08:649 (4) - 我认为可以删掉 因为没有任何明显的音在上面 好 这里改了一下
00:10:060 (7) - ^
00:34:590 (4,5,6,7,8) - 改成2滑条+1圈或者1折返两次滑条+1圈
00:45:178 (1) - 太短了 请留给玩家可玩的空间 好
00:57:178 (1) - 请像DS一样的把滑条移近中心附近 好
00:57:884 (2) - 虽然有镲音但是很弱，而且有点难读，我的看法是删去，但是由你决定 加了clap凑合一下
00:58:943 (2,3,4) - 改成1滑条+1圈或者1折返滑条 算了
01:26:119 (1,2,3) - 有点无聊……改不改由你决定 感觉有点蠢 改
01:31:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - 为什么做成这样……完全没必要的增加note 还是继续白线下note多好
01:33:002 往后 - 请remap……看不下去了 略 今天先看normal吧

[Hard]
00:05:472 (1) - 因为音乐没有任何音，你也没有下任何音效，用折返滑条不如改成一个长滑条 效果差不多……
00:11:119 (5) - whistle？因为没有声音 不过由你决定
00:12:001 (1,2,3,4) - 其实可以做成折返滑条或者不移动的连打 因为背景鼓点在那 和上面的一块改了
00:20:119 (4) - 移开一点，因为Hidden下是看不见的 改了 不过这种遮挡梗……
00:21:531 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 太无聊了 加点东西吧
00:26:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:32:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 算了
00:50:825 (5) - 这个可以改成1/2单点，理由与同刚才第一个 好
00:53:737 (2) - 这个应该在00:53:560 - 好
01:03:531 (7) - 移开一点 蛤？
01:09:884 - 加note 好
01:13:413 - 加note 好
01:13:678 (5) - 应该在01:13:943 - 好
01:20:472 以后的遮挡比较严重 最好分开来 间隔大一点比不能读要好
01:21:619 (5) - 删掉
01:27:443 (9) - ^
01:28:854 (8) - ^
01:33:090 (2) - ^ 好
01:37:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - 改成1/2单点因为没有鼓点在这你也没加合适的音效（这句话好像重复好多次了）
01:38:649 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:39:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^，或者改成normal音效 改了

[Sakusaki]
不合理overmap比较严重 而且一听就听出来（2ha的某张图overmap更严重但是听不出来，因为normal音效有盖住原曲的效果）
这里用的soft音效 同时下三连的地方往往不合适 导致打着很涩 也没起到调整音效的作用
下面列出不合理overmap的地方，建议一般是删去，有些可以删掉，或者按你的偏好改成normal音效（有此建议的标记为n）。
当然也可以不改，你可以保留你不同意的然后等后来的人的看法。
SPOILER
00:01:501 (2) - n
00:05:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - n
00:17:031 (2,6) -
00:26:472 (3,4,5,6,7) - n no
00:28:943 (3,4,5,6,1) - n
00:37:149 (7) -
00:38:913 (7) - 应该在00:39:090 -
00:43:149 (2) - 应该在00:43:325 -
00:44:825 (3,4,5,6,1) - n
00:46:590 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 过分的跳也是不合理overmap的表现之一，我认为这里太跳不符合这里相对安静的气氛
00:50:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 可以改成逐渐增加的1/2跳，毕竟符合原曲意境的话应该只有00:51:884 (13,14,15,16) - 才对，或者可以改成4个一组逐渐增加DS的连打。
00:56:472 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - n
00:57:266 (2) -
01:07:060 (4,5,6) - n
01:08:207 (5) - 似乎应该在01:07:854 -
01:14:913 (2) -
01:24:619 (2) -
01:43:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 空气人？
其他的都改了

其他事项
00:40:943 - finish 好
00:46:149 (5) - 应该在00:46:119 - 好
00:55:060 - 建议加一个note 转盘晚1/4开始 好
01:08:648 (3) - 这里我觉得可以删掉这个 原因是我觉得可以自创节奏……看你的了 改了不过柑橘弱逼
01:19:060 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 请做的好看些XD 好的鬼畜些
01:33:001 (1,2) - 节奏很奇怪 改了
01:38:472 (6) - 移开一些因为hidden下不可见 改了
01:42:354 (4,5) - 咦这里歌里有连打怎么这里不放了…… 放了 不过柑橘蠢
01:45:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 太跳难以把握，最好不要这么摆。另外这里全部是1/3，请必改。 改了

Good luck~
好 谢谢mod和star
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram

Eggache0 wrote:

yurunneram wrote:

EASY
00:38:825 (5) - move to x392 y344 ……sorry, can't understand
01:38:649 (2) - move to x 300 y 400 and obv reposition the next slider can't understand either, the xy seems wrong
What u mean u can't understand? You mean the positioning is different on your computer? Its the X axis and Y axis. I you select the object you can see x:*** y:*** in the top right corner of the edit menu
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

yurunneram wrote:

What u mean u can't understand? You mean the positioning is different on your computer? Its the X axis and Y axis. I you select the object you can see x:*** y:*** in the top right corner of the edit menu
Sure at top right there are the axises, but the Ymax is 384 and the xy is really strange when I put objects to the place.

...anyway, easy is remaped/.\
Nyquill
osu! Alumni
1,781 posts
Joined February 2011
Nyquill
[Hard]
00:43:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - There really should not be a stream here. I appreciate your effort in trying to keep the rhythm interesting, but its actually really ineffective and confusing.
Besides that, not bad at all.

[Prime Limitation]
00:26:472 (3,4,5,6) - I generally don't touch on overmapping on my mods but this is just a tad too much.
01:00:707 (5,6,7,8) - You shouldn't be afraid to space these out more, since players don't usually play the entire slider.
01:12:002 (1) - Clap at end?
01:13:854 (2,3) - Swap the claps between these two. The snares in this stream go like xxoox. Also, this is an example of where you placed a stream where it should be. Good job here.
01:14:119 (5,6,7) - Should have claps at the beginning of all of these.
01:16:590 (3) - Should have a clap here instead of 01:16:237 (1)
01:16:943 (1,3) - Likewise, should have it on (3) instead of (1).
01:25:854 - On the other hand, why is there no note here?
01:37:060 (6) - Likewise, why is this a 1/2 slider as opposed to following the snares with 1/4s?
Well sure you're allowed some liberty when it comes to what you actually want to map on, but its generally good practice to map on something thats audible.
在玩的时候，我不因该需要问自己，“为什么这里有个stream?”.

不过，对第一个图来说。。。很不差。
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Nyquill wrote:

[Hard]
00:43:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - There really should not be a stream here. I appreciate your effort in trying to keep the rhythm interesting, but its actually really ineffective and confusing. ……actually I think it's fine. But fine is not enough?
Besides that, not bad at all.

[Prime Limitation]
00:26:472 (3,4,5,6) - I generally don't touch on overmapping on my mods but this is just a tad too much. ...
01:00:707 (5,6,7,8) - You shouldn't be afraid to space these out more, since players don't usually play the entire slider. a little out
01:12:002 (1) - Clap at end? hao
01:13:854 (2,3) - Swap the claps between these two. The snares in this stream go like xxoox. Also, this is an example of where you placed a stream where it should be. Good job here. ok
01:14:119 (5,6,7) - Should have claps at the beginning of all of these. hao
01:16:590 (3) - Should have a clap here instead of 01:16:237 (1) ↓
01:16:943 (1,3) - Likewise, should have it on (3) instead of (1). ok
01:25:854 - On the other hand, why is there no note here? ...ok
01:37:060 (6) - Likewise, why is this a 1/2 slider as opposed to following the snares with 1/4s? hao
Well sure you're allowed some liberty when it comes to what you actually want to map on, but its generally good practice to map on something thats audible.
在玩的时候，我不因该需要问自己，“为什么这里有个stream?”. 玩的时候智力水平超低啥都不知道

不过，对第一个图来说。。。很不差。
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
~General~

The file lighting233.png is unused, remove it.

Kiai time through the difficulties is inconsistent, fix it.

Disable the unused Countdown on all the difficulties.

Reduce the Stack Leniency by 2 or 3 ticks on all the difficulties, it's too high right now.

~Easy~

00:07:060 (1,2) - This overlap is a bit ugly to see.
00:12:707 - Kiai should end here.
00:21:178 (4,5) - Don't stack notes on the easiest difficulty, they might be confusing for beginners.
00:37:766 (2,3) - ^
00:42:354 (4) - New combo.
00:50:825 (5) - ^
00:52:237 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:53:649 (3,4,5,6) - Again, don't stack notes on the easiest difficulty.
01:06:001 (2,3) - ^
01:10:590 (2,3) - Wrong spacing.
01:30:707 (2,3,4) - Don't stack them, like I said before.

~Normal~

00:06:178 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - This is way too hard for a Normal, remove some circles.
00:07:060 (1,2,3) - These stacks are highly confusing.
00:12:707 - Kiai should end here.
00:16:590 (1,2,3,4) - Don't make jumps on Normal difficulty.
01:29:296 (6) - New combo.
01:31:766 (1) ~ 01:46:590 (3) - This part is way too hard for a Normal, remove some circles.
01:47:178 (1) - Start this spinner on the next white tick.

~Sakusaki~

00:45:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern might be hard to read.
00:49:590 (2) - Slider repeat is partially hidden.
01:18:706 (4) - Unsnapped slider end.
01:19:766 (9) - New combo.
01:38:472 (6) - Stack it correctly.

~Hard~

00:39:178 (3,4) - Sudden change of spacing.
01:02:119 (3,4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:13:237 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks ugly, make it prettier.

This map still need much work.
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Andrea wrote:

~General~

The file lighting233.png is unused, remove it. it's uesd

Kiai time through the difficulties is inconsistent, fix it. fixed

Disable the unused Countdown on all the difficulties. diesabled

Reduce the Stack Leniency by 2 or 3 ticks on all the difficulties, it's too high right now.[/color] ...no

~Easy~

00:07:060 (1,2) - This overlap is a bit ugly to see. fixed
00:12:707 - Kiai should end here. all fixed
00:21:178 (4,5) - Don't stack notes on the easiest difficulty, they might be confusing for beginners. all fixed
00:37:766 (2,3) - ^
00:42:354 (4) - New combo.
00:50:825 (5) - ^
00:52:237 (1) - Remove new combo. fixed
00:53:649 (3,4,5,6) - Again, don't stack notes on the easiest difficulty.
01:06:001 (2,3) - ^
01:10:590 (2,3) - Wrong spacing. fixed
01:30:707 (2,3,4) - Don't stack them, like I said before.

~Normal~

00:06:178 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - This is way too hard for a Normal, remove some circles. fixed
00:07:060 (1,2,3) - These stacks are highly confusing.
00:12:707 - Kiai should end here.
00:16:590 (1,2,3,4) - Don't make jumps on Normal difficulty. fixed
01:29:296 (6) - New combo.
01:31:766 (1) ~ 01:46:590 (3) - This part is way too hard for a Normal, remove some circles.
01:47:178 (1) - Start this spinner on the next white tick. fixed

~Sakusaki~

00:45:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern might be hard to read.
00:49:590 (2) - Slider repeat is partially hidden. fixed
01:18:706 (4) - Unsnapped slider end. fixed
01:19:766 (9) - New combo.
01:38:472 (6) - Stack it correctly. fixed

~Hard~

00:39:178 (3,4) - Sudden change of spacing. fixed
01:02:119 (3,4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent spacing. fixed
01:13:237 (3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks ugly, make it prettier. fixed

This map still need much work.
Thx for modding！
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
這個有點難給mod :o 粗略的看了一眼Hard跟Insane, 然後發現最近的新人圖都是overmap的居多…就像前面的modder說的一樣: 雖然圖的質量不算差, 但還需不少改進

在Insane裡最明顯的問題是 "音樂有東西的地方沒放note, 反之沒東西的地方一堆note" 雖然可以用自創節奏駁回啦, 但堆stream實在有點沒意義
AR跟SV也是不合理的高, 導致與Hard之間的diff gap略大

建議考慮一下重做一個比較適合的I, 以及提醒一下Hard的AR有點過低了, 提高一格應該剛剛好

kds的話不給也可以, 畢竟我沒做full mod o.o 加油!
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio
:(

Pokie wrote:

這個有點難給mod :o 粗略的看了一眼Hard跟Insane, 然後發現最近的新人圖都是overmap的居多…就像前面的modder說的一樣: 雖然圖的質量不算差, 但還需不少改進

在Insane裡最明顯的問題是 "音樂有東西的地方沒放note, 反之沒東西的地方一堆note" 雖然可以用自創節奏駁回啦, 但堆stream實在有點沒意義
AR跟SV也是不合理的高, 導致與Hard之間的diff gap略大

diffgap拙计 有考虑过搞个普通I不过一直没啥时间……

建議考慮一下重做一個比較適合的I, 以及提醒一下Hard的AR有點過低了, 提高一格應該剛剛好

吓 ar8的hard？

kds的話不給也可以, 畢竟我沒做full mod o.o 加油!

搞了普通I的话回来给吧（笑
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie

Eggache0 wrote:

吓 ar8的hard？
...AR7真的不夠 :o 大量五角星的1/2連點+stack

其實AR是依照你的排列去調整的, 沒有規則說Hard一定要用AR7, 只不過用AR7的Hard比較符合常理
在這個情況下, 我個人認為上調至8比較適合

在AR不足的情況下堅持保留的話, 只會導致一個問題: 讀圖困難…
當然, AR7可能會方便開HR, 但不開HR的正常Hard玩家打這張圖的話就欲哭無淚了

希望可以考慮一下
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Pokie wrote:

Eggache0 wrote:

吓 ar8的hard？
...AR7真的不夠 :o 大量五角星的1/2連點+stack

其實AR是依照你的排列去調整的, 沒有規則說Hard一定要用AR7, 只不過用AR7的Hard比較符合常理
在這個情況下, 我個人認為上調至8比較適合

在AR不足的情況下堅持保留的話, 只會導致一個問題: 讀圖困難…
當然, AR7可能會方便開HR, 但不開HR的正常Hard玩家打這張圖的話就欲哭無淚了

希望可以考慮一下
我是正常hard玩家/.\ 读图困难的话改8好了
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Eggache0 ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Use japanese artist : 侑樹-yuki-
  2. Source should be : Sakura Sakimashita
  3. Please add (Short Ver.) in tittle,this song already have full ver.
  4. Please check kiai time point,have some unsnapped.

[Sakusaki]


  1. Sorry,I really don't like this insane,pretty overmapped and weird jump.
  2. 01:46:943 (1,2) - I guess this parttern isn't acceptable.

[Hard]


  1. 00:34:590 (6) - Add new combo,since rhythm changed to here.
  2. 00:43:237 (6) - Remove this circle and Add clap on 00:43:413.
  3. 00:56:825 - Add clap,follow with drum.
  4. 01:21:531 - ^
  5. 01:34:766 (2,3) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.
  6. 01:46:943 (1,2,3) - Change to 1/2 rhythm,sound much better,like this.

[Normal]


  1. 01:29:296 (6) - Add new combo,it's a bit long IMO.
  2. 01:36:531 (3) - Remove this circle,sound much better.
  3. 01:41:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too many 1/2 will hard play for beginner,
    Try change to 1/2 slider or 1/1 circle parttern.

[Easy]


  1. 00:20:119 (3) - Offscreen,please move up some.

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Kawayi Rika wrote:

SPOILER
Hi ~ Eggache0 ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Use japanese artist : 侑樹-yuki-
  2. Source should be : Sakura Sakimashita
  3. Please add (Short Ver.) in tittle,this song already have full ver.
  4. Please check kiai time point,have some unsnapped.

[Sakusaki]


  1. Sorry,I really don't like this insane,pretty overmapped and weird jump.
  2. 01:46:943 (1,2) - I guess this parttern isn't acceptable.
I think it's fine.

[Hard]


  1. 00:34:590 (6) - Add new combo,since rhythm changed to here.
  2. 00:43:237 (6) - Remove this circle and Add clap on 00:43:413.
  3. 00:56:825 - Add clap,follow with drum.
  4. 01:21:531 - ^
  5. 01:34:766 (2,3) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.
  6. 01:46:943 (1,2,3) - Change to 1/2 rhythm,sound much better,like this.

[Normal]


  1. 01:29:296 (6) - Add new combo,it's a bit long IMO.
  2. 01:36:531 (3) - Remove this circle,sound much better.
  3. 01:41:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too many 1/2 will hard play for beginner,
    Try change to 1/2 slider or 1/1 circle parttern.

[Easy]


  1. 00:20:119 (3) - Offscreen,please move up some.

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck ~ ;)

All fixed except the one in Sakusaki. Thanks for mod and sorry for delay.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there

[General]
* 1st and 3rd kiai seems not fit....
* white2.jpg and lighting.png are unused, remove it from your beatmap folder


[Easy]
00:39:178 (4) - This short slider isn't recommended for beginner diff
01:10:590 (2) - Since this slider can make a blanket combo, make a slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/697559
01:37:060 (3) - A little spacing error here
01:44:296 (1,1) - Remove new combo


[Normal]
* They are too much 1/2 pattern that makes beginners are difficult to play. Consider to remove circles a bit until it feels like a normal diff. This diff is feels like Hard diff


[Hard]
00:42:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - Clap here doesn't fit IMO
00:57:884 (1) - Why you using normal-sampleset on head slider? Seems useless, IMO


Good luck
Fushimi Rio
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* 1st and 3rd kiai seems not fit.... will consider
* white2.jpg and lighting.png are unused, remove it from your beatmap folder it works fine on local...


[Easy]
00:39:178 (4) - This short slider isn't recommended for beginner diff fixed
01:10:590 (2) - Since this slider can make a blanket combo, make a slider like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/697559 ok
01:37:060 (3) - A little spacing error here oops fixed
01:44:296 (1,1) - Remove new combo ok


[Normal]
* They are too much 1/2 pattern that makes beginners are difficult to play. Consider to remove circles a bit until it feels like a normal diff. This diff is feels like Hard diff
will consider

[Hard]
00:42:354 (1,2,3,4,5) - Clap here doesn't fit IMO i can't even hear the claps
00:57:884 (1) - Why you using normal-sampleset on head slider? Seems useless, IMO fixed


Good luck
Thanks for mod.
BanchoBot
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