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-yuki- - Prime Limitation (Short Ver.)

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Fushimi Rio
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月1日 at 3:43:25

Artist: -yuki-
Title: Prime Limitation (Short Ver.)
Source: Sakura Sakimashita
Tags: opening sorahane TINKERBELL Sakura Sakimashita
BPM: 170
Filesize: 18277kb
Play Time: 01:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.48 stars, 127 notes)
  2. Hard (5 stars, 351 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 478 notes)
  4. Normal (4.14 stars, 178 notes)
Download: -yuki- - Prime Limitation (Short Ver.)
Download: -yuki- - Prime Limitation (Short Ver.) (no video)
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Sakura Sakimashita's 2nd opening.
简直坠毁 谁教教我怎么处理这个宽屏vedio和普屏bg的状况
好好打里侧啊
wantuole
沙发
easy nor画条有点快
整体音效有点轻了
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

wantuole wrote:

沙发
easy nor画条有点快
整体音效有点轻了
已改= =音效加了5%到10%不知道行不行
Purist_old
hi :)
因为我是新人所以如果哪说的不对的话请多包涵


General

因为音乐的声音比较大所以音效的音量可以调大点
个人推荐在60%左右

Easy

.osu文件里的SliderMultiplier听说还是改一下比较好
00:04:186(1)可以试试这个节奏
00:39:479(1)后移到00:39:656
00:59:420(2)这个呢
01:02:950(1)remove nc
01:14:773(3)感觉这样比较舒服
01:20:597(1)尾部延长到01:21:302
01:26:244(1)^
01:47:520(1)finish

Normal

00:02:775(3)叠好
00:27:127(3,4)^
00:58:009(2)这个滑条会碰到上方的血条
01:47:346(1)finish

Hard

OD-1
00:11:245(1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1)感觉这一串没必要每一个都加nc
另外可以加绿线让音量逐个减小
00:15:656(8)nc
00:16:009(1)remove nc
00:42:832(x)add note
00:44:244(x)^
00:49:715(5,6,7,1)滑条尾没叠在一起
01:09:303(6)nc
01:09:479(1)remove nc
01:14:950(1,1)这两个间距稍微大了点
01:27:655(x)add note
01:29:067(x)^
01:47:346(1)finish

Sakusaki

OD-1
几个比较长的连打可以用nc分下段
00:02:775(7)nc
00:03:304(1)remove nc
00:04:186(6)nc
00:04:716(1)remove nc
还有一段跟上面这个相似的
00:08:598(7,2)叠歪了
00:17:244(4)超出边界了
01:14:244(1,2,3)感觉改成3note就可以了

大概就这么多了 加油 :)
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Purist wrote:

大概就这么多了 加油
Thanks~音效我觉得能听到就行了
lkx_Shore
General
Mod from my queue
音质听起来很渣的样子...
new combo统一一下,每到大白线就用一个会比较好
music track调到1比较好(在song setup的audio最下面
enable countdown可以去掉(在song setup的storyboarding里
Stack leniency最好是调到4
mod得略渣,主要从玩家的感觉上来mod.如果你想的是难,而不是打起来爽而且随手FC,那么可以无视我的mod
这图红线只需要插一个

Sakusaki
HP8→7 (8的判定较高,7是最妥当的
OD8→7
00:06:127 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 我猜有人会吐槽这是烂梗.
00:30:480 (5) - 如果你要用这个梗,就别在下面叠note,会很不舒服(至少露出来一点
00:41:068 (1,2) - 来回一次就好
01:00:479 (4,5) - 叠着不舒服
01:35:861 (7) - 去掉note或者改成滑条在白线前停,白线放note
01:41:861 (2) - 去掉note
01:42:038 (3) - ^
01:42:038 (3) - ........你觉得这样打着会舒服吗?从良用滑条带过会比较好

其他地方没什么问题,只是这样打起来感觉不会“非常爽”
可以多套用01:32:597 (4,5) - 这个梗.这样打起来会比较“爽”
音效方面你没怎么添加whistle,这样也行,不过你要添加的话就得整个图加.
如果加了一半不加一半,感觉会很奇怪.
大致加法就是听音,起伏较大的音就加上whistle.
连着加三个以上听着会不太好.所以我一般是加两个就留一个note不加whistle.

Hard
HP7→5
OD6→5
AR7→8
00:48:832 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 差评!
01:13:361 (3,4,5,6,7) - 改了吧
01:21:655 (4) - ......
01:30:832 (8) - 不要叠着
01:33:126 (4,5,6,7) - 叠太多了
01:38:773 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - 节奏都对不上

hard还是有点小跳会比较好,叠的地方也太多了.建议取缔

Normal
HP3→4
00:01:010 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - 叠得太多,打起来不舒服
00:14:774 (4) - 这种滑条下叠note的梗在normal里不要用,新手们会很困扰的
00:45:303 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/3在normal里是用滑条带过的.(新手打得准起来会很难
01:14:244 (1,2,3) - 这种最好也用滑条带一下
01:45:843 (1) - ...这里可不是用1/3就能对上节奏的地方

Easy
Od2→1
00:04:186 (1) - 取缔,节奏对不上
00:39:479 (1) - ^
01:14:508 (2) - 1/3在easy里还用. 毫无人性;_;
01:25:538 (2) - 只有insane难度才能在滑条上叠note
01:45:786 (1) - 节奏对不上,而且在easy里不要两个转圈连在一起...

渣mod见谅 :?
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

lkx_shore wrote:

Sakusaki
01:42:038 (3) - ........你觉得这样打着会舒服吗?从良用滑条带过会比较好
说的是最后一段……?我打着没什么感觉 :?

Hard
AR7→8
我觉得hard还是不要太高……
已改,感谢mod~
音乐已换……虽然感觉还是渣
cmn_891127
Hi, Eggache0
Sorry for delay, you know, Midterm Exam

[Sakusaki]
00:06:127 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I really cannot see them clearly, if you really like this pattern, plz add NC, or you can use Ctrl+Shift+R
01:25:185 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
01:45:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not For Human. Ctrl+R (1,2) and (12,13)

[Hard]
00:12:127 (1,1,1,1,1) - why not use 1/4 reverse slider instead of notes
00:26:862 (2) - not fit here, remove
00:47:420 (5) - NC
00:49:538 (5) - NC
01:23:067 (7,1) - NC at (7) instead of (1)

[Normal]
00:45:303 (1,1) - too close for Normal diff, you can use One Note instead of spinner
00:55:185 (1,1) - ^, end at 00:56:597 and remove (1)
01:17:773 (1,1) - ^, end at 01:19:185

[Easy]
00:01:539 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - NC so frequently
01:17:773 (1,1) - like [Normal]
01:47:520 (1) - special start time

I love mapset of [Sakusaki]:3
GL and Star~
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

cmn_891127 wrote:

Exam too...
Thanks for modding and star!
Fia
换音效看看?现在的clap效果太弱

[Easy]
00:58:906 add note
01:11:965 - (1) remove nc
01:20:436 - (1,2) 这个梗和后面的放在一起太难了 缩短slider circle改到01:21:141

[Normal]
00:14:083 - (3,4) slider有点近……玩的时候看错拍了
00:28:000 - (1) add note
00:45:141 - (1) remove nc
00:46:553 - (3) nc
01:14:083 - (1,2,3) 1/3用slider

star 祝好运
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

PinkHeart wrote:

以上 差不多还是star了 考试顺利
star感谢 太晚了明天再看 不许提考试!
Fia
[Hard]
00:11:259 - (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) 太难了!
00:26:436 - (5,6) 间距和前面请保持一致
01:34:377 - (8) 换到下面的位置 nc
01:34:553 - (1) remove nc
01:45:451 - (1,2,3,4,5) 难按...

[Sakusaki]
00:43:024 - (9) clap
00:43:730 - (7) finish
00:45:141 - (1) finish

另两个难度mod补上
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

PinkHeart wrote:

[Easy]
01:20:436 - (1,2) 这个梗和后面的放在一起太难了 缩短slider circle改到01:21:141 正在考虑...
[Normal]
00:45:141 - (1) remove nc 我觉得不合适...
[Hard]
01:34:377 - (8) 换到下面的位置 nc 位置现在的比较好
麻烦补mod了 抱歉
UnderminE
First of all, loved the song.

[Easy]
You don't have to write your name in tags since the map its yours already. If you have a guest diff or guest storyboard, you have to add their names in tags.

40% is really loud for this song, dunno maybe use 50? (Well if you will use 50 and will use that suggestion I did below, you will have to change the volume according to 50)
00:33:865 - This part has to get louder. So I am suggesting you to add these:I am suggesting you to use whistles for that back-sound during kiai time. Normal-whistle ofc. So if you want to do it, add these time points:
SPOILER
You can use 1/4 beat snap divisor to add easily. Also I used 60%, whistles will be heard better.




After adding all:
01:20:454 (1) - Whistle (but only on this note)
01:21:689 (1) - Whistle on slider (not on hit notes)
01:23:101 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:24:513 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:26:101 (1) - Whistle but only on this note
01:27:336 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:28:748 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:31:042 (3) - Whistle (remove clap)
01:31:748 (1) - Whistle but only on this note
01:32:983 (2) - Whistle on slider
01:34:395 (3) - Whistle on slider
01:35:807 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:37:395 (1) - Whistle on slider
01:38:631 (2) - Whistle on slider
01:40:042 (3) - Whistle on slider

You can do the same trick for the first kiai time, but dunno it's up to you.

00:57:865 - Add one timing section here with kiai mode. And end it here 00:57:954 - Because that part has an effect like BAM and after that song goes normally. That will make a good affect.

About spacing;
You used 0,8x distance but when I check all, some of them are placed with 0,9 and some of them 1,0. You can do this with Hard or Insane diffs, but we don't prefer this kind of spacing on Easy and Normals. (Well, you can do a little bit tricky on Normals maybe, but definitely not on Easy)
I am suggesting you to use 0,9x or 1,0x distance. To change it, press Alt and while pressing change it from top-right.

If you want to see which notes are too far or not, just click on an object and look top-right. If you will use 0,8x, this must be about 0,80-0,90x
Hope you understood :D

[Normal]
You don't have to write your name in tags since the map its yours already. If you have a guest diff or guest storyboard, you have to add their names in tags.

40% is really loud for this song, dunno maybe use 50?
Same thing about spacing goes here too. Use 1,0x distance spacing~
You can use that trick I talked about before (whistles on kiai :D). If you don't know how to make it, I can help you with timing sections. I am following your map~
00:04:042 (3) - stack it properly
00:15:159 (4,5,6,7) - This part is too confusing for a Normal diff. Make it a bit easier.
00:20:807 (3,4,5,6) - ^ Same thing
00:26:454 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:29:630 (1,2,3,4) - You used these four so many times. Why don't you use a repeat-slider? You can see so many repeat sliders in Normal diffs, it's like a solution for things like these.
00:33:865 (2,4,6) - Add same timing sections in Easy diff, remember this one:
00:33:865 - This part has to get louder. So I am suggesting you to add these:
00:57:865 - Add that kiai time here too.
01:11:983 (3) - Move this to somewhere else
01:12:689 (4,5) - Make a slider with these two
Those longs sliders in the end: You can try different kind of shapes for sliders. Using same kind of slider doesn't look good dear.

[Hard]
You don't have to write your name in tags since the map its yours already. If you have a guest diff or guest storyboard, you have to add their names in tags.

40% is really loud for this song, dunno maybe use 50?
Use soft whistle time to time, its like you dont have any hitsound except finish-sound.
You can add that kiai time I suggested here too.

There is nothing wrong with spacing or sliders in my opinion. But IT NEEDS HITSOUNDS. Really, try to use Normal-hitsounds too, whistles, all kind of them. You made a nice rhythm in Hard, but its nothing without hitsounds. Try on them more~~

[Insane]
Everything I said in Hard diff goes for this diff too. It needs hitsounds, whistles too much.
You can add that short kiai time I suggested in this diff too.
01:10:572 (5,6,7) - This pattern looks ugly, try something different

[Song Folder]
There are 2 .osb files, delete one please.

Okay that's all, sorry for my shitty mood. All I can say that your map needs hitsounds so much. Star'd, good luck~
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

UnderminE wrote:

Okay that's all, sorry for my shitty mood. All I can say that your map needs hitsounds so much. Star'd, good luck~
Thank you for modding and star. I'll try adding some whistles.
Tenshichan
M4M From my queue~

[General]
  1. Delete Unneeded osb file from your song folder (there are 2 right now)
  2. Your Kiai time must be the same in every diff
  3. Give every diff a Lead-in of at least 2 seconds
[Easy]

  1. 01:44:258 (1) - Unsnapped
  2. 01:45:819 (1) - ^
  3. 01:47:206 (1) - ^
  4. 00:02:630 (2,3) - Make it a slider?
  5. 00:05:983 (1,2,3) - How they are placed under the slider is pretty difficult for the easiest diff, I would suggest to try something else there
  6. 00:16:924 (2) - End this slider at 00:17:630
  7. 00:39:159 - Probably make a short slider until 00:39:512 and delete (1)?
  8. 00:47:630 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This may be also unfriendly for beginners, perhaps change it a bit, and I don't think there is a need for so many NC
  9. 00:47:983 (2) - Add finish sound
  10. 01:02:454 (3) - Move it to the same height as (2)
  11. 01:02:807 (4) - Move it to the same height as (1)
  12. 01:07:748 (1,2) - Try this? If you change, don't forget to add finish sound on the slider ends
  13. 01:12:689 (5,6) - Better make them a slider because of the sudden spacing change
  14. 01:21:336 (2) - Might not be suitable for an easy diff
  15. 01:26:983 (2) - ^
[Normal]

  1. 01:44:258 (1) - Unsnapped
  2. 00:29:630 (1,2,3,4) - Move it a bit away from the slider so it isn't under it, doesn't look so nice
  3. 00:33:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This feels somehow a bit wrong. Probably make (2) and (3) into a slider and (4) and (5) too
  4. 00:43:748 (6) - Don't make it overlap the next slider
  5. 00:47:630 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Pretty difficult for normal I guess, maybe make at least one of those combos a repeating slider
  6. 01:08:454 (1) - Remove NC
  7. 01:09:159 (1) - ^
  8. 01:14:807 (2) - Add finish sound
  9. 01:17:630 (1) - Too short spinner for a normal diff
  10. 01:19:042 (1,1,1,1,1) - I think this new combo spam is not needed
  11. 01:40:042 (1) - Remove clap and whistle and add finish sound
  12. 01:42:689 (3) - Move it that it isn't on the edge of the slider
[Hard]

  1. 01:43:039 (1) - Unsnapped
  2. 01:44:258 (1) - ^
  3. 01:44:779 (2) - ^
  4. 01:45:125 (3) - ^
  5. 00:00:865 (1,1,1) - No need for new combos here
  6. 00:10:571 (3) - Make it parallel to (1) from the same combo
  7. 00:11:277 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - You seem to like this, but I don't know if so much new combos are necessary ^^
  8. 00:20:101 (4) - Better move it on top of (5)
  9. 00:21:865 (2,3) - You should try to make a proper spacing here, because it looks weird
  10. 00:43:748 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it is better to not stack them
  11. 00:44:277 - Perhaps add a slider here and let it end where (7) is now, and delete (6)
  12. 00:49:218 (1) - Better move it on top of (2)
  13. 01:06:248 (8) - Probably delete it as I think it doesn't follow the rhythm quite well
  14. 01:12:512 (2,3) - This gap is imo a bit far for a hard
  15. 01:22:042 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice, but also a bit confusing pattern, some of the patterns after it are also very confusing ... Probably alternate a bit to make them more readable
  16. 01:39:865 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't stack
  17. 01:40:571 (6) - Make the curve on the other side so it doesn't overlap with the next pattern
  18. 01:45:469 (1,2) - I think this notes don't fit very well
[Sakusaki]

  1. HP Drain -1? It's too high right now
  2. 00:05:983 (2) - I think it is hard to read that the stream goes in circles here (more hard if players use a skin without transparent 300s and)
  3. 00:34:571 (1,3) - CTRL + G
  4. 00:35:101 (4,5) - ^
  5. 00:39:159 (9) - NC
  6. 01:02:983 (4) - Maybe give it a better spacing
  7. 01:10:924 (6) - Delete note and let slider end here
  8. 01:25:042 (2) - As in 00:05:983
  9. 01:49:978 (1,1,1) - Too close to the spinner, shouldn't be a triplet here
Awesome song! Sakusaki is very good, with all the cool star patterns. Good luck to get it ranked! :D
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Tenshichan wrote:

M4M From my queue~
Thanks for mod~
HellDawn
Easy

00:01:395- kiai should start here
00:05:983- dont stack with previous slider
00:39:336- hard to catch for beginner
00:52:218- Finish
00:57:865- kiai should start here
01:20:454- ^

Normal

Kiai's are same > easy diff
00:45:865- RNC
00:49:042- far from previous combos so hard to catch
01:10:218 (1,2) looks bad because touching hp bar maybe 2 grid down ?
01:21:689- finish
01:23:101- ^
01:27:336- ^
01:28:748- ^
01:30:159- ^

Hard

Check spacing.

Insane

Looks great
Star Stream
Timing check from my queue~
1. Offset: 1,430ms BPM: 170.00
Only 1 red line~
Good luck then~
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

HellDawn wrote:

Thanks for mod~

Star Stream wrote:

Thanks for the timing check! Helped a lot...
Kuroneko-sHerald
Sorry for delay :(

[General]
After loading loading the map on osu! Hard and Sakusaki give "audio error for this beatmap".
After first refresh they disappear and after the second they reappear with the audio error fixed :o
I tried to download the map again to see if the osz i had was corrupted, but it gave the same issue.
Then i found that the problem is caused by the folder named "beifen", because it has a sort of backup of Hard and Sakusaki in it.
Remove this folder and the problem should fixes.

Hard has audio lead-in 1004 instead of 1015.

Please be consistent with kiai. Use these kiaki on all diffs.
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:01:430, ends on 00:12:547
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:57:724, ends on 00:58:253
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:20:488, ends on 01:43:077

[Tags]
On Hard and Sakusaki there is double space between "TINKERBELL" and "Sakura_Sakimashita". Remove it.
Why there is underscore between "Sakura" and "Sakimashita"? The right name is "Sakura, Sakimashita". So, since comma can be omitted, I suggest to change to "Sakura Sakimashita"

[Normal]
01:44:312 (1) - end this slider at 01:45:371 -
01:45:900 (1) - I think you should move it at 01:45:724 - (end at 01:46:782 - ) and to add a beat at 01:46:959 -

[Hard]
Hard? This time the star system is right, this is SPARTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA insane.
HP Drain Rate -1 or -2
00:45:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Since this part is mapped with 1/6 i suggest to change the placement order to be more easy to get the time change.
00:46:606 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Messy, really messy :?
01:14:135 (1,1,1,1) - Should be mapped with 1/6
01:14:135 - 
01:14:371 -
01:14:606 -
01:14:841 -

01:20:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Messy
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio
[quote="Kuroneko-sHerald"]Sorry for delay :(

[General]
After loading loading the map on osu! Hard and Sakusaki give "audio error for this beatmap".
After first refresh they disappear and after the second they reappear with the audio error fixed :o
I tried to download the map again to see if the osz i had was corrupted, but it gave the same issue.
Then i found that the problem is caused by the folder named "beifen", because it has a sort of backup of Hard and Sakusaki in it.
Remove this folder and the problem should fixes.

→I‘m so sorry for that......

[Tags]
On Hard and Sakusaki there is double space between "TINKERBELL" and "Sakura_Sakimashita". Remove it.
Why there is underscore between "Sakura" and "Sakimashita"? The right name is "Sakura, Sakimashita". So, since comma can be omitted, I suggest to change to "Sakura Sakimashita"

→ok.
[Normal]
01:44:312 (1) - end this slider at 01:45:371 -
01:45:900 (1) - I think you should move it at 01:45:724 - (end at 01:46:782 - ) and to add a beat at 01:46:959 -

→it sounds good, thanks.
[Hard]
Hard? This time the star system is right, this is SPARTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA insane.

HP Drain Rate -1 or -2 →HD-1.

01:14:135 (1,1,1,1) - Should be mapped with 1/6 →ok.
Curisu
哇软妹
说真的我不喜欢这vocal

hitsounds不想多说没issue可吐

[General]
后面的萌萌萌萌萌萌萌萌萌萌妹子萌音从mapping来说没必要建议砍掉 而且过20%了貌似
offset拉前一拍 不要把绿线和红线叠一起

怎么感觉preview点不对...副歌不在这里?

[Storyboard]
white2.png是什么用处...osb那行代码也是

[Easy]
这张图的spacing感觉一直在0.9±0.1波动...
节奏略违和..太跟vocal了

00:12:724 (1) - imo这里spacing别跟0.75x跟1x 没可读性
00:28:253 (3,4) - 感觉这里别一样斜度
00:39:194 (1) - ...真的跟vocal? 有点难读
01:21:724 (1) - spacing
01:45:900 (1) - 可读性...建议拉前1/2

[Normal]
这个的节奏比上一个难度处理的更不好
...因为该难的地方你跟vocal出不来 间奏和前奏又那么密

like these
01:00:724
01:03:547
01:06:371
...etc.

00:00:900 (1,2,3) - 有点响了 vol-15
00:07:077 (1,2,1) - 三角形nazi
01:14:841 (2) - addition normal...那为啥+clap

[Hard]
00:06:018 (1,1,1) - 这里听起来已经不是不舒服了
01:07:782 (4,5,6) - hmm...突然那么大个gap
01:14:135 (1,1,1,1) - 很明显3/4*2+1/2 不是等分

[Sakusaki]
00:05:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这什么新梗
00:12:724 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏上说没必要 像是硬塞 后面同

00:15:547 (4) - +NC
00:50:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 前半段没什么打击力 还有怎么那么大疾走感感觉这里需要打击感
01:14:135 (1,2,3) - 同Hard 非等分
01:45:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 太鬼畜


一些pattern还是有好好设计的也看得出很用心 但总体来看大局不是很有规划
比起前面些po所说的hitsounds...其实比起音效进阶更应该先抓抓图感而不是硬插梗

要给赞 快把萌梨那张b a diamond挖出来
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Curisu wrote:

说真的我不喜欢这vocal
+1...

[General]
offset拉前一拍 不要把绿线和红线叠一起
改了

怎么感觉preview点不对...副歌不在这里?
preview副歌我觉得效果不好

[Storyboard]
white2.png是什么用处...osb那行代码也是
我蠢只会这样拖时间拖到萌音那块

[Easy]
这张图的spacing感觉一直在0.9±0.1波动...
节奏略违和..太跟vocal了

00:12:724 (1) - imo这里spacing别跟0.75x跟1x 没可读性
00:28:253 (3,4) - 感觉这里别一样斜度
00:39:194 (1) - ...真的跟vocal? 有点难读
01:21:724 (1) - spacing
01:45:900 (1) - 可读性...建议拉前1/2

都改了

[Normal]
这个的节奏比上一个难度处理的更不好
...因为该难的地方你跟vocal出不来 间奏和前奏又那么密

like these
01:00:724
01:03:547
01:06:371
...etc.

00:00:900 (1,2,3) - 有点响了 vol-15
00:07:077 (1,2,1) - 三角形nazi
01:14:841 (2) - addition normal...那为啥+clap

我考虑要不要remap

[Hard]
00:06:018 (1,1,1) - 这里听起来已经不是不舒服了
我觉得还好我再去看看其他人怎么说
01:07:782 (4,5,6) - hmm...突然那么大个gap
是说前面那个gap么...这个spacing才0.88...
01:14:135 (1,1,1,1) - 很明显3/4*2+1/2 不是等分
改了

[Sakusaki]
00:05:488 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - 这什么新梗
坑人好爽啊s/25372打这个老图时看到的
00:12:724 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏上说没必要 像是硬塞 后面同
改了
00:15:547 (4) - +NC
改了
00:50:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 前半段没什么打击力 还有怎么那么大疾走感感觉这里需要打击感
不太懂疾走的意思……大概是说我犯懒加了一片clap?
01:14:135 (1,2,3) - 同Hard 非等分
改了(大概
01:45:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 太鬼畜
直接打打不过去么我觉得已经很不鬼畜了……

一些pattern还是有好好设计的也看得出很用心 但总体来看大局不是很有规划
比起前面些po所说的hitsounds...其实比起音效进阶更应该先抓抓图感而不是硬插梗
坑人还是好爽啊我去试试抓...

要给赞 快把萌梨那张b a diamond挖出来
这么黑的黑历史我居然忘了删 /摔
连续两次啪的就连不上了 语气不好 太抱歉
Heatherfield
aiaiclala fans club presents
[General]
offset:2,目前长白线位置不对.
[Sakusaki]
Overmapped
看得出排列是花了心思想要摆好看的,但是很多地方其实和歌曲并不相合.另外节奏方面,一般来说那种音乐里没有的三连不会像这样放这么多白线起,这种节奏打起来很别扭的.下面只是找些典型,重复的不提了.
details:
kiai和别的难度统一?
00:06:003 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - astom作图如同弱智...学学sb就好,梗还是算了
00:11:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不知道是表现什么..
00:13:061 (2,3,4) - ^
00:36:356 (3,4,5) - 白线起的3连还是少放为妙
00:45:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议这样
00:54:884 (7) - 似乎摆歪了?
00:57:179 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 三个一组的意义...?
01:04:061 (6) - 碰到血条 前面也有几个地方有点沾边
01:13:238 (4,5,6) - 建议这样
01:23:120 (3,4,5) - 血条
01:28:591 (2) - ^
01:32:209 (2,3) - 不妙的节奏,这里开始的这段节奏违和感都蛮强的
01:45:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个间距实在略大..
01:47:061 (11) - 这个地方已经不是/1/3了,可以把10改成slider拖半拍
01:50:032 (1,1) - 其实这里有1/8 不来一发吗(误

[Hard]
01:13:856 (7) - add note?
01:41:650 (1) - 间距是不是近了点
01:46:944 (4) - 同insane,这个就不用1/3了吧

[Normal]
AR略低吧好像..+1?
01:45:885 (1,2,3) - 打击点会很奇怪吧..另外最后一个的节奏修改意见同其他diff

[Easy]
01:14:120 (1) - 这不是3/4么

:)
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Heatherfield wrote:

aiaiclala fans club presents
[General]
offset:2,目前长白线位置不对. 天意(
[Sakusaki]
Overmapped 球翻译
看得出排列是花了心思想要摆好看的,但是很多地方其实和歌曲并不相合.另外节奏方面,一般来说那种音乐里没有的三连不会像这样放这么多白线起,这种节奏打起来很别扭的.下面只是找些典型,重复的不提了. 我也觉得是花了心思摆的 可惜I是瞎摆的……
details:
kiai和别的难度统一? 居然还没有统一 简直……
00:06:003 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - astom作图如同弱智...学学sb就好,梗还是算了 stress 换梗又要大改……
00:11:120 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不知道是表现什么.. 这里不会摆了 stress
00:13:061 (2,3,4) - ^
00:36:356 (3,4,5) - 白线起的3连还是少放为妙 了解了……
00:45:179 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议这样
00:54:884 (7) - 似乎摆歪了? 不太懂 应该没有
00:57:179 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 三个一组的意义...? 好看(飞
01:04:061 (6) - 碰到血条 前面也有几个地方有点沾边 改了 谢提醒
01:13:238 (4,5,6) - 建议这样 好像很不错……
01:23:120 (3,4,5) - 血条
01:28:591 (2) - ^
01:32:209 (2,3) - 不妙的节奏,这里开始的这段节奏违和感都蛮强的 节奏无能 试着改改吧
01:45:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个间距实在略大.. 缩小了
01:47:061 (11) - 这个地方已经不是/1/3了,可以把10改成slider拖半拍 确实是……改了
01:50:032 (1,1) - 其实这里有1/8 不来一发吗(误 好(大误

[Hard]
01:13:856 (7) - add note? 没懂……前面一拍?
01:41:650 (1) - 间距是不是近了点
01:46:944 (4) - 同insane,这个就不用1/3了吧 同insane,改了……

[Normal]
AR略低吧好像..+1? 加几都无所谓(飞
01:45:885 (1,2,3) - 打击点会很奇怪吧..另外最后一个的节奏修改意见同其他diff 改了

[Easy]
01:14:120 (1) - 这不是3/4么 大脑已然脱线看不出是什么了

:)
Ranger
From my modding queue

[Hard]
00:06:356 (1) - Remove NC here
00:06:708 (1) - ^
00:30:003 (3) - how about make more as a triangle?like this
00:46:591 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - um...it`s too hard i think.make more easier plz (throw more interval...maybe?)
01:22:061 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^


[Sakusaki]
lol....very hard....
i think this diff like overmapping....but rhythm is good.
i`m recommended silder velocity a little lower

00:43:237 (5,6) - how about this two note change the silder?
01:10:238 (3) - put the end of the 01:10:591 (5) (x:256 y:120).it looks better to me


normal and easy diff is nothing special to me
good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

[Ranger] wrote:

From my modding queue

[Hard]
00:06:356 (1) - Remove NC here
00:06:708 (1) - ^
00:30:003 (3) - how about make more as a triangle?like this
→looks fine...Changed
00:46:591 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - um...it`s too hard i think.make more easier plz (throw more interval...maybe?)
→Maybe interval is good. Changed


[Sakusaki]

00:43:237 (5,6) - how about this two note change the silder? →ok

normal and easy diff is nothing special to me
good luck~ :)
Thanks for modding.
lkx_Shore
mod
[Sakusaki]
其实这diff好绕的啊,我就提点特别绕的
00:04:061 (1) - ^ (flow)
00:04:767 (5) - clap
00:06:531 (7) - finish
00:07:238 (2) - 好绕
00:12:708 (1) - 头finish
00:13:061 (2) - remove finish
00:42:707 - add note
00:42:796 (1) - remove note
00:43:767 (1,2,3) - 感觉这里这样打击感不好.改成这样?
00:45:002 (5) - remove clap
你这一段的clap太乱了,用2/4clap的效果最好,然后把下面的finish也改了试试
01:19:061 (1) - addfinish
01:19:414 (5) - ^
01:19:767 (9) - ^
01:20:120 (13) - ^
01:20:472 (1) - 这个finish音量100%处理!
01:42:709 (6) - 头finish
01:44:297 (8) - removefinish
01:45:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 建议换成大跳滑条,不然可能会因为这个梗,你的图被黑到8.9分
01:47:209 (1) - 停在01:49:766并且20%音量,把后面的梗改成01:49:943起的1/4三连打

[Hard]
所有难度Timing必须一致! 加粗醒目
01:27:532 - addnote,然后蓝线的音效移到红线
01:28:944 (9) - ^

[Normal]
00:07:414 (2) - 这种梗用在nm难度真是要灭绝nmplayer;_;

00:07:060 (1) - removenc
00:07:414 (2,5,8) - NC
00:11:120 (1) - 大白线起,要给nmplayer准备时间
01:14:120 (1,2,3) - nmplayer不会打,换成滑条吧
01:24:532 (1) - 换成长滑条
01:30:179 (1) - ^,后面这么难真是
01:42:356 (6,7) - 好像nm不能这么放
01:45:885 (1,2,3) - 最好是改成一/两个滑条

[Easy]
00:24:356 (2) - 在easy叠起来感觉不会再爱(虽然没问题)
00:40:238 (3) - 思考
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

lkx_Shore wrote:

Easy
00:24:356 (2) - 在easy叠起来感觉不会再爱(虽然没问题) -叠头我觉得不是大问题
00:40:238 (3) - 思考 -nc了后面的note

Normal
00:07:414 (2) - 这种梗用在nm难度真是要灭绝nmplayer;_;
00:07:060 (1) - removenc
00:07:414 (2,5,8) - NC -NMplayerl就没必要用nc帮助读图了吧……
00:11:120 (1) - 大白线起,要给nmplayer准备时间 -fixed
01:14:120 (1,2,3) - nmplayer不会打,换成滑条吧 -fixed
01:24:532 (1) - 换成长滑条 -fixed
01:30:179 (1) - ^,后面这么难真是 -fixed 改简单了
01:42:356 (6,7) - 好像nm不能这么放 -fixed
01:45:885 (1,2,3) - 最好是改成一/两个滑条 -两个滑条打击点会很奇怪……这里不太会改

Hard
所有难度Timing必须一致! 加粗醒目 -你没加粗
01:27:532 - addnote,然后蓝线的音效移到红线 -加了,但是难度变得很卧槽……
01:28:944 (9) - ^

Sakusaki
其实这diff好绕的啊,我就提点特别绕的 -用的都是五角星梗难以不绕(玩笑
00:04:061 (1) - ^ (flow) fixed
00:04:767 (5) - clap -……你认真的?
00:06:531 (7) - finish -听着真是喜感 先改了看看
00:07:238 (2) - 好绕 -算了 想让slider砸一下
00:12:708 (1) - 头finish fixed
00:13:061 (2) - remove finish
00:42:707 - add note -这片大改了一下
00:42:796 (1) - remove note
00:43:767 (1,2,3) - 感觉这里这样打击感不好.改成这样?
00:45:002 (5) - remove clap
你这一段的clap太乱了,用2/4clap的效果最好,然后把下面的finish也改了试试
01:19:061 (1) - addfinish
01:19:414 (5) - ^
01:19:767 (9) - ^
01:20:120 (13) - ^
01:20:472 (1) - 这个finish音量100%处理!
01:42:709 (6) - 头finish
01:44:297 (8) - removefinish  -都改了
01:45:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 建议换成大跳滑条,不然可能会因为这个梗,你的图被黑到8.9分 -思考 改完我觉得说不定会到7分
01:47:209 (1) - 停在01:49:766并且20%音量,把后面的梗改成01:49:943起的1/4三连打 -fixed(笑
lkx_Shore
你好
[Sakusaki]
00:12:620 (8) - add clap
00:40:944 (1,2) - 这梗好容易路人...
00:42:532 (3,4) - add clap
00:45:179 (1) - 降音量处理55~60%你自己挑一个喜欢的音量,我觉得57%比较好
00:46:238 (6) - add clap
00:48:003 (1) - add finish
00:48:709 (1) - add finish
00:49:414 (1) - add finish
00:57:356 (3,5,7,8) - add clap
01:12:003 (1,3) - 头add finish
01:14:650 (3) - remove clap
01:20:296 (15) - add clap
01:23:648 (2) - 这一段开始漏了clap?
01:37:061 (6) - 头finish
01:46:237 (1,1,1) - NC (哇好带感)
01:47:119 (8) - 放在x280,y36?(不改也没问题,不过我能想象到正常人玩到这会说wtf...!)
01:47:209 (1) - remove finish,5%音量
01:49:943 (1) - 用50%音量的S-1
01:50:119 (3) - removefinish
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

lkx_Shore wrote:

你好
这啥梗
[Sakusaki]
00:12:620 (8) - add clap
00:40:944 (1,2) - 这梗好容易路人... →说的是前面那个梗?
00:42:532 (3,4) - add clap
00:45:179 (1) - 降音量处理55~60%你自己挑一个喜欢的音量,我觉得57%比较好 →]我想升音量把后面的60%拖过来了[/color]
00:46:238 (6) - add clap →好
00:48:003 (1) - add finish
00:48:709 (1) - add finish
00:49:414 (1) - add finish →算了
00:57:356 (3,5,7,8) - add clap
01:12:003 (1,3) - 头add finish →好
01:14:650 (3) - remove clap
01:20:296 (15) - add clap
01:23:648 (2) - 这一段开始漏了clap? →真漏了……
01:37:061 (6) - 头finish →好
01:46:237 (1,1,1) - NC (哇好带感) →你在说哪……
01:47:119 (8) - 放在x280,y36?(不改也没问题,不过我能想象到正常人玩到这会说wtf...!)
01:47:209 (1) - remove finish,5%音量
01:49:943 (1) - 用50%音量的S-1
01:50:119 (3) - removefinish
怎么从第二页开始每次一给就是2kd 另助攻三页给个赞
Sun Rainbow
sorry。。你的图太难MOD了(能力不足)所以。。。。
只能Shoot Star了。。。。
Topic Starter
Fushimi Rio

Sun Rainbow wrote:

sorry。。你的图太难MOD了(能力不足)所以。。。。
只能Shoot Star了。。。。
我等这句话等了四个月(砸桌
谢star
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