Kotek- wrote:

00:52:638 (2,3) - Я имела ввиду между этими вставить сёркл. > w <

Tarantino wrote:

[General]

Inconsistency in Kiai Times

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- High :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:38:696, ends on 01:01:285

- Low :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:38:696, ends on 01:01:285
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:285, ends on 01:01:373

- Mid :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:38:696, ends on 01:01:285
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:01:285, ends on 01:01:373

Fix the kiai fountain in the High difficulty so it has two like in the other difficulties.

fixed kiai my own way.


[High]

The new combo placement in this difficulty seems a bit odd to me. I've puzzled around a bit and came up with this. It's up to you if you want to use these.

New combo placement

00:06:226 (6) - Add NC.
00:09:049 (8) - Add NC.
00:11:873 (8) - Add NC.
00:40:108 (7) - Add NC.
00:40:814 (1) - Remove NC.
00:41:696 (2) - Add NC.
00:45:755 (9) - Add NC.
00:46:461 (1) - Remove NC.
00:47:167 (5) - Add NC.
00:52:108 (1) - Remove NC.
00:52:638 (2) - Add NC.
00:54:226 (11) - Add NC.
00:54:579 (1) - Remove NC.
00:58:638 (7) - Add NC.
01:05:167 (7) - Add NC.
01:08:343 (7) - Add NC.
01:09:932 (11) - Add NC.
01:10:108 (1) - Remove NC.
01:14:167 (8) - Add NC.
01:14:696 (1) - Remove NC.
01:15:402 (5) - Add NC.
01:16:461 (11) - Add NC.
01:17:167 (1) - Remove NC.
01:18:402 (4) - Add NC.
01:20:873 (4) - Add NC.

uhh.. i'm not sure about all this =_=

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:16:037 - snap to 00:16:019
00:38:786 - snap to 00:38:784

does it matter? they work, right? fixed though.

00:15:402 (1) - I would make this spinner start on 00:15:138. This way it'll flow better and it would be easier to pass it. As for now, auto can only just get 2k points on it. Any other player however will already struggle to even pass the spinner haha.

works both ways but i'd like to give player some time to recover.

01:14:167 (8,9,10,1) - These jumps seem really odd to me. I mean, the spacing between 8, 9 and 10 are 1.7x and the the spacing from 10 to 1 is 1.0x. It seems a bit too sudden. I'd keep it 1.7x spacing and would then make a square pattern out of it. It plays way better imo. http://puu.sh/Yo4S (quickly made pattern, so the square is a bit off haha)

combo color should indicate spacing change, right?


[Mid]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:38:786 - snap to 00:38:872

does it matter? they work, right? fixed though.

[Low]

Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:38:786 - snap to 00:38:872

does it matter? they work, right? fixed though.

1. Ни-че-го!

1. 00:14:696 (3) - просится финиш
2. 00:38:696 - сделай финиш на фонтане громче, чем 30% (хорошо бы удвоить)
3. 00:49:991 (1) и далее — этот «финиш» (сам хитсаунд) очень громкий по сравнению с остальными звуками. Возможно, стоит сделать его тише и перезалить, уж больно заметна разница между его наличием и отсутствием
4. 00:58:107 (5) - вместо него лучше две ноты, мне кажется (паттерн у тебя не по центру, слайдером можешь пожертвовать, потеря симметри будет не особо заметна
5. 01:22:461 - возможно, стоит добавить ноту с финишем, а спиннер — на полбита позже

1. 00:14:696 (3) - финиш? Ну, как и на лоу
2. 00:36:932 (5) - он кривоватый. Подвинь саамый правый узел влево, чтобы подправить
3. 00:38:696 - см. лоу
4. 01:16:108 (1,2) - определись со спейсингом уже, прошлый точно такой же фрагмент был под .5: 01:14:343 (4,5)
5. 01:22:461 - см. лоу

1. 00:38:696 - и опять тихий финиш, который надо сделать громче же!
2. 00:40:814 (1) - попробуй хлопок на повтор добавить, может, понравится, как звучит. А вообще, какой-то глупый заполнитель, лучше б вместо него нормальные слайдеры сделал, или нот добавил
3. 00:49:991 (1,2,3) - что. В смысле, ты не пробовал как-нибудь переделать 2 и 3? После первого выглядят, как будто их абсолютно случайно бросили и так и оставили. Может, там лучше что-то симпатично-симметричное сделать вместо копипасты, заодно поменяв и первый слайдер?
4. 01:05:167 (7,9) - встань на 01:05:696 и выровняй их по аппроачу от ноты (да, я заметил, что они криво стоят, во время игры)
5. 00:59:873 - лучше сюда ноту, спиннер на четверть позже
6. 01:13:108 (4,5) - мне больше нравится, когда они в линию вытянуты: http://puu.sh/19HY0
7. 01:15:402 (5) - слайдер-инвалид с горбом. Сделай эту округлую часть чуть поменьше (узелок — на пару клеток вниз)
8. 01:22:108 (8) - мне кажется, паузы лучше избежать, добавив ноты на красный и белый тики после этой (спиннер, опять-таки, 1/4 позже)

TicClick wrote:

General

1. Ни-че-го! ^__^

Low

1. 00:14:696 (3) - просится финиш и правда. осталось после переделки.
2. 00:38:696 - сделай финиш на фонтане громче, чем 30% (хорошо бы удвоить) 60% - ужасно. поставил 45.
3. 00:49:991 (1) и далее — этот «финиш» (сам хитсаунд) очень громкий по сравнению с остальными звуками. Возможно, стоит сделать его тише и перезалить, уж больно заметна разница между его наличием и отсутствием звуки должно быть слышно, не? сменил на 50.
4. 00:58:107 (5) - вместо него лучше две ноты, мне кажется (паттерн у тебя не по центру, слайдером можешь пожертвовать, потеря симметри будет не особо заметна почему только тут? или везде или нигде
5. 01:22:461 - возможно, стоит добавить ноту с финишем, а спиннер — на полбита позже done

Mid

1. 00:14:696 (3) - финиш? Ну, как и на лоу да
2. 00:36:932 (5) - он кривоватый. Подвинь саамый правый узел влево, чтобы подправить двинул, но всё-равно криво))
3. 00:38:696 - см. лоу так же
4. 01:16:108 (1,2) - определись со спейсингом уже, прошлый точно такой же фрагмент был под .5: 01:14:343 (4,5) там циферки не видно с х0.5
5. 01:22:461 - см. лоу так же

High

1. 00:38:696 - и опять тихий финиш, который надо сделать громче же! da
2. 00:40:814 (1) - попробуй хлопок на повтор добавить, может, понравится, как звучит. не понравилось
3. 00:49:991 (1,2,3) - что. В смысле, ты не пробовал как-нибудь переделать 2 и 3? После первого выглядят, как будто их абсолютно случайно бросили и так и оставили. Может, там лучше что-то симпатично-симметричное сделать вместо копипасты, заодно поменяв и первый слайдер? ты не видел как это выглядело в первоначальном варианте)) поменяю без проблем, если будут достойные предложения.
4. 01:05:167 (7,9) - встань на 01:05:696 и выровняй их по аппроачу от ноты done
5. 00:59:873 - лучше сюда ноту, спиннер на четверть позже кинул
6. 01:13:108 (4,5) - мне больше нравится, когда они в линию вытянуты: http://puu.sh/19HY0 ссылка дохлая, но я опустил среднюю пониже
7. 01:15:402 (5) - слайдер-инвалид с горбом. Сделай эту округлую часть чуть поменьше (узелок — на пару клеток вниз) ссылка дохлая, но опустил. хорошо что ты оставлял письменные комментарии
8. 01:22:108 (8) - мне кажется, паузы лучше избежать, добавив ноты на красный и белый тики после этой (спиннер, опять-таки, 1/4 позже) k

Как-то так! Не забудь передвинуть в Pending, если больше ничего не ждёшь. она ж там, вроде, и была D:

Lou-kun wrote:

Everything is total perfect.

All you need is putting you'r own skin or TAIKO/CTB/OSU!MANIA oni to make it more famous.

Good job.

senaya wrote:

but I'd rather see some mod posts.

Konei wrote:

[General]

* Metadata empty? o.o http://puu.sh/1dN2Y don't know why this happened, but fixed.
* Letterboxes don't look good with the BG imo~ i still don't know what they do and what they are but sure, i'll remove them.
* You don't have a SB, so you can delete the osb.file i'm tired of removing it. gets created all the time =_=
*You should add a description to the Maps comment. So that: Low = Easy, Mid = Normal, High = Hard that's not exactly true, that's why i use different names.


[Low]

00:03:402 - Why do you ignore the downbeat? I can hear a sound here. becasue i have spinners on other diffs that start too suddenly otherwise
00:06:226 (2) - CTRL + J on this Slider helps to do a blanket with 1. http://puu.sh/1dNbM nah, i think it goes well with 00:09:049 (3) -
00:33:049 (1) - a bit ugly cure, move the curve point of the slider more to the mid done
00:35:167 (3) - move down for symmetry with 1 done
00:38:696 (1) - Blanket with 3 looks cooler imo~ http://puu.sh/1dNeK don't think so
00:40:814 (1) - unneeded Slider point, delete it please it's not straight. it's needed.
00:54:932 (4) - Remove whistle and add clap to the end uhh.. i don't like how it sounds, also there are other sections like that in this map.
01:14:696 (4) - remove finish and add clap to repeat ^same


[Mid]

* Increase the Spacing notes like 00:09:579 (4) - are really hard to read for beginners because they can't see the number of the note. it was the point. you want to change it to x0.5? i tried before and it wasn't that cute =\
00:45:402 (2) - Space better, confuses beginners~ Mid is not for beginners :<
00:53:520 (2) - Slider points out of Slider D: Also CTRL + J helps for blanket with 3 true
01:06:755 (5) - Add NC and remove on 1? i tried to make it like i did 00:43:638 (4) -
01:10:285 (2) - Stacking it complete with 1 will be more pleasing i want it to be visible (like others)


Tired hehh~ ikr, was able to rest for only 2 hours today =_=

Good luck~ :3

Gabe wrote:

Lou-kun wrote:

Everything is total perfect.

All you need is putting you'r own skin or TAIKO/CTB/OSU!MANIA oni to make it more famous.

Good job.

Not rankable yet.

1. Your difficulty settings are rather high in my eyes, because this diff looks more like a mix between Easy and Normal
   HP Drain - 1
   AR - 1
   OD - 1 or 2
2. 00:04:902 - unsnapped green inherit timeline
3. 00:10:814 (2) - I can't hear anything that would call a slider from start to first repeat. Would sound better to start slider without repeat on 00:11:167 - and have a Hitcircle instead on 00:10:814 - . At the moment it sounds a bit weird
4. 00:11:873 (3) - maybe new combo
5. 00:14:696 (3) - new combo
6. 00:34:638 (2) - would look better if this one were on the y-axis of the grid (X: 256)
7. 00:46:461 (1,2) - maybe switch New combos that new combo starts on (2) not (1)
8. 00:57:402 (1) - new combo
9. 00:59:873 (1) - spinner is a bit short for a Easy/Normal
10. 01:01:814 (1) - abit far away from spinner center
11. 01:22:638 (1) - short spinner is to short
12. 01:21:049 (1,2) - maybe place them so that (2) is in the center (X: 256 Y: 192)

1. Why not Medium? Mid sounds a bit weird for me
2. 00:04:873 - unsnapped green inherit line
3. 00:30:226 (4) - new combo
4. 01:06:579 - add Hitcircle
5. 01:15:049 (5) - remove repeat. Use a Hitcircle for slider end instead

1. 00:04:902 - unsnapped green line
2. 00:04:991 - add Hitcircle
3. 00:06:226 (1) - new combo
4. 00:07:285 (3) - jump from (2) to (3) is okay but a bit to far D: lower this jump a little for a better flow
5. 00:09:049 (8) - new combo
6. 00:10:284 (11) - X: 108 Y: 300. Jump is a bit shorter and feels better in flow
7. 00:11:873 (1) - new combo
8. 00:15:402 (1) - start spinner on 00:15:226 -

bomber34 wrote:

hi :3 I said I mod this so i will do it \:D/

[General]
- ask a B/MAT that the "Artist - Title" line that appears at the beginn of the map to start between 00:16:461 - 00:25:991 - . Would be awesome looks cool. i wonder if i'll ever rank this though XD

[Low]

1. Your difficulty settings are rather high in my eyes, because this diff looks more like a mix between Easy and Normal
   HP Drain - 1
   AR - 1
   OD - 1 or 2 all 3 of diffs are a mix. that's why i'm not using standard names for them. OD-1 done
2. 00:04:902 - unsnapped green inherit timeline and why is it bad? it sounds as i wanted to.. fine, i'll snap it
3. 00:10:814 (2) - I can't hear anything that would call a slider from start to first repeat. Would sound better to start slider without repeat on 00:11:167 - and have a Hitcircle instead on 00:10:814 - . At the moment it sounds a bit weird added 1/4 repeat
4. 00:11:873 (3) - maybe new combo nope. i never used nc before on similar segments.
5. 00:14:696 (3) - new combo i don't think it is needed.
6. 00:34:638 (2) - would look better if this one were on the y-axis of the grid (X: 256) it won't stack with 00:36:402 (1)
7. 00:46:461 (1,2) - maybe switch New combos that new combo starts on (2) not (1) no reason to change only here
8. 00:57:402 (1) - new combo 1-5 form a pattern so i want to keep them in one combo
9. 00:59:873 (1) - spinner is a bit short for a Easy/Normal AI Mod disagrees
10. 01:01:814 (1) - abit far away from spinner center moving it closer
11. 01:22:638 (1) - short spinner is to short there are no notes after it so i think it's fine. but i'll think about it.
12. 01:21:049 (1,2) - maybe place them so that (2) is in the center (X: 256 Y: 192) done

[Mid]

1. Why not Medium? Mid sounds a bit weird for me because Mid = Middle.
2. 00:04:873 - unsnapped green inherit line ffffff why do people mention this? snapped
3. 00:30:226 (4) - new combo it was there before. but if it is there i also have to add nc at 00:35:873 (4) - and it looks ugly
4. 01:06:579 - add Hitcircle i think it might be too hard
5. 01:15:049 (5) - remove repeat. Use a Hitcircle for slider end instead done

[High]

1. 00:04:902 - unsnapped green line oh, come on :< snapped now
2. 00:04:991 - add Hitcircle ok
3. 00:06:226 (1) - new combo nah, i think it looks good as it is
4. 00:07:285 (3) - jump from (2) to (3) is okay but a bit to far D: lower this jump a little for a better flow i like this kind of jumps :<
5. 00:09:049 (8) - new combo same as before
6. 00:10:284 (11) - X: 108 Y: 300. Jump is a bit shorter and feels better in flow ok, done
7. 00:11:873 (1) - new combo and here too same as before
8. 00:15:402 (1) - start spinner on 00:15:226 - done

rest is fine

Hope my mod helps :>
good luck

Natteke wrote:

[High]

00:59:873 (10) - use normal hitfinish here, SOFT IS FOR THE WEAK manly normal hitfinish added
01:22:461 (10) - here too here too
01:22:638 (1) - and at the end of this spinner and at the end of this spinner
01:12:226 (8) - move this shit farther away, something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/499772 shit has been moved


[Mid]

This diff needs some higher approach rate. Like at least 1 tick more. i accept it
00:49:991 (1) - NORMAL HITFINISH da
00:59:873 (1) - AND HERE da2
01:12:579 (1) - AND HERE da3
01:22:461 (1) - AND HERE da4

[Low]

00:59:873 (1) - NORMAL HITFINISH, FAGGOT i obey
01:22:461 (2) - HERE TOO yes, my lord

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Low]
00:51:402 (3) - Snap the tail slider to 00:52:461 and add note at 00:52:814?
i did it, but i'm afraid it might be too similar to 00:47:696 (3) -


[Mid]
00:05:167 (1) - While the default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden for players during gameplay. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/530058 done
00:11:873 (3) - Remove the whistle at sliderbody, it's useless true, removed


[High]
00:37:638 (2) - Why clap? it is in the music. i can remove it, but it will still be in mp3


Once you done, in-game PM me

senaya wrote:

> "pm me when ready"
> done that 2 weeks ago...

TicClick wrote:

napishi forumnoe pm

Kite wrote:

Random mod, just suggestions

[High]
00:10:284 (11) - I think you should put new combo on this beat instead and stack 00:10:461 (1) - underneath it to improve playability / flow Won't change NC for several reasons:
1) It is now consistent. Check 00:07:638 (1,2) before that or 00:13:285 (1,2) after that.
2) It aids in reading of the jump since I tend to use same combo color for the rhythm if spacing suddenly changes.
00:12:932 (10,11) - This jump feels kinda odd to me, I think it would be better to get rid of it by making a triplet at the position of 10 2nd and 3rd repeats out of 4 before the break have the same structure. Why are your suggestions for 00:10:284 (11) and 00:13:108 (11) are different? I'd rather keep them consistent as they are now.
00:40:020 - It feels a bit empty without a beat at this point, consider adding it for a triplet Why only there? If I were to add a triplet here, I'd also like one at 00:45:667 and 00:43:549 and other similar parts. Nope.
00:45:314 - Same here, I think a triplet would be a lot nicer to play for this part Uhh.. If wanted to, I'd rather made a triplet at the end of 00:44:873 (6) by adding a note at 00:45:138.
01:14:608 - Rhythm-wise it would be better to add a beat here IMO, either make a small stream connecting to 01:14:873 (3) - or remove 01:14:785 (2) - and make a triplet stack at 01:14:520 (10) - I actually remapped this part completely. I was finally able to get rid of that ugly 01:15:402 (6) slider. I hope it's better now.

[Mid]
Nothing really to complain here, except for the fact that the distance snap between 00:06:226 (3,4) - these and 00:44:696 (1,2) - these is different, you should keep it consistent IMO
Personally I'd go with the distance you used 00:44:696 (1,2) - here
Also intended. You can clearly see what I mean at 01:18:226 (1,2,3). I use distance snap 0,4 only for sliders. But it's different when it comes to circles, think about it as an "enhanced Stack Leniency" since all that i wanted is not to stack notes under sliders completely. The only place where I don't follow this is at 01:16:461 (2) because it won't be clearly visible with the usual spacing. But I do find this slider 00:07:108 (5) somehow out of place. I think I need to change that maybe :<

[Low]
No real problems here either, I just think it's a bit deceiving to change the rhythm at this point 00:49:991 - comparing to the previous kiai half
Maybe consider keeping it like the first half of the Kiai as it's more pleasant to play IMO, but it's up to you!
It was intended because repeating the same pattern for 4 times would be dead boring (I had issues with that in my previous maps)

[Timing]
Offset feels just a tiny bit late to me, try to apply -4 to it.
I get 0ms late after playing [High] but I'll ask someone who can time well just in case.
Accepted.


Nice mapset you got here, solid and fun to play :3

Aleks719 wrote:

High
01:14:516 - replace nc here from the next note, 5-note-stream looks ugly with nc on 2nd note ok, you convinced me.
01:15:398 - add nc for reducing combo in pattern, since it follows music keeping it since it follows most of the other parts.

Mid
AR-1 please oh, well, +HR will make this more challenging perhaps. changed.

andydork5 wrote:

What anime is the background from?

senaya wrote:

andydork5 wrote:

What anime is the background from?

it's an original art piece. it has no title.

thesirius728 wrote:

I love the background, is there any chance for a version with higher resolution than 1024x768?