Hello~ little m4m here.
Didn't know t.A.T.u. made a song like this. lol :3[General]
AIBAT tells me there's inconsistency in preview times, check and fix those.
Other than that, folder seems okay.
On a side note, offset+5 feels much better to me. Remember to resnap timing sections and notes afterwards.[Gomen]
00:00:266 (1) - That clap feels to aggresive/noisy for such a calm and relaxing intro. I'd just leave soft samples and soft whistles.
00:02:736 (4) - This note breaks the flow badly, I would move it to x340 y136
00:06:265 (2) - If you make this slider start on red tick, make the next slider (00:08:030 (3) - ) start on red tick as well, or make them both at white ticks. For consistency, you know, since it will be played by begginers.
00:11:207 (4) - I'm not a fan of making the big white tick a slider end, since it won't be pressed when playing and makes it less "strong".. you don't wanna make a big white tick feel soft-ish. I suggest changing this slider into 2 notes.
00:23:560 (1) - Why new combo? o.O
00:27:442 (1) - Improve this blanket please. Right now it's
http://puu.sh/2zyKD | My suggestion:
http://puu.sh/2zyMI00:34:854 (1) - Same ^
http://puu.sh/2zyTj and remember to copypaste to the next big slider which is symmetric.
00:38:383 (1,2) - (2) kinda breaks the flow that (1) creates, it changes the direction. Maybe if you curve (1) like this it's better:
http://puu.sh/2zyWN01:11:913 (2) - Moving it to x320 y172 looks and plays much better
01:15:089 (1) - ehhh move it to the center? 1 grid left
01:18:971 (4,5) - Having these 2 sliders so close to each other is unnecesary and doesn't happen anywhere else.. Delete (5), make (4) end at 01:19:677 - and add a return to it.
02:16:501 (1) - Looks very ugly with (2). Make it a better blanket by moving its middle point upwards.
02:53:913 (1) -
This looks so bad and is so confusing.. maybe it was a mistake? Move this slider somewhere else.. o.O Also it makes a jump with (2), i'm sure it was just a mistake hehe03:12:266 (1) -
This spinner is unnecesarily long... TOO long and it doesn't fit with the music, it should end on 03:13:677 - where the "nooooooow" ends.Nothing else here, not a bad diff but i'd like to see some less copypasting in the future ^^ [Gomenasai]
00:29:908 (3) - This slider's shape breaks the flow badly, change it so it's like this:
http://puu.sh/2zzjN00:54:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe these jumps are too long compared to the rest of the map?
01:13:143 (3) - Really unnecessary note, suggest removing it. It doesnt even have sound D:
01:17:202 (1) - This should end in the previous red tick...
01:22:849 (4) - New combo should be here imo since it's where she starts to sing again.
01:23:908 (2) - Really weird flow here.. how about doing this so it doesn't flow weirdly?
http://puu.sh/2zzs601:34:143 (2,4) - Stack with 01:33:084 (5) - start?
01:53:555 (3,4,5,1,2) - When you are making stacks of 2 notes, and then another stack of 2 notes, etc etc. it's -almost- never suitable to start each stack in a red tick. Rearrange this so the stacks start on white ticks.
02:05:202 (3) - End it on the previous red tick
02:23:908 (6,7) - You should delete (7), make (6) end 1 tick further and add a repeat.
02:44:731 (2,4,8) - Make these notes be in the centre
a few grids right
02:49:143 (x) - I don't understeand why did you add notes where there is no sound, but you hear a clear sound in this blue tick, yet you leave it unmapped. Please add a note here D:
03:12:261 (1) -
Same as Gomen
I didn't really like this diff since it has some flow and rhythm problems, but it's okay. Just my opinion, sorry if i was too tough. Good luck Ai :3