Natsu wrote:

General

Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning:
- [~Daisuki~] : 1
- [~Tomodachi~] :

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [~Daisuki~] : Shana Aisaka
- [~Tomodachi~] : Horie Yui Dog Days


- [~Daisuki~]
04:47:983 slider should finish here

Nickname128 wrote:

~Tomodachi~

00:37:831 Add circle
00:41:831 ^
02:08:831 ^
03:02:081 Why not a beutifull slider or something? I dont like short Break Times :3

~Daisuki~

Just perfect, love it :3

Sorry if my mod isnt helpful ;.;

Momochikun wrote:

Crap.. i love her voice xD

Tomodachi~

00:06:081 (3) - Remove finish or reduce it sound >> Ok~
00:20:581 (1) - Bad sliders in my opinion >> Ok~
00:20:581 (1) - Add final hitsound >> Nope~

Daisuki~

00:49:081 (8,9,10) - Add spacing bar before it >> Ok~
02:58:331 (1) - Add whistle >> Nope~
02:59:331 (5) - Add whistle >> Nope~
03:01:331 (4) - Add whistle >> Nope~
04:23:216 (8) - ^ >> Nope~

That's all i can found.. good luck

Laurier wrote:

mod4mod

Difference in the degree of difficulty is big. please make another diff. (hard or normal)

~Tomodachi~
00:04:095 (4,1) - Replace NC >> Ok
00:06:095 (3,1) - ^ >> Ok
00:10:095 (4,1) - ^ >> Ok
00:14:095 (4,1) - ^ >> Ok
please keeps this pattern.

Well, those thing below, almost fix all but in another way xD

00:05:595 (2,3,1,2) - its look to placed at random. make this ? http://puu.sh/1WLEC
00:08:595 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/1WLFb
00:12:595 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:15:595 (2) - delete 2nd waypoint
00:40:595 (4) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1WLGP
00:49:095 (4) - make more smooth slider http://puu.sh/1WLHE
00:55:095 (3) - ^ I like this form
01:12:095 (2,3,4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/1WLJa
01:39:095 (3,4) - make better blanket http://puu.sh/1WLKv
01:50:595 (3) - start at 01:50:345 - ?
02:26:595 (1,2,3) - it overlap to spinner-osu. its good skin. but I can not see it. please move away.
03:00:345 (4) - NC
03:32:095 (1,3) -use same form. http://puu.sh/1WLQ5
03:54:595 (3) - http://puu.sh/1WLQL

some place looks bad. please try to make a more beauty pattern.

~Daisuki~
00:05:845 (6,7,8) - like this ? http://puu.sh/1WLTL I think it makes better flow >> Ok
00:18:095 (7) - Please put above the stream. http://puu.sh/1WLVV >> Ok
00:34:595 (2) - keep to spacing x1.0 >> Ok
00:50:095 (3) - like this http://puu.sh/1WLX9 >> ?
02:40:720 (1) - dont stack on slider end
02:59:095 (4,5) - CTR+G >> Ok

1. "soft-slidertick.wav" and "soft-sliderslide.wav" are completely silent. you must remove one.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found an issue. you must fix it.

[General]

1. "soft-slidertick.wav" and "soft-sliderslide.wav" are completely silent. you must remove one.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

gl

1. avoid using too many circles at a time..just something like 00:04:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:21:345 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...thogh don't want to say..I think you can't make beautiful shapes of circles for now.using circles + sliders regularly will let your map look more neat
2. 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - like this pattern.I will map a triangle for each.that will be more beautiful
3. try not to use too many speed-changes if It doesn't really require it.like 00:42:095 (1) - 00:51:845 (6) - ,players may get confused
4. 02:10:845 (4,5,1,2,3) - in this pattern.I think you don't need to limit yourself.it's your hardest diff so don't need to put too easy patterns in it

No_Gu wrote:

From my queue

[General/All diffs]
Artist:堀江由衣
Title:きっと恋をしている
I would change N:C1 to S:C1 and add normal-hitnormal as a clap.your hitsound is too little and in taiko mode there are nearly all don.
00:01:095 - 00:14:595 maybe remove this kiai time?..you have too many kiai times in this diff.If you don't want to,at least end it at 00:14:095

[Tomotachi]
00:18:595 (1,2,3,4,1) - make them symmetrical
00:22:095 (2) - spacing
00:24:595 (4) - ^
00:34:095 (1) - ^
please control all spacing the same in easy/normal diffs..unless it's really need to be changed
00:43:595 (2,3,4,5) - try to make them a beautiful shape
00:49:095 (4) - why not use a 2/1 slider directly?
00:58:095 (4,1) - remove nc on 1 and add it to 4
01:03:095 (1,2) - odd shapes http://www..
01:12:095 (2,3,4,5,1) - still..looks not so beautiful
01:46:095 (1,2,3,4,5) - check these spacing
01:50:095 (2,3) - if you want to follow vocal,at least this pattern http://puu.sh/1Ykt6
02:21:595 (6) - spacing
02:22:095 (1,1) - too close after spinner
02:31:595 (2,3,4,5,6) - make them a better pentagram?
03:00:345 (1,2) - don't let them overlapped x.x
03:07:845 (2,3,1,2) - sounds catched nothing..
03:33:595 (2) - spacing
03:48:095 (1,1) - too close after spinner
04:08:115 (1) - finish
04:20:220 (1,1) - too close after spinner
04:32:220 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - make them symmetrical
please use DS anytime then you're making easy/normal...

[Daisuki]
after a one-time view..I'm sorry to say this diff may be not so good to be ranked imo(just my own opinion
some tips for you If you want to have a remap

1. avoid using too many circles at a time..just something like 00:04:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:21:345 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ...thogh don't want to say..I think you can't make beautiful shapes of circles for now.using circles + sliders regularly will let your map look more neat
2. 00:10:595 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - like this pattern.I will map a triangle for each.that will be more beautiful
3. try not to use too many speed-changes if It doesn't really require it.like 00:42:095 (1) - 00:51:845 (6) - ,players may get confused
4. 02:10:845 (4,5,1,2,3) - in this pattern.I think you don't need to limit yourself.it's your hardest diff so don't need to put too easy patterns in it

• 
  Spacing issues:
  I don't wanna be nazi but i valutate a from 0.4 a spacing issues :

1. 00:07:595 (4,1) - spacing
2. 00:13:595 (3,1) - spacing
3. 00:14:595 (2,3,4) - spacing
4. 00:20:595 (1,2) - spacing
5. 00:23:095 (2,3) - spacing
   ehm... i don't wanna continue to mention them all, so please check alone all the spacing and make sure that the next and prev objects are 1.1 distant.
   
6. 00:40:595 (4,1) - this flow really bad :c why don't you try something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
7. 00:51:095 (2,3) - try something like this: it will flow better a blanket
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:03:095 (5,6) - why so ugly slider make they cuter like :
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:42:095 - this finish sound to loud >.< i think 40% volume is better
10. 04:42:220 (3) - you can make it cuter with the new 3 point formula

1. 00:23:499 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
2. well i don't have much to say about this diff, please check alone spacing here, because really in some points the incostency is to big
3. i think at the beginning you should remove some streams, because for a such soft song you did a a little bit overmapped Hard.. it seems more like a insane and made your mapset not well-balanced, try to do some patter simplier :X

Lally wrote:

Hi from Andrea's and Lally's Mod4Mod Queue ♥
[General]
Folder song is fine
[Tomodachi]

• 
  Spacing issues:
  I don't wanna be nazi but i valutate a from 0.4 a spacing issues :

1. 00:07:595 (4,1) - spacing
2. 00:13:595 (3,1) - spacing
3. 00:14:595 (2,3,4) - spacing
4. 00:20:595 (1,2) - spacing
5. 00:23:095 (2,3) - spacing
   ehm... i don't wanna continue to mention them all, so please check alone all the spacing and make sure that the next and prev objects are 1.1 distant.
   
6. 00:40:595 (4,1) - this flow really bad :c why don't you try something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
7. 00:51:095 (2,3) - try something like this: it will flow better a blanket
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:03:095 (5,6) - why so ugly slider make they cuter like :
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:42:095 - this finish sound to loud >.< i think 40% volume is better
10. 04:42:220 (3) - you can make it cuter with the new 3 point formula

[Daisuki]

1. 00:23:499 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
2. well i don't have much to say about this diff, please check alone spacing here, because really in some points the incostency is to big
3. i think at the beginning you should remove some streams, because for a such soft song you did a a little bit overmapped Hard.. it seems more like a insane and made your mapset not well-balanced, try to do some patter simplier :X

Get more mods and Andrea will mod it too, i think this map is not ready yet >.<

1. Offset 284,271: BPM 98,00
2. Offset 286,413: BPM 110,00

1. 00:49:095 (4) - try to blanket around 00:50:595 (1)
2. 01:02:595 (5,1) - stack with 01:00:595 (3). Don't forget to re-stack 01:06:095 (1) as well
3. 01:18:095 (1) - maybe blanket around 01:17:095 (5) ?
4. 03:31:095 (5) - curve more to blanket around the end of 03:30:095 (4)

1. 00:09:845 (6) - try to avoid overlapping with 00:08:845 (2). There are A LOT of these in the map so I'm not gonna quote em all one by one, but I think this kind of overlapping makes the map look really messy, I think there is a lot of work to be done in order to fix this issue
2. 00:13:095 (3) - stack perfectly with 00:12:095 (3)

okays? Others is too great! And Skin is quite beautiful. Good ranked soon!

Loki-san wrote:

~Tomodachi~
First, 01:06:595 (2,3) - I think the vocal longs whole sentence, If so, It will difficult to can play normally. Let you to slider 01:06:595 (2) - continue to 01:08:095 (3).
01:14:595 (2,3) - Also similar
01:54:595 (5) - it can down afew to proportionate between 01:53:595 (4) - and 01:55:095 (1) -
02:01:095 (1,2) - they can as last combo. 02:02:095 (3) - to it is combo after that ( All to can play as beat and see easily)
02:22:095 (1) - This spin can short 1 tick to add 1 circle ( as vocal)
After 03:13:345 (5) - you should add 1 slider arc to spin ( to residual beat then suddenly spin will cause confusion)
03:23:095 (1) - At first ( no repeat slider) I think you add a circle as last combo and keep white slider when repeat.
~Daisuki~
After 03:01:845 (3) - you should add 1 spin to 03:04:595 (1)
The break after that is also so, it change spin

okays? Others is too great! And Skin is quite beautiful. Good ranked soon!