fanzhen0019 wrote:
[Normal]
fine
[Insane]
04:09:785 (4) - missing finishfixed. i'll give you to kudosu. because it was helpful to me. thanks ~
orz cant find more... your map is great! :3
no kd plz
thanks ~ ' v 'Gloria Guard wrote:
Hi B2IN
m4m ~
[Hard]
00:53:828 (1,2,3) 1번슬라랑 2번슬라가 겹쳐있는건 보기가 좀안좋네요대칭패턴으로 바꿨습니다.
http://puu.sh/1SlcV <- 이런패턴은 어떠세요?
01:06:168 (3) Ctrl+G?괜찮긴한데 01:06:594 (1) 과 이어지는 흐름이 좀 별루네요..
01:18:721 (3) 일직선 슬라보단 구부리는 슬라가 더흐름이 좋아요fixed
01:19:572 (6) 여기도 마찬가지fixed
01:19:998 (7) 강조하신거같은데 변속은 빼주시는게 더좋을거같아요.안바꿔도 될거같아요. 죄송..orz
01:22:232 (2) remove note?nope ~
02:02:019 (1,2,3) 00:53:828 와 같이 겹치는것보단 둥근슬라로 바꾸셔서
겹치지 않게하시는게 좋을거같아요이것도 대칭으로 변경
02:06:806 (2) Ctrl+G?의도된 거에요.
= 01:19:998 (7)
02:28:083 (7) 01:19:998 (7) 과 마찬가지로 변속은 빼주시는게 더좋을거같아요.= 01:19:998 (7)
02:30:317 (2) remove note?= 01:22:232 (2)
03:17:019 (3,4) http://puu.sh/1Slk2 이렇게 하시는게 더흐름이 좋을거같아요
04:05:636 (2) remove note?01:22:232 (2)
04:43:402 (2) Ctrl+G?괜찮네요 fixed
thanks ~Reiji-RJ wrote:
Hello
GeneralHard
- Why magic world in tags?
because magic world is title song in album. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37914
- Add Iuchi Maiko to the tags? It's composer
Really solid mapset. Couldn't find anything wrong.
- 00:17:445 ~ 00:31:062 - as in Normal, maybe change to normal set? And in the end too
sorry ~ no change normal diff is not mine.
- 00:20:849 (1) - finish
nope ~ >.<
- 00:27:658 (3) - ^
^
- 00:28:934 (2) - ^ in the end
^
- 01:05:104 (1) - finish
^
- 01:11:913 (1) - ^
added clap
- 01:43:083 (1) - end at 01:44:253 - with normal hitsound and start next spinner at 01:44:360 -
fixed
- 02:19:998 (1) - finish
added clap
- 03:07:658 (1) - whistle
fixed
- 03:11:062 (2) - ^
fixed
- 03:12:764 (1) - ^
fixed
- 03:19:572 (1) - ^
fixed
- 03:21:275 (1) - ^ and so on (as in music)
okay. fixed :3
- 03:33:189 (1) - finish?
fixed
- 03:34:892 (1) - ^
fixed
- 04:57:338 (1) - as in Normal
nope~ sorry orz
Good luck!
O_P wrote:
소스 To Aru Majutsu no Index II 로 바꿔주세요. 2기fixed
Jacob wrote:
Note to Saten: Some of the things that I mentioned in this mod may already be fixed by the time you get around to reading this due to previous mods.
[General][Hard]
- The end of the second kiai time is inconsistent throughout the difficulties. I would recommend for them to be the same since every other kiai time is.
fixed
- Tick rate 2 would sound better in both difficulties due to the nature of the song.
good,but i'll keep it~
- Offset 434 sounds more accurate.
fixed to 432
Nice job with this map. It's fun to play.
- 01:20:646 (2,3,4) - I really like this part of the map. It's fun to play.
: ) thanks ~
- 01:24:263 (2) - I would remove the second node of this slider so that it looks like 01:26:391 (4). It looks better in my opinion.
nope.. sorry~
- 02:11:497 (1) - Straighten this slider. It looks odd for it to be this slightly tilted.
fixed
- 04:18:731 (3) - You're missing a clap on this note.
good.fixed
- 04:26:497 (1) - I understand you used a spinner here to be consistent with the previous parts of the map, but this spinner feels out-of-place and is really short. I suggest you map this part out without using a spinner.
okay.fixed I did a lot of thought about this. o v o
- 04:54:902 (1) - I suggest lowering the volume on this slider because the slider-slide and slider-tick sound awkward in this part.
diminished from the volume to 20
thanks~Snowy Dream wrote:
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue[General]
- Red - Important or Issue
- Blue - You'd better fix them
- Black - Normal Suggestions
[Hard]
- Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Hard] :
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:27:232, ends on 01:42:977
- [Normal] :
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:27:232, ends on 01:44:253fixed
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- 00:17:445 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
ok.fixed
- 00:55:317 (4) - Recommend overlapping on 00:53:828 (2), looks better then :p
hm..changed place overall.
- 04:48:721 (3) - What about this? Add a note here on the start of 04:48:934 (4), so it can keep the consistency. Also 04:49:572 , 04:50:424 .
fixed
- 04:57:392 (1) - Extend this spinner 1/4 more, since the background music stops at this timing, it could sound better.
i know o.o but i want to end at downbeat snap.
Perfect!!
yay !Kitagami wrote:
Yay! Kurosaki Maon! <3
Go, go! Good luck! o(>w<)o
thanks ! ' v 'Frostmourne wrote:
hi ! from my modding queue
General
consider adding tag "Iuchi Maiko" because Maiko is the composer of this songum, okay added
Hard
AR-1 , I find it too fast for this hard non-jumpy diff so DT on AR 7 plays really better than thisum..once i'll keep it.
01:19:368 (5,6) - spacing , it should be around 1.2x not 1.6x like thisgood.fixed
01:31:389 (4) - remove this note and move 01:31:495 (5) - to 01:31:389 (1/4 back) and extend this slider end at 01:31:708 , it follows vocal really better
it's something similar to these 01:09:155 (4,5) - , 02:17:240 (4,5) - , 02:25:751 (3,4) -
02:39:368 (3,4,5) - fix like above ^ , to ruin the symmetry for rhythm is better imofixed
03:28:091 (2) - I would add whistle on the head here because it follows something similar to the previous notes you added
I can barely hear though but it does workfixed
04:14:687 (3,4,5) - fix like I mentioned againfixed
04:21:708 (3) - better move 1 grid right for more balance (closer to 1.2x)fixed
04:23:410 (3) - if you fixed above, this would be fixed too (for perfect stacking)fixed
Good luck !
@B2IN: Can you add that whistle on start at 01:57:027 (2) - ?Frostmourne wrote:
Normal
01:57:027 (2) - whistle on first point? it doesn't sound badly (sound corresponds between "shoko" with "temo" on the end of slider) Sure
02:19:900 (4) - this slider better ends on 02:19:900 according to the music , didn't mention 01:08:517 (1) - because it is hard to fix I feel that it's better to end it on a 1/1 here
thanks ~Quiz-chan wrote:
Heeellooow~ from my queue
[General]
Seems to be fine.
[Hard]
02:08:091 (1) - Kinda ugly slider. Make a better wave.i'll keep it ~
02:45:538 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern does not have much flow in it. Remake. 02:45:963 (2) for instance, could be curved in to pattern center.^sorry~
This diff's maximum combo is 993. Maybe add a few beats to make it 1000?![]()
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Good map indeed!
Nvm then xD your signature, the drawing is by gofu-web right? Love his drawingsB2IN wrote:
neonat wrote:
No kudosu for this, I just have one thought for it:
Hard
03:38:304 - I feel there should be a note or something hereum...i don't think so.. sorry D;
Nice map, good luck.
01:18:729 (4,5) - put in the same position with 01:17:453(1,2) . they are like this on purposethanks~~
03:35:112 (1) - start at 03:35:325 . alright
04:54:900 (1) - end till 04:57:027 . then 04:57:453 (1) - start at 04:57:240 . I actually wanna hear the finish sound, so I won't change this
thanks ~Betsuto wrote:
From M4M >w<)//
[Hard]
00:57:027 (3,4,5)- Make it like this http://puu.sh/1YNx7fixed
02:05:112 (3,4,5)- ^^^^fixed
03:38:304 - Please insert breake timenope ' w '
Sorry ...
this is all I can find orz
Dark_Ai wrote:
Hey there ~ M4M :33Must be fix
It's only what I thinkGeneral
- everything look fine
[Hard]
- 00:31:070 (1) - I would remove this NC.l It is kinda unnecessary
fixed
- 01:40:432 (4) - add NC here and remove the next one =w=
nope~ >.<
- 01:40:644 (1,2) - these two notes don't follow the rhythm at all. maybe delete it? ><
i think fine it now imo.i'll keep it sorry ~ orz..
- 02:12:134 (2,3) - I would delete these two notes and add a slider there. sound's better for me imo ><
um..nope. sorry~
- 04:24:048 (1,2) - same as 01:40:644 (1,2)
same as 01:40:644 (1,2)
That's all what I have to say ><
It is a really good map and a nice song
good luck with rank ~
ThanksScorpiour wrote:
[Normal]
- 00:27:666 (1) - well, the hidden reverse arrow here is not serious, but also not recommended The hitburst already faded out enough and this slider is more than enough to react
- 01:05:112 (1) - bad slider shape I removed the red slider section
- 02:09:793 (2) - NC I wanna keep those NC's as they are
- 02:11:495 (1) - more reasonless NC
- 02:23:836 (4,6) - stack them well These are custom stacks
- 02:33:623 (1) - remove NC
- 02:50:431 (1) - ^
- 03:35:006 - start your spinner from here? I rather have some space here
- 03:38:304 - 5% volumn here? no need, the silence comes after this beat
- 03:59:155 (3,5) - stack them well same as before
- 04:12:346 (3,5) - ^ ^
- 04:25:751 (1) - remove NC
- 04:47:240 (5,1) - Stack issue again as before
thanks !Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~mod from my queue~~oh~~~~~hi Scorpiour~
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
[Hard]That's all~
- 00:46:176 (1) - i suppose two notes here is much better than current
not bad.but i'll keep it
- 00:48:091 (2) - move NC to here?
nope.sorry~ I prefer this NC pattern. >.<
- 00:49:793 (2) - ^, actually, i can't see any reason to not place NC on downbeats around here
same above
- 00:50:431 - add a note for consistent beat?
nope~
- 00:55:751 (6,7,8) - increase the space here?
fixed
- 01:22:134 (1,2,3) - the triplet here is on red-tick but not white-tick.
good!fixed
or if you wanna follow vocal here, then the beat is:- 02:03:836 (5,6,7) - similar, larger space?
fixed
- 02:30:219 (1,2,3) - similar to 01:22:134 (1,2,3) -
fixed
- 02:48:091 (5) - move to 399:244 for better flow?
fixed
- 03:10:857 - add a note here for transition?
fixed
- 03:13:410 - ^
fixed
- 03:14:261 - ^. In fact i really recommend that because your beat here is pretty odd..
fixed
- 03:27:985 - add a note here to make a triplet?
fixed
- 03:30:431 (4) - NC here for vocal?
fixed
- 03:42:240 - i'd like to add a spinner from here to 03:43:410 - um..i'll keep it.. sorry ~
- 04:03:410 (1) - meaningless NC
fixed
- 04:05:538 (1,2,3,4) - similar to 01:22:134 (1,2,3) -
fixed
- 04:11:921 (1) - also unnecessary NC
fixed
- 04:15:325 (1) - ^
fixed
- 04:25:751 (1) - ^
nope.for slowdown slider
감사합니다HelloSCV wrote:
From my queue
[Hard]새벽모딩이라 멘탈이 좀 불안하군요 하하하하하ㅏ
- 00:30:219 (6) - 뉴콤보?ㄴㄴ
- 01:22:878 (5,6) - 전에 패턴에 비해 디스탠스 줄이셧는데 특별한 이유라도?앞에서클 노트끼린 가깝게 붙이고싶어서 붙였어요.
- 01:59:580 (6,7,8) - 트라이 디스 타이밍 패턴 ( 하드인데 이것도 좋아보여요 http://puu.sh/22ZsM 이하는 생략해도 되죠? )괜찮네요. 시간나면 한번 고쳐볼께요.
- 02:30:96 3 (5) - 아까와 비슷한이유
- 02:33:410 (3) - 뉴콤보 02:34:474 (1) - 여긴삭제수정
- 03:34:900 (1) - 피니시보단 휘슬이 좋아보여요ㄴㄴ
- 03:46:814 (1) - 올ㅋ
- 04:06:282 (5,6) - ㅇㅇㅇㅇ
- 04:26:495 (1) - 04:27:240 - 여기서 끝내시는게 음이나 플레이 둘다 좋아보여요여기 파트에 대해 많이 고민도해보고, 여러 뱃들한테도 물어봤어요. 제 생각도 소리는 04:27:240 에서 끝내는게 좋아요. 하지만 플레이할때는 너무 짧아서 불편한 감이 있는 거같아서 늘렸어요. 물론 스피너가 끝나고나서 나오는 노트가 치기 좀 힘들겠지만, 짧은 스피너 나오는 것보단 나을거 같아서 늘렸어요. 스피너 자체를 없애는 것도 해봤는데, 앞부분은 다 스피너를 넣어서 통일성이 떨어지더라구요. 그래서 이렇게 바꿨습니다.
- 04:45:538 (3) - Ctrl G 역시 플레이에서 좀더 나아보여요 다음 노트하고 연계도 좋고..괜찮긴한데 지금껏도 별로 나쁘진 않다고 생각해요.
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굿럭포 랭크!
Edit : 아 노말이 외국인이 만들었네...
no changed ..;w; but thank you for mod~goodbye wrote:
Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない
[Hard]
- 01:10:006 (1) - use larger spacing likes http://puu.sh/25y3n
um.. not bad, but i think fine better now.
- 02:18:091 (1) - ^
^
- 03:42:985 (x) - add a note at here
yes, i also hear sound. but i don't want it.. orz
317,143,226814,6,0,B|440:180|450:79|435:17|334:3|271:17|255:91|239:164|177:179|75:165|61:103|71:2|194:39,2,640
And the New Combos are there for a reason. I don't wanna change that sorry D:xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
Normal
- • Rename this diff "Saten's Normal". nah, Normal is fine by me
• Overall Difficulty: 4 I think the settings are fine. Added 4 on HP for a little more challenge
• 00:12:346 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:10:644. The spinner would be too long imo
• 00:16:602 (x) - Add a circle. too close to the spinner imo
• 00:17:027 (x) - ^ ^as a follow up
• 00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the spacing here, try this: Each slider is rotated 45°, I don't wanna change this
• 00:54:900 (1) - Delete this slider and map this part like you did at 02:02:985 (1,2,3,4,5). unnecessary imo
• 01:08:517 (1) - Same thing here, do something like 02:16:602 (1,2,3) to keep a consistency. I do not want to keep everything the same
• 01:38:304 (1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos.
• 02:08:091 (1) - ^
• 02:11:495 (1) - ^
• 02:14:900 (1) - ^
• 02:46:389 (1,1,1) - ^
• 03:09:793 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
• 03:11:070 (2) - ...and add it here.
• 03:45:112 (3,4) - Try this spacing: (don't worry if the spacing isn't always consistent, it doesn't really matter) I like the current spacing/placement. And It's closer to the real thing
• 04:21:708 (1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos.
• 04:57:453 (1) - End this spinner at 05:00:325. I would like to keep it as it is
thanks !xxheroxx wrote:
Mod Infos:
• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
Hard
- • 00:28:942 (2) - Try this:
um..nope ~
• 03:17:878 (1,1) - Too many repeats here! These are the only sliders with 2 repeats and they're kinda boring to play, remove them and try to map this part in a different way.nope. sorry ~
• 03:38:091 (4) - Delete this circle, start a slider here and end it at 03:38:304.fixed. changed from circle to kick slider. and added whistle on slider end.
• 03:41:495 (1) - I don't like this slider, try to make it like this:not bad. but i want to keep this shape.
• 03:46:814 (1) - Try to make this slider perfectly symmetrical. (since doing this is pretty hard I made it for you, if you don't know how to use this code call me)fixed. thanks ~
SPOILER• 04:54:261 (1,1,1) - Select all this stuff and move it at x:314 y:330.
317,143,226814,6,0,B|440:180|450:79|435:17|334:3|271:17|255:91|239:164|177:179|75:165|61:103|71:2|194:39,2,640sure.fixed
Nice map, call me after your fixes for a recheck.